What if Luke Stayed on Dagobah? - FAN FICTION

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  • Опубліковано 9 лис 2024

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  • @gibbnasta
    @gibbnasta Місяць тому +19

    Damn man, this was good. Yoda knighting Luke made me teary.

  • @jaieregilmore971
    @jaieregilmore971 Місяць тому +39

    Always love the son surpassing the father trope in stories like this with Luke surpassing Anakin as a Jedi.

    • @KyleWallPuncher
      @KyleWallPuncher Місяць тому +5

      Don’t really care for the movie but the quote from Yoda in TLJ is actually pretty good.
      “Luke… we are, what they grow beyond…”

    • @ykd818
      @ykd818 Місяць тому

      Luke would have lost to Anikan

    • @DanCohen-ov7on
      @DanCohen-ov7on 5 днів тому

      In my book,he did.

  • @dianesinger9729
    @dianesinger9729 Місяць тому +10

    I liked that Luke completed his training and fought Sidious

  • @tainoman7905
    @tainoman7905 Місяць тому +12

    Luke has become weave nation certified in this story

  • @JustLikeTheSimulations
    @JustLikeTheSimulations Місяць тому +20

    Great video! The only thing I see going WRONG if Luke didn’t go to Bespin, would be the possibility of Vader taking Leia & discovering she’s his daughter early on. That could have been bad.

    • @oliverwillcox2189
      @oliverwillcox2189 Місяць тому

      I agree, if Luke did not go to Bespin, then Vader could have paid more attention to Leia and Chewbacca being transported to his shuttle, so Lando would not have been able to betray and free them from the Empire.

    • @RonnieG
      @RonnieG 25 днів тому

      Vader didn't know about his daughter until luke was on his ship.

  • @gunforce5559
    @gunforce5559 Місяць тому +19

    If Luke stayed with Yoda. Then Artoo would not have been there to fix the falcons hyperdrive.

    • @RetneysHolocron
      @RetneysHolocron  Місяць тому +5

      Yeah in my story Leia and Chewie were taken prisoner by the empire on Cloud City

    • @bildo1977
      @bildo1977 Місяць тому +3

      Good point, but Darth Vader didn’t alter the deal with Lando for the second time until after there was confirmation that Luke was in the vicinity.

  • @margaret4196
    @margaret4196 Місяць тому +27

    This was so awesome! I loved Luke in ROTJ but I think this would have been a much better story. Luke was able to control his emotions unlike poor Anakin. Luke had all of the love and devotion of his father but also the strength and patience of his mother in your version. I love your video as always! May the Force be with You!

  • @chrisa84
    @chrisa84 Місяць тому +21

    If he had, he would've been much stronger sooner, but without the compassion to save his friends he'd be the wrong kind of person to save Vader. So I think he'd have killed Vader and fallen to the dark side, since he was already on the knife edge of doing so.

  • @ancientking224
    @ancientking224 Місяць тому +7

    Honestly it makes sense that Luke would take Sidious down so easily. I forgot the book but I recall that Palpatine learned of Luke through a vision where he had trained Luke to his full potential in the darkside and Luke killed Palpatine with ease.

  • @HR2007-o3f
    @HR2007-o3f Місяць тому +5

    Keep it up! It'd be good to do Star Wars versus fights!

  • @AirbenderHawk
    @AirbenderHawk Місяць тому

    LFG!!!!
    Loved your content on IG, and you did a perfect job of capturing Luke's psychology. He almost went to Anakin's path by impatiently almost leaving, but decide to complete it in this alternate timeline.

  • @mcasmcas6208
    @mcasmcas6208 Місяць тому +7

    Bro, you have a gift. You've elicited goosebumps in this story, and tears in the 'What If Darth Vader Survived ROTJ' story from last week. If Disney wants to get this beloved, but embattered, IP back on track, they should delve deep into the excellence of Fan Fiction written by TRUE Star Wars fans on YT. Like my guy Retney's Holocron. Have an open competition, and take the top three stories to film/TV production. Then watch the fans come back in DROVES...it's not rocket science. There's far more talent here than what's under roof at Disney. They need to bite the bullet and just admit it. Keep up the great work. I absolutely LOVED this.

    • @alexkoronec4326
      @alexkoronec4326 Місяць тому +2

      @@mcasmcas6208 remember that this would be a great combination and strong story , however Kathleen Kennedy is still there and would do everything in her position to scuttle this

  • @sergiotg81
    @sergiotg81 Місяць тому +5

    Cool video i love these what if

  • @Skyl1ghtx23
    @Skyl1ghtx23 Місяць тому +7

    This was awesome. Just wanted to say that I’ve been getting into voice over work and was curious if you would ever want to add some voices to your videos like this? :) amazing story, wish this was a “tales” episode lol

  • @zombiepuppies7706
    @zombiepuppies7706 Місяць тому +3

    Damn, if only that was in the movies!

  • @bry4christ2nda25
    @bry4christ2nda25 Місяць тому +2

    Excellent video sir

  • @darmhok
    @darmhok Місяць тому +3

    Awesome story!!!!!

  • @devonmoreau
    @devonmoreau Місяць тому +3

    Wonderful! ❤

  • @cameronshaffer8301
    @cameronshaffer8301 Місяць тому

    Well written. Bravo

  • @ascensiongenesis_sigma
    @ascensiongenesis_sigma Місяць тому

    This was so well done

  • @WorgenGrrl
    @WorgenGrrl Місяць тому +4

    I think that if Luke had stayed and trained with Yoda, once he was more connected to the Force, he would have discovered Vader was his Father on his own.

  • @ralphdavis3640
    @ralphdavis3640 Місяць тому +12

    I am really enjoying your fan fiction. Please keep the stories coming. It’s a shame that fans can develop better audio dramas, stories and short films than Disney.

  • @Hei_Darkfire
    @Hei_Darkfire Місяць тому

    Not bad. The ending felt a bit rushed though. I know we can assume Luke rescued Han, Chewie and Leia, but it felt like there should be more to the story at the end. Like how Luke would take his father's death. Or how he would help dismantle the empire, or start a new Jedi Order.

  • @zachg6805
    @zachg6805 Місяць тому +3

    If he did stay a good chance we would see a dark side Leia vs luke in return of the jedi

  • @PorkChopxSammich
    @PorkChopxSammich Місяць тому +2

    Luke should have always stayed on Dagobah. But he needed to leave. His Father I think had a stake in that.

  • @georgepapatheofilou6118
    @georgepapatheofilou6118 Місяць тому +3

    What say you Grogu Yes Yes Yes 👍

  • @shadowfast541
    @shadowfast541 Місяць тому +3

    What if ahsoka was the one who betrays the clones on umbara?

  • @aztn19
    @aztn19 Місяць тому

    🤔: Why did Luke fly into such an obvious trap?
    🤓: So the movie can happen.
    🙃: That works!

  • @samcarter4163
    @samcarter4163 Місяць тому +2

    Perfect

  • @whoswoodsy
    @whoswoodsy Місяць тому +2

    What is the name of the song in the first story?

  • @lorenzlfk2524
    @lorenzlfk2524 Місяць тому

    After 3 years he wasn't a Jedi? Should be plenty. I thought he was there 3 weeks or 3 months.

  • @MrColinWarde
    @MrColinWarde Місяць тому

    Like no 700. I love this.

  • @BobbyMoore2-mp8wb
    @BobbyMoore2-mp8wb Місяць тому +2

    I’m glad that he left

  • @Elias-ye1wz
    @Elias-ye1wz Місяць тому

    I like the what if

  • @vortega472
    @vortega472 Місяць тому +1

    Okay, but what about Han, Leia, Chewie, and the state of the rebellion.
    You started this...can you finish it good sir?

    • @RetneysHolocron
      @RetneysHolocron  Місяць тому +2

      All of that is covered in the story! 👍

    • @vortega472
      @vortega472 Місяць тому +1

      @@RetneysHolocron Sorry I mean - after Palpatine and Vader - him going out to save his friends and what happens from there - we know the Empire has the second Death Star - I would like a detailed telling of those adventure.
      BTW you're a good writer and storyteller so throw us a bone.

  • @mrcjc9298
    @mrcjc9298 Місяць тому

    Leia and Chewie would have escaped anyway. Remember it was all Lando’s plan.

  • @imnotyourfather9375
    @imnotyourfather9375 Місяць тому

    What's this background music?

  • @sydneysmith1521
    @sydneysmith1521 Місяць тому +3

    Your interpretation of the events would have caused Lucas to second guess himself had you been around in 1978.

  • @timm1328
    @timm1328 Місяць тому +3

    If Luke had remained on Dagobah, wouldn’t Yoda have died shortly anyway? Would the force ghosts have carried on the training?

    • @RetneysHolocron
      @RetneysHolocron  Місяць тому +2

      Probably! But I just kept Yoda alive in this scenario lol

    • @czyprodigy
      @czyprodigy Місяць тому +1

      I think that Yoda only surrendered his spirit to the force because, as he told Luke, "No more training do you require". I imagine he would've held on until Luke was knighted

  • @Iceflkn
    @Iceflkn 20 днів тому

    Jedi Force ghosts make no sense. As if the Light Side would tolerate a user demanding to keep themselves instead of rejoining the Force. It's the Sith trying to dictate and control things.

  • @LamarJennings-eo8ps
    @LamarJennings-eo8ps Місяць тому

    Dude I have no idea where you're getting this story from story is done remember George Lucas

  • @marcusisgod2592
    @marcusisgod2592 Місяць тому +1

    No offence but i dont think luke will reach his full potential that quickly. Although like the progression:
    Luke farmboy to jedi master
    Vader broken slave to redeemed man and i think anakin if the ahsoka series is anything is a force god

    • @clarkkent8286
      @clarkkent8286 Місяць тому +1

      3 years is a long time to make great progress

    • @rizzardbro
      @rizzardbro Місяць тому +3

      @@clarkkent8286 true. Luke Skywalker is pretty op in both Canon and Legends with little training. In canon, Luke faces against beings in the Cosmic Force, lifts hundreds of kill droids like nothing, and (possibly) brings down Star Destroyers through the Force in the Battle of Jakku.
      In Legends, Luke Skywalker was able to reach insurmountable levels of power five years after. He was able to crush AT-AT walkers, deflect blasters from it, defeated a Reborn Palpatine (with the help of Force harmony from Leia), and began a New Jedi Order soon after.
      Though I do agree Luke wouldn’t reach his full potential so soon, he would be very close given proper guidance and lessons, which he didn’t have in the three to five years during the events of the OG trilogy and after it.