This could have been a good story, it's too full of contradictions. Humans are not the strongest, yet they overcame the strongest....doesn't that makes them the strongest? The ending is far too ideological, a species and culture based on hunting, 10,000 years old, suddenly changes and becomes humble little partners. Was this written by touchy-feely Disney wannabes?
This was a good story.
You know it's fantasy fiction when they said free energy.
This could have been a good story, it's too full of contradictions. Humans are not the strongest, yet they overcame the strongest....doesn't that makes them the strongest? The ending is far too ideological, a species and culture based on hunting, 10,000 years old, suddenly changes and becomes humble little partners. Was this written by touchy-feely Disney wannabes?
Sound can not travel in a vacuum.
Not a bad start. But my policy is to leave, the first time I hear "precise" or "precision". Two woefully abused words.
If you want better write it yourself