Warning: This feedback will be blunt. Take your time. Do little snit-bits every now and then if you’re pressed for time. Don’t rush yourself. You’re right, talking *is* important for in-character comprehension, but so is expression of emotion. As a person who has dedicated his English skills to learning how to write novels and using the feedback I have been given, conversation means nothing if the conversation has no life. Breathe life into your characters and I assure you, the quality of your work will increase several fold. To add onto this feedback: Do not do what you just did. Do not dismiss the constructive criticism of someone yet endorse the standard criticism of another. Learn what criticism is best to use to improve and what criticism to use to motivate yourself and uplift your morale. Both things are equally important. By dismissing the criticism of someone, you show that you are afraid of learning, that you cannot or will not fix your mistakes or downfalls. If you keep this up, you will not be seen as a trustworthy person nor a respectable content creator. If you are not a respectable content creator, you will either lose your audience or your work will suffer. Sometimes even both may happen. You tried your best. That’s great; wonderful, even, but that does not mean you do not have room to improve. Do not make UA-cam your life. Do not make your work the only thing that matters, either. All aspects of your life are very important. You need money to survive in a capitalistic society, so you obviously need work. If you make work the only thing that matters, however, the joys you have in life will dwindle and eventually become nothing. You need to separate and balance your work life and your personal life. I hope that this helps you. I wish you the best of luck with your internship, @Alicia_gacha17. Goodbye for now.
@@Alicia_gacha01I dont mean anything rude in this btw! I think then you shouldn't really rush it, balancing things out it beneficial. Maybe prepare a schedule ahead of time so you won't be stressed over time or anything, if it seems stressful, posts dont need to be consistent, as long as you arent stressed over it
Can't believe people are shitting on William afton by saying he is Mimic. I just want to enjoy mimic and William as separate villians Mimic all he knew was violence after Devon got killed William had a chance to be good but denied it
(Small correction for your future videos: from the books and ruin dlc it can be inferred that glitchtrap was very likely actually a copy of the mimic program. Why it took the form of williams beloved rabbit suit is anyones guess though since we only know the book universe mimics backstory and know very little about the game universe mimic.)
HOW WONDERFUL I loved the part where they realize that Glitchtrap is tormenting William!👾 I thought no one would notice that detail in the video, it's absolutely beautiful!!! 💋 In addition, they realize that he is a powerful character in general. Author, could you explain a little more about your AU to understand the Game FNAF people more please? (Also in your AU Glitchtrap controls William or is he William in a certain way? That is my doubt)👀
That's only in the different book au world not in the main Cannon original game AU world. And just because we see mimic in the game doesn't mean that it's glitch strap or burn trap too. Also there is ton of evidence against mimic not being glitchtrap burntrap instead William. Also I don't know how glitch trap can be mimic when there's two glitchtrap black shadows on the wall in ruin also bunrtrap corpse is burnt corpse that scraptrap William corpse FNAF 6 fire also Burntrap has yellow burnt human rotten teeth mimic has white teeth and also Kelly and mimic was never in the fire in the books also I don't know how William can die when he's already dead and he's an undead zombie and a ghost too also William Michael Afton immortal Remnant souls is bound possessed to his body. Also mimic don't need a charging station at all it was never in the books only William glitchtrap burntrap need a charging station for some reason. Also immortal Remnant souls agony pain death ect keep William immortal. I heard in the fourth closet immortal remnants doesn't get burned destroyed by fire it gets powered by it fuel it agony pain death and since immortal remnant souls agony pain death ect is immortality. So if William in pain agony death then William gets immortality from Death itself. Also glitchtrap suit is possessed by William soul and William is burntrap to .
Also I believe glitchtrap burntrap William possessed the blob alagalmamtion and cassidy golden Freddy possessed the blob to and in Gregory comic burn trap has purple eyes and the blob does to and in Ruin on the blob face has some yellow and some purple on it. So purple guy William glitchtrap burntrap and golden Freddy Cassidy princess both possess the blob and also in Princess quest game it William glitchtrap burntrap vs Cassidy princess golden Freddy and the princess is gold like golden Freddy there is a old man that RED like old man consequences in princess quest game. Also bunrtrap don't mimic at all in the first security breach mimic don't copy mimic William at all and mimic has orange eyes and glitchtrap burntrap have purple eyes and main Canon original game antagonist character William Afton purple guy is associated with purple. And glitchtrap and spring Bonnie look the same they have the same purple bow tie and William had a purple tie in the movie. Also burn trap has one of scrap traps foot am Cassidy is keeping William immortal alive to and immortal remnant souls agony pain death ect keep William immortal to. Also mimic think there Gregory literally. Mimic : I'm Gregory say to Cassie so if mimic ai program robot was glitchtrap burntrap they think there Gregory vanny Vanessa to?? Mimic glitchtrap burntrap I'm Gregory Vanny Vanessa to?? Also in the trailer of the first security breach that is William burn trap voice saying both of you will burn to Vanessa and Gregory and mimic doesn't know what fire is at all mimic would have to learn copy Mimic the word burn mimic was never in the fire at all also William been burn in fire FNAF 6 scraptrap burnt corpse is William bunrtrap corpse. Also when burn trap William purple guy comes out of the charging station there is purple smoke. Also both ghost Cassidy princess Golden Freddy and ghost William burntrap glitchtrap souls both possessed the princess quest arcade game machine the mimic would have to mimic learn copy that to? The princess is Cassidy gloden Freddy from princess quest game and William is burntrap glitchtrap in princess quest game to both Cassidy princess golden Freddy and William burntrap glitchtrap both souls ghosts possessed the princess quest arcade machine game. Princess Cassidy gloden Freddy William glitchtrap burntrap purple guy both possessed blob alagalmamtion. Glitchtrap suit is possessed by William soul ghost.
The constant conversation is good, but talking is only half of a reaction If the characters put in a little more emotion and you fixed up your grammar a little, the series would probably be as good as it’ll get But as it is now, the extreme lack of emotion in the characters makes me feel like I’m watching a Built By Gamers short, and that sucks
I do my best okay? it's not my fault, English is not my first language so it's normal if it's has mistake on the grammar and I tried my best to put more emotions I will improve in the future And I want them to talk a lot for them to understand and analyze the videos the reactions are not easy to do and it take time
@@Alicia_gacha01 I wasn’t judging you, I was providing criticism on things I noticed could be improved so you know what you need to grow in. I am well aware that making videos is a time consuming process and that English is an extremely confusing language.
I generally get tired of the same old movie William always being evil when reacting to originals. I am at least happy that William turned dark after he learned the kid he killed was only 3 years old
@@Alicia_gacha01 maybe have them comment a few times, but having Mike repeat everything going on when he saw it 5 seconds ago gets annoying Like they can see
![passado família afton+Henry reagindo fnaf songs [parte 1]](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/sofdggu35BY/mqdefault.jpg)
![[🇷🇺/🇺🇸] Undertale react to Glitchtrap [I can't decide/Darkest Desire] {Gacha ultra(3)}](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/kLUw5cHxJIM/mqdefault.jpg)
For people who want to participate to my mep fnaf for Christmas here the link :
ua-cam.com/video/RHibiL3ECPk/v-deo.htmlsi=_-9V5sgbjvMGTpik
I have a question for you. What song did you use for your intro? I really like this song.
@@alexistate-du9hd Copycat by VocaCircus
I think
@@oO-oOOOOoOOOOo-Ooyeah its this song thank you
@@oO-oOOOOoOOOOo-Oo Tysm
@@alexistate-du9hdNp!
Mike is literally bacon hair prove me wrong
There about 16 types of forms of William Afton 😊
Huh? There are only 7-
1. Purple guy
2. Spring bonnie
3. Springtrap
4. Scraptrap
5. Orange guy
6. Glitchtrap
7. Burntrap
@@the_kittyCat8. You forgot Malhare or the black version of glitchtrap
@@GlitchgachaYT oh okay! Thank you!
The revision collab possibly? The one that came after the darkest desires one? Lol, that'd be interesting
Sure why not!
im really sorry but ...
WHY DOES MIKE LOOK LIKE A BACON FROM ROBLOX? 😭🤣
Who the hell names their kid bacon???
@@Fuzbun do you even know who bacon is?!
Fr
@@FuzbunBut in the film, Mike is not William's son, but Vanessa is
@@purple_man87 i know
What does that have to do with anything I said?
I recommend them reacting to Mr. Capgras encounters a secondhand vanity fnaf animation because it is highly underrated!
I just want you to know I like the video. It's pretty good. You do your best. And I will always come back and keep watching.
can there be less commentary and more emotion in the video? they talk almost constantly and barely have any emotion
@@Alicia_gacha01you could slowly change their face expressions to look more scared, surprised, confused, or bored.
Be appreciative of how he's making it canon, no ships, and basically paying attention to what he's doing
@@colereese3315thank you
Warning: This feedback will be blunt.
Take your time. Do little snit-bits every now and then if you’re pressed for time. Don’t rush yourself. You’re right, talking *is* important for in-character comprehension, but so is expression of emotion.
As a person who has dedicated his English skills to learning how to write novels and using the feedback I have been given, conversation means nothing if the conversation has no life.
Breathe life into your characters and I assure you, the quality of your work will increase several fold.
To add onto this feedback: Do not do what you just did. Do not dismiss the constructive criticism of someone yet endorse the standard criticism of another. Learn what criticism is best to use to improve and what criticism to use to motivate yourself and uplift your morale. Both things are equally important. By dismissing the criticism of someone, you show that you are afraid of learning, that you cannot or will not fix your mistakes or downfalls. If you keep this up, you will not be seen as a trustworthy person nor a respectable content creator.
If you are not a respectable content creator, you will either lose your audience or your work will suffer. Sometimes even both may happen. You tried your best. That’s great; wonderful, even, but that does not mean you do not have room to improve.
Do not make UA-cam your life. Do not make your work the only thing that matters, either. All aspects of your life are very important. You need money to survive in a capitalistic society, so you obviously need work. If you make work the only thing that matters, however, the joys you have in life will dwindle and eventually become nothing. You need to separate and balance your work life and your personal life.
I hope that this helps you. I wish you the best of luck with your internship, @Alicia_gacha17. Goodbye for now.
@@Alicia_gacha01I dont mean anything rude in this btw!
I think then you shouldn't really rush it, balancing things out it beneficial. Maybe prepare a schedule ahead of time so you won't be stressed over time or anything, if it seems stressful, posts dont need to be consistent, as long as you arent stressed over it
on the 7th birthday one I was like:GLITCHTRAP IS BRITISH!?
edit:don’t smoke kids
Great video I really love it I'll subscribe directly 👍😁
This is not an insult but your Mike looks like the Roblox bacon hair with a beard 💀
WOW MIKE LOOKS LIKE A BACON AGAIN
All these are my childhood classics ngl.
This is fantástic ❤ you are really creative!👍
Make them later react to until we meet again isn't not a problem for you 😊
Since when did Michael from fnaf movie look like a bacon hair from roblox
Ignore them this is awesome
hi girl so how are you doing so congratulations for 700 subscribers and I love your content girl love you ❤❤.
Hii I'm good and thank you sm
Can't wait to see more
Think you could have them react to Champaign and awe fnaf animatic? It's an Evan and Cassidy animatic
It's by the same person who did the I can't decide animatic
This was amazing! Great job!
Wow active this is cool you can make a song break my mind by SamiLose please ❤🙏🙏❤You are good at making videos, good luck ❤️♥️
I think you will succeed, the most important thing is to rest, but then when you have the strength, please do it
@@TheGolden_Freddy-Cassidythank you sm to care about me
Encryption would be a nice music video to explain more for glitch
Well no Cassidy is the boss of the mains but Charle and William control all of them
this is a masterpiece but tbh Mike looks like a bacon boy from roblox ❤
Mike looks like the starter characters of roblox 💀
Well, Mike doesn't have that poor guy from the game who killed his brother and bullied him.
Can't believe people are shitting on William afton by saying he is Mimic. I just want to enjoy mimic and William as separate villians
Mimic all he knew was violence after Devon got killed
William had a chance to be good but denied it
Guys wake up our girl has posted a new video
AHHH SO AMAZING ❤❤
Idea :
Qué los personajes de la película de Fnaf reaccionen a las novelas de Fnaf por el mismo Scott.
Saludos desde México.
You should do “you can’t hide”
(Small correction for your future videos: from the books and ruin dlc it can be inferred that glitchtrap was very likely actually a copy of the mimic program. Why it took the form of williams beloved rabbit suit is anyones guess though since we only know the book universe mimics backstory and know very little about the game universe mimic.)
Yeah but it's My au, in my Au William is glitchtrap I forgot to Mention it
@@Alicia_gacha01 the mimic being glitchtrap would explain why he's tormenting william
How trong is the other William 8:03
Esta hermoso❤
Have you done replay your nightmares , fnaf 4 song, Jaws and built in the 80s and follow me and halloween at Freddy's and any fnaf 3 songs
William 100%>Cassidy 100%
HOW WONDERFUL I loved the part where they realize that Glitchtrap is tormenting William!👾
I thought no one would notice that detail in the video, it's absolutely beautiful!!! 💋
In addition, they realize that he is a powerful character in general. Author, could you explain a little more about your AU to understand the Game FNAF people more please?
(Also in your AU Glitchtrap controls William or is he William in a certain way? That is my doubt)👀
In my Au William is glitchtrap and thank you sm
@@Alicia_gacha01 Ohhhhh thanks for replying 🐥
@@Alicia_gacha01Then wouldn’t them reacting to the original Darkest Desire video have been better?
@@Alicia_gacha01 Yes it would be great if you reacted to "Until We Meet" "Revision Collab" and "Into the Pit Collab"
@@Alicia_gacha01And is he still a Mimic or did you change your mind? I mean, I'm not saying you have to make Glitchtrap a Mimic, I'm just asking :^
you should do just gold
Oh yeah, I have a song request. It is called Bury me in Metal.
Fnaf movie react to just gold please 🙏
oh the last sog took things from old fnaf songs that pretty cool
Good luck vanne
I love your videos, why don't you make them react to darkest desire 2, it's spreading.
Thanks :3
Hey can you make them reacting to stuck in your ruin by give heart records and nothing remain by cryos sfm
Why does Micheal look like Roblox bacon to me 😭
Good vid tho!
Make them react to until we meet song or ultimate fright where the nightmares became a hybrid monster
Why is mike always talking he says like 17 things and no else speaks because mike always is asking a question right after asking a different question
do into the pit by dawko pls i think it’s a good idea
You make Mike look like roblox bacon.
I loved this reaction!, but i think you should fix those spelling mistakes as there are way to many spelling mistakes
English is not my first language that why
@@Alicia_gacha01 :/
@@Alicia_gacha01 just type it in your first language in google translate and translate it to english
I'm the only who thiks mike is like roblox default or "tocino".😂😂😂
I don't speak so good english
Qual o nome da música da abertura ?
" Copycat Vocaloid song"
and what is the name of the third song😓
Fnaf Darkest desire
thanks you
@@Alicia_gacha01
Make react afton movie minecraft
please react to the fnaf interviews
Según los nuevos libros glitchtrap ya no es William es mimic quien quedó en los Juegos porque William sii murió en el incendio
That's only in the different book au world not in the main Cannon original game AU world.
And just because we see mimic in the game doesn't mean that it's glitch strap or burn trap too. Also there is ton of evidence against mimic not being glitchtrap burntrap instead William.
Also I don't know how glitch trap can be mimic when there's two glitchtrap black shadows on the wall in ruin also bunrtrap corpse is burnt corpse that scraptrap William corpse FNAF 6 fire also Burntrap has yellow burnt human rotten teeth mimic has white teeth and also Kelly and mimic was never in the fire in the books also I don't know how William can die when he's already dead and he's an undead zombie and a ghost too also William Michael Afton immortal Remnant souls is bound possessed to his body.
Also mimic don't need a charging station at all it was never in the books only William glitchtrap burntrap need a charging station for some reason.
Also immortal Remnant souls agony pain death ect keep William immortal.
I heard in the fourth closet immortal remnants doesn't get burned destroyed by fire it gets powered by it fuel it agony pain death and since immortal remnant souls agony pain death ect is immortality. So if William in pain agony death then William gets immortality from Death itself.
Also glitchtrap suit is possessed by William soul and William is burntrap to .
Also I believe glitchtrap burntrap William possessed the blob alagalmamtion and cassidy golden Freddy possessed the blob to and in Gregory comic burn trap has purple eyes and the blob does to and in Ruin on the blob face has some yellow and some purple on it. So purple guy William glitchtrap burntrap and golden Freddy Cassidy princess both possess the blob and also in Princess quest game it William glitchtrap burntrap vs Cassidy princess golden Freddy and the princess is gold like golden Freddy there is a old man that RED like old man consequences in princess quest game.
Also bunrtrap don't mimic at all in the first security breach mimic don't copy mimic William at all and mimic has orange eyes and glitchtrap burntrap have purple eyes and main Canon original game antagonist character William Afton purple guy is associated with purple. And glitchtrap and spring Bonnie look the same they have the same purple bow tie and William had a purple tie in the movie.
Also burn trap has one of scrap traps foot am Cassidy is keeping William immortal alive to and immortal remnant souls agony pain death ect keep William immortal to. Also mimic think there Gregory literally. Mimic : I'm Gregory say to Cassie so if mimic ai program robot was glitchtrap burntrap they think there Gregory vanny Vanessa to?? Mimic glitchtrap burntrap I'm Gregory Vanny Vanessa to?? Also in the trailer of the first security breach that is William burn trap voice saying both of you will burn to Vanessa and Gregory and mimic doesn't know what fire is at all mimic would have to learn copy Mimic the word burn mimic was never in the fire at all also William been burn in fire FNAF 6 scraptrap burnt corpse is William bunrtrap corpse. Also when burn trap William purple guy comes out of the charging station there is purple smoke. Also both ghost Cassidy princess Golden Freddy and ghost William burntrap glitchtrap souls both possessed the princess quest arcade game machine the mimic would have to mimic learn copy that to?
The princess is Cassidy gloden Freddy from princess quest game and William is burntrap glitchtrap in princess quest game to both Cassidy princess golden Freddy and William burntrap glitchtrap both souls ghosts possessed the princess quest arcade machine game.
Princess Cassidy gloden Freddy William glitchtrap burntrap purple guy both possessed blob alagalmamtion. Glitchtrap suit is possessed by William soul ghost.
Fnaf movie react to don 't forget
Bro, that’s not mike. That's a roblox bacon hair, my friend.
Ah yes tree years old
The constant conversation is good, but talking is only half of a reaction
If the characters put in a little more emotion and you fixed up your grammar a little, the series would probably be as good as it’ll get
But as it is now, the extreme lack of emotion in the characters makes me feel like I’m watching a Built By Gamers short, and that sucks
I do my best okay? it's not my fault, English is not my first language so it's normal if it's has mistake on the grammar and I tried my best to put more emotions I will improve in the future And I want them to talk a lot for them to understand and analyze the videos the reactions are not easy to do and it take time
@@Alicia_gacha01 I wasn’t judging you, I was providing criticism on things I noticed could be improved so you know what you need to grow in. I am well aware that making videos is a time consuming process and that English is an extremely confusing language.
@@robatikwulf oh I'm sorry and thank you I will do my best to improve in the future
@@Alicia_gacha01 eh, it’s okay. As long as you are trying to improve in any way it’s a win
Mike be looking like a roblox bacon.
I don't get why nobody uses the original darkest desire
I generally get tired of the same old movie William always being evil when reacting to originals. I am at least happy that William turned dark after he learned the kid he killed was only 3 years old
💕😊🥺
Bacon rair
Michel Afton
michel afton looks like a ROBLOX character
Glicthtrap is william afton
@@AndreassChristiawan yes I know?
pintinho do Brasil que ele que consegue fazer isso e esse espinafre nem é real e o Golden pode consegue controlar isso consegue
Why is there so much talking😭
@@ClayGacha1642 idk I made this month ago but I think it's better than not talking at all 😭🙏🏻
@@Alicia_gacha01 understandable but its hard to watch their reactions and the video if they’re constantly talking😭
@@ClayGacha1642 Idk what to do tbh because some people say they're not talking much and when I make them talking people say they're taking to much 😭🙏🏻
@@Alicia_gacha01 maybe have them comment a few times, but having Mike repeat everything going on when he saw it 5 seconds ago gets annoying
Like they can see
@@ClayGacha1642 yeah I know
Bro keeps yapping.
The fuck am I watching....?
im sorry, but even if i mess up my lines, these look AI generated.
Pov:Ñ ‘,:)
Mike yaps too much
Esta maravilloso ❤