This is so beautiful. I was laughing midway and then... when he said, Maybe her husband got drunk one night and accidentally ate part of our relationship... But I'm lucky I guess, I still have the number of the very first person I've ever adored.. Man, I cried. I miss my brother.
I want me and my brother to learn it but i think that it may put a stop to our occationally intence debated. Me and my friend started speaking backwards but it took quite a long time and a number of repeatitions to get a sentence out.
I really thought i would hate this guy. honestly a part of me kinda wanted to hate him, But I just cant his bits are clever , funny, and sweet. It seems very genuine and it doesnt seem cheesy.
This is so beautiful. I was laughing midway and then... when he said, Maybe her husband got drunk one night and accidentally ate part of our relationship...
But I'm lucky I guess, I still have the number of the very first person I've ever adored..
Man, I cried.
I miss my brother.
All his poems are awesome, and his tonality is just "icing on the cake"
that was adorable and amazing in every way
loooooooooooooool
Rives has made me realise there's no level above sentimentality, it just gets more sophisticated
I can still quote a good part of this poem. I love it.
This is one of my favorite poems of yours!!! Thanks for the post, I've been looking for it for a while...
loooooooooooooooooool
@@DarkSoul1337 ... 👀
@@reginaldfairfield wow, 14 years,i am 14 years old
@@DarkSoul1337 ... Awww. 😍😄
ohh I miss my sisster & brother! thank you!
i cant stop watchin this ^^
i wish all of us could speak such amazing heart warming words
i love this poem rives is so cool. i luv him .
he is THE BEST!!!!!!!!
that is amazingly sweet
GOD i love rives
he's a frickin bopad opass
My favorite poem and poet of all time. Where did Rives go?
We used to do this language at recess!!!!
@MajesticTOASTER
If you ever find any of Rives' poems published in print PLEASE let me know as well!
I'm not a homosexual but, if there's one man I would turn for, it's Rives.
Fucking beautiful. At first, I thought it was very funny and clever, but at the end he ties it in with such beauty.
i like this guy he reminds me of my bro
Rives is a fucking genius. That is all. Good day.
I want me and my brother to learn it but i think that it may put a stop to our occationally intence debated.
Me and my friend started speaking backwards but it took quite a long time and a number of repeatitions to get a sentence out.
@dancerlegs14 thanks
Agreed.
woah
I really thought i would hate this guy. honestly a part of me kinda wanted to hate him, But I just cant his bits are clever , funny, and sweet. It seems very genuine and it doesnt seem cheesy.
So for a few days whenever I'm in the same room as my brother,I'll leave and say "sopee yopou lopatoper"and he'll just get really confused 😂
well looks like I have to call my sister now.
opanopybopodopy wopho copan opundoperstopand thopis copmmopent mopust bope propettopy copool.
Dayzo yayzou spayzeak thayzis layzanguayzage?
opexopellopent
Opi copan topalk opop topalk.
7 people boiled in the molten lopovapa
Caleb Cooley omg I tried to pronounce that and it sounds like platypus 😂
Buddy this coent was from 9 years ago. I don't even know who I was back then, let alone what I was trying to say
@dellboy177 tada there ya go a comment :) have a nice day!
my family is part cherokee
I am.
LOPMAOPO?
lopove*
@vwxyz345 I'm pretty kick ass alright
copool
this makes my childhood seem boring and my relationship with my sisters less of a relationship but hey im rich bitch! (rich in color)
sopo*
Thopats opa gopood topalk
@vwxyz345 Damn I'm awesome! XD
crack
I disagree. I think the condensed version feels too rushed. Cuts out too much for me. =@
Bruh... sry nobody thought you OP correctly lol
what the f*ck man, why cant i post a comment on this?
this is apple talk. wtf
WTF
he is doing it wrong