Woah, it looks like you really wanted to and put in a lot of effort. However, this advice is for you to rise like foam. It would be great if you made a remix of this music, since the most attractive part of this music is from minute 1:38 to 2:07. from minute 1:38 to 2:07 should be the intro of the song, then you need a good DROP! This drop you made has a very scratchy rhythm, I have heard many with a drop similar to yours... So now you know, place from 1:38 to 2:07 as the intro and do a new DROP.
Woah, it looks like you really wanted to and put in a lot of effort.
However, this advice is for you to rise like foam.
It would be great if you made a remix of this music, since the most attractive part of this music is from minute 1:38 to 2:07.
from minute 1:38 to 2:07 should be the intro of the song, then you need a good DROP! This drop you made has a very scratchy rhythm, I have heard many with a drop similar to yours...
So now you know, place from 1:38 to 2:07 as the intro and do a new DROP.