Hi everyone, I put a good few hours of work in to this so i'd love it if you could let me know if you enjoyed it. What did you like/not like about it and what you'd like to see in the future from this series.
@mattbussard2436 I'm glad you enjoyed it, if you haven't subscribed already then make sure you do as I'll be releasing part 2 soon. I'm currently script writing for it at the moment and introducing some new characters to show what happened while O'malleys group were fighting the priest
I like this alot. Makes me hope for trench crusade books in the future. Maybe in the future when there is more art, you can change the image to ones that match what youre saying. Like if a man is fighting a monster, you change to an image of said monster. Or if youre talking about men in a trench, you changed to an image of one of the trenches. Good job!
Well with some big names like gav Thorpe and graham mcniel slated to write some of the lore it's very possible we get a book quite soon. I was going to match the photos to the characters but didn't want to add so much to distract from the story but I'll keep it in mind for part 2
Great job! The sound FX really add to the feel well and the characters felt on point. But the combat felt, at least in my mind, a bit under leveled. I don't know if I had understood it differently, but the Death Commandos are elite of the heretic legion, and would've taked the sniper or the War Profet first while still in stealth with the Tartarus Claws. I'm pretty sure the Tartarus poison would work on war profets as ''even Angels fear it''. Pretty sure I read it somewhere, but I havent read everything Trench Crusade yet. But over all keep up the process, thinking about what everyday things the pilgrims do in between battles could also be interesting, telling random stories to each other, seeing what the world has turned into near the battle lines.
@litmeel4934 all good ideas, im planning a "what is the levant like", which looks at some of the unaligned creatures and monsters that roam it killing soldiers from either side. In terms of the death commando, yes they're a ridiculously powerful assasin, but in game they drop out of cloak if they attack, which i imagine would translate over to the lore. One thing to note is they are vicious and arrogant killers, incredibly highly trained yes, but they revel in killing and would likely want to see the fear in their enemies eyes as they died. As for Johansen he was firing at "something" but that might be coming up in a different story ;).
Shit man, hurts my damned soul to watch the heretics take an L but shit if this video ain’t badass, hope you do more stuff like this. And about what I’d like to see in the future if you haven’t noticed I’m a heretic fan myself so would love something from there perspective
@@Just_call_me_Billy I had already got one planned, as there are two sides to every story ;). What you need to ask yourself is, what was johansen shooting at?
Hi everyone, I put a good few hours of work in to this so i'd love it if you could let me know if you enjoyed it. What did you like/not like about it and what you'd like to see in the future from this series.
I really liked it. My only criticism is that you should have a longer pause between the end of the story and the outro.
@@The_Green_Ghost I'll bare that in mind thank you
I dig it,very engaging. I think you might be onto something here. I do especially love that you went the extra mile for sound effects and such
@mattbussard2436 I'm glad you enjoyed it, if you haven't subscribed already then make sure you do as I'll be releasing part 2 soon. I'm currently script writing for it at the moment and introducing some new characters to show what happened while O'malleys group were fighting the priest
I liked it. I really like the lore of TC so it warms my cockles hearing good stories
I'm glad you enjoyed it, i have part 2 scripted, and looking at how to edit it together.
very beaituful, thanks brother, I suggest only like greenghost to wait more between end and outro
@@orcoextra thank you I'll bare that in mind for the next one :)
I like this alot. Makes me hope for trench crusade books in the future.
Maybe in the future when there is more art, you can change the image to ones that match what youre saying. Like if a man is fighting a monster, you change to an image of said monster. Or if youre talking about men in a trench, you changed to an image of one of the trenches.
Good job!
Well with some big names like gav Thorpe and graham mcniel slated to write some of the lore it's very possible we get a book quite soon. I was going to match the photos to the characters but didn't want to add so much to distract from the story but I'll keep it in mind for part 2
@@FeelNoPaintStudios Exciting!
Yeah, i feel like it could be a hard balance between being too distracting, and supporting the story
I need MOAR! ...please...
@@dsrama777 have faith, more is coming ;)
@@FeelNoPaintStudios Fantastic! ...BY THE HOLY HAND GRENADE OF ANTIOCH!
@dsrama777 at some point i need to cover the holy hand grenade in a video lol
Absolutely fantastic mate!
Please keep it up 🙏🤞
@@SlaaneshsNewMuse thank you, im glad you enjoyed the story
amazingly narrated.
@@hazygloww thank you, im glad you enjoyed it
Awesome! Need more of this!
@@christopherholmes7324 rumour has it a part 2 has been scripted 👀
Great job! The sound FX really add to the feel well and the characters felt on point.
But the combat felt, at least in my mind, a bit under leveled. I don't know if I had understood it differently, but the Death Commandos are elite of the heretic legion, and would've taked the sniper or the War Profet first while still in stealth with the Tartarus Claws. I'm pretty sure the Tartarus poison would work on war profets as ''even Angels fear it''. Pretty sure I read it somewhere, but I havent read everything Trench Crusade yet.
But over all keep up the process, thinking about what everyday things the pilgrims do in between battles could also be interesting, telling random stories to each other, seeing what the world has turned into near the battle lines.
@litmeel4934 all good ideas, im planning a "what is the levant like", which looks at some of the unaligned creatures and monsters that roam it killing soldiers from either side. In terms of the death commando, yes they're a ridiculously powerful assasin, but in game they drop out of cloak if they attack, which i imagine would translate over to the lore. One thing to note is they are vicious and arrogant killers, incredibly highly trained yes, but they revel in killing and would likely want to see the fear in their enemies eyes as they died. As for Johansen he was firing at "something" but that might be coming up in a different story ;).
Criminally underviewed.
Have a sub.
@@JamesBuggemo thank you for the support:)
@@FeelNoPaintStudiosand thank you for putting your creativity out there.
You have a lot of potential, and I look forward to whatever you do next.
@@JamesBuggemo part 2 is coming very soon, I plan to release it in the new year
Shit man, hurts my damned soul to watch the heretics take an L but shit if this video ain’t badass, hope you do more stuff like this. And about what I’d like to see in the future if you haven’t noticed I’m a heretic fan myself so would love something from there perspective
@@Just_call_me_Billy I had already got one planned, as there are two sides to every story ;). What you need to ask yourself is, what was johansen shooting at?
@@FeelNoPaintStudiosI can’t wait to find out 😈
more please