It's extremely simple and repetitive, and the instrument balancing has not been done. You need to disable the echo on the master channel, trim and duck the bandwidths on the instruments so they don't bleed into the frequencies of other instruments, raise the volume of the drums COMPARED TO THE OTHER INSTRUMENTS (i.e. don't just make the drums louder, that'll muddy everything up), sidechain the kick a lot and the snare a little, move the main riff to a deeper instrument like a guitar or something as lyrics roll in to keep things interesting, and- you know what, just keep learning. There's a lot of potential here, if you're motivated to refine it.
more percussion, less synth, the backrgound just doesnt sound good, the midi sound should be changed all together. if the background was percussive that would improve a lot
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i did it again ua-cam.com/video/ObDZGQX94Ag/v-deo.html
As a a non-music-producing person, I feel like this could use more oomph to it and if you ever decide to make more songs like this I believe in you :D
DISTORT IT MORE AND MORE SCREAMING LIKE YOU'RE HAVING A PERIOD 🗣🗣🗣🔥🔥🔥
@@Starryeyyed67 like screaming like I'm pissed off? (i might actually think about adding screams into it)
@@M4N14C4L well just add vocals then
@@Starryeyyed67 how
@@M4N14C4L ask that guy who made a Femtanyl type beat.
I don't know to make music.
It needs more DRUMS n CRAZY STUFF ykwim❗️❗️🗣️🗣️😁😁
I really like the synthesizer though, it sounds perfect for the intro
Get that crunchy distortion going, some percussion and scream until your lungs bleed
not very femtanyl but STILL HITS
It's extremely simple and repetitive, and the instrument balancing has not been done. You need to disable the echo on the master channel, trim and duck the bandwidths on the instruments so they don't bleed into the frequencies of other instruments, raise the volume of the drums COMPARED TO THE OTHER INSTRUMENTS (i.e. don't just make the drums louder, that'll muddy everything up), sidechain the kick a lot and the snare a little, move the main riff to a deeper instrument like a guitar or something as lyrics roll in to keep things interesting, and- you know what, just keep learning.
There's a lot of potential here, if you're motivated to refine it.
Needs more percussion but honestly not that bad!
Dont forget screaming, it also needs screaming
this sounds like toby fox music, this gives off toby fox vibes to me
Alright you want toby fox music i might do that besides of toby,deltarune is about to get 3 new chapters
if toby fox and femtanyl(trying so hard not to spell her name as f3nt4nyl) did a collab:
is that the black silence
oh btw this is unfinished so enjoy having too parts of the thing
Just put distortion on everything and you’re good
Not wnough ear exploder
more percussion, less synth, the backrgound just doesnt sound good, the midi sound should be changed all together. if the background was percussive that would improve a lot
Lol