AmourShipping One-Shot! By the Cedar Tree (Project 17)

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  • @KillerofChaos7
    @KillerofChaos7 6 років тому +26

    Alright, let's try this comment again lol...XD
    Really, I can't tell ya enough of how impressed I am that you were able to come up with something like this outta nowhere. All those ways of symbolizing the number 17 in a story like this is something I don't think I've ever seen done before by anyone else. Clever use of that number.
    Anyway, this story, much like how it affected most others here, really was something that's quite touching. I was legit feeling so sad near the end especially when Serena finally found out why everything kept happening the way that they did. I could almost feel exactly how she felt, and to be able to write something like this that can make a reader sympathize this way with a character really shows that you know how to reach out to people through a story through emotions alone. Though this was, indeed, quite depressing at the end, the way you wrote this was done so beautifully that it actually made me smile, and the fact that Serena knows that she'll always have Ash in her heart makes this, at the very least, a little happy... :')
    You've done Amourshipping a lot of justice with this video and hope to see something similar to this for 2018's Amour Day. Most excellent work on this, bro. 😁

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  6 років тому +4

      Thanks, Reg! Glad you liked it! Yes, I was in such a rush to write this and I came up with the idea to incorporate the number 17 in it at the last minute after I already had the basic story together. I'm glad it turned out well to you all. I appreciate the support! I love reaching out with emotion like this, it's my passion! Don't put too much pressure on me for future shipping days lol, I might not be able to top it everytime, but I'll try a little something! Thanks again for the support, bro! #707

    • @sketchy5737
      @sketchy5737 4 роки тому

      This comment has 17 likes!!!

    • @thepokeficcollector8364
      @thepokeficcollector8364 3 роки тому

      I myself am impressed how u pulled this of

  • @greninjaichooseu5855
    @greninjaichooseu5855 7 років тому +44

    OMFG I’m crying so hard right now! This deserves a part 2 because u can’t leave Serena like that she needs to see ash again! WE need to see Ash again!!! Like if u agree there should be a part 2! Ash is everything to Serena so she deserves to see Ash again!!!

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  7 років тому +3

      I appreciate the support. But, please read the description. And remember that this is a ONE-Shot, lol. This is the end of this story, it's only 1 video. Not all endings are gonna be happy.

    • @sonyahaenga6165
      @sonyahaenga6165 4 роки тому +1

      @@NocturnalJay mega blaziken has a 2 part one shot.
      So does its snorlax
      And Its pikachu

    • @masudmondal3900
      @masudmondal3900 4 роки тому +1

      @@sonyahaenga6165 u are absolutely right,if fans want a part 2 then u should make it,coz fans are everything.........😉😉😉😋😋😋

    • @maharajhossainmugdho
      @maharajhossainmugdho 3 роки тому

      Yeah part 2 should be must come

    • @maharajhossainmugdho
      @maharajhossainmugdho 3 роки тому

      @@NocturnalJay Bro popularity can do anything many subscribers want a part 2 it will be very thankful for us I have only interested at you for this plz only for subscribers plz a part 2 plz ... i can't sleep for that story 😭 plz a part 2

  • @angelinageshe9454
    @angelinageshe9454 6 років тому +4

    i cried in the end...for real. i saw the meaning to this. he gave her happiness, helped her along those 17 days. a spirit to guide her..... and she holds him in her heart forever. always will remember his words

  • @ιηααηασα4
    @ιηααηασα4 7 років тому +11

    Omg Jay...this is one of the one-shot's I've seen! I LOVE this so much! I actually got emotional...amazing job! I can see the effort you put into this, keep it up (and remember GET SOME REST XD)
    HAPPY AMOURSHIPPING DAY

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  7 років тому +2

      THANKS, ROSA!! I appreciate your support SO much! Emotion is what I'm always after in my vids :) I'll keep it up for sure, and ok, I'll get some rest for you, haha :P Happy AmourShipping Day! AASL!

    • @ιηααηασα4
      @ιηααηασα4 7 років тому +2

      You're welcome XD.

    • @yourstruly985
      @yourstruly985 7 років тому

      ƑιηαƖ ƑαηтαѕуRσѕα4 I missed amourshipping day.....

  • @DShadows_045
    @DShadows_045 7 років тому +6

    Jay!!! You are a genius! That was the most heartwarming story ever. For you to think of all those reasons for 17, how everything came about together with 17? Amazing!
    Love your videos! Keep it going. Amourshipping for ever

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  7 років тому +2

      Thanks so much! Yeah, I wasn't gonna have the 17 stuff at first, but it all came to me the night before I wrote the script! Glad to touch hearts out there and tell this story. Thank you for your support, and I'll keep going for sure!

  • @sewanrai7949
    @sewanrai7949 Рік тому +1

    A sad ending can be a nice ending project 17 op

  • @electricninja7493
    @electricninja7493 2 роки тому +1

    For those saying they want a part 2, the beautiful part is that this is a broken story. A tragedy, yet the main character doesn’t die. It’s the imperfections of life and the injustices of love that are themes in this story and it’s why it is so good. To give it a happy ending wouldn’t be correct in this case. Absolutely amazing story. One of my all time favorite one shots

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  2 роки тому

      Wow, very good insight on this! Thanks so much for that. Yeah, not every story needs a definite “ending”; I feel like that’s more of a concept in the west, but after a lot of anime I’ve seen that don’t always make endings “complete”, I see a new light when it comes to stories, and it’s the “unsolved” endings that can be the most impactful. Thanks, that’s one of the best comments and I’m glad you’re seeing this on the 5-year anniversary of it!

  • @ShortTyler21
    @ShortTyler21 7 років тому +2

    Jay, this is the best one shot I have ever seen. I don't cry, some say I don't even have emotion, but I almost cried to this. This was such a good one shot. I hope serena will live a good life with ash always in her heart and soul and maybe, just maybe, she will see him again.

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  7 років тому +1

      Thanks for that compliment, I strongly appreciate it! I'm the same, it's tough to get me to cry. But yeah, I wanted some deep emotion with this one. Glad you watched! XD

    • @ShortTyler21
      @ShortTyler21 7 років тому

      Nocturnal Jay yw. I wonder...what would have happened if ash was taken away from the cedar and wasn't taken back at 5:00

    • @TheAlexamae16
      @TheAlexamae16 4 роки тому +1

      no one asked me, but i felt the same way (idk me just watching stuff from years ago)

  • @xic4589
    @xic4589 3 роки тому +1

    I gotta say these tug in my heart in a different. I know because of the youtuber you are, they won't get together, but these still hit so deeply because of the way they are executed. Its like watching someone know they are gonna fail, know they can't ever succeed, but they don't care and try anyways, ya know? Not every one-shot has to end with the 2 MCs getting together, it can always just end like this, where they don't get together physically but are together spiritually.

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  3 роки тому

      That's a great way of putting it! Yep, not every one-shot has to end the same way. I'll mix things up with my stories. They can end a number of ways. I like to keep people guessing. A spiritual form of togetherness is very strong, though. Thanks for watching!

  • @charliewood2.061
    @charliewood2.061 6 років тому +2

    That was depressing, like my soul, I LOVED IT, AWESOME JOB JAY!!!!!

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  6 років тому

      Thanks! Yay, depression! Glad you loved it! XD

  • @praharshiniseth7381
    @praharshiniseth7381 6 років тому +2

    This story was amazing. It was so heart touching and it also made me cry. I cried for a long time. The whole last night I wasn't able to sleep because I kept thinking about this story and also if I started thinking about something else this story popped up in my mind. And also I kept thinking of serena to figure out what the last reason was sooner before Ash left. I can't express how much wonderful this story was by words. I wished I could have seen this at October 17 2018. I loved this story

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  6 років тому

      Thanks so much for your heartfelt comment! Glad you loved it! I love connecting with readers emotionally. I'm very happy that this story was in your mind so much. And did you mean October 17, 2017? Lol, thanks so much! Check out my other current series, Tears of the Fallen! It's incredibly more emotional as well. I appreciate the support!

  • @sandiegosacario6197
    @sandiegosacario6197 6 років тому +1

    This was very well planned, organized, and structured. You turned minor details into keys or colors, and you used the colors to paint or rather illustrate an entire story. This video is very underrated, you deserve more credit for your writing/storytelling skills. It almost seems poetic...

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  6 років тому +1

      Thanks a lot! That's what I was going for. I'm very symbolic and I try to have deep meaning in what I write. I love writing poetry. I appreciate your support, please spread the word about my channel so that I can hopefully not be so underrated! Your kind words are very excellent. Thanks again!

  • @DuncanDominoes
    @DuncanDominoes 7 років тому +3

    I don't even know how you managed to come up with this idea! This was amazing!

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  7 років тому +1

      Thanks a bunch! It just came to me randomly a few nights ago. It moved my heart and I wanted to share it. Glad you liked it!

    • @masudmondal3900
      @masudmondal3900 4 роки тому

      @@NocturnalJay u made it in a few days,but rosa and liz take atleast 4 months in the least

  • @abisairendon8253
    @abisairendon8253 7 років тому +6

    Jay you always make things sad at the end but its great keep up the good work

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  7 років тому +1

      Thanks, I love sadness and darkness! It's my specialty lol. And I will!

  • @rayzersharpp
    @rayzersharpp 6 років тому +1

    Omg... You’re actually a genius for coming up for this I can’t explain myself but I’ll subscribe.
    I love solving codes/mysteries

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  6 років тому

      Nice, thanks! More of that is coming on this channel!

  • @maharajhossainmugdho
    @maharajhossainmugdho 3 роки тому +2

    Bro you make me cry 😭

  • @6023barath
    @6023barath 6 років тому +1

    Jay, you astound me every time. Brilliantly made, wonderfully delivered! The conclusion was tragic yet gorgeous because of your work. Project 17, ha great thinking for sure xD People die only physically but they don't when remembered and held close at heart and memory, perhaps it is our solidified perception of death as a physical characteristic that has caused a lack of mental nature. Ash was both (presumably) dead and not dead a for he is protected by Schrö- I mean Serena! XD Anyway, again marvellous job!

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  6 років тому

      Haven't heard from you for over a year! Wow, nice to hear from ya, Raj! And actually, that wasn't the message I was going for lol, it wasn't about him being dead, but hey, who am I to step on someone's artistic perception of a story? Nicely thought-out analysis! Glad you liked it! More is coming soon! *evil laugh*

    • @6023barath
      @6023barath 6 років тому +1

      Nocturnal Jay Yeah, it's been a while xD I have a short break of probably 3-4 days at most now, haha! Anyway, you're welcome as always! I know Ash did not die but we'll just assume so hehe..XD And I'm really excited for the upcoming ones :)

  • @16_weihsin14
    @16_weihsin14 6 років тому +1

    Whoa. I liked this one shot the most out of all one shots I've ever seen.

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  6 років тому

      Thanks a lot! I appreciate that! :)

  • @mischaeevee2328
    @mischaeevee2328 5 років тому +1

    I litterally teared up while watching this... Very good! I love the whole story, very touching!

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  5 років тому

      Thanks, glad you liked it! I love the emotion of these kinds of stories and I wanted to spread that emotion, so I appreciate it!

  • @rohanroy4194
    @rohanroy4194 4 роки тому +1

    Man you made everybody cry
    You made a wonderful video
    Love it
    And yet deserves a second pat
    😭😭😭😭

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  4 роки тому

      Thank you! Yeah, I get a lot of feedback about people crying from this. Sorry, everyone! Glad you liked it! You rock!

  • @DeltaDragonite
    @DeltaDragonite 7 років тому +3

    That One Shot is so beautiful. I LOVE IT!!!!!!

  • @soumi-o-madhu
    @soumi-o-madhu 4 роки тому +2

    This story makes me feel like crying!

  • @mastercraftme
    @mastercraftme 5 років тому +2

    I am at 17:30 in the video and I found out that the 2 lines the V and the X are 17 in Roman numerals XVII

  • @SeanM740
    @SeanM740 5 років тому +1

    Ive been rewatching this video ever since the day it came out and every time it gets me in the feels. You made a really great story and i hope to see more in the future. :) #amourshipping

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  5 років тому

      Really?? Thanks so much, you're awesome for that! Check out more on my current series, Tears of the Fallen, I'm really trying my hardest with this one, check it out and comment, please, no matter what the shipping is, it's about the story and love for fanfiction! Thanks! :)

  • @Pokegirl-ez8pl
    @Pokegirl-ez8pl 7 років тому +8

    I'M CRYING!!!!!!😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😢

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  7 років тому

      Aww, sorry! Lol, thanks for watching! :D

  • @mangekyofilms2496
    @mangekyofilms2496 7 років тому +2

    This was so phenomenal but I like it very impressive Jay!

  • @pokedaten6153
    @pokedaten6153 3 роки тому +1

    "Cader tree part 2" will be a full of fan service if you work hard you can find a story for part 2 . We will be very very very thankful if there will be a part 2.

    • @maharajhossainmugdho
      @maharajhossainmugdho 3 роки тому

      Yes that's right

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  3 роки тому

      Hmm, I might do this in the future. Stay with me and it might be a future thing I do. But, I'll need more subs because I need to know that people are watching. Spread the word about my channel. The number of people watching these fan fiction videos on UA-cam is severely dwindling these days and I miss the old days when more people looked at these.

    • @maharajhossainmugdho
      @maharajhossainmugdho 3 роки тому +1

      @@NocturnalJay I think if you give a vote for "Cader tree part 2" that will be good,I will always following you and thank you very much for your positive response.

  • @pokemonfanserena5001
    @pokemonfanserena5001 3 роки тому +1

    My eyes filled with water after reading the last part of story 😭😭

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  3 роки тому +1

      Sorry I'm 5 months late, but awesome, I love crying during stories, and thanks for watching!

  • @LordzikChaosu
    @LordzikChaosu 7 років тому +3

    God damn good job Jay... it' s sad but very good

  • @kingofmean5890
    @kingofmean5890 7 років тому +3

    pleze make part 2 this was touching

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  7 років тому +1

      It's a one-shot.... Read the description lol.... But thanks, anyway!

  • @jerryhuang1999
    @jerryhuang1999 7 років тому +3

    It was puzzling throughout the entire story, but it was so amazing and moved my heart. #amourshippingforlife

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  7 років тому

      Thanks, I love being mysterious. Glad you liked it! AASL!

  • @maharajhossainmugdho
    @maharajhossainmugdho 3 роки тому +1

    😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭there should be a part 2 ash must back😭😭😭😭😭😭😭plz bro .I can sleep after watching the video 😭😭😭😭

  • @animeshsur7968
    @animeshsur7968 6 років тому

    It was really a great story. I really cried after seeing it. But you know what you should make a Part 2 of it

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  6 років тому

      I appreicate the compliment. Thanks! And there is no part 2. It's called a one-shot.... That means there's only ONE of it. It's not a series. It starts and ends in one video only.

  • @Raphael-dr1bi
    @Raphael-dr1bi 6 років тому +1

    The beginning was like a horror scene to me.
    But it was so sad 😭😭😭😭😭
    I don't even know why am i not crying but i wish there was part 2 even it was one-shot0

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  6 років тому

      Raphael Supangat lol yeah a lot of people say that. Thanks for watching, glad you liked it!

  • @maharajhossainmugdho
    @maharajhossainmugdho 3 роки тому +1

    Plzz a part 2 only for subscribers

  • @FairyGirl12327
    @FairyGirl12327 5 років тому +1

    I am straight up crying

  • @kurgerbing3787
    @kurgerbing3787 4 роки тому +1

    3 yr old me: MOM DONT LEAVE!!!!!! :(
    Mom: You have given me new life..
    Also 3 yr old me: uhhh??

  • @maharajhossainmugdho
    @maharajhossainmugdho 3 роки тому +2

    I am following you for part 2 We will be very helpful if you make a part 2 plz only for us ... Plz ..plz ...plz.. and you can change the description if you want I am following you for part 2 plzzz...

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  3 роки тому

      Maharaj Hossain Mugdho sorry bro, it’s a one-shot! There’s not supposed to be other parts. A one-shot is one video only... but go to your recent comment on my Tears of the Fallen episode for a surprise in my reply lol

    • @maharajhossainmugdho
      @maharajhossainmugdho 3 роки тому +1

      @@NocturnalJay Bro you can change the tite and description.I never request you like that but "The Ceder Tree" was tooo emotional not for only Ash and Serena your story was tooo emotional I can't sleep that night. So, that is a request plz try. If you I will be very helpful

    • @maharajhossainmugdho
      @maharajhossainmugdho 3 роки тому +1

      @@NocturnalJay I have watched many emotional movies videos but It was very hart touching my legs was vibrating , I can't control my tears ,I am only requesting you because I think there should be a happy end that I can rest in peace.Bro you are my hope . Plz don't break it.

    • @pokedaten6153
      @pokedaten6153 3 роки тому

      @@NocturnalJay yeah bro I know it's one shot but you can change the title and It's was your best video ever. For us plz make part 2 .

  • @namedropper9237
    @namedropper9237 7 років тому +4

    Well that was interesting, nicely done now i need to go rethink my life

  • @Popingii
    @Popingii 7 років тому +2

    i cried 3 times

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  7 років тому

      YES! SUCCESS! And THANKS for watching!

  • @youtuberami9098
    @youtuberami9098 4 роки тому +1

    I honestly think I’m scarred for life with sadness 😣

  • @laxmikura4272
    @laxmikura4272 3 роки тому

    Please do another part

  • @MasterSuperShadowZ
    @MasterSuperShadowZ 6 років тому +2

    Part 2 pls it can't end like this

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  6 років тому

      It's a ONE-SHOT. Do you guys know what a one-shot is? It means it is only a one-time video. It starts and end in one video. That is it. There is no more. This is a great ending, not all endings are happy and full of sunshine and rainbows... Welcome to my channel.

  • @khaledasadat9565
    @khaledasadat9565 7 років тому +2

    I am so sad😣😣😣😣😣😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭but good one I actually cried and got really emotional.

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  7 років тому

      Thanks! That's what I'm trying to do with these stories!

  • @leehep9986
    @leehep9986 6 років тому

    My heart just stop at the end that's so sad if a girl have feelings for me I'll never leave her😢

  • @shuttertap
    @shuttertap 4 роки тому +2

    CAN WE GET A HAIL YEA?

  • @joeycordova8268
    @joeycordova8268 7 років тому +3

    This was great excellent job!!

  • @erikaloranka9426
    @erikaloranka9426 7 років тому +3

    I love this

  • @spandandebnath1589
    @spandandebnath1589 4 роки тому

    Make a part 2 of it plz

  • @tomoshall570
    @tomoshall570 7 років тому +3

    Jay did you got that project 17 from AC? IT a very good Easter egg

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  7 років тому +1

      No, I don't even know what that is. I just got it from the top of my head

  • @Cheesethebeans
    @Cheesethebeans 3 роки тому +1

    When did ash learn about trees

  • @rider183
    @rider183 3 роки тому +1

    Yes make second part i like it very much

  • @ayannathomoson1753
    @ayannathomoson1753 6 років тому

    This is so dang sad it made me cry even though I seen something like it

  • @roach_lotus
    @roach_lotus 3 роки тому +1

    Noooo :((( Thiss was tge Saddest thing in the whole Amourshipping Community You need them to see each other Again!! Immmm Sadd

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  3 роки тому

      Sorry about that! Lol yep, I loved making this. I hope the emotion rang true. It's one of my favorites. Thanks for watching!

    • @roach_lotus
      @roach_lotus 3 роки тому +1

      @@NocturnalJay
      Okieee! Im glad i found this channel btw

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  3 роки тому

      @@roach_lotus Thank you, and I'm glad you're a part of it!! Hope to see you in more comments!

  • @dayeinmylife
    @dayeinmylife 7 років тому +3

    That's just so sad....

  • @joshfereday3093
    @joshfereday3093 Рік тому

    One Word Man, Wow I Wish I Could Write like this

  • @angelinageshe9454
    @angelinageshe9454 6 років тому

    but i have one question, what was that about when he said she gave him a new life?

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  6 років тому

      The tree this story is based off of is the thuja occidentalis, which Ash said close to the beginning. Or you could call it the northern white-cedar tree. It's also called the eastern arborvitae. "Arborvitae" is a name used in the United States and it is latin for the "tree of life". That is why Ash said that Serena gave him new life. It was a reference to the tree. Only really deep thinkers who know about botany would've gotten that, so I'm glad to have told you! Also, you could look at it like Ash saying that Serena also gave HIM a spirit to guide him as well, and a meaning to his life, even though his life is very mysterious in this story.
      Glad you cried, I was going for that kind of effect! Thank you for watching and commenting!

    • @angelinageshe9454
      @angelinageshe9454 6 років тому +2

      thank you for this deep story. not a lot of ppl in this world understand meanings like this. i'm glad you're one of those ppl who shares wisdom like this on youtube.

  • @MorganMoen
    @MorganMoen 2 роки тому

    the start part was scary, the middle part is cool riddles butt the last part is just sad.

  • @tukangparkir297
    @tukangparkir297 3 роки тому +1

    Im Still didnt know What The Meaning Of it But The One Shot Video is good tbh

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  3 роки тому

      That's fine, it's somewhat left to interpretation. Thanks!

  • @connorrussi670
    @connorrussi670 5 років тому +1

    Nooooooooooooooooo It can’t end there

  • @naazashfaq1327
    @naazashfaq1327 6 років тому

    Plz make another part of it plzzz

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  6 років тому

      It's called a one-shot. That means there's only one of it. It's not in parts. But, I have other one-shots on this channel and a dark series coming soon!

  • @it-zer-En
    @it-zer-En 4 роки тому

    Hey buddy,,,,,, where is the second part of amourshipping of(Project 17) ... Where ash and serena would come back together...........

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  4 роки тому

      This is a one-shot. There is no second part. Not every story is happy

    • @it-zer-En
      @it-zer-En 4 роки тому

      @@NocturnalJay OK bro,,,, I get it........ Yes it is a emotional story and the story lines are awesome buddy...........I would also love to see the 2nd part if u made that because it almost touches the heart of every people.......... After this emotional story everyone wants to be happy and to see the happy part...... So I also just wanted to see the happy part........ Sorry buddy if I'm too rude in the first comment...... But pls make the 2nd part....... If u can...... I hope it will also be awesome whre the love birds would be together with each other.......

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  4 роки тому

      I appreciate your support, thank you so much. But, there is no second part to a one-shot, it's called a one-shot because it's only one part. And there is no happy ending. Again, not every story will have a happy ending. You've never seen anything with a sad ending before?

    • @it-zer-En
      @it-zer-En 4 роки тому

      @@NocturnalJay There's no matter of love and support buddy....... We are all friends and we all will support and love each other........ I was very excited Cuz the starting and middle story lines signified a mystery that is waiting to be resolved....... The ending part was really heart touching....... But after the ending part I thought that it's just the beginning of the love story.. I thought that serena will resolve the mystery and will get ash back to her.......... But indeed the ending part made me feel very sad.... And that's why I asked u about the 2nd part........ So my dear req will be pls make the 2nd part and bring an happy ending Cuz ur work and story lines deserve happiness and a happy ending not a sad ending....... So my dearest req will be that pls make the 2nd part and bring the love birds 2gether......They are made for each other and give ur work a happy ending........ Full love and support from me broooooooooo...... 👍👍❤️❤️...

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  4 роки тому

      I say yet again, that this is the ending. My work "deserves" the ending I mean for it. And for this, it's the ending that you saw. There is nothing else. If you truly support me, please accept this. A one-shot has only one part. If there was a second part, it wouldn't be a "one-shot".

  • @mituot8122
    @mituot8122 6 років тому

    I cry too jay😭😭😭😭😭😭 btw where is ash at

  • @kanaklata7040
    @kanaklata7040 4 роки тому +1

    I almost cried I am gonna make a theory of what happens next or an alternative ending it may be bad or cringey so pls don't read -
    Well when ash said he has new life thanks to serena . maybe that means ash and serena must have died in past like 2000 years ago in war on 5.00 pm and ash was there if serena would have discovered the 7th reason he would have gotten alive and they could live happy ever after but serena couldn't find it . also serena found ash at the cedar tree might be a clue because maybe they died there and the past will repeat like this they are reborn till anyone serena figures it out before its too late. Maybe ash is spirit waiting for the right one because he when he said you are the one I had a feeling its like that. He will wait for the next serena s reincarnation and wait for the right one it may take 17 days , 17 months , 17 years , 17 decades or even 17 centuries

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  4 роки тому +1

      I mean.... I like it... It's just that... it's just a one-shot, lol. Wasn't trying to get that deep into this. A lot is meant to be left to interpretation. Now, if this was a full series, I might've gone that kind of route, haha! Nice one :)
      Plus, you know I uploaded an extra ending to this, right? Hint, hint :D

  • @IhaanMaknojia
    @IhaanMaknojia 2 місяці тому

    The ending was emotional I was left crying and it is a big deal because I am a boy.😢

  • @kyleseverene7823
    @kyleseverene7823 3 роки тому +2

    This is so cute and sad

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  3 роки тому

      Thank you and thanks for watching!

  • @lte_shabba8715
    @lte_shabba8715 6 років тому

    If this wasn't a one shot then this is what I would of done 4 pt2 after 17 days have passed after ash disappeared he reappeared but then says Serena I have missed you for so long and now we can be together again. And then at 5:00pm he doesn't disappear and stays with Serena forever

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  6 років тому +1

      Piplupz Gaming That’s too happy for this story. And it doesn’t have the same effect I wanted. The way it ended was the most impactful way it could’ve gone. It’s meant to make people think. All stories aren’t meant to have happy endings where everyone’s together and in love.

  • @pokedaten6153
    @pokedaten6153 3 роки тому

    Bro I have only one thing to say part 2 . Because we can only request, nothing more.😢

  • @jadecanary-.
    @jadecanary-. 4 роки тому +1

    Is so sad !Like ash have only 17 days to live

  • @piyushkumaragarwal7053
    @piyushkumaragarwal7053 5 років тому

    When I remember this video l cried.You have to make it's part two and bring Ash and Serena together

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  5 років тому

      Piyush Kumar Agarwal do you know what a “one-shot” is? They only have ONE part. There is no more. Not all stories have happy endings, that’s life. It’s just fine this way

  • @bendeto1910
    @bendeto1910 6 років тому

    I cried 😭😭😭

  • @TakuKitee
    @TakuKitee 3 роки тому +1

    =( i teared up at the end

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  3 роки тому

      Sorry about that, lol, but I'm glad you experienced emotion during this and I hoped you liked it!

    • @TakuKitee
      @TakuKitee 3 роки тому

      @@NocturnalJay well i sure did

  • @aaleyahrodriguez7495
    @aaleyahrodriguez7495 3 роки тому

    Nice video

  • @poonammohan4792
    @poonammohan4792 4 роки тому +1

    just gave u a subscribe for this

  • @icyninja6653
    @icyninja6653 6 років тому

    Ash is scp 017!!

  • @Brigcal_YT
    @Brigcal_YT 4 роки тому

    Why

    • @Brigcal_YT
      @Brigcal_YT 4 роки тому +1

      I cry a lot after watch this please put a second par😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

    • @Brigcal_YT
      @Brigcal_YT 4 роки тому

      Why you end like this I cry alot please create a second part

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  4 роки тому

      Lol sorry for the emotion! But I love emotion like this! No second part, but there will be more projects coming soon! Thank you for watching!

  • @tarequeahammod5692
    @tarequeahammod5692 6 років тому

    Nooo the ending should be happy not this sad 😢

    • @NocturnalJay
      @NocturnalJay  6 років тому

      You must be new to my channel..... Lol....

  • @ravstar6615
    @ravstar6615 4 роки тому

    Comment 💯

  • @ashasunil2821
    @ashasunil2821 3 роки тому

    :(