"I Grew Up In A Very Strange Little Town. If You Ever Visit, Follow The Rules" | Creepypasta
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- Опубліковано 19 вер 2024
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What the stranger said about “a favour for a favour” being correct makes me think they were a fae or something similar. One of those Old creatures who value the laws of hospitality and all that.
I thought so too!
Being as it ended the way it did, it likely is the case.
They were kind and chose to take the offer as a favor. Canceling the OP's debt to them. One of the good ones.
Old blood, some call them gyspies, I have always prefered being called roamer are story wise always belived to have fae in their ancestry.
Yep! I felt like the stranger was Seelie and the anglers Unseelie. Would explain why the stranger helped while also being harsh. They have little regard for us but the Seelie will help for a price
I really liked this one. The strange guy in the shelter with him really made the story stand out for me. He probably didn't even need to be in there to keep himself safe but did so to keep the kid from doing something dumb.
You mean the strange "they" in the shelter with him? He said they enough it started getting annoying but that's just me.
@@maow9240 I found the repeated usage of they annoying too.
@@maow9240 I didn't like that the thing didn't have a gender so I just think of it as a he.
@@comraderaichu6940 oh there was a gender just the author didn't want to assume what gender it was.
...whats wrong with "they" lol
Thanks so much for reading my story! Really touched by all the attention. To everyone who wants a part 2, it's in the works :)
Looking forward to it
I loved the story!! Will eagerly await a second installment!
Awesome Mz Loren
Awesome the way your mind works! Looking for more from you !
Yes!!!Great job!!! I need to know more about the stranger! Or what he told his parents!Lol please don’t let anyone else read your story for UA-cam! It has to be this narrator!
Excellent news 🤘
The constant use of "They", the strange very knowledgeable protector, the ability to scare away another of the night things, the sudden appearance only after nightfall, the changing and uncertain appearance, the cancelling of a debt out of kindness, and the disappearance into the forest.
If that ain't a classic case of the Fae, probably a changeling in this case, I don't know what is.
It appears their town and the surrounding countryside is under the jurisdiction of the UnSeelie Court
RULES!!!!
Isn't it weird a bunch of adults love hearing stories about rules? But as kids we detested rules so much.
Yeah but in these stories the adults listens to the rules as well as we did as kids. Come to think of it that it shouldn't be too surprising that they don't follow the rules as kids we all thought we knew everything, I guess some habits are just too hard to break. LOL
@@gothgirl4evr782 they anti maskers prove that
I agree. I think it's because when we were children rules seemed strange and always needed explanation. Now we can understand all of them through common sense. But stories like this take us back to the wonder and confusion about the world again
I'm loving these rule creepypasta stuff but man I won't ever listen to my mom lol
Stories like this make me fell justified in following the rules, even when I did not understand them.
Great story. I'd like to hear his conversation with his parents when he got home. They've got some 'splainin' to do.
YES THEY DO! lol
@@zackward8725 If people explained things ahead of time instead, most horror stories would never happen
mom dad explain to me everything!
mom and dad: well son theres birds and the bees😹
My first thought as well. Lol
@@foo219 that’s why we shouldn’t read the comments 🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️
Stephen is the best narrator on UA-cam!
Big facts!
agreed! check out slumber reads if you haven’t already, they’re my top 2 for sure. neither have ever failed to put me to sleep
Ain't that the Truth. Best Narrator. He can change his voice. He has a soothing voice. Just love em.
@@kammybobamby5417 just went and checked them out. Awesome voice, but the stories are really long! I may check out their 2nd channel? The stories are shorter. Thank you for guiding me to their channel.
So true! He really is gifted. I hope his popularity continues to grow. He so deserves it.
Ok that was a badass story. Nothing less from the best story teller on the internet. Thank you Lighthouse
Yes it was 😉 Keep them coming! THANK YOU
Yes comrade
We need to learn more about this stranger! Why’d the stranger need the shelter if, they’re supernatural given the ending of this story??? Who on earth could they have been visiting if, the stranger is a little beyond “human” at this point with those very dark eyes???
Are there others like them???
Well whatever it was it wasn't one of them it clearly saved the boy's life but a favor for a favor sounds like a Fay
They were probably visiting the ”human realm”, and since they are not the same as the Angler Fish, they too would be viewed as pray.
@@maximillian1109 they are probably things stronger then angler fish
@@blizzard1198 I’m not sure, he said he would get them both killed if he had opened the door. Perhaps an off-shoot of the same species? Or maybe even like a sheep dog, keeping the prey safe. Could have sensed his ignorance? If I were him, I’d certainly have a very pointed conversation with my parents that day. Lol
Who is he visiting the kid
Yes, Greg of Fataville, I love to hear more stories about your hometown.
Really are they real
At the end I was thinking the guy was homeless. If the writer of this story ever did something else in the same town I think that would be a pretty cool place to take it. A homeless person that experiences the night ever single night try to survive by going between shelters daily. They would also know a lot more about the creature too because of this. Would be an interesting way to go in my opinion.
Ummmmm bruv he was clearly more than homeless, why don’t you resisted and try again? And leave the thinking to the pros
@@jonalbright7200 umm bruv. I know he isn’t homeless. That’s pretty obvious based on how he just disappeared. I was thinking he was homeless from the point they left the shelter up to the point just before he disappeared. That’s why I used the phrase “I WAS” rather than “I AM”. Saying “I WAS” implies I no longer do. I shouldn’t have had to say “but I now know he isn’t”, because I already implied I knew with my wording of “I WAS”. It’s also why I said “if the writer ever did something else in the same town I think that would be a pretty cool place to take it”. As he hasn’t done a story with a homeless guy yet and the story could be expanded upon with a story about a homeless guy. (In my opinion). Then again it may be best if you just got rested and try reading again? Although it may also be best if you just left the reading to the pros.
"A favor for a favor"
The implications of the ending no less
Replication of voices and possible telepathic abilities (in reference to it mimicking his mother and knowing hid father's name)
And the significance of the forest and how it was presented in the story
All in all
I'd say that the antagonist/beings terrorizing the locals come night fall are all FaeFolk otherwise known as "Fairies" and if you're not into that sort of lore occult practices or history and didn't know
Yes
Fairies can be very dangerous frightening and ancient intelligent beings twice your size even basically any mythical creature is considered a member of the FaeFolk from vampires and werewolves to garden gnomes and brownies and everything in-between
@Dammit Pam! Yea step outside Hollywood and mainstream medias illustration of fairies and actually five into tho lore of it all and you'll learn that those kid friendly fairy tales with dark overtones and life lessons are actually reiterations of the original stories which were spoken and presented as factual and real life accounts with supernatural beings with abilities and powers outside our understanding they were meant to be taken literally and the lessons they taught were how to survive encounters with these entities what to do not to do what to say and not say what to accept and to deny and how to go about doing so what to use as offerings for safe passage through the dominion of certain members of the FaeFolk and even counter measures on how to ward off defend and even kill them if possible let alone necessary
Look up how Detroit Michigan was established when it was colonized
The local fairies in the area cursed the land and reported encounters with them come in to this very day
I loooove stories involving FaeFolk! I wish there were more stories about them in mainstream horror. Changlings are considered Fae right? Those are my favorite but there aren’t enough films about them.
@@ModernDayAfro I grew up right outside Detroit myself and have never heard about it. I’m going to have to read up on that one, sounds really interesting, thanks for opening my mind!
@@Winters.C yeah me too
Even when church and government was mixed the church fully acknowledged and recognized the existence of fairies claiming them to be members of the fallen that stayed on earth in corporeal form
And yeah come to find out when Detroit was established it was cursed by FaeFolk to be a land of death and strife nd to this day the curse has not relented
Small red gremlin like creatures angry and spiteful little things users of ancient Magicks and arcane knowledge it truly is mind blowing
@@ModernDayAfro If that’s true you can def see it. How many times has Detroit tried to reinvent itself and failed? Would there ever be a way to lift it or make peace with them?
Such a great story and wonderfully narrated! I can’t help but feel that the “Stranger” was sent there to protect the protagonist!
Strangers…a man and wife maybe?
Marvelous narration expressing perfectly the frightening, ominous terror of a story by thishazeleyeddemon! Beware the night and the angler fish in the darkness. Captivating and well done. Thank you both very much!!
This was an amazing story, I really love how indescribably, but naturally the stranger was written, all the way down to not even describing their gender. The main character doesn't even realize that by the end of the night, he still doesn't even know what they look like. MC could read a book in the moonlight, but still not comprehend this person in front of them. Great job to the author, and Lighthouse does this story justice with an awesome narration! 👍
I love it when you do these longer stories. Great story, great narration.
Really well written story, but it definitely seems un finished. He should make more stories about the other rules of the town. Also I feel like the creepy pasta should be named "the angler fish" but I understand why it's not named that
At the end I was thinking the guy was homeless. If the writer of this story ever did something else in the same town I think that would be a pretty cool place to take it. A homeless person that experiences the night ever single night try to survive by going between shelters daily. They would also know a lot more about the creature too because of this. Would be an interesting way to go in my opinion.
As always an excellent narration. This story kept me wanting more the guy or they as Gregory called him to me seemed like more of a Town guardian then homeless. Because in a blink of an eye he had went from standing in front of Gregory to just being gone. It would be truly cool to have a part 2 to this story. Again excellent narration.👍
@@christopherkalberer2054I’m aware he isn’t homeless. I meant I thought he was just before he disappeared.
@@mainlyglitches I mean, it depends on if "in the middle of a creepy forest" counts as a home or not. They're fine, so probably?
Also thank you for the homeless suggestion, I didn't think of that 👀
- the writer
@@lorendaemon7945 I am happy you appreciated the homeless suggestion. 😁 BTW just wanted to say that I liked the story. 👍
Yea, the title in the fataville sounds like Fatville.😅 I find it interesting & yes, I would like more from there.
Thank you my friend Stephen!! ✌️😎
I wish you’d collab with The Dark Somnium and RomNex. It’d be a story for the century!!
Definitely have to do that one day! Those 2 are great!
Dark somnium is awesome, I agree!
I love your uploads. They just keep getting better and better. Thankyou Lighthouse.
This was great. I listen to a lot of creepypastas knowing that, although I love them, 19/20 times they will be mildly entertaining but not much more, writing varies, that's reasonable. Stories like this are the reason I am happy with mildly entertaining, because when that 1\20 story happens, it is just so very good. Thank you for this narration!
I can always count on this channel for the best horror story narrations! I always read about people saying they love falling asleep to stories read by other narrators, that’s great for them, but I love to listen to the stories and be engaged by them! Thanks to lighthouse horror I can look forward to at least one great story a night and not get sleepy lol but get enthralled. You are the best!
Excellent narration and story… a 30 min escape from the stressors of the day and with your vivid description of details, can’t help but find myself wondering what a great movie it would make… thanks for the video LH, I’ve been looking forward to your upload all day…
This has got to be a series, it’s a good story so far.
LH you are growing so fast, kinda gonna miss the days where you like all our comments and even comment, it’ll be a rare thing when you hit your first milly! But it’s good to see a GOOD narrator grow! 🖤 the channel, no matter how many subs you got/get.
thanks April! 👊👻
There is a series that’s just like this story, it’s called “From” It’s really good!
Wow. This was excellent! Pulled me right in and put me in that shelter right next to them!
Spoiler:
I was waiting for that guy to be a monster....guess maybe he was... or something similar!
Pretty sure this guy was a spirit of someone who got taken by the darkness. He did describe what happened to him.
He was fae.
The voice behind the stories...PERFECTION!! Absolutely spot on all the time.
I would like to hear more from this town. Awesome job!
Why the hell would theaters be open at that hour if it's so dangerous for people to be staying there late?
Why would a kid who had lived in that town his whole life not know the consequences of the night or even heard of bad things happening to others if it is so dangerous, but the rules to prevent it is so easy to break and not strictly enforced?
I don't think they ever mentioned the town having something like a bell or siren to warn people about the time.
This sounds like the time period before that. The narrator sounds old and given how small the town is, a siren or alarm might be a bit out of reach. There are also other rules likely limiting how much they can build. The Fae, I imagine, wouldn't want to deal with a lot of human technology. The theater thing makes sense. But humans are not very smart sometimes.
I love me some lighthouse horror stories
*Who doesn't ?*
@Dammit Pam! he is my best friend.
I enjoyed that narration a lot !
You have a great voice for these stories. I'm so glad I found your channel.
I'd love to hear an episode 2 to the amazing story if it's possible?
I'm confused was it just a person who enter the shelter or many? I hear singular then plurals then singular again I don't understand most of it now...
It's woke language garbage
I assumed it was a couple and only one spoke up…
I loved that story & would love a part two. Thanks as always Stephen xxx
good to see you!
The Town Rules
Or the town rules ... scary asf!
▪HS Kids had the be home by 10:00pm....then the commercial on tv ... "its 10:00 - Do you know where your Child is?"
Thanks Lighthouse Horror you are the Best💙
Genuinely an amazing story! 5/5!!! I got chills and yet the horror was matched equally with intrigue!
You get so used to his excellence you forget to thank him sometimes. Great story, UNBELIEVABLY SKILLFUL STORYTELLING. Thank you as always,
Rueben
LH yeah ! You have done it again, hit a home run, run in for a touchdown !!!! Such great narration to go with a rules story. Thanks ever so much.
That was mind blowing story , always respect what the elderly tell you they know more , respect to what we really don't known , love the badass story can't wait what next and thank you guys.
Just look what you do see cause the rest of it is WHITE PAPER 😳 l was
I believe that everyone's home town is wierd and strange.
I know mine is.
"One can get used to fear if you live with it for long enough"
Can confirm. Every day of my life up until sometime in Fall when I had turned 16, I woke up with bad heart palpitations, anxiety so intense it felt like I was being crushed, couldn't think straight for hours at a time, with repeat episodes that I quietly kept under wraps from waking to sleeping.
And then one day it just stopped. There isn't much else that I can register either, though.
Good story, I especially liked the last bit that confirms the Stranger to have not been a normal person.
You know everyday towns disappear. Especially even around my area I mean the area that was living in 10 years ago is no longer a town he is part of a bigger town now LOL I guess so it's been happening till all these little towns they get abandoned or they get absorbed. I mean I can still find lead lines in the woods near my house
You're right. All of the "Heights " in My city are now just Creston neighborhood or Alger neighborhood.
I think the anglerfish is a reference to luring their prey out to them
Have incredible voice love all your stories really brings to life you feel like your in the story Great Job & Thanks for all your hard work to entertain us you Rock Brother
As soon as I heard the line about there being lots of "folk" about, I instantly knew this was a story about the fae! I'm kind of obsessed with them at the moment so I'm happy I stumbled across this video
This was fantastic & I love how it’s terrifying but also like a brothers Grimm story. I’d love to hear the rest of the series.
In these stories it always baffles me, If the rule is be home before sunset, Why did the movie, or why does anything … run that late ?
Hi everyone . Have a great night and be well y all
Confused me when used they/them like there were multiple, but very good story 😄😄😄 I thought
He would use his salt 🧂
Ever since I watched Half Priced Voodoo shop on this channel,Listening to his voice ....This has become my favourite creepypasta channel..This man has a voice like a glass of warm milk
I would love to hear more about Fataville!
I can't sleep without listening to ur stories even if I wake up and the stories over ill restart it to fall back to sleep. Love ur narrations.
😃Well done! I was a little scared when he let in the other man, I just knew that was a BAD idea. Glad I was wrong 🙂
I love it. “ they made a sound that could’ve been a laugh. If you squinted.” Funny
Even other fae fear the Wyld Hunt. Steel walls and salt were basically the only things keeping them from the grasp of Herne when those horses passed.
This was great Stephen I really enjoyed it ♥️♥️♥️
Hearing you tell this story transported me to another time and place..love your voice so much..
This was so interesting! Hats off to the writer and the narrator (and all involved in sharing this with us)!
the fact that the story teller calls the stranger "they" even from the beginning is chilling
Distracting and annoying more like it
This one was soooo good! I can vividly see everything & feel all the emotions displayed in this story! Bravo 👏🏽
Creepy story 😳 Great writing and Love the way you read! Looking forward to more stories 💥❤
I have heard this story before, but you are a much better reader than the first person that I heard tell it.
The bow towards the woods was a great way to solidify who the stranger was
Anglerfish symbolizes the unseen world, navigating darkness, and luring energy. I did some research and realized that this perfectly fits the description of the story as a whole.
😎😎😎 would love more stories from Greg about his weird town
The way this story was written and narrated really blew me away. It was if I was watching a television show.
Man I really hope this turns into a series. The (what I'm calling a) forest spirit is really cool and I need to know if the MC had any more encounters with hem XD
Just wonderful!
Keep the stories coming!
I never thought any one would come close to dark somnium but this channel an excellent channel
What's with the "they" as a non english native, I am confused. Are there more people or just one stranger with the MC?
just one
Who says "they" talking about a singular person?
At first I thought the stranger was one of the creatures of the night, and that the mother part would've been a plot twist where she actually DID die. Either way, still amazing as always!
Top notch as always. Thanks for the story
This is Creepypasta written and narrated done right 👍! This narrator can save not so good stories with his excellent narration but when it's a great story to, I stay up way past my bedtime. Thank you sir! This was a pleasure!
thanks Richard!
Idk if anyone's seen an angler fish but those things are UGLY. they'd definitely make great monsters
This really makes me think of the strange rues I live by.
Never look out of a window during the night, as there maybe something looking back in. The area I live in is a town/city but more often than not the street light on the corner is out so when it's dark it's pitch. Better to not stare into the abyss.
Never look into a mirror at night unless the room is fully lit. From things that have happened to my father and I, I recall waking up fully thinking one of our cats had fallen asleep at the foot of the bed, see when I woke up I looked directly into a mirror that was on the closet door, what it was showing me was a cat at the bottom of the bed. When the cat didn't respond I became afraid she was sick or had passed away. Immediately I looked down to the bottom of the bed, no cat, not even a reasonable explaination as to why it would appear to be so. My Father told me to put a sheet over it at night and it would be fine.
Beware desires to attempt things that don't have explaination.
This guy THIS GUY!!!
Brother you are one of the best!!
Thanks for sharing this with us
I definitely want more of these stories about his town
Always open for more stories, Fataville, sounds good. Thanks for you story Narration thoroughly enjoyable. ☺️👵🏻🇦🇺
Time for bed, Stephan is telling bedtime stories. Good night everyone and creepy dreams 😴 🕸️🕷️👻🤡👹💤💤💤
Uh..It's 6:36 am here....^^
@@janedoex1398 it's 12:37 am here :o
@@janedoex1398 where is here? Then good morning from Florida have a good day
Only 5 minutes in, but a thought occurs: I would love living in a place like this simply because I would take my closest shelters and decorate them and put blankets and pillows and snacks in them. Lmao it just sounds nice to the neighbors that get trapped there.
Okay but after hearing the whole story I am a little obsessed. The forest was kind to him and I KNEW from the moment the man got there it wasn’t a human but after a bit I knew it wasn’t there to hurt him either, that’s so nice. This is just good and I genuinely love it for so many reasons.
It occurred to me that the stranger might have been a juvenile “angler fish” seeking shelter from the adult angler fish which might eat their own offspring to limit competition. Or the unknown person with strange eyes, strong grip, and unusual nails may have been a different species of “angler fish” which was did not eat humans.
They weren't real angler fish- the stranger was just using the angler fish as a metaphor. The creatures were fae, who are known to lure humans with mimicry and illusions.
Loved this story. More from Fataville, please.
Great story....the best part is recognizing Brattleboro, VT in the town pictures.... it's about 20 minutes south of me....
Drove through there once on a road trip as a kid. No vacancies at the motel, so Grandpa drove longer than intended to get out. Said it gave him an eerie feeling. Lovely gardens and people in the daytime.
3:50 - 4:15
I get the feeling that the sun was setting.
Wow ! First time I’ve heard this type of story!
Somehow compelling and twisted ending.
The bad and good can be confused.
This is one of those stories that as you're listening to it sounds so real that in a really scary moment you find yourself on the edge of your seat waiting to find out what happens next ... I Love Your Story Telling & the Awesome Folks that send in all these stories are some Very Talented Ppl to think up such tales of Terror , Horror & Mystery .
Great story, I hope there is more too it, more stories about the town, the rules, and what is outside at night
I sincerely hope to hear more of Fataville.
Part 304 of thanking the lighthouse horror for their constant uploads
Amazing content as always
thanks and good to see you!
Aaah, I love this one. Them fae stories are the best~
I hope this is a series of stories, like the supermarket. Sounds like an intriguing town.
I hope that's a series too. I thought that one was really well-written.
You know.. in these kinds of situations. It's always best to explain things to your children.
I LOVE THIS KIND OF ENDING... ONE OF THE BEST STORY YOU'VE READ! ❤
Wonderful job on your end as always! This one felt especially well written!
This is such a great story. Thank you for telling it with such enthusiasm. You are the best story teller I know. Please keep up the amazing work.
This Is going down as One of Your Bests 💯💚
As specific as this is, I love anglerfish stuff in horror, and lovely narration :)
Superb! Absolutely superb. An excellent tale with amazing narration. Thank you Lighthouse 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
This channel has the best curation of stories.