Concise is Nice! Use Strong, Visual Verbs to Write Concisely

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  • Опубліковано 17 січ 2025

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  • @reneenielson610
    @reneenielson610 11 місяців тому +4

    Erin lead a super informative training last night! Thank you Erin!😊😊

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  11 місяців тому

      Hi there Renee! Thanks so much for your comment. Great meeting you last night! What a fun session and group we had. :)

  • @katiawhitestar2857
    @katiawhitestar2857 5 місяців тому +4

    So there is hope for me! My convoluted communication has been a problem. This is so helpful.
    There is hope! My writing blocked my life. This is redeeming!

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  5 місяців тому +4

      Hi Katia! Thanks for your comment and for sharing your experience. 🤩 I've struggled to get concise too: there's just always so much to say! I hope you'll find these strategies help streamline the process.😄

  • @lazarusrize
    @lazarusrize Рік тому +5

    Great video, Erin. Thank you!

  • @amynorris8895
    @amynorris8895 Рік тому +5

    Couldn’t agree more!

  • @DenG611
    @DenG611 Рік тому +7

    I appreciate what ur doing Erin especially for aspiring writers like me. Keep it up!

    • @newishwavemusic
      @newishwavemusic Рік тому +2

      Thanks so much for your support; it means a lot!

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  Рік тому +3

      Thanks for being with us here at the HVW channel!

  • @nickvalcke
    @nickvalcke Рік тому +5

    This is incredibly helpful! Thank you for being thoughtful and thorough. Subscribed 🙌

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  Рік тому +2

      Welcome! So glad you're finding our content helpful, Nick! :)

  • @rodrigosouza8723
    @rodrigosouza8723 Рік тому +5

    Hey there, Erin! How's it going? Hope you're well and having a good week so far. I really loved the tip to use visual verbs instead of the good old 'to be' one. I always find value in your videos, and am so glad to watch them here on YT as they are posted. I hope you enjoy the rest of the day and have a fabulous rest of your week. Take care!

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  Рік тому +6

      Hola Rodrigo! Thanks for your kind comment and support! Yes, we can make huge changes with just our verbs. Have a great weekend!

    • @myracherchio
      @myracherchio Рік тому +4

      Erin, I love your videos! Thanks for sharing such valuable tips!

  • @2manyara
    @2manyara 6 місяців тому +4

    I agree

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  6 місяців тому +3

      Thank you, Bint. Using strong verbs really helps our sentences get clear and concise!

  • @franciscocamarena7572
    @franciscocamarena7572 7 місяців тому +4

    I found this vid off a sticker in Tahoe in front of a Save Mart on a electric car charger

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  7 місяців тому +5

      Hee hee, waiting for your car to charge can be a perfect time to pick up some tips and tricks! 😄
      Do you charge there often? It's the perfect spot for Tahoe-oriented road trips! We're down in Sacramento but were up in Truckee recently.
      Thanks for scanning the QR code, and for your comment, Francisco!

    • @Christopher_HVW
      @Christopher_HVW 7 місяців тому +3

      That's really cool, Francisco. We hope you enjoyed the tips in the video. Thank you for the comment!

  • @countvlad8845
    @countvlad8845 Рік тому +3

    What if you get paid by the number of words? Shouldn't you go for more to be verbs? Isn't that true, I mean to say, so to speak, where of I now speak? (Forgive my sense of humor)

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  Рік тому +3

      Using lots of "to be" verbs will definitely increase one's word count!

    • @DenG611
      @DenG611 Рік тому +2

      Will ur readers appreciate those extra words?