I actually love the storyline. Simple and abstract. An artist so pulled into her work that she found herself in a world she created. Good job with the lighting and rapid shots too. Thanks for creating this❤️🌹
I was wondering where this was going. I thought it was going to be the typical inspirational cliche and then that twist at the end. It gave me that spine tingling chills. Amazing job to both of you!
At the beginning is always hard. The best thing you did is that you took action and decided to do a short film. I believe the concept is amazing. Great actress good shots. Nothing in life is perfect there always room for improvement. What make a cinematographer is time, practice, dedication, and never give up! Great work Ermia Keep doing films like this and do not listen bad comments or negativity. As an artist you do work for yourself to express your inner out! Congratulations is very inspire and Congratulations to your gir that is in this with you! Many times we are alone in the process
thank you so much for watching, Marceloa. cant be more agree with all of that. and yes, without her this would never happened. and as you said, there's a lot of room for improvment, im trying my best to not give up and keep going and making vids to get better...
Great work brother! A breakdown of the different ISO settings and lenses used for the different scenes would be fantastic. I'm blown away that the A74 is this good in low light! You are incredibly talented. Here's me wishing that your work ends up in cinemas around the world.
If I'd be standing in front of you, I would give you my most sincere handshake I've given two anyone within the last decade. I am so blown away. all props to you and all the best in the world.
brooo. This is the greatest short film ever. I'm not even playing. The cinematographic link of the story to the shots are insane. I just kept pausing the video. I'm stunned. Wow
I am a director with a cinema degree and I was really impressed by both your music and angle choices and your daughter's performance. It was really successful. I'm very angry at myself for not doing something like this when I had a lot of free time in the winter with the Sony A74 and Gmaster lenses currently in my bag.
Wow, the color choices in this film really caught my eye! 🎨 The contrast between the carpet and the soft blanket, coupled with how she dressed and the colors of the paintings, gave the room such an artistic vibe. Being a newbie UA-camr myself, I truly appreciate this level of attention to detail. 🖌 I really like the main idea of the film, but these small details took it to another level for me. It's truly inspiring for creators like me. 👏 Kudos to the filmmaker for crafting such a visually appealing piece! 🎬
thanks a lot, man! i suggest you to do it 100%! it can be so hard but its not impossible at all! i think you can do it, i subscribed to you and looking forward to see it
wow wow wow ! This is truly splendid work! Creative, with an exquisite manipulation of indoor lighting, and a beautiful glow of daylight outdoors. Excellent job!
This is great work, really impressive storyline! Sound design could be improved in my humble opinion, some sounds are off and music doesn't always feel right.
Man that was amazing!! Loved the low light shots, great fast lenses and bokehs. Noticed the extra efforts taken to throw a roll of paper into focus. Above all, the abstract storyline and how you managed to bring that feel without a single word spoken. Nice work by the actor as well. Keep doing these, am definitely subscribing!
really incredible work. I haven't seen such a good short film in a long time. The film is the perfect length, remains captivating until the end, the perspectives and camera movements are incredibly accurate, as is the color grading. The sound has something special that fits this short film perfectly. really good job!
Great story telling and filming / editing and acting!! Love it, so well done! Very motivating. Congratulations Ermia, you did it!! Funny: I noticed right away, that the paper for painting was missing at 1:34...it doesn't matter at all (I guess not many have seen it?) and little mistakes are a part of learning :-)
thank you so much my friend.❤ and yes, youre right! :)) we messed up on that one. i learned so many things from this project and i will try my best to get better for the next ones.
Hey! Shots are A-MA-ZING, and grading too ! To be honest the only thing that got me a bit out is the sound design, maybe the quality of the sound effects and their integration. Exept that, it's amazing and perfect. keep going man
I loved the storytelling and the cinematography. It really pulls you into the story. However, the sound could be more polished. At times sound felt a little too distracting and artificial. At times there was no sound. I think this could be an outstanding piece if the sound gets some adjustments. Great work otherwise!
this is so sickk! its such a simple concept but the cinematography, lighting and overall aesthetic was done pretty well. I stumbled across this while trying to get inspiration for my own short film as I am a film student currently, good work :)
I don't even know if you are going to see this or not But I Wana say keep going ❤️ this is the first time I watch ur work and it's a masterpiece ✨⚡ I feel like I'm watching a part of a Hollywood films The camera man did a great job and also did the girl She is a talented actor ❤️
Just Amazing ... I Like the Color grading Most of this Shortfilm ... Its Composition and Color Choices are Mind Blowing.. It looks like shot on Cinema Camera... Well Done Bro Wants to See such Amazing Results more All the Best for upcoming Content
Dam this video show the imagination of an artist how they get deep drown within the world of imagination ✨🗒️an place it in a campas through painting or sketches
This was a very interesting shirt film, the plot twist at the end was unexpected but very good. Great shots and I like they way the drama and tension built up. Great job!
The cinematography, sound and lighting are top classic. Very unique idea, the style of the story is also amazing!!! Liked the idea. The edits and translation are dope ❤
La verdad un cortometraje de Excelencia. Una trama increible , que siempre te mantiene a la expectativa de lo que va pasando y contando. Una imagen increible, super limpia; un sonido espectacular. La verdad un Corto Muy bueno! El unico detalle, fue el error de continuidad que tuvieron con respecto a la carpeta que mientras ella esta yendo no esta, pero cuando llega aparece magicamente. En el Resto un Corto Increible! felicitaciones!
Maaannnn... Just Loved It.. Amazing piece Of Craft! I Guess You'd Have Given Some True Passion For The Pre-Production Ashwell. If Yes Then Would Love To See A Breakdown Video On Pre and Post Production Man..Beautiful Work by the Female Lead She Made me Feel I'm In Film.
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This is the best short film I have ever seen! Amazing
really glad you liked it 🙏
Thats gotta be cap
me too
u don't seen anything?
That’s a bit… of a stretch, don’t you think? I assume you haven’t seen enough short films in your life.
I actually love the storyline. Simple and abstract. An artist so pulled into her work that she found herself in a world she created. Good job with the lighting and rapid shots too. Thanks for creating this❤️🌹
im really glad that you liked the film, bud.
thanks for watching 🖤
I like your interpretation.
I was wondering where this was going. I thought it was going to be the typical inspirational cliche and then that twist at the end. It gave me that spine tingling chills. Amazing job to both of you!
very glad you liked the story, my friend 🙏
That’s right, master piece!
At the beginning is always hard. The best thing you did is that you took action and decided to do a short film. I believe the concept is amazing. Great actress good shots. Nothing in life is perfect there always room for improvement. What make a cinematographer is time, practice, dedication, and never give up! Great work Ermia Keep doing films like this and do not listen bad comments or negativity. As an artist you do work for yourself to express your inner out! Congratulations is very inspire and Congratulations to your gir that is in this with you! Many times we are alone in the process
thank you so much for watching, Marceloa. cant be more agree with all of that. and yes, without her this would never happened.
and as you said, there's a lot of room for improvment, im trying my best to not give up and keep going and making vids to get better...
Great work brother! A breakdown of the different ISO settings and lenses used for the different scenes would be fantastic.
I'm blown away that the A74 is this good in low light! You are incredibly talented. Here's me wishing that your work ends up in cinemas around the world.
As a filmmaker all i can just say is bravo!
Just brilliant🥳
thank you so much my friend
If I'd be standing in front of you, I would give you my most sincere handshake I've given two anyone within the last decade. I am so blown away. all props to you and all the best in the world.
great work but the sound design was a bit on the louder side which looked a little unrealistic
thank you, sound design was a little bit challenging for me on this one. i will definitely consider that point on the next projects
I think that the "loud sound effects" is the point actually. That's, to me, what makes it impacting.
Great advice but not everyone is gonna for realism
Lil bro said the sound looked unrealistic
@@jonahhhhhhhyea cuz the eyes and ears can contradict each other if they not in sync, so it did 'look' unrealistic
brooo. This is the greatest short film ever. I'm not even playing. The cinematographic link of the story to the shots are insane. I just kept pausing the video. I'm stunned. Wow
come on, man! i dont know what to say! realllyyy glad you liked it
This is so epic! Love the colours and the cinematography of this! Well done!
thanks a lot for watching, my friend.
I am a director with a cinema degree and I was really impressed by both your music and angle choices and your daughter's performance. It was really successful. I'm very angry at myself for not doing something like this when I had a lot of free time in the winter with the Sony A74 and Gmaster lenses currently in my bag.
I really don't understand. I am a normal audience.
Inspiration comes at a cost through adventure. I think that's the neaning
And a man of culture
don't need to understand, just feel it
- Christopher Nolan
I'm a writer. I understand!
me too
A pure artist doesn't need publishity ❤❤
You proved it
That's such crap, why bother making films if there's no audience?
This is dope, I appericate your skills and video editing & production time that was placed into this.
really glad you liked it, man! it was just the two of us doing everything on this project and im really happy it turned out good.
Holly shit! I have newfound appreciation for art now.
Wow, the color choices in this film really caught my eye! 🎨 The contrast between the carpet and the soft blanket, coupled with how she dressed and the colors of the paintings, gave the room such an artistic vibe. Being a newbie UA-camr myself, I truly appreciate this level of attention to detail. 🖌 I really like the main idea of the film, but these small details took it to another level for me. It's truly inspiring for creators like me. 👏 Kudos to the filmmaker for crafting such a visually appealing piece! 🎬
I really like the the personalities who are lost in their own perfection
I have no words to praise you for creeating this masterpiece
thank you so much, bud!
Well done! Great shots, simple story told nicely. Can’t wait to see more.
thanks a lot my friend, glad you liked it
Love the sounds of the objects, steps, etc
thanks for watching!
At first it looks good, then it looks normal, and then.. it becomes AMAZING!
One of the best short films I’ve seen 😍
A really great inspiration for my IB film student, who enjoyed watching it in class as much as I enjoyed sharing it. Thank you. Beautiful work.
Great work. I love the colors and lighting. The story was also very interesting. Keep it up 👍🏻
thanks a lot my friend! really glad you liked it
Very Clever and creative. The painting was a great added work of art. Im impressed Sweet Girl! :-)
Dude... so very impressive. That was incredible! Inspired me to want to make something like this now with no crew. Very well done to both of you!
thanks a lot, man! i suggest you to do it 100%! it can be so hard but its not impossible at all! i think you can do it, i subscribed to you and looking forward to see it
The Cinematics was top-notch. Keep up the good work.
Much love from Nigeria.
thank you, bro! mad respect to nigeria and nigerians
@@ermiaramez976 Just for this comment as a Nigerian amma subscribe.
@@jazzampa 🖤
The cinematography & the direction is simply commendable. Such a treat to watch it.
A well done film.
The final art reveal is inspiring. Great work.
thanks for watching!
this was insane. amazing storytelling and beautifully shot. much love and support from Pakistan.
mad respect to you Dawood and all my Pakistanian friends ❤
The WORLD Is Full Of Ideas
You Just Need An EYE TO OBSERVE IT !
I loved this! I've been watching UA-cam the last hour studying filmmaking and this was full of inspiration. Great work and then you!
very happy to hear that! thanks for watching
You and your girl is perfect combination, good job
tanks a lot bro
The art, the background music, the acting everything was amazing
wow wow wow ! This is truly splendid work! Creative, with an exquisite manipulation of indoor lighting, and a beautiful glow of daylight outdoors. Excellent job!
Yooooo! This short film is dope!!! The shots, the SFX, the coloration!! And all this with a 50$ budget?!? Dude, you nailed it!! 🔥
thanks a lot, bud! so nice to hear that
The composition, story and sound design! glorious!
This is great work, really impressive storyline! Sound design could be improved in my humble opinion, some sounds are off and music doesn't always feel right.
thanks for watching! im working on sound design a lot more recently to get better at it
This is brilliant and inspiring. I am yet to take the first step of creating something myself as a solo aspiring filmmaker.
Man that was amazing!! Loved the low light shots, great fast lenses and bokehs. Noticed the extra efforts taken to throw a roll of paper into focus. Above all, the abstract storyline and how you managed to bring that feel without a single word spoken. Nice work by the actor as well. Keep doing these, am definitely subscribing!
thank you so much for all your kind words, my friend. very glad you liked it 🖤
really incredible work. I haven't seen such a good short film in a long time. The film is the perfect length, remains captivating until the end, the perspectives and camera movements are incredibly accurate, as is the color grading. The sound has something special that fits this short film perfectly. really good job!
Check out the most Replayed Part! I knew it!
❤
mind-blowing amazing
I really appreciate your approach to story telling. The talent you selected, she’s amazing. Such a great team you make. I’m subbing!!
I loved it. I will use it for analysis in my film school. Congratulations
Great story telling and filming / editing and acting!! Love it, so well done! Very motivating. Congratulations Ermia, you did it!! Funny: I noticed right away, that the paper for painting was missing at 1:34...it doesn't matter at all (I guess not many have seen it?) and little mistakes are a part of learning :-)
thank you so much my friend.❤
and yes, youre right! :)) we messed up on that one.
i learned so many things from this project and i will try my best to get better for the next ones.
Sooo amazing. Soooo proud of you. It's just the begining 👌💪💓
❤❤thank you T
Hey! Shots are A-MA-ZING, and grading too ! To be honest the only thing that got me a bit out is the sound design, maybe the quality of the sound effects and their integration. Exept that, it's amazing and perfect. keep going man
thank you so much, my friend. very glad you liked it.
im working on sound design and i'll try my best to make it better on next projects
Wow extraordinary guys
thanks alot! glad you liked it
Smooth work. ♥️
I loved the storytelling and the cinematography. It really pulls you into the story. However, the sound could be more polished.
At times sound felt a little too distracting and artificial. At times there was no sound. I think this could be an outstanding piece if the sound gets some adjustments. Great work otherwise!
youre 100% right. i tried a lot to get better at sound design in the upcomiong projects
Simply amazing! Congrats Ermia you did great!
thanks a lot, bro. glad you liked it
this is so sickk! its such a simple concept but the cinematography, lighting and overall aesthetic was done pretty well. I stumbled across this while trying to get inspiration for my own short film as I am a film student currently, good work :)
Very good lighting !! good job
thanks a lot my friend. lighting in small places is very challenging sometimes
I don't even know if you are going to see this or not
But I Wana say keep going ❤️ this is the first time I watch ur work and it's a masterpiece ✨⚡
I feel like I'm watching a part of a Hollywood films
The camera man did a great job and also did the girl
She is a talented actor ❤️
thanks for watching my friend, your kind words means a lot ❤️
and yeah, she's great
Dude you're starting from here? This is really solid. it's great... Love it.
thanks for the kind words, bro!
Just Amazing ... I Like the Color grading Most of this Shortfilm ... Its Composition and Color Choices are Mind Blowing.. It looks like shot on Cinema Camera...
Well Done Bro
Wants to See such Amazing Results more
All the Best for upcoming Content
thanks a lot, man. really glad you liked it!
i recently upload a color grading tutorial, maybe it would be helpful
🙏
Dam this video show the imagination of an artist how they get deep drown within the world of imagination ✨🗒️an place it in a campas through painting or sketches
Damn, that was good - did not go where I expected. Great acting from the main, she felt quite natural. Switching between scenes/shots was slick.
thanks, man! really glad to hear that
Wow amazings
thanks a lot
This was a very interesting shirt film, the plot twist at the end was unexpected but very good. Great shots and I like they way the drama and tension built up. Great job!
that was my main goal, to do not get the audience bored! very glad you liked it, my friend
Fire!!!!!
thank you so much
The cinematography, sound and lighting are top classic. Very unique idea, the style of the story is also amazing!!! Liked the idea. The edits and translation are dope ❤
thanks a lot, buddy!! 🖤
@@ermiaramez976 My pleasure buddy 👍There is nothing to be thankful for, this is your hard work, so it is important to appreciate me. ❤️
@@ermiaramez976yeah it's outstanding and wonderful work ❤
@@ermiaramez976👏👏 where your production bro ?
@@baadshahsahab3410 Im in Istanbul right now
La verdad un cortometraje de Excelencia. Una trama increible , que siempre te mantiene a la expectativa de lo que va pasando y contando. Una imagen increible, super limpia; un sonido espectacular. La verdad un Corto Muy bueno! El unico detalle, fue el error de continuidad que tuvieron con respecto a la carpeta que mientras ella esta yendo no esta, pero cuando llega aparece magicamente. En el Resto un Corto Increible! felicitaciones!
tienes razón en ese problema. gracias por ver
Mind blowing dude.. the angles, cinematography, grading, acting, sound track everything is just amzing.. you did a great job.. very impressive.. ❤
very flattred my friend, thanks for watching
@@ermiaramez976 it's my pleasure.. waiting for your next project..
@@iamamzo 🖤
@@iamamzo its coming, bro
This is good! Love the story and the visuals, the sound design could do with a little work though! Well done!
I sure Beginning was hard but end give me goosebumps
wow, thanks for watching, man
📈 RESPECT FROM EGYPT 🇪🇬
mad love to Egypt my friend
Dammmmm ! You nailed it man !!! ❤️❤️❤️
really glad you liked it, bud
wow this is amazing
thanks a lot, mate
Brilliant Work ❤
Love the cinematography!
🖤thank you
I really like this, well done, you're doing big things here
thanks for watching, bud
Crazy!! Looking for more.
its coming, my friend
The best short film
super happy to hear that! 🖤
Wowwwwwwwwwww🔥🔥🔥🔥
thanks, pal!
wooow! congrats! that looks crazy
really glad to hear that 🖤
Wow ❤
Something impressive 🎉
conclusion : An artist so pulled into her work that she found herself in a world she created.
bro the story are awesome! Also the shot are really cool! Nice short film, the best one I see 👍 - Masterpiece!
thanks for watching, bud. very glad you liked it
This amazing
thank you so much!
This was freaking amazing, great work. The way you told the story was unexpected, I was hooked the whole time.
really glad to hear that, bud. thanks for watching
you did great!
thanks, bro
This is ridiculuosly awesome. Great work
thanks a lot, mate
That was unreal!
🖤
A great short film!
really glad to hear that!
wow, what a beauty great work that twist in the end was so unexpected great to watch, keep creating
thanks a lot, bud! glad you liked it
Great stuff.
thank you, bud
COLOUR GRADING IS AMAZING BRO 😍 CAN YOU TELL ME AT WHAT TIME YOU HAD BEEN SHOOTING? LIKE MORNING OR EVENING TIME?
a color grading tutorial is coming in a couple of days, my friend. be around
Amazing
🖤
Mind-blowing
thanks, man
So nice color & beautiful portrait video!🔥✨
thank you so much my friend
Captivating!!
thanks for watching, buddy
THIS IS INSANELY AMAZINGGG!!😭🔥🔥🔥🤩🏆
thanks a lot, mate
yoooo this is really, REALLY Amazing! I completely love everything about this !
im very glad to hear that, my friend 🖤
amazing work, good transation
thanks, bro
This feels more like an ad for something rather than a short film
like for what? 😂
This is amazing work🔥
thanks for watching
More than wonderful work that deserves support 😍👍 I have a question what is the size of the video . ???
thanks, man!
its 4096 x 1716
Maaannnn... Just Loved It.. Amazing piece Of Craft! I Guess You'd Have Given Some True Passion For The Pre-Production Ashwell. If Yes Then Would Love To See A Breakdown Video On Pre and Post Production Man..Beautiful Work by the Female Lead She Made me Feel I'm In Film.
wow, very glad to hear that my friend! thank you so much
Wooooow , the most creative and beautiful short i ever seen 😍😭👏👏👏❤️❤️
mad love