I was wondering where this was going. I thought it was going to be the typical inspirational cliche and then that twist at the end. It gave me that spine tingling chills. Amazing job to both of you!
I actually love the storyline. Simple and abstract. An artist so pulled into her work that she found herself in a world she created. Good job with the lighting and rapid shots too. Thanks for creating this❤️🌹
At the beginning is always hard. The best thing you did is that you took action and decided to do a short film. I believe the concept is amazing. Great actress good shots. Nothing in life is perfect there always room for improvement. What make a cinematographer is time, practice, dedication, and never give up! Great work Ermia Keep doing films like this and do not listen bad comments or negativity. As an artist you do work for yourself to express your inner out! Congratulations is very inspire and Congratulations to your gir that is in this with you! Many times we are alone in the process
thank you so much for watching, Marceloa. cant be more agree with all of that. and yes, without her this would never happened. and as you said, there's a lot of room for improvment, im trying my best to not give up and keep going and making vids to get better...
Wow, the color choices in this film really caught my eye! 🎨 The contrast between the carpet and the soft blanket, coupled with how she dressed and the colors of the paintings, gave the room such an artistic vibe. Being a newbie UA-camr myself, I truly appreciate this level of attention to detail. 🖌 I really like the main idea of the film, but these small details took it to another level for me. It's truly inspiring for creators like me. 👏 Kudos to the filmmaker for crafting such a visually appealing piece! 🎬
thanks a lot, man! i suggest you to do it 100%! it can be so hard but its not impossible at all! i think you can do it, i subscribed to you and looking forward to see it
The cinematography, sound and lighting are top classic. Very unique idea, the style of the story is also amazing!!! Liked the idea. The edits and translation are dope ❤
Man that was amazing!! Loved the low light shots, great fast lenses and bokehs. Noticed the extra efforts taken to throw a roll of paper into focus. Above all, the abstract storyline and how you managed to bring that feel without a single word spoken. Nice work by the actor as well. Keep doing these, am definitely subscribing!
this is so sickk! its such a simple concept but the cinematography, lighting and overall aesthetic was done pretty well. I stumbled across this while trying to get inspiration for my own short film as I am a film student currently, good work :)
Beautiful work Ermia . So many great things to mention but I must mention a few. Beautiful cinematography. The acting was awesome. The editing told a beautiful story. Loved the locations. The music was a perfect choice. Bravo Bravo Bravo. This is from a 77 year old photographer musician actor creator. I speak with my heart. I look for more. 🌈❤️fl
Hey! Shots are A-MA-ZING, and grading too ! To be honest the only thing that got me a bit out is the sound design, maybe the quality of the sound effects and their integration. Exept that, it's amazing and perfect. keep going man
I don't even know if you are going to see this or not But I Wana say keep going ❤️ this is the first time I watch ur work and it's a masterpiece ✨⚡ I feel like I'm watching a part of a Hollywood films The camera man did a great job and also did the girl She is a talented actor ❤️
Just Amazing ... I Like the Color grading Most of this Shortfilm ... Its Composition and Color Choices are Mind Blowing.. It looks like shot on Cinema Camera... Well Done Bro Wants to See such Amazing Results more All the Best for upcoming Content
This was a very interesting shirt film, the plot twist at the end was unexpected but very good. Great shots and I like they way the drama and tension built up. Great job!
Great story telling and filming / editing and acting!! Love it, so well done! Very motivating. Congratulations Ermia, you did it!! Funny: I noticed right away, that the paper for painting was missing at 1:34...it doesn't matter at all (I guess not many have seen it?) and little mistakes are a part of learning :-)
thank you so much my friend.❤ and yes, youre right! :)) we messed up on that one. i learned so many things from this project and i will try my best to get better for the next ones.
This is great work, really impressive storyline! Sound design could be improved in my humble opinion, some sounds are off and music doesn't always feel right.
I loved the storytelling and the cinematography. It really pulls you into the story. However, the sound could be more polished. At times sound felt a little too distracting and artificial. At times there was no sound. I think this could be an outstanding piece if the sound gets some adjustments. Great work otherwise!
Great work brother! A breakdown of the different ISO settings and lenses used for the different scenes would be fantastic. I'm blown away that the A74 is this good in low light! You are incredibly talented. Here's me wishing that your work ends up in cinemas around the world.
I am a director with a cinema degree and I was really impressed by both your music and angle choices and your daughter's performance. It was really successful. I'm very angry at myself for not doing something like this when I had a lot of free time in the winter with the Sony A74 and Gmaster lenses currently in my bag.
This is the best short film I have ever seen! Amazing
really glad you liked it 🙏
Thats gotta be cap
me too
u don't seen anything?
That’s a bit… of a stretch, don’t you think? I assume you haven’t seen enough short films in your life.
I was wondering where this was going. I thought it was going to be the typical inspirational cliche and then that twist at the end. It gave me that spine tingling chills. Amazing job to both of you!
very glad you liked the story, my friend 🙏
That’s right, master piece!
great work but the sound design was a bit on the louder side which looked a little unrealistic
thank you, sound design was a little bit challenging for me on this one. i will definitely consider that point on the next projects
I think that the "loud sound effects" is the point actually. That's, to me, what makes it impacting.
Great advice but not everyone is gonna for realism
Lil bro said the sound looked unrealistic
@@jonahhhhhhhyea cuz the eyes and ears can contradict each other if they not in sync, so it did 'look' unrealistic
I actually love the storyline. Simple and abstract. An artist so pulled into her work that she found herself in a world she created. Good job with the lighting and rapid shots too. Thanks for creating this❤️🌹
im really glad that you liked the film, bud.
thanks for watching 🖤
I like your interpretation.
At the beginning is always hard. The best thing you did is that you took action and decided to do a short film. I believe the concept is amazing. Great actress good shots. Nothing in life is perfect there always room for improvement. What make a cinematographer is time, practice, dedication, and never give up! Great work Ermia Keep doing films like this and do not listen bad comments or negativity. As an artist you do work for yourself to express your inner out! Congratulations is very inspire and Congratulations to your gir that is in this with you! Many times we are alone in the process
thank you so much for watching, Marceloa. cant be more agree with all of that. and yes, without her this would never happened.
and as you said, there's a lot of room for improvment, im trying my best to not give up and keep going and making vids to get better...
Wow, the color choices in this film really caught my eye! 🎨 The contrast between the carpet and the soft blanket, coupled with how she dressed and the colors of the paintings, gave the room such an artistic vibe. Being a newbie UA-camr myself, I truly appreciate this level of attention to detail. 🖌 I really like the main idea of the film, but these small details took it to another level for me. It's truly inspiring for creators like me. 👏 Kudos to the filmmaker for crafting such a visually appealing piece! 🎬
The art, the background music, the acting everything was amazing
At first it looks good, then it looks normal, and then.. it becomes AMAZING!
One of the best short films I’ve seen 😍
First time a girl made this types of ultimate content heads off for you. From now i am your _permanent_ fan. *Love* from Bihar,INDIA.
mad respect to india and indians, bud
@@ermiaramez976 most welcome buddy.
@@abhijeet2405 🙏
The cinematography & the direction is simply commendable. Such a treat to watch it.
A well done film.
I think this whole short film was amazing and the ending when she took her face out the book to then it being a painting of her that’s really creative
Sometimes it's like this: a 3-minute short film is much more interesting than a 1.5-hour Hollywood movie :)
One thing that threw me off was the fast scratching sound at 0:30 while the arm is moving much slower, all in all excellent visuals and production.
As a filmmaker all i can just say is bravo!
Just brilliant🥳
thank you so much my friend
What the hell !!!, Am I just watching UA-cam video ?
Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️
glad you liked it, man!
Check out the most Replayed Part! I knew it!
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better than many hollywood movies the quality, vibe everything is top level
so happy to hear that, thanks bud
I really don't understand. I am a normal audience.
Inspiration comes at a cost through adventure. I think that's the neaning
And a man of culture
don't need to understand, just feel it
- Christopher Nolan
I'm a writer. I understand!
me too
Just popped up on my feed and best thing I watched before doing anything else
glad you liked it, bud! thank you so much
This is so epic! Love the colours and the cinematography of this! Well done!
thanks a lot for watching, my friend.
The Idea is my favourite cinematic short film.....I love this short film.This is insane.
thanks a lot, bud! so happy to hear that!
i just dropped a my new short on the channel too
I really appreciate your approach to story telling. The talent you selected, she’s amazing. Such a great team you make. I’m subbing!!
What a image quality!!!
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Damn, that was good - did not go where I expected. Great acting from the main, she felt quite natural. Switching between scenes/shots was slick.
thanks, man! really glad to hear that
Finally work that shows the A7 IV's true capabilities!
thanks, man
I loved this! I've been watching UA-cam the last hour studying filmmaking and this was full of inspiration. Great work and then you!
very happy to hear that! thanks for watching
almost like a creativity superpower
im very flattered, bud
Dude... so very impressive. That was incredible! Inspired me to want to make something like this now with no crew. Very well done to both of you!
thanks a lot, man! i suggest you to do it 100%! it can be so hard but its not impossible at all! i think you can do it, i subscribed to you and looking forward to see it
You and your girl is perfect combination, good job
tanks a lot bro
This is dope, I appericate your skills and video editing & production time that was placed into this.
really glad you liked it, man! it was just the two of us doing everything on this project and im really happy it turned out good.
Shows what a competent DP that has mastered painting with light can do with an affordable camera
thanks bud, that means a lot!
and yes, some of affordable mirrorless cameras these days are insanely good.
The cinematography, sound and lighting are top classic. Very unique idea, the style of the story is also amazing!!! Liked the idea. The edits and translation are dope ❤
thanks a lot, buddy!! 🖤
@@ermiaramez976 My pleasure buddy 👍There is nothing to be thankful for, this is your hard work, so it is important to appreciate me. ❤️
@@ermiaramez976yeah it's outstanding and wonderful work ❤
@@ermiaramez976👏👏 where your production bro ?
@@baadshahsahab3410 Im in Istanbul right now
wordless.
glad you liked it, man
Woow.. Amazing
thanks for watching, bud
Man that was amazing!! Loved the low light shots, great fast lenses and bokehs. Noticed the extra efforts taken to throw a roll of paper into focus. Above all, the abstract storyline and how you managed to bring that feel without a single word spoken. Nice work by the actor as well. Keep doing these, am definitely subscribing!
thank you so much for all your kind words, my friend. very glad you liked it 🖤
no no no way!!! this was amazing!
thanks, bro
this is so sickk! its such a simple concept but the cinematography, lighting and overall aesthetic was done pretty well. I stumbled across this while trying to get inspiration for my own short film as I am a film student currently, good work :)
Most Amazing work I've ever seen !!!!
bro, thanks for the kind words! glad you liked it!
Great work. I love the colors and lighting. The story was also very interesting. Keep it up 👍🏻
thanks a lot my friend! really glad you liked it
Beautiful work Ermia . So many great things to mention but I must mention a few. Beautiful cinematography. The acting was awesome. The editing told a beautiful story. Loved the locations. The music was a perfect choice. Bravo Bravo Bravo.
This is from a 77 year old photographer musician actor creator. I speak with my heart. I look for more. 🌈❤️fl
So happy to hear that, man. Appreciate it ❤️
Hey! Shots are A-MA-ZING, and grading too ! To be honest the only thing that got me a bit out is the sound design, maybe the quality of the sound effects and their integration. Exept that, it's amazing and perfect. keep going man
thank you so much, my friend. very glad you liked it.
im working on sound design and i'll try my best to make it better on next projects
The best short film
super happy to hear that! 🖤
Well done! Great shots, simple story told nicely. Can’t wait to see more.
thanks a lot my friend, glad you liked it
Love the sounds of the objects, steps, etc
thanks for watching!
I don't even know if you are going to see this or not
But I Wana say keep going ❤️ this is the first time I watch ur work and it's a masterpiece ✨⚡
I feel like I'm watching a part of a Hollywood films
The camera man did a great job and also did the girl
She is a talented actor ❤️
thanks for watching my friend, your kind words means a lot ❤️
and yeah, she's great
This feels more like an ad for something rather than a short film
like for what? 😂
Just Amazing ... I Like the Color grading Most of this Shortfilm ... Its Composition and Color Choices are Mind Blowing.. It looks like shot on Cinema Camera...
Well Done Bro
Wants to See such Amazing Results more
All the Best for upcoming Content
thanks a lot, man. really glad you liked it!
i recently upload a color grading tutorial, maybe it would be helpful
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Oh yeah, thats incredible
thanks a lot. my friend 🖤
This was a very interesting shirt film, the plot twist at the end was unexpected but very good. Great shots and I like they way the drama and tension built up. Great job!
that was my main goal, to do not get the audience bored! very glad you liked it, my friend
Crazy!! Looking for more.
its coming, my friend
Great story telling and filming / editing and acting!! Love it, so well done! Very motivating. Congratulations Ermia, you did it!! Funny: I noticed right away, that the paper for painting was missing at 1:34...it doesn't matter at all (I guess not many have seen it?) and little mistakes are a part of learning :-)
thank you so much my friend.❤
and yes, youre right! :)) we messed up on that one.
i learned so many things from this project and i will try my best to get better for the next ones.
A pure artist doesn't need publishity ❤❤
You proved it
That's such crap, why bother making films if there's no audience?
This is great work, really impressive storyline! Sound design could be improved in my humble opinion, some sounds are off and music doesn't always feel right.
thanks for watching! im working on sound design a lot more recently to get better at it
A good movie doesn't need any words. Great job!
glad you liked it, man. thanks for watching
this was insane. amazing storytelling and beautifully shot. much love and support from Pakistan.
mad respect to you Dawood and all my Pakistanian friends ❤
woooow
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I loved the storytelling and the cinematography. It really pulls you into the story. However, the sound could be more polished.
At times sound felt a little too distracting and artificial. At times there was no sound. I think this could be an outstanding piece if the sound gets some adjustments. Great work otherwise!
youre 100% right. i tried a lot to get better at sound design in the upcomiong projects
Color grading, top
Concept, top
Cinematics, top👌🏻
Yooooo! This short film is dope!!! The shots, the SFX, the coloration!! And all this with a 50$ budget?!? Dude, you nailed it!! 🔥
thanks a lot, bud! so nice to hear that
The WORLD Is Full Of Ideas
You Just Need An EYE TO OBSERVE IT !
Mind blowing dude.. the angles, cinematography, grading, acting, sound track everything is just amzing.. you did a great job.. very impressive.. ❤
very flattred my friend, thanks for watching
@@ermiaramez976 it's my pleasure.. waiting for your next project..
@@iamamzo 🖤
@@iamamzo its coming, bro
Wow
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conclusion : An artist so pulled into her work that she found herself in a world she created.
really good my friend !
Thanks Bro!
WOW just WOW! The idea, the execution... AMAZING
thanks for your kind words, bud. glad you liked it
@@ermiaramez976 Can't stop watching it, really big thumbs up!
This is maaaaaddddddd!!!!! Best short film ever!!!!!🎉
An extremely beautiful film!
thank you so much for watching
Best cinematic ever seen ❤️
im very flattred, thanks
magic of sound ❤
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I really like the the personalities who are lost in their own perfection
I have no words to praise you for creeating this masterpiece
thank you so much, bud!
wow this is amazing
thanks a lot, mate
great work bro
thanks for watching, mate
Great work brother! A breakdown of the different ISO settings and lenses used for the different scenes would be fantastic.
I'm blown away that the A74 is this good in low light! You are incredibly talented. Here's me wishing that your work ends up in cinemas around the world.
This is called *QUALITY CONTENT.*
Thanks for watching man
This channel is my current favorite rn.
so happy to hear that, man
absolutely amazing work!
thanks, bud!
This is the best short film I have ever seen! Amazing
From Bangladesh
thank you so much for watching, bud.
mad respect to Bangladesh and all the Bangladeshis people
I am a director with a cinema degree and I was really impressed by both your music and angle choices and your daughter's performance. It was really successful. I'm very angry at myself for not doing something like this when I had a lot of free time in the winter with the Sony A74 and Gmaster lenses currently in my bag.
Lots of talent
very kind of you, my friend
The creativity is peak fr... icl every scene had depth and tbh the sound design is epic
Outstanding BRETH taking the girl amazing and the filmmaker also the short story to the point well done to all great job !!!!!!
thanks a lot my friend! that means a lot
Wow, a silent movie.
The story is touching
thanks for watching, bud
my inspiration. great job
thank youuu!
inspiring as a film maker
its always so nice to hear that!
Круто! Весьма художественно.
thanks a lot for watching!
great sound, colouring, goodvibes bro!
thank you so much, bro
amazing work, good transation
thanks, bro
The Cinematics was top-notch. Keep up the good work.
Much love from Nigeria.
thank you, bro! mad respect to nigeria and nigerians
@@ermiaramez976 Just for this comment as a Nigerian amma subscribe.
@@jazzampa 🖤
Your girl is a paid actor✊🏼
she's the real talent behind this
I love that the aspect ratio is extra wide. Fits my ultra-wide monitor.
thats brilliant!!!
thanks, bro!
A wonderfull shortfilm!
thank you so much!
That was unreal!
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Masterpeace
I LOVED IT!!!!
thanks, bro!
Wow extraordinary guys
thanks alot! glad you liked it
Its like a nike ad but for artists !
😂im dead
amazing!!
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This - was - amazing- !!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😮
thanks, bro!
Big cinema!
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