She looks great but she's not a good hunter or archer don't think that's how you do it please Quick breakdown Walking through the woods, take long slow strides and go from cover to cover, make no sharp movements When you've got a shot on your target we call it the prime shot it's when they're almost straight onto you, don't take a shot side on if you can help it And when you draw the bow you need to keep your bow hand steady and release the arrow in one fluid movement otherwise your body'll rock and you'll ruin your aim
Not that you'll probably see my thoughts as so much time has passed, but here they are anyway. An elf wouldn't leave a creature to suffer before it died. Actress was quite elven looking naturally so she did her job well. Cinematography has some real promise and that person could go somewhere in future. The practical effects and costumes were amazing on what little budget I imagine you had. Editing could use a little work, but everyone needs to learn somewhere. The sound production was awesome! Anyway, what would I know, just my opinion. Awesome project guys! Do a feature film or a half hour thing about Mira and how she overcomes some obstacle after it seems all hope is lost. And at the end, she is better because of it. Yeah, but people will watch it! Let me know what you think
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Orge: Oh, what a wonderful day. I think I'll go for a walk. Sexy Elf: Take that, you evil creature. Orge: Ouch! What the fuc... wa... th... Sexy Elf: Mission accomplished. Girl power!
I'm so thankful that I picked up a recurve bow and not a compound. The traditional and recurve really well honestly all styles have a very attracting lure to them.. even before I started shooting it seemed like archers were in the League of their own I'm 45 now and I've been wanting to do it all my life and I just now got a chance to do it last year this is the actual first movie short fantasy short / sci-fi movie and it's freaking awesome the actress is beautiful and of course she's smart and she's got a personality cuz she's an Archer LOL
Pretty good short film, love the scenery in the beginning. Action starts 2:48. Got lost with the shooting of the creature, but I like the fact that she held and shot the bow well :) Ears could use a bit more bend and match with some oil based stage make-up maybe? All in all I enjoyed, Thank you1
This was very well shot. Extra bonus to the costume designer who did not use "Female Fantasy Armour" biker leathers and most importantly did not put heels on her boots- well done. Now for the criticisms- and they are minor. There is a continuity error where the elf reaches the trail with an arrow nocked and then in the following second she reaches for an arrow. The arrow tip is not a good type for penetrating a creature. Animals ( and humans) who get shot with an arrow unless it is though the heart tend to run or thrash around a lot before bleeding to death. Even if you hit a lung it takes a while. Maybe your type of troll has a special weak spot on it's back? Even if an elf is much stronger than a human, pulling out an arrow that has gone deeply enough into something to kill it is hard- and by grabbing it where she did she risks breaking the arrow. I make these comments because I did enjoy your film and hope that as I watch more recent ones I will see you getting better and better. Wulf of Armoury-Terrain Brisbane Australia.
That troll was just out for a swim and a walk, minding its business. Maybe on it's way to get some muffins for grandma troll. But then along came a wolf, with big rubber ears, and pointy arrows...
Dude I think its a great short picture. No budget no nothing. Quite a try. i really like this refreshing thing. In the further projects I prefer some extended plot, maybe with the vikings which you've got there. Nice thing ! Im looking forward to your next much more complicated project if there is any!
Great cinematic shots :) We're working on a similar project now - for our portfolio. Kind of amazing how the Tolkien's world makes us long for the world of black&white characters... Amazing job. In a month or two we'll be finished with our short probably.
Thanks guys :) For me it was a training and a great project. It was first non profit film for me since 10 years. 10 years of dull commercial process of Hotels, Events and very narrow narration. When im watching this particular film Im feeling refreshing relief :) Im looking forward for your project!
It is good to refresh one's mind, go out and create :) We had this need this winter, and we've done some non-profit short, kind of a patriotic. You can see on our profile. There is a nice short called RANGER inspired by Tolkien's Sillmarillion. Similar to your work. Good to know that there are sensitive, good-hearted people in the business.
You got that poor bastard! In love with all the nature in this video simply beautiful. Yea yea i am a nerd myself lol love the fantasy stuff. Also shoot a traditional recurve. Noticed a lot of polish last names at the end... Mowimy po polsku? Gdzie to bylo zrobione bo takich lasow z polski niepamietam 😊❤
keeping the troll out of focus made him look more realistic than later on!,also she pulled the arrow out with to much ease in other words great short!. keep keeping it up!.
Several hundreds of years ago, Roman Centurion Timotheus was creating a design for an aqueduct toward Londonium. He was browsing the British forest in order to find find a waterway. He noticed a female Elven Archer. She noticed Timotheus too. An arrow was launched immediately. Tim kneeled and wielded his shield. The elven arrow hit the shield. He exclaimed, - Pax Romana! - No peace, Centurion! - By Jupiter! Do not hurt me, please! I am just trying to design a water infrastructure here. Heaven's sake! The Elven female warrior approached Centurion Timotheus. She said, - Fine, Centurion. I am not sure if I like you to be here either. - We will leave in a couple of years. But until then, please do not hurt me. I only have a short-range sword 🙂 - Right, Tim. By the way, is it necessary for you to leave, Tim? - As long as you keep on firing at me, it is absolutely necessary for me to leave 🙂 - Sorry Tim. I did not know you are a constructor. - Phew, well good thing we got that settled. Are you hungry, darling? I have some very old dried meat and freshly baked bread to share, with Italian wine. - Sounds awesome, Tim! Thank you. I love you already. - You look awesome too 🙂
Thanks Kert ! This vid was a test to remind me how short film works in production and a test before making other videos like these in the very near future.
Yeah, an arrow with a target point at that placement wouldn't disable the troll, let alone kill it... Especially given the reference of what it took to take down the cave troll in moria. Other than that this was a neat idea and pretty well done, too. Out of curiosity: is the protagonist an actual archer?
ssu1991 Im completely agree. The only thing which holds me to actually did this (making few more arrows) is that we had no time. We had 2 hours to make this short and only one good shot of "targeting". All vid was shot on RAW format In Cannon 5d mark II, which means that 64 GB of data is just only few minutes of time for recording. So that only budget and logistic ruins everything. But we had no purpose to make it much more convincing, it was just test film. Yes the protagonist is actual archer with some good results :)
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Does anyone know the name of that one movie? It had an archer elf named Leda and it's an animated film...I know that's not very discriptive...if so than ignore this comment. I ask because this reminds me of that movie.
Nice try, I have to admit. It was a "Elf" using a asiatic composit bow (i could not tell if mongol or turkish) with mediterranea draw?! Yes. She killed the monster with whatlookslike a field point?! Yes! That makes sense?! No. But it was a nice try.
Es un concepto interesante pero hay muchos planos de sobra que no aportan nada a la historia, e incluso rompen el ritmo de la narrativa, y las tomas de punto de vista no concuerdan con las acciones ni ubicación del personaje, supongo que desenfocaste la toma para no mostrar al troll, pero Mira no tiene justificación para estar fuera de foco. También el personaje cambia de locación y posición entre los cortes(ejemplos: en el minuto 3:00 cuando esta escondida detrás de un árbol y el troll camina en el fondo,el corte que sigue es Mira volteando hacia su izquierda, pero cambio de locación repentinamente, y ya no esta el árbol detrás de ella. También en el minuto 3:25 ella coloca la flecha en el arco lista para dispararla, en el siguiente corte la vemos caminando con el arco apuntando hacia el suelo, y seguido de eso, nos muestra un corte en donde el arco ya esta cargado y apuntando hacia arriba ) rompiendo la lógica narrativa.Espero tomes en cuenta mi opinión bro, casi todo se puede arreglar en la edición :)
Eli Thanks for your opinion. As I said eariler in the comments. There should be no bother to go to much deep. This film was made in early of YT stage. Ive got only 16GB ram card to make RAW footage so there is no way to make dubles. It was some kind of test RAW footage and we ve got no money to make it more convienient. I can only said that Im producing now two films like this one, with multiple actors in it and there will be a very good way for further enhancements with the narration. Anyway thank you for your comment!
The amount of shaking when she shot the arrow ,i doubt she would of hit a tree let alone a specific target,no more hero women because they are just not up to it
so you go around the woods wearing rubber ears dressed funny spouting poetry shooting ancient emaginary monsters with a modern bow and arrow ....some people call that crazy and used to keep that stuff to them selfs.good job on video I like the woods.
Rubber ears, check. Dressed in a very odd fashion, check. Spouting poetry, check. Shooting ancient "emaginary [SIC] , monsters, check. " ... with a modern bow ..." , Major Fail. That is a simply recurved bow .... been around since pre-history. Modern bows, for the most part, are compound bows ... y'know those bows with pulleys ...That was NOT a modern bow. The arrows with the target heads .. that's another story.
Nope. An elf knows better than to hunt with target arrows and does not leave wounded creatures to suffer. This is a waste of time and an insult to Elven Kind.
wow!!! Genius..I wish I knew more people who practice medieval traditional archery.That is my passion.
She looks great but she's not a good hunter or archer don't think that's how you do it please
Quick breakdown
Walking through the woods, take long slow strides and go from cover to cover, make no sharp movements
When you've got a shot on your target we call it the prime shot it's when they're almost straight onto you, don't take a shot side on if you can help it
And when you draw the bow you need to keep your bow hand steady and release the arrow in one fluid movement otherwise your body'll rock and you'll ruin your aim
@@valandil7454 true, I love archery soooo
Not that you'll probably see my thoughts as so much time has passed, but here they are anyway. An elf wouldn't leave a creature to suffer before it died. Actress was quite elven looking naturally so she did her job well. Cinematography has some real promise and that person could go somewhere in future. The practical effects and costumes were amazing on what little budget I imagine you had. Editing could use a little work, but everyone needs to learn somewhere. The sound production was awesome! Anyway, what would I know, just my opinion. Awesome project guys! Do a feature film or a half hour thing about Mira and how she overcomes some obstacle after it seems all hope is lost. And at the end, she is better because of it. Yeah, but people will watch it! Let me know what you think
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No le sabes al señor de los anillos
That dude was just walking around in the woods minding his own business.
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yeah right ?!? 😀 I was thinking exactly the same 😂
Orge: Oh, what a wonderful day. I think I'll go for a walk.
Sexy Elf: Take that, you evil creature.
Orge: Ouch! What the fuc... wa... th...
Sexy Elf: Mission accomplished. Girl power!
👍 😂
I'm so thankful that I picked up a recurve bow and not a compound. The traditional and recurve really well honestly all styles have a very attracting lure to them.. even before I started shooting it seemed like archers were in the League of their own I'm 45 now and I've been wanting to do it all my life and I just now got a chance to do it last year this is the actual first movie short fantasy short / sci-fi movie and it's freaking awesome the actress is beautiful and of course she's smart and she's got a personality cuz she's an Archer LOL
Lol
I find the Mongolian grip or pinch draw easier, especially because it allows for quicker consecutive drawing even when your stance is not upright.
Trolls turn to stone in daylight.
Pretty darn cool
I love it. Also, the text on the beginning is great, I just live this piece from Stoker (:
Such a beautiful woman who all the world should proud of god bless you girl
She took out that monster with a field point? C'mon, at least throw a badass broadhead on that shaft for added effect.
J, if you give somebody 500$ for great CG effects I will paste even more. That was test film ;-)
I am an elf woman! 🧝🏻♀️
This was fun to watch. Thankyou for making it!
Pretty good short film, love the scenery in the beginning. Action starts 2:48. Got lost with the shooting of the creature, but I like the fact that she held and shot the bow well :) Ears could use a bit more bend and match with some oil based stage make-up maybe? All in all I enjoyed, Thank you1
Home made Movie?! Amazing! 3:27 i hope it was a cute panda then the elf screamed "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO~~~~~~~~" That would be funny.
This video is really good, I would definitely watch another one! and I am now a new subscriber✌
She is adorable 😍 and a babe
How do you get such clean beautiful audio???
This was very well shot. Extra bonus to the costume designer who did not use "Female Fantasy Armour" biker leathers and most importantly did not put heels on her boots- well done. Now for the criticisms- and they are minor. There is a continuity error where the elf reaches the trail with an arrow nocked and then in the following second she reaches for an arrow. The arrow tip is not a good type for penetrating a creature. Animals ( and humans) who get shot with an arrow unless it is though the heart tend to run or thrash around a lot before bleeding to death. Even if you hit a lung it takes a while. Maybe your type of troll has a special weak spot on it's back?
Even if an elf is much stronger than a human, pulling out an arrow that has gone deeply enough into something to kill it is hard- and by grabbing it where she did she risks breaking the arrow.
I make these comments because I did enjoy your film and hope that as I watch more recent ones I will see you getting better and better.
Wulf of Armoury-Terrain
Brisbane Australia.
Hearing small far away things. Is that because Elven ears are pointy?
That troll was just out for a swim and a walk, minding its business. Maybe on it's way to get some muffins for grandma troll. But then along came a wolf, with big rubber ears, and pointy arrows...
The way she was holding the bow and the way she was shooting,she wouldnt hit shit xD
Der alex
So daring & awesome
the elf has a zit.
Nice work ! keep at it !
Dude I think its a great short picture. No budget no nothing. Quite a try. i really like this refreshing thing. In the further projects I prefer some extended plot, maybe with the vikings which you've got there. Nice thing ! Im looking forward to your next much more complicated project if there is any!
is that a bearpaw scythian horsebow?
Im leaving like. As for a home made movie its quite good.
Very well done!
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Great cinematic shots :) We're working on a similar project now - for our portfolio. Kind of amazing how the Tolkien's world makes us long for the world of black&white characters... Amazing job. In a month or two we'll be finished with our short probably.
Thanks guys :) For me it was a training and a great project. It was first non profit film for me since 10 years. 10 years of dull commercial process of Hotels, Events and very narrow narration. When im watching this particular film Im feeling refreshing relief :) Im looking forward for your project!
It is good to refresh one's mind, go out and create :) We had this need this winter, and we've done some non-profit short, kind of a patriotic. You can see on our profile. There is a nice short called RANGER inspired by Tolkien's Sillmarillion. Similar to your work. Good to know that there are sensitive, good-hearted people in the business.
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You got that poor bastard! In love with all the nature in this video simply beautiful. Yea yea i am a nerd myself lol love the fantasy stuff. Also shoot a traditional recurve. Noticed a lot of polish last names at the end... Mowimy po polsku? Gdzie to bylo zrobione bo takich lasow z polski niepamietam 😊❤
Recently just bought traditional bow and wooden arrows... Gonna play with it instead of recurve or compound bows like those Olympic competitions
WTF did that ogre do , he was just going about his business and you shot him .
The Dark Truth Of Elf Bitches.... THE JUST DONT GIVE AN ORCISH FUCK
Ur funny dude. I bursted
Well, ogres and orcs are elves natural enemy. They raid their villages and wreck havoc to elvish kingdom
may be that troll was going to answer nature call.. why people just can't mind their own business and let others do their stuff peacefully..
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keeping the troll out of focus made him look more realistic than later on!,also she pulled the arrow out with to much ease in other words great short!. keep keeping it up!.
Where can I find these creatures I need at work I have Haha
she is holding the bow incorrectly. not sure how she can fire it.
Several hundreds of years ago, Roman Centurion Timotheus was creating a design for an aqueduct toward Londonium. He was browsing the British forest in order to find find a waterway.
He noticed a female Elven Archer. She noticed Timotheus too. An arrow was launched immediately. Tim kneeled and wielded his shield. The elven arrow hit the shield. He exclaimed,
- Pax Romana!
- No peace, Centurion!
- By Jupiter! Do not hurt me, please! I am just trying to design a water infrastructure here. Heaven's sake!
The Elven female warrior approached Centurion Timotheus. She said,
- Fine, Centurion. I am not sure if I like you to be here either.
- We will leave in a couple of years. But until then, please do not hurt me. I only have a short-range sword 🙂
- Right, Tim. By the way, is it necessary for you to leave, Tim?
- As long as you keep on firing at me, it is absolutely necessary for me to leave 🙂
- Sorry Tim. I did not know you are a constructor.
- Phew, well good thing we got that settled. Are you hungry, darling? I have some very old dried meat and freshly baked bread to share, with Italian wine.
- Sounds awesome, Tim! Thank you. I love you already.
- You look awesome too 🙂
With black eyeliner no less.
You earned yourself a subscriber :DD
love this!
Loved it;)
so how do i get to watch this movie ? i like the change of scenery wen it comes on to movie on this site !
the world need more archery videos like this
Kyo Yamato
Yes, but in real life; are you any good with that stick flinger? What is the draw weight on your bow?
People need to hook me up I wanna act so bad but I’ve never had the courage to audition
maybe try to find a local play theater to start off and see if you like it?
very fantastic video.
I love elf's! This makes me go forest and make myself bow, play skyrim.
Great video btw. Would like to see more videos like these.
Thanks Kert ! This vid was a test to remind me how short film works in production and a test before making other videos like these in the very near future.
Glad to hear. I subscribed. Keep it up! To find new ideas and new amazing films. :)
Kmnp
bleh knal.
Kert Olen gopo
Yeah, an arrow with a target point at that placement wouldn't disable the troll, let alone kill it...
Especially given the reference of what it took to take down the cave troll in moria.
Other than that this was a neat idea and pretty well done, too.
Out of curiosity: is the protagonist an actual archer?
ssu1991 Im completely agree. The only thing which holds me to actually did this (making few more arrows) is that we had no time. We had 2 hours to make this short and only one good shot of "targeting". All vid was shot on RAW format In Cannon 5d mark II, which means that 64 GB of data is just only few minutes of time for recording. So that only budget and logistic ruins everything. But we had no purpose to make it much more convincing, it was just test film. Yes the protagonist is actual archer with some good results :)
@@BodoJKS It was better than most “professional” films.
What is the name of the film
whats with the target tip on the arrow ...should have been a broadhead
Nice Movie
Nice video
Well there's a minute twenty of my life I;ll never get back
hii guys ....?.
yours mind thinking is so very very bad?....?... ...
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Nice
I was rooting for the troll.
Does anyone know the name of that one movie? It had an archer elf named Leda and it's an animated film...I know that's not very discriptive...if so than ignore this comment. I ask because this reminds me of that movie.
Kung fu is good than boxing. ...
no one come back
Can elf/alf in my body get help by celtic and gaelic goddess ? For get his freedom.
Were those practice arrows.
What happened to the arrow from 2:09 did she drop it?
Risking life getting shoot at hanging off ropes on 100 ft cliffs trip on logs in dead of night in rain for no pay just to save a life crazy
What Movie name
Nice try, I have to admit. It was a "Elf" using a asiatic composit bow (i could not tell if mongol or turkish) with mediterranea draw?! Yes. She killed the monster with whatlookslike a field point?! Yes! That makes sense?! No. But it was a nice try.
what's the movie name
This chick should be in lord of the rings
Cunt Lizard بسببي
The Lady Of The Rings
wow
Name of this movie
Cool
So she’s a varmint exterminator.
👌
Wondering where this video was filmed. Looks like Oregon forests.
Es un concepto interesante pero hay muchos planos de sobra que no aportan nada a la historia, e incluso rompen el ritmo de la narrativa, y las tomas de punto de vista no concuerdan con las acciones ni ubicación del personaje, supongo que desenfocaste la toma para no mostrar al troll, pero Mira no tiene justificación para estar fuera de foco. También el personaje cambia de locación y posición entre los cortes(ejemplos: en el minuto 3:00 cuando esta escondida detrás de un árbol y el troll camina en el fondo,el corte que sigue es Mira volteando hacia su izquierda, pero cambio de locación repentinamente, y ya no esta el árbol detrás de ella. También en el minuto 3:25 ella coloca la flecha en el arco lista para dispararla, en el siguiente corte la vemos caminando con el arco apuntando hacia el suelo, y seguido de eso, nos muestra un corte en donde el arco ya esta cargado y apuntando hacia arriba ) rompiendo la lógica narrativa.Espero tomes en cuenta mi opinión bro, casi todo se puede arreglar en la edición :)
Eli Thanks for your opinion. As I said eariler in the comments. There should be no bother to go to much deep. This film was made in early of YT stage. Ive got only 16GB ram card to make RAW footage so there is no way to make dubles. It was some kind of test RAW footage and we ve got no money to make it more convienient. I can only said that Im producing now two films like this one, with multiple actors in it and there will be a very good way for further enhancements with the narration. Anyway thank you for your comment!
Back stabbing elves!
The amount of shaking when she shot the arrow ,i doubt she would of hit a tree let alone a specific target,no more hero women because they are just not up to it
so you go around the woods wearing rubber ears dressed funny spouting poetry shooting ancient emaginary monsters with a modern bow and arrow ....some people call that crazy and used to keep that stuff to them selfs.good job on video I like the woods.
Einar thanks for your opinion :)
Rubber ears, check. Dressed in a very odd fashion, check. Spouting poetry, check. Shooting ancient "emaginary [SIC] , monsters, check. " ... with a modern bow ..." , Major Fail. That is a simply recurved bow .... been around since pre-history. Modern bows, for the most part, are compound bows ... y'know those bows with pulleys ...That was NOT a modern bow. The arrows with the target heads .. that's another story.
EINAR VOLSUNG it's for fun....can't you accept that?
Are you REALLY a Volsung?...as in the Nordic sagas?
EINAR VOLSUNG
good
what name of muvi
I like the ears
Have second part from this...
A ka naj shqie
❤️❤️❤️❤️
phim gì đay mọi người
I see elves and fairy! I am psychic! 🧝🏻♂️🧝🏻♀️🧚🏻♀️🧚🏻♂️🧚🏻
mmmm
Miya?
Will there be more to come?
Yes, one cosplay film with elves and one Star Wars cosplay, which are filming now :)
Its Miya one shot, one kill not Mira
Nope. An elf knows better than to hunt with target arrows and does not leave wounded creatures to suffer. This is a waste of time and an insult to Elven Kind.
I realy love this forest not the girl
Really dodgy ears and the wrong colour too, not really a story but relaxing though.
Shin shang Ho.... Kokok kokok
Wow it's emesin and a little bit skerie but l leke it 🍁💖🍁
well well,,,the fuckn world movie,, is gud,,,and need ths
god