thank you so much :') And I totally know what you mean! writing can be a very intimate process, so i'm glad you enjoyed this deep dive into my brain haha
Dude this was sooo fricking. I loved this video so much! Also hear me out for the last line instead of "He is singing me a song" you could say "He sings a song for me" or take away the full stop after "flower" and change the last line to "as he sings a song for me" because I think it would go lovely with the "be" in the second line.
eek! tomoatosoup! so sorry i didn't see this comment until now! thank you for watching and for your words - glad you enjoyed the video! i'm HEARING YOU OUT: and what a wonderful edit and your line rings so well and you're SO right, it does go lovely with the "be"! i love rhymes...
I loved this sm, it felt intimate yk? Thank you!
thank you so much :') And I totally know what you mean! writing can be a very intimate process, so i'm glad you enjoyed this deep dive into my brain haha
Dude this was sooo fricking. I loved this video so much! Also hear me out for the last line instead of "He is singing me a song" you could say "He sings a song for me" or take away the full stop after "flower" and change the last line to "as he sings a song for me" because I think it would go lovely with the "be" in the second line.
eek! tomoatosoup! so sorry i didn't see this comment until now! thank you for watching and for your words - glad you enjoyed the video! i'm HEARING YOU OUT: and what a wonderful edit and your line rings so well and you're SO right, it does go lovely with the "be"! i love rhymes...
this is the most gorgeous poem!!!! 🫶🏻🫶🏻
ty for this comment from the most gorgeous person alive !
well, hello
also have you read the book circe?? and if so was it good? bc I think it would get me back into a greek mythology era
YES I HAVE. i will bring my copy home for you. very good - cried and laugh and giggled and then sobbed ferociously into my hands.