IELTS Writing Task 2 | TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE? with Jay!
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I just got my IELTS result today. Listening- 9, Writing- 7.5, Reading- 8.5, Speaking- 8.0. Overall score- 8.5 Watching your lectures contributed immensely to my result. Thanks a lot Jay. So happy! And it's my first attempt.
Anne Enunwa congratulations
Can you give me some tips which you used in your exam time.if it is possible than i will appricate you from my heart.please reply it for me as soon as possible because i really need it
Jagnandan Gill To be honest I've only ever spoken English so I had a good foundation. You need to practice as much as you can. Listening, speaking, write letters and essays and practice reading. I did all the practice tests I could find.
Okoli Blessing Thanks
Those are so.good scores...need help in writing 😭
I want to say a big thank you to this channel. I got my result today and I got my desired band score (7.5) at one sitting. Jay you are doing a great job😊👌
I got an agree/ disagree essay and scored 7 in writing. I followed your lessons. Thank you so much Jay. Your channel is incredibly helpful.
hey are u still here ?? Are u able to help me write an essay for me cuz I have to submit it tmr and it’s a test .. ? If ur still here I don’t mind giving you the Qn ... please help me !! I’m so bad at essay writing and I don’t wish to fail
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I got my IELTS result and made a 7.5 in writing. I simply followed your training on the structure you taught us Jay. You're a gem! Thank you.
hey i have some questons to ask u about this part can u reply pls
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Hey, in this agree or disagree questions
My tutor told if I am disagreeing or agreeing to prompt, I have to follow this basic pattern-
Para 1- introduction
Para2 - reason 1 of agree/disagree
Para 3- reason 2 of agree /disagree
Para 4- conclusion
But according to Mr jay here-
Para 1- Introduction
Para 2-acknowledging one side
Para 3- agree/disagree other side
Para 4-conclusion
I am Confused because no were I have seen Acknowledging other.
Which method is correct ?
I must say that you're undoubtedly the best teacher on youtube I've found so far. May you have more. I really love the fact of yours that you never get tired of teaching. Even after speaking and teaching us continuously for hours on live webinar, you are keen to answer questions regarding your lecture, this clearly indicates your love for your profession.
I think you are the most knowledgeable, experienced and supportive teacher who I have ever seen.
Thank you so much Jay, I saw this video and the letter writing video a night before my exam. you helped me get a 7.5.
I just saw my results.
Introduction:
Sentence 1: Write a 'general statement' based on prompt: 9:18
Sentence 2: Rewrite the question prompt in your own words: 12:50
Sentence 3: This essay will argue that/why ...: 16:44
Paragraph 1: [the one that you don't agree with]
Sentence 1: Restate Side 1: 22:23
Sentence 2: Give reason/s:
Sentence 3: Give example/s:
Sentence 4: Conclude Side 1:
Paragraph 2: [the one that you do agree with] 43:57
Sentence 1: Restate Side 2:
Sentence 2: Give reason/s:
Sentence 3: Give example/s:
Sentence 4: Conclude Side 2:
Conclusion:
Sentence 1: This essay argued that/why ...:
Sentence 2: Give your opinion (extent):
Hello good afternoon. What if am agreeing with the questions how do I arrange my paragraph, will BODY PARAGRAPH 1 start with what I don't agree with
No words of how how your sessions are.. Just cant believe teachers like you exist who can made IELTS so simpler for their students. After watching your videos, writing seems to be a cakewalk. Thanks a ton for helping us :)
Loved this tutorial, thank you so much, I am going to rewatch it again and again. Here is my essay:
Smacking is a common method used by parents to discipline children in various cultures. These parents believe that smacking is the most effective approach for managing children. This essay will argue why it is completely wrong and dangerous.
Some parents resort to smacking as the sole method of controlling children’s behavior. Their motivation stems from two primary reasons: firstly, parents believe that smacking disciplines their children immediately, moreover when children are physically hurt, they are not likely to repeat the same mistake in the future. Research suggests that parents are naturally protective of their children, if slapping helps their child to grow into a better person, they may not hesitate to consider this option. This clarifies why some parents regard smacking as the best method for dealing with unruly children.
Despite the immediate positive outcomes of physical abuse, the practice of smacking is a completely inappropriate and unhealthy way of managing children in the long run. Strict parenting style has only adversely affected children’s mental health. Due to physical abuse, children have been distancing themselves from their parents. Indeed, this is the reason why these days many children indulge themselves in drugs and build wrong relationships. Recent research has shown the increased suicide rate among young children due to wrong parenting style. Therefore, I stand completely against any form of physical abuse against children.
In conclusion, this essay argued that parents who use smacking to discipline their children have a poor understanding of children’s psychology and underestimate the negative effects of physical abuse. In my opinion, no matter how badly a child behaves, parents should not hurt them physically and instead address the situation with thoughtful consideration. (260 words)
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I have an IELTS Exam tomorrow morning 03/02/2018 ,and I'm watching this now ,Thanks man Appreciate it .
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Praise Lord Jesus!! Received my IELTS result and got L-8.5,R-9.W-7,S-7. This was my first attempt and I thank God for the results. My preparation was thru the videos and instructions of E2 by Jay, Alex and Mark. I wasn't much prepared for speaking. but the last minute saw the ppf method by Jay and it helped in the test. the one min is really short in the test time, also my instructor took back the paper i put notes on, so it really helped. Thanks to E2 IELTS instructors.
I can confirm that this strategy works well, I took Ielts in Dec 2020 and managed to get a 7.5. Thanks!
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@@jashanbaidwan7383 yeah, I just followed the exact formula and it worked
I received my IELTS (General) result today. Listening- 8.5, Writing- 7.5, Reading- 9.0, Speaking- 7.0. Overall score- 8.0. Your lectures are outstanding and helped me immensely! Thanks a ton, Jay! I am so happy today! It's my first try.
Jay , tomorrow is my IETLS general exam. If i hadn't seen this video i would definitely panic. this video has helped me allot. And not just this one, all of your videos have been 95 percent of my learning...... thankyou so very much for this. you are amazing teacher.
Your advises and suggestions helped me get an acceptable score in IELTS
You both are amazing and I thank you from the bottom of my heart
Keep it up!
Thanks Jay...I got my result today..Followed your tips for all 4 modules...my result is 8 7.5 7.5 8.5 (L R W S) overall band 8 in my first attempt..you are such a wonderful teacher..am glad i found your tips very effective for my preparation..thanks again and god bless..
Congrations, can you share your tips with me plzz
Thank you Jay and all the E2 tutors, I got 7778. Couldn’t happened without your guidance. Thanks alot again. God bless you all
You are the best guide on youtube
You are merely teaching what is needed to score 9
Saying thanks is not enough!!
You are the best
I wanted to say thank you, Jay, for these free video lessons. I took IELTS for the first time in my life last week and got a band 8 for writing, all thanks to your SUPER structures! I'm very grateful for your hard work; you helped many people improve, including me. I will recommend E2 to all my friends who will take IELTS in the future.
many congratulations for scoring such a good score. can u please help me with some of the issues in ielts writing?
Discipline is one of the crucial parts of raising a child, and there are various ways of going about it.
Some people believe that corporal punishment, or smacking, is the ideal form of discipline. This essay will argue that smacking children is a completely unnecessary way to discipline children, despite any potential benefits to this method.
Hi, I want to thank you so much for helping me with how to write part 2 of the essay. I took my IELTS test, and I achieved the required band score.
I took the Academic IELTS last September 9, 2017 and I've got a score of 7.5 in writing. Thanks E2 Language for the tips, it took me a week to understand your essay structure and it was worth it. Also, this was the type of opinion essay I received. :)
Sorry for the interruption but I need to express my thoughts on your a/m statement but first, congrats to you on that score. Second, about your 'it took me a week.....' it is indeed taking a week to understand this opinion essay. Nevertheless, what about other types of essays i.e. solution & problem, advantages/disadvantages, thesis statement etc..? I guess it will also take time to understand and realise the whole WT2 part in GT
I am writing a general statement here - "Simply no one won't love this video". Thank you Jay, thank you E2 IELTS! :)
Dear Jay, you are one of the best teachers I've met in my life! Feel blessed....
I would be grateful if someone here can review the beginning of my essay which I did following the instructions from the video. I thank you in advance....
Discipline in relation to children has been a controversial topic for discussion since time immemorial. Some people believe that physical punishment is a wise choice when it comes to children's discipline. This essay will argue why smacking is completely inappropriate way to treat children when they misbehave.
Some parents think that applying physical power is a very effective way to control children. They find it necessary to use when children do not understand commands expressed orally or behave in a very violent manner. Moreover, adults may consider smacking as a means to inhibiting deeper understanding of appropriate behaviour into their children's minds. For instance, when a child misbehaves and initiates bullying, it seems wise to apply smacking in order to show him how unpleasant and painful the exercise of physical power towards others can be.
Although smacking may seem beneficial to some parents, disadvantages of such form of discipline greatly outweigh the advantages. Smacking children may lead to serious repercussions such as deterioration of their psychological state. It has been reported that 30% out of all children smacked suffer from severe mental diseases lately. Parents who have beaten their children for the sake of better code of conduct condemn that they need to manage serious health problems their children face afterwards. Moreover, applying physical power to children is highly likely to cause unfriendly home environment, deteriorate family relationships, and negatively influence children who become more aggressive and violent in a response to such form of punishment as smacking. Therefore, parents should avoid smacking and regard it as very dangerous and cruel method to shape children's behaviour.
This essay argued that physical punishment of children is inappropriate way of controlling their behaviour. It seems reasonable that parents who smack their children must consider the drawbacks such practice implies, and need to change their methods accordingly. In my opinion, ceasing to use smacking is an absolute imperative and, definitely, a wrong way to treat misbehaving children.
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Undoubtedly 10 out of 9
Thanx so much Jay and the whole E2 team 🤝 . Got an overall band 8 on my 1st attempt 😀 (L8.5, R8, S8, W7). your step by step guides to approaching, structuring and writing were absolutely helpful. Keep up the good work 🤝
Wow congrats n ur score. 👏
Can i ask u help me with the following questions
What question promt did u get?
Did u get agree or disagree?
Did u write both sides even when u agreed or disagreed to one side completely
Hi Jay, I want to say a Big Thank you. I finally got a 7 in my writing. I only watched your UA-cam videos and practiced like you advised.
I want to thank E2 Ielts for my ielts preparation! It was insane I had less than 2 weeks to prepare for my test. I got a 7.5 for writing and overall band of 8 :) Thank you thank you Jay and Alex!
Hi how are you
Can you help me?
Heyyy Jay,
I just received my IELTS test score.
Listening- 7.5
Reading - 7.0
Writing - 7.5
Speaking - 7.5
Over all band - 7.5
Your videos were incredibly helpful. I owe u big time! I simply watched ur tutorials for writing and I’m glad I got my desired score.
Congratulations! That's so amazing
Can you give some tips pls? How did you prepare and how long?
I took 6.0 overall in October this year
And recently i started to self study to retake the exam untill February can i take 8.0 untill that ? Can you give some advice pls no one is answering i am really struggling how to prepare i mean i am doing practice tests but there is no change
Mr Jay, your videos helped me to get my desired band score.
I got my result yesterday
It was great. Thanks so much.
Keep the good work. I encouraged everyone preparing to write IELTS, stick to his videos your results will amaze you.
A lot of thanks to Jay, Mark and Alex! I watched all the videos of Jay & Mark and Alex's videos of R & L. Don't miss any video, i watched at 2x speed to save time😅 The structure of essays given by Jay is very helpful. I got L9, R8.5, W7, S7 (exam date 5 & 10 June).
I had some 18-19 days for preparation and there were days in which i could not study at all. But the week before exam i was practicing 5-6 hours daily. The only regret i have is that i couldn't manage my time to revise my essay & letter. Keep practicing!
Great could you please tell me if this is a discussion essay or a opinion essay ?
@@rikeshmaharjan7833 what do you mean? They have 3 types of essay structures.
Hello Jay..! Im so excited to share with you that finally after 5-6 attempts I got 7 in writing. I was stuck at 6.5. You are a blessing..! Guys please religiously follow e2language. 👍👍👍
Dear Jay, your videos are phenomenal, I'm a beginner and I feel that I'm making quick progress
I'm really obliged
Hi
Good morning, I came across your writing tutorial a night to my ielts writing test and got a band 7 in my writing , I wish I saw your teachings on others earlier enough. Thanks so much. Take your flowers 🎉🎉
Feel free to write your sentence-by-sentence ESSAY into the comments! (Feel free to click like as well!)
can same pattren be written if you are simply asked whether you are agree or disagree with statement
i mean without mentioning that how far you agree or disagree
jay thank you so much. you have been extremely helpful. I really need some clarification on the 'extent' essay type. For the 'smacking of children as the best disciplinary measure', i decide to somewhat agree and include in my thesis statement that 'other measures would be better'. is that proper? and how would i go about it.
simon
E2 IELTS great help
E2 IELTS what if i agree with the statement ?
What em i going to write in both paragraphs ?
best teacher ever
Thank you for this tips.
Just found your videos a day to my exams.
I got L8.5,R8.5, S7.5 and W7. An overall band 8
Thanks a lot, your videos helped especially in the essay writing.
though this video was posted ab 6y ago it still works til these days😭🙏🏻
Hello Jay!! great job!! Your Videos is Absolutely necessary to be shared to everyone who will give the IELTS exam as well as to anyone that would need to practice his English skills!!!!!!!!!!Keep going!!Greetings from Greece!!!!!!
Thank you so much e2 Language for the amazing tips. I use most of the tips during IELTS exam. I just got my IELTS result today. I got 7. I quite surprised because I thought I at 5 or 6 😅😅 Thank you so much Jay and friends.
how did you. i got 6
I got my result today - W 7 L 7.5 R 7.5 L 9 and 8 overall. Did all my practice here especially writing task 2. Thanks Jay
Hie congratulations which tutor did you use on your speaking......thank in advance
Thank you very much Jay for your explanation that help me got an acceptable score on my IELTS exam.
Your explanation about learning English language is excellent. You are the best teacher.
I'll apply for itles exam after 1 month for a master degree...
I've understood a lot from this channel..
Thank you so much teacher..
Good luck!
Thanks Jay for teaching essay writing in such a great way. In this particular essay, being a medical professional, I would like to suggest that "Preventable Diseases " and "Spreadable Disease " are not synonym. We can definitely use it as a synonym for "Communicable or Contagious diseases/infections" but not for Preventable. Vaccine preventable diseases are a group of special illnesses and not all spreadable disease are vaccine preventable.. sorry for being too technical but thought to mention it here. Thanks.
Thank you so much Jay... your teaching is the best. I got my result just now. God did it. My first attempt.
Reading: 7.0
Writing: 7.0
Listening 7.5
Speaking 7.5.
Everything I know, came from your teaching. Thank you so much.
$Introduction/ 45 words
These days people smack their children as a way to raise them. They claim that physical punishment is the best way to correct their path. This essay will argue why smacking children is unnecessary, and that there is more than one way to discipline children.
$Paragraph1/ 82 words
On the one hand, some parents have been hitting their children believing that is a way to improve their behaviors. nowadays children became harder to deal with so using physical punishment can correct the situation. Moreover, children will remember the pain and not repeat their mistake repeatedly. Indeed, some children act rude and bad so, a good way to correct and teach them is smacking. In spite of how it will affect them in the future, smacking children is the best form of discipline.
$paragraph2/ 102 wors
On the other hand, regardless of how smacking can teach the child, this idea is totally unnecessary. Children are smarter than to correct them by hitting. Studies show that 67% of children who have been smacked by their parents are more likely to depression and addictions. Therefore, courses are made in each town to teach parents how to deal with their children in other ways such as talking, prizes and to punish by taking their games. Overall, the idea of smacking children is the best form of discipline is dangerous in itself and could lead to a far worse outcome for society.
$Conclussion/ 49 words
This essay argued why smacking children is unacceptable including that who use physical punishment are totally teaching their children wrong, and how there are other ways to teach children other than hitting. In my opinion, Smacking a child is absolutely unnecessary that can cause bad complications in the future.
total: 278 words
You really helped me a lot in my preparation for ielts essay writing. Thank you!
Hello Jay
I followed your you tube tutorials and joined E2 language.
I must say you have helped me a lot , all your classes are well structured
You take all efforts to help your students....i am indebted
I thank you for helping me.
with your help my total band score is 8.
Jay. Jay. Jay.. You are a guru! 💯..I followed your strategies for writing task-2 and got a 7.5 in Writing... Thank you🙏
Am so much excited to watched few of your tutorials and i found them so amazing though my examination date is very close but gained some information's through your platform much appreciated Jay.
I really enjoy how clearly u explain everything in detail plus i love watching you. Your handsome😍
Thank you sooo much E2 ielts
I scored 7.5 in my ielts..Ur the channel is the only reason for this
L-8.5
R-7.5
W-6.5
S-7
Overall:-7.5
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Di may you share your experience about it as well as things which you use to recieve it that will help me to recieve me my desire band score because i stuck on 5.5 and overall 6 band score
Nikita please help me
Plz teach me
Nikitha Tatikonda how did u beat the time in reading, how long did u practice? While practicing what was your score?
I used this vaccination essay structure by acknowledging one side and writing opinion in another has made me got a band 8 in writing! Using a mixture of complex sentences, passive and even question sentences is the real deal. Thanks a lot Jay
Wow congrats n ur score. 👏
Can i ask u help me with the following questions
What question promt did u get?
Did u get agree or disagree?
Did u write both sides even when u agreed or disagreed to one side completely?
@@dr.mariahelan6629 I would also like to know the answer to your last question.
@@vivianmachie4757 👋 hi, i got opinion based essay. I scored 7 in my writing.
In agree or disagree, I either agreed or disagreed to one point of view.
In what extent do you agree or disagree, is another type of question, where you can
1 agree completely
2 disagree completely
3 agree to some extent and disagree to some extent,
If 3 is your case, then you have to write the body paragraphs very carefully
Bp1- state why u partially disagree
Bp-2- state why u partially agree
Hope it was useful. All the best to you 😀
No doubt !! Fantastic way to take preparation for IELTS examination very specific and reliable.
Thank you so much Jay. That was of a great help of you. My ielts exam after fifteen days and you guys make it much more comprehensive and clearer, thats why E2 is the only guide l am going to follow. ❤❤
Discipline is something that should be taught to someone ever since they were young. Many people believe that physical punishment is the best way to instil discipline into children, such as smacking them. This essay will argue that smacking children is not the best way to enforce discipline upon them and there are other options available.
Raising children is a difficult task, and parents opt to using physical punishment, such as smacking, to control them when they are misbehaving or having tantrums. For generations, parents have been using physical punishment as a form of discipline, and some parents are only familiar with that one method as they were raised with those type of consequences in their household. Some parents also believe that by using corporal punishments is the best way to educate children. For example, parents can easily stop their child’s uncontrollable behaviour such as saying a bad word in just a few seconds. This quick and brief way of portraying consequences to children make parents believe that physical punishment is the best choice discipline them.
I believe that this traditional way of discipline is unnecessary in our modern time. Studies show that children who were raised with the normalisation of physical punishment will grow up and develop serious mental illness such as depression. Children should be raised in an environment where making mistakes is not a bad thing, instead it is a learning process. For example, parents can opt using other methods such as time out, talking with their child or taking away something they enjoy doing such as their video games. Using violence to discipline children is dangerous in itself and could lead to far worse outcome for society.
In conclusion, there are many methods parents can use to discipline their child. I definitely believe that a softer approach in disciplining children will positively affect the child’s development. Children are also human and we should be respectful of their feelings.
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Thank you E2 IELTS.Your videos hepled me a lot on my test specially on Writing.Jay your are the best.
Took exam on 10 feb 2018 got 7 bands in writing ... thankyuu jay sir 🙏🏻
Nice!
where r u from?
Pathankot
Wow that’s great
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O wow I am from jammu 🙂
What abt other sections score ..?
I am also preparing for GT-Ielts
Please help /guide/ suggestions
I am worried abt speaking and writing sections
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Hi Jay, I have scored a band 8 in my recent IELTS test and my entire preparation was based upon your videos; I found them really useful, particularly for the writing part. So, thank you so much! Sending lots of good wishes from Bangladesh.
Hello, I will take Ielts exam within a month. So I want to know, what was your strategy and did you follow only e2 ielts specially for writing?
Could any experts comment on my writing? I need a band 7 at least in writing. Thanks in advance!
Question prompt: Smacking children is the best form of discipline
Physical punishment of children has always been around while disciplining. Some people believe that physical punishment is the right way to discipline. This essay will argue that smacking is entirely unacceptable to nurture children although it might be one of the ways under extreme circumstances.
Some parents believe that smacking is the most efficient way of disciplining their children. The reason why they prefer that way of disciplining is to see the results of punishment instantly. Yet another reason is that physical power has always been around and has probably been used by their parents. For example, in Central Asian countries using physical punishment was practiced for several decades and according to national statistics, every second family used a smacking at some point in their lives while nurturing their children. Therefore, the effect of the cultural environment and society where they live might be the inherent reason for taking these types of unacceptable measures while raising their children.
Despite the fact that smacking might be considered by some parents as an efficient way of disciplining for an instant result, it is completely detrimental in the long run for their children. The major reason for not taking these forms of discipline is the psychological effects that may potentially adversely return in their children’s adulthood. For instance, according to the World Health Organization children who experienced physical punishment in their childhood are more likely to conduct robberies and participate in conflict situations than the ones who have not had any smacking. Recent research by the Statistical Analysis department come to the outcome that 45% of children who experienced physical punishment by their parents during their childhood believe that this affected adversely their choice of future career and marital status. Thus, in order to cease these negative effects in children’s later lives parents should avoid smacking.
This essay argued that although physical punishment could be considered as one of the ways of disciplining children, implementing these types of measures might potentially destroy children’s lives. In my opinion, smacking children during their childhood can entirely change their lives in a negative means that most parents are not willing to do.
Your essay videos have helped me so much with my writing. I went from a 6.5 to 7 in a matter of 3 days since I followed this structure carefully.
S - 9, W - 7, R - 8.5, L - 9
Overall - 8.5
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I just did my test today and my task 2 question was an agree or disagree type and I tried to apply these steps as best as I could. I pray I get a good score in this section. 🙂🙂
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Thanks a lot Jay! Got a score of 7.5 in writing for my test on 16th December '2017. Sincerely applied your essay structure in my writing section & got the results.
What type of essay it was, discussion or agree / disagree?
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R-7.5
W-7.0
S-8.0
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Can i ask u help me with the following questions
What question promt did u get?
Did u get agree or disagree?
Did u write both sides even when u agreed or disagreed to one side completely
Thanks for this video. I took my test today. I followed this basic structure. I'm hoping for the best.
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I cannot explain how many dreams this IELTS examination has crushed. I have been attempting IELTS from past 2 years and never scored 7 in my writing except my first attempt. Now the express entry situation has completely change. Even today, if I manage to score 8-7-7-7, I still might not be able to make through the cut-offs.
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I have a confusion about the Difference Between "Agree or Disagree" and "Extent of Agreement or Disagreement" in IELTS Writing Task 2.
Please make a video on this topic... Thanks in Advance...
Relevance
Precise vocabulary
Accurate grammar
Logical structure
3:24 extent of agreement or disagreement
8:42 question prompt
10:17 (general) background statements
11:06 write question prompt in other words
15:12 preface of the opinion
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Hitting children to discipline them has become a subject of heated debate nowadays. There are many who believe it is an effective method, however there are also people who disagree. This essay will argue the reasons as to why causing physical pain to children is definitely not the best way to go about, even though there are some benefits to it.
Parents smacking their children to control them is an age-old practice that has been proven to be effective in the past. Behavioral psychologists have consistently proven that we humans are biologically programmed to avoid pain and seek pleasure. This pain avoidance behavior is used as an effective tool by parents to deter children from doing things that they disapprove of. Causing physical pain is also the quickest and easiest method available. Parents often have a very busy schedule and it does not take much effort or time to pick up a cane and spank! For example, my childhood friend completely stopped bed wetting at the age of 9 when his father beat him up for it. Therefore, smacking has become the preferred option by many parents because it is effective, fast and easy to do.
Even though hitting children to teach them how to behave is effective and easy, it has far reaching negative consequences which would manifest as the child grows up. For starters it would cause permanent psychological damage. Numerous studies have shown that childhood trauma, even if mild and done with good intentions results in antisocial behaviour later on in life. There have been reported cases of criminal tendencies, psychopathy and sociopathy in adults which can be traced back to excessive forms of physical punishments as a child. Besides, there are many other safer ways to discipline a child. Non-physical punishment like forcing them to do house hold chores is a good example. Counselling is yet another good example. This has the added benefit of teaching the child why his behavior is unacceptable. If the child can understand why bed wetting is wrong, he or she would take the initiative to change without being forced to do so. Therefore, parents should consider other ways to discipline their child because there are many safer options available other than smacking which has negative psychological consequences.
This essay argued that there are better and safer options to discipline a child other than inflicting physical pain. In my opinion, smacking children is not the best way to instill discipline and should only be used as a last resort since there are other better and safer alternatives available.
Kineson C fantastic write up, wish I can learn to write like this. My exam is coming up this weekend.
Dont you think there are repetitions in your essay.though written beautifully well. I guess marks are deducted for repetitions.
As far as i concerned 40 minutes won't be enough to write this essay in exam , it consist of 427 words
Nice write up.
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01:28 question prompt
03:19 level of extent
06:01 essay structure
06:14 essay structure 2
07:07 sentence by sentence structure
07:36 how to write the introduction
07:45 sentence 1
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Jay thanks! I’ve got 9 9 7 7.5 (L R W S)
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@@jellyfish4311 omg do u have some advices for reading And which topics you have on the speaking and writing
Liya Min tbh I nearly ran out of time when I was doing reading. There’s not much that you can do for reading except read more lol but when you’re doing the exam try just to find the answer (your aim is to find the answer not understanding the passage!!!) For speaking my topic was “a boring experience” We talked about when do I usually get bored and why. There’s also something about robots? (Forgive me. It’s a distant memory lol) Do you think that people will be replaced by robots? Writing I had bar chart for task 1. For task 2, the pros and cons of travelling a long distance between home and workplace. I hope it helps! Good Luck!
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Thanks, Jay for your structured explanation. You reach the audience well.
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i got 6 from writing how can i get 7?? help me plz
Enforcing a good moral behaviour is a very important part of child's development. Although, some people argue that beating is the best way to enforce the right attitude in children. This essay will argue why hitting a child is ultimately not the best way to discipline.
Good structure of explaining your introduction
I have an IELTS LRW EXAM tomorrow morning (09.02.2019) and i am watching this now.. :)
Perfect Exercise, Definitely improved my ability. Anybody faced this problem: when i read various materials on internet and magazines on various topics, i capture meaning of some hard to remember words and try to memorize like every day. But when i write essay for example my mind just go bonkers and cant even access those synonyms in my brain. if anyone know any technique to overcome tht situation i really appreciate it.
I also felt that problem
i do feel the same.... before i read your comment i felt that i have a very poor English vocabulary and was surprised with the fact that until now i thought i knew English. but its a sign of relieve that I am not the only one. but i believe constantly practicing writing and searching for synonyms online while writing the essay will help you learn synonyms and the way u fit it in the sentence. i dont think there is any other easy way. this is how i am practicing.
If someone can give us an alternative, it will be appreciated.
write your essay each day without any consideration of vocabulary, then modify it at least two times and think what other high vocab you can use, this technique will help you to get words automatically come to your mind during exam because you have related them with low level vocabulary
I got my ielts result, (5-06-2023)
L=7, R=8.5, W=6.5, S=6.5
Overall 7
Just with prep of 2 weeks, Thanks.E2 for valuable videos
very well-organized sample article. Thank you
You recommend using statistics in this video, while
IDP IELTS says: It is a mistake to use surveys and research to support our opinion,
we should instead use real examples and evidence from our own life experiences.
It's there on the ielts website...I just checked
Extraordinary teaching and the timing is great,really appreciate that indeed you are doing amazing help to the IELTS aspirants to accomplish their goals