CELPIP Writing Task 2 - TIPS!
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Dame Adisa CELPIP general or academic?
I'm planning to take a exam on august 2023 .. i'm so enjoy your video,task 1 en task 2 is not easy to me.. but i'll trying to learn and practice.. thank you for your video .. Keep it up
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it really makes sense, you made my writting task so much easier.
Thank you for doing this videos your tips are very useful. You are referring to supporting ideas to our main point
This is really new for me because all time I really had scare about these tasks however today. I said what will happen if I fail? and I just tryed, and I feel very good I understood a lot. I feel very proud of myself, and very grateful to you Dear Professor! And don't be scare if I call you dear, here in US we use Dear: to Refer with respect to the people.so Again and Again Thank you so much.
thank you, for explaining in an easy way
Thank you so much for all the pointers you gave. I found your video about three days to my exam and it helped a lot. I just got my result today and I got 12 in writing.
Congratulations dear
Could you please guide me about embarking the first paragraph!!
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Such a great lesson!
Thank you so much for making a video of writing task 2.
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You have got wonderful calming voice, making seem everything easy. It seems both parts are having same level difficulty . The topic should be right
Thank you Mark,,for making videos. More Power Godbless take care,,
Wow! What an amazing video! Thank you, I am ready for a perfect score ;)
Thank you for all of your videos. I got 9 for writing.
Hi sir, thanks so much for your vedio tips as i learned a lot of this tips and could you please make it more
I think writing Task 2 would be easier for me as l got some great ideas to make the introduction and conclusion as well as the body paragraphs. Thanks a lot for your help
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Watching your video and following your advice helped. Thanks.
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Hi Azar,
Congrats on your success !
I need writing 9 I celpip ! I tried IELTS but get 6 in writing even though I did good writing! Do you think getting 9 is a bigger challenge ?
can you please send me the pdf of this writing book.chinthakaroshan03@gmail.com
Hey, Thanks for the vocabulary:
- to be fed up with something;
- to provide input on the issue.
- state your choice.
Take care!
So helpful!
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Hi Mark! I got a 12 for writing! These videos did help!
Hii.. Do u have the pdf of writting practice?? Can u share with me
They are both easier than Ielts writing since I don’t worry about the spelling.Lol.But task 2 is definitely easier! Love the way you teach!
Hey. Do we have word count and automatic spelling correction in Celpip writing?
Task 1 is easier for me cause I already know how start and finish the email. Thank you so much for this video, it helped me A LOT with task 2 :)
I'm so happy to hear that! 😃
@@MadEnglishTV how many score/band of task 2 out of total 12..?
Your feedback on this please.
I appreciate the initiative taken by the management for renovating the building. I prefer to choose the new paint and carpets as part of renovation work. Even though the building does need a new elevator, the new paint and carpets would offer more practical benefits to the tenants.
First of all, we are facing a lot of problems due to the bed bugs with old carpets. Changing the carpet would give a great sign of relief from the bugs for all the tenants. It has been more than 5 years since the building was painted and I feel so ashamed to invite friends to my apartment as it looks very old. That way, adding new paint gives a wonderful outlook to my apartment and the entire building too.
Secondly, I noticed that the elevator is running in a good condition and has been well maintained by the service provided on regular basis by the management. So, a new elevator is not needed now.
Considering these reasons, I believe new paint and carpets would be more essential. Everyone in the building would be overjoyed. Again, this is my personal opinion, but I will support whatever decision is made.
Thank you for giving me a chance to provide input on this issue.
Hi, Thank you for your videos. It was very useful. I am writing this message a bit late as I received my results in May but I had to acknowledge that I could score 12/12 in writing in my 1st CELPIP attempt only because of your tips.
Hii do u have pdf of writting practice? Can u share with me
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Hey Mark, I'm still enjoying your lesson. Another assignment.
In my opinion, I think painting the building and changing the carpet would be a better choice, although the elevator is a outdated but still working effectively.
Firstly, the present house painting has been washed away by the rain and the part of the building decorated with metal has been corroded. Algae are now growing on the walls, in fact, the appearance of the building look so archic.
Secondly, the carpet needs to be changed because it looks so filthy and smells terrible. Sometime, some children would urinate on it with out scrubbing and this could results to slip and fall accident.
Lastly, the state of the house painting and carpet of this apartment is so embarrassing that I no longer invite my friends to my house. For instance, one of my friends visited me, when she saw the situation of the place, she even advised me to look for another house and live, I was ashamed of my self.
Considering these reasons, I believe painting and provision of new carpet would be a better choice and every tenant would be elated if this would be considered.
How ever, I will also support what ever decision made by the landlord.
Great job! 😃😃
I highly appreciate that as an owner resident of this building I was given a chance to express my opinion regarding the projected maintenance in building. It will be great to change paint and carpets in our building as those works are due since a long time. However, I recommend to replace elevator instead at this time.
First of all, we are having issues with the elevators since a long time as those are old and are in operation since those are installed during building construction. Every odd day these elevator goes out of service and all residents have to use stairs. In addition to that one third residents of out building are elderly people so it is not easy for seniors to use stairs all the time.
Furthermore, elevators are really slow in operation. When I come back from work every day, I notice long ques up in the main lobby, people waiting for elevators sometimes 30 minutes if one elevator is down. Same thing happens during morning every time when all residents have to go to work. It is such an inconvenience for all the residents.
All in all, in my opinion replacing elevators at this point of time would be a great idea. It will help residents to get to their work on time and also reduce waiting time in lobby. Senior residents would be able to go out for walk and will make this place more comfortable for them. Keeping these in mind I hope painting and carpeting works can be postponed this next year.
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Personally，I think a new elevator would be a better choice. Even though the building does need a new paint job, the elevator would offer more practical benefits to the tenants.
The first problem with the current elevator is that it is extremely slow. Sometimes it takes more than five minutes to arrive after pushing the button. A lot of people in the building have started using the stairs because they’re so fed up with the elevators.
The second problem is safety. Sometimes the elevator does strange things. For example, yesterday it suddenly stopped moving, then it dropped a few feet. It was a very frightening experience.
Considering these reasons, I believe an elevator would be a better choice. Everyone in the building would be overjoyed. Again, this is my personal opinion, but I will support whatever decision is made.
Thank you for giving me the change to provide input in this issue.
Hi Adisa, Try revaluation for your speaking part alone .90% to pass chances in revaluation.
I personally would like to get new paint and carpets for several reasons.
Even though the elevator is getting a little old, it's still useable. We really need to get fix inside first for our comfort living.
First, the color is the wall outside obsessively faded and getting look old building. I found some parts are scrunched by wild animals as well. My roommates also says the outlook of this building is miserable. The new color whichever you pick will be better looking building for sure.
Second, I like the idea of new carpet. Winter in here is quiet cold. Since we don't have floor heating, I think the carpet is really important for us. If we could get the new ones, it will keep us warm and comfortable for whole winter.
Considering those reasons, I believe that getting new paint and carpets are better choice. This is my personal opinion, but I will support whatever decision is made. Thank you for giving me a chance to provide input on this issue.
Great job! 😃😃
good evening sir,
As you teach both the tasks, it looks like both are easy. Hopefully, it is, that both are easy as I am thinking now.
thanks
regarding which question is hard, i think it depends on the topics, sometimes straight forward, sometime it is challenged, specially if the topic requires advanced vocabulary
I agree!
I have the celpip test this Sunday thanks for your videos and elevators doesn't drop it just moves off and had an unexpected sudden stop
Hey Mark u r so sweet and kind 🙂🙂
Hi 👋 thank u so much
I have an exam in 2 weeks time. Just going through your videos and hopefully I pass well.
Thank you for the good work Mark. It's really helpful.
Thanks so much for your comment! 😃
Thanks dear
Hi Mark,Is it good to write Option A and Option B is essay? or we need to paraphrase the options?
hey,i loved watching your videos,and small suggestion,"again this is my opinion seneetnce was not mentioned in your previous video (park and building) :))
I have only two days left to get my first trial of CELPIP exam, I am little bit anxious about it, I would like to thank you, your videos are so helpful..💐
You're welcome! 😃
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Do you have celpip material, tips, and trick
Good job.....
Personally, I prefer task 1 since it has certain contents I am assigned to fill in. Also, I am used to writing email because I write them quite often. I hope your lesson on task 2 and my practice help me changing this preference :)
Are we supposed to do any one task or both tasks ???
@@bushraafzal508 both
Hi Mark, thank you for your videos. I need to get a 9 in Writing (I have scored 8 on my first attempt). For Task 2 Practice Test one is supposed to argue in favour of either a shopping complex or recreational park. This is my response, what do you think would be my score?:
Personally, I believe the development of a shopping complex has more rationale behind compared to the recreational park. Even though our town needs another sports complex and a large green area, construction of the mall would offer more socio-economic benefits to the residents of Tall Falls.
Most importantly the existing shopping facilities at River Crossing are outdated, undersized, and fail to satisfy the increasing demand from growing population. Currently it takes over 30 minutes to find a parking spot. This resulted in many residents opting for a drive to the nearby town of Glen Meadows, where ample parking is available and the selection of stores is superior.
Additionally, the new complex will create a substantial amount of temporary jobs during the construction phase. Once completed a significant number full-time positions will be added to our economy, including the seasonal work for students of Tall Falls College. At this point a high percentage of the town's young population is unable to find work and is forced to either remain unemployed or commute to other municipalities, putting their studies and financial well-being at risk.
Considering these reasons, I believe the development of the shopping complex would be the preferred choice for our community.
Thank you in advance!
you should get straight 12 for this attempt !
Hi Mark, your tips and strategies for the CELPIP preparation is really helpfull. I am looking forward to your comments for the TASK 2 Writing response.
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I think both are difficult for me. LOL
I am not good at writing even in my mother language :(
Great content in this video. I think task one is an easy one for me as i am doing this daily as email is the main correspondence in business.
The difficulties i am facing with task two is ideas... Like when i get ask about private vs public school...i have little knowledge on that. Hum....
@Mark, just bought your writing pdf online. 👍🏼
Thank you so much, Mark! These two videos were really helpful and solved many issues in writing section of CELPIP. You made both the section a lot easier.
But I want to make a point, if in the exam it is asked about the email or survey about which I don't have prior knowledge or I don't have any interest about that asked topic, then how to combat with such a situation.
Yes, of course, you deserve a bundles of coffee cup! :) :)
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Hi there, in writting part 2 do we have to give example.
l think task 1 is easier,but through your guidance, l think task 2 will also improve.
Thank you for your wonderful teaching and look forward to all the courses about preparing CELPIP.
Thanks for your comment! 🤗
Are your recommended resources, the ones on your website, enough to prepare for the test
good job dude
I like your honesty hahaha
Personally, I think new paint and carpet would be a better choice for the building. Even though the building required a new elevator too but new paint and carpet will provide a new look to the tenant and this change will give them more pleasure.
The first problem with the building paint is that the paint is looking very dirty and old. Some people made graffiti on the front wall and backyard wall of the building which is destroying the image of the building. Another reason is the rain and snow which damaged the beauty of the old paint.
On the other hand, the carpet of the building is having many stains on it which looks very weird sometimes. Science says that by the passage of time many germs live and grow in the carpet that causes lung problems so we must change it after some time.
Considering these reasons I prefer to give a new paint and new carpet to the building, it will provide a luxurious feeling to the people of the building. Again, it is my personal opinion, but I will support whatever decision is made.
Thank you for giving me a chance to provide input on this issue.
Hi, Can we use contractions in Anonymous answers?
Dear Building Owner,
Firstly, let me thank you for involving me in this crucial decision, I hope my advice will be beneficial for you and all the residents of the building in the long run. Since we have to decide either we can go for the option (A of new paint and carpet) or (option B of new elevator).
According to my personal experience we should opt for option B,even though option A is necessary but we have to keep in mind which one is of immediate and in urgent need.The reason for choosing option B is because in our building many tenants are old couples and families with school going children. Since the elevator are old enough and many times it stops working due to faulty machinery. Most affected are upper floor residents, as summer is approaching, our kids get exhaust by climbing staircase to reach their respective flats, we can imagine what they will go through in summer days. Same as the case with old age couples. Furthermore, many of your upper floor flats are still vacant because new tenants do not book the flat due to this ongoing problem
I hope you will consider my advice for installation of elevator on priority basis and we all come on the same page as most of other tenants like me in the building are in the favor of elevator.
Thank you in advance.
Warm Regards
Great job! 😃😃
Dear Mark,
Pls let me know on what scale this survey writing is graded on Celpip
Thanks
I would like to know how much this will approximately score as well
HI Mark here is my response:
It is my opinion that option B would be a better fit. Even though the paint job and the new carpet have its advantages, option B would be a more practical benefit to the tenants.
The first benefit is that there are senior citizens in the building, and it is quite a strain on them to constantly walk up and down the stairs since the elevator can hold only three people. Furthermore, the elevator is outdated and at times it does not work.
Secondly, with an upgraded elevator, this would be a lucrative opportunity, which can bring in new tenants. We are one out of two buildings on this block with an elevator. Therefore, having the latest model would better serve the current tenants and tenants to come. The upgraded elevator would have the latest features such as a phone for emergencies and in addition hold more people.
Considering these reasons, I believe option B would be a great addition as everyone would benefit. Again, this is my opinion, but I will support any decision that is made.
I appreciate the opportunity to provide input.
Hi Mark, are you also planning to write a book on reading test specially the diagram part ?
Yes! But it's a bit hard for me to do that because I'm not good at making diagrams. 😅
in writing part of the exam, do we have always email to someone and survey? or it can be different in each time. Thanks
As the apartment building is getting old we residents wanted to make few changes to the building. I am glad you have given us the privilege to decide over it. Personally, I feel repainting the building is better option as it is more economical comparatively to replacing the elevators.
Indubitably, elevators are required to be replaced but I believe old elevators could be repaired rather than replacing them with the new ones as they are in authentically better conditions. Apparently, it is more important to repaint the building entirely because it has been 10 years since no touch-up has been given to the walls and this old paint looks more primitive and makes the building look dull and monotonous.
Furthermore, carpets would change the look of the entire building as the building is made with historical design and carpets would make it look like a castle. However, ambience of the building would entirely change and we can also attract new tenants for the houses which are not occupied at the moment as it is near to the train station and in downtown and previously people mostly were reluctant in leasing because it was not properly maintained.
Perhaps, I think this option is less time consuming and more cost effective comparatively to replacing the elevators. Again, this is my personal choice, but i will support whatever decision is made.
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I love to watch your channel but I couldn't find the book ...how do I download your book
Hi Mark. For me Task 2 is easier. I have given twice celpip exm but still my score is same I e 7. I want to get 9. Today I am going to buy your book and hopefully it will help me to improve my score. 👍
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Hello Mark! Could you please suggest me how can I improve my listening scores?
Hey Mark! Thanks for your tips! They were perfectly clear and usable. In my opinion, the task 2 is harder and more complicated because one has to think it over before writing. Have a nice day and take care!
Hi Mark, First of all let me tell you this, I've been following your videos very closely and thank you so much for such fantabulous videos. I'm worried, my exams are on next weekend.
In an official CELPIP test, if we write such simple English will I get 9 or is there any other structure to achieve 9.
Hi! 😃😃I think you should try to use some advanced vocabulary like phrasal verbs and idioms. Then you will get 9 for sure!
From my point of view, I think new paint and carpet change is more needed than the new elevator. Although, the apartment also need a new elevator, the new paint and carpet change will give more healthy benefits.
First, some parts of the wall has its paints and bricks chipped off. Most times, there are dust from the chipped off particles that is unhealthy to inhale especially for the occupants that has respiratory problems. For example, my family and I always have to wear a nose mask due to the dusty atmospheric condition within the apartment.
Also, the second advantage of getting a new paint and carpet is the aesthetic value that will be added to the apartment. The wall looks dirty and the carpets are filthy-looking with dirt patches. Changing the paint will allow patching the cracks while beautifying the building as a whole. Also, if the carpet is changed, it will eliminate or drastically reduce the amount of dust released into the atmosphere during movements while also creating a healthy environment. For example, I had to take my daughter to the hospital and she was diagnosed with respiratory track infection. I am suspecting this is due to the amount of dirty air inhaled withing the apartment because she spend most of her time within the apartment.
From the above reasons, I will opt for a new paint and carpet as my most preferred choice. There are alternative to the elevator as the current one is still running and there is a staircase that can also be used. However, there is no alternative to the healthy condition of the apartment. This is my opinion as I will support whatever decision that is finally made.
Thank you for making my opinion count by giving me a chance to contribute in this matter.
Great job! 😃😃
but you lost points because you write more than 200 words
In my opinion, I would agree that T2 is harder. Even though the time and score setting of T1 and T2 is the same, T2 has several reasons more difficult than T1 in the test.
The first reason with T2 is lack of practice. Nowadays, we don't have lots of opportunities to provide the reason for the survey to explain why we made the decision by writing. Most people skip the "give a reason" when they take the survey by email, online, in person, or on phone.
The Second reason with T2 is that I don't have enough time. The ideas and opinions need time to organized. For example, when I start writing T2, I need to take 2 mins to make a decision first, and then costs 5 mins to bring up 2 reasons for my choice. Compare to T1, the same number of words can only use less time to finish. It makes me stressed due to the time problem.
Considering these reasons, I believe T2is harder than t1. Again, this my personal opinion, and I understand if people have different thoughts.
Thank you for giving me a chance to provide input on this issue,
I have just purchased your Book.
It is really helpful, thanks and keep up the good work!
Thanks so much! 😃😃
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I sent you some email and FB msg about my writing. If you have time, can go briefly check it over??
Thanks so much again!
Mark, assuming you are to take CELPIP, and you use your example here as your answer, what band are you gonna expect? I think you have a very simple answer, and I worry about the band we will get if we follow your example. Are we not suppose to use a more difficult way of writing?
Hi! 😃😃You might be right. It might be too simple! I'll try to make more videos with more advanced words.
Task 1
Hi Mark, thank you so much for providing such an educational lesson for everyone here. If you don’t mind me asking, example like yours in this video, what score would it be approximately?:)
Hi! 😃😃I think my example would be at least 9.
Hey, your video is useful. Here is my writing based on the topic in the video. Please feel free to take a look. Thanks!
In my opinion, I believe that having a new elevator is a better choice for our building. Even though a new paint and carpets are essential for living quality, I think to start with resident’s physical safety is a better option for now.
Firstly, I live at the 24 floors, and I cannot believe that the elevator is moving slow. It will be a big issue for all the residents to go to the work on time. In addition, the elevator makes a lot of noise during the movement. That terrified the children and it has a negative impact on our listening.
Next, the elevator we are using is quite dangerous. Few days ago, I was talking the elevator at the midnight, and it stopped for the reason unknown. I freaked out by the time, because everyone was sleeping and no one could hear me.
According to the reasons I have mentioned above, I believe that having a new elevator is a priority option for us. Whatever the final decision, I will respect it.
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Hi, is it (a better choice) or (The better choice)? my exam is in three days, I feel ready thanks to you and your material.
You can say either one. 😃
Good luck! 😃
Hi mark, can we use a beneficial instead in better choice!!!
Yes! :) But be careful. "More beneficial" and "more benefits" are a bit different.
in the first problem you wrote "it takes more than 5 minutes".and in the 2nd problem you wrote "stopped moving then it dropped"so where to use than and then, can u tell
Hi mark
I want to books but not in PDF so what I should I do?
Task 2 for me is easier because its based on my opnion. Unlike the task 1, I should be creative in generating the situation so that I could write a good and cohesive writing
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Hello! Is it still possible to buy your books?? Cheers!
In my opinion, I think I will choose new paint and carpets. Elevator would be a good choice for our apartment, but the paint and carpets are more useful for me.
The first reason for the new paint and carpets are really old. Everyone came to the apartment, the very first thing they will see are paint and carpets. They may feel not comfortable. Even though the furniture provided by the apartment is brand new for every new resident, the old nasty carpet makes people losing interests in our apartment.
The second reason is a little bit personal. I have been lived in the first floor for more than fives. It’s rarely for me to use the elevator. I understand that the elevator is slow and may impact residents a lot in morning rush hour. But I was lived in another apartment and a higher floor, and we had pretty good and new elevator. It still made me late in the busy morning. I don’t think a new elevator will change a lot. More elevator installed could help but for now it won't make a big difference.
Considering these reasons, I believe new paint and carpets would be a better choice. I hope you will collect enough surveys to make a good decisions.
Thanks
Great job! 😃😃
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Hii are provide any online classes?
In my opinion task 2 will be more crucial because you never know how to make a beginning sentence while task one you already have a draft to follow it from heading to salutation.
You're right! 😃😃