I love hearing my stories get narrated but I cringe when I see my own plot holes. Anyway, I just remembered that I never revealed Comet's name which is a big oopies on my part. Anyway, her name is--
@@itsJamesCaligo Oh! I have to check part 1 then. Sorry I missed out, haven't been much on You Tube because my illness. Still recovering. Will have a look. Thank you
No matter what story you read I’m going to be in line listening wishing this story was a true life movie 🎥 so I can get popcorn 🍿 and enjoy the movie 🎥 the threshold of evil is one of the greatest stories ever every single part
A lot of people don't know this, but the Aurora Borealis is very loud, it's not just lights! The interaction with the particles in our atmosphere makes a lot of strange and eerie noises
Exactly what I was thinking 😉👍 Damn do I love scp! Man, I swear…there are some amazingly original stories that these creepy pasta and scp authors come up with that are far and away better than most of the shit that Hollywood is making movies out of ffs!😅 it’s always more of the same nowadays.🤦♀️
Survival tips: - fill up bath tub and sinks with water before it becomes undrinkable. - count how many survivors - Search for weapons in the house, only give to the level headed people - do inventory on food and ration it out each day.
I do the newspaper route in my town. So I'm up at 2am driving around everymorning. I recently started listening to this channel I gotta say your narration is awesome. Keeps my imagination going.
Wow, what a difference the narrator makes. This exact story came out on Dr Creepen’s channel, around the same time as here. I started listening, but checked out after about 30 minutes, because I just couldn’t get into it. But for whatever reason (obviously the quality the narrator), I found it WAY more captivating on this channel.
OMG same. I remember thinking, this story sounds familiar, but why don’t i remember anything past 40 minutes of it? The emotion Viidith puts into his narrations is what makes them top notch quality
Just heard the other story with Sam, read the name and thought "this is it!" Listening now, probably will edit comment when done Omg I just realized what story this is! Its the beginning! I've listened to the other pieces but never heard the beginning. There is no happy ending here 😕
Vidith22...I Love Your Voice and Narration sexy lil daddy! You have helped me beyond words... My beloved son died in 2021 and YOU'RE VOICE helped to fill the silence so thank you so much, Sweetheart! Love always, Laura E.
I'm Still Here James & .. As the Story Continues to Come Together..!! I Love the Characters..!! I'm Enjoying Your Story & How It's Being Told.. Yöur 👾 From Ont, /🇨🇦
I love Japanese girls with green hair though I prefer purple. I'd say I can tell the difference too though if a Japanese and Vietnamese girl are standing next to each other I might make a jackass of myself. I have to say I'll take country over dubstep because at least the old school country singers tended to be raging psychos who definitely walk the walk. And Merle Haggard writes the most accurate songs about bars and being drunk I've ever heard. And everyone knows the earth is hollow. In conclusion I'm dying to hear the Shady Oaks story. Just the title is terrifying.
I have to say this is even better than I was expecting. A teen tribal meltdown during an apocalypse isn't what I was expecting but even better. Amazing how a single hair-sniffer can upend the entire social order. "Call this selfish but I had no intention of getting eaten today" was a great line. This whole thing was really well-written as well as produced. Though I think the author may hold adolescent courage and selflessness in higher regard than I do. Having a couple makes a man skeptical.
@@itsJamesCaligo It was great ! Incredibly imaginative. It got me thinking - meet the new boss, same as the old boss. Only a lot more caustic and gooey.
personally, you're one on the very few I really enjoy listening to. Creepy Mc pasta I like also, but his got that brogue going. But this guy got the old gumshoe sound to him. Comes from high test, very uncommon these days.
Bruh they could’ve gone back for his brother once they realized his house wasn’t there… especially in the pickup truck… “I wish my brother was still here; he was a driver” … dude, why not drive the few blocks back and pick him up lol, at least CHECK!!
I just scrolled through all the comments, and I'm definitely the only one that was thinking "how many bathrooms did that place have? I get they aren't digging the party but like...what if someone's gotta pee?" So I guess I'm making it obvious I didn't go to parties? Uh oh
You didn’t wanna go into a room labeled “Bathroom” or anything similar if it was a parents outta town party. You were gonna walk into a closet, a bunch of crap was gonna fall over you, a bunch of people doing things you don’t wanna see, etc Kids these days! Labeling a bathroom correctly... GEEZ-US!
Awesome story. The potential to continue this story on many levels (vantage points) while being true is something I'd listen to. Hope more to come of this. Either way good cliffhanger
Hahaha! Right Off!- I'm Jeff from Colorado. Hahha! Yup! I did leave though when I was Closing in on My 21st Birthday. January 4, 1987 When I heard the Supernatural Voice for the Third Time that Year-Leave Colorado or You Won't Live to see 21. Well Mo-Fo's! I packed my Little 1982 Toyota Pick up, In the Middle of a Blizzard that Had all Roads and Highways Closed! Left Town, Never Looking Back. You do the math, I've resided here in the Desert SW Since then. When You hear God's Voice- Absolutely Indescribable, but when You do Hear it- you KNOW it!
I feel bad for Comet, she died without saying her real name. Or maybe her name was indeed Comet, and she was messing with Jack. Anyway, it was a good story, the narration was flawless and gave life to all the characters.
The first two stories were really good. This one sounds like it's a mishmash of a 14 year old girls paranoia stemmed from too much reddit. The story doesn't move nearly as much as the stereotypes of people
It was written by a real 14 years old from the POV or a high school student. It was the purest form of a juvenille work. Like Lovecraft written for children by a teen.
@@victoriazero8869 I should have said something after continuing onto the next story. I realized when I went back to the same level of writing that it was indeed and actually written as a 14 year old.
I quite liked the first two in this story collection, but the quality dips in this one a lot. There's a fair bit of awkward writing in this story unfortunately. Too many blunt author opinion inserts and takes that just come off as clunky when mixed in with a narrative this poorly. Also, lines like 'Yes I know the difference' referring to the Asian girls eye shape, just come off as juvenile cringe. Fine narration. But I think I'll skip this one. *Edit - just discovered that the writer was actually 14. That does explain a lot. If you ever read this, keep at the craft, but consider cutting down on the 'I, the author, am smart and here's what I think' declarations as they never read well. Use allegory and metaphor to get your points across instead.
I like the story but the author writes people he dislikes into these 1 dimensional cartoon evil stereotypes that kind of ruins the energy of an otherwise ok story
I love hearing my stories get narrated but I cringe when I see my own plot holes. Anyway, I just remembered that I never revealed Comet's name which is a big oopies on my part. Anyway, her name is--
XD
Great story!!!
Great job James Caligo! Will wait for part 2. Thank you
@@ELKE- part two? No, Jack's story ends here
@@itsJamesCaligo
Oh! I have to check part 1 then. Sorry I missed out, haven't been much on You Tube because my illness. Still recovering. Will have a look. Thank you
The real tragedy is that Jack never knew Comet's real name
No matter what story you read I’m going to be in line listening wishing this story was a true life movie 🎥 so I can get popcorn 🍿 and enjoy the movie 🎥 the threshold of evil is one of the greatest stories ever every single part
Ah- Aurora Borealis!? At this time of year, at this time of day, in this part of the country, localized entirely within your kitchen!?
Tremendous. REALLY enjoyable in a bleak, hopeless sort of way!
A lot of people don't know this, but the Aurora Borealis is very loud, it's not just lights! The interaction with the particles in our atmosphere makes a lot of strange and eerie noises
I didn't know that so thanks for sharing!
Seriously, that sounds awesome!
The goo reminds me of When Day Breaks, but with rain instead of sunlight. It's nice to see this concept used in a very well written story.
Exactly what I was thinking 😉👍
Damn do I love scp!
Man, I swear…there are some amazingly original stories that these creepy pasta and scp authors come up with that are far and away better than most of the shit that Hollywood is making movies out of ffs!😅 it’s always more of the same nowadays.🤦♀️
Survival tips:
- fill up bath tub and sinks with water before it becomes undrinkable.
- count how many survivors
- Search for weapons in the house, only give to the level headed people
- do inventory on food and ration it out each day.
- Enforce the Burgundian system.
@@Reinhard_Erlik The system proposed by the Schutzstaffel and wanted to impose in France and Belgium in 1942-45?
I do the newspaper route in my town. So I'm up at 2am driving around everymorning. I recently started listening to this channel I gotta say your narration is awesome. Keeps my imagination going.
Another outstanding example of Caligo's work. Topped off with the narration of two two which again is unparalleled. Thank you very much.
It's criminal that you don't have more subs. You're definitely up there with all the current top notch narrators.
This was a great story! And you did an awesome performance Viidith (as always!) Thank you and to the writer
Wow, what a difference the narrator makes. This exact story came out on Dr Creepen’s channel, around the same time as here. I started listening, but checked out after about 30 minutes, because I just couldn’t get into it. But for whatever reason (obviously the quality the narrator), I found it WAY more captivating on this channel.
OMG same. I remember thinking, this story sounds familiar, but why don’t i remember anything past 40 minutes of it? The emotion Viidith puts into his narrations is what makes them top notch quality
Recently found this channel and listen before bed, the narration helps me sleep. Good content, at least, for the parts I’m awake too
kind of like Stephen King's 'The Mist' only with green slime
THANK YOU 😊! Can’t wait to listen to this while I relax and smoke a bowl! Hope everyone is having a 🔥 evening!
x Luna
How was the bowl?
@@elypowell6797
Quite fantastic actually! Going to do it again tonight except I’m using my gong 😉
@@wildpuffalumps LOL you go for it!
* I didn't know you could use a gong to smoke dope but whateva floats ya boat girl!
@@elypowell6797
Well since YT is so “sensitive” I didn’t want my comment to get deleted. But yeah a gong with a B 😁
@@wildpuffalumps Oh yes I forgot about the nannies sitting up at youtoob headquarters censoring our every word.
Fleshy blinking pancake was so gruesome and nasty
Had to come back and watch all these i didnt know the newer ones were part of the same series
Absolutely wow great story by the author and great narration. So glad I stumbled upon this channel a few weeks ago
Just heard the other story with Sam, read the name and thought "this is it!" Listening now, probably will edit comment when done
Omg I just realized what story this is! Its the beginning! I've listened to the other pieces but never heard the beginning. There is no happy ending here 😕
I listened to this while at work, i must say this was amazing I enjoy the whole thing.
Same here it got me through the last hour of work. His narrations are one of the best I've come across
Now I'm curious to hear what country dub step sounds like.
I'm loving the visual of a conglomerated flesh puddle with gasping mouths and wandering, bobbing eyeballs peering up and around 😆
Wtf? I didn’t wanna lose comet!!!! Hoping she comes back
A long story,now I'm glad. Thank you 😍
"the girl appeared to be asian, which made me think she was japanese, and yes i know the difference" WHAT LMAO???
Amazing work man. One of the best channels I've found and I've been listening to these for years now.
Bro that was insane. Slightly reminds me of “the lost city of Korona”. That was an amazing story u should check it out
I have that under my favorite books playlist
@@dumpsterpsycho2894 kills me that the author decided to not write the novel
@@AG-en5y well that sucks
Same
Was able to subscribe today. This story is awesome!!
Vidith22...I Love Your Voice and Narration sexy lil daddy! You have helped me beyond words... My beloved son died in 2021 and YOU'RE VOICE helped to fill the silence so thank you so much, Sweetheart! Love always, Laura E.
I'm Still Here James & .. As the Story Continues to Come Together..!!
I Love the Characters..!!
I'm Enjoying Your Story & How It's Being Told.. Yöur 👾 From Ont, /🇨🇦
My man ! A creepy town with a mysterious malady. This is EXACTLY what I needed !
I love Japanese girls with green hair though I prefer purple. I'd say I can tell the difference too though if a Japanese and Vietnamese girl are standing next to each other I might make a jackass of myself.
I have to say I'll take country over dubstep because at least the old school country singers tended to be raging psychos who definitely walk the walk. And Merle Haggard writes the most accurate songs about bars and being drunk I've ever heard. And everyone knows the earth is hollow.
In conclusion I'm dying to hear the Shady Oaks story. Just the title is terrifying.
I have to say this is even better than I was expecting. A teen tribal meltdown during an apocalypse isn't what I was expecting but even better. Amazing how a single hair-sniffer can upend the entire social order.
"Call this selfish but I had no intention of getting eaten today" was a great line. This whole thing was really well-written as well as produced. Though I think the author may hold adolescent courage and selflessness in higher regard than I do. Having a couple makes a man skeptical.
@@teddydog6229 glad you enjoyed it
@@itsJamesCaligo It was great ! Incredibly imaginative. It got me thinking - meet the new boss, same as the old boss. Only a lot more caustic and gooey.
Great story thank you 🙏
personally, you're one on the very few I really enjoy listening to. Creepy Mc pasta I like also, but his got that brogue going. But this guy got the old gumshoe sound to him. Comes from high test, very uncommon these days.
Love this one from start to finish!
Bruh they could’ve gone back for his brother once they realized his house wasn’t there… especially in the pickup truck… “I wish my brother was still here; he was a driver” … dude, why not drive the few blocks back and pick him up lol, at least CHECK!!
we need this in a movie
Man........oh..........man........ . Another multi-verse or whatever that was lol, I would not want to be in lol..... damn....... 👊💀🍻
The one thing i have an issue with is, what was comets name ? Or was it comment .....nevermind
Aurora Borealis? At this time of year, at this time of day, in this part of the country, this far South?
I just scrolled through all the comments, and I'm definitely the only one that was thinking "how many bathrooms did that place have? I get they aren't digging the party but like...what if someone's gotta pee?" So I guess I'm making it obvious I didn't go to parties? Uh oh
You didn’t wanna go into a room labeled “Bathroom” or anything similar if it was a parents outta town party. You were gonna walk into a closet, a bunch of crap was gonna fall over you, a bunch of people doing things you don’t wanna see, etc
Kids these days! Labeling a bathroom correctly... GEEZ-US!
Awesome story. The potential to continue this story on many levels (vantage points) while being true is something I'd listen to.
Hope more to come of this. Either way good cliffhanger
Listening to this you forget Jack is a kid. He doesn't know how to drive and he hasn't kissed a girl yet. Him being so negative is understandable.
🎧 Absolutely no idea 💡 how magnificent and great Narrations 🎧 are 🔌 plugged into my ears 👂🏽 blow 🌬 🚬 🥦 💤 😴 🛏️ 🎭 bedtime ohhh yeah ♥ awesome 🎧
Only 21 mins in and it is getting very very interesting
Thank you very much.
Wow this was amazing 😍
Right on Right on 👍💯👍
❤
Relistening, after finishing the v1 compilation. ;)
I’m right there with Jeff if I was driving. If people wanna focus on something other than the road the get off the f*k-n road!
LOL I'm from Dundalk Maryland.
Need my viidith fix
I loved it.
Wait a minute…Timothy stild had running water… should have hosed car clean😊
Hahaha! Right Off!- I'm Jeff from Colorado. Hahha! Yup!
I did leave though when I was Closing in on My 21st Birthday.
January 4, 1987 When I heard the Supernatural Voice for the Third Time that Year-Leave Colorado or You Won't Live to see 21.
Well Mo-Fo's! I packed my Little 1982 Toyota Pick up, In the Middle of a Blizzard that Had all Roads and Highways Closed! Left Town, Never Looking Back.
You do the math, I've resided here in the Desert SW Since then.
When You hear God's Voice- Absolutely Indescribable, but when You do Hear it- you KNOW it!
Nah but they DID see it coming
Watched it fall right onto their faces
Thats why they died
Let's go!
LES GOOOOO
Fake news. Never heard of this town. And i been all over Colorado.
Loved it!!!!!!
Glad my guy didn’t slander tech house instead of dubstep 😂😂😂
Your voice is reminiscent of Mar Vietor
Is there a part ll ?
its a series on his homepage.
@@thumperpaul155 I really appriceate the help! Tho I am old fashioned& do'nt know how to get a homepage.
@@jayceec3539 Click on his name it takes you to HIS homepage.
You should really make a anime to these🔥🔥🔥
10:38 i know right so stupid 😅
I feel bad for Comet, she died without saying her real name. Or maybe her name was indeed Comet, and she was messing with Jack. Anyway, it was a good story, the narration was flawless and gave life to all the characters.
The first two stories were really good. This one sounds like it's a mishmash of a 14 year old girls paranoia stemmed from too much reddit. The story doesn't move nearly as much as the stereotypes of people
thank goodness it wasn't just me who noticed. the writing definitely takes a noticeable dip.
yeah this one is much more poorly written, but the author actually was 14 at the time, which explains a lot lol
It was written by a real 14 years old from the POV or a high school student. It was the purest form of a juvenille work. Like Lovecraft written for children by a teen.
@@victoriazero8869 I should have said something after continuing onto the next story. I realized when I went back to the same level of writing that it was indeed and actually written as a 14 year old.
I quite liked the first two in this story collection, but the quality dips in this one a lot. There's a fair bit of awkward writing in this story unfortunately. Too many blunt author opinion inserts and takes that just come off as clunky when mixed in with a narrative this poorly.
Also, lines like 'Yes I know the difference' referring to the Asian girls eye shape, just come off as juvenile cringe.
Fine narration. But I think I'll skip this one.
*Edit - just discovered that the writer was actually 14. That does explain a lot. If you ever read this, keep at the craft, but consider cutting down on the 'I, the author, am smart and here's what I think' declarations as they never read well. Use allegory and metaphor to get your points across instead.
Im never going to Colorado 😅
The protag genuinely sounds like a Redditor based on his inner thoughts and interactions.
lmao of course its dundalk
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1:13:00
.... wait... wait... suspension of disbelief lost.... did he turn down a green eyed Asian girl... ... ... Lo Pan would not approve... ...
#76-✅👍🏻
Eyy!! Maryland!
12/ 10 made me bust
I saw Iron Mike Sharp wrestle in warmer Colorado in the '80s Long Live Canada's greatest athlete opa
48:17
2 HOURS. SPLOOSH
Ooooooooooooo
Hello
Been enjoying these, but this one was difficult to get through, major incel vibes
Yay I got to be one hundred likes today.
The political views of the writer couldn't be any more clear lmao. Good story though
I like the story but the author writes people he dislikes into these 1 dimensional cartoon evil stereotypes that kind of ruins the energy of an otherwise ok story
It was written by a real 14 years old from the POV or a high school student. It was very much juvenille work.
damn, kinda wanna hit up comet ngl 😌😌😌😌
Boi, she’s a puddle now
Not to be rude, but this isn't very good story. Narrator tried hard but writing is very much on young teen maturity level
CCP approves
You've said this before. What does CCP Stand for?
@@jesmoon3588 I assume: Chinese Communist Party?
I mean, they would probably love to melt all of China into one collective flesh blob.
@@jesmoon3588 Chinese communist party
15:43
They caught ßiden sniffing the heads of sleeping girls lol
Vidith22...
I Love You! Don't Stop! 🫶🥰😎😁