This isn't my best story but believe me, this character is essential for Henry and Samantha in the future. Is he friend, or foe? I don't know, I don't plan ahead lol. But I'll try to write a less cliche story, I promise :D
What other stories is this connected to? Edit: I actually just did the smart thing and followed the link to Reddit. I didn't realize you wrote those other stories. I'll have to go back to relisten so I can start to put the pieces together. Thanks for sharing your work. I, like so many others, use these to relax and unwind. I really appreciate it.
@@itsJamesCaligo dont take this the wrong way but some of your stories (I've listened to all the videos in your playlist) come across as, sometimes, sounding like something a 16-19 year old would write. Like the way you handle romance for example, you over do it and it gives off this self-insert vibe. The love triangle thing you had going in the story about the town that fell into another reality is an example To be clear! I actually think you're an amazing writer overall and thoroughly enjoyed this expanded universe you've been building. You do a great job pacing the story, something that a lot of other writers struggle with in the creepypasta scene. So dont take this as a dig at you, just some constructive criticism. I know, I know, being accused of sounding like a teenager is harsh but I really do think you have talent and dont mean it in a mean way lol
Sleeping with these stories playing in the background may not be medically sound, but gottdamb, the trips are unreal. I have been listening to this channel for what feels like 12 hrs (on/off). Thanks!
Houses, roads, villages of ill-repute push my buttons and get my moon juices bubbling like nobody's business. Thank you for the steady diet of great stories wonderfully narrated. Your Southern Belle was especially well done.
Duuddee!!!! The plot thickens! How fantastic! The depth these veins feed. Wow interlocking amazing stories The war is primed as the history construct's itself, Tarantino style! I'm absolutely abolished!, The gobsmacked, throttled and speechless. Well done! Well done! Viidith22 Your voice, tone and flawless articulation. Gives these incredible stories an inexhaustible life, seriously. Living breathing physical tangible life. I'm not kidding when this world finally jumps up its own ass at least like to announce the announcers of announcers to usher in the grim Armageddon that is the existence of soon to be man. Lol "Ladies and gentlemen it's with great honor I introduced to you! " The Narrator of end times, The Devil's advocate, The umpire of evil, The sultan of sin, The shadow of the Unclean the one the only! Viidith! Viidith: " KNEEL BEFORE ME! "suddenly in a sound only the present could describe accurately". 4 billion sinners at full unwavering attention all at once collapsed. As if orchestrated by my time itself, the sound of 4 billion people's legs snapping splintering complete evisceration and with a roar of unimaginable collective profaning misery. The earth shook and quaked finally with a global commonality, titled understanding! With a look of seething lust Viidith cast his gaze upon the carnage that his will alone birthed, as a well dressed man slowly walked up behind, and with a smile and incision of arrogance places his hand upon Viidiths encompassing shoulders and whispers " Thanks Mate I'll Take It From Here".
How does this town deal with police and medical emergencies at night? What about ppl who work night shifts, especially at the hospital or police stations? A dude on a bike is useless. Is a woman in labor just supposed to give birth on a bathroom floor if she goes into labor at night? Why do ppl even live here!? 😅
Uuuuuummmmm, I'm pretty sure it is a fictional place.... Economics and infrastructure dont really matter when you can turn the corner and dissappear into another dimension which may or may not have nighttime driving ( or hospitals and police stations).
Way too many commercial breaks in your videos man. One or 2 fine i get it but I'm only half way through and iv had 4 ads. Not a great choice for a narration channel. It completely breaks immersion
@fire rises ..then maybe 🤔 u should become a patron or so like I do n share his videos☝🏽💜 he can’t control the number of commercials! The more subscribers..less commercials and Skip them doesn’t take but a few seconds 🤦🏼♀️
UA-cam red. Get the subscription and never have ads again. It's worth it. Especially if you use these to fall asleep. Those ads are how he makes money and thus can afford to spend his time making more videos.
This isn't my best story but believe me, this character is essential for Henry and Samantha in the future. Is he friend, or foe? I don't know, I don't plan ahead lol. But I'll try to write a less cliche story, I promise :D
What other stories is this connected to?
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I actually just did the smart thing and followed the link to Reddit. I didn't realize you wrote those other stories. I'll have to go back to relisten so I can start to put the pieces together. Thanks for sharing your work. I, like so many others, use these to relax and unwind. I really appreciate it.
@@yourfriendcaspian I made a playlist of all the books that have been narrated on my YT channel too. Let me know if you see it
Mind if I ask how old you are?
@@fire_rises 27 why?
@@itsJamesCaligo dont take this the wrong way but some of your stories (I've listened to all the videos in your playlist) come across as, sometimes, sounding like something a 16-19 year old would write. Like the way you handle romance for example, you over do it and it gives off this self-insert vibe. The love triangle thing you had going in the story about the town that fell into another reality is an example
To be clear! I actually think you're an amazing writer overall and thoroughly enjoyed this expanded universe you've been building. You do a great job pacing the story, something that a lot of other writers struggle with in the creepypasta scene.
So dont take this as a dig at you, just some constructive criticism. I know, I know, being accused of sounding like a teenager is harsh but I really do think you have talent and dont mean it in a mean way lol
Sleeping with these stories playing in the background may not be medically sound, but gottdamb, the trips are unreal. I have been listening to this channel for what feels like 12 hrs (on/off). Thanks!
Atmospheric intro, was so awestruck that I don't even know, what got me hooked! 🤔🤗🤑
Wow, what a great story look forward to hearing the rest of them
I am enjoying these stories so much! Thank you very much!
A Blessed Holy Saturday to you Vidith22!
Poor fella, just how do you find a primordial and get him to the other one. Great story!
A great story to go along with a great narrator, that is always a excellent combination!
Houses, roads, villages of ill-repute push my buttons and get my moon juices bubbling like nobody's business. Thank you for the steady diet of great stories wonderfully narrated. Your Southern Belle was especially well done.
Cool story I hope there’s a continuation !!!
Another brilliant story with the best narration.
Ah yes, another road story. One of my favorite subjects as so much story can be teased out from a road venue.
Would LOVE to hear more!!!
this story made me turn on the notification bell!!!! i need more!
Thoroughly enjoyed this one. I look forward to more!
Just hit that like button! Thank you for make my nights better. Everything is great with your lovely voice! ♡♡
Great story and narration.
I want to hear more of this one!
Awesome! Love your story narrations!
Great story Viidith 👍💯👍
You have one hell of an imagination brother
Thanks :D
Reminds me of the road from Running with the Devil
you have a criminally low amount of subscribers.. i’m sure that will change soon. keep doing what you’re doing, brotato.
Very well done! I hope the author writes more to this story.
Viidith has already read 4 other stories that are part of this story.
@@itsJamesCaligo I’ll have to look through the archives! Wonderful writing sir!! Thank you.
@@anniereddj the books are Threshold of Evil, Vanishing City of Warmire, and Dead City under a Sinkhole
holyCow! keep me away from that town, please!! Too too scary !!
Damn, good story 👏👏👏
Yo Viidith! I'm keeping you on my radar.
Good one! Looking forward to part two. :)
Duuddee!!!!
The plot thickens!
How fantastic! The depth these veins feed.
Wow interlocking amazing stories
The war is primed as the history construct's itself, Tarantino style!
I'm absolutely abolished!, The gobsmacked, throttled and speechless. Well done! Well done!
Viidith22 Your voice, tone and flawless articulation. Gives these incredible stories an inexhaustible life, seriously.
Living breathing physical tangible life.
I'm not kidding when this world finally jumps up its own ass at least like to announce the announcers of announcers to usher in the grim Armageddon that is the existence of soon to be man. Lol
"Ladies and gentlemen it's with great honor I introduced to you! "
The Narrator of end times, The Devil's advocate, The umpire of evil, The sultan of sin, The shadow of the Unclean the one the only!
Viidith!
Viidith: " KNEEL BEFORE ME!
"suddenly in a sound only the present could describe accurately".
4 billion sinners at full unwavering attention all at once collapsed.
As if orchestrated by my time itself, the sound of 4 billion people's legs snapping splintering complete evisceration and with a roar of unimaginable collective profaning misery.
The earth shook and quaked finally with a global commonality, titled understanding!
With a look of seething lust Viidith cast his gaze upon the carnage that his will alone birthed, as a well dressed man slowly walked up behind, and with a smile and incision of arrogance places his hand upon Viidiths encompassing shoulders and whispers " Thanks Mate I'll Take It From Here".
Oh nice one! bringing old scratch himself from " Devil's Due " . Well done sir!
Laaaaa mmme
You don’t make sense
Viidith really is awesome but your trying too hard mate. Trying to take some spotlight w your lame comment.
Please keep these going I want it to be a 20 part series. Please tell me you will be releasing part 6 soon
Yay Viidith 🥰🥰🥰
Hell with my twisted mind i can help you come up with more parts to this
What do you have in mind? Your TWISTED mind?
@@TheJemstar28 Ah ha I see LOL.
Probably not a good idea to feed whatever that being is anything that might make it more powerful, but his back's to a wall
Always read the fine print.
please say theres more to this story
hold up... This is just the premise from the show "FROM"
What's that show?
@@itsJamesCaligo it’s literally called FROM, it’s on Epix
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Also if you need another voice I'm here and got recording equipment and all
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How does this town deal with police and medical emergencies at night? What about ppl who work night shifts, especially at the hospital or police stations? A dude on a bike is useless. Is a woman in labor just supposed to give birth on a bathroom floor if she goes into labor at night? Why do ppl even live here!? 😅
I mean, MC said a salt mine was making people money
@@dumpsterpsycho2894 yeah but other places can make ppl money...
Uuuuuummmmm, I'm pretty sure it is a fictional place.... Economics and infrastructure dont really matter when you can turn the corner and dissappear into another dimension which may or may not have nighttime driving ( or hospitals and police stations).
yesssss I'm upvote 666
Was good story, right up until 9:25. "Hey Bike cop! Go face off against this car?"🤦 What? Even?
Wonderful Narration though :)
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Illinois is so dull and boring...no wonder so many creepy stories are made with the setting as Illinois gotta have something to do lol
Couldn't agree more 😏
That's the case for most of the flat states, tbh. People just happen to remember that Illinois still exists because it has Chicago lol
Ohio just asked to hold its beer…….
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You do great readings. My two cents - You could choose better stories with better writing to spend your talents on.
Way too many commercial breaks in your videos man. One or 2 fine i get it but I'm only half way through and iv had 4 ads. Not a great choice for a narration channel. It completely breaks immersion
@fire rises ..then maybe 🤔 u should become a patron or so like I do n share his videos☝🏽💜 he can’t control the number of commercials! The more subscribers..less commercials and Skip them doesn’t take but a few seconds 🤦🏼♀️
UA-cam red. Get the subscription and never have ads again. It's worth it. Especially if you use these to fall asleep. Those ads are how he makes money and thus can afford to spend his time making more videos.
@@joieztube creators can control the number of ads they want to play. But yeah you're right I should support him, he deserves more patrons and subs
@@fire_rises yeah 🙌🏽💜🫶🏼💜👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽
@@Alhazzred01 ooh 😮 I never knew that! Thanks for the 411♥️☝🏽♥️
Had to quit this story half way through,sorry. Boring