Second Year Nursing Student UK: Assignment Writing | How to Improve Your Grade

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  • @talesofastudentnurse4801
    @talesofastudentnurse4801 3 роки тому +3

    I used this video to prompt my writing when I was writing my RPL to get a place on a postgraduate Nursing course, here I am a year later watching again to prepare to write my first assignment for the course. If this isn't proof that you guys should follow Claire's tips I don't know what is! thank you Claire! :) x

  • @katielouise6828
    @katielouise6828 7 місяців тому +1

    Thank you! just changed all of my ands to linking words and its much better! youre amazing ❤

  • @ellie-maesmith7628
    @ellie-maesmith7628 3 роки тому +2

    I am a first year childrens nurse and this advice has helped me so much thank you so much for making this!!!

    • @toneyomondi7444
      @toneyomondi7444 3 роки тому

      Hello I can help you with your nursing assignments contact me

  • @tashax8841
    @tashax8841 6 років тому +11

    Great advice 😊 When I did my degree I liked to do lots of research on the topic the essay would be on and pull out pieces I thought would be good for references then once I had enough (we were always told 10% for references, so one for every 100 words) I would number them in a logical order to use and it helped me so much to structure my essays and to get over writers block! Obviously not going to work for everyone but thought it may help someone. 😊

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  6 років тому

      Natasha Hewlett That’s good advice Natasha!!! Thank you! ☺️ x

  • @Blueseacupvessel
    @Blueseacupvessel 3 роки тому +1

    You are so kind to share these tips with us. It shows you have great empathy for others and I bet you are such a caring nurse. This video helped me a lot....Thanks!👍🤗💞

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  3 роки тому

      Aw thank you so much 🥺❤️ hope you have a wonderful day xx

  • @Miss_Princewill
    @Miss_Princewill 4 роки тому +4

    Thank you for making this video. I’m going to apply all these tips hopefully they help me in my next essay. ❤️

  • @filmonsereke6671
    @filmonsereke6671 3 роки тому +1

    always helpful Claire, motivated by your video (you can do it) to start Nursing and am in second year now

  • @karinvertue103
    @karinvertue103 3 роки тому +2

    This is excellent thank you.

  • @TheVikbal
    @TheVikbal 3 роки тому

    I love that this was so clear. I am a nurse of 15 years and doing my PGEC, my head was spinning from the complexity I have put on things. Thank you 🙏

  • @angelnisha2586
    @angelnisha2586 6 років тому +6

    Thank you for your tips and advice.. Im actually at the end of my second year studying mental health nursing and still struggling with assignments. Will use your tips and advice 😊😊
    P.s you explain things so clearly

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  6 років тому

      Mubarikun Nisha Peerally Thank you so much! :) it’s always hard to write them I know! I find once I get going I can’t stop haha. X

  • @ashasyam6019
    @ashasyam6019 2 роки тому

    Hi watching your videos , joined a new university student apprehensive about assignment

  • @NurseCorinne
    @NurseCorinne 6 років тому +2

    Brilliant advice on writing! I'm gonna be using a few of these tips for my next assignment haha!

  • @audreyhepburn1977
    @audreyhepburn1977 6 років тому +1

    Ths is great informaton and I will saving this video to watch again when I start first year Nursing in March next year!

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  6 років тому

      ajah1977 I hope so! Fingers crossed it helps you out :-)

  • @AMEE330
    @AMEE330 5 років тому +1

    thank you for sharing this blog! I am studying access course and starting my first assignment. and your tips are very helpful

    • @josephmusumbu8310
      @josephmusumbu8310 4 роки тому

      You may experience difficulties in handling your Nursing, Business and Maths assignments please check on me for help. musumbujoseph@yahoo.com
      Thank you.

  • @bernhardzabel159
    @bernhardzabel159 4 роки тому +1

    Really helpful, thanks Claire!

  • @jackiendoro8196
    @jackiendoro8196 4 роки тому +1

    Great advice you saved my life

    • @josephmusumbu8310
      @josephmusumbu8310 4 роки тому

      You may experience difficulties in handling your Nursing, Business and Maths assignments please check on me for help. musumbujoseph@yahoo.com
      Thank you.

  • @alphasvlog2066
    @alphasvlog2066 Рік тому

    Thank you Claire, I am in first year Nursing at BCU and I haven’t yet passed any assignment. I hope this will help me

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  Рік тому

      Aw I hope this helps! It should help with your first assignment hopefully 🤞🏻🥰
      I hope you’re getting on ok x

  • @SezFrancis1
    @SezFrancis1 6 років тому +3

    Claire, these are brilliant tips; I think these can be good for other Uni/College courses too (plus writing novels ✍️). You definitely are so clever. 🙂🦋✨

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  6 років тому

      Sez Francis Thank you so much Sez! :-) I’m really not clever haha. It’s just little things that I was told or I had from feedback that might help others ☺️ passing it forward haha. 🌻✨ xox

  • @emmemm1187
    @emmemm1187 4 роки тому +2

    This is soo helpful! Im a bcu adult nursing student 🙋🏻‍♀️ (1st year) Your videos are so helpful and uplifting. Thank you!

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  4 роки тому

      Jade Kingston yay!! Amazing! I hope you’re doing ok with everything going on at the minute xx

    • @kellysue2480
      @kellysue2480 4 роки тому

      Hi, if you need further help I can always help you

  • @YardyBritishfamily
    @YardyBritishfamily Рік тому

    I have one coming up tomorrow 🙏🏽

  • @dariusmarin4372
    @dariusmarin4372 2 роки тому

    That was really helpful , such a cute voice too.

  • @OrlandoChin
    @OrlandoChin 5 років тому +1

    Dear Claire Amazing blog about critical writing. I am second year student nursing and also english is my second language. I am on middle of my essays and is not easy.

    • @josephmusumbu8310
      @josephmusumbu8310 4 роки тому

      You may experience difficulties in handling your Nursing, Business and Maths assignments please check on me for help. musumbujoseph@yahoo.com
      Thank you.

  • @majestyrichness7685
    @majestyrichness7685 2 роки тому

    Fab vid🔥🔥🤣🤣nice tips...👍🏽👍🏽

  • @battyxyz
    @battyxyz 4 роки тому +1

    Thank you so much, this is so helpful.

  • @emmadunstan7389
    @emmadunstan7389 5 років тому +1

    amazing advice THANKYOU!!

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  5 років тому

      Emma Dunstan Thank you! I hope you’re having a good weekend :)

  • @pavitrabal3556
    @pavitrabal3556 4 роки тому +1

    Thank you !!!

  • @juliemagambo6472
    @juliemagambo6472 Рік тому +1

    Hi Claire, I have just watched your UA-cam video on second year nursing student UK:assignments writing| how to improve your grade and I want to know how would I layout the pro’s and cons for example of an infected wound dressing what type of wound dressing to use would I exactly write a pro of gauze/cloth dressing would be it’s cheap whereas a con would be it can act as a source of infection if not changed regularly or how would I write it to include the pro’s and con’s words please? and how do I search for journals, evidence based practice and research papers? and can I use google websites for the pro’s and con’s for example of different types of wound dressing or is it better not to use google websites and use books, journals, evidence based practice and research papers?

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  Рік тому +1

      You will learn how to write assignments and search when you start university. Don’t worry too much about this!
      It depends on what your assignment brief tells you to do and how to write it to how you will physically write it.
      For this example I used with wound care dressings, it was a written assignment. So the layout was an assignment. There was nothing else added to that.
      You have to go and find the most up to date research on what wound dressing works best for what type of wound and write about it. My assignment was years ago and will be out of date now. So you’re better looking yourself to find this :) but only if you ever have an assignment on it. There’s no point looking now if you don’t have the assignment for it yet. It will be pointless :(
      There’s a number of different search engines you can use for research that your university will advise also.
      • Cochrane
      •CINAHL
      • Your uni library itself
      For example. But also journals. There will be journals for most things! There is the wound journal you can get info from. You just have to research yourself when the time is right :) don’t stress right now about this 💜 x

    • @juliemagambo6472
      @juliemagambo6472 Рік тому

      @@ClaireCarmichael Thank you for your response Claire and you did not answer one of my questions because I asked how would I word the pro’s and con’s would I exactly put the pro is or the con is for critical analysis?

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  Рік тому

      @@juliemagambo6472 I did answer. Please read again 🥰 thank you

  • @marlenajasiniecka1093
    @marlenajasiniecka1093 3 роки тому +3

    Hi, can you please advise what websites, journal, other sources of evidence you used mostly to find appropriate research for assignments? Thank you :)

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  3 роки тому +1

      A mix: CINAHL, Cochrane library, uni library, google scholar, journals like: BMJ, Sage, Elsevier. Just look everywhere! Haha x

    • @marlenajasiniecka1093
      @marlenajasiniecka1093 3 роки тому

      @@ClaireCarmichael Thanks a lot, great job in here :):)

  • @anthoniaotaniyenarigbe797
    @anthoniaotaniyenarigbe797 6 років тому +1

    Thank u just what I needed 👌🏾

  • @hui-lingchen3676
    @hui-lingchen3676 5 років тому +1

    How to write an educational article in nursing?

  • @Jenny-jones24
    @Jenny-jones24 2 роки тому

    Can you help me how can I get information about the models snd theory regarding smoking in public health

  • @khadijahabdelillah9006
    @khadijahabdelillah9006 6 років тому +1

    thank you so much you have explained everything brilliantly lol

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  6 років тому

      khadijah abdelillah Thank you! I hope so 🙈 anything that will help everyone :-)

  • @renbaia
    @renbaia 4 роки тому +1

    I failed my first two exams because my writing wasn’t really clear my choice of words were poor as well as english bot being my first language and i don’t really have anyone to proof read my work so i always just went with my gut and what i thought was good . Im scared to fail my first year but this motivated me a lot so when i get my grade again after i re submit i will upadate this! and i hope i do pass this time. thank youuu

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  4 роки тому

      giggles aw sorry to hear that! Fingers crossed for you! :) go to your personal development department if you have one? They can check things over for you too xx

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      @machukaizoh8905 4 роки тому

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    • @Miss_Princewill
      @Miss_Princewill 4 роки тому +1

      @@machukaizoh8905 hi, can you also proofread my work🥺🙏🏾 I need to get my writing to a level 5 and I’m really struggling.

    • @machukaizoh8905
      @machukaizoh8905 4 роки тому

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  • @josiahamabogha6939
    @josiahamabogha6939 3 роки тому

    Any advice on using case studies to write an essay

  • @OrlandoChin
    @OrlandoChin 5 років тому +1

    Claire
    some of the links does not work, such as the Harvard Referencing, the facebook page.

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  5 років тому

      Hi Orlando, thanks for letting me know, sorry about that! I have just changed the link, see if that one works? :)

  • @sonatashinome4672
    @sonatashinome4672 6 років тому +2

    884th Subscriber here!
    I was getting 40/50s I managed to to get 60/70 but I’m pretty inconsistent.
    I’m happy I’ve got some literature to improve and videos to like this go break it down a notch.
    Sometimes examples and clarity from a fellow student is simpler than advise from a professional, well you know as long as the student is well-informed 😂😂

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  6 років тому

      Sonata Shinome Thank you :)
      That’s great you’ve gone to 60/70!! Well done you 🙌🏻🎉🎉 that’s amazing. 70% is classed as a first ❤️ x

  • @charlenebennett8953
    @charlenebennett8953 4 роки тому +1

    Claire, do you think it matters what edition book you buy? For example, a 12th edition A&P book instead of the current 13th edition? The 12th was published 2014 so it is 6 years old. Any advice would be great x

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  4 роки тому +1

      Charlene Bennett No it doesn’t matter at all :) anatomy and physiology will be the same :) they might just add extra bits or images to newer additions. But it will still teach you what you need either way 🥰 xx

  • @Pearl-de2li
    @Pearl-de2li 5 років тому +1

    Hello, do you do tutoring for nursing students ?
    Thanks

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  5 років тому

      Pearl 0901 Hey! I don’t 🙈 sorry! X

    • @josephmusumbu8310
      @josephmusumbu8310 4 роки тому

      You may experience difficulties in handling your Nursing, Business and Maths assignments please check on me for help. musumbujoseph@yahoo.com
      Thank you.

    • @machukaizoh8905
      @machukaizoh8905 4 роки тому

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  • @nounanouna1291
    @nounanouna1291 5 років тому +1

    Anyone explain for me what mean assignment please ! 😢😢

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  5 років тому +1

      Nouna Nouna assignment is written work you do at university. They will give you a topic to discuss and write about :) that’s an assignment.

  • @oluolu1980
    @oluolu1980 3 роки тому

    Hello please where can I get Journal or Articles for nursing Assignment

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  3 роки тому

      They are online, your university should explain this :)
      There’s different websites you use to find them: CINAHL, Cochrane, etc x

  • @Theresajaneappiah
    @Theresajaneappiah 2 роки тому

    Second year and I only finding this here. Thank you for this but does every journal article be RCT research?
    2. Does it have to only be in the uk?

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  2 роки тому

      No they don’t :) that can just be articles as well to support what you’re saying. Our uni preferred UK. But it’s ok to use other countries as well if it relevant here in uk too. X

  • @khateraahmadi9835
    @khateraahmadi9835 2 роки тому

    Critiquly writing my biggest concern 😟

  • @magnificentbalochistan5762
    @magnificentbalochistan5762 4 роки тому +1

    Great😍

  • @aleenaashraf6539
    @aleenaashraf6539 4 роки тому +1

    I am just thinking about how to be critical in my assignment.
    My essay is to do a critical discussion of the aeitiology and management of long-term conditions from a biopsycosocial prespective.
    I have chosen obesity and we must use the biopsycosocial model to critically discuss the evidence associated with the development and management of obeisty. My essay is 2000 words long. Please let me know of some of your ideas of where can I write pros and cons and create a conclusion. Would it be written somewhere at the end? Thanks

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  3 роки тому

      If you have a look around you’ll find LOADS of research on obesity. It’s one of the leading conditions right now ☺️
      Throughout your whole essay you should be writing pros and cons and then the conclusion at the end yes :) look into everything: social factors, food factors, mental health , motivation, exercise, self esteem, the fact they are higher risk of other conditions now too etc there’s loads you can look at for this. ☺️

    • @aleenaashraf6539
      @aleenaashraf6539 3 роки тому

      @@ClaireCarmichael thank you very much.

  • @nounanouna1291
    @nounanouna1291 5 років тому +1

    Hi .i am from algeria so please again use simple words for i understand it .

    • @joannap2784
      @joannap2784 5 років тому +1

      Nouna Nouna She could not have put it in more plain words.

    • @josephmusumbu8310
      @josephmusumbu8310 4 роки тому

      You may experience difficulties in handling your Nursing, Business and Maths assignments please check on me for help. musumbujoseph@yahoo.com
      Thank you.