Ok little note I don’t see many people pointing out- during the park scene, near the end, the girl actually caught the two kissing right before the level cleared screen began. Idk what exactly this means but I think this girl isn’t actually jealous, since I’m not entirely sure she’s looking at the guy. She looks like she’s concerned for the girl almost
the POV actually is guy, he think glass girl is ugly so use Amy to "done with her", but you can see glass girl not really interest that guy(keeping distracted) , in the end she been like she is offended.
Oooh. Good twist. You think you’re playing from the girl’s POV, but then you realize it’s the guy, and the between-level “diary” bits are just his justification for being an asshole. Well played.
I like how in the first kissing sequence shows both of them with their hands on the chair and Amy looks fine , but as the game carries on the guy is shown putting his hands on her and grabbing her while they kiss and Amy looks unsure/disturbed as if she is being forced to do this or she doesnt feel comfortable anymore And i also realized that the text is written in a way that makes it seem like its the guy telling her these things Eg: "This is her chance to be cool" = "This is *your* chance to be cool" "She needs to prove to everyone that she can kiss him better than any girl" = "You need to prove to everyone that you can kiss me better than any girl" During the party Amy looks extremely uncomfortable and she even gets a warning notification above her head and the boy immediately pulls her in after , leading her to punch him Also note that this boy is a senior (practically an adult) and Amy is clearly a freshman If this isnt grooming idk what this is 😅
I like how amy's story is like a less extreme case than lacey's, but still terrifing to be in the both situations. I wanna hug that girls but i'm scared of make them feel worst
Not sure if anyone noticed this but he gets more touchy as the levels progressed! Like in the class, there was no hands on the girl. But in the park (?) or at lunch, his hand was at her shoulder/neck! And at the party, his hands here on her knee/thigh and back/butt.
You captured the aesthetic of these kinds of flash games perfectly, good job. Also I like that the glitches are caused by the protagonist standing up for herself and fighting back against her discomfort while still technically “winning”, rather than falling prey to the situation around her. You don’t tend to see that as much in as you should in horror, yk?
Dear Freshman girl, Stay away from that senior guy. You’re not mature for your age, he doesn’t like you, and you’re not the only one he’s talking to. He’s grooming you.
I remember my freshman year English teacher had this cute idea for us to write advice messages for the incoming freshmen next year. All the girls, except for me, wrote: "Don't date a senior" because my mother warned me to stay away from senior boys. She was right I'm glad I listened.
@@TheRealRusty2006 it’s basically how to explain it most of the time those guys have girls on the side or freshman girls because there’s easy as they pretty much believe anything you say. I was actually catcall by a two seniors once going to gym which makes it worse because I have trauma from the past with men.
They call the other girl he's talking to "ugly", just because she's wearing glasses xD. Yet she actually has beautiful eyes, killer makeup, nice clothes+hair and a good figure.
I like that this handled a similar message to Lacey’s Wardrobe (unwanted attention from a creepy guy) without being too similar to Lacey’s Games like some of the digital horror I’ve seen pop up recently has been
Ok i noticed a few cool details like 1. During the second "quest", at the end she loses the highlights in her eyes, and at the party and at the end when she feels gross the shine is gone, showing her emotions "dying" 2. With each mission she looks more uncomfortable and the boy is more touchy 3. At the 3rd "cutscene" before the party the girl looks at the boy concerned 4. Also the boys.girlfriend for sure saw him kiss the girl as she frowns at the end of that "quest" 5. The closed door frame is just a photo (or a realistic drawinv but eh)
I think no one noticed that when you put the subtitles explains a little of this flash game and how you created this and some fun facts, that’s really cool! If the creator is reading this. You are really talented keep it up!
i noticed how the game makes us think the girl looked sad in the second one because the boy was talking to the glasses girl, when in reality, she was just uncomfortable with him (well what i think). i also noticed that in the same stage, when the player nears the end, the glasses girl gives a concerned look, either for jealousy or concern for the main girl being harassed/assaulted.
I noticed something before the stage 3 part. During the in between parts, in the background we get to see the girl and the guy looking at each other lovingly. Then before it cuts to stage 3 the girl’s face slowly becomes more and more uncomfortable/uneasy (like at first the girl is smiling like usual then her face becomes slightly uneasy and lastly she furrows her eyebrows before the in between part finally ends). I think it’s a way to show how slowly the girl is starting to feel uncomfortable and it becomes more visible since it’s not only seen in the gameplay but it’s slowly creeping into the in between parts as well. Imo it’s a rlly good detail (along with the other small details there rlly fun to actually look out for and point out), this is also a pretty good and unique lost flash game video! I’m mainly used to seeing makeover/dress up flash games so as someone who actually played these weird kissing flash games as a kid, this feels refreshing and interesting to actually watch
he gets way more touchy each level, he looks more angry and forceful while she looks scared. great detail, and very sad story. i love this bc it isnt super unrealistic and touches on smth that actually happens to people.
I think he is a pedo. Because she said “Now I can tackle the rest of my high school.” She also stated this is her first love but she mentioned that he is a SENIOR.
As a person who was groomed/SA’d by a senior when I was a freshmen, I’m so glad that your bringing this to light, and I wish I was as brave as Amy to say no :((
This was GREAT! The story and artstyle is simple, yet accurate(?) to the experience of SA itself. Love the choice of going for the analog horror-esque aesthetic too, I really thought this was an actual flash game. Hats off to you for the great effort with putting this whole thing together
i like how you tackled a subject that is both horrible but extremely common. it lends the horror a sense of relatability that makes it hit much closer to home despite the subject matter not being as extreme as many other entries into this recent genre
I'm mostly surprised nobody thought of this before, since kissing flash games were very common on Girls Go Games and had very creepy implications to it But I hope more people will do something with this concept, since there's a lot you can do with it!
At 1:07 if you go rlly slow you can see she looks terrified to kiss him. I rlly like how this game showed this as her fear got more and more closer to her as the rounds went on! Great game love this!
I really love how you did this, gives me a lot of girlsgogames nostalgia (both from playing it and watching UA-camrs play it)! Also I love how you turned one of these kissing games into an incel simulator (tbh I’ve always had a weird, uncomfortable feeling abt them)
At 1:30 - 1:35, during the diary bits, Amy seems to have a change in expression as the next round is about to begin. I also noticed that in the park round, during one of the frames of Amy being grabbed to be kissed, Amy has a sort of concerned expression while the senior has a flirty expression. Another thing about the park round is how every time the senior is about to kiss Amy, her eye shine disappears.
And in the park as well, she seems to be clutching her skirt, like she suppressing an emotion (maybe feeling gross, uncomfortable) but releasing it through that action :(
I love this one. Haven’t seen someone make a lost kissing game yet so this was very original and creative. Makes me wonder tho since he’s a senior and 17 or 18 if she was a bit younger, she gets increasingly more uncomfy with him in her expressions so idk I don’t really feel bad for him at the end when she hits him because he may have been 18 taking a young teen to a dangerous party to make out with her, so I feel like she had enough and did it out of self defense- his hand was on her leg and she was probably feeling in danger. I think it totally captures how freshmen girls think seniors are cool and hot and at first don’t realize how weird the senior is or that they’re being taken advantage of, and as the relationship progresses they notice they were being grossly used and honestly good for her smacking him lol
Hello! Great video. I have some critiques about if you want to read them: If you're going for the the old amateur flash game artstyle from like 2007 you should draw the assets using a mouse, no pad. The line thickness is right though, thinner lines apparently set it closer to like 2013, this I heard from someone who knows a lot more than me. Some of the effects you have, like the rainbow blur and other style distortions at the climax, while exciting, seem like they would fit better in an analog video setting, I've never seen flash able to smoothly run a large blur effect or gradients.
I'm not the best when it comes to effects and editing, but you're right about the rainbow blur effects not really matching the flash aesthetic, I should have probably chopped the frames up around that point..; I'll have to keep this in mind if I do another video like this Thank you for your input, I'll be sure to improve in the near future!
This is so good! At first I thought this wanna gonna be a Lacey games copy. But this is amazing! I'm actually going through something exactly like this IRL, so you did a really good job with the whole theme!
I noticed that in the scene right before the party, the Amy looks at the text and then seem disturbed and I also saw after the “you won!” screen, it’s Amy saying “I feel gross..”
Even before it glitched out I like the detail of the girl looking more and more saddened and uncomfortable with him kissing her and his hand grabbing her by her neck or shoulder area like he’s enforcing it onto her. Amazing video!
Hey, I know I'm a bit late, but I did see this when it came out and I honestly like this more and more every time I think about it . While I do enjoy the Lacey games, I feel like this is better because it doesn't need to resort to cheap and easy scares like a lot of digital horror does. There aren't any scary faces, loud noises, or gore. No, the situation is already scary mainly because of how realistic and common it is. A young girl is pressured and groomed by an older guy into doing things she doesn't want to so he can use her as his play thing is a very real situation that's horrifying on its own. Having the guy turn into a monster and then scream into the screen would just detract from the issue at hand. My hat is off to you for handling this subject with such respect and nuance! Bravo!
I love how the background becomes realistic at the end once she closes the bedroom door. And i also overall love the idea of the video! It's so gross how some ppl find seniors and freshman dating normal, and you portrayed how creepy it actually is super well :)
I thought this would go so different, like she’d be assaulting the dude when he has a gf and making HIM feel uncomfortable, but no, it’s him, and I realized it after seeing the comments
This is why i don't want to have relationships... Really follows the trend of old flash games, The glitching was a bit unnecessary however, but really like it! I can see the effort put into it.
2:02 for the people who can’t see it it says “this could be her Chance to have real highschool love” “Cute senior asked Amy to lunch it’s a date!!” “Ugh some ugly girl who thinks she’s his girlfriend won’t stop talking to him!” I didn’t catch all of the text but this is the stuff I caught
i got creeped out as soon as i noticed his hand on her throat, i love these creepy fake flash games! as another person who got the ick from kissing games (huh, i'm ace now) this really strikes a chord
I really like this! It's unsettling but it also conveys a good message while never being graphic or disturbing. It feels genuine, if anything. Good job!
I liked this a lot, it looks so old and something I would watch when I was younger, I like how it portrays her feeling uncomfortable with what is happening in the park and party scenes, idk if anyone noticed Amy’s expression when it was talking about the party was a good detail to portray she didn’t feel comfy whatsoever, I like the dark turn it took as well, it was very interesting to show a story of assault I’m glad this animation/game was made, it’s always good to raise awareness ^^
I don’t really see many people commenting on this, but during the last part, the boy puts his hand on Amy’s thigh, possibly showing a toxic relationship between Amy and the boy before Amy slaps him. It also seems like the boy is using Amy for popularity, kissing her while people are watching.
This is so good!!! I just want to give Amy a hug after she says she feels gross, because it's absolutely not her fault. I hope the girl from the park scene and her become friends.
1:34 Amy looks nervous. Just for a split second. I also like how at the end, she says "I feel gross." I'd feel gross too! I've never been in that situation, but my heart goes out to everyone who has.
At 2:21 if you look carefully, Amy’s shoulders are bare. She wears a jacket, which covers her shoulders. This may be one of the reasons why she feels gross (if ykyk)…
GODDAMN that third segment was really good!! sent actual chills & was really unexpected to see Amy stand up for herself... EDIT: unsure if this was intentional but: the end scene where Amy went through that drawn door, shut it behind & it switched to a more realistic door? that i think adds to how real this situation can be if that makes sense.
Wow, this is really amazing! I like the style you made here. I love the story you told and how sad it is. The small details about the girl getting uncomfortable slowly is interesting. I hope you make more cause I'm addicted to these types of vids (Thanks Lacey lol)
This is very relatable for me. I am a freshman and at the beginning of the year I dated a senior. I thought it was okay but he kept making me uncomfortable and asking weird things. I broke up and ghosted him after he tried taking off my clothes. I think that this game shows an important topic that needs to be addressed. The art is also great!
1:49 again, not sure if this was intentional, but I like how you keep placing his hand in different places while they’re kissing, like here he’s putting a hand on her thigh area. Not to mention how each time they kiss the girl looks more worried and this guy looks more and more relaxed
The one at the party and park, I think he held her neck. But then after he held her leg, she got even more uncomfortable and punched him. Thank you for being aware of assault.
THE END WHERE THE ROOM BECAME REAL The tiny details through-out the different levels was really good! Like how Amy gets more uncomfortable or how the popular boy starts to touch Amy more like how it starts by them just kissing normally but the popular boy touching Amy's thigh at the last level
I'm really glad I decided to watch this. It's a twist that was well appreciated, and made me think back a bit. Great subtitles btw, loved seeing the thought process.
Ohgosh :((( this was so sad and unsettling And about what you said in the captions, a senior dating a freshman is certainly NOT ok, at least imo. In my school, I've seen that type of "relationship " and it was certainly very weird and uncomfortable, there's too much of an age difference, it's different stages in life
I went into this with a “oh it’s just a Lacy’s Games Type video” and it’s actually really interesting. Poor girl, I hope we can see some more of these games soon! :)
I’m going into high school soon and I was already promising myself that I’d be super careful to not get into a situation like this but after reading the comments and watching this I’ll be even more careful to look out for small red flag clues
I would like to point out on level 2 the boy is holding her neck and I think it's because she's trying to pull away and if u pause it at the right time u can see how terrified she is
Anyone notice how in the 2nd scene he began to get more touchier and GRABBED HER NECK??? plus he seems more aggressive with each level, and idk if im looking into it too much, but in the little diary entry bits, theyre always in the same pose, and since its probably from the boy's perspective, he's a tad bit delusional, and he seems to look past her concerns
At 1:32 you can see amy smiling at the boy, but then her expression falters and she realises what she got herself into. It's really quick but it just shows how many girls are being pressured into stuff they don't want to do because it's 'cool' and when they realize what they're doing is wrong it's too late
@@danceingspelledwrongok I just realized that what I said sounded like an insult ;-; Sorry about that lol I didn’t mean it to offend you, I just thought it was nostalgic ;w;
did u guys also notice on the senior party level that before it started she looked up and her face changed.. as if she could read the text and didn’t want to do the kissing game anymore and how she could’ve been uncomfortable during the park scene 😧😧
Ok little note I don’t see many people pointing out- during the park scene, near the end, the girl actually caught the two kissing right before the level cleared screen began. Idk what exactly this means but I think this girl isn’t actually jealous, since I’m not entirely sure she’s looking at the guy. She looks like she’s concerned for the girl almost
Keen eye you got!
@@evelynnjones5442 I wouldn't say she's sad because he cheated.
@@danceingspelledwrong ok
the POV actually is guy, he think glass girl is ugly so use Amy to "done with her", but you can see glass girl not really interest that guy(keeping distracted) , in the end she been like she is offended.
YOO I SAW THAT TOO LETS GO IM NOT HALLUCINATING
Oooh. Good twist. You think you’re playing from the girl’s POV, but then you realize it’s the guy, and the between-level “diary” bits are just his justification for being an asshole. Well played.
:)
omg i didnt even catch that
Ohhhh that makes a whole lot sense now
Omg, gotta rewatch with that in mind
Wow I never noticed that
The detail of Amy's expression getting more uncomfortable between each level is a nice touch. Made it a lot more unsettling.
*sad touching to the game is what u mean?*
Also he gets more and more mean in his body language.
i thought she was getting jealous lol
@@zaynewannabe ape detected
@@-flowey-pw6bdHEY WE HAVE THE SAME PFP
I like how in the first kissing sequence shows both of them with their hands on the chair and Amy looks fine , but as the game carries on the guy is shown putting his hands on her and grabbing her while they kiss and Amy looks unsure/disturbed as if she is being forced to do this or she doesnt feel comfortable anymore
And i also realized that the text is written in a way that makes it seem like its the guy telling her these things
Eg: "This is her chance to be cool" = "This is *your* chance to be cool"
"She needs to prove to everyone that she can kiss him better than any girl" = "You need to prove to everyone that you can kiss me better than any girl"
During the party Amy looks extremely uncomfortable and she even gets a warning notification above her head and the boy immediately pulls her in after , leading her to punch him
Also note that this boy is a senior (practically an adult) and Amy is clearly a freshman
If this isnt grooming idk what this is 😅
It's really ick and you can also see he's the instigator but I'm glad she was able to stand up for herself
@@shreksmistress yeah, especially since most are too scared in these situations
I genuinely thought it was a toxic yandere relationship,that the girl got really jealous or smth. But thanks for clearing that up
@@Rosetintedwater np!!
Yea that is just straight up grooming.
I like how amy's story is like a less extreme case than lacey's, but still terrifing to be in the both situations. I wanna hug that girls but i'm scared of make them feel worst
maybe just a high five for now
What is Lacey's story? I don't believe I've heard of that. Sorry UA-cam recommended page brought me here
@@dontasklongstory is an web-horror inspired in 2010 flash games, the aesthetic is pretty cute but the plot itself is dark as heck
@@dontasklongstory look up “Lacey games” by ghosttundra and you’ll find them
@@dontasklongstorylaceys refers to Laceys Flash Games !
Not sure if anyone noticed this but he gets more touchy as the levels progressed! Like in the class, there was no hands on the girl. But in the park (?) or at lunch, his hand was at her shoulder/neck! And at the party, his hands here on her knee/thigh and back/butt.
I noticed the in the final level
so icky ☹️
Not to mention she slowly looks more and more sad/worried
Ohhhh now I get it
I DIDNT NOTICE
You captured the aesthetic of these kinds of flash games perfectly, good job.
Also I like that the glitches are caused by the protagonist standing up for herself and fighting back against her discomfort while still technically “winning”, rather than falling prey to the situation around her. You don’t tend to see that as much in as you should in horror, yk?
Dear Freshman girl,
Stay away from that senior guy. You’re not mature for your age, he doesn’t like you, and you’re not the only one he’s talking to. He’s grooming you.
I remember my freshman year English teacher had this cute idea for us to write advice messages for the incoming freshmen next year. All the girls, except for me, wrote: "Don't date a senior" because my mother warned me to stay away from senior boys. She was right I'm glad I listened.
@@madisonyomans9004I'm so confused because I'm generally just unaware. Why not date seniors?
@@TheRealRusty2006 it’s basically how to explain it most of the time those guys have girls on the side or freshman girls because there’s easy as they pretty much believe anything you say.
I was actually catcall by a two seniors once going to gym which makes it worse because I have trauma from the past with men.
@@madisonyomans9004 Aww. I'm so sorry.
They call the other girl he's talking to "ugly", just because she's wearing glasses xD. Yet she actually has beautiful eyes, killer makeup, nice clothes+hair and a good figure.
Just like the games from that time "help this ugly girl became beautiful!" And the "ugly" girl just wear glasses lol
Pink eyes > Blue eyes any day😂
FOREALSIES
@@muzakkiwangjoo93 Boy, sorry to break it to you but blue eyes are better.
I hate how people think women with glasses is ugly, same with braces, they are all for health reasons yet no one likes to acknowledge that.
I like that this handled a similar message to Lacey’s Wardrobe (unwanted attention from a creepy guy) without being too similar to Lacey’s Games like some of the digital horror I’ve seen pop up recently has been
1:33 this scene where she broke her original thinking pose to actually concerned and scared, creeped me. Good job on this, for sure.
this might be annoying but I’m ur 80th liker
@@mariandsayoriplushreal it's alright!!
Ok i noticed a few cool details like
1. During the second "quest", at the end she loses the highlights in her eyes, and at the party and at the end when she feels gross the shine is gone, showing her emotions "dying"
2. With each mission she looks more uncomfortable and the boy is more touchy
3. At the 3rd "cutscene" before the party the girl looks at the boy concerned
4. Also the boys.girlfriend for sure saw him kiss the girl as she frowns at the end of that "quest"
5. The closed door frame is just a photo (or a realistic drawinv but eh)
I think no one noticed that when you put the subtitles explains a little of this flash game and how you created this and some fun facts, that’s really cool! If the creator is reading this. You are really talented keep it up!
That last line really cut deep. My heart goes out to all the girls who have felt that pain of being used like that.
@Radioactive_feversay that at your moms funeral
@@Nuclear_texting888 Male detected
“Don’t f*cking touch me.”
Material girl.
i noticed how the game makes us think the girl looked sad in the second one because the boy was talking to the glasses girl, when in reality, she was just uncomfortable with him (well what i think). i also noticed that in the same stage, when the player nears the end, the glasses girl gives a concerned look, either for jealousy or concern for the main girl being harassed/assaulted.
I genuinely had no idea whether this was a real flash game or horror video, so you did a fantastic job emulating it!
1:07 Oh shit I just realized he’s holding into her neck, this poor girl 😭
I noticed something before the stage 3 part. During the in between parts, in the background we get to see the girl and the guy looking at each other lovingly. Then before it cuts to stage 3 the girl’s face slowly becomes more and more uncomfortable/uneasy (like at first the girl is smiling like usual then her face becomes slightly uneasy and lastly she furrows her eyebrows before the in between part finally ends). I think it’s a way to show how slowly the girl is starting to feel uncomfortable and it becomes more visible since it’s not only seen in the gameplay but it’s slowly creeping into the in between parts as well. Imo it’s a rlly good detail (along with the other small details there rlly fun to actually look out for and point out), this is also a pretty good and unique lost flash game video! I’m mainly used to seeing makeover/dress up flash games so as someone who actually played these weird kissing flash games as a kid, this feels refreshing and interesting to actually watch
Wow you got a real keen eye! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
he gets way more touchy each level, he looks more angry and forceful while she looks scared. great detail, and very sad story. i love this bc it isnt super unrealistic and touches on smth that actually happens to people.
ngl this seems accurate and creative when it comes to PSA and typical 2000s girls' games blended. looks amazing! keep making those content
I love this. It's a good example of how SA *can* be used correctly in analog horror. You did great, can't wait to see more!
YES
Analog horror? I doubted it a lot
I love that she stood up to him! Even if it’s fiction, I love when victims can stand up for themselves!
I've never wanted to apologize to a character so much. I am so sorry Amy. I hope we see more of her.
Omg, new old flash game Lacey's type
Yess
I think he is a pedo. Because she said “Now I can tackle the rest of my high school.” She also stated this is her first love but she mentioned that he is a SENIOR.
As a person who was groomed/SA’d by a senior when I was a freshmen, I’m so glad that your bringing this to light, and I wish I was as brave as Amy to say no :((
I'm sorry that happened to you, I hope things are going well now that you're away from them
@@danceingspelledwrong oh this was years ago! I’m much better now! Amazing work ♥️
@@Loki-bv7cx I'm glad to hear that! Have a great day!
This was GREAT! The story and artstyle is simple, yet accurate(?) to the experience of SA itself. Love the choice of going for the analog horror-esque aesthetic too, I really thought this was an actual flash game. Hats off to you for the great effort with putting this whole thing together
i like how you tackled a subject that is both horrible but extremely common. it lends the horror a sense of relatability that makes it hit much closer to home despite the subject matter not being as extreme as many other entries into this recent genre
I'm mostly surprised nobody thought of this before, since kissing flash games were very common on Girls Go Games and had very creepy implications to it
But I hope more people will do something with this concept, since there's a lot you can do with it!
1:16 when you realize the girl on the side looks “sassy” and looks like a stereotypical mean girl but she ends up looking like a normal girl
At 1:07 if you go rlly slow you can see she looks terrified to kiss him. I rlly like how this game showed this as her fear got more and more closer to her as the rounds went on! Great game love this!
I really love how you did this, gives me a lot of girlsgogames nostalgia (both from playing it and watching UA-camrs play it)! Also I love how you turned one of these kissing games into an incel simulator (tbh I’ve always had a weird, uncomfortable feeling abt them)
Oh my gosh, I'm falling in love with these old flash game type horror videos, and I think this is wonderful, hope you do more videos like these!
At 1:30 - 1:35, during the diary bits, Amy seems to have a change in expression as the next round is about to begin. I also noticed that in the park round, during one of the frames of Amy being grabbed to be kissed, Amy has a sort of concerned expression while the senior has a flirty expression. Another thing about the park round is how every time the senior is about to kiss Amy, her eye shine disappears.
And in the park as well, she seems to be clutching her skirt, like she suppressing an emotion (maybe feeling gross, uncomfortable) but releasing it through that action :(
I'm glad it didn't turn out as horribly extreme as lacey. Good for her!
I love this one. Haven’t seen someone make a lost kissing game yet so this was very original and creative. Makes me wonder tho since he’s a senior and 17 or 18 if she was a bit younger, she gets increasingly more uncomfy with him in her expressions so idk I don’t really feel bad for him at the end when she hits him because he may have been 18 taking a young teen to a dangerous party to make out with her, so I feel like she had enough and did it out of self defense- his hand was on her leg and she was probably feeling in danger. I think it totally captures how freshmen girls think seniors are cool and hot and at first don’t realize how weird the senior is or that they’re being taken advantage of, and as the relationship progresses they notice they were being grossly used and honestly good for her smacking him lol
Hello! Great video.
I have some critiques about if you want to read them:
If you're going for the the old amateur flash game artstyle from like 2007 you should draw the assets using a mouse, no pad. The line thickness is right though, thinner lines apparently set it closer to like 2013, this I heard from someone who knows a lot more than me.
Some of the effects you have, like the rainbow blur and other style distortions at the climax, while exciting, seem like they would fit better in an analog video setting, I've never seen flash able to smoothly run a large blur effect or gradients.
I'm not the best when it comes to effects and editing, but you're right about the rainbow blur effects not really matching the flash aesthetic, I should have probably chopped the frames up around that point..; I'll have to keep this in mind if I do another video like this
Thank you for your input, I'll be sure to improve in the near future!
This is so good! At first I thought this wanna gonna be a Lacey games copy. But this is amazing! I'm actually going through something exactly like this IRL, so you did a really good job with the whole theme!
I noticed that in the scene right before the party, the Amy looks at the text and then seem disturbed
and I also saw after the “you won!” screen, it’s Amy saying “I feel gross..”
Poor Amy. I’m glad she was able to stand up for herself, though…
1:14 omg he’s literally grabbing her neck 😭 this is actually so well thought out I love it
Even before it glitched out I like the detail of the girl looking more and more saddened and uncomfortable with him kissing her and his hand grabbing her by her neck or shoulder area like he’s enforcing it onto her. Amazing video!
Hey, I know I'm a bit late, but I did see this when it came out and I honestly like this more and more every time I think about it . While I do enjoy the Lacey games, I feel like this is better because it doesn't need to resort to cheap and easy scares like a lot of digital horror does.
There aren't any scary faces, loud noises, or gore. No, the situation is already scary mainly because of how realistic and common it is. A young girl is pressured and groomed by an older guy into doing things she doesn't want to so he can use her as his play thing is a very real situation that's horrifying on its own. Having the guy turn into a monster and then scream into the screen would just detract from the issue at hand.
My hat is off to you for handling this subject with such respect and nuance! Bravo!
I love how the background becomes realistic at the end once she closes the bedroom door. And i also overall love the idea of the video! It's so gross how some ppl find seniors and freshman dating normal, and you portrayed how creepy it actually is super well :)
I thought this would go so different, like she’d be assaulting the dude when he has a gf and making HIM feel uncomfortable, but no, it’s him, and I realized it after seeing the comments
.. that would be an interesting twist
FR THO THATS HOW I THOUGHT THE STORY WOULD GO BEFORE SEEING THE ENTIRE VIDEO AND COMMENTS
SAME, I hardly see anyone talking about how boys can be harassed too, but I liked the idea
This is why i don't want to have relationships...
Really follows the trend of old flash games, The glitching was a bit unnecessary however, but really like it! I can see the effort put into it.
Yeah looking back, the glitching was really not needed.. seems a bit too cliche with the digital horror genre
But thank you :)
2:02 for the people who can’t see it it says “this could be her Chance to have real highschool love”
“Cute senior asked Amy to lunch it’s a date!!”
“Ugh some ugly girl who thinks she’s his girlfriend won’t stop talking to him!”
I didn’t catch all of the text but this is the stuff I caught
1:54 Daily reminder, Stand up for urself!
All you had to do was ask if she wanted a kiss, dude.
i got creeped out as soon as i noticed his hand on her throat, i love these creepy fake flash games! as another person who got the ick from kissing games (huh, i'm ace now) this really strikes a chord
I really like this! It's unsettling but it also conveys a good message while never being graphic or disturbing. It feels genuine, if anything. Good job!
I liked this a lot, it looks so old and something I would watch when I was younger, I like how it portrays her feeling uncomfortable with what is happening in the park and party scenes, idk if anyone noticed Amy’s expression when it was talking about the party was a good detail to portray she didn’t feel comfy whatsoever, I like the dark turn it took as well, it was very interesting to show a story of assault I’m glad this animation/game was made, it’s always good to raise awareness ^^
I love the punch scene, as it immediately takes you off guard of how sudden, abrupt and loud it is.
I don’t really see many people commenting on this, but during the last part, the boy puts his hand on Amy’s thigh, possibly showing a toxic relationship between Amy and the boy before Amy slaps him. It also seems like the boy is using Amy for popularity, kissing her while people are watching.
This is so good!!! I just want to give Amy a hug after she says she feels gross, because it's absolutely not her fault. I hope the girl from the park scene and her become friends.
as soon as i saw the word senior i knew something messed up was about to happen
quick thing here
if you didn’t know when Amy was invited to the senior party her expression changed.
clip for proof 1:32
that intro sounds exactly like 2005 flash game intros would, shoddy tts and all
props to you
1:34 Amy looks nervous. Just for a split second.
I also like how at the end, she says "I feel gross." I'd feel gross too! I've never been in that situation, but my heart goes out to everyone who has.
At 2:21 if you look carefully, Amy’s shoulders are bare. She wears a jacket, which covers her shoulders. This may be one of the reasons why she feels gross (if ykyk)…
I’m pretty sure that’s her chest???
I noticed something, the more she kisses the guy, the more discomfort I noticed in facial expressions.
God dude I hope you make more of these
I plan to, but they'll take awhile :P
GODDAMN that third segment was really good!! sent actual chills & was really unexpected to see Amy stand up for herself...
EDIT: unsure if this was intentional but: the end scene where Amy went through that drawn door, shut it behind & it switched to a more realistic door? that i think adds to how real this situation can be if that makes sense.
Intentional. I'm glad you liked it :)
Wow, this is really amazing! I like the style you made here. I love the story you told and how sad it is. The small details about the girl getting uncomfortable slowly is interesting. I hope you make more cause I'm addicted to these types of vids (Thanks Lacey lol)
1:30 NAHH LOOK AT HER FACE I FEEL SO BAD 😭
This is very relatable for me. I am a freshman and at the beginning of the year I dated a senior. I thought it was okay but he kept making me uncomfortable and asking weird things. I broke up and ghosted him after he tried taking off my clothes. I think that this game shows an important topic that needs to be addressed. The art is also great!
I'm sorry you had to go through that, I hope everything is okay now!
@@danceingspelledwrong thanks I’m doing better!
1:25 I just noticed he’s holding her by the neck?!
the “i feel gross” hits very close to home, this whole video is a great peice of art.
1:49 again, not sure if this was intentional, but I like how you keep placing his hand in different places while they’re kissing, like here he’s putting a hand on her thigh area. Not to mention how each time they kiss the girl looks more worried and this guy looks more and more relaxed
Intentional.
dang, I love the foreshadowing and plot twist! plus you captured the whole vibe of these games rly well, great vid!
The one at the party and park, I think he held her neck. But then after he held her leg, she got even more uncomfortable and punched him.
Thank you for being aware of assault.
THE END WHERE THE ROOM BECAME REAL
The tiny details through-out the different levels was really good!
Like how Amy gets more uncomfortable or how the popular boy starts to touch Amy more like how it starts by them just kissing normally but the popular boy touching Amy's thigh at the last level
this is kinda unrealistic for a 2000s flash game but, +2 for an effort
I love the little detail of her looking more and more alarmed and insecure, this is so AMAZINGGG
I'm really glad I decided to watch this. It's a twist that was well appreciated, and made me think back a bit. Great subtitles btw, loved seeing the thought process.
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH OMG
ur artstyle is so cute!
Ohgosh :((( this was so sad and unsettling
And about what you said in the captions, a senior dating a freshman is certainly NOT ok, at least imo.
In my school, I've seen that type of "relationship " and it was certainly very weird and uncomfortable, there's too much of an age difference, it's different stages in life
THE WAY I STARTED YELLING AT THE SCREEN WHEN I SAW HIS HAND ON HER NECK, GET OFF OF HERRR
I went into this with a “oh it’s just a Lacy’s Games Type video” and it’s actually really interesting. Poor girl, I hope we can see some more of these games soon! :)
pls i loved this flash game growing up. you did so well, this is incredibly creative
“Bimbyfungirl” ok who tf decided to name that 💀💀
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I Thought The Girl Was Gonna Be The Assaulter Tbh
That.. would be an interesting twist
@@danceingspelledwrongwill you make a story with that twist someday? i mean, if haven't done that already lol
this is really excellently executed!!!!!! simple but uncomfortable... perfect for a game/vid like this
Ooo id love too see more stuff from you 😮 this was genuinely uncomfortable and the subtle changes where great 👍
I’m not a fan of kissing games as well, but I love the animation and I feel really bad for Amy there, I hope Amy is doing okay
This feels like a actual flash game the hell
I’m going into high school soon and I was already promising myself that I’d be super careful to not get into a situation like this but after reading the comments and watching this I’ll be even more careful to look out for small red flag clues
that punch actually caught me off guard oh my god
Wow, I believe is Flash Game normal for Girls, Great Job🎉
this is the video that got me into the lost flash game horror videos
This reminds me a lot of the Lacey games. Very well made.
we're all exploring girlhood trauma thanks to lacey huh
Yeah boi
High school seniors when little girls:
Is it just me or did amys eyes just lost the light in her eyes at 1:21
An
I would like to point out on level 2 the boy is holding her neck and I think it's because she's trying to pull away and if u pause it at the right time u can see how terrified she is
Anyone notice how in the 2nd scene he began to get more touchier and GRABBED HER NECK??? plus he seems more aggressive with each level, and idk if im looking into it too much, but in the little diary entry bits, theyre always in the same pose, and since its probably from the boy's perspective, he's a tad bit delusional, and he seems to look past her concerns
At 1:32 you can see amy smiling at the boy, but then her expression falters and she realises what she got herself into. It's really quick but it just shows how many girls are being pressured into stuff they don't want to do because it's 'cool' and when they realize what they're doing is wrong it's too late
i LOVEE how she punched his eye😭
ok does anyone else remember when we all used to draw like this-
You could say it's terrible :D
@@danceingspelledwrongit’s not terrible, it’s just kinda hilarious :>
@@danceingspelledwrongok I just realized that what I said sounded like an insult ;-;
Sorry about that lol
I didn’t mean it to offend you, I just thought it was nostalgic ;w;
@@TheHolidayCritic nah you're good man
did u guys also notice on the senior party level that before it started she looked up and her face changed.. as if she could read the text and didn’t want to do the kissing game anymore and how she could’ve been uncomfortable during the park scene 😧😧