Chihayafuru AMV ~ Taichi Won't Give Up ~ Chihaya x Taichi

Taichi will not give up.A work in progress, please offer any opinions for improvement. Specific problem areas would be nice to know, thanks!
Video is non-profit, fan-made, and all music and animations are credited.
Song - I Won't Give Up by Jason Mraz
Anime - Chihayafuru ちはやふる
Characters - Ayase Chihaya, Mashima Taichi
Chihayafuru belongs to: Yuki Suetsugu, Be Love, and Kodansha.
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