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  • @canvas4708
    @canvas4708  9 місяців тому +47

    Heya Guys! I just wanted to say that most of this won't be canonically accurate so pls treat this as a fanfiction or alternate universe thing for Warrior Cats - I wouldn't want to cause confusion about the main plot, anyways here's my OC's story:
    CHAPTER 1
    Fallowspeckle's nose twitched in the morning dew, sunlight dappling her pelt. It had been 10 moons since her littermate Mara died and things still didn't feel like they were looking up. At least NewLeaf was dawning over the horizon, she couldn't bare another frigid, LeafBare night falling asleep alone on an empty stomach with grief hovering above her head, haunting her dreams as she slept. The morning patrol seemed promising, but the Snowdrops had barely begun to reach their full bloom and prey was still painfully scarce.
    Fallow's eyes widened, catching on to a squirrel nibbling into a nut in the nearby branch of an oak tree. Her ears pressed against her head and her claws outstretched and ready, the young she-cat fired her way up the tree's trunk up towards the prey. Splinters of bark flew through the air as Fallowspeckle raced up the tree, her heart sinking when the disoriented ball of maroon fur noticed her and scampered away just when it was a whisker away from her grasp, soon disappearing into the deeper thicket of the tree.
    Fallowspeckle sighed, catching her breath back when she leaped onto the branch the squirrel had perched on just seconds before. Her weakness from LeafBare was still affecting her hunting, and not just her. Prey had gotten the upper hand all of early NewLeaf, and after such dreadful blizzards, the Clan needed to regain their strength more than ever.
    All of a sudden, a crying howl caught onto Fallowspeckle's attentive ears. It was a *dog's* howl, more than one dog to be precise. Fallowspeckle's hackles rose, her entire pelt bristled as she clung on with all four limbs onto the tree branch, her eyes scanning the forest floor for any sign of movement.
    Not to her surprise, a pack of large, wild dogs that looked like some mix of different hound breeds soon appeared beneath her tree, sniffling around at the ground, slobber slinking down from their gobs. Just when the dogs seemed like they were leaving, Fallowspeckle lost her grip on the branch, helplessly slipping from her perch towards the dogs.
    Her hind legs dangling in front of the dogs who by now had turned all of their hyperactive aggression towards her, Fallowspeckle gripped on to the branch with her forepaws with all her might but she knew that within a span of short moments she'd either fall or the dogs would pluck her from the tree themselves. They were already nearing her with each terrifying, slobber-coated leap, their open jaws ready to mangle every part of her body. Just as she took another breath, she slipped, falling down towards the ground. Fallowspeckle slammed her eyes shut, bracing herself for the agony of jaws soon closing in around her.
    Teeth, jaws and claws alike raked through her pelt, pressing her against the trees trunk as she gradually drowned in her own pool of blood. *Her chest ached, her lungs failed to supply her with air, her body was broken and torn, her heart had begun to loose hope.* As much as she tried to hiss and claw the four beasts away, the more intrigued they were in coming back for more. Fallowspeckle held her breath as the largest dog leaped forward for another round of playing with it's food. She couldn't fight back anymore. All was lost. Until it wasn't.
    Just before the dog's jaws met with her blood-covered pelt again, a second cat soared in front of her, goring it's claws right through the dogs eyes and soon sending the others howling and scampering away - though she suffered her own wounds in her failed attempts - their tails between their legs. Exhausted and hardly able to hold herself up, Fallowspeckle tenderly lifted her head to meat eyes with her hero, blood dripping onto her paws from the tears in her ear like raindrops.
    *'Who are you?'* Fallowspeckle's grateful voice murmured, the words reverberating through her mind as she glanced into the she-cats glassy, ocean eyes. As much as she resisted, she couldn't help but flush red at the sight of the she-cat, her cream and brown patched fur sprinkled with rasin-like black spots was mesmerizing to watch as it gleamed in the sunlight, spreading out as evenly as butter on her sleek, yet sturdily-built body.
    *'I'm Poppyfrost.'* the beautiful spotted she-cat replied with a gentle grin, shaking off droplets of blood from her own pelt, the sun illuminating the entirety of her fur as she maintained Fallowspeckle's gaze.
    *'I'm Fallowspeckle.'* Fallowspeckle breathed in reply.
    CHAPTER 2
    *'You look pretty beaten up.'* Poppyfrost said, her ears falling back against her head with concern as she came to stand beside Fallowspeckle.
    *'Come on, it's not that bad.'* Fallowspeckle panted defiantly, desperately trying not to look weak in front of Poppyfrost but it was no use.
    *'Listen, I know we just met but you've got to listen to me.'* Poppyfrost persisted, *'There's no use trying to look tough, because you already are. If you weren't, you'd already be dead. So just follow me, there's a shelter not to far from here we can rest in.'*
    Fallowspeckle nodded, unable to speak much more if she tried. She took a step forward in the said shelter's direction, but she winced, realizing that a fleshy gash was rippled all the way across her right hind leg.
    *'Oh.'* Poppyfrost nodded, *'Here, you can lean on me.'* she said, stepping even closer towards Fallowspeckle so that their pelts were nearly touching.
    Hesitantly, Fallowspeckle brushed her pelt against the she-cat's, leaning in against her with a sudden rush of relief, *'Ok,'* Fallowspeckle nodded, *'Let's go.'*
    But soon after the two had taken a few paw-steps forward, Fallowspeckle's vision had begun to blur, forcing her to stop dead.
    *'What's wrong?'* Poppyfrost fretted desperately, only able to coil up closer towards Fallowspeckle as the light-headed she-cat hunched down before the ground, but by now her words were only faint echoes in the background of Fallowspeckle's mind, *'Fallowspeckle!'*
    Fallowspeckle dug her claws into the ground with pain, her vision blurring even more before her body gave in and she *collapsed* to the ground.
    CHAPTER 3
    NOTES:
    (gives her - I choose
    lost an eye
    glistening shore
    it's love
    I choose who decides to keep going
    I choose who's frustrated
    positive emotion
    terror - younger apprentice)

    • @CallieTheCattleDog
      @CallieTheCattleDog 9 місяців тому +3

      The art that was my favorite was the Crookedstar one, btw

    • @CallieTheCattleDog
      @CallieTheCattleDog 9 місяців тому +3

      Also congrats for getting 4.01K subs!!! You deserve it!!!

    • @canvas4708
      @canvas4708  9 місяців тому +3

      ​@user-tu7if2hu2s Thanks, 💗💖❤️ I still can't believe how far my channels come

    • @canvas4708
      @canvas4708  9 місяців тому +3

      ​@@CallieTheCattleDog Yeah, I like the CrookedStar art too xD

    • @romanakuchynkova9118
      @romanakuchynkova9118 8 місяців тому +1

      Im excited for part 2

  • @WCUETalliBear1256
    @WCUETalliBear1256 8 місяців тому +28

    My warrior story
    Cloud is a grey she-cat with light green eyes and dark flecks around her torso. She has darker gray ears and her right ear is torn, but not badly, she also has a scar across her face. BTW she's not my main.
    1.
    Cloud walked across the edge of the gorge, the rain pouring on her gray pelt. She padded along when the mud from under her began to fall. She let out a yowl as she slipped off the cliff and had fallen into the river, as the current was stronger then she realized she struggled trying to get out. She splashed none stop. Waves kept coming as she struggled down the river. "Help" she yowled before going under again, she yowled in distress. She arised again and spotted a branch swimming with everything she had she swam to the bank, she tried grabbing the branch but a big wave pushed her foward. She let out a hiss as the branch hit her as she was pushed back. She let out a yowl "no!" She was hit by a wave and she knew she was done for. Her lungs screamed for air as the waves pushed her down. She closed her eyes waiting for starclan to greet her.
    Next chapter at 5 likes
    2.
    "Hey wake up!" Cloud blinked open her eyes. "Huh?" She looked up to see a golden tabby tom "Finally your awake" he mewed. "Can you get up?" he asked. Cloud lifted her head up higher. "My name is Sunpaw" he mewed. Cloud groaned,
    "what's your name?"
    "C-cloud"
    Sunpaw looked at her, "your not from one of the clans?" he asked. Cloud shook her head, "N-no... what's a clan?" She asked. Sunpaw let out a chuckle. "I'm a Riverclan appretice," he mewed. Cloud stared at him confused."I'll explain on the way, right now we wanna get you to the medcine cat."
    (Sorry this one is so short)
    Next chapter at 10 likes!

    • @theyluvvkins
      @theyluvvkins 8 місяців тому +2

      ❤️❤️

    • @sammis9570
      @sammis9570 Місяць тому

      @@WCUETalliBear1256 25 likes

    • @Rae-e6d
      @Rae-e6d Місяць тому

      This is so good! Looking forward to part 3!!

  • @CHARI-SOCH
    @CHARI-SOCH 9 місяців тому +22

    You actually credited the artists in the description! 👀 That’s so super impressive- Love your videos!! ❤️

    • @canvas4708
      @canvas4708  9 місяців тому +5

      Thank You! I try 🥰

  • @TwigPaws
    @TwigPaws 3 дні тому +2

    Chapter One -
    Deertuft glanced around, searching for his patrol members. Fallingsnow, the leader of the patrol and his older sister, said to meet at fourtrees, but no cat had arrived yet. Dropping his still warm prey by his paws, he scratched at the ground until a fairly big hole lay in front of him. He threw the squirrel and mouse into it, and decided to head back to the SkyClan camp. The small forest was alive with prey, as around this part no cat usually ventured. The warmth of leaf-fall soaked through his pelt, and he cherished every ray of sunlight. Soon will be leaf-bare, and the bitter cold will keep every cat awake at night. As he trudged across a small patch of leaf-littered ground, a ground shaking roar made the birds fly away in terror and Deertuft halt in his tracks.
    'H-hello?' He mewed, trepidation making him tremble like a leaf. 'Fallingsnow? Beargrowl? Yarrowleaf?'Deertuft chuckled nervously. Stomping footsteps came closer and closer, until a huge bulking form materialised out of the bushes. Its fur was black and white, like someone had smeared dust on a nice clean pelt. It's long snout was scarred from battles, and it's huge red eyes stared at him demonically. Breaking into a run, the Badger roared again and reared up, slamming into Deertuft with hundreds of pounds of force. His vision blurred as he fell to the ground, pinned by the monster. Desperately, he yowled for help, but the Badger just swiped at his face. Blo0d splattered on the crumpled leaves, and pain flared in his eye. He swiped at his Attackers exposed belly, managing to injure it and send it, growling, stumbling back. But the Badger shook his head and pressed on, fury burning in his gaze. Panting and weak, Deertuft scrambled to his paws and charged, leaping on the Badgers back and digging his claws into its neck. Thrashing furiously, the Badger threw him off and bit down, hard, on his back leg. Deertuft yowled in pain as the badger swished him around in the air, its teeth digging deeper into his leg. Eventually it gave way, and he hurtled through the air, Crashing into a tree and having the air knocked out of him. The Badger gave one last roar and lifted one of its huge front paws, the razor-sharp claws glinting in the weak sunlight. It brought its paws down, and it sliced cleanly through his soft belly fur. Agony exploded in Deertuft, and his breath came in short, shallow gasps. The Badger snorted and trudged away, its head swinging. He was let alone, with the sound of birdsong echoing in his ears. After a century, pawsteps and a gasp reached his ears, and a warm body pressed into him. Voices, broken and unrecognisable, spoke to each other urgently, and he was lifted off the ground gently. His vision swam, and a small face appeared in his line of sight.
    'Its going to be okay.'The cat whispered, before the wave of darkness finally swept him away.
    5 likes for chapter 2!
    Notes -
    Ivypool ThunderClan a feather blind in one eye, lost a leg, belly scar and shoulder scar an underground river with crystals and glowing plants love you you frustrated you love them back a senior warrior

  • @ADragoaDeFogo
    @ADragoaDeFogo 12 днів тому +2

    Chapter 1
    Icewhisker felt the cold, freezing water swooshing over her lungs, the mud over her body pulling her down the stream. Suddenly, she felt cold teeth holding her by the scruff, while she was already on the bottom of the river, waiting to drown. Finally, she saw a light... It was another cat, around her age. It had a familiar spark on his eyes as he gazed into hers... "Are you okay?" The cat asked. Panting, Icewhisker shook her head. "My name is Icewhisker, from ShadowClan."
    "And my name is Screwflame, from RiverClan!" He yelled back. A chill ran down Icewhisker's spine. Now she was completely lost from home.
    Chapter 2
    Icewhisker felt safe with Screwflame, but was still brutally wounded. He took her over his wing once again, the bravery reflecting on his shiny amber eyes, and then decided to take Icewhisker somewhere safer where she could recover. After thinking a little, Screwflame decided to take her to the sturdiest shelter he could find.
    "Are you sure this is an good idea?" Icewhisker asked, tumbling.
    "Do you prefer drowning?"
    "Of course not!" She scram back, ashamed. Icewhisker didn't knew where this was going to end up, but she would be always grateful to the cat that saved her life.
    Chapter 3
    After being treated by medicine cats, Icewhisker realized that her wounds would leave behind scars. She was afraid, much afraid, but Screwflame comforted and reassured her patiently. He spent most of her healing by her side. One day, Screwflame entered the cave with something hidden between his jaws. It was berries! He gave it to her, with a spark in his eyes. "I-I hope you like it."
    "What is that?"
    "Is a present for speedy recovery!"
    Icewhisker smiled, happy. She knew it would work.
    10 likes to continue! (btw sorry for the shortness)

  • @murkywaters4180
    @murkywaters4180 8 місяців тому +9

    MY CHARACTER: Boots - calico she-cat with huge jet-black paws (she/her/hers)
    This summary will be VERY brief, but I intend to write more about it in the future!
    CHAPTER ONE
    Boots was exploring the abandoned city she dwelled in. Many cats resided there, as it was mostly free from Twolegs, save for the occasional hiker. She had a couple of friends in the area. For instance, a chubby tom named Theo kept her company most of the time. He was arrogant and spoiled, but she found him amusing. The morning sun sent sunbeams down onto the cracked and weathered sidewalks. An eerie stillness filled the air. Suddenly, a dog charged Boots as she was stopping to sun herself. She tried to run away but the dog was much faster than she could ever be, and she didn’t put up much of a fight. Fortunately, another cat heard her pitiful whimpering and came to her aide.
    CHAPTER TWO
    Saffron decided to bring them to their home, an empty trash bin turned on its side. It beat her soggy cardboard box any day, and Boots was insanely grateful for Saffron‘s help. They told them a bit about themself and began to crudely patch Boots’s wounds. When she teased them about their shoddy job, Saffron simply laughed along.
    CHAPTER THREE
    It had been a few days since the dog attack, but Saffron insisted that Boots stayed with them until their wounds healed. When pressed about it, Saffron admitted that from the looks of it, the wound would scar. Bummed about the permanent damage the dog had done, Boots hesitantly agreed to stay. At least Saffron was there to cheer her up with lavender to adorn their pelt. She really felt a connection to them.
    CHAPTER FOUR
    The wounds from the dog finally healed. When gazing at her reflection for the first time since the attack, she discovered she was missing half of her tail and had a nasty back wound. At first, she was frightened, but knew she’d get by just fine. She had Saffron to help her, after all! And besides, there were only a few more days until she would be fully healed. Everything would go back to normal after that, right?
    CHAPTER FIVE
    To make up for all the help Saffron gave to Boots, she decided to surprise them by taking them to her favorite place in the entire city. The top of an abandoned skyscraper where she could watch the sunrise. Saffron was thrilled that she’d share this special spot with them and the two bonded.
    CHAPTER SIX
    Both cats return home from their stroll after the night rolled in. Boots noticed Saffron shivering in their sleep and curled up next to them to keep them warm. She wasn’t sure how she felt about them currently, but hoped they’d still be friends and see each other after this was all over.
    CHAPTER SEVEN
    The time had come for the two to part ways. They said their farewells and Boots set off for her cardboard box, hoping someone hadn’t claimed it for themselves. During her travels, she noticed odd pawprints and decided to follow them out of her own morbid curiosity.
    CHAPTER EIGHT
    Unfortunately, the snowfall set in quickly and covered the tracks before she could find their maker. Boots shivered and bitterly returned to her cardboard box, curling up for the night.
    CHAPTER NINE
    Boots awoke the next day and began scavenging for food in the marketplace of the abandoned city. She knocked over one of the trash cans and rummaged through the super-old, stale garbage for scraps. Suddenly, a voice startled her, causing her to trip and fall flat on her face. The cat lifted her back on her paws and she purred, recognizing Saffron. They seemed super pleased to see her and while the two talked, Boots swore she saw an odd, lovey-dovey look shining in their eyes. It gave her butterflies in her stomach and made her blush more than she’d like to have admitted. She felt odd about the whole thing, but at least she saw her friend again. She returned home cheerfully.
    CHAPTER TEN
    Boots was shaken awake by her best friend, Theo, who fumbled over his words while trying to explain himself. She tried her best to calm him, but it was clear how shaken he had been by something. He kept urging her to go with him, which she wholeheartedly agreed to. She wanted to help him with whatever he needed.

  • @Jazmieplayz
    @Jazmieplayz 9 місяців тому +24

    Under 20 mins team
    👇🏼

  • @-Some_Random_Chicken-.
    @-Some_Random_Chicken-. 8 місяців тому +1

    Okay, I made a lil’ warriors oc to go along with this, here is my story:
    Fuzzy, a sort of creamy calico who is EXTREMELY fluffy, is exploring way out of her usual areas near the barn but falls into the stream and is violently injured(couldn’t think of why-). Suddenly, a spotted she-cat pulls her out and, along with bombarding her with questions, takes Fuzzy to the medicine den. The she-cat introduced herself as Leopardstar, leader of Riverclan. Fuzzy ended up loosing her front left leg but recovered and even got to know her savior a bit. While being taken back to her farm, Leopardstar is forced to follow Fuzzy as she gets sidetracked from seeing her favorite meadow! Fuzzy chases butterflies for a while and even messes around with Leopardstar who’s just trying to get Fuzzy home. At the end, they both seem to confess feelings for each other(idk, it was the generator lol). When leaving to go home, Fuzzy notices strange paw prints and immediately follows them with Leopardstar trailing behind, telling her that it might not be safe. They couldn’t find anything and both go back distraught and angry. Fuzzy is taken back to her barn but hesitates before going in, she turns to Leopardstar and says that she won’t go home until they figure the mystery out! With a bit of pestering, she manages to convince Leopardstar and she takes Fuzzy back to camp. When entering camp, smiling and joking around with Leopardstar, a young apprentice runs up to the two and immediately tells Leopardstar everything though Fuzz can’t really understand them with how fast they were going.

  • @yippingtinyfoxaj5479
    @yippingtinyfoxaj5479 8 місяців тому +3

    Bluestar, closest shelter nearby, a tooth, chest scar, an underground river with crystals and glowing plants, it’s love, both of us, neither of us, love her back, my sibling.
    I’m too lazy to make a story rn, but I might come back and edit it, and make a story out of it. : D bybye

  • @BlackMoxen
    @BlackMoxen Місяць тому +1

    In my story, i am a grey warrior that was saved by Mothwing and got sheltered on her clan. She gave me some berries to eat (not death, of course), and when i looked at my scars i realized i had lost one of my ears. When i got healed enough, Mothwing showed me a cliff with a view of the sarlight and shooting stars. I always wanted to go there!
    When we returned to camp, we soon discovered that we wasn't only friends; it was love. After the pawprints discover, it was Mothwing who had the bravery to keep going, of course, followed by me, but investigating it was her idea. As the winter got harsh and we had to turn back, it was still Mothwing who was most frustrated about it.
    Some time later, a River Clan clanmate came running for me. There was complete terror in his eyes. It was a senior warrior, and came slippering and completely in shock.
    Sorry for the short text, but i'm not patient to write it all ;)

  • @graywind_WC
    @graywind_WC 6 місяців тому +2

    I'll be waiting for part 2! Thank you for making this kind of videos, they are very good and entertaining. ❤🐾

  • @SebastianLoor-t7g
    @SebastianLoor-t7g 8 місяців тому +1

    I absolutily love this, thank you for making this. Idk why I like this so much but I do.

    • @canvas4708
      @canvas4708  8 місяців тому +2

      No problem! I'm glad you love it

  • @tayloramason913
    @tayloramason913 8 місяців тому +4

    IceHeart wondered in a forest that was dark. She could see shadows moving, which had spooked her a lot. Two of the shadows came closer to her, but then a cat jumped out and started attacking the two cats! IceHeart looked surprised. The cat that had attacked the other two had sent the cats running away. "Yea you better run, you stinkin' mouse-brains!" Said the cat, Then they turned to IceHeart. "I'm Millie, warrior of Thunderclan!" Said the cat. "I'm IceHeart, And I'm a warrior of frostclan," said IceHeart. "Great, but we seriously have to hide before those cats come back!" Millie pulled IceHeart to nearby shelter. "Where even are we?" Asked IceHeart. "In the dark forest. Cats here will kill every cat they see, " millie responded. "I know a way to get back to my camp without being seen." (At the camp) "here. These berries will probably help," said the medicine cat. "Thank you," said IceHeart as she got up and went to a certain place to swim. While she was swimming, she noticed that she has a belly scar. She haven't even noticed it before! She thought it wasn't THAT bad...and it reminded her from when she was saved! (Another time skip) Later, she went to a glistening shore with millie. It was her favorite spot, and she wanted to show it to millie. "Its beautiful!" Said millie. "Ikr! I almost always come here. Its the best spot to relax!" Said IceHeart. (A third time skip) as Millie and IceHeart walked back to thunderclan, IceHeart was thinking about what she feels about millie since she's known her for many moons. Yes, she's fallen for someone, just not her... a few days later, they head out again and hear a rustle in the bushes that made them decide to head off and investigate. By the time they got to the bush, all they found was weird-shaped paw prints that vanished not to far ahead from where they were. Millie and IceHeart both looked at each other and then they decided that both of them should keep going. They continued on finding the mysterious cat, but didn't find much clues. "Its already getting late, and we haven't found that many clues. We should get back," said IceHeart as she turned around and started walking away. millie followed her. neither of them were furious about them turning back so soon. (Timeskip #4) millie and IceHeart had a loooooooong discussion about the weird paw prints that was also very tiring. It was very quiet on the way back to thunderclan, and nothing seemed so tense. It was a new mood between the two. Millie suddenly gave a glance to IceHeart, but it was a look she had never seen before. It was a love-in-the-eyes type of look. IceHeart was unsure how to react, but she stayed calm. As they returned back to thunderclan, millie walked away, and IceHeart was still quite distraught about the weird paw prints, when suddenly an unfamiliar clanmate came running up to her with complete terror in his eyes. It was...her brother...

  • @Aimarrh-Raimbow-Felidae
    @Aimarrh-Raimbow-Felidae 4 місяці тому +2

    Valley is a stubborn brown she-cat with dull green eyes and scars around her back legs. She's a kittypet which also used to be a blood clan cat.
    1:
    In a day with grey skies, Valley was on a run from a pack of dogs, until she tripped over a really sharp rock. Her foot was badly injured. She tried to hobble away from the dogs (but of course that wouldn't work) one of the dogs grabbed her by her back and threw her which made her hit her head on a three, blood started dripping from her head and mouth, at this point she was very weak. She was about to give up her life to the dogs until a mysterious cat jumped from the bushes and defended Valley. Valley could see a cat with a dark red pelt and green eyes with one white paw (guess who that is)

  • @ghostified143
    @ghostified143 21 день тому +1

    I created an AU where Swiftpaw survived the dog attack and lived alone up until finding me and then we fell in love! (And I'm actually crying because he's literally my bby I love him sm)

  • @tennilleguffey4588
    @tennilleguffey4588 8 місяців тому +2

    Serpent was wandering the forest until he fell into a old fox hole his tail was caught jay'feather heard him and came over to the distressed tom jay helped him but serpent lost most of his tail jay took him to camp and helped and cared for him one day jay gave serpent a necklace of stone and pebbles after serpent healed up him and jay went to gather herbs until they discovered the tracks the two had feelings for eachother but when they got back serpent's brother came up to him serpent didn't fully recognize him. ( Sorry if rushed

  • @Lovewarriorcatz
    @Lovewarriorcatz Місяць тому +2

    Story
    So LionStrike fights dogs and gets pushed in a river almost drowning (he only has 3 usable legs, one of them is paralyzed) and Barley saves him. He takes him to the barn for LionStrike and has a deep deep cut across his face from the dogs ripping him apart. It leaves a scar leaving Barley to comfort him and gets a flower for him to adore on his pelt. He wound up having a rump and face scar. Barley takes LionStrike to a field of flowers! Delightful, that's his favorite place. Although they were still both toms, LionStrike felt romantic feelings for Barley! So just then they see odd paw prints, LionStrike follows it to see what it is. They couldn't find the cat, Barley has a small disappointed face. Barley shows a love in the eyes look, LionStrike gives him the love look too. When they return to the barn, an apprentice has a look of terror in it's eyes...

  • @WildforestWolfie
    @WildforestWolfie Місяць тому +1

    feathertail saved me from a fast stream near the tribe of rushing water, we go to a rocky ledge for a bit, she then gives me a feather (i pictured leaf but feathers even better lol), my scar was a blind eye (😣) we went through the rocky slopes, near small waterfalls of the tribe of rushing water, then went to a bit of forest, not sure how i feel about them maybe a little bit of a crush, feathertail decides to keep going and most frustrated on turning back so soon. i feel unsure on the look she gives me. a random cat comes to camp. not sure how i look but i guess a reddish pelt like alderheart

  • @georgerafa5041
    @georgerafa5041 3 місяці тому +1

    My OC is Crowfrost-a black tom with white socks and half of tail is white, he has cyan eyes
    Crowfrost padded to the entrance of camp, tonight was the first night of him being a warrior, he knew it would be a long boring night, but he was ready for the challenge(just telling you his age).
    Chapter 1:
    The next morning he joined a patrol with Hollyleaf and Brightheart, but during the patrol wolves attacked the patrol. Hollyleaf rushed back to camp for help, Crowfrost jumped into battle, (Brightheart holding back a bit becuase of the last time she faced dogs).Crowfrost was thrown into the air, scars almost everywhere, but Crowfrost didn't care, Hollyleaf would be back soon with help.Noticing Brightheart was knocked out, Crowfrost tried to stay alive a little longer, a wolf lunged for him, but then... A grey pelt zoomed at it.Feeling as if he would die, he passed out.
    Chapter 2:
    Crowfrost awoke, blinking, he checked his surroundings.He was in the medicine den, and a grey she-cat with blue eyes was looking at him."Cinderpelt???"He mewed."Your finally awake!"She yowled happily."I worried that maybe Jayfeather was wrong that you where alive... That was a violent attack...It was a good thing I was there!"She mewed."Wha-What happened?"He asked. "I was shocked when Hollyleaf came into the camp with the news...I volunteered to help with Lionblaze and Brambleclaw...I took out the wolf you where fighting, who happened to be tue alpha!Brambleclaw scared the rest off while Lionblaze took brightheart to saftey, you can imagine how much he was dirnig to battle..."She mewed.
    Chapter 3:
    Crowfrost relized he lost a paw during an attack, "Oh no..."He mewed."What is it?"Cinderheart asked, following his gaze."Oh..."Her smile faded."What if Firestar says I can't be a warrior!?!?"He panicked."Hey jf will be ok... It's just a sign of how brave you where!"She mewed.Crowfrost sighed, laying his chin on his legs, he knew Cinderpelt was trying to comfort him.The next few days, Cinderpelt hadn't come back to him, and his depression grew.Finally, Cinderheart came back, holding a glittery stone."here, in hope of a quick recovery."She mewed.Crowfrost gasped, it was a crystal, but had Cinderheart really taken all of that time to find one for him?"Tha- Thank you."He stammered.Cinderpelt forced it onto his pelt.(He did complain a bit)
    Chapter 4:
    Very slowly, Crowfrost's scars healed, and he and Cinderpelt became better friends.He was eventually able to walk around camp now.He and Cinderpelt now raced across short distances(he had the disadvantage of 3 paws), at the end of one day, Lionblaze padded up to him."Cinderpelt will lose interest in you eventually..."He mewed, was that... Jealousy in his eyes?Crowfrost wondered."Don't mind him, he's just jealous..."Hollyleaf mewed.He gazed at his friend, they had been best friends since kithood."Jealous?About what?"He asked. Hollyleaf sighed,"Crowfrost, your SO clueless!"She chuckled while padding off.
    Chapter 5:
    Around now Crowfrost was practically fully healed, and he now walked with pleasure around camp with no difficulty now."Crowfrost!"Cinderheart called."Yes?" He asked. "Want to come on a walk with me?"She asked."Sure!"He mewed, happy to be getting along with his friend.As they arrived, Crowfrost's heart soared with delight, Cinderpelt had taken him to his favorite spot ever.A starry sky glittered above him, he sat on a large elm branch, below him, the reflection of the stars shone brightly on the surface of the lake, he could see the clans, twoleg places and beyond.He smiled.
    Chapter 6:
    Cinderheart took him away from the giant Elm tree.They walked farther, suddenly, he knew what Hollyleaf had ment, Cinderheart liked him!It had been so obvious, how did he not have known sooner??? No wonder Lionblaze was jealous!He obviously liked Cinderheart.But...Crowfrost knew his heart lay with another cat...I'm sorry Cinderpelt...He thought as they padded on.
    Chapter 7:
    A few days later, Crowfrost had been invited to another walk with Cinderpelt.Half way through the walk, they heard a rustle in the bushes nearby, "let's go" Cinderpelt mewed eagerly.But the only clues they found where a set of weird shaped pawprints."The scent ends heree... How dod he get away!?!"Cinderpelt hissed, digging her claws into the ground."Let's head back to camp, Firestar will be mad if he finds out scents next to a rouge's scent without knowing."He mewed."Fine..."She hissed.
    Chapter 8:
    Walking back, Cinderheart and Crowfrost didn't find any more clues about the mystery cat, Cinderpelt continued hissing and complaing about the results, when they got back to camp a almost full moon had reached it's highest point.They reported their find to Firestar, who thanked them for telling him, he then sent Cinderheart to lead a patrol to where the pawprints.
    Chapter 9:
    Cinderheart invited Crowfrost to another walk, they padded to a clearing, Crowfrost was confused, what now?Suddenly, bright flecks of light began to fly around, "fireflys..."His pelt bristled at the beautiful sight.As they walked back to camp, Crowfrost noticed Cinderheart give him an admiring look.He felt a little bit embarrassed, he loved Hollyleaf, but how would he tell Cinderheart?
    Chapter 10:
    The question blazeing through his mind, he noticed Lionblaze running to them, but instead of jealously complete terror and sadness in his eyes."Hollyleaf is dead!"He yowled.Crowfrost stopped, Hollyleaf?Dead?"How?"He asked."She was chasing a squirrel, and ran into some tunnels...And...She was crushed..."He mewed, softly sobbing.That night the clan mourned over Hollyleaf.Tears streamed down Crowfrost's eyes, even Cinderheart couldn't comfort him. No one would, Hollyleaf was gone now, forever.
    Edit:I am very proud of this OC 👏 👏 👏 congrats me! 👏 👏 👏
    Edit:I just noticed I spelled Cinderpelt instead of Cinderheart! LOL

  • @tommylefkada
    @tommylefkada Місяць тому +2

    The story of blaze’fur.
    Chapter 1: a kit named blaze kit was a cute Tom kit but one day RiverClan camp got in fire so he and his family were in danger but he followed his mother again but, he got lost a flaming tree was close to hit blaze kit but suddenly a strange cat who was kinda familiar and had the same eyes as him like yellow eyes. The strange she cat’s name was sun’beam.
    Chapter 2: blaze’kit’s mother lost him,and now the camp stopped being on fire,but poor blaze’kit was having some burned wounds one of his font right leg and one of his tail. The brave cat sun’beam took blaze kit in a familiar place named SkyClan.
    Chapter 3: After blaze’kit was treated by SkyClan’s medicine cat,the medicine cat told him that one of his wounds will leave a scar burn. The medicine cat spent her time healing blaze’kit but then the medicine cat had a gift for him that it was…a beautiful fern leaf.
    Chapter 4: slowly blaze’kit was start growing up more and more with sun’beams fluent love and support. He was healed enough but,when he looked at his scar he realised taht his scar was a belly burn scar.
    Chapter 5: now blaze’kit was finally an apprentice and he’s new name was blaze’paw and his new mentor was actually his saviour Sun’beam. Before he trained he and his mentor goes in a strange place that he loved so much,it was an underground river with crystals and glowing plants.
    Chapter 6: both blaze!paw and sun’beam resume ther walk this gives both of them ther time to connect and also unknowingly contemplate how he feel with his friend,now it’s been many moons after all,so he feels that he’s happy with his beautiful best friend who will never forget how much lucky he was when he saved him a kind strange SkyClan cat.
    Chapter 7: a couple of days later blaze’paw had his last day training with his best friend mentor because he was ready to be an warrior, but suddenly he and his friend heard a rustle in the bushes that both of them decided to head of and investigate, but the only thing turns out to be there a set of weird shaped paw prints that vanish not to far,ahead we’re here was with his friend. Sun’beam was going to check out first.
    Chapter 8: continuing on, he’s friend doesn’t find many clues of the mysterious cat.the only thing she had to go off of are a couple of wierd-shaped cat’s paw prints that somehow vanished as soon as it left the bush. Then blaze’paw begin to loose hope. It was getting dark and leaf-bare’s freeze is really starting to get to him. Suspicious and utterly clueless he head back to camp. His savior was the one who frustrated turning back soo long.
    Chapter 9: after long and tiring discussions about the paw prints that both had spotted, the walk back to camp was quiet,but still nothing close to tense. Rather, it was one of those comforting, new moods between both. But some how his savior looked him lovely. Wich that mad him feel better of his old past with RiverClan.
    Chapter 10: finally blaze’paw had a new ceremony and he became a warrior named blaze’fur,he returned back to camp, still quite distraught about this paw prints,when suddenly one of his clan mates that was not familiar to him runner over him. It was the leader and he said come with me now!…
    The story of blaze’fur will continue soon see the part two of the video and you can see it (if there is a part two…) The end!

  • @Burtsbeesapplepie
    @Burtsbeesapplepie 8 місяців тому +1

    Jake saved me and took me to a nearby clan, he then gave me a scarf to take my mind off of my back scars. He then takes me to a cliff with a view of the Milky Way and shooting stars. After I walk back, I feel like we are something more than friends, we were in love. We then see some mysterious paw prints, and Jake was like: “LeT’S iNvEsTiGaTe!1!1” When we had to turn around, I was the most frustrated. Jake looks at me lovingly, and I look at him the same way. Suddenly, a younger medicine cat runs up to me looking horrified.

  • @Cornieschannel
    @Cornieschannel 16 днів тому +2

    Hii!!
    MAKING STORY AS SOON AS POSSIBLE
    Around my age - saves me - Feather'tail
    Safe now - brutaly wounded - savior tajes me to recover at my clans camp.
    Recovers with a scar - gift from Feather'tail - feathers.
    Back scar.
    Walk outside camp with Feather'tail - the roof of a Twolegs house with a wonderous view.
    Dont know how i feel about them after moons.
    See weird paw prints with Feather'tail - they go check it first.
    Heads back to camp - im frustrated turning back so soon.
    I dont feel the same way about them as they do about me.
    An older medicine cat runs over to me with terror in their eyes.

  • @Aurora16935
    @Aurora16935 8 місяців тому +8

    My oC is named Lark, and later named LarkFlight. And this is to good! You need to make more of this stuff.
    Chapter 1.
    Lark was surrounded by foxes, the large stinky animals hissed loudly. ‘ Help! SOMONE? ‘ Lark’s voice was a whisper of fear. A spottend tabby cat springs for me, meows soft. ‘ Stay in the bushes, cat who makes problems. ‘ a smaller fox, a young one, runs scared away of how big the cat is. ‘ Yes! Go away stinky, winky’s! ‘ When the mom fox saw that she growls, attempted to bite but failed and ran away. ‘ Who are you? ‘ Lark asked. ‘ And thanks, cat who my helps. ‘ The cat shakes her spottend tabby fur and Saids: ‘ I’am Sun ‘ Beam. ‘
    Chapter 2
    I ‘am Lark. ‘ Lark answered. ‘ Come here! I can help you, but you need to follow me. We go to ShadowClan. ‘ SunBeam eyes shine, she go running and Lark go after here. ‘ Stop! What is a Clan? ‘ Lark screamed at Sunbeam, who was disappeared behind a row of bushes. ‘ Clans is a group of cats. We have 4 clans, The WindClan, ThunderClan, and the RiverClan and my clan Shadowclan. ‘
    Chapter 3.
    It was one moon later, Lark was now LarkFlight. SunBeam comes to the apprentice den, where LarkFlight was talking with apprentice. ‘ LarkFlight. ‘ LarkFlight looked over his shoulder. ‘ Yes, SunBeam? ‘ Sunbeam looked at her legs. ‘ I have a surprise for you. ‘ Sunbeam walked to the open place and there of to the Medicine den. She gives him a Hawk feather. ‘ It’s - It’s - Beautiful! ‘
    Chapter 4
    It was my first day to see some thing at the medicine cat, I go thought and got a idea! I can ask what scars I had, want before Sun ‘ Beam become, has the fox slightly attacked me. LarkFlight walked to the medicine cat, I asked it and he saids: ‘ A face scar, LarkFlight. ‘
    Chapter 5
    LarkFlight shakes his body, Sun Beam walked for his out and he followed. Sun ‘ Beam stopped by a cliff, it was night and the view of the starlight makes him happy. SunBeam go sit by him by his side. The starlight shines up SunBeam and LarkFlight. ‘ I has the Hawk feather you had give me. ‘ LarkFlight miaow echoed over the cliff.
    Chapter 6.
    ‘ SunBeam. ‘ LarkFlight saids with a slight, but loud voice. ‘ I feel something more than friends. ‘ LarkFlight watched at Sunbeam’s eyes. ‘ I to, ‘ Sunbeam saids. ‘ Sinds your we are going every night to the cliff, I feel something more than friends.
    Chapter 7.
    ‘ You saved my form the foxes! Now need I to go! ‘ LarkFlight was a bit of angry. Lather that night the couple saw footsteps a heard something. LarkFlight Saids that he go’s. ‘ Okay. But you need to be careful! ‘ SunBeam said.
    Chapter 8.
    LarkFlight was not frustrated of something and SunBeam to.
    Chapter 9
    LarkFlight saws it. The love in SunBeam’s eyes. LarkFlight loves the she-cat back. Slightly SunBeam Saids ‘ Want you kittens? ‘ I was shocked and said fast. ‘ Sure! ‘ I said.
    Chapter 10
    My brother, who comes also to the clans looked terrible at me. ‘ DuskFoot? What is wrong with you? ‘ He Saids nothing and hissed again at me.

  • @Eclipse_5555
    @Eclipse_5555 8 місяців тому +1

    I was saved my FireStar, he took me to the sturdiest shelter we could find. He gave me flowers how sweet of him, although sandstorm is a bit jealous. I have a scar over my eye, one on my leg, another at the tip of my tail and a burn mark on all of my paws. FireStar brings me to my favorite place, the sparkling riverbeds! FireStar confesses his love for me! We are mates now, SandStorm argued with FireStar but She will over him soon enough. Later we hear a rustle in the bushes we both decide to see what it is. We search and fined nothing, neither of us are mad just hoping to get back to the clan soon. FireStar looks at me with love in his eyes I looked back at him with the same loving stare, I hope to have kits with him someday! A middle aged warrior runs up to us with terror in there eyes- Waiting for pt. 2!

  • @Frostybreeeeze
    @Frostybreeeeze 8 місяців тому +2

    This is super well made! I’ll be using this often!

  • @emerywhitten5943
    @emerywhitten5943 3 місяці тому +2

    Hazeltail, In the middle of the clan to the med den, a stick, multiple scars, a beautiful meadow, SO THIS IS LOVEEEEE HOO HOOO, both of ussss, Me, Unsureeee, my brother- UNTRESTINGGGG

  • @Dsmp907
    @Dsmp907 8 місяців тому +1

    Saved by: flame’tail
    Taken too: nearest shelter nearby
    Gift: a feather
    Scar: ear scar
    Place: an underground river with crystals and glowing plants
    Feelings for flametail: love with someone else
    First to investigate: me
    Most frustrated: flame’tail
    Flame tails look: still don’t feel the same way as they do
    Runs to me: a middle aged warrior

  • @SundaysSoul
    @SundaysSoul 4 місяці тому +2

    Eagle’Tuft began to tumble into the falls she believed it was all over and all of a sudden another cat around her age grabs her saving her from eternal slumber. She sees a spark in their eyes as they look into yours. They introduce themselves as Fire’Star. Eagle is safe but at what cost Fire’Star guides her to his clan. Eagle gets treated by the medicine cats but is left with some nasty scars from tumbling on the rocks. Fire’Star reassured her and even compliments her scars and bravery. He sticks with her and even brings her a blue scarf. Eagle recovers from her fall with FireStars support she looks at her scars from in the water and begins to appreciate them even though it was from her ear to the tip of her tail. She makes a pretty much full recovery and decides to go walk with FireStar her heart soared realizing they went to her favorite place,the woods birds chirping all around. Eagle and him continue the walk when all of a sudden her heart fluttered she realized she had fallen for him. A few days later we hear a rustling in the bush but all that’s there is paw prints. They decided to follow them further. It was quite cold and there was no sight of the cat so they turn back to go home. They talked about the mysterious cat it wasn’t tense but rather comforting. Fire’Star looks over to Eagle love in his eyes. Eagle’s heart flutters full as her face flushed red. All of a sudden an older medicine cat approached then fear in there eyes.

  • @Rae-e6d
    @Rae-e6d Місяць тому +2

    Mine:
    Saved from: Oscar-A white Tom with yellow and blue Heterochromia eyes
    Main character: Marble’wisp
    Takes marble’wisp to: A Dry,safe den with clean moss,they stay with each other for a few days,she tells him she belongs to JuneClan so he takes her there,he was to shy to go in the camp so he ran off.
    Turns out that marble’wisp had a bruise on her hind leg from when she was drowning in a strong-current river, It leaves a scar,reminding her about the one who saved her life when no one else was there,Oscar,she missed him very much. One day,out on a hunting patrol,she spotted Oscar and they spoke,they would then meet up almost every day.
    Then,while they were out together,he took her to a beautiful waterfall,with the birds chirping in the background and it was rlly romantic. That’s when she started to fall for him.
    When she was out on a border patrol one day,something rustled in the bush,it was a fox-cub,one of the warriors(name not decided yet)ordered to attack,but she defended the little cub,saying it was only a baby and they shouldn’t harm it. But then,the mother fox came and snarled,ferociously attacking them. Both other warriors were injured and couldn’t help marble’wisp. When she just in a corner,trapped,Oscar suddenly sprang out,his large claws slicing into the mother fox’s fur,she yowled with fury,racing back toward her cub,grabbing it and back into the deep forest again.
    She was shocked with the Tom,before she could say thank you,he licked her affectionately on the muzzle and sprinted back into the woods,being unseen.
    Moons later,it’s leaf-bare,marble’wisp hadn’t seen Oscar in a while,losing hope,she wondered if she would ever find a mate at all.(when she was a kit,she dreamed of having lots of kits to take care of)
    She wondered if she would ever see the Tom,after all,he wasn’t showing up to their ‘meet-up sessions’
    Was he really dead? She thought
    Finally,it was New-leaf,the trees had started to come back together,
    One day,one of her clan mates,Spotted’tail(brother) raced toward her,pure terror in his eyes,he told her that a white Tom had killed an apprentice,Cuckoo’paw(a barred small tom) White tom?!she thought,alarmed,she raced over to see what was happening,she saw Oscar,crouching over, a small black-silver Tom,he yowled of Triumph,She called out to him,but there was no answer,instead,he just ran back into the woods again. What In silverpelt?! She thought. She spotted spotted’tail,her brother,racing after the white Tom and scraping his claws on his back,oh no..!! “That’s my apprentice!” Spotted’tail yowled angrily, Oscar turned around,dodging a blow from Spotted’tail,thrashed his tail angrily, (btw after this happened,Oscar retreated back into the forest,he didn’t die)and then it all went blank.
    Everything that happened,did marble’wisp die?
    Suddenly,she woke up,gasping for breath. She felt a stab of pain in her stomach,she realized she was in the medicine cats den,Light’leap,a very elder med cat,she was getting ready to retire,(time skip and btw she’s pregnant,the kits are from Oscar)
    Moons later,marble’wisp gave birth to Soul’kit,Ghost’kit,and Frozen’kit. She couldn’t tell the clan about this,e she would be banned from juneclan,so she secretly put the kits in DuskClan camp.
    They grew up to be Ghost’pool and Frozen’fur(soul’kit died)
    Might continue this later,have a good day/night everyone!!:)

  • @SunshineKoiWCUE
    @SunshineKoiWCUE 8 місяців тому +1

    Swiftpaw,Nearest shelter,moth wing,lost an eye, cavern w/ vines + crystals,its love,Swiftpaw decides,I’m frustrated,I feel unsure,middle-aged warrior

  • @Shsy7573
    @Shsy7573 21 день тому +1

    My OC: Robinmask
    Ch.1 : Saved by Cinderpelt after getting trapped under a falling tree (not the trunk b/c she probs woukdnt survive that, probably just like the thicker branches or smthn)
    Ch. 2: My choice, ThunderClan camp, cuz that makes the most sense.
    Ch. 3: My choice, she gives Robinmask lavender to wear in my pelt to represent of healing and resilience
    Ch.4: Multiple scars (4), belly, eye, shoulder, lost tail
    Ch.5: Went to a sparkling riverbed
    Ch. 6: It’s love. They totally bonded over their scars.
    Ch. 7: Robinmask decides to follow the pawprints
    Ch. 8: My choice, they’re both frustrated.
    Ch.9: Cinderpelt looks at Robinmask w/ love and she is unsure. She love her, but she’s a medicine cat. Could it even work?
    Ch.10: Robinmask’s sibling, Starlingfreckle, runs over her when coming into camp, terrified.
    And ofc, cliffhanger.

  • @emilybentz1020
    @emilybentz1020 Місяць тому +1

    This is my warrior cat story, it might not be accurate to the OG warriors books but excuse it please 😅!
    Chapter One [Life or death]
    As FawnTail walked the Leaf-fall leaves crunched beneath his paws, colors of red, yellow, and orange glistened in the beautiful leaves as they gently floated down. FawnTail averted his gaze toward a squirrel shimmying up a tree with one paw as the other paw held various nuts.
    ‘That would make a good meal!’ thought FawnTail.
    The reddish orange, white spotted tom slunk his way toward the squirrel a leaf crunched a bit to loudly under his paw, making the small prey leap into the safety of the tree. FawnTail sighed and walked off.
    As FawnTail was on the homestretch back to camp a irritating smell clogged his nose, he coughed and then looked around, “What’s happening?” He wondered aloud. Then in a flash a blaze of flame clouded his vision! In a instinctive action, FawnTail darted away, shouting, “Fire!! Fire!! There’s a fire!”
    Not long after the whole forest was flaming with trees falling, all the leaves and plants completely obliterated!
    FawnTail coughed and coughed but kept on running! A tree crashed to the ground in front of him! Blocking his way! FawnTail coughed again and then started running left, towards the creek.
    ‘The creek!’ FawnTail reminded himself, the perfect idea. But then another giant blade of fire shot up! FawnTail turned around but it was blocked by more flames, his legs got shaky and his paws ached for rest, his lungs desperately searched for clean air, his heart pumping as much blood as it could, his mind trying to think of a plan! FawnTail choked on the smoke and fell on his side, whimpering and gasping. Then he heard a soothing voice, “Hey! Im here to help you. Let’s get out of the fire.” Then it all went silent.
    So yeah I hope you liked the first chapter! The next chapter is coming soon! (Also I got Sunbeam for the savior but I didn’t want to have canon characters so now she’s called Sunnysky! Also the clans are made up as well.)
    Chapter 2 [Sunnysky]
    FawnTail shivered and then slowly opened his eyes, he immediately felt a soft tail rapped over his shoulder, he looked over and saw the most beautiful and lean, light brown and white she-cat he has ever seen. The she-cat looked over and gazed into his eyes, her eyes bright like emeralds against the Green-leaf sun.
    “Good morning,” She meowed gently, careful not to startle him.
    FawnTail found himself speechless but managed to stutter, “Th-Thanks…”
    The she-cat chuckled then mewed, “I’m SunnySky!”
    FawnTail only nodded.
    “I saved you from the fire, it’s probably out by now.” SunnySky swished her tail and stood.
    “Oh! Thank you!” FawnTail exclaimed, he sniffed the air and looked around, this was Dewclan territory.
    “We’re in Dewclan territory.” FawnTail changed his gaze to SunnySky’s.
    “Well, it was the only place safe enough to go! But we can go back to Lavenderclan now.” SunnySky licked her paw and wiped it on her ear.
    FawnTail smiled, he felt somewhat of a connection with her.
    Chapter 3 [A serious injury]
    As FawnTail and SunnySky walked into the camp the medicine cat immediately rushed up to FawnTail, “FawnTail! We thought you got killed in the fire! But no worry now! Come to my den at once.”
    FawnTail limped after the medicine cat.
    FawnTail woke up in the moss bedding of the medicine den, he yawned and looked around. SunnySky was sitting close by, but resting.
    The medicine cat padded up to FawnTail and sighed, “The fire gave you a very serious injury,”
    “What happened RelicFur?!” FawnTail pleaded the orange she-cat.
    “You lost one of your front legs…” The medicine cat mewed.
    SunnySky shook herself awake and looked at FawnTail. FawnTail looked at SunnySky, immediately feeling a sense of comfort from the she-cats kind gaze.
    FawnTail then looked down and saw only one paw stretched out in front of him. He gasped then closed his eyes, begging this was just a bad dream, but it wasn’t.
    “I’ll give you time to think,” RelicFur dipped her head and padded off.
    “Oh… this is all my fault!” FawnTail muttered.
    “FawnTail this isn’t your fault! You didn’t know there was gonna be a fire!” SunnySky tried.
    “But… but…” FawnTail sighed, “SunnySky just give me space.”
    Chapter 4, [Is it love?]

  • @MultiverseSaga2024
    @MultiverseSaga2024 9 місяців тому +3

    Hi Canvas nice Warrior Cats Story Pause challenge video.👍🌟

  • @Silver_Spiritz
    @Silver_Spiritz 9 місяців тому +4

    I needed this ;-;

  • @sissylei5955
    @sissylei5955 2 місяці тому +2

    I am drowning… the water stings in my eyes. I close them preparing for my demise but it never arrives… a cat my age looks at me and hisses “don’t go running in rivers.” When I finally open my eyes I choke out a “yes Spottedleaf.” C.2:The next few days are a flurry with many attacks from monsters. Every time I get wounded I always lay in the same spot in the med den. C.3:They gift me a shell adorned with flowers to cover up the scar on my back. C.4: I notice that I’ve lost one leg! It is freshly replaced with a log wrapped in vines. C.5: we take a walk by the lake territory and head back up. By then I am feeling much better! C.6: we’ve now became best friends and are always spending time together. C.7: we decide to investigate the strange prints in the ground. The sun has set but yet we carry on together. C.8: we haven’t gotten any more clues so I choose to turn back and my friend a bit later. C.9: I frown as the flirting begins. I thought we’d just be friends! C.10 I am distraught as my brother trots over to me with tears in his green eyes. I ask “What’s wrong?” And more wails are the answer…

  • @hailiemairena4698
    @hailiemairena4698 8 місяців тому +2

    Shade gets saved from Tigerclaw from Ravenpaw and Shade joins Thunderclan while Tigerclaw gets exiled and Ravenpaw is named Ravenflame. Shadepaw after her training becomes Shadesky, Shadesky and Ravenflame went to a cliff to see the shooting star and starlight night sky

  • @pinky0558
    @pinky0558 8 місяців тому +1

    Saved by: Poppyfrost
    Taken too; the sturdiest shelter we can find
    Gift: Orange butterfly wings
    Scar: lost half my tail
    Favorite place: a cliff with a few of the stars
    Feelings for Poppyfrost: in love with her
    First to investigate; me
    Most frustrated about turning back: me
    Poppyfrost is in love with me: I love her back
    Runs to me in terror: an elder

  • @sammis9570
    @sammis9570 Місяць тому +1

    GhostWhisker is in danger since there is a storm and she was lost from her old clan BirdClan, after BirdClan had died out from a flood except GhostWhisker because she managed to jump onto the logs rolling down, she is worried of another flood happening. "It's over!" GhostWhisker yells, if another flood happens she doesn't think she could manage....but a small puddle gets bigger and bigger, a flood is occurring "no" GhostWhisker mutters to herself. She starts to prepare for StarClan, when suddenly a gray tabby tom appears, "Excuse me who are you?!" GhostWhisker asks the cat as she notices beautiful jay feathers in their fur, "Names JayFeather." "I asked your name not what you are wearing!" GhostWhisker says "No, no that's my name." GhostWhisker giggles at the JayFeathers name. "No time for laughing we got to get you out of here it's cold and wet." JayFeather says with a serious look on his face. JayFeather helps GhostWhisker away from the flood. GhostWhisker is safe.... For now, but she is hurt. JayFeather decides to take her to an area with rock walls as they are there resting, GhostWhisker notices she didn't tell JayFeather her name yet, "I forgot to tell you my name is GhostWhisker." JayFeather heals her wounds, "This will leave a scar in your fur." JayFeather says with a frown, "Ugh" GhostWhisker moans. "I can give you this I guess." JayFeather grabs one of his feathers and hands it to GhostWhisker as a gift. "Th-thanks?" GhostWhisker stutters slightly confused. She looks into a droplet of rain as it falls the scar was her losing two legs, her front left, and back right. She notices they aren't that ugly against her white fur with russian blue splotches on her paws, tail tip, and underbelly. GhostWhisker asks JayFeather to go on a walk and he accepts GhostWhisker is still wobbly, she always will be. GhostWhisker shakes in happiness as she notices she is in her favorite place... BirdClans old camp!! She tells JayFeather about this place and he is shocked. They continue their walk around BirdClans old territory until they both feel different, something they haven't felt before...... Love. A few days later they are on another walk and they hear a rustle in the bushes so they go and investigate. They see weirdly shaped paw prints that vanish not that far from the two. They both go to investigate the strange prints. Continuing on they don't find anything out except that it is a cats prints they start losing hope. It's dark, cold, and suspicious. They are clueless and head to ThunderClan and GhostWhisker gladly gets excepted into the clan. JayFeather is SO frustrated with having to turn back so soon. They have long conversations about the mysterious paw prints and the walk to camp was quite, yet comforting. Suddenly JayFeather looks at GhostWhisker like never before, as if he loved her. GhostWhisker loves him back and can't hold it in any longer. GhostWhisker runs up to him touching noses and intertwining tails, "I love you JayFeather. JayFeather sits there, he thought if he was a sphinx he would look like a tomato. "I-I love you too!" He purrs. As they return to camp an unfamiliar cat runs up to the two with terror in their eyes. "It's me AukStar, leader of BirdClan." The black and white cat says as if in a rush. "I was trying to go back to my camp, to start it over, if you didnt know my clan died out in a flood one day" he says quickly. "AukStar calm down not everyone died it's me AukStar, I'm GhostWhisker your deputy!" GhostWhisker is shocked that AukStar lived until she notices he had nine lives now he has eight. "This is my mate JayFeather, medicine cat of ThunderClan, he saved me." GhostWhisker informs AukStar. "THUNDERCLAN!!" AukStar screams confused. He charges at JayFeather teeth baring, GhostWhisker quickly catches AukStar by the tail, "if you want to hurt him you have to get through me first!" GhostWhisker yells at AukStar. "You? You two legged freak!" That just made GhostWhisker want to kill him but she didn't instead she distracted him as JayFeather clawed him from behind. "Why not let me in your clan as a medicine cat you will need one at some point?" JayFeather points out instead of attacking him. "Fair point I guess." AukStar says trying to calm down. GhostWhisker leads the way to BirdClans old camp. A few moons later the place is restored to its original state before the flood happened.
    This story ends here there will be more story's about GhostWhisker in the future
    Thanks for reading!!!!!

  • @Jay-nq4yh
    @Jay-nq4yh 8 місяців тому +1

    Saved by: Cinderpelt
    Taken to: ThunderClan (Their Clan/Home)
    Gift: a crystal (Imma make it green)
    Scar(s): lost an ear + half blind
    Fav Place: cliff with a perfect view of the moon and shooting stars (changed it up a bit)
    How They Feel: it’s love (oh dam)
    Both decided to move forward
    My character is most frustrated abt turning back
    How they feel (again): love them back (kinda had to click a lot for that one lol)
    The Clanmate: a young warrior (someone bout my age then)
    What a wild ride, I love it sm! Can’t wait for part two :3

  • @jenenejackson5271
    @jenenejackson5271 Місяць тому +1

    Character:Nightowl-black and white longhair Thunderclan she. Chapter 1:Nightowl,being her grumpy self,decides to take a walk to calm herself down,but doesn’t notice a nearby fox as she staggers along(she already has a scar which is her hind limp leg). The fox,seeing her first,tackles her down,but only manages to scar her right eye as Hollyleaf arrives just in time and drives the fox away and rushes to their aid. Chapter 2:Hollyleaf helps Nightowl up as they go back to Thunderclan,although Nightowl harshly tells her she is ok and is brought to the medicine cat. Chapter 3:As time passed for Nightowl and her healing,Hollyleaf visits from time to time. One day,Hollyleaf gives her a flower for her to wear as Nightowl gladly accepts it. Chapter 4:Nightowl’s scar has now fully healed,but is now half-blind. As Nightowl goes to a puddle and looks at her reflection,she sees her scar isn’t nearly as bad and it makes her look more threatening(in her opinion). Chapter 5:Hollyleaf walks with Nightowl as Hollyleaf promised her something special,although Nightowl is skeptical of it. Then,they stop at a fence as Hollyleaf and Nightowl both climb up. On the other side,is a quiet meadow. Nightowl looks at the view with awe and happiness,the environment reminding her of her old home. Chapter 6:The two she-cats continue their walk. Hollyleaf tells Nightowl she thinks of her as a good friend as Nightowl says the same thing. Holly’leaf was good company. After all,most of the clan doesn’t like her. Chapter 7:Hollyleaf and Nightowl go out once more as they gossip about their clan mates. Then,Hollyleaf and Nightowl hear something in the bushes as they both stop in their tracks,but go on to investigate. Seeing nothing but weird paw prints,Hollyleaf urges Nightowl to come on,but Nightowl urges Hollyleaf forward as she decides to come. Chapter 8:Hollyleaf and Nightowl only take a few steps as the weird paw prints disappear without a trace. Nightowl is frustrated as she kicks a pebble in anger,but Hollyleaf calms her down and they go back to camp. Chapter 9:Nightowl sighs as Hollyleaf and her finish their conversation,the wind turning colder and the sky turning dark. Nightowl looks towards Hollyleaf as Hollyleaf gives her a look like never before. Nightowl is confused at first,but quickly catches on as she feels uncomfortable. Nightowl was a straight she and already had a mate and now 3 kits,but Nightowl doesn’t say anything. Chapter 10:Nightowl and Hollyleaf enter camp,the look on Hollyleaf still on Nightowl’s mind,as a senior warrior runs up to them. (I was to lazy to put dialogue and sorry if I don’t have enough detail I’m just feeling tired today)

  • @Nina_loves_dandysworld
    @Nina_loves_dandysworld 3 місяці тому +2

    Sky was saved by raven paw from a fox attack. She was safe but had a scar on her throat. The clan helped her recover. But the medicine cat said: that her wound will leave a scar. The medicine cat gave her a butterfly wing to help her. Her and raven paw were happyly running in camp.She and her saver went to the meadow. She knows it's love. Her and her savior went together. Her and her savior knew it was getting dark. She was unsure about this. Her sister blossom heart told her. ( she's a kitty pet)

  • @Miratheflower
    @Miratheflower 7 місяців тому +1

    My oc story- Mira is a black shecat with dark grey tabby markings and white mittons on her front paws with pale green eyes. She’s a loner
    Part 1:
    Mira was trotting through the forest wondering if she’d get to find any shelter or food before the moon came out when she heard a crack and she looked up to see a large branch falling above her but before she could get hit a orange Tom with green eyes who she’d later find out was Firestar grabbed her and pulled her away enough so that the branch only hit her back legs which ends up saving her life.
    Part 2:Firestar brought Mira to thunderclan where she was taken into the med den and treated by whichever millionth medcat was there at the moment. She was very grateful
    Part 3:when she finds out it will leave a scar she gets sad because scars remind her of something that happened in her past. Firestar tells her that her scars are beautiful or something idk and he gives her a cardinal feather to wear.
    Part 4: she ends up being able to walk around the camp and sees her scars in a puddle. She had a nose scar from a splinter from the tree landing and half of her tail had been ripped off. Same with her right back leg.
    Part 5: they go on a walk yadayada and she then relizes wow she’s going to her favorite place!! Which was a sparkling riverbed even though Mira is deathly afraid of water.
    Part 6: she realizes after awhile she’s not sure how she feels about Firestar but after some time she finally understands that she didn’t know how she felt
    Part 7: she finds a weird footprint with Firestar and she followed it which led to Firestar following her
    Part 8: the story happens then she gets frustrated because it’s frustrating
    Part 9:the story happens and Mira realizes she loves him back and because that would be awkward sandstorm is not firestars mate in this.
    Part 10: the story happens and she walks up worriedly to the cat who is her sibling…….who is dead so instead of that it was and elder.

  • @IVYTAIL
    @IVYTAIL 6 місяців тому +1

    Spottedleaf.
    The sturdiest shelter you two could find.
    Yellow butterfly wing.
    Nose scar.
    A beautiful meadow.
    [choose] You need more time to think.
    Your savior.
    you.
    Unsure.
    [choose] An older medicine cat.

  • @destry_black_wolf
    @destry_black_wolf 8 місяців тому +1

    This is so good I wanted to make a story about my persona in the warrior cats world and this is a good starter

  • @tatianavolgershtein5760
    @tatianavolgershtein5760 8 місяців тому +2

    My character is a whit cat named snow flake he was saved by millie she taken me(my cat oc) to her home to recover she give a shell as a gift yhe day's pas and the time i lost my 2 ears keep remind me of the time i saw her after some time we come out and go to our favorite place the sparkling riverbed after all that you would think we will be more then friends but we still just friends(reminding its my oc cat)we heard some nois and saw weird shape footprints we both further to see who made thos footprints we couldn't find the cat that maid them it was night so we needed to go home i was furstrated that we didnt find that cat on the way back she looked at me like never befor (like love in eyes look) i was unsure on that when we finaly came back a younger apprentice came with terror in his eyes(more in part 2)

  • @JustARandomWeirdoOverHere
    @JustARandomWeirdoOverHere 6 місяців тому +1

    I’m bad at writing- eh whatever
    Chapter 1
    [Redacted] was running from… something, she thought it was a wandering monster, but no it was something else… I’m almost out of breath, I hope someone comes quick… then… with a glimpse of an eye she saw Cinder’Pelt! The medicine cat of thunder clan, but then [Redacted] started to lose vision
    ‘ ‘ no… not now!… ‘ ‘ she said, then it went black
    Chapter 2
    [redacted] woke up suddenly, she tried to walk but all her legs hurt so much.. she saw cinder again and decided to follow, despite the pain, she then saw the place, it was thunderclan! The place of fire’star and so many great stories… but why here?
    Chapter 3
    After being in the medicine den for awhile, [redacted] noticed that there were gonna be many scars. Cinder comforts her, she knows what it’s like… then after a bit longer cinder gave [redacted] a moth wing, what will come next?
    Chapter 4
    I started growing well with the scars, with cinder’s help. Now the scars are better and I walked around camp, and saw a puddle and saw it the scar, it looks better then I thought, then I thought about the time I met cinder… the thing… oh yeah, the scar is a ear scar.. not that bad I thought
    Chapter 5
    I am finally healed! Cinder and I walked outside the camp, wow, thsi is amazing! Oh… we’re at the glistening shore! I didn’t even notice… strange… I don’t share this place with many people.
    Chapter 6
    After talking for a bit, we resume waking, we can connect now, it’s been awhile… how do I feel about them though?… I think… no no we’re friends I like someone else.
    Chapter 7
    Some days later me and cinder head out, a noise appeared… it might be- no no… we should investigate, oh it’s some weird paw prints, we should keep going, I go first, we need to see.
    Chapter 8
    Not many clues have been found, just some more weird prints, it’s as if it vanished, and it’s dark, time to head back… atleast we’re not mad
    Chapter 9
    After a lot of talking later, the walk to camp’s sound was only crickets… it was calming, then the light in cinder’s eyes… I’ve seen it in other cats before… love. I was frustrated and confused, I like someone else but don’t want to disappoint them!
    Chapter 10
    Back in camp still frustrated about the prints when you saw a younger apprentice you don’t know them well, but the fear in their eyes you knew too well… what’s going on?
    Holy crap this is intense

  • @NoémiTolnai
    @NoémiTolnai Місяць тому +1

    My story: [my own story]
    Dark kit was a curios and playfull kit. He loved to play with his brothers. When he became an apprentice, the leader promised she will do his ceremony and it happened. Everyone was proud of her and his dad was his mentor. Her dad was a good hunter and it made dark paw to hunt like his dad. When dark paw, became a warrior, he changed his name to Dark storm. The leader chosed dark storm to be deputy. Dark storm was a loyal member of the clan and was respected for his kindness. Dark storm worked many years as deputy and he retired when he was 9 moons old. Before he retired, the leader, cloudstar, wanted to say to every cat that dark storm has retired. And everyone held him in high respect for his hard work and for doing what the leader said. Sadly, a battle with riverclan, dark storm died as a cat breaked his neck. When the battle ended, the leader noticed dark storm was laying, blood coming out from her neck. The leader, being sad and tears falling from his eyes, she screamed: no!!!!!! All the other cats heard it and ran where the sound came from just to only see the leader crying and dark storm bleeding from his neck being dead. The clan decided to write his name on trees so they wont forget him
    The end

  • @LittleFox-dc7cc
    @LittleFox-dc7cc 9 місяців тому +2

    Bristlefrost, my own clan, berries, lost half my tail, moonstone, it's love, Your Savior, Your Savior, unsure, A senior warrior

  • @MADIESWONDERLAND
    @MADIESWONDERLAND 7 місяців тому +1

    On the stepping stones of Riverclan, MariGold (not my main Oc but whatever) falls into the water. She was saved by Nightcloud who brought her to the sturdiest place they could find and they gave her a fern to put on her pelt. They went to their favorite place which was a lovley meadow, when her shoulder scar and face scar healed. She has connected with her savoir but felt something weird. She didnt know what to think when she saw Nightcloud, she needed more time to think. When they see the foot prints, NightCloud beckons her to follow with the flick of their tail. She follows but Nightcloud is upset to leave the prints alone. When they get back, Nightcloud stares at her with a loving gaze, but Marigold doesn't feel the same... She shook it off seeing the unfamiliar elder medicine cat in her clan. What could it mean?
    (To be continued)

  • @Bug_Bear_wcue
    @Bug_Bear_wcue 2 місяці тому +1

    Bear’Pealt was saved by Twig’Branch from a fox attack . She then take her to their clan , and the leader accepts even though she comes from windclan . Twig’Branch gives her a blue butterfly wing . Bear’pelt got a throat scar . They both then decide to go back to her territory , windclan . They stay friends even though they are from different clans . Bear’Pelt goes first to check on weird paw prints they both found. Bear’Pelt is very frustrated

  • @ElisePiels
    @ElisePiels Місяць тому +1

    Strawberry'paw felt like she was drowning, yet she was saved. as she glanced at her savior she noticed it was Jake! he took her to his home, so Strawberry'wind could regain her strength. as she came back and got a checkup, Jake gave Strawberry'wind a bracelet as a gift. when she could walk again she looked at herself in a pool of water. she had gotten a facial scar on her way to the clan appearantly. Jake and Strawberry'Wind decided to hangout and we went to her favourite place. the pretty waterfalls near an abandoned barn at the edge of the forest. she doesnt know how she feels about Jake. whether theyre friends or something more. shell think about it a little longer. they both felt like they needed to continue to investigate the weird pawprints. they didnt mind going back. she made her decision when he looked like he liked her. she KNEW shed like him eventually, and she actually did. an older type apprentince (so on the old side of apprentince) came rushing to her as soon as she entered camp. they just wanted attention and nothing was wrong.

  • @Makenna-f9g
    @Makenna-f9g 8 місяців тому +2

    The cat who saves me is crowfeather, the place is (I choose) is sunningrocks because I literally can’t think of anywhere, they give me a human treasure to heal faster, I’m blind in one eye, we went to a sparkling riverbed, I fell for someone but it’s not them, both of us decide to keep going, my savior is the most frustrated, I don’t feel the same way about them after they look at me like that, an older medicine cat runs to me with terror, my oh my. Ima write it like it’s a actual story :3
    I am in grave danger, just as I think that all is lost crowfeather, a cat around my age, comes to my rescue. I am hurt, but crowfeather brings me to sunningrocks to heal. They give me a human treasure, hoping it will help with the healing. I notice I will have a scar.. I’m blind in one eye. Now I am almost fully healed, and me and crowfeather decide to go on a walk outside of camp so we can spend quality time together, my heart soars with excitement as we enter my favorite place to go, a sparkling riverbed. Many moons later, I fell in love with someone who isn’t my savior.. they give me a gaze of love and, I don’t feel exactly the same about them..
    5 likes for part 2 😜

  • @86mkelley
    @86mkelley 4 місяці тому +2

    Chapter 1- Silvermoon ran. The forest was on fire. The silver she-cat yowled as the fire blazed after her. She felt a burning sensation on her tail and closed her eyes expecting to see StarClan cats running with her. Silvermoon opened her eyes again and saw a black tom running towards her. She felt the burning sensation grow to her flank. Overwhelmed, she collapsed and drifted off expecting to see Grayheart, her deceased sister.
    Chapter 2- Silvermoon awoke to new scents surrounding her. She looked around, her vision hazy then clearing. She was in an old fox den. The black tom from the fire was staring at her. "Hello. I am Nightfog." he meowed. Nightfog pushed a rabbit to her. "How?" Silvermoon mewed. "You fainted and I dragged you to the nearest hill, which was still pretty far. I checked the forest this morning; its over." he explained. "Oh, and um your tail its uh... gone." Silvermoon looked at him in horror. She spun her head around and saw that her tail was indeed gone. "NO!" she cried. As sad and surprised she sounded, Silvermoon wasn't that surprised she knew fire had caught her tail.
    Chapter 3- Silvermoon was lying on a moss nest when Nightfog trotted in holding a flower crown. "This is for you." he mewed thoughtfully. "I thought this would make you feel better about your tail." Silvermoon blushed. "You didn't have to. My tail is fine, honestly. But thank you!" she accepted the beautiful gift and he placed it on her head.
    Chapter 4- Silvermoon awoke with a jolt. She didn't feel pain in her tail anymore. "I've healed!" She cried. Nightfog turned to her with a smile on his face. "Wonderful!" he said. "Now that you've healed, would you like to visit somewhere?" Silvermoon knew the perfect place. "Yes. The old RiverClan camp. There's a sparkling river that's magical at night." Before she knew it, they had arrived. The moon had just taken its place at the center of the night sky. The riverbed was more magical than she had remembered. "It's beautiful..." she whispered. Nightfog turned to her with kind eyes.
    Chapter 5- Silvermoon and Nightfog continued on their way back to the old fox den. (More coming tommarow!)

  • @legendarybluepegasus2687
    @legendarybluepegasus2687 8 місяців тому +2

    Olive's Heart
    Chapter 1
    My name is Olive I'm a yellow tabby tomcat I was recently abandoned by my two legs on the side of the thunder path. For days I walked through the forest trying my best to get back to the city but then I was attacked by a fox. I would have died if it wasn't for a grey cat named Cinder heart. She noticed how wounded and beat up I was so she decided to take me back to her home thunderclan.
    Chapter 2
    Cinder heart took me to the medicine Den. I received some ugly bad scars that day 4 on my backside and 2 scars on my face, and since I was too weak to walk around I have to remain in the medicine Den. I would have gone crazy from boredom if it wasn't for Cinder heart keeping me company everyday. I remember telling her that I miss being outside so she gave me a little fern leaf to wear behind my ear. she's such a good friend
    Chapter 3
    Overtime I grow more and more comfortable with my scars. And since I had nowhere else to go I decided to stay in thunderclan the leader even gave me a warrior name, Olive stripe. Now that I'm completely healed Cinder heart and I decided to go for a walk and as a little surprise she decided to take me to the giant Lake in the middle of their Territory. the lake is absolutely amazing I have never seen anything more beautiful
    Chapter 4
    One day when when Cinder heart and I when hunting together we notice these weird paw prints in the dirt and we also noticed some blood in the dirt as well. I told Cinder heart that we should head back but she wanted to investigate but later that day the Trail went cold and we both agreed to head back to camp.
    Chapter 5
    On our way home cinder heart told me that she wants to confess something. She told me that she loved me and arcs if I wanted to be her mate. I didn't know what to do there and their but in the end I decided to tell her the truth. I didn't feel the same way about her, I love her as a friend but I don't feel romantically in love with her. Cinder heart at first was sad about the news but she understands and thanks me for being honest. Once we got back to camp we both decide to share some fresh kill together. once we both started eating, a warrior named smoke patch what past us and that's when I noticed his paw prints are covered in the same dirt and blood we found earlier today he turned around to look at us and that I noticed a complete terror in his eyes. I told Cinder heart and we both decide to keep an eye on him for now.
    End of book 1

  • @Rkachadourian1
    @Rkachadourian1 8 місяців тому +3

    Willow'Shine saved me(dont know who she is yet cause im not to that book),she then took me to her clan/home.She gave me flowers for a speedy recovery.I got a nose scar and rump scar.She took me under a waterfall.Ive fallen for someone,just not fir them.I choose to keep going.Im frustrated that we turn back so soon.I feel sad.A younger medicine cat.
    Ignore this its just so i remember what i got lol (:

  • @joyceraedomingo9426
    @joyceraedomingo9426 8 місяців тому +2

    Chapter 1 :Firestar
    CHAPTER 2:their clan/home
    Chapter 3: bracelet
    Dhapter 4: multiple scars (2)
    Chapter 5: (i can choose anywhere)
    Chapter 6 : i choose again
    Chapter 7 : i choose once again..
    Chapter 8 : i still choose.....
    Chapter 9 : unsure
    Chapter 10 : a middle aged warrior

    • @joyceraedomingo9426
      @joyceraedomingo9426 8 місяців тому

      I cant stop freaking out! Bc the creator of this video hearted my comment also ty!!!!😊

  • @1dk-93o
    @1dk-93o Місяць тому +2

    ‼️⚠️BEFORE READING: KNOW THIS IS NOT TRUE AND MADE UP! ITS CANON‼️⚠️
    Honeybadgerfur was walking through the forest, and suddenly got attacked and pushed underwater, he felt the strain for breathing leaving him and he gave in, but something grabbed his scruff and pulled him out. Cinderpelt! His eyes glittered with tiredness and her eyes widened. She made him lean on her to walk for a bit, finding an old, fallen down tree with a cave. She gathered moss and feathers and scuffled them together as a nest, drowsily Honeybadgerfur leaned into it and plopped down. His eyes closed and in a minute he was asleep, breathing softly yet raggedly. He woke up to Cinderpelt bringing him a plump mouse and he smiled weakly and ate it. He fell back to sleep not long after, and when he woke up it was Cinderpelt again. ` We have to go to my camp.` ` Can we…. Stay longer?` he asked, still gasping for breath. Cinderpelt looked down at her paws and muttered ` fine..` He went back to his nest and curled up. Cinderpelt made a nest next to him and they fell asleep. When he woke up, he sensed Cinderpelt yelling with distress. ` What’s wrong?` He panted after running to catch up with her. ` The rain washed our scent away! Now we are lost!` ` Stay here.` he told her, trying to act calm. He found a patch of fresh poppy and trotted back to the tree, giving her it. She took a deep breath after eating the seeds. ` Want to go for a walk?` She smiled shyly and nodded. They found a set of tunnels. She walked slow, because he was still weak. It took him strength to walk and to use his normal voice. Once they had sat down, he realized it was his favorite place! A sparkling gemstone river, which he called Gemside riverbed. They noticed suspicious paw prints, but they didn’t find anything. They were both mad when they had to go because of the bad weather. He went to sleep after they got back. When he woke up there was a gemstone anklet on his paw entwined with beautiful seagull and thrush feathers. He smiled at her and she smiled back. He noticed his scar in a pool of water. It was a giant scar sliced across his leg, and his tail was scarred. He had started to grow fond of her. They took another walk and she looked at him with hearts in her eyes, and he did it back. They entwined tails and watched the sun set.
    IF I GET 5 LIKES ILL DO A WHOLE CHAPTER BOOK THING. Also check out my story on one of her videos called clan maker.

  • @ivyonnasutton4022
    @ivyonnasutton4022 8 місяців тому +3

    My main cat is gonna be Daisyvoice, this is gonna be about her! (Clan: Tc = ThunderClan. Backstory: Daisy is a sweet funny she-cat, who can get ahead of herself. Looks like A she-cat with a light brown that goes into a fade, her eyes are as green as the grass. And that's all btw before you start reading there's gonna be late talking!)
    Daisyvoice wonders and sees a large juicy rabbit by the rushing river, she gets down into a hunter’s crouch and gets closer and closer than pouncing! But the rabbit dodged out of the way just in time causing Daisyvoice to fall into the water, “Help!” Daisyvoice yells out letting any cat near know she's in help, then out of nowhere a large tom jumps out and rushes to the edge of the river giving a paw to Daisyvoice. “Grab my paw!” The large tom yelled out to Daisyvoice as the rushing waves pushed her down the river, then she used all of her strength to push her weak body toward them grabbing their paw. “L-let me bring you to your clan!” He picks her weak, cold body on his back sprinting to her clan territory and panting, he then brings her into the medicine cat den lying her down on a moss nest turning around and facing Silverstream the medicine cat. “She fell into the river, her body is weak and cold please help her!” Silverstream nodes getting herbs and giving her warmth. The next day the large tom comes into the medicine cat den and holds a pretty white flower in his mouth. “I- uh, got this for you!” He places the flower down with a smile on his face. “Thanks!” Daisyboice said smiling back at the tom. “Never got your name did I?” She asked pawing the flower closer to her so she could grab it. “My name is Flametail, you?” He said sitting down. “Nice to meet you Flametail, my name is Daisyvoice, and thanks for saving me at the river!” She smiled once more. “You're welcome!” He reddens. A few days later he kept visiting Daisyvoice, and finally, Silverstream came in and said she was free and could now go back to her duties as a warrior. Daisyvoice walks out of the den with a smile and then finds Flametail outside of the clan looking down at the blooming flowers. “You good?” Said Daisyvoice “Yep!” Flametail looked at Daisyvoice. “How is that nose scar feeling?” Daisyvoice touches her nose. “ Oh, I never felt it, probably because it is just a small scar!” She chuckles, and Flametail chuckles as well. A day passed and Flametail took Daisyvoice to a beautiful meadow view. “This is my favorite spot to be at!” Said Flametail. Daisyvoice looks over at him. “Really? Mine too!” She said a big smile lit up on her face. “Guess we have something the same!” Said Flametail. They talk some more and go back to camp, but as they walk Daisyvoice can't keep her eyes off of him. His smile makes me have butterflies in my stomach! Daisyvoice says to herself in her mind. We get back to camp safely and the next morning we go on a border patrol, as we walk through the forest Daisyvoice hears something moving in a bush, she tells Flametail to halt while she checks it out but the only thing she finds is weird paw print, Flametail comes over looking down at the paw prints. “We should follow them there on our territory!” Daisyvoice says. “Okay. ?” Flametail leads the way, 6 minutes pass, and only has paw prints as clues and it's also getting later Daisyboice paws start to freeze “We should head back to camp!” Flametail says no fan of winter and getting too dark. “Okay-” Daisyvoice turns around and follows Flamtail back to camp for the night. As you two walk back it is quiet but Daisyvoice sees Flametail looking at her sending her love eyes, Daisyvoice does the same too. They get back to the camp and sleep, the next morning they walk into the clearing and sit down talking, but then a younger apprentice bursts into the clearing “A…. Group of rouges is on the border!” Daisyvoice and Flametail information the leader willowstar. “Follow me and get more warriors!” Sandstorm, Appleseed, Vineheart, and Quillleaf the deputy trot to where they were told the rouges were last seen. “Here!” Willowstar Fur stands up as she sees the group of 4 rouges “Why have I been getting reports of you on our territory?” The group of rouges back down and says they were only here for prey because there's barely any prey in bare-leaf, and says they'll never come on their borders again. But before they turned around and left Willowstar says.”If you go to the little pond by the barn there might be some birds there.” The group thanks the clan cats for helping them and are on their way out. The cats then get back to their clan safely without any Injured cats. (That's the end of the story hope you guys liked it and if this gets to over 100 likes I’ll do part 2 where Flametail and Daisyboice might have kittens!!!!)

    • @Anteaax
      @Anteaax 8 місяців тому +1

      Thats awsome story! Good job! I would love to see part 2

    • @Anteaax
      @Anteaax 8 місяців тому

      This is underrated tbh!!❤

    • @ivyonnasutton4022
      @ivyonnasutton4022 8 місяців тому +1

      Ty!!

    • @Anteaax
      @Anteaax 8 місяців тому

      Yww

    • @ivyonnasutton4022
      @ivyonnasutton4022 8 місяців тому +1

      @@Anteaax I can do part 2 rn now, and you can if you want tell me what should happen.

  • @Innocentcat_thereal
    @Innocentcat_thereal 6 днів тому +1

    My story!1
    Yarrow'Tail is a beige and light orange she-cat with a mix of persian and tabby, she has heterochromia(different colored eyes) and 1 ear and has 2 scars on the tigh and torso. (shes my wcue main btw but i lost le account:( )
    //-CHAPTER 1
    Yarrow'Tail trotted across the river of riverclan, curious as a fox. she then began to wonder what was in the depths of the river. a lightning struck, her ears perked up as she fell into the water. realizing there was a thunderstorm, she tried to swim but the current was too strong. 'Help!' she yowled, thinking nobody would save her, she saw a branch and held on for dear life. thinking that all hope was lost, she closed both her eyes, praying to starclan.

  • @Rachel-fd4fw
    @Rachel-fd4fw Місяць тому +1

    1. sandstorm
    2. to thunderclan
    3. she gives me a blue butterfly wing
    4. im blind in one eye
    5. the owltree
    6. i have falling in love with someone just not her
    7. sandstorm decides to keep going
    8. were both upset
    9. unsure
    10. a middle aged warrior

  • @Shinyrockprincess
    @Shinyrockprincess Місяць тому +2

    snowpaws journey
    PROLOGUE:Snowy was a tiny white she-cat her eyes as green as grass,she was a well fed kittypet who played with toys all day,her litter-mates icicle and winter would entertain her and protect her,icicle was a tom cat with light gray fur and blue eyes as blue as the water,winter was a tom with whiteish gray fur with eyes as yellow as the shimmering sunlight,snowy always thought every cat lived like this until she went in the backyard and saw wild cats past the fence she tried climbing it but icicle stopped her in her tracks and told it was dangerous,snowy wondered how it was in the wild and asked winter,he said he didn't know but it was dangerous,she was curious but didn't wanna leave them so she asked if they could take a peak,they said maybe tomorrow but that day never came
    Chapter 1
    "Why can't we go?" Snowy mewed wanting to know as her fur swished around in the wind from the window "its dangerous,wild cats there would rip your ears off!" Icicle insisted "theres big scary foxes that eat cats like us!" Winter tried to explain but snowy didn't listen,they grew tired of telling her it was dangerous and got curious themselves,"maybe its not that bad?" Icicle mewed to snowy after a bit of thought to snowy "can't be that bad,dying from a fox sounds cool!" Winter said,snowy jumped over the fence while the others followed her,they looked for the cars their housefolk drove then walked to the forest,they came across a cat named sunpaw who asked what they where doing there,"we're taking a small peak" icicle said his fur standing up as his blue eyes turned to look at winter,winter looked back at him looking completely fine wondering why the oldest cat was so frightened,"who are you?" Snowy asked the cat curiously,"I'm sunpaw,who are you?",the cat said,"I'm snowy hes icicle and thats winter" snowy said,"i gotta go now by-" the cat fell slient as he saw another cat a few steps away,"sunpaw who are they?" The mysterious warrior said walking up to them,"nobody stoneheart!" The cat yowled,as the grey she-cat stepped up to them,"why are you with kittypets!?" The cat yelled to sunpaw,"i was hunting and i-","no excuses sunpaw! I'm gonna tell the leader!" The cat hissed back at sunpaw,"maybe i can take you to our camp" the cat said in a awkward tone,"uh sure!" Icicle said to the cat as the cats followed the wildcat
    CHAPTER 2
    the cats were at the camp with new names as they where allowed to join,snowy was now snowpaw,icicle was icepaw,winter was winterpaw,they all looked around the camp feeling weird wanting to go home to their twolegs,they where still in collars,cats from the clan looked at them funny as if they where catfood inside a water bowl,they where being leaded to the apprentice den by sunpaw,when they got there they laid down on the floor and fell asleep,they where woken up by a tom cat named brightpaw making fun of them for their collar,snowpaw jumped at the cat and attacked him,she broke off her collar and jumped at the others to get theirs off
    I'll finish this in the future whitch probably will be in like 2 years or smth

  • @liritklemer99999
    @liritklemer99999 5 місяців тому +2

    My saver Leafpool, my clan is (Riverclan, so she can see My saver Leafpool, my clan (riverclan, so she can see mothwing….)
    She gifts me a moth’s wing ;) #mothpool #notsosecretlover
    I chose (shoulder scar and both my ears are slashed)
    Me and Leafpool go to a cliff with a view of the starlight and shooting stars and she says… “I used too go here with mothwing when we were young medicine cats…. From when we were paws all the way until….” “What?” I say …”she’s still alive” “….we were forced to never see each other again…. For our own good really… we are med cats you know….” She sighs and puts her head on her paws. I curl up next to her. “You’ll always have me!” I say. She lets out at small laugh at my exclamation and naïve, looking back if only I was old and mature enough back then to understand the complexity and hurt she was feeling… and that I may be experiencing the same thing I just didn’t know it yet…
    #lgbtqiawarriorcats
    I describe to Leafpool as we walk this she-cat named Daisyfire. I have a really hard time describing her as I think she is the prettiest cat in the world! I suddenly realize I’m talking really fast and rambling on about a cat that it would never even be possible to have a relationship with! 🙀🫨
    But the Leafpool turns to me and says well actually it’s not AGAINST the warrior code for a lgbtq relationship to happen but, the only reason Mothpool which is Mothwing and Me is harder is because we are med cats and that is against the warrior code.
    As we feel we have grown closer from that talk we decide we will go forward together. We say it at the same time “Together.”
    Although we both went forward together I was far more disappointed when we had to go back and it was actually Leafpool’s idea to turn back, she says “I do not want you hurt again, as a medicine cat, your savior but mainly your friend.” When she looks at me with that love in her eyes, I know it is not because she is IN LOVE but because she loves me like family, so it is a positive feeling (based on the story I have wrote down that is what I believe, mainly because we are both in love with different people.)
    When we get back to came and older Younger medicine cat (can you guess) runs up to me and Leafpool in fear, Leafpool stuttered to ask her what happened to I ask instead.
    “Mothwing what happened…” I ask

  • @Yuka_da_silly_billy
    @Yuka_da_silly_billy 2 місяці тому +1

    My story: meadow'leap is a dark calico Norwegian forest cat with dark green eyes. She is loyal, smark, kind and indecisive. "One day as Xena was walking back to the barn after a long day of trying to hunt she fell into a river, she gasped for air trying to swim, suddenly spotting a leopard print cat running towards her. She would get dragged down by the large cold waves,slowly fainting. Xena suddenly woke up, spotting the leopard print cat sitting besides her. 'Thank star clan your awake! 'The leopard print cat said. She looked at her surroundings, confused where she was and who the leopard printed cat was. 'Oh, I'm leopard'star and I just saved you from downing. I brought you here to my clan, riverclan' leopard'star would meow friendly at her. She'd suddenly sneeze, feeling a rough sting by her right ear 'oh you must have gotten scraped by something in the river, here take this' the medicine cat of river clan would mew kindly while handing her a moth Wing. She'd walk towards the river, looking down at her reflection seeing that her right ear was missing. She'd sigh softly before gently butting the moth Wing besides her torn down ear. 'Would you like do join riverclan? ' leopad'star mewed 'yes!' Xena mewed excitedly. As a few moons had passed she had gotten a warrior ceremony and a new name, some friends and a clan. (Meadow'leap) she'd suddenly get spooked by leopard'star walking passed her and sitting down besides her. 'Would you like to go on a walk? ' leopard'star asked warmly. 'Sure' meadow'leap mewed. They'd start walking out of the camp, jumping over some rocks and through a large forest. It'd start getting dark. 'We're here!' leopard'star mewed. She'd look up seeing a cliff, she'd walk forward, suddenly a shooting star shot across the beautiful stary night sky. They'd start walking back to camp while chatting on the way. 'Meadow'leap. I have to tell you something. I uhh.. I've fallen in love with you and I hope you have with me too.. It's alright if you don't feel the same' leopard'star mewed Nervously too meadow'leap 'you do?! I-ive fallen in love with you too.. ' she'd mew back, they'd look at each other happily. (Time skip:3) they'd go out on a walk a few days later. Suddenly hearing some rustling in the bushes, they'd look at each other before going to investigate. It suddenly begin to get extremely cold, 'we should turn back ' they'd say at the same time, they giggle before starting to walk back to camp. She'd look at leopard'star, noticing that she was looking at her with deeply in love eyes, she'd look tilt her head against her shoulder as they continued to walk. Suddenly a other warrior walked towards them with terror in their eyes 'leopard'star? Meadow'leap?' the cat would look at them sadly. 'What.. Leopard'star?! I've always loved you meadow'leap I know you know that! ' the cat said angrily. 'I'm sorry but, who are you? ' meadow'leap mewed nervously (mk ima sleep now)

  • @Sandstorm89483
    @Sandstorm89483 8 місяців тому +1

    Saved by: Frostpaw.
    Taken to: horseplace.
    Gift: a feather
    Scar: shoulder scar
    Favorite place: woods brimming with birdsong
    Feelings for Frostpaw: need more time to think
    First to investigate: Frostpaw
    Most frustrated to head back: neither of us
    Frostpaw loves me; I love her back
    Runs to me in terror: my sister

    • @canvas4708
      @canvas4708  8 місяців тому +1

      Wow, that sounds really interesting. Everything you paused on lined up so well :D

  • @FangWCUE
    @FangWCUE Місяць тому +1

    My story.
    I was in grave danger and began thinking all hope was lost when suddenly someone saves me! I recognised the familiar spark in their eyes..it was Ivypool! I was safe now but brutally wounded. My saviour takes me under their wing and take me some place to recover. It was their clan. After being treated I realised my wounds will leave a scar. My saviour comforts and reassures me. Even complimenting how brave I was! They gave me an orange butterfly wing as a gift in hope of a speedy recovery! When I grow more comfortable with my scars and are healed enough to walk around camp, I look in a body of water, I had a long scar down my spine, I realised it was not as ugly as i thought it was! Once practically fully healed me and my saviour go on a walk, we have gone to my favourite place in the world! which happens to be a roof of a twolegs house with a wonderful view. As we spend more time together, I started to develop feelings for them. One day while we were on a walk we saw weird shaped paw prints that vanish not too far ahead from where we are. My saviour decides to follow them, i agree. We couldnt find anything really so we head back to camp. I was the most frustrated about turning back so soon, but i didn’t say anything. When we were heading back, my saviour looks at me with love in the eyes type of look. I felt a positive emotion to this which was love, as i had fallen for them too. When we returned to camp, an unfamiliar clanmate runs to me with terror in their eyes. It was a young warrior.

  • @SlipsunLightOfHeaven
    @SlipsunLightOfHeaven 8 місяців тому +2

    Omg 80 comments already??? sheesh! I was here just yesterday!! My Story is still a WIP, so stay tuned..... :D
    OKAY, just to not keep you waiting, here is part one!! Part 2 coming soon! Enjoy!!
    CHAPTER ONE
    A small, tan and rust-colored young she-cat slid through the prickly bushes around the Shadowclan camp. Slinking slowly around a rock, she crept up behind two sleepy apprentices, carefully placing her paws. She crouched, ready to leap, when her former mentor called out her name, scolding her. “Petalsong! What do you think you’re doing?”
    “Nothing, Russetfur.” Petalsong mewed, sitting up and pulling one paw over her ears. “Nothing at all.”
    “Quit messing around.” Russetfur hissed. “Warriors don’t pull pranks like apprentices.”
    “Yes, Russestfur,” Petalsong sighed.
    Russestfur turned and headed toward the warriors den, but paused. “And Petalsong, the dawn patrol scented a group of rogues near the border with WindClan. No cat is to leave camp by themselves until we are sure they have left.” With that, she swished her tail and ducked away.
    Petalsong sighed and rolled her eyes. She was finally a grown warrior, but her former mentor was still treating her like an apprentice fresh out of the nursery. 'Forget about being grown up now, Petalsong', she thought. 'You’re still an immature kit in her eyes.'
    Ignoring her mentor’s warning, she quietly slid out of camp toward the one place in ShadowClan territory where she felt at home.
    After leaping across the stream where the elders often gathered, and weaving through the pines, she arrived at a small clearing lit with sunlight. She could hear the thunderpath nearby, but she always ignored it. A light breeze rustled in the long grass, carrying with it the scents of the moor. She took a deep breath in, savoring the airy tang the open fields offered.
    Petalsong purred, the sun glinting on her golden eyes. She had always loved the feel of the sun on her fur and the wind in her face. The gloomy stillness of the pine forest always left her uneasy and glum, but the shining clearing lifted her heart.
    Petalsong was relaxing, and enjoying the sun, when a harsh smell blew over her. She whirled around to see two cruel looking cats, with scars littered across their bodies, stalking toward her.
    “Lookie here,” the brown tabby one snarled. “A little kitty, far from home, all by herself.”
    “Well, well, well,” her companion grinned. He lashed his dirty white tail, and slid out his claws.
    Petalsong glanced from one to the other as they moved to surround her. She knew she was outnumbered, but did her best to put on the ferocity of ShadowClan.
    “You are on ShadowClan territory,” she hissed, trying to keep her voice steady. “Leave now, before a patrol finds you here.”
    “We’re not worried about your little friends, sweetie,” the brown she-cat purred. “In fact, they should be worried about us.”
    “Shall we teach this one a lesson to take back to her ‘clan’?” the tom asked, grinning with yellow teeth.
    “I think so,” the she-cat replied . “GET HER!”
    Petalsong yowled as the two leaped on top of her with sudden force, knocking her to the ground. She clawed at their bellies, struggling to get away, to the safety of her clan. She wriggled free, feeling their claws slide down her back.
    Staggering away, she turned and dashed blindly into the undergrowth. Desperately tearing her way through the trees, she glanced back to see the matted tom not more than a mouse tail behind her.
    He took a gigantic leap, and landed on her back. Petalsong yelped as he sank his teeth into her throat, just missing the most vulnerable place. She scratched at his eyes and tore away, pain making her dizzy.
    Pushing herself faster, she heedlessly raced through the forest, over a strip of empty land, and blundered out suddenly onto a hard surface. Her mind barely had time to register it as the thunderpath before she was at the other side.
    Petalsong choked, gulping for air, and nearly collapsed. She tried to stand and fell. She could hear the two rogues pounding toward her, ready to inflict more damage. She wobbled to her paws, preparing to defend herself, when a sleek black tomcat leaped between her and the savage rogues hissing furiously.
    Her vision fading, she collapsed in a heap, trusting the stranger to protect her.
    CHAPTER TWO
    Petalsong blinked awake sunlight flooding into her eyes. She lifted her head, and winced at the pain on her throat. She blinked hard, clearing the fuzziness from her brain. She glanced around, gazing at the hideaway she was curled in.
    Petalsong twitched her ears, confused. She didn’t recognize the smells that wafted around her. She flinched as a brown tom with a short tail slid into the den. He set down the bundle of herbs he held in his mouth when he noticed her.
    “Ah, you’re awake,” he meowed. “I’ll go get Ravenpaw.”
    'Who?' Petalsong wondered. She tried to sit up, but fell back as pain clouded her vision. As her sight cleared, a lithe tom with a glossy black coat slipped into the shelter. His green eyes lit up when he saw her.
    The memory of the battle hit her in a rush. The two rogues, the thunderpath, her throat, and the black tom saving her.
    “You… you’re the cat who saved me,” Petalsong stammered. “Thank you.”
    “Of course,” the black cat said, his white tail tip twitching. “I couldn’t let them kill you.”
    They sat in an awkward silence, neither one knowing what to say.
    The black cat spoke first. “My name is Ravenpaw. What’s yours?”
    “Petalsong.” She tipped her head. “What clan are you from? You look a bit old to be an apprentice.”
    Ravenpaw chuckled. “I don’t live in a clan anymore, but I was once from ThunderClan.” His whiskers twitched. “You’re from ShadowClan.”
    “How-” Petalsong started before remembering that she would obviously smell like a ShadowClan cat. “Well, yes, I am from ShadowClan.” She sighed. “Not that I was ever happy there.”
    Ravenpaw flicked his ears toward her in acknowledgement as the brown tom, who Petalsong now recognised as Barkface, WindClan’s medicine cat, returned.
    “Hold still, my dear,” Barkface mewed as he tipped her head back. He rubbed an herby smelling poultice on her neck, and on the wounds on her back. “There, that should help them heal.” He tipped his head at Ravenpaw before leaving.
    “Did you take me to WindClan?” Petalsong asked accusingly of Ravenpaw.
    He shifted. “You were already on their territory. I simply went to them for help. They brought you here.”
    “Why didn’t you go to my own clan?” she asked.
    “And cross the thunderpath? No way. Besides, WindClan was closer, and you were bleeding all over the place.”
    “Hmph.”
    “Rest now.” Ravenpaw stood and brushed his tail lightly over her nose as he slipped outside.
    Petalsong sighed, and reluctantly rested her head on her paws. She closed her eyes to the sun, and fell fast asleep.
    Stay tuned for the rest of the story, and thanks for reading!!

  • @sammis9570
    @sammis9570 Місяць тому +2

    CallingHeart is in danger, there is a forest fire!! "All is lost there is no point in trying" CallingHeart mutters to himself, suddenly a strange cat comes up with a bowl shaped thing in their mouth. CallingHeart looks closer it seems to be made out of small twigs, CallingHeart looks deep into their sparking eyes as they glare at CallingHeart from a distance. CallinHeart notices something shining in the twig bowl...water!! "Hello im hear to help!!" The black and white cat yells "Who are you??" CallingHeart responds "Its me SwiftPaw." SwiftPaw charges up, the water splashing on the fire putting it out. "Come on your safe CallingHeart!" SwiftPaw yells in excitement. CallingHeart tries to go but falls to the ground "Im to injured!!" CallingHeart yowls in pain, SwiftPaw helps CallingHeart get to a small rock formation near the nearby riverbank. Nobody is there to treat CallingHeart but she knows what she needs so she tells SwiftPaw and he goes out to collect it and heals poor CallingHeart. SwiftPaw compliments her scars and how beave i was in the fire, so they give me a shiny thing he found near the twoleg place and CallingHeart clips it in their ear (the shiny thing is and earring) "Th-thank you SwiftPaw i really do appreciate it" "No problem." SwiftPaw responds. They head back to camp because CallingHeart can walk again. CallingHeart looks into the river before they go to camp, the scar isnt that ugly "I will never forget you SwiftPaw, thank you, so much for this." She says calmy, SwiftPaw looks at CallingHeart and smiles. The loss of CallingHearts tail doesnt affect her so after she is fully healed she goes on a walk with SwiftPaw. Her heart soars as they realize they are in their favorite place ever, a beautiful river underground with glowing plants and crystals they gaze at the beauty in silence. They continue their walk its been many moons and SwiftPaw has become SwiftPelt and, well its they dont know what it is but they both think its...love. A few days later they head out and there is a rustle in the bushes, so they investigate "Whos there!!" SwiftPelt yells, their seems to be a strange set of paw prints that vanished not to far ahead. "Im going to investigate." CallingHeart says then goes before SwiftPelt could respond. There is no clues, CallingHeart is loosing hope, its getting freezing. Confused, CallingHeart goes back to camp, at least she isnt frustrated. She tells SwiftPelt what she found out, suddenly SwiftPelt looks at CallingHeart like never before, a loving look? CallingHeart loves him and he loves her. When they get back to camp CallingHearts brother, GlassPaw, runs up to them with terror in his eyes. "Guys help its-" GlassPaw drops dead blood dripping out of his thigh. "A RAID!" The leader yells "We have to help." CallingHeart says. " I cant lose you!" SwiftPelt says crying. "We can do this... Together." CallingHeart reassures him "Ok lets do it!" SwiftPelt says shaking. ThunderClan fights against the ShadowClan raid but then "mew!" A sound comes from the nursery "THE KITS ARE IN DANGER!" SwiftPelt and CallingHeart yell running towards the nursery ShadowClan cat named PocketFall is killing kits!! SwiftPelt charges at PocketFall in rage, CallingHeart does the same. PocketFall bares her teeth but SwiftPelt and CallingHeart don't care so PocketFall slashes so they fight back a battlefield had emerged in the nursery PocketFall is pinned to the ground. "Leave now!!" CallingHeart yells "Scram!!" SwiftPelt screams. They scare the ShadowClan cat of. The two continue to help by scaring some of the ShadowClan warriors away. This story ends here there will be more storys of CallingHeart and SwiftPelt in the future

  • @Arcticfoxgirl00
    @Arcticfoxgirl00 7 місяців тому +1

    SquirrelFlight
    The closest shelter nearby
    A leaf/leaves
    Face scar
    A beautiful meadow
    Need more time to think
    The saviour
    Neither of us
    Positive emotion (love,a bit shy)
    A younger apprentice

  • @Tane-yc7qm
    @Tane-yc7qm 7 місяців тому +1

    CHAPTER 1 (in this au yellowfang is a young warrior like pink'pelt)
    Pink'pelt had just climbed onto a tree away from the dogs, But then the branch broke she panicked as she was falling with the leaves. She yowled "Help!" Then she saw another branch and she jumped onto that but the branch was too low. The German Shepard jumped high enough to claw the branch down and claw pink'pelts torso. Pink'pelt tryed to jump but it return the dogs started fo chase her again. She was running toward river and thunderclan terrirtory. She ran towards a cave and ran in hoping for the dogs not to fit but the little one fit. "Ahhh" she screamed running toward a hole in the cave that looked like a exit but it wasnt. It was a dead end just as pink'pelt accepted her death a black short she with yellow eyes and a fang out of her mouth came. Yellowfang scared off the little dog. "Are you ok?"
    CHAPTER 2
    Pink'pelt passed out due to the big wound across her torso. "Hey! Hello? " yellowfang asked. Pink'pelt woke up and growled "Who are you!!" " Im yellowfang, thunderclan warrior" she replied. How about you?" Pink'pelt replied " welli was a windclan cat but then... I got exiled but i still keep my name" yellowfang gasped " Why were you exiled? " i dont wanna talk about it. " pink'pelt said yellowfang said " Lets go to my clan ill introduce you! " pink'pelt grumbled. When they got to thunderclan. :)
    CHAPTER 3
    The medicine cat by the name of spotted'leaf said that my wound would not heal leaving a scar. Pink'pelt looked down upset, "im so ugly now" she glared at her big long scar across her torso. Just wanting to tear it apart then a shadow appeared in front of her "Yellow fang! " pink'pelt was happy. Yellow fang spoke, " Your not ugly your beautiful, those scars show everyone how strong you are! Yellow fang showed pink'pelt some of her scars. "Now here you go" yellowfang handed pink'pelt a scarlette red butterfly. Pink'pelt mewed "its so beautiful! She placed it right behind her right ear.
    CHAPTER 4
    Pink'pelt was finally allowed to leave the medicin den she looked into the water, " their not as ugly as i thought? " im glad i have this" Yellowfang walked up to Pink'pelt "Why so? " she wondered " Because it reminds me of you, yellow fang your like. The best cat ever" pink'pelt rubbed up against yellowfang. It turned to twilight yellowfang and pink pelt lookf down at the water. Seeing eachothers reflection and gazed.
    CHAPTER 5
    It was starlight the two cats found a cliff with a beautiful view. The stars connected and made a picture of yellowfang and pink'pelt cuddling. Pink'pelt spotted a mustard flower and put it in yellowfangs fur. "It matchs your eyes" pink'pelt laughed.
    CHAPTER 6
    Pink'pelt was on the cliff she was more responsible now.Pink'pelt spoke " yellowfang.. I think we're more than just friends.". She looked at yellowfangs yellow eyes, Yellowfang nodded slightly "I think so" they both looked at eachother " i-i love you yellowfang! Since you saved me ive had this f-feeling" SORRY THIS CHAPTER IS SHORT
    CHAPTER 7
    We went on a walk. Yellowfang scented a very unusal smell and pink pelt tracked some weird paw prints. Pink'pelt mewed "what if we're getting tracked! " "Im sure not! " yellowfang replied the tall grass ahead of us didnt reveal what it was. Pink'pelt offered to walk forwards so she did. She heard mews and walked into the tall grass. The sun reflected on pink'pelts fur revealing a pink color. Pink'pelt growled "i dont think this is safe! " " But i heard mews"! Yellowfang interrupted. Less talkin more walkin" pink'fur explained
    CHAPTER 8
    Yellowfang was frustrated that she couldnt see the mystery but pink'pelt is scared to death of any animals beside cats. This is short lol
    CHAPTER 9
    Yellowfang looks at pink'pelt with love in her eyes. "I love you pink'pelt! " pink pelt was shocked* " i-i love you too the both hugged and a kit that was cute came up to them*
    CHAPTER 10
    The kit looked at them in terror " i have never seen you befo- The kit hissed and claws yellowfang. Pink'pelt growled loudly at the kit in the end the two became a couple and adopted some kits.

  • @Nezuko_Kamado415
    @Nezuko_Kamado415 4 місяці тому +1

    Chapter 1:Jayfeather
    Chapter 2:Clan/home
    Chapter 3:A shell
    Scar:Tail scar
    Chapter 5:My choice(the owl tree)
    Chapter 6:My choice(chill friends)
    Chapter 7:Jayfeather
    Chapter 8:My choice(Jayfeather)
    Chapter 9:Unsure
    Chapter 10:A middle aged warrior

  • @Anteaax
    @Anteaax 8 місяців тому +2

    (My chapter 4 and 5 are in one cuz i thinked i could put them together! I hope u will like my story!)
    DarkLeaf headed to the river as he was sent to catch some fish. But he did not see the danger that will welcome him at the river.....
    •Chapter 1•
    As DarkLeaf apporaced the river he saw fish swiming to the other edge of earth. He jumped to the fish but fish dodged him. It was cold outside, how was it in river then?? DarkLeaf shivered in cold yowling for help! "HELP! HELP!" She-cat heard yowling along other edge. She begain to sprint over the hearing yowl. As she steped out of the bushes she saw a tom yowling for help, his fur all frezzed and in ice. She jumped in to help the tom. She was a better swimer than him and she thinked she could save him. If not...
    As she got up and shaked her fur she heard words from cold tom. "Thanks for helping me!" DarkLeaf apporached her and thanked her. "We should go back to camp.. its getting late and it is cold outside." They left whitout any prey.....
    •Chapter 2•
    As soon as they reached the entrance of the camp tom felt his wound. She-cat saw it. Hazeltail led DarkLeaf to the medicine den. Hazeltail explained what happened to CinderPelt (medicine cat).
    "DarkLeaf u should rest in my den till u are not better. I will bring you some herbs to help u recover. U will be good as soon as possible!" CinderPelt gazed DarkLeaf. She signaled him to lay on the moss bed and rest. "Thank u CinderPelt!" Hazeltail thanked CinderPelt for her kindness.
    •Chapter 3•
    Darkleaf was healed but his scar was hurting a little bit. He was able to walk around camp. Darkleaf walked out medicine den. Hazletail apporached Darkleaf. "Hey! How are you? By the way i never catched ur name!" She smiled looking at his eyes passing a Fern leaf to him as present. "I am doing great! I am Darkleaf. What about you? And thank you for the Fern leaf!" Darkleaf smiled back. "I am Hazeltail" She looked at his eyes with sparkle in her gaze.
    •Chapter 4•
    "Hey Hazeltail, wanna come to my favorite place with me?" He looked at her eyes with happines. "Of course! I would love to!"
    When they arived to a cliff with a view of the starlight & shooting stars......
    "This place is rlly so dreamy!" Hazeltail said with her eyes sparkling of starlight in the sky. "I know! Thats why i came here with you. I only come here with special ones." Darkleaf smiled as he saw happines in Hazeltail.
    •Chapter 5•
    Months passed.
    They gone for a walk in the forest. "Hazeltail...." Darkleaf begain. "Yes?" Hazeltail looked at Darkleaf. "I-i really have feelings for you, after this all months and days passed, i needed to say this to you." Darktail gazed at Hazeltail slowing his walk. "You know what..." Hazletail gazed at Darktail. " i do too." She smiled.
    •Chapter 6•
    Couple of days later they gone for a walk again but they suddenly heard a rustle in the bushes. Darkleaf decided to head off to investigate. But the only thing he found was set of weird-shaped paw prints that vanish not too far ahead from where they were.
    •Chapter 7•
    It was cold and frezzing out there. They thinked that it was just some paws of cat. They both accepted to go back to camp and not say anything about paw prints.
    •Chapter 8•
    The walk back to the camp was quiet, but still nothing close to tense.
    •Chapter 9•
    When they were back at camp they were still quite distraught about those paw prints, when suddenly Young warrior runs over them. There is a complete terror in their eyes.
    If this reaches 10 likes i will do part 2! I would love to do part 2! Hope u liked this!❤

  • @Multi1chicken
    @Multi1chicken 24 дні тому +1

    Saviour: fire’star
    My name: startail
    Place: there home
    Object: shell
    Scar: on eye
    Date place: secret waterfall
    Friends: na
    Love: yeah
    Who go first: me
    Who don’t want to go back: me
    How I feel: love them back
    Who be scared: an older appearance

  • @Finch_and_friends
    @Finch_and_friends 8 місяців тому +1

    PLEASE MAKE A PART TWO OF THIS!

  • @EmbertheHiveWinghybrid
    @EmbertheHiveWinghybrid 8 місяців тому +1

    A rouge cats group attacked the clan , but the clan couldn't win the battle ,so Hawkeyes , looking for help for his clan and a gash on his side tried to find help for miles.Then a kitty pet that Hawkeyes didn't know saw him and welcomed him to her home then her two legs also helped Hawkeyes , seeing him in bad condition.Hawkeyes then learned that the kitty pet is named Princess then she gave Hawkeyes a collar , a simbol that Hawkeyes is now a kitty pet with her and the scars are ok.Hawkeyes and Princess formed a friendship overtime then Princess took Hawkeyes to a place that he had never seen, a meadow of long grass where they sunbathed "I felt like you wanted to go to a place other than my house."Princess said in a sweet tone.On their way back they saw paw prints looking like the someone was in a hurry , but they looked weird as the paw prints were hidden in a bush and Hawkeyes wanted to venture further and Princess stopped him while saying that it was getting late.As the two had just gotten to Princess's house a small cat was running , but limping at the same time then Hawkeyes knew who the small cat was , his younger brother, but how did he survive then Hawkeyes ran to his brother , the brother's hopefully green eyes now in fear.

  • @KlaraCherryCake
    @KlaraCherryCake 19 днів тому +1

    Who saves you: Swift'Paw
    Where do we go: (I choose) Thunderclan Healer
    Gift: A Flower Crown
    Scars: Throat Scar
    Place: The Place I've Always Wanted to go
    Feeling: Love
    Keep Going: Both
    Frustration: Me
    Feelings 2: I love them back
    Terror: Brightheart
    I am in Windclan and Riverclan. Whilst one day I was in Riverclan territory learning how to swim my Mentor leaves for food. As I was just about to follow I fell in at this point my Mentor is to far to hear me scream just as I was about to drown Swift'Paw (being on patrol) jumped in and grabbed my pulling me to shore since there were a lot of branches in the water my throat was slit and needed medic care, Swift'Paw brought me back to Thunderclan (worried about being kicked out of River) to the Medicine cat who helped me heal due to being from a different Clan Swift'Paw made up the lie that I was a second hand Apprentice here to learn about the Clans. After explaining to Swift'Paw about my anxiety in the scar he got me a flower crown yellow and black to cheer me up, when I was healed and went home to Windclan (I live in Windclan but born in River) Swift'Paw snuck in and took me to the place I mentioned I always wanted to go to (a glowing waterfall in the dark forest) whilst we were behind it on a knocked down tree he turned around to look me in the eyes when I saw a new twinkle it felt like...love, just then there was a noise in the bush as we turned there were funky looking paw prints we both decided to follow the trail. After hours of searching without finding anything we had to turn back I wasn't to happy with this but did it anyways, when Swift'Paw started making jokes and turned to look me in the eyes once again I found that I really was deeply in love with him, as he walked me home and we said goodbye he turned to leave when Brightheart ran to him in terror saying something about the dogs in Thunderclan he looked at me and back again almost to say I love you...but I must go, that was the last time I saw him in a week I kept thinking what if he died what if I lost my savior when I went to the outskirts of Thunderclan he wasn't there, I later found out that he had been badly injured surviving but in medic care I begged Firestar to let me see him for Clan med study purposes when I was allowed I never wanted to leave we chatted for hours as I "excambed him" after that day we started dating secretly soon enough we both "graduated" I became a med cat whilst he became a warrior. When we grew up we weren't allowed to mate since the Clan's were different but we did meet up daily and ended with a sweet female kit who got my gender and coat but her fathers personality and eyes, it felt like she was destined to grow as a warrior!

  • @My-Cat-Ruby
    @My-Cat-Ruby Місяць тому +1

    I was saved by Leopardstar
    She takes me into her clan
    After my wounds were tended to she gifts me flowers
    Soon as I look into my reflection in the water to reveal a cool eye scar
    Soon Leopardstar takes me to a place called the glistening shore
    She felt more of a mother
    Soon they found paws in the mud I go to investigate
    I wasn’t frustrated but I thought the threat was gone
    My “adopted mother” gave me a small glint in her eyes
    As we returned we found out that a middle aged warrior who was unfamiliar stood in the middle of camp…….

  • @emilystepp2193
    @emilystepp2193 8 місяців тому +1

    My savior was Thrush’Pelt and he took me to Thunder-clan, he ended giving me a flower I could wear by my ear. I ended up having a scar on the same ear as my flower, and he took me to a cliff where we could watch shooting stars. I ended up falling in love with him soon after. Thrush’Pelt decided we should have followed the strange footprints we saw on our walk, and soon we both agreed to head back to camp. I ended up loving him back, as soon as we entered camp my sibling ran up to me with terror in her eyes.

  • @SPXC3_MUSHR0oMSWcue
    @SPXC3_MUSHR0oMSWcue Місяць тому +1

    Fun leap
    Their clan
    Herbs
    Lost 1 ear
    3: lost ear (previously) paralyzed back right paw, scar on back left paw
    Twolegs house roof, pretty beautiful view
    Sibling relationship (not lovers but more then friends)
    Both
    Both
    Happy!
    Tear'drop? (Friend)
    1.
    Powder raced across the field, everytime she hit the ground her paws ached terribly. 4 or 5 dogs were on her tail, snapping. As she ran she spotted a river, she turned around and raced for it. But when she got to it, the jump was too far, she couldn't make it. She skidded to a stop, but the dogs didn't. "Help!" She yelped, if she couldn't get out of this situation, she'd be gone by the dogs after a second. A dog had caught up, and it bit hard on her left ear. The dog pinned her down, it's hot breath smelt of twoleg nest. Powder pushed the dog off her just barely, and ran along the river bank. A dog was on her tail, and it jumped up and attacked her. She screeched as her back right paw was crushed by the dogs body, blood poured out from a scratch. Her vision starting going blurry, blood was streaming down her face. She blacked out, unconscious. FunLeap was in the distance, running to her.
    "Wake up! Hello?" A strange cat was bent down beside her. "Who are you?" Powder mewed, she was in a large den with herbs and moss beds; she was on one of them.
    5 likes for me to continue :)

  • @sandraplatt2.0
    @sandraplatt2.0 2 місяці тому

    Crookedstar ( in this AU he ran away b4 becoming an apprentice )
    Nearby unoccupied den
    A maple leaf was the gift
    Lost a leg and an eye
    Roof of a twoleg house with amazing view
    Both of us go find out
    Both of us get frustrated about turning back so soon

  • @jennifergavala7709
    @jennifergavala7709 4 місяці тому +1

    omgggg this is so good! is there a part 2?

    • @canvas4708
      @canvas4708  4 місяці тому +1

      @@jennifergavala7709 It's in the making xD

  • @CherrysPlaysAdoptMe
    @CherrysPlaysAdoptMe 4 місяці тому +1

    She rlly wants me in river clan XD for the first one I paused 4 times all of ‘em were riverclan XD the first one was leopard star so ima use her

  • @bloodfun2585
    @bloodfun2585 8 місяців тому +1

    kestrelsnow was saved by:briarlight
    he was taken to:the closest shelter nearby
    what do they give him:a shell
    what scar(s) does he have:a tail scar lost both ears runp scar & multiple scars (a scar on his left eye a scar on the bridge of his nose & a throat scar)
    where did he go:i choose (a beautiful secret spot in the woods on thunderclan territory)
    how does he feel about them still friends or something more:i choose (friends)
    whos the 1st to decide to keep going:both of them
    whos the most frustrated about going back so soon:i choose (kestrelsnow is the most frustrated)
    how does that make him feel:negative emotions (sad & scared hes afraid of losing her or her losing him)
    who is it:a middle aged warrior

  • @Ivy4921_warriorcats
    @Ivy4921_warriorcats Місяць тому +1

    1. TALLSTAR 2. My clan 3. A butterfly wing (my choice) 4. A face scar 5. The place I've always wanted to visit (highstones) 6. I don't know how I feel 7. Both of us 8. Me *cough*bc I could spend more time with him*cough* 9. I LOVE HIM BACK!!!! 10. A young apprentice...
    Go to part 2 to see my story...

  • @Nopenotherenothappening
    @Nopenotherenothappening Місяць тому +1

    Feather’tail gave me a feather😂

  • @louiseed4791
    @louiseed4791 9 місяців тому +3

    i was drinking at the lake when i suddenly fall in a stone bonked to head and everything was black when i wake up there was this black and white cat that named himself swiftpaw swift paw saves me and bringes me to thunderclan he gives me some blueberry because i lost a eye but thats ok and when we where going on a walk together we were going to the waterfall at the border of the clans and when we where on a walk again we saw some strange footprints and we followed them but we didn't find anything amd on or way back we looked each other in the eyes and i notice something inside me chance and we fall in love back in camp comes treefur (i think his name was) with terror in the eyes runing to us what happens next is a secret for part two bye thanks for reading!

  • @MichelleMiller-sh6xt
    @MichelleMiller-sh6xt 6 місяців тому +1

    Snow fur who was in a river that was moving fast she begins to think all is lost but then someone saves her another cat around her that’s her age and there was a familiar spark in their eyes as they gaze into her chapter 2 snow fur was safe now but brutally wounded her brave savior takes her under their wing once again they decides to take her somewhere she can recover the end bye

  • @DarcieMcateer
    @DarcieMcateer Місяць тому +1

    Saves me:Jay Feather/Jay feather takes me to his:Warrior clan home/Jay feather gives me:flowers that I rap round my left ear/I have scars on my:thigh,eye,ears,paw/me and Jay feather go to a underground river with glowing crystals and plants/I need more time to think if I truly love Jay feather or not/we both decide to keep looking and follow the strange footprints/I’m frustrated we have to head back so soon/as Jay feather gives me the look I’m unsure/a older medicine cat runs up to me

  • @meganselvy3034
    @meganselvy3034 8 місяців тому +1

    Backround info: hi my names loveheart. I was a kittypet but my twolegs didn't want me so they threw me in the wild. My pelt is white with dark ginger legs, muzzle, and tipped tail. My eyes are dark red.
    Chapter 1
    After a long day of hunting for food (i didn't find any) i was near a river so i went to drink from it. A stong wave pushed my muzzle sending me off my paws. My head was put in the water as another strong wave hit my head sending my body in the water. I try and try getting on land but i couldn't. All of a sudden Cinder'pelt came and threw me on land. Onced my eyes opened i looked up and my gaze met hers.
    Chapter 2
    I was safe now but wounded badly, i couldn't even stand, so i try and try to get up but can't. Then cinder'pelt grabbed me and takes me to a place i can rest. The place was their clan.
    Chapter 3
    After i was treated i thought about the scar that would become of my wounds. Cinder'pelt comforted me saying that my scar looked cool and strong. Cinder'pelt stayed by my side as i was healing. Cinder'pelt left and came back with a gift to help with the recovery. It was A flower , a rose to clarify, it was really nice and i wore it when she gave it to me.
    Chapter 4
    Soon i grew more comfortable with my scars because of cinder'plet's love and support. Soon i could walk again so i walked around camp and found a lake, i looked at my scars and i was proud. My scars where 1lost ear, a scar on my leg, and 1 lost eye.
    Chapter 5
    Now that i was healed, me and cinder'plet went to go on a walk. Then we went to my fav place , a sparkling riverbed. It was amazing! We sat there and looked at it for , what felt like, hours.
    Chapter 6
    After we kept walking. Then she asked "hey how do you feel about me?". I didn't know how to responed then i told her "well..Feel like i... Love you." I looked in her eyes with a loving gaze, hoping she did to. She said "well... I guess i feel the same way about you."
    Chapter 7
    Some moons later we left again. We heard some rustling in a bush and looked to see what it was. All we saw was some pawprints. Cinder'pelt kept going.
    Chapter 8
    We didn't find any more clues so all we had we weird-shaped paw prints. We give up and head back, it was dark and very cooled. Cinder'pelt was so mad coming back, not being able to find out who the cat was made her mad.
    Chapter 9
    After long talks about the paw prints, cinder'pelt gave a love-in-the-eyes look at me. I felt That i loved her back. I gave the same look at her.
    Chapter 10
    We came back still confused about the paw prints when suddnly An older app came to me, terror in their eyes. I was so confused why the app came to me.
    To be continud....

    • @meganselvy3034
      @meganselvy3034 8 місяців тому +1

      In chapter 8 the second we was supposed to be were.

    • @meganselvy3034
      @meganselvy3034 8 місяців тому

      Lol this would s the longest comment I have ever did😂

  • @somethingnewtooyoutube
    @somethingnewtooyoutube 8 місяців тому +1

    Chapter one, *A Unknown Rescuer:*
    *StarlingClaw walked out of her den, stretching her front legs and letting out a loud meow.* "Rahhug! ..Time for another day.." *She sighed, looking around the woods. It was GreenLeaf, so there were a lot of scents of fresh leaves, flowers, and water.. There was a nearby river running, and she could hear distant sounds of axes hitting trees..* 'The two-legs are getting fire wood..' *She thought to herself. The two-legs did this every morning.. Which she had gotten used to at this point..* "Whatever.. Nothing too serious.." *She said to herself, before walking into the woods a bit further. She'd turn to the left, and start running towards the nearby river. She reaches the river soon after, and scans the water.* "..." *She stays quiet as a mouse, before seeing a fish. She'd instantly jump at it, and grabs it in her mouth. Her claws latch onto the grass across the river, almost slipping at first until she got a good grip. She'd slowly climb up, and sit the fish down on land.* "Ha! Gotcha! That stupid ThunderClan taught me nothing about hunting like this!" *She laughs, and shouts this. As you can tell, she was part of ThunderClan, before she split from it.. The reason is.. Well.. Unknown.. (POSSIBLY WILL BE REVEALED LATER-).* "If they could see me now, they'd be so shocked.." *She muttered to herself, laughing quietly.. Not long after she had finished glotting about herself, she saw a spark of red next to her. She'd turn her head, the red fades to a grey like ash black.. In the direction she was looking, a bunch of red and orange flames were spreading..* "Oh no.. No no no no no!" *She shouts in panic, before picking up the fish and stepping back. She had to do something.. Suddenly, a glimpse of shiney black fur leaps across the river.* -> : "Hey! Come on! Let's get you out of here before you burn to a crisp!" -> *Something was.. Odd about this cat.. The green eyes were oddly familiar.. Either way, even if Starling didn't trust this cat, she had to at the moment.. All she did was nod. The two of them leap back across the river, and they run into the other direction. As StarlingClaw was running, she hits her paw hard on a rock. She'd trip and hit a tree. The unknown cat looks over, and runs over quickly.* -> : "Oh goodness, hang on, get on my back.." -> *She managed to climb into the cats back, and the cat continues running.*

    • @somethingnewtooyoutube
      @somethingnewtooyoutube 8 місяців тому +1

      Chapter two: *Saftey, and a possible new friend..:*
      After a bit, they were safe.. Except Starling was quite wounded from what happened a few minutes ago.. She was still holding her fish, like she was starving..* "Who are you..?" -> : "I'll explain later.." *They'd mutter, before continuing to press forward, the cat was walking now though.* -> *She stays quiet, just respecting the answer.. The cat sees a cave, and runs over to it. They check to see if it's empty.. Yeah, seemed so.. The cat then lays her down gently.* -> "..Thank you.." *She looks up at them.* -> : ".. Don't mention it.." -> *She sat down her fish, and ate some of it.* "You want any..?" -> *The cat shook her head, saying.* : "No thank you.." -> *She just nodded, continuing to eat.* -> HollyLeaf: "..My names HollyLeaf.." *She muttered, looking at StarlingClaw.* -> *She looks up after finishing the fish off.* "Oh, cool name.. I'm StarlingClaw.." *She said with a slight smile.* -> HollyLeaf: "That sounds like a fairytale name.. And a childish one.." *She suppresses a laugh..* -> "I know.." *She muttered, laughing a bit herself.* "Call me Star by the way.." -> HollyLeaf: "Well then, Star.. Call me Holly.." *She managed to smile.* -> *She nodded.* -> HollyLeaf: "May I ask.. Why is a young cat like yourself out here alone..?" -> "Oh! Well.. Everyone in ThunderClan thought I couldn't survive on my own.. So.." *She'd lean up a bit.* -> HollyLeaf: "Ah, so you decided to prove them wrong..?" *She guessed.* -> "That's correct." *She nodded softly.* -> HollyLeaf: "..Do you mind If I take you back there..? I promise, I won't let anything or anyone hurt you, or be rude.." *She asked, also trying to reassure her.* -> "..." *She thought a moment.. HollyLeaf hadn't hurt her.. So.. Why not..* "Sure.." *She'd answer.* -> HollyLeaf: "Well then, can you get on my back again..? Or would you rather walk yourself..?" *She stood up.* -> "..I'll probably just ride on your back.. I don't think I can walk at the moment.." *She stood up, shakey.* -> *HollyLeaf nodded, StarlingClaw gets on her back slowly. Holly takes off through the trees.*

    • @somethingnewtooyoutube
      @somethingnewtooyoutube 8 місяців тому +1

      Chapter three: *A gift for comfort ^^:*
      *HollyLeaf reaches the entrance of the ThunderClan camp, and her run turns into a walk. Holly walks to a medicine cat den, and tells them about what happened. HollyLeaf lays you down gently on a patch of leaves, and steps back. A few medicine cats move over, and start treating StarlingClaw's wounds.. A bit later, the medicine cats were done with treatment, and HollyLeaf walked back in. Holly sits down next to her.* -> HollyLead: "How you feeling..?" *She asked softly.* -> "Eh, the best that I can right now.. A little weak.. But overall.. I'm alright.." *She'd look up, laughing a bit.* -> *HollyLeaf nodded.* HollyLeaf: "Alright.. I got you something.." *She smiled.* -> "Oh? What is it..?" *She got a bit excited.* -> *Holly gets up and moves to the front of the den. She picks up a fern leaf she had laying there, and then moves back.* HollyLeaf: "Here.." *She sat it down next to her.* -> *A smile forms on her face as she slides the fern leaf behind her ear.* "..I love it.." -> HollyLeaf: "Glad you do-" -> *HollyLeaf gets cut off as StarlingClaw puts her legs around her, as a hug ^^.* -> "Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank youuu!" -> HollyLeaf: ".. Y-Your welcome.." *She smiled, she hasn't been hugged in a while..*

    • @somethingnewtooyoutube
      @somethingnewtooyoutube 8 місяців тому +1

      Chapter four: *Sorta glad it happened..:*
      *A few days later, StarlingClaw was able to walk around the camp, and often got to know other cats. She also got to see her older friends that were still in the camp, and also spent time with HollyLeaf. One morning, she decided to head out for a walk.. Everyone was asleep at the moment, including Holly. She'd walk out of camp, heading to a pond nearby she had saw when HollyLeaf was bringing her here. She sits by the water, and looks down at it.. She wanted to see what scars she had, and what they even looked like.. She had a small tail scar, a face scar stretching from her forehead down to her nose, and a scar across her chest. The scars didn't look as bad at she thought they would..* "..Well, that's not quite as bad as I was thinking at all.." *She laughs to herself.* "Why was a so nervous..?" *She'd ask herself. But she really didn't know a answer.. She was more happy than upset, seeing how this caused her to meet a new friend ^^. After a bit, she runs back to camp, and gets in bed before anyone could notice she was gone.*

    • @somethingnewtooyoutube
      @somethingnewtooyoutube 8 місяців тому +1

      Chapter five: *A very special walk!:*
      *The next morning, StarlingClaw looks up to see HollyLeaf.* "Oh, hey HollyLeaf.." *She'd lean up, tucking her fern leaf behind her ear.* -> HollyLeaf: "Hey there, StarlingClaw.. Do you want to go for a walk ^^..?" -*-She asked, with a smile.-*- -> "Sure..!" -*-She stood up, grinning widely and happily.-*- -> -*-Holly laughed softly, before walking out of the den with Star. The two of them head out of the camp, and start walking through the woods. As they walked, Star spots a shining light just past some trees. The two walk through some vines, and there was a beautiful shore of water.. Her eyes sparkled.-*- "Oh my moons.." -> HollyLeaf: "What is it, Star..?" -*-She looks at her, sorta confused why she got so excited so sudden.-*- -> "..Me and my siblings came here all the time with our parents when we were younger!" -*-She'd run towards the water.-*- -> HollyLeaf: "Ohhh.. Makes since- ..WAIT UP!" *She yells, sprinting after her with a laugh.* -> -*-She'd laugh, pouncing into the water. Holly gets splashed.-*- -> HollyLeaf: "Hey!" -> -*-Her ears press back.-*- "Oh- ..Sorry.." *She said, sorta upset with herself for doing that.* -> *She noticed that HollyLeaf was smiling though..* -> HollyLeaf: "It's okay.." *She'd mutter.. Before suddenly splashing StarlingClaw with water.* "Now focus ^^!" -> *She'd shake off her fur, laughing.* "Oi-! You asked for it!" *She runs at Holly.* -> *After a while, the two were back to walking, still laughing about how they had just broke out into playing earlier.*

    • @somethingnewtooyoutube
      @somethingnewtooyoutube 8 місяців тому +1

      Chapter Six: *Besties nowww!:*
      *The two continued to walk. StarlingClaw thinking about some stuff.. It had been a few moons since the two had met, and they had become very close friends. HollyLeaf knew that as well, and was deciding to consider her as a best friend. The thing was, was Star considering this a actual friendship.. The more she thought about it, the more she knew that it was.. She stops walking." "Hey, HollyLeaf?" *She'd look at her.* -> *HollyLeaf stops walking, and turns around.* HollyLeaf: "Yeah, Star..?" -> "..Do you consider me as a friend..?" *She asked, sorta trying not to be awkward.* -> HollyLeaf: "Yes! I do! I actually consider you as a best friend.." *She smiled, nodding.* -> *Her ears perk up as she quickly got a surge of happiness in her.* "Really..?!" -> HollyLeaf: "Really.." *She nodded more hastily.* -> "I see you as the same..!" *She hugs Holly again, like she had done not too long ago. HollyLeaf hugged her back this time. Later, the two returned back to the camp and into the den. They lay down in some leaves, and fall asleep..*

  • @Imacatperson-v9n
    @Imacatperson-v9n 12 днів тому +2

    Hello again I'm flame tail I am brutally injured my brave saviour me under he's wing once again and decide to take me somewhere to recover he took me to the closet shelter nearby i was treated bye a med but my injury left scars my saviour comforted me and said that I was brave he they gave me a flower crown i am now healed I walked out of camp and looked at my scars I had a eye scar a leg scar a back scar and even a big face scar me and my saviour went for a walk now that I was fully healed we went to a cliff with a view of the star light and shooting stars we resume our walk to get to know eachother he does not know that I'm in love with him a couple of days later we head out we suddenly have a rustle in the bushes we decided to go and investigate the only thing that turns out to be is a set of weird paw prints not to far where we are now we decided to go to gather we don't find any clues except the paw prints we began to lose hope now we need to go back but we are lost and we are both very frustrated after a long and tiring discussion about the paw prints we spotted the walk back to camp was quiet but still nothing close to tense rather it was one of those comforting new moods between us my saviour ends me a look like never before a love-in-the-eye- look I feel the same I returned to camp still thinking of the paw prints when one of my clan mates one that's not familiar with me runs over to me there is a complete terror in there eyes it was an older appearance

  • @Kika2gaming3
    @Kika2gaming3 7 місяців тому +1

    Drowning dream was saved by leopard star and taken to the closest shelter nearby and they gave drowning dream a butterfly wing yellow I have a belly scar I went to the river with my savior leapord star I feel like he’s like I don’t know how I feel about him many moons later we saw a weird paw print and drowning dream decided let’s just go I was frustrated bc of me he gave me a love in the eyes look and it make me feel like I love them back a middle aged warrior walked up to me in terror

  • @Innocentcat_thereal
    @Innocentcat_thereal 6 днів тому +1

    I LOST MY COMMENT! anyways moving onto the story im on pc anyways, yall might find it
    //-C. 2
    'Hey, are you alive?' a voice shook Yarrow'tail, right now laying on the ground covered in wounds by the rocks and sticks. 'w- who are you?!' she said in a timid voice. 'no need, just thank me.' the cat answered. the cat led Yarrow'tail to thunderclan, where Yarrow'tail lives, realizing both them lived there. 'Thanks..but may i ask who you are?' Yarrow asked. 'its Cinder'pelt. ' she answered. 'you?' Cinder asked. 'its Yarrow'tail, just call me yarrow.' Yarrowtail answered. 'i never seen you before..' Yarrow mumbled. 'thats because we havent interacted here yet.' Cinder chuckled.
    //-C. 3
    After treating the wounds, Yarrow started sobbing. 'whats wrong?' Cinder asked. 'I just- know they will leave scars. what if everyone wont like me now that i got lots of scars?' Yarrow answered. Cinder tried comforting Yarrow, complimenting her and saying how brave she was. slowly making Yarrow'tail feel better, staying by her side to never make her feel alone.
    a few days later, Cinder'pelt brought something. 'Sparkling stones? what are those for?' Yarrow'tail asked Cinder. Cinderpelt then replied, smiling while saying: 'Its a gift for ur speedy recovery!' Yarrow then chuckled, they made a strong friendship along the way.
    //-C. 4
    after she healed, she looked at her scars, realizing they werent as ugly as she imagined, it reminded her of Cinderpelt everyday. one on the torso, paw, and tigh.
    //-C. 5
    one moonrise, both of them snuck out and went on a little walk outside the clan to spend some quality time with eachother, following Cinder'pelt's steps. Yarrow'tail's eyes brighten up with delight as she realized both of them went to her favourite place in the whole world, a cliff tough enough to watch the shooting stars! 'howd you know this was my favourite place?! this is awesome sauce!' Yarrow spoke with excitement; Cinder'pelt chuckled. 'I just thought you would like it.
    //-C. 6
    after many moons, they became the bestest of friends. sometimes sneaking out for starwatching or collecting rocks, maybe patrolling at night! the bond became stronger after 1 year, life was happy and the clans came at peace.
    //-C. 7
    another walk, another day. usual excersize ofcourse. Yarrow'tail and Cinder'pelt heard something in the bushes, some kind of rustling. both of them checked it out and found some wierd-looking paw prints. 'Should i go first?' Yarrow asked. 'No, i will go. you might get hurt again!' Cinder'pelt exclaimed, 'Alright its your choice.' Yarrow'tail sighed.
    //-C. 8
    Some hours later, they lost hope. leaf-bares cold howls in the wind. 'We should turn back, im getting cold and its getting dark. ' Cinder'pelt shivered. 'You're right, we should go back.'' Yarrow'tai; meowed. they retraced their steps and walked to clan.
    //-C. 9
    A quiet, comforting sound comes through. the crickets chirp and prey comes out, though both of them werent hungry. they werent at clan yet but took a little break. as Yarrow'pelt looked at Cinder'pelt, she was already glaring at her. love in the eyes. Yarrow'tail thought about it at first, not knowing she fell for me. Yarrow'tail slightly blushed, showing she loves her back.
    //-C. 10
    Both them returned to clan, going to their dens. but then Ivory'paw rushes over to Yarrow'tail. 'Whats wrong?' Yarrow'tail asks. 'you wont belive this..' Ivory'paw said with fear.
    i might be the only one who actually told their story lmaoo

  • @kristihamrick2626
    @kristihamrick2626 7 місяців тому +1

    My story
    Main character: acorn'leaf
    Story part 1: acorn'leaf was walking along the grass peacefully and a dark brown Tom walks towards her saying "hi there I'm leaf'tail"she smiled"hi I'm acorn'leaf"they started to walk with each other laughing and getting closer to each other she was so different from him but yet they were so close she was starting to love him like for part two I will continue in the replies

  • @Kirinwcue
    @Kirinwcue Місяць тому +1

    Silent’stripe once was wondering trew the forest once but then…tree none-cats came to end her! But suddenly a brave she cat came to the rescue! Named squirrellight! we came out alive barely we had terrible wounds she decided to take me to the closet cave near by! We then where in the nursery treated by some medicine cats tho the wounds where so deep that they left a mark but squirrellight comforted silent’stripe and gave her a feather as a gift! Silent’stripe starting getting more comfortable whit her scars she had lost one ear but she didn’t seem sad about instead a little bit glad! Almost fully cured squirrellight brought silent’stripe to her favorite place in the world! A sparkling riverbed! Silent’stripe haves a weird feeling about squirrellight not a bad one kinda like a more then friends one?… once there was a weird rustle in the bushes silent’stripe and squirrellight decide to go look tho it was just some paw prints you wanna go back. Squirrellight wants to keep going so you decide to go whit her, they didn’t find many clues so they decided to go back tho neither of you felt frustrated to turn back so soon. Then we headed back to camp but your savior looked at you intense in the eyes like never before kinda of like a love look…but you realize you don’t actually feel the same way…then a young medicine cat came running towards silent ‘stripe whit complete terror in there eyes…OH UH I WONDER HOW IS IT GONNA GO ON PART TWO!

  • @CrimsonTheDobie
    @CrimsonTheDobie 2 місяці тому +1

    My story
    My oc: Delilah’Musk (she-cat, 15 moons) Pinkish red with cherry paws and a fluffy tail
    Lol it’s Barley
    Barley takes me to his clan/home (barn)
    Bro gives me a moth’s wing :D
    I lost an eye 👁️ _ X
    Went to an underground river with crystals and glowing plants :0
    Fallen for someone but not them
    Me bruh
    Neither >:~_
    Negative emotion - sad
    An older apprentice
    ~Part two later? ~
    ! MIGHT TURN THIS INTO AND ACTUAL STORY WITH MORE DETAILS !

  • @roseheart18
    @roseheart18 2 місяці тому

    Mink; a slim feline. She is purely white with brown flecks and markings whom travels alone.
    (Watching then typing story)

  • @Toast._.Mantis
    @Toast._.Mantis 2 місяці тому

    I kept pausing until I got a character I know (I haven’t read many books) until I got to brightheart :)

  • @thedubas2677
    @thedubas2677 8 місяців тому +2

    What if you paused two times because your on the road..? 0:22 on this one..
    I got Jake and tallstar .. ?????????
    Do I get to choose or maybe make two ocs with the both of them??
    Edit: I just realized- HELP 😭
    I got their clan / home
    Continuing
    👇👇👇👇👇

    • @thedubas2677
      @thedubas2677 8 місяців тому +1

      They got me collar (because I got the you choose thingy and Jake is a kitty pet and well… tallstar is tall tail at the time, maybe I accepted a collar and he didn’t when he was recovering?? Idkkk

    • @thedubas2677
      @thedubas2677 8 місяців тому +1

      I lost a leggy

    • @thedubas2677
      @thedubas2677 8 місяців тому

      The cats either went all the way to Canada or all the way to Hawaii-
      (The place u always wanted to visit)

    • @thedubas2677
      @thedubas2677 8 місяців тому +1

      The cats either went all the way to Canada or all the way to Hawaii-
      (The place u always wanted to visit)

    • @thedubas2677
      @thedubas2677 8 місяців тому +1

      Ok I paused it right after because that just doesn’t make sense-
      I got you choose again.. I guess the moor? Because like.. ya know

  • @theZOOBAandPOKEMON7810
    @theZOOBAandPOKEMON7810 7 місяців тому +1

    Me: nightflame I'm a male. Squirrelflight saves me then she took me to her clan I get gifted a flower My scars are I lost a paw then we went to a meadow then I need more time to think how I feel then we find footprints and we have to leVdI keep going first then I'm the most frustrated turning back so soon she sends me a look I've never seen before and I feel like I'm super happy we are back at camp still distraught one of my clanmates that's not familiar runs over to me terrified * I'm riverclan* it was a senior warrior

  • @StarryDragon
    @StarryDragon 8 місяців тому +1

    Sun Where Light Blinds Eyes was in the mountains fighting a mountain lion!
    Feathertail saved her. (Starclan/Tribe of Endless Hunting--Feathertail is dead here.)
    They went home.
    She gives Sun a sunflower.
    Sun had these scars: Nose scar, lost paw.
    Their favorite spot is: A cliff with the view of a sunrise.
    They are just friends.
    Both go investigate.
    Sun is the most frustrated.
    Sun likes Feathertail as a friend.
    A caveguard was terrified. (I got senior warrior but that wouldn't make sense. Sun is a tribe cat)