AN ABSENT FRIEND - A Star Trek Fan Production

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  • Опубліковано 5 вер 2024
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    Dedicated with love and appreciation to the deeply-missed LEONARD NIMOY and DeFOREST KELLEY.
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    James T. Kirk has died saving the crew and passengers of the U.S.S. Enterprise-B from a spatial anomaly. Now Dr. McCoy is mourning his absent friend alone in a San Francisco bar, his only companions a bottle of bourbon and his own personal torment. Enter: Spock...having returned to Earth after hearing of "the incident." Spock, of course, is not allowing himself to become emotional over the loss of his best friend--the opposite of what McCoy is going through. Ironically, or perhaps fittingly, they each need what the other has, and they come together for a quiet, introspective conversation as each man, in his own way, helps the other come to terms with this devastating loss.
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    AN ABSENT FRIEND" is the first-ever Star Trek fan film to use artificial intelligence exclusively to generate all of the voices, utilizing ElevenLabs' speech synthesis algorithms. And if anyone is wondering "Is it legal to use A.I. to generate the voice of a deceased actor?" the answer is currently yes, according to California Civil Code § 3344, Section 990, paragraph (n):
    "This section shall not apply to the use of a deceased personality's name, voice, signature, photograph, or likeness, in any of the following instances:
    1) A play, book, magazine, newspaper, musical composition, FILM, radio or television program, other than an advertisement or commercial announcement not exempt under paragraph (4)."
    Read the entire statute here:
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    Writer / Producer / Director / Animator: JONATHAN LANE
    Illustrator: MATT SLADE
    Music: MATT MILNE
    Opening Credits Sequence Animator: "MOJO"
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    Every effort was made in the creation of this project to comply with the CBS and Paramount Pictures guidelines for Star Trek fan films located at:
    www.startrek.c...
    Star Trek and all related marks, logos and characters are solely owned by CBS Studios Inc. This fan production is not endorsed by, sponsored by, nor affiliated with CBS, Paramount Pictures, or any other Star Trek franchise, and is a non-commercial fan-made film intended for recreational use. No commercial exhibition or distribution is permitted. No alleged independent rights will be asserted against CBS or Paramount Pictures.

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  • @tnolddawg
    @tnolddawg 4 місяці тому +21

    Whoever wrote the dialog, I commend him/her for capturing the essence of these characters
    I can truly say this was a believable exchange between these two old comrades in arms

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  4 місяці тому +4

      Whoever wrote the dialog says "Thank you so much!" (Me, by the way.) 🙂

    • @tnolddawg
      @tnolddawg 4 місяці тому +2

      @@jonathanlane1377 fantastic job 👍🙂

  • @tubularbill
    @tubularbill 4 місяці тому +116

    The irony as of today, May 3, 2024 William Shatner is the only one still living of the three

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  4 місяці тому +30

      Yeah, that sad truth didn't escape me as I was creating this. At the time I first wrote the script (2010), Leonard Nimoy was still alive. Unfortunately, we must all depart the train of life someday.

    • @rogermurray5582
      @rogermurray5582 4 місяці тому +7

      Wrong George Takei and Walter Koenig Still Alive

    • @tubularbill
      @tubularbill 4 місяці тому +24

      @@rogermurray5582- I said of the three Kirk Spock and McCoy. I did not make any reference to the Star Trek cast as a whole.

    • @rogermurray5582
      @rogermurray5582 4 місяці тому +1

      Well Should Have I'm Trekker 1972

    • @tubularbill
      @tubularbill 4 місяці тому +9

      @@rogermurray5582 - lol that’s ridiculous. You misread what I posted.

  • @LoesserOf2Evils
    @LoesserOf2Evils 4 місяці тому +11

    Spock had a wry sense of humor.
    I’m glad the characters of Kyle, Leslie, Rand, and Riley were mentioned. Nice touch.

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  4 місяці тому +3

      Yeah, I love including little Easter eggs! 🙂

    • @LoesserOf2Evils
      @LoesserOf2Evils 4 місяці тому +2

      @@jonathanlane1377, I’m also impressed you have animations of the old crew and several characters mentioned since TOS went out of production.
      Nice work.

  • @jonathancoolidge4594
    @jonathancoolidge4594 4 місяці тому +15

    Nice how this simple conversation ties together so many decades of lore so fluidly; and, it explains Scotty's line about Kirk pulling the Enterprise out of mothballs in "Relics"

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  4 місяці тому +1

      Yep, I always wondered why Scotty would have thought James Kirk rescued him in "Relics." Of course, the real reason is that "Relics was written and produced years before ST: Generations. 🙂

  • @Arthus850
    @Arthus850 3 місяці тому +19

    Wow. You actually covered a plot hole that’s been eating at me for a while. When Scotty appeared in TNG and first heard the name Enterprise his reaction was thinking that Kirk took the ship out of space dock to find him. Why would he say that if he was there when Kirk “died?” Because he was still holding out hope that Kirk was alive and would appear again at any point. I love it! This is now the second fan project I’m accepting as my own personal canon, first being Star Trek Continues.

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  3 місяці тому +2

      Awesome! Thanks so much.

    • @kevincachia1977
      @kevincachia1977 3 місяці тому

      Thanks for spelling that out. Someone else mentioned fixing the TNG plot hole, but I had no idea what they were referring to. Now I see it.

    • @lazurusredd8682
      @lazurusredd8682 3 місяці тому +1

      I think it's a plot hole they need to fix since that episode "relics" was shot in 92, Star Trek generations was in 94

    • @scottwells8064
      @scottwells8064 2 місяці тому

      I always just assumed it was his brain being scrambled after being stuck in a transporter beam for 75 years.

  • @kurtb8474
    @kurtb8474 4 місяці тому +11

    The voices are as close to authentic as any fan film I've seen. Great work!

  • @omnimetric84
    @omnimetric84 3 місяці тому +5

    I’m a lifelong and old-school trekker and I would watch more of this.

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  3 місяці тому +2

      Not sure I'll be making more, but thanks for the compliment, my friend.

  • @timothybird5817
    @timothybird5817 4 місяці тому +6

    That was fantastic, enjoyable walk for trekkers down an imaginary lane. Thank you much.

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  4 місяці тому +1

      Well, my last name just happens to be Lane, so an imaginary lane seems appropriate. 🙂
      Thanks for the kind words.

  • @crazyal8565
    @crazyal8565 3 місяці тому +5

    Love that 70s filmation style and closing theme

  • @jayenglish6631
    @jayenglish6631 4 місяці тому +6

    Beautiful! This really has been a love letter to the fans and the voice actors were perfect! LLAP 🖖🏼

  • @johnnyrotten3175
    @johnnyrotten3175 4 місяці тому +7

    MUCH ENJOYED ‼️
    Can tell this was a labor of love, appreciate all the time and hard work you put it on this.🍻

  • @patrickmusson4571
    @patrickmusson4571 Місяць тому +2

    This did bring a tear to this old Trekkie's eyes. I remember watching Star Trek when it was brand new in 1966, and I joined the Star Trek Fan Club, which used the US Postal Service. It was amazing. OMG, that was 58 years ago. Now I really feel old, LOL.

  • @PhilDrury
    @PhilDrury 4 місяці тому +6

    That's a nice way to explain Relics: The assumption that Kirk simply came back to life.

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  4 місяці тому +2

      Yeah, I was kinda proud of that. Thanks for noticing.

  • @Shatner2410
    @Shatner2410 2 місяці тому +3

    I enjoy watching these episodes. GOD Bless DeForest Kelley and Leonard Nimoy!!! Rest in Peace to both.

  • @Urizen61
    @Urizen61 3 місяці тому +6

    This is very well done. My one reservation is that McCoy seems to be acting like he did in TOS. He grew to have a better understanding of Spock after carrying his katra. But great work. Very impressive.

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  3 місяці тому +1

      Keep in mind that McCoy was very angry and drunk at the beginning...and he does mellow out quite a bit as they talk. I think, when Spock first arrives, McCoy is looking for a punching bag, and Spock was the most convenient one after the bartender and the bottle of bourbon.

  • @noahstackhouse9818
    @noahstackhouse9818 4 місяці тому +7

    This was a very well-down tribute to both the actors and their characters. This was what those very short treks should have done.

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  4 місяці тому +2

      Well, this would have been a very LONG Short Trek. 🙂

  • @EmotionallyExhausted
    @EmotionallyExhausted 3 місяці тому +8

    That was incredible. Best Trek I've seen in... forever and ever. Well done.

  • @tbk2010
    @tbk2010 4 місяці тому +23

    Proof that AI can be used for good.

  • @kellyjeaularson5786
    @kellyjeaularson5786 3 місяці тому +5

    I have a good idea how difficult this was. A fantastic, well-done piece, enjoyable dialog and well chosen costume choice. I noted nothing out of consistency and I've been watching & reading Star Trek for roughly 52 years.

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  3 місяці тому +2

      Thanks for the kind words. I'm 57 years old, and I've been watching Star Trek for as long as I can remember.

  • @BatmanFan2274
    @BatmanFan2274 4 місяці тому +4

    Amazing job with this fan made short. Love hearing the classic banter between McCoy and Spock

  • @ChrisLawton66
    @ChrisLawton66 4 місяці тому +7

    This is excellent. I especially appreciate the way you used the ST:TAS style. Great script.

  • @johnbockelie3899
    @johnbockelie3899 3 місяці тому +9

    I always wanted to see how McCoy would take Kirk's death, thanks.

  • @baronormantagge1433
    @baronormantagge1433 3 місяці тому +7

    Now THIS is Star Trek. Thanks for keeping that original Human Adventure going!🖖

  • @coinopanimator
    @coinopanimator 3 місяці тому +5

    I love how you've captured the feel of the 70s cartoon. Amazing.

  • @billmartinson4205
    @billmartinson4205 2 місяці тому +3

    I'm not generally a fan of fan productions, but I have to say this was excellent. Well written, and well researched/well remembered. So many nice little nods. And, hardest of all to achieve in a fan film: actual emotional resonance. This was a great send-off for a great captain.

  • @MichaelParthum
    @MichaelParthum 3 місяці тому +6

    Scotty speculating that Kirk was not dead but rather transported to another space time continuum actually makes his reaction in Relics make sense.

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  3 місяці тому

      Glad you noticed that, Michael. Not an accidental reference. 🙂

  • @markallen2984
    @markallen2984 4 місяці тому +5

    I am so glad that they rememred to invite Riley to Kirk's wake.

  • @JandSResellers
    @JandSResellers 4 місяці тому +7

    The fact that Scotty said that he didn't believe that Kirk wasn't dead from the nexus incident brings Relics full circle when he said "I'll bet it was Jim Kirk who pulled the old girl out of mothballs to come find me!" figuring the captain cheated death again, negating the early Generations plot and setting things right.

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  4 місяці тому +4

      That was one of my goals with this. Thanks for catching that. (I also suggest that McCoy is the reason that Spock ultimately became a maverick in TNG's "Unification.")

  • @mrlevittown
    @mrlevittown 4 місяці тому +4

    I didn't know what to expect when I first saw this in my video list. I weld up with tears by the end. This video hits in the heart. Nicely done.😊😊

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  4 місяці тому +1

      Glad I could put some tears on your face. Thanks for the kind words, my friend.

  • @waynekaress5778
    @waynekaress5778 3 місяці тому +5

    Great work - both the voices and the animation! Probably the best Leonard Nimoy impression I ever heard!

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  3 місяці тому +4

      I will relay your compliment on Spock's voice to the computer algorithm. 🙂

  • @danielhurley7047
    @danielhurley7047 3 місяці тому +5

    As an old Trekkie, devoted to TOS, I really enjoyed this!

  • @CartoonMandates
    @CartoonMandates 3 місяці тому +6

    That was good sir. You even explained why Scotty believed in his heart that Captain Kirk survived and rescued him in the Next Generation episode.

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  3 місяці тому +2

      That I did! Glad you noticed. Thanks for the kind words.

  • @dailyqwikbytes
    @dailyqwikbytes 4 місяці тому +5

    Amazing job on the voices. Characterization on poit as well. Qapla! And LLAP.

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  4 місяці тому

      Peace and long life and many thanks.

    • @dailyqwikbytes
      @dailyqwikbytes 4 місяці тому

      @@jonathanlane1377 Certainly. Was that a voice actor or two or an AI reproduction of Mr. Nimoy and Mr. Kelly?

  • @glennwoden528
    @glennwoden528 3 місяці тому +3

    Standing ovation right there brother. That was beautiful. Live long and prosper

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  3 місяці тому

      Peace and long life, brother, and thank you for the standing ovation!

  • @ericd1798
    @ericd1798 3 місяці тому +4

    Very classy! Almost 30 years on, and it’s a perfect fit! Never too late.

  • @user-zd9yn5mz1f
    @user-zd9yn5mz1f 4 місяці тому +6

    A fine project, obviously filled with true heart and soul. Thanks for your fine efforts!

  • @marcusblackwell2372
    @marcusblackwell2372 3 місяці тому +7

    If William Shatner has a social media presence, you should show him this. This is a masterpiece, literally

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  3 місяці тому +2

      Thanks. I don't know how Shatner would feel about this, TBH. On the one hand, he embraces the potential of A.I. On the other hand, while I did reach out to the Nimoy estate, and they didn't reject my request for permission, they didn't want to spend the billable hours putting everything down in a contract either. So it was just a "We're not going to stop you, but we're not going to deal with it either." And De Kelley had no children or grandchildren, so his right of publicity terminated upon the death of his widow in 2004.
      Shatner has said he'd welcome living on as A.I. as long as he or his surviving family were compensated. Although I did make that offer to the Nimoy estate (to pay to license Leonard Nimoy's voice), they weren't interested...likely because I couldn't afford what it would cost the estate to write up the agreement. So I'm not entirely certain how Shatner would feel about this. He might love it, or he might think that it sets a precedent that fans will someday clone his voice or visual likeness without paying for it.

    • @marcusblackwell2372
      @marcusblackwell2372 3 місяці тому

      ​@@jonathanlane1377 I wasn't talking about the AI. I was saying I wonder how he would feel about such a masterpiece that just so happened to pay near perfect homage to classic Trek, even though Kirk is dead

  • @CannonKnight
    @CannonKnight 4 місяці тому +6

    Amazingly well written. This was more like a memorial to Spock and McCoy's somewhat complex friendship, though neither would admit to being good friends.

  • @VortexBunche
    @VortexBunche 4 місяці тому +5

    Superb. Totally nailed the characters.

  • @keysersoze375
    @keysersoze375 3 місяці тому +6

    The AI on the speech synthesizers are on point as a tribute to DeForest and Leonard..

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  3 місяці тому

      I really was blown away by how well the AI "acted." We live in amazing times!

  • @christopherbalzano9744
    @christopherbalzano9744 3 місяці тому +6

    Not bad, quite good in fact.
    I was skeptical at first but a loyal fan of the original since 1985 I think this script does a great job with the character of the oroginal crew and a whitty sense of humor, kudos for your hard work and obvious love of Kirk, Spock and McCoy!

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  3 місяці тому +3

      Thank you so much, Christopher. I made this primarily for TOS fans such as yourself. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

  • @davidrosler5413
    @davidrosler5413 4 місяці тому +5

    That was really excellent. Writing and voices melded to create a real original crew conversation. I'd like to see more. Sincerely.

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  4 місяці тому +1

      If there's more, it probably won't be coming from me. This took nearly a year. But thanks for the kind words.

    • @davidrosler5413
      @davidrosler5413 4 місяці тому

      @jonathanlane1377 there will be if you can find a way to monetize it. Filmation 70's look, very good script, convincing voices. Maybe you can contact someone at paramount. This is much different from star trek continues insomuch as they have no cartoons going so you are not competition. That's a huge advantage. They might decide allow you to monetize for a piece of the action if you put a big fat ad for their next star trek show or movie at the end with a special thanks. Pour honey all over it. I've been in tv /movies for 40 years. In.my humble opinion it's absolutely worth a call. Could be real dough because unlike most, this really is pretty good. Very watchable and that is the big line and you crossed it. Try it

  • @alanjg1
    @alanjg1 4 місяці тому +5

    Thank you for this. In my head, this is now cannon.

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  4 місяці тому +1

      That's awesome to know. Thanks so much for commenting.

  • @reubencarter3004
    @reubencarter3004 4 місяці тому +4

    Well done. You got McCoy's mannerism down perfectly.

  • @matthewslade4853
    @matthewslade4853 2 місяці тому +5

    This was way more of a pleasure to watch than it was to help make. Lol. glad to see all of you who enjoyed our efforts.

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  2 місяці тому +3

      Indeed, Matt! You did such an awesome job on the artwork! Thanks so much.

    • @themost8352
      @themost8352 2 місяці тому +1

      Just read the blog - hope you're having more opportunities to get illustrating gigs.

  • @TheCeilingzero
    @TheCeilingzero 2 місяці тому +5

    This gives closure, thank you.

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  2 місяці тому +3

      You are very welcome.

    • @Kinglore2000
      @Kinglore2000 2 місяці тому

      Closure. I never considered that.

    • @TheCeilingzero
      @TheCeilingzero 2 місяці тому

      @@jonathanlane1377 This would have given TOS closure. There were really not “Post” or “Half Credit” scenes in movies back then, but if there were, THIS should have been one in “Generations”. In my head cannon, it IS the post credit scene to “Generations”.

    • @TheCeilingzero
      @TheCeilingzero 2 місяці тому +1

      @@Kinglore2000 This would have given TOS closure. There were really not “Post” or “Half Credit” scenes in movies back then, but if there were, THIS should have been one in “Generations”. In my head cannon, it IS the post credit scene to “Generations”.

  • @Jeffrey-ml3mf
    @Jeffrey-ml3mf Місяць тому +3

    Good job! I'm glad some people are continuing to create fan films despite CBS' dystopian rules.

  • @ooklathemok
    @ooklathemok 4 місяці тому +4

    Thoroughly enjoyable. well done . Fan work such as this keeps the Trek torch alive

  • @CitizenPrime-tb7rp
    @CitizenPrime-tb7rp 4 місяці тому +5

    One word: EXCELLENT!

  • @SammySnickers-rj7ep
    @SammySnickers-rj7ep 3 місяці тому +4

    Neat animation! Man crazy how real the voices sound.

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  3 місяці тому

      I know, right!? ElevenLabs' A.I. is freaky good!

  • @CvSp22
    @CvSp22 24 дні тому +1

    This is Star Trek done by someone who loves and understands it. And it's what a prequel or an interludium should do: Closing plotholes, mapping the route to things already known to come and giving more deepth to the source material (and sometimes setting the seed for stories of an uncharted future beyond what's shown so far).
    The format with just dialogues of two charactres talking about personal stuff and historical events as some kind of anthalogy series is what i want for Trek.
    Really good job.

  • @Albert23456
    @Albert23456 Місяць тому +3

    Well done..kept me interested❤

  • @modeler308
    @modeler308 4 місяці тому +6

    You captured the voices almost perfectly.

  • @MrStarfighter14
    @MrStarfighter14 3 місяці тому +3

    I applaud the work that went into this tribute to the original cast. Bravo!

  • @vengeance1701
    @vengeance1701 3 місяці тому +4

    They are adding some level of emotional depth to these AI voices.

  • @dewforpolitics
    @dewforpolitics 3 місяці тому +4

    Dr. McCoy indeed lived a long life at least to 140 according to canon. He outlived all of the members of the original crew.

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  3 місяці тому +4

      Sadly, DeForest Kelley was the first to pass away back in 1999 at the age of 79. I miss him and Jimmy the most of all, as they both were two of the sweetest, friendliest actors to the fans. I stood next to Jimmy waiting for our omelettes at a convention near Baltimore in the 1980s, and it was like no one else was there. Jimmy's entire attention was focused on me as we chatted. And he was like that with every fan who came to see him. As for De, he actually saved my friend's life once at a convention in New York City when a crowd following him almost knocked her over the edge of a mezzanine that would have resulted in a 20 foot fall onto the marble floor of the hotel lobby. He grabbed her arm and said, "Whoa, there, young lady. We don't want any accidents today." True story!

    • @paulwhite6745
      @paulwhite6745 3 місяці тому

      We know McCoy was still alive in 2364 when the Enterprise D launched, but Spock was still around in 2385, when he was transported into an alternate past.

  • @indigoyarkindell968
    @indigoyarkindell968 4 місяці тому +4

    this is outstanding! great epilog and perfect production

  • @atlantianson515
    @atlantianson515 4 місяці тому +6

    Very Well Done! Thank you. It is so hard for me to watch the scene where the bridge falls and Kirk dies. He was my idol since I was just a boy. Would love to be a member of his crew on any starship, regardless what it looked like. But, no red shirt for me. LLAP!!

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  4 місяці тому +1

      I often wondered which captain I would most like to serve under were I in Starfleet, and Kirk usually came out on top. Of course, I grew up on TOS. 🙂

    • @atlantianson515
      @atlantianson515 4 місяці тому

      @@jonathanlane1377 That having been said, I would just as easy do well with Picard in command too, especially on the Enterprise-D.

  • @abacero2009
    @abacero2009 3 місяці тому +5

    Great job! and a moving tribute to these great characters. The conversation was natural to me from McCoy and Spock, mourning the loss of Jim Kirk, their captain, but also their friend. Congratulations and thanks from the fans.

  • @Rorr59
    @Rorr59 4 місяці тому +4

    I always wondered how that conversation would play out, I think you got it right on the money. GREAT JOB!

  • @mikeschiesel2852
    @mikeschiesel2852 3 місяці тому +4

    This is the kind of story that Short Treks could have done....but you did it better. Keep 'em coming!!!

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  3 місяці тому

      The Short Treks were only intended to get a little more use out the existing sets and beef up the available CBS All Access Star Trek content with more icons on the screen while not spending too much money on the budget. The Very Short Treks were intended to be simple animated gags, although many of them fell kinda flat.
      In the end, I'd like to think this little fan film stands on its own without the need to compare it to anything CBS Studios produced.

  • @buzzinpoa
    @buzzinpoa 3 місяці тому +4

    My God, this is... like traveling in time back to the wonderful year of 1993...!!
    This conversation is very good and well thought, full of bits of stories from so many old trips, like the characters would probably do in a random conversation...!!
    Sometimes I swear I could see Dee and Lenny's figures, like this was REALLY done, taped and filmed or recorded...!!
    I hope someday this can be turned into a film with AI characters, like Otoy have recently done in some videos!!
    Thank you so much!! You've made my night...!! I'll sleep well today, and maybe even dream of old starships and crews that exists no more...!! 🥹🥲
    Again, thank you so much...!! ❤

  • @merlin-ju6fu
    @merlin-ju6fu 3 місяці тому +4

    The writing of this was brilliant. It sounded like things the original characters would say.

  • @georgehaze
    @georgehaze 3 місяці тому +6

    Sad, but beautifully done. Thanks for sharing

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  3 місяці тому

      Thanks for commenting. George. Glad you enjoyed it.

  • @DRMEEKS
    @DRMEEKS 4 місяці тому +4

    What a brilliant piece of work

  • @MusingsWithDavidEarlMoravee
    @MusingsWithDavidEarlMoravee 3 місяці тому +3

    Thank-you. It was nice to see this moment in time. You did a great job. Certainly, Jim Kirk, at this moment, was an absent friend.

  • @raywallacefan7786
    @raywallacefan7786 4 місяці тому +5

    That was beautiful! Great AI approximation of the voices of DeForest Kelley and Leonard Nimoy. I had actually hoped back in the '90s that the two actors would return to Star Trek as their 24th century versions to talk about what Kirk meant to them, either in one of the TNG movies or one of the TV series airing at that time.

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  4 місяці тому

      That would have been awesome. At least you have this film. Glad you enjoyed it.

  • @davidbruce2940
    @davidbruce2940 3 місяці тому +3

    That was amazing sir I remember how emotionally drained I was after seeing Generations....Star Trek has been part of my life for over 50 years, and I always wanted to be Capt. Kirk. And now you have given us a look at how his loss affected the ones closest to him...Thank you for that...Any chance you can continue this story with the rest of the crew and their feelings of his loss would be amazing.....

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  3 місяці тому +1

      A little to problematic. Three of the TOS actors are still alive, and so I can't ethically or legally use A.I. to duplicate their voices the way I did with Leonard and De. Also, I doubt A.I. could replicate Scotty's accent.

  • @literacylabyrinth4018
    @literacylabyrinth4018 2 місяці тому +3

    Live long and prosper, this is a great tribute

  • @mranam5163
    @mranam5163 3 місяці тому +3

    Brilliant job. As an old original series fan can't tell you how much I enjoyed this. You probably can't monetize this without having Paramount on your back, but I hope they appreciate your positive efforts towards their product.

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  3 місяці тому +1

      I'm pretty sure Paramount isn't even aware of most fan filmmaker efforts...which might be a good thing. 🙂
      And you are correct that fan filmmakers are not alloed to monetize their efforts in any way.

  • @Jaytee.
    @Jaytee. 3 місяці тому +4

    Bones... Spock... That... was brilliant! 🖖

  • @mjbull5156
    @mjbull5156 4 місяці тому +5

    "...Excelsior with water wings!"

  • @lezliesawyer5930
    @lezliesawyer5930 4 місяці тому +4

    I really enjoyed this. Congratulations on this very unique film.

  • @jarrodnewman0514
    @jarrodnewman0514 3 місяці тому +3

    Well this was 30 years better late than never. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I'm going to watch this from here on out along with "Generations" right between the fade out/in from 2293 to 2371

  • @ihl8608
    @ihl8608 3 місяці тому +6

    I am a true star trek fan. Thank you Jonathan so much. Love it and great job.

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  3 місяці тому +2

      Thank YOU! It's a pleasure and honor to provide enjoyment to true fans.

    • @ihl8608
      @ihl8608 3 місяці тому +3

      @@jonathanlane1377 I even loved the 1973 animated series but yours was fantastic.

  • @chancellormartok1147
    @chancellormartok1147 3 місяці тому +3

    Qapla! A ending worthy of song for one of Starfleet's greatest warriors!

  • @Raxipyensidkennyd
    @Raxipyensidkennyd 3 місяці тому +3

    Brought a tear to me eye ... and laughs. Lots of laughs. Live long and prosper 🖖🏼

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  3 місяці тому

      I love it when a plan comes together. Thanks for the kind words.

  • @vinceburgess9012
    @vinceburgess9012 3 місяці тому +2

    This is awesome Jonathan. Great seeing these characters dealing with the loss of their friend. I had always hoped they would have done a movie of Spock finding a way to save Kirk. He did so much to help Captain Pike. I know he would have found a way.

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  3 місяці тому +2

      Well, they kinda did that in "Star Trek Into Darkness," but that was only because Dr. McCoy found a cure for death from Khan's blood. Yeah, we'd all like to forget that film, huh? 🙂

  • @malachitevalkyrie3131
    @malachitevalkyrie3131 3 місяці тому +3

    sad to hear the voices of ghosts. may they never be forgotten.

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  3 місяці тому +1

      Indeed, that one one of the reasons I decided to make this film.

  • @kevinjohnston2212
    @kevinjohnston2212 Місяць тому +2

    This is well written and nicely recreates the look of the Animated Series, as well.

  • @seanbickham1874
    @seanbickham1874 3 місяці тому +4

    This was a brilliant production and something I believe should have been made while the actors were still with us because it was a conversation we deserved to see! I'm officially accepting it as an epilogue to "Generations" because the acting and dialogue fit like a well tailored suit.

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  3 місяці тому +1

      That was a wonderful comment, Sean. Thank you so much!

  • @Chalee2151
    @Chalee2151 3 місяці тому +3

    It's a brutal chapter between Dr. McCoy and Spock. Damn it, I want to do a triple somersault. Thank you, Jonathan.

  • @MichaelParkerJMP
    @MichaelParkerJMP 3 місяці тому +3

    This is outstanding! Such a great tribute. The dialogue truly sounded like Spock and McCoy. Felt very canon to TOS.

  • @CarolineBoyce1
    @CarolineBoyce1 3 місяці тому +4

    Wow! I cannot believe what AI can do! This was very good! ❤😮

  • @hornet718
    @hornet718 4 місяці тому +3

    This got me in the feels for sure!!! This was well written and well performed. Very WELL DONE!!! Thank you for this and BRAVO!!!!!

  • @vincejaramillo1271
    @vincejaramillo1271 4 місяці тому +3

    This was awesome! Great job.

  • @tymadproductionsllc9180
    @tymadproductionsllc9180 3 місяці тому +3

    You had me hooked with the Southern Comfort! Great production.

  • @gregmcmahon124
    @gregmcmahon124 4 місяці тому +6

    Great Star Trek fan film.

  • @Willigula
    @Willigula 4 місяці тому +3

    OMG THAT WAS AMAZING. That will now live as canon in my head forever. We needed this closure. Thank you..

  • @markmaiello9180
    @markmaiello9180 4 місяці тому +3

    I knew when I saw O’Shea was the bartender that this would be great.

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  4 місяці тому +2

      That's actually Captain O'shea's younger brother, Seamus. 🙂

  • @goldenpacificmedia
    @goldenpacificmedia 4 місяці тому +5

    This was a heck of a lot of work! Some of Spock and McCoy's voicing sound better than AI... the algorithm is quite good.

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  4 місяці тому +4

      I know, right? The ElevenLabs speech synthesis algorithm is amazing!

  • @timewarpdrive77
    @timewarpdrive77 3 місяці тому +7

    Maybe the AI voices cracked here or there; maybe the animation wasn't quite right...
    But wow; I got sucked in. The writing, the inflections.... It felt like was watching them. Fantastic work. May you live long and prosper!

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  3 місяці тому

      The voices cracked? I wonder if A.I. is starting puberty! ;-)
      Thanks for the kind words.

    • @404TVfr
      @404TVfr 3 місяці тому

      They were just getting emotional

  • @daveintucson8541
    @daveintucson8541 3 місяці тому +6

    > The closest thing you've had to a brother
    Sybok hardest hit

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  3 місяці тому +2

      Sybok was a half-brother and not really much in Spock's life. Kirk called Spock a brother twice, once in "Whom Gods Destroy" and again in Star Trek V: The Undiscovered Country."

    • @kane5000
      @kane5000 3 місяці тому

      @@jonathanlane1377 100 %

  • @thetaker252
    @thetaker252 4 місяці тому +3

    This was so good! It almost brought a tear to my eye.

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  4 місяці тому

      Almost? I'll need to try harder next time! 🙂

  • @danielgalway8395
    @danielgalway8395 3 місяці тому +3

    This feels like hours spent with dear friends in all the best ways possible. Thank you for giving us this. This felt like the goodbye missing for 30 years. Amazing work

    • @jonathanlane1377
      @jonathanlane1377  3 місяці тому +1

      Thanks for the kind words, Daniel.

    • @kane5000
      @kane5000 3 місяці тому +1

      @danielgalway8395 well said sir LLAP

  • @GammaE35
    @GammaE35 17 днів тому +1

    This is very well done. It should be canon.

  • @MrParksies
    @MrParksies 4 місяці тому +4

    That was incredible. Sensational writing and annimation.

  • @robertszekely8686
    @robertszekely8686 3 місяці тому +3

    Very well done. I enjoyed this immensely. Thank you.

  • @AlanBernardS
    @AlanBernardS 4 місяці тому +3

    My Dinner with Spock. 😀Well written. Not at all out of character. A brilliant epilogue.

  • @s.marcus3669
    @s.marcus3669 3 місяці тому +3

    This was just lovely, appropriate and fitting. Bravo!