Cohesion & Coherence in Essay Writing
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- Опубліковано 10 січ 2017
- Cohesion is the glue that holds your sentences together. Coherence makes sure your ideas connect to create a clear “whole”. In this video, we will look at the elements that create strong cohesion and coherence that will make your writing stronger, better, and easier for the reader to follow, and for your IELTS or TOEFL grader to score high.
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You were born to be an English teacher. I wish everyone was this good at their job.
Adam, you made cristal clear how cohesion and coherence work in articles, by showing us *examples* which it took you a lot of time and effort to make. You are a dedicated teacher who deserves all our endless thanks. Many many thanks.^^
THANK YOU SO SO MUCH ADAM, you have helped me a lot through your videos. I will be appearing for my college entrance test, next week. Prepared through your videos for it!
BEST WISHES TO YOU. :)
Cohesion and coherence are my tittle thesis to accomplish as degree bachelor's.
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I can not thank you enough for this video...most of my university tutors have mentioned my issues surrounding cohesion and cohesiveness, an I have only come to realise this now...thank you 🙂
Adam, you are the best!!!
God, you are so good at teaching! I'm so grateful for this video; I've learned a lot! Tnx Adam
I find this explanation the clearest I ever saw in this particular topic. Congratulations and thank you very much.
Very detailed explanation. This video really helped me to understand what I should write in my essay. Thanks a lot!
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Hi Adam! Even the word 'best' is not suffice to say 'how good your teaching video is!'.This is because,you simply surpass all the parameters and go beyond conceptualized ideas.
Thanks & regards.
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Yes, you are correct!! It needs writing practice, I got across this lecture very well. I could able to clear writing confusion with your explained examples. Thanks!!
I am taking English class for the second time and these videos have helped me a lot in my essay writing. Thank you!
Thank you so much for your clear, detailed explanations. Way better than the writing class I took in school for a whole semester lol
U have a very proficient way of teaching techniques which depicted from this lucid explaination . I have to meticulously watch all of your videos to enhance my writing skills.
Thanks for your entire cooperation!!
Thanks, Adam, you've very well explained about cohesion & coherence.
Thanks for all the useful tips. I only started university recently and I need, to improve my writing skills and your videos are the best. Thanks!!!!
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I have learned a lot about this topic. Needed so much for my teaching. God bless you!
That lesson was so helpful. Thank you Adam !!
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Thanks, for being detailed in your explanation. It really helped clarify things.
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Thanks a heap for your best videos dealing with the exams for IELTS and TOEFL.
Thank you so much! It was helpful for my writing.
The best teacher in the world.Developing writing skills is a challenging and laborious process to teach , but you make it easier for us to have an idea about how we improve our writing.My question is : what are the steps to write a good academic essay? Thanks in advance.
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This is absolutely what i am looking for. Thank you
It is a very analytical approach to writing. It will help me so much. Thank you for your cordial effort.
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Amazing overview sir.. watching a week before my ielts exam.. thanks abundantly
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I have benefited from the lesson on paraphrasing. Thank you.
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Thank you very much for your help, Adam!
Hai Adam, I usually practice so many essays and I always feel difficulty when essay not familiar to my field (eg: health care sector). so what to do in this situation.
a very important lesson...to write a good essay...
Learning so much from you. Thank you sir!❤
damn, nothing to complain about your lecture. Best one ever, you must deserve more than 1 like button.
Hi Adam, thanks you very much you are best teacher,I have ever seen and you are honest for teaching us.
Great teacher this helped me to prepare for exams. thank you
Hello, thank you a lot for your lessons; i have a question, some teachers have told me that is not a good idea to use the passive voice at an essay because it sounds weird, but considering what you said about syntax, and tone while writing, would it be a good idea to use the passive voice, for example at the TOEFL test?
your are a great teacher. keep up the good work. thanks
had accidently watch your lesson, its changed whole structure of my brain. thank you
That was very good way to explain writing and thank you.
Mr. Adam I don't know How I adapted your style. But I have been so. Watching you at least once a day🤗
Thank you for this.
Thanks for a great lesson!
good teacher and effective ways to repeat and more practise! thanks!
adam your lessons are outstanding, I want you to clear my doubts on how to be partly agree in essays and how to make body paragraphs and what should be the planing.Could you please write a full essay on this type ???
Great Efforts ,Thank You Adam!
just to let you know, i got 8.5 band 2 times. Second time, i didn't even practice. Just watched your videos to revise. You are a great teacher.
thnks adam..i wish my country has same teacher like u ..
Thanks for your efforts in helping students write better.
Thanks for this, Adam! 💗
Thanks Mr Adams
Even your speech has coherence 🌷
Good teaching way..❤
My appreciation, i don't understand what exactly means those words cohsion and coherence, but after i saw your video, I got it.
Thank you, and keep going🎉❤
Thank you very much. The simplest explanation.
Hi Adam,
That was a very helpful video. I've a question related to a video you did on transition words.
Would you be so kind as to explain the usage of thereby and whereby please?
Thanks
Thank you sir for explaining this coherence in brief manner
From 6 to 7.5. Thank u!!!
Nice video! Do you have any rubric to assess cohesion and coherence separately?
This is really good video. Your a very good teacher ;).
i have one question regarding the museum if clause example. since it is the third conditional with had + 3d verbform, dont we need to say couldn´t have imagined in the second part ? pls correct me if i am wrong.
this is the useful vid I ve ever seen thank you teacher
thank you so much Adam!
that is very clear and helpful thanks
Its easy explanation. Thank you
Hello Adam. Let me tell you I'm a big fan from you, I love your teaching methods, and I take some of them to my classes, I'm an English professor from Mexico, yesterday I did my OTCCC oxford certification for c2 , I got some Marks that I'm not prod of them. 85% Use of English 75% listening and 60% reading (idk why) but the problem is that my writing was terrible, I must have an inform based in charts, I have never written an inform even in my native language, I'd appreciate that you share a video where you show how to write an inform ... THANKS and greetings from Mexico
What a lucid explanation..
GREAT..
Thank you so much this was so helpful I appreciate this so much!!
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Does the same principle apply on introduction of an essay? Can you make a detailed video on Introduction and thesis statement of an argumentative essay?
Thank you so much, Adam!
Thank you so much' very informative. Now i know the difference of this two. 😇🤗❤👏👏
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thank you for this video. i have 1 question that can we use I,WE and MY in eassy or not? i heard from many people that without our view we should never ue i,we and my in other eassy paragraph !
i love your methods and explanation very simple ,easy to understand and to the point.
Many thanks ,the noblest and greatest one ever!
Hi Adam. Can you explain...
...Among these is( ?? Are?)
the increase.
After these must there be IS or ARE?
Thank you
Hey Adam,
I tend to take each paragraph with a new idea. Then create a topic sentence and elaborate. But at least all paragraphs must be related to the thesis statement. I think that when you use a thesis statement to guide your thinking, it is easier to have coherence. For cohesion that comes down to using transition word like Thus, therefore etc..what do you think?
Hi Adam,
I do extend my warmest greeting to you.
I have studied about if classes in grammar book.They have mentioned if you use past perfect in if classes the result should be
past tense of auxiliary verbs+have+past participle; in the ex, started with Terracotta warriors, if clause has been written in past perfect and the result has just had 'could +verb'..It is really a very good sentence and you are an excellent teacher.So please clarify the structure.
Thanks in advance.
How you made first para more effective? What you would suggest for Coherence as I am good at cohesion but not at Coherence.
Excellent topic and excellent presentation
Thank you Adam. And please post more video lessons.
Thank you!
you are a coherent teacher
thank you. very helpful
Thnk u sir for ur clear explanation.
Thanks for a great explanation :)
I've learned a lot. Thank yo so much.