Having now listened to all six parts I can say that this was a very interesting experiment, to produce a line by line commentary on a significant work. Bravo. I think it could be immediately improved in two ways. The first is to use a second voice for the text itself so that it is clearer to the listener whether they are listening to text or commentary at any point. The second would be to take more care to express ideas in your own words, too often you simply repeat the text with ellipsis or out of order which while it helps with understanding is not very efficient. An unrelated point is that when new historicism talks about what historians do it is useful to bear in mind that they are not talking about practicing historians they are really talking about how historical criticism was performed before new historicism and imagining an equation between that and historical practice.
Hi, thanks for the valuable feedback. These were the first videos I made so was just figuring it all out. Will surely consider the above in my future videos.
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Having now listened to all six parts I can say that this was a very interesting experiment, to produce a line by line commentary on a significant work. Bravo. I think it could be immediately improved in two ways. The first is to use a second voice for the text itself so that it is clearer to the listener whether they are listening to text or commentary at any point. The second would be to take more care to express ideas in your own words, too often you simply repeat the text with ellipsis or out of order which while it helps with understanding is not very efficient. An unrelated point is that when new historicism talks about what historians do it is useful to bear in mind that they are not talking about practicing historians they are really talking about how historical criticism was performed before new historicism and imagining an equation between that and historical practice.
Hi, thanks for the valuable feedback. These were the first videos I made so was just figuring it all out. Will surely consider the above in my future videos.