it's a AI glitch which happens in 99% of AI written stories. if it redoes it why would a living being allow it to slide? the only reason i don't say 100% is rare story is clearly AI but doesn't do that, but they can go on and on with the same thing stated as filler in the story as well.
So repetitive, how many determinations are there? This story has been repeated with many variations. The physics academy, the philosophy academy, the cultural academy...same story, always with the lone human. A primitive species. Barely into space flight just having achieved ftl travel. All basically the same story.
Stopped after 12 mins. After she solved the puzzle, it just repeats and drones on and on and on and on and on (get my point?). The story drowns itself in repetition and doesn’t move the anticipation of the story forward to a conclusion. Definitely not subscribing if this the time waster this garbage was….
GOOD ! Some humbly and freely offered musings- The Puzzle is really THE ANCIENT ONES THEMSELVES ! The Ancients had a powerful driving force to share everything about themselves with Future beings. They were also Wise enough to realize that younger Species would have things to Share. As the Human approaches the Puzzle for the last time, a polydimensional Moebius Loop appears to her ONLY. Driven to Touch the Loop, She is the only one who hears , "WELCOME ! Please join us .". At Her touch, the amphitheater goes totally black and silent. As the Academy lighting system returns, everyone in the room sees that she is gone. Everyone in the room now sees the pulsing Loop; pulsing with Her signature Heart Beat. As The Professor touches the Loop, and a voice inside of him perceives "Hello" .. .. .. ! And so the adventure cognifies Forward.
The repeated words, rephrasing is the mark of Microsoft's word stupid coping of all text that was edited out as well as ignoring the end of final rewrite. If you forget to tell it to accept all changes.
I’m usually patient with AI stupidity. But oh my god… it’s like they copy pasted the same story several times to fill the time slot. This is high school stupidity with only the first few pages of a report are real and the rest of the 50 page report are song lyrics.
A puzzle and a riddle are two different things. This story presents them as one thing and uses the terms interchangeably. This story needs a ruthless editor. Too much repetition. Why didn"t the students work on this puzzle at the same time instead of one at a time? Why did they have to physically approach the holoprojection up close? Why couldn't they use their pads to zoom in on it from their seats? Whoever wrote this story needs to study the principles of good writing and storytelling at greater length. And attend a few Science Fiction Writers conferences. I didn't finish the story it was so badly told.
The title says the "Human Answers Instantly" but the story says it takes her hours to solve. How to stretch a 10 minute story to 38 minutes.
by repeating with different words the same message.
Couldn't make it more than a third of the way through as by then it had repeated itself dozens of times. Why even post this.
Also ridiculous repetition in the story.
That’s the AI that wrote it, not keeping track of the threads.
If nobody knows the answer how will they know when somebody solves it?
Far too long.
Why do you restart the story part way through?🤔
it's a AI glitch which happens in 99% of AI written stories. if it redoes it why would a living being allow it to slide? the only reason i don't say 100% is rare story is clearly AI but doesn't do that, but they can go on and on with the same thing stated as filler in the story as well.
So repetitive, how many determinations are there? This story has been repeated with many variations. The physics academy, the philosophy academy, the cultural academy...same story, always with the lone human. A primitive species. Barely into space flight just having achieved ftl travel. All basically the same story.
a little bit repetitive, full of paraphrasing.......
my goodness, curate your LLM's output!
Even playing it at 2X speed I had to skip ahead to get through this $hit. Not even a good ending 🙄😡😑
Like the story, but you keep repeating things that you have already told us.
What is with the "dot.. dot.. dot"?
pregnant pause
Read by an AI, which also wrote the story. I've been noticing this trend in a lot of these stories
Yes, i noticed that all the AI stories repeat themselves often. Apparently AI thinks we won't get it the first time.
a little repetitive in some places but good story
3 times the same blabla and then a 4th ...
Stopped after 12 mins. After she solved the puzzle, it just repeats and drones on and on and on and on and on (get my point?). The story drowns itself in repetition and doesn’t move the anticipation of the story forward to a conclusion.
Definitely not subscribing if this the time waster this garbage was….
DUDE.. good story, a little repetitive need to edit that ,but i did enjoy the story line.. thank you
GOOD ! Some humbly and freely offered musings- The Puzzle is really THE ANCIENT ONES THEMSELVES ! The Ancients had a powerful driving force to share everything about themselves with Future beings. They were also Wise enough to realize that younger Species would have things to Share. As the Human approaches the Puzzle for the last time, a polydimensional Moebius Loop appears to her ONLY. Driven to Touch the Loop, She is the only one who hears , "WELCOME ! Please join us .". At Her touch, the amphitheater goes totally black and silent. As the Academy lighting system returns, everyone in the room sees that she is gone. Everyone in the room now sees the pulsing Loop; pulsing with Her signature Heart Beat. As The Professor touches the Loop, and a voice inside of him perceives "Hello" .. .. .. ! And so the adventure cognifies Forward.
I could have given the answer quicker than the AI narrator...🤣
The repeated words, rephrasing is the mark of Microsoft's word stupid coping of all text that was edited out as well as ignoring the end of final rewrite. If you forget to tell it to accept all changes.
five minute story told in fourty minuites .
Literally almost the same story as one if the Sarah Chen's, with names and species changed except the human.
I had to skip forwards several times. Between the self praise and the repeated paragraphs, I had to.😢
I’m usually patient with AI stupidity. But oh my god… it’s like they copy pasted the same story several times to fill the time slot. This is high school stupidity with only the first few pages of a report are real and the rest of the 50 page report are song lyrics.
This story should have been half the time...dragged on ...also the title is clickbait!
BOOOOOOOOORIIIIIINNNNNNGGGGGG
I would have said it was simple.
A puzzle and a riddle are two different things. This story presents them as one thing and uses the terms interchangeably.
This story needs a ruthless editor. Too much repetition.
Why didn"t the students work on this puzzle at the same time instead of one at a time? Why did they have to physically approach the holoprojection up close? Why couldn't they use their pads to zoom in on it from their seats?
Whoever wrote this story needs to study the principles of good writing and storytelling at greater length. And attend a few Science Fiction Writers conferences.
I didn't finish the story it was so badly told.
Great story. I really enjoyed this one. 😊
Old story... AI is repeating itself.
0.12 good storyline and listening, thank you.
repeating. I didn't like it. Did an AI write it?
dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot
More crap computer narration with mispronounced words and inconsistent spelled words