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  • Опубліковано 7 вер 2024
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КОМЕНТАРІ • 412

  • @mrcreepin5892
    @mrcreepin5892 7 років тому +317

    Secrets are like apples you take one and someone beats the shit out of you

    • @jackdiamanti6576
      @jackdiamanti6576 7 років тому

      Apple...

    • @thegrumpydragon7601
      @thegrumpydragon7601 7 років тому

      Mr Creepin pear 🍐

    • @thebanditoking
      @thebanditoking 7 років тому +29

      Who the fuck are you getting your apples from?

    • @ityr
      @ityr 7 років тому +3

      the bandit king from the food market in Solitude, the guards dont take kindly to thieves

    • @gigidy471
      @gigidy471 7 років тому

      Mr Creepin Oh.

  • @RandomLeveledLoot
    @RandomLeveledLoot 7 років тому +86

    I have to agree with the girl when "I stay because I cannot leave". Yeah, I love Mrcreepypasta's stories too...

  • @OLIVIA-zs8eu
    @OLIVIA-zs8eu 7 років тому +64

    What a beautiful story. I didn't even get scared because I was entranced by the perfect word choice. Perfect narration too. Just wow!

  • @meganb4276
    @meganb4276 6 років тому +87

    This was sad and so fulfilling. This was an excellent story 11/10

  • @ElizabethEinspanier
    @ElizabethEinspanier 7 років тому +167

    This was an enjoyable little ghost story--not a creepypasta exactly, but a more traditional tale with a very satisfying ending. Great job narrating, too!

  • @TheArcadeDad
    @TheArcadeDad 6 років тому +107

    Absolutely loved this one. I miss traditional stories like this one. Love the super scary too however this one had the feel good factor to it. Great job

  • @nautilusbones980
    @nautilusbones980 7 років тому +111

    "YOU SPEAK IN RIDDLES" - Best quote in the story.

  • @kanna-san.
    @kanna-san. 7 років тому +318

    This didn't feel like a creepypasta, it was really good tho

  • @Dogman_35
    @Dogman_35 7 років тому +161

    Creepypastas have really been blurring the lines between creepy and sad as of late. And I kind of like that...

  • @swad-z3651
    @swad-z3651 6 років тому +7

    This wasn't scary it was so sad and disturbing. The thought of the girl terrified and starving or begging for air while the sevents or family walked around unaware of her presences. The thought of her crying as she slowly died is just heart breaking. I don't think I would ever wish that on my worst enemy. No one deserves a death like that

  • @MrCreeps
    @MrCreeps 7 років тому +160

    Love the long stories! Here we go!

  • @SageWarrenSageywageypoo
    @SageWarrenSageywageypoo 6 років тому +15

    I wasn’t expecting this to become one of my favorite “Creepypastas”. The story was narrated greatly. And the story also kept me wanting to know what would happen next.

  • @Robbmann67
    @Robbmann67 7 років тому +110

    Thought this was gonna be another cabin getaway

    • @nah9935
      @nah9935 7 років тому +1

      Same though it ended sadly

  • @Annabel_Lee1809
    @Annabel_Lee1809 7 років тому +20

    You have a voice of one who could read the ingredients on a shampoo bottle and lull me into a slumber, my dear.

  • @charbinch5234
    @charbinch5234 7 років тому +18

    I find it ironic how yesterday you just uploaded a video about you and your wife just moved into a new house together and then, a creepypasta about family

  • @aprilfoolsday259
    @aprilfoolsday259 7 років тому +16

    I loved this story. Whoever wrote this is a genius. It was a lovely period that screamed mystery and suspense. I can only tip my hat to such an author. Whoever it was you truly have a gift.

  • @shanemurry7030
    @shanemurry7030 7 років тому +10

    Poor child. A sad thing is in life those men never got punished in life for what they did but maybe in death they meet old Nick himself who gave them a horrific bad time

  • @talonreiif3707
    @talonreiif3707 7 років тому +5

    Kudos to the author. This was genuinely one of the best stories I have heard in a long time.
    Your reading also helped give it some life, too

  • @JohnnytheYouKnowWhat
    @JohnnytheYouKnowWhat 6 років тому +12

    This needs to be made into a movie.

  • @thisnorwegianchick788
    @thisnorwegianchick788 7 років тому +20

    the clock... it watches me... bo-dum psssh!

  • @Chris11502
    @Chris11502 7 років тому +169

    What did the clock do at dinner?
    Go back 4 seconds

  • @xaviercvirn
    @xaviercvirn 7 років тому +76

    finally a break from the mushroom ones

    • @krila6770
      @krila6770 7 років тому +1

      Xavier Cvirn those were disgusting lol

  • @nai6982
    @nai6982 7 років тому +3

    A creepypasta with a happy ended?
    ..this is nice 💕

  • @awen490
    @awen490 7 років тому +13

    honestly I haven't seen any hate on your videos, how is that possible

  • @colorfulrainbow6682
    @colorfulrainbow6682 4 роки тому +1

    I love stories like this!!! But now stuck in my head....
    "I sit because I can't stand, I stay because I can not leave".
    I would love to hear more like this!!!!

  • @user-xh7cm7ov1z
    @user-xh7cm7ov1z 6 років тому +2

    Who the hell is cutting onions? Great job on reading this story and I too was afraid for Isabel.

  • @shojochan4796
    @shojochan4796 7 років тому +2

    That was such a sweet and happy ending! Quite different for a creepypasta...yet it is a pleasant difference.

  • @ari-zona5611
    @ari-zona5611 7 років тому +1

    This story made me stay up till 3:44 am just to hear all of it, damn you Mr.Creepypasta

  • @turtles_table
    @turtles_table 7 років тому +33

    I could see this being a movie after adding fillers

  • @francisalvaro6585
    @francisalvaro6585 7 років тому +41

    14:04 Evanescence?
    WAKE ME UP INSIDE!!!!!!

    • @jenniferhenderson5028
      @jenniferhenderson5028 6 років тому +4

      You should try a dictionary over pop music band names. Much more useful and educational. Evanescence: After you lose a loved one, often you're gripped with a fear of evanescence, or the rapid fading from sight or memory of that person. Evanescence comes from the Latin evanescere meaning "disappear, vanish." Something that possesses qualities of evanescence, has a quality of disappearing or vanishing.

    • @cyberspinosaur1145
      @cyberspinosaur1145 6 років тому +3

      I CAN'T WAKE UP!!!

    • @neveralways4415
      @neveralways4415 6 років тому +1

      Francis Alvaro SAVE MEEEEEE!

    • @alexac4293
      @alexac4293 6 років тому +1

      SAVE ME FROM THE NOTHING I'VE BECOME

    • @_.ochikaze._
      @_.ochikaze._ 6 років тому

      SAVE MEEEEEEE

  • @astropheluwu
    @astropheluwu 7 років тому +11

    who else like before watching? (also please keep reading long ones! i love them!!)

  • @thewillow727
    @thewillow727 7 років тому +2

    This is an amazing story it had me drawn in from the beginning and in awe at the end a truly heartbreaking things happened and it ended with happiness and relief

  • @guertin11
    @guertin11 7 років тому +3

    Nothing better than muting 2k17 and listening to MCP while I play :)

  • @calebvalverde3947
    @calebvalverde3947 6 років тому +2

    Ah this saddened me greatly. What a sad thing to happen..

  • @jenniferhenderson5028
    @jenniferhenderson5028 6 років тому +3

    This was so sad, and so very good.

  • @prismstudios001
    @prismstudios001 7 років тому +7

    Love this! Old fashioned good Dickensian type storytelling.

  • @willowraine725
    @willowraine725 7 років тому

    Great story. Right in the middle of it, a bolt of lightning knocked out my wi-fi for a few minutes. She had started to look for the secret room. I'm like come on I need to hear the rest of this or I'll never fall asleep. I've already been up for 24 hours (insomnia). Thankfully it came backs on in a few minutes. Thanks for the great story👍🏼 Now I'm gonna try and sleep.

  • @sylvanvixen6887
    @sylvanvixen6887 7 років тому +3

    I love these more gothic feeling ghost stories

  • @imunknown7090
    @imunknown7090 7 років тому +23

    Mr Creept Pasta Is A Legend 👍👍👍 Truly The Best

  • @Metalisabbath
    @Metalisabbath 7 років тому +13

    What is the name of that beautiful piano music? It's been in a few, namely Borrasca.

  • @yourpalgrass
    @yourpalgrass 7 років тому

    This was a beautiful story in its own way,elegant with the richness of a vast dark joke that someone had always kept to them self...

  • @SweetlySublimeNut
    @SweetlySublimeNut 7 років тому +5

    It's got a Edgar Allen Poe feel to it

  • @FilipEngell
    @FilipEngell 7 років тому

    This story had me at the edge of my seat, and almost made me cry at the end

  • @juliaperez916
    @juliaperez916 7 років тому +5

    Aww this one was really sweet

  • @dreamingmiki750
    @dreamingmiki750 6 років тому +1

    A Beautiful and traditional ghost tale. ^-^

  • @Sunny_Punkin
    @Sunny_Punkin 7 років тому +16

    As always, great reading but I've got a quick criticism.
    The instrumentals were a little too loud over your readings at points.

    • @cave___
      @cave___ 7 років тому +1

      Sunny Jack-O-Lantern thanks for being kind about it. A lot of people have no chill and are extremely rude. But yes I agree.

  • @onirampage2497
    @onirampage2497 7 років тому +6

    Anyone else watching this 1 in the morning?

    • @chisaime
      @chisaime 7 років тому

      Zackary Jackson unfortunately

  • @ronniegallery5013
    @ronniegallery5013 7 років тому +4

    The honor of having the person who wrote this as an English teacher

  • @egglasagna5414
    @egglasagna5414 5 років тому

    I can’t describe how much I LOVE this story

  • @celestegomez9304
    @celestegomez9304 7 років тому +3

    I like this story.

  • @torturedsoul7903
    @torturedsoul7903 4 роки тому

    This was the most amazing story I've ever heard!! It was put together so well! You conveyed the emotion perfectly. You are a truly amazing narrator!!!

  • @deesandman3992
    @deesandman3992 3 роки тому

    I have listened to this time an time again on various occasions. This has to be one of my very very very favorites. Thank u

  • @JJ-id4kg
    @JJ-id4kg 7 років тому +3

    great now I can't sleep but so good that I saw this rip me

  • @CalsGirl97
    @CalsGirl97 7 років тому +1

    Your intro is just a tad loud. I fall asleep to creepypastas and it jars me awake

  • @jewels3596
    @jewels3596 7 років тому

    I love stories like this that keep you on the edge of your seat the whole time! Loved it!!!

  • @awesomepossm
    @awesomepossm 7 років тому

    This was quite a good story! I really did enjoy it, thought it left me thinking that something was still wrong in the end. Thanks for the daily uploads, they've really been making my summer a lot more interesting!

  • @egglasagna5414
    @egglasagna5414 5 років тому

    Idk what it is about the story but I keep coming back to it, it just makes me feel happy? In a weird way

  • @DenetriaGibson
    @DenetriaGibson 5 років тому

    From one author to another GREAT STORY!!!! Intriguing from beginning to end!!

  • @charixardtvxx
    @charixardtvxx 7 років тому

    I'm glad that the little girl was finally put to rest.

  • @darkfae5423
    @darkfae5423 7 років тому

    Classic ghost story - well written and well read; of course. Most enjoyable, if a bit sad. Thank you.

  • @strawberrypancakes6952
    @strawberrypancakes6952 5 років тому

    It had a sad story, yet a happy ending and I find it really amusing, you should do more stories like this if you find any

  • @Kaenbyou777Rin
    @Kaenbyou777Rin 6 років тому +2

    Woaah that was a cool story, I love stuff about hidden secrets in old places

  • @malinachainey1564
    @malinachainey1564 7 років тому +3

    Ive always loved the name Nadia, Its my 9 y.o. daughter's name.

  • @Evil_Monologues
    @Evil_Monologues 7 років тому +1

    Damn...the realization that she was alive in the trunk kinda killed me..

  • @judythegothicangel6614
    @judythegothicangel6614 4 роки тому

    So hauntingly sad, I feel so bad for the little girl and how she must have felt betrayed and lonely hoping against the odds that someone, anyone would find her.... But they never did until someone listened..

  • @maryashen4897
    @maryashen4897 6 років тому

    I love the happy and satisfying ending.

  • @isabellel4354
    @isabellel4354 4 роки тому

    My name is Isabelle and every time you said "Isabelle" i'm like- "who's calling me?"

  • @lelouchvibritannia6851
    @lelouchvibritannia6851 7 років тому

    I was about to stop watching this creepy pasta at 15:00 but because I decided to go through with finishing it I don't regret it at all it was a amazing story

  • @emmajanewatts4388
    @emmajanewatts4388 6 років тому

    The only one ever that made me cry at the end. God I’m soft x

  • @mego8838
    @mego8838 5 років тому

    Aaawwww this is something I can share with my little pre teens. Scary stories with out a massive amount of gore

  • @manicmax7909
    @manicmax7909 6 років тому

    Ugh that was so good. I love this kind of story, I wish there were more like it. If I or someone I know goes into movie making I/they need to make a movie about this.

  • @researchersiks
    @researchersiks 7 років тому +1

    fresh out of work fantastic timing

  • @caelia6900
    @caelia6900 7 років тому

    This was by far one of the best stories

  • @charllottecombs2549
    @charllottecombs2549 3 роки тому

    More like this pleeeaaase. Family secrets is the best I've heard yet.

  • @_ghost.house_3008
    @_ghost.house_3008 7 років тому

    This literally almost made me cry, great job

  • @yfi6841
    @yfi6841 5 років тому

    This is the only one that made me cry and angry. Think of how many times this story in a different way would be a true one. 😔

  • @Fiona-pr6vl
    @Fiona-pr6vl 6 років тому

    Dang I watched this a year late... this needs to be a movie. people in the comments are saying it wasn't scary while they listened to it (..clears throat.. TEACH ME YOUR WAYS) More creepy pastas need this kind of satisfying and not horrifying ending!

  • @rayncraig5295
    @rayncraig5295 7 років тому

    wow! the intro is awesome! ! I've listened to ya for a long time and each story is better than ever.

  • @TACOTOM8706
    @TACOTOM8706 5 років тому

    This was freaking fantastic. I got sucked in to the damn story and forgot i was at work.

  • @victoriaperez3574
    @victoriaperez3574 7 років тому +15

    I dissociated so hard, I listened to the entire thing and have no idea what it's about. Barely heard a word of it. Anyone willing to summarize the story for me?

    • @pepinyostep3592
      @pepinyostep3592 7 років тому +18

      Girl1 sleepwalks around the house at night. When she wakes up from her sleepwalking she sees a ghost girl around the same age as her. Girl1 tells her mum, her mum gets intrigued and tells her to keep asking the gjost girl wuestions at night. Girl1 finds out the ghost girl shows up when the clock in the livingroom is removed. Later on she also is told the ghost girls story through the maid. The maid says many years ago the ghost girl, when she was alive, would sleep walk. And one night on christmas eve robbers who knew alot about the houses layout came and diddnt expect the girl there. So they took her and hid her in a trunk in the room behind the clock, and hid the loot. Planning to take it later. She died of starvation and of oxygen deprevation. So girl1 one night asks the ghost girl to help her find the ghost girls body. Ghost girl shows the room, and girl1 finds the trunk, opens it then thanks ghost girl and goes upstairs to tell her mum.

  • @julieellis2870
    @julieellis2870 7 років тому

    This was one of your best stories ! Thank you for the bedtime story.

  • @robertmicheal8735
    @robertmicheal8735 7 років тому

    Another great story MCP! Always great content from your horror vault.

  • @jerjerboibamaman
    @jerjerboibamaman 6 років тому

    Very good story here Sir, your telling of it was simply wonderful, thank you for all of your hard work it is so appreciated.

  • @spookychan7189
    @spookychan7189 6 років тому

    Aww man I love this story, so much mystery and detail was put into this!

  • @kikipotter792
    @kikipotter792 7 років тому +6

    Bro wtf I just realized why I haven't heard anything from you in a while??? I had been unsubbed??? I've been subbed to you for a really long time now so I know I didn't do it myself. I wonder when it happened?? I know it's happened once or twice before through the years

  • @sanse7370
    @sanse7370 7 років тому +1

    his voice is so smooth and calming

  • @lillieblue
    @lillieblue 7 років тому +1

    Pretty sure grav3yardgirl gave you a shout out on her personal channel earlier today. Said she just started listening to "that creepy pasta guy".

  • @grapegangwilson9551
    @grapegangwilson9551 7 років тому

    the best story that mrcreepypasta can ever tell anyone it over 30 minutes

  • @scarletjester8446
    @scarletjester8446 4 роки тому

    Ooh, this was really good! I'd like to listen to more of these types of stories.

  • @mdmgamer1995
    @mdmgamer1995 3 роки тому

    Ah the quintessential ghost story pure gold my friend your narration was on point timing emotion and delivery just awesome cheers mate 👍

  • @d.t.7749
    @d.t.7749 6 років тому +1

    I like this intro more than your new one.

  • @Fractorification
    @Fractorification 3 роки тому

    This was a cute little creepy mystery story. However, I feel that because the mystery relies on so much information, a lot of it is given to us through chunks of exposition by some of the characters, like Bertha and Isabel.
    I think that a story like this could work better as a short film where we could have additional scenes showing us this stuff rather than telling us about it, and even introducing characters that mentioned in the story but never seen, like the shady family member that knew about the little girl’s disappearance, but kept it to himself.

  • @FIONA21ful
    @FIONA21ful 7 років тому

    Loved this ....can't beat a traditional ghost story.

  • @TheShadyPast
    @TheShadyPast 7 років тому +1

    it isn't really a horror story but is still very good

  • @kyliemoore5064
    @kyliemoore5064 7 років тому +1

    Thank you really good story 🕰

  • @thecakegarden5324
    @thecakegarden5324 7 років тому

    Last time I was this early we didn't know what MCP's hand looked like yet.

  • @arisenleaf
    @arisenleaf 7 років тому

    This made me cry
    And I'm proud of it

  • @toaster_boi
    @toaster_boi 7 років тому

    It's like subtraction, if you have 2 chocolate cakes and someone else tries to take one.
    You got a story and a secret.

  • @stefantheconqueror8710
    @stefantheconqueror8710 7 років тому +4

    Did i come to listen to a drama tv series script or a creepypasta

  • @theroadhouseraccoon9025
    @theroadhouseraccoon9025 3 роки тому

    I just realised I've read this about 2 years ago (when they took the clock away) great story!!too bad I already know what happens