Brilliant cinematography - the whisk of a skirt, floor view of shoes; lighting, close ups, the coins. A feat of editing- and writing the piano pieces too! Well done. Only question- I think perhaps I might have preferred to ‘imagine’ the recipient of the calls rather than see an actual face? Good storyline- Oh, the angst of breaking up!! It’s my fault, it’s your fault- the seesaw. The belief that words can actually repair broken trust. And who posted the post-it notes????!!!
So very well captures the heart ache of breaking up. I love all the close ups -it’s as though I’m in there with them! So many creative touches!
Brilliant cinematography - the whisk of a skirt, floor view of shoes; lighting, close ups, the coins. A feat of editing- and writing the piano pieces too! Well done.
Only question- I think perhaps I might have preferred to ‘imagine’ the recipient of the calls rather than see an actual face?
Good storyline- Oh, the angst of breaking up!! It’s my fault, it’s your fault- the seesaw. The belief that words can actually repair broken trust.
And who posted the post-it notes????!!!