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  • @GoingtoHecq
    @GoingtoHecq 9 місяців тому +75

    I love the comparison of the food to toothpaste. It's a very comedic way of revealing a mint flavor. I can see that an herbivore could love things like mint and licorice on their own.

    • @AndrooUK
      @AndrooUK 8 місяців тому +6

      The woman might just have said that because it is served in a squeezy tube, like a tube of toothpaste, though.
      It's not necessarily mint flavoured. It could be dog turd flavoured, for all we know, because that's an alien delicacy... unless the author wants to weigh in and let us know which... 💩

    • @foste409
      @foste409 8 місяців тому

      😮😮😮😮😮😮​ll@@AndrooUK

    • @SolTerran5050
      @SolTerran5050 7 місяців тому +2

      Not sure what the hate is with mint or Licorice , I like black Licorice ( especially Jelly beans) and mint ( Mint chocolate chip Ice cream), but alas I guess everyone has their preferences

    • @williamthebadgerwilliams623
      @williamthebadgerwilliams623 6 місяців тому +6

      @@AndrooUK I was only thinking of consistency when I wrote the line, honestly I was thinking of MRE cheese I had in the army, but that felt too specific to put into a story, so I went with tooth paste.

    • @RobertStewart-i3m
      @RobertStewart-i3m 3 місяці тому +1

      ​@@williamthebadgerwilliams623 You did a good job on the story, and I took 👏 the toothpaste line several ways. None involved mint or licorice.

  • @silasgibson7982
    @silasgibson7982 9 місяців тому +42

    yes good story readership is its own reward

    • @GeorgeOrwell-yz6zx
      @GeorgeOrwell-yz6zx 9 місяців тому +4

      I see what you did there. Great Black Ship reference 👌

  • @sdragut
    @sdragut 8 місяців тому +29

    I'm only 10% in and I'm impressed by this writer.Good story flow, cohesive & funny. i look forward to the balance of the story.

  • @davidcole2685
    @davidcole2685 9 місяців тому +21

    good story. keep it up and thank you for your hard work.

    • @IceFiction404
      @IceFiction404  9 місяців тому

      Thank You for Your Kind Words 🥰

  • @mundane2024
    @mundane2024 9 місяців тому +4

    really good story. today so tiring with so many hfy ai. This I love to hear

    • @jammer68
      @jammer68 7 місяців тому +1

      Th AI orator was ok but had a few mistakes that spelling out the full word could have corrected.

  • @davidforstner8833
    @davidforstner8833 9 місяців тому +7

    Awsome. A joy to hear.

  • @charleswidmore5458
    @charleswidmore5458 9 місяців тому +22

    I sense a great disturbance in the force.
    A new power rises to challenge the old and established ways.
    And, I must admit, I like it.

  • @alankohn6709
    @alankohn6709 10 днів тому +2

    Loved the story hope it one day gets the rendition it deservers, as this App read is subpar. I hope there will be a human read version but either way keep up the great work and I hope there is a squall

  • @leyphon7566
    @leyphon7566 4 місяці тому +3

    "Do we get a Gundam" and "Dude Predator" had me dying xD "Common ya'll we fucking practiced this for fucks sake" xD

  • @JTruong3rd
    @JTruong3rd 5 місяців тому +8

    A mans desire to ride giant machines is eternal.

  • @smaddogg
    @smaddogg 6 місяців тому +2

    This needs a longer series. I really like the setting.

  • @MIGBMWLOVER
    @MIGBMWLOVER 9 місяців тому +35

    I am dissapointed that we didn't built an army of iron men.

    • @michaeloxlong
      @michaeloxlong 8 місяців тому +4

      But...do we get Gundams?

    • @AndrooUK
      @AndrooUK 8 місяців тому +2

      ​@@michaeloxlongIt's ridiculous either way. 😅
      Fast, armoured and armed land vehicles, maybe with some spry exosuit to help soldiers move much more quickly and for longer without tiring, would be better. Aerial or long range missile/mass driver assaults, and drones, would be the deal of the day.
      But, hey. Simple people like their simple pleasures of shiny things, flashing lights, lens flares, explosions, and giant robots with swords. 🚨🗡️🤖

    • @baldbastardo
      @baldbastardo 8 місяців тому

      We have something better - Space Marines!

    • @neiabaraja8040
      @neiabaraja8040 7 місяців тому +2

      @@AndrooUK Gundams is kind of a deal breaker here...

    • @Kappa760
      @Kappa760 3 місяці тому

      😂

  • @ur1cat
    @ur1cat 28 днів тому

    Excellent story, I will enjoy listening to it again and look forward to any sequels.

  • @josephphillips7949
    @josephphillips7949 9 місяців тому +32

    Of course Earth birds can vomit, that is literally how they feed their young!

    • @Ingo-hw4qq
      @Ingo-hw4qq 8 місяців тому +5

      Vomit is from the stomach.
      Birds do not feed vomit.
      Birds feed from the throat.
      PS I am not a native English speaker. Hope you still get it.

    • @AndrooUK
      @AndrooUK 8 місяців тому +4

      ​@@Ingo-hw4qqWell, some birds (most don't) regurgitate, which is a voluntary behaviour (either initiated by the parent in response to a chick's demands, or the chick pecking at a special part of the beak in some species) that is less sudden and 'violent' than the vomiting reflex. It indeed brings food from the stomach, which may be partially digested intentionally, or just eaten to store it and keep other animals from snatching the food after the parent has found it and it on its way back, which may take it some time.
      However, it is indeed very similar to vomiting because of how both use the same kind of mechanisms and motions to bring food up, which birds also do in response to toxins, and whatnot.

    • @robinkelly1770
      @robinkelly1770 7 місяців тому

      Came here to say this

    • @williamthebadgerwilliams623
      @williamthebadgerwilliams623 6 місяців тому

      So I was trying to say something particular here about gaps in knowledge, where Sgt. white is a smart dude but doesn’t know much about birds, there were alot of jokes I thought would hit that didn’t in the end I guess.

    • @spriken
      @spriken 6 місяців тому +1

      @@AndrooUK Vultures will vomit in self-defense or if they've eaten too much and can't take off.

  • @Kappa760
    @Kappa760 9 місяців тому +7

    Good story

  • @kangdeplo5179
    @kangdeplo5179 9 місяців тому +3

    Good story . Thank you
    Much love for you ❤

  • @dawnrobinson2213
    @dawnrobinson2213 2 місяці тому +2

    Nice and fast paced. No repeating info again as if we didn't get it the first time. I did increase the speed a little.

  • @leafa95
    @leafa95 Місяць тому

    Awesome episode really enjoyed listening to it ❤

  • @toraxmalu
    @toraxmalu 9 місяців тому +8

    Thanks for reading out and mostly: Linking it to the original! So i can "give praise" to you as the narrator and the author. :D

    • @AndrooUK
      @AndrooUK 8 місяців тому +2

      Too many of these HFY and other TTS narrated scifi stories are just lifted, ad nauseum, and without proper titles or credits to the author.
      Well, Google only seems to care when it's a big company being shafted, because that might cost them money in a court... the little guys writing these niche stories are basically fucked, if they even realise their story has been used, as users don't have a mechanism to report known or suspected copyright infringement, the option is only given to the copyright holder himself.
      Although, that's not surprising. Google wants this UA-cam experience to be as milquetoast and braindead as possible. Automated comment deletion if the algorithm doesn't approve (happens regularly, refresh your comments after 30s and see if they're still there), turning the thumbs down buttons of videos and comments into paperweights, automated algorithms to show you identical content, permitting (and quietly encouraging, as long as us sheeple keep watching) clickbait titles, and more...

    • @jammer68
      @jammer68 7 місяців тому +1

      ​@@AndrooUK To be fair, most of these stories are taken from a Reddit board so are not copywriter. As for the rest, yeah, you can find several channels posting the same stories and most of them have clickbait titles. It's really rare for the channel to have either original material or decent oration. So far I have only found one channel with a Human orator and he posts basically the same stories. This, story itself, is much better than the normal ones you find for a lot of reasons. One of the top reason is some lowly commander isn't a ships captain, galactic Ambassador, fleet Commander and Marine special forces all in one.

  • @uHasioorr
    @uHasioorr 9 місяців тому +48

    So... did we get Gundams?

    • @MIGBMWLOVER
      @MIGBMWLOVER 9 місяців тому +1

      sort-off

    • @Davidofthelost
      @Davidofthelost 8 місяців тому +6

      More like Power Armor. But it’s a good stepping stone for Mechs then true Gundams.

    • @Rurne
      @Rurne 8 місяців тому +3

      More like SC Terran marines.

    • @apollyon23456
      @apollyon23456 7 місяців тому +1

      Pretty much 40k terminators

    • @Perurikun
      @Perurikun 7 місяців тому +4

      we can barely drive cars without running into shit! Gundams would be a disaster! 🤣🤣🤣

  • @benhall2307
    @benhall2307 7 місяців тому +2

    I'm 6 minutes in and I've laughed 3 times already. Good job.

  • @katesmiles4208
    @katesmiles4208 3 місяці тому

    Perfect length of audio for me. Thanks ❤

  • @311Bob
    @311Bob 8 місяців тому +10

    These stories are are fun when the computer's learn to pronounce abbreviation I won't miss so much from laughing. Trying to pronounce Sgt. Cracked me up. As a note with so many computer voices having each character with its own "voice" will make the story less confusing sometimes. Otherwise Subscribed!

  • @raifmcdude3573
    @raifmcdude3573 6 місяців тому +1

    Good story. Well done!

  • @axon1637
    @axon1637 9 місяців тому +2

    Cool story

  • @shadow7901
    @shadow7901 7 місяців тому +4

    Wasn't expecting to hear gundam.

  • @Han_Solo2426
    @Han_Solo2426 5 місяців тому +1

    12:30 82nd airborne(us airborne)101st airborne (screaming eagles us airborne) 588th night bomber regiment (night witches ww2 female night pilots) 1st commandos (unit of British commandos during ww2) jaeger (German elite infantry specializes in the wilderness)

  • @kevinu.k.7042
    @kevinu.k.7042 8 місяців тому +1

    Great story - Thank you.

  • @cambobaginds9274
    @cambobaginds9274 8 місяців тому +1

    Keep this puppy going. Have acoupls mind vacations and give us some more . Had fun.

  • @kevinafrank104
    @kevinafrank104 7 місяців тому +14

    I am happy that when they listed the units that were being sent, night witches were included. If you want to see a true life story worthy of HFY, look up this history on the night witches, and never, ever, underestimate a Russian womanwith a chip on her shoulder

    • @williamthebadgerwilliams623
      @williamthebadgerwilliams623 6 місяців тому +2

      I tried to include first deployment units from across the world, most of the ended up US because that’s what I know best. But the nightwitches were super badass and I’ll never forget about them.

  • @NoNo-fy3kr
    @NoNo-fy3kr 4 місяці тому +1

    This had me laughing .. Thanks ! Was really good

  • @drcovell
    @drcovell 8 місяців тому +2

    Now THAT was fun!

  • @ssfbob456
    @ssfbob456 4 місяці тому

    Human: "Do we get Gundams?"
    Alien: "That would be silly."
    Human: "Counterpoint; I can paint it red, wear a mask, and call myself Char."

  • @Wanaliuff
    @Wanaliuff 11 днів тому

    This is awesome

  • @georgehernandez4079
    @georgehernandez4079 4 місяці тому

    1:13:32 made me think of the Episode from courage cowardly dog. “ more macaroni.” 😂

  • @geraldcrisman7320
    @geraldcrisman7320 7 місяців тому +1

    Great story with far reaching side story's are possible only down side is it needs to be read correctly but I enjoyed it thank you.

  • @paulacornelison243
    @paulacornelison243 6 місяців тому

    This would make a good series.

  • @VSastrocompasss
    @VSastrocompasss 5 місяців тому +1

    Cool thing to listen. 👂🏻 I hope more future ship dymention talk and conduct talk. It would be cool construct race transport race. Evil brain monockary race. Space travel was cool in this one leaps of flare :D

  • @MandrakeDCR
    @MandrakeDCR 5 місяців тому

    Ok so... I never wanted some friggin' mac and cheese so bad before in my life. Gonna head to the store. Maybe grab a can of chili to mic it up. :)

    • @sparkeyjames
      @sparkeyjames 4 місяці тому

      So you're the reason the replicators will never work. I prefer my mac n cheese with seasoned (garlic, pepper, onion and a pinch of salt) browned ground beef stirred in or maple flavored browned breakfast sausage crumbles stirred in.

  • @cmtfarms9777
    @cmtfarms9777 6 місяців тому

    The predator reference was great.

  • @junehartley2770
    @junehartley2770 7 місяців тому +2

    Enjoyed this story thank you

  • @TerryLewis-c9j
    @TerryLewis-c9j 9 місяців тому +2

    Very cool way to fill time

  • @josephshuck6478
    @josephshuck6478 7 місяців тому +1

    I don't think an AI would annunciate humans as hoomans

  • @stonepvv
    @stonepvv 7 місяців тому +4

    This is much better than the rubbish stories containing the testament to and not go into the night and all such expressions that the "writer" uses. Seems that sort of writers all got lessons Frye same idiot. This story May have some faults but is utterly refreshing compared to the rubbish tried by others

  • @louisburland5346
    @louisburland5346 5 місяців тому

    Fun story ty

  • @harrygrimley4352
    @harrygrimley4352 8 місяців тому +61

    Good story. BUT.... The A I. Sucks. Way too many mistakes. Very distracting.

    • @TheDurid1
      @TheDurid1 7 місяців тому +14

      It's one of the better AI readers. Not nearly a bad as the one that kept saying 'green berries wreck-on unit' 😂
      It was trying to say Green beret recon unit.

    • @leighganschow5652
      @leighganschow5652 7 місяців тому +2

      AI readers have improved immensely over the last month. Depends a lot of the channel and what reader the channel owner is using.

    • @harrygrimley4352
      @harrygrimley4352 7 місяців тому +5

      @@leighganschow5652 agreed. But if no one comments they will think they are good

    • @harrygrimley4352
      @harrygrimley4352 7 місяців тому +3

      @@TheDurid1 that would suck.

    • @vanguard9067
      @vanguard9067 7 місяців тому +5

      The readers are one thing, it’s that many of these channels (not this story I believe) use AI to write the stories.

  • @alcarrillo
    @alcarrillo 7 місяців тому +1

    Compared to other sci fi on UA-cam, well done.
    Enunciation could be better, perhaps use an actual human reader/narrator, but overall, superior to most of the other stuff on UA-cam.

  • @snarflcat6187
    @snarflcat6187 7 місяців тому +3

    How Come None of your alpha or beta readers managed to tell you that the word ‘through’ actually has an “r’ in it?!?

    • @GnarledStaff
      @GnarledStaff 6 місяців тому

      Thats the job of an editor. Alpha and beta readers are generally used to check for major plot issues and pain points.

  • @theexchipmunk
    @theexchipmunk 6 місяців тому

    There always is small bits where you can instantly tell when people don´t know things about space. Like the distance mentioned early on. Thats twice the length of the entire diametre of the milkiway galaxy. It´s far into intergalactic space, but not even a 10th towards the Andromeda galaxy. So absolutely in the middle of nowhere.

  • @mikeh6876
    @mikeh6876 7 місяців тому +1

    What made the story readable and keeping my attention is that there was no pc/woke/dei/crl BS - no peace/friends/trade/etc. You told a very good story with a amusing twist. Thanks.....Appreciated..........

    • @williamthebadgerwilliams623
      @williamthebadgerwilliams623 6 місяців тому +1

      Hi I’m the author, I’ve seen a couple comments about this sentiment but yours seems the best one to respond to. There’s a ton of pc/woke/dei/crt stuff in this story, i just addressed it all in passing. And that seems to cause people to be more accepting of it.

    • @mikeh6876
      @mikeh6876 6 місяців тому

      @@williamthebadgerwilliams623 I think that most Americans have become underwhelmed with the leftist movement and ideologies, and, the push to turn America into a totalitarian state.

  • @Gracee40
    @Gracee40 7 місяців тому +3

    If the author writes something new I would advise not having this reader to the video. There were many errors in pronunciation of so many words. Sgt was pronounced in too many ways other than Sargent.

    • @williamthebadgerwilliams623
      @williamthebadgerwilliams623 6 місяців тому

      That’s fair, more than anything I kinda want people to hear the story though, so if another one gains traction I’ll let anyone who asks do it just like I did this one.

  • @Tony-ol4bt
    @Tony-ol4bt 8 місяців тому +1

    Tnx man

  • @AndrooUK
    @AndrooUK 8 місяців тому +5

    I just can't imagine such an enthusiastic response from the everyday people to join up to a space war, assuming this takes place in the not too distant future, especially as they would be even more docile, attached to their smartphones and streaming services, and groomed to be whiny, self-pitying blue-hairs reliant on the state for everything than todays populace...

    • @isaaclepischak812
      @isaaclepischak812 8 місяців тому

      ok boomer

    • @peenoice5176
      @peenoice5176 7 місяців тому +3

      Those are a minority, realistically just the idea of going into space would result in mass recruitment but not to the extent shown here

    • @macmcleod1188
      @macmcleod1188 7 місяців тому +1

      ​@isaaclepischak812 no, he insulted old people too. I would guess a gen-z.
      But there's definitely truth in his words despite the insults.

  • @stephenharriau1406
    @stephenharriau1406 6 місяців тому

    Funny. I’ll miss the nightmares that I come here to provoke.

  • @CR67
    @CR67 8 місяців тому +4

    I notice, in all these stories, the soy boys, Antifa types, and weasel uniparty politicians have been removed from the gene pool.

    • @AndrooUK
      @AndrooUK 8 місяців тому

      They're too busy back at home, wearing VR goggles and masturbating to furry tentacle gender bending images and videos, whilst self-🩸 because they are taught to hate themselves, have no personal agency, and to blame everything on society or a medical diagnosis or anyone else but themselves.
      The rest of the people are giddy to enter a space war, for some reason, and want to play out their Pacific Rim fantasies.

    • @yisus4681
      @yisus4681 7 місяців тому

      Of course they wouldn’t be here, they are a minority and when war breaks out those type of people basically go extinct.

    • @peenoice5176
      @peenoice5176 7 місяців тому +1

      Well those people would immediately become irrelevant under the threat of alien invasion.

    • @roringusanda2837
      @roringusanda2837 6 місяців тому

      ​@@peenoice5176😮they're already irrelevant, they just have the money to stay in power

  • @mikewest2657
    @mikewest2657 7 місяців тому +2

    I find it amusing how the AI says the same word differently each time. I guess we don't need to worry about terminators anytime soon. 😜😜😜😜😜😜

    • @randar1969
      @randar1969 2 місяці тому

      Then again each time you hear an A.I. spoken story , that version is the worst version you'll ever hear and new updates will only improve upon it. The technique is now an year or so old, what will it be in 25,50,100 years from now? Took humans a while to develop language. I have no doubt A.I. will be at our level much faster.

  • @GnarledStaff
    @GnarledStaff 6 місяців тому

    I’m not a fan of AI but nothing wrong with text to speech if used with author permission.

  • @stonereaper1157
    @stonereaper1157 9 місяців тому +6

    Don't mean to be rude but are you narrating this or A.I.

    • @Khalifrio
      @Khalifrio 9 місяців тому +10

      A.I. you can find the same voice used on several channels.

    • @AndrooUK
      @AndrooUK 8 місяців тому +3

      ​@@KhalifrioTTS (Text-to-speech) isn't the same as AI as people generally understand it.
      Calling everything computers do 'AI' just makes the term useless.

    • @Khalifrio
      @Khalifrio 8 місяців тому

      @@AndrooUK Just using the same term in the original question. Didn't feel like confusing stonereaper with the difference or spending the time to explain it. Besides I knew some one, who gets their jollies correcting everyone, would show up.

    • @Katharina-rp7iq
      @Katharina-rp7iq 8 місяців тому

      AI...as in prettygood text to speech.

    • @dankuchar6821
      @dankuchar6821 7 місяців тому +1

      AI is used to create better text to speech algorithms. So it's acceptable to call it AI, especially the lay person who doesn't understand the difference.

  • @chuckintexas
    @chuckintexas 6 місяців тому +2

    Fun, and well written .
    What people are blaming as A-I mistakes is really only poor proof reading .
    Go back and correct misspellings , and re-spell out certain words phonetically , especially those pronouncung numbers . Well done , tho - and a a good story 👍!

    • @williamthebadgerwilliams623
      @williamthebadgerwilliams623 6 місяців тому

      I put no proof reading into Reddit stories, and I’m glad someone on this thread understands that, several of them are just me being too lazy to reread with any effort before I hit post.

  • @DeadGod357
    @DeadGod357 7 місяців тому

    you had me at gundam

  • @GerberLP
    @GerberLP 4 місяці тому

    Ben, pls give one of your cars. It ll b ur first uncrashable investment. Cheers m8

  • @georgeolson3996
    @georgeolson3996 3 місяці тому +1

    You really need to 1,,, listen to that INCOMPETANT NARATION and correct it ,,, and ,,, READ THE WORD SCROOL TEXT FOR ERRORS . These spoil the experience😢😢😢

    • @rauladame2105
      @rauladame2105 3 місяці тому

      Thank you. This helped me to move along.

  • @Estranged180
    @Estranged180 7 місяців тому +5

    Please retrain your vocal AI. It keeps mispronouncing things, and it's quite jarring.

    • @coreyb5790
      @coreyb5790 6 місяців тому

      The terrible pronunciation is so exceptional in it's terribleness .... why doesn't UA-cam have a block/ignore channel feature? It desperately needs this.

  • @England-Bob
    @England-Bob 7 місяців тому +2

    Dude predator
    😂😂😂😂😂

  • @mauriman2210
    @mauriman2210 7 місяців тому

    It took 0:00: to 👉1:23 for a panel change_ 2nd & 3rd just as long_ this recap isn't for me👋bye

  • @scythewielder8955
    @scythewielder8955 3 місяці тому

    "Do we get gundams" HA

  • @killerjoker222
    @killerjoker222 8 місяців тому

    I wonder what people will think of our fanciful ideas of space travel and meeting aliens after/if we meet aliens will our ideas of glorious combat in space be seen as silly etc just curious what ysll think theyd think 🤔

    • @jammer68
      @jammer68 7 місяців тому

      It would depend as much on the aliens as anything. You could find aliens that are very docile and friendly or those that wouldn't even consider humans as sentient beings, just insects to be squashed. We could find our "warlike" nature to be considered very peaceful and gentle in comparison to what we find out in the vast expanse of space.

  • @akitothegeek
    @akitothegeek 8 місяців тому +1

    For the algorithm

  • @WormySpoons-q4s
    @WormySpoons-q4s 5 місяців тому +1

    Hmm funny people complaining about the ai narator but from what i can tell it being narated by ai is just the distarction needed to not realise this is terrible writing...
    Firstly its just a big info dump no characters no actions feelings or emotions..
    Secondly premise is ridiculous.. a non violent race of researchers who bash deformed babies on rocks still when ya got space ships... i mean i dunno maybe use some of that researching to figure out why the baby was deformed maybe fix that in the future??? An by the way humans did that shit too in the past when we were cavemen... but not today cause we did some frickin research...
    Thirdly... are humans warlike? Or is it a vestige of primal tribalism from when we were animals and had to defend territory or die? And if thats the case ask yourself is that not what would happen on other planets as species evolved from animals into intelligent species?
    But outside all that if your advanced race are researchers all they have to do is research war tactics its not rocket science unless somehow a space rollercoaster dood is gonna win an intergalactic war... honest to god... these idiots turned a space ship into a rollerciaster an let kids drive it they are gonna save our race.... ab all this in just 5 mins..
    Show dont tell

  • @Red-Raider
    @Red-Raider 7 місяців тому

    The AI always suck! I have never heard one that was 100%
    I prefer human narration

  • @audreymarshall3031
    @audreymarshall3031 9 місяців тому +2

    AI narrator. I like the story except when the narrator mispronounces words.

    • @macmcleod1188
      @macmcleod1188 7 місяців тому

      I kind of like the way it mispronounced chamber like ham brrrr.
      We should really spell it chaimber.

  • @rudiratlos6707
    @rudiratlos6707 8 місяців тому +1

    somehow ... at min 50 or so ... I couldn't follow the story anymore 🙄

  • @juanamcintosh4661
    @juanamcintosh4661 8 місяців тому

    😊

  • @MarcZachman
    @MarcZachman 9 місяців тому

    1

  • @RenzoP3
    @RenzoP3 7 місяців тому

    Why does the narrator sound like Chris Cuomo??

  • @d.j.langehennig6330
    @d.j.langehennig6330 6 місяців тому

    What on earth is a sarGGG-ent?

  • @merlebarney
    @merlebarney 6 місяців тому

    GRAMMAR DAMN IT! GRAMMAR! 🤦🏼🤦🏼🙄🙄

  • @davidhand9721
    @davidhand9721 7 місяців тому

    Booo, another AI channel where nobody even listens to the output to see if it got things right. If you want to hear sci-fi, HFY content _read by a real human_ with AI only used to make him sound like various characters, check out Adastra. He's nearing the end of Nature of Predators right now.

  • @UpperDarbyDetailing
    @UpperDarbyDetailing 6 місяців тому

    Awful TTS. Great story though

  • @OneCanisLupus
    @OneCanisLupus 8 місяців тому +1

    AI

  • @Wunderturd2
    @Wunderturd2 5 місяців тому

    Ditch the AI narrator and get a real person. AI narrator doesn't have the inflection, differentiation of character voice, variation of pacing and doesn't inspire emotional investment and immersion to the story.

  • @BrokenSoul79x
    @BrokenSoul79x 7 місяців тому +1

    GET REAL VOICE ACTORS. _AI SUCKS._

    • @jammer68
      @jammer68 7 місяців тому

      It's not AI. It's text to speech. There is no AI, just poorly designed Virtual Intelligence, called VI.

    • @macmcleod1188
      @macmcleod1188 7 місяців тому

      I'm so sorry that you can't switch to another video and UA-cam locks your device onto videos one at a time.
      Humans are expensive so your real options are this or nothing.

  • @claudiaadamson8056
    @claudiaadamson8056 12 днів тому

    Mispronunciation is so annoying.

  • @user-px2sn8pr5t
    @user-px2sn8pr5t 6 місяців тому

    esl ai

  • @frederickBays-bd5fz
    @frederickBays-bd5fz 7 місяців тому

    good story but u blow it when u used a poor AI to read it rather then hiring a human voice actor
    So u get a thumbs down for doing this bad thing

    • @williamthebadgerwilliams623
      @williamthebadgerwilliams623 6 місяців тому

      In defense of this channel, I made a ton of typos when writing the story and didn’t feel like proof reading.

    • @frederickBays-bd5fz
      @frederickBays-bd5fz 6 місяців тому

      @@williamthebadgerwilliams623 poor reasoning If u are going to do something do it right or dont bother b/c a wrong thing is still wrong
      And having an AI read is just dumb for they cant speak right yet and take away from the story with its mispronunciations
      So find someone who can read and do this right

  • @michaelhughes838
    @michaelhughes838 6 місяців тому

    More crappy computer narration

  • @alantaylor353
    @alantaylor353 6 місяців тому +1

    Please no more AI.!

  • @foxylady1048
    @foxylady1048 7 місяців тому

    And the language is disgusting. Can’t we leave out the F word for goodness sake’s, I was just starting to enjoy it, and now its just filthier than the beginning. Thumbs down for this one

    • @williamthebadgerwilliams623
      @williamthebadgerwilliams623 6 місяців тому +3

      Hey author here, I tried to keep things real from the soldier’s perspective to what I experienced in the army. I understand if that bothers you, but when I was enlisted the f word was common place, so no I can’t leave it out and be genuine.

    • @bryantaylor9909
      @bryantaylor9909 2 дні тому

      Enough already! If you don't like it don't listen. Nobody wants to hear your whining about how awful common speech is. Words only carry the power YOU assigned them. If people like you quit bitching about em normal folks would use them less.

  • @elliemcfadden5511
    @elliemcfadden5511 7 місяців тому +1

    Good story