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🕒 TIMESTAMPS
0:00 - Introduction
1:55 - why I wrote a mosaic essay and my story
10:35 - advice on writing the mosaic essay
15:48 - not forcing the metaphor
18:40 - ending
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[@rujhanzaynab4887]

this actually gave me so much more hope. college applications are so stressful, especially for international students and this just made me realise i dont HAVE TO portray myself as this overachiever if i dont want to portray myself that way

[@1manasj]

Wow. Seeing everyone's extended metaphors and single-foci essays, I was under the impression that this was the key to a great essay. This opened my eyes.

[@joanne3330]

to be fair this IS an extended metaphor (with the mosaic)

[@emmadonnelly7028]

Can she share her actual essay?

[@yiyiluan5959]

I wish i had watched this before application season

[@dee5168]

Thank you for introducing the one major I want in life right now. (even if it’s only available in the hardest college to get into)

[@angelinavezet]

I am literally a mosaic LMAO, but I wrote my essay based on how I can engage with different types of people. But this vid has changed my perspective bc I have more pieces of diverse stuff in my life

[@CollegeLead]

Love it!!!

[@giulianaayleenfernandez1610]

@@CollegeLead can we read her essay? can you ask her
please I really need it I feel like it would serve as inspiration

[@user-yw2tm8cb7e]

PLEASE SHARE THE ESSAY

[@ismaaeel8957]

This is SO helpful!! Thank you so much for this!

[@CollegeLead]

Of course! Kaylee is awesome 😊

[@user-ii6yq9jn1q]

Loved your video! Do you think it would be good though if she could share her ecs and stats with us just to get an idea of what helped out in her application. Thankyou!!

[@wishIKnewHowToLove]

AMAZING!!!

[@paulanavarro1457]

Amazing , thanks

[@singhinderjitsingh]

Can you please share this essay ?
The structure of the essay is very hard to understand. I was already trying to write something like this but finding so hard to tie it together. Looking for flow in the essay,

[@mariaclaramachadocorrea140]

I agree a hundred percent! The video is awesome, but without showing bits of the essay (like phrases), it becomes very hard to understand exactly how to do the things she advises on the video.

[@sabrinarahman6099]

Where Can I read the essay??

[@amalsani8871]

Can she read her essay to us?

[@ennaa2577]

it is all great but the absence of the essay itself cutts like of usability, unfortunately. cause her essay Acustek sounds interesting

[@damien_bfg7033]

How did she talk so much of nothing