The Lady's Maid's Bell, A Story by Edith Wharton

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  • @BenGreggSweden
    @BenGreggSweden 4 місяці тому +160

    Hmm… spoiler (if you haven’t seen it), but my take is that Mrs. Brympton and Mr. Ranford were having an affair. The ghost of Emma Saxon knows this, and is protective of them (as she probably had been while she was still alive), and is continuing to watch over and protect Mrs. Brymton from the other side. That is why she leads Miss Hartley down to Mrs. Brympton’s room several times, with the last time being so as to warn Mrs. Brymton when Mr. Brymton arrives very unexpectedly (after having led everyone to believe that he was far far away in the West Indies). Mr. Brymton sneaks in during the middle of the night, hoping to catch his wife in the act. However, Miss Hartley’s knocking on the Mrs. Brymton’s bedroom door gives Mr. Randord time to hide in the next room, and then escape-most likely by jumping out the window-but not without making noise, which Mr. Brymton hears before rushing to try and catch his “old friend” there. Yet he is thwarted by the ghost of Emma Saxon’s sudden appearance on the threshold. We are meant to understand that Mr. Ranford made his escape via the window by the fact that he is then seen walking with a limp, with Mr. Brymton scowling at him throughout the funeral because he has guessed that as well. However, having failed to catch Ranford in the act, he has no recourse but to keep his place as a gentleman. Mrs. Brymton (who we have been made to understand was very sickly and weak) clearly dies from the shock of having nearly been caught out by her husband in the arms of Mr. Ranford (which surely would have happened if she had not been warned). But her dying is not a bad thing. We understand that it was inevitable, due to her long illness, yet at least she is allowed to die with her honor kept intact, while also knowing that her dear friend Emma is waiting for her on the other side.

    • @jennyb9641
      @jennyb9641 4 місяці тому +42

      @BenGreggSweden, thanks for this great explanation!

    • @Shemir.123
      @Shemir.123 4 місяці тому +24

      Thanks now I can get what was happening there 😂🌹

    • @lillykay1037
      @lillykay1037 4 місяці тому +8

      My thoughts exactly.

    • @vivienhowe5028
      @vivienhowe5028 4 місяці тому +14

      I totally agree with your synopsis

    • @LovelyDirtBike-gn4ti
      @LovelyDirtBike-gn4ti 4 місяці тому +23

      A good story doesn't leave people trying to sort through what happened or what events might have meant. Neither should it need an explanation. So glad someone wrote one, though, or else i wouldn't have understood the ghost's involvement at all

  • @suedenick8287
    @suedenick8287 4 місяці тому +48

    I don’t know who the narrator is but she is just fabulous! I love how her voice adds such a calmness to the narrative.

    • @magsrankin6166
      @magsrankin6166 4 місяці тому +7

      She's a machine, - as is evident by the wrongly-placed sentence stress on any number of occasions. Didn't want to burst your bubble 💕, and genuinely glad you enjoyed it. Her phonology is, for the most part, consistent 😊.

    • @elainewhite870
      @elainewhite870 3 місяці тому +5

      Very frustrating listening to a story when the narrator (AI, obviously) is monologuing and not emphasising the words at the right place.

    • @anniella29
      @anniella29 3 місяці тому

      ​@@elainewhite870yes, I came here to say this too. AI narration is getting better, but it is as if a human was reading the words with absolutely no idea of the sense of the story. You have to constantly re-translate it in your head to correct it. I don't understand why so many stories these days are narrated by AI. There are enough humans about who could do it surely?

    • @feliciagaffney1998
      @feliciagaffney1998 7 днів тому

      ​@@elainewhite870 yes. Extremely bizarre and annoying intonations for Mr Brympton's speech.

  • @Ana84262
    @Ana84262 4 місяці тому +66

    Thanks, I need this instead of politics, thanks. Lovely history

  • @annetteholtzhausen809
    @annetteholtzhausen809 5 місяців тому +108

    The ending is as if the author just grew tired of the story.

    • @ironbutterfly6835
      @ironbutterfly6835 4 місяці тому +5

      I think the ending is perfect. Its written in old style of classes and heredity homes. It is her style of writing and she very door author. The narration is perfect. I enjoyed very much

    • @ludovica8221
      @ludovica8221 4 місяці тому +2

      @@ironbutterfly6835 dour?

    • @tasseyko7654
      @tasseyko7654 4 місяці тому +1

      Lol yea I know right?

    • @SophieBird07
      @SophieBird07 3 місяці тому +4

      Lol I’m reminded of a story my then little daughter told me when she was about 5 yrs old. It was a nice little story as I recall, but suddenly she couldn’t think of any more to add to it, and so closed with: “so she drank poison and died”!

    • @slkjaklmk
      @slkjaklmk 3 місяці тому +1

      If I had known the author was going to just stop writing I wouldn’t have bothered to listen to a partial story

  • @laraoneal7284
    @laraoneal7284 4 місяці тому +12

    Ty for these narratives. I love observing how ppl lived back in simpler times. It is somewhat relaxing and makes sense of lives move in the way it’s just supposed to go whether happy or sad.

  • @rebeccacarlson9166
    @rebeccacarlson9166 4 місяці тому +18

    I beliieve that most great short stories do not have a "ending" that satifies modern day readers. They arent happily ever after, just as life is not happily ever after ...
    I believe the point is to give the reader something to ponder long after the story has finished. I took English lit in college but am terrible at understanding literary references (or maybe I'm just too lazy to figure them out?) Anyhow, there are some short stories I will never forget.

    • @ellie698
      @ellie698 3 місяці тому +2

      All the more reason to either read the actual text so that you can stop and reflect as needed. Or have the stories read by someone who actually understands the words and where pauses and emphases are needed. Not a robot as in this case 😵‍💫🤔😕

  • @marymortimer5037
    @marymortimer5037 4 місяці тому +13

    A story leaving a lot to one's own imagination! Also I prefer the notation of Chapter 1 , chapter 2 etc to just the numbers. But the narrator had a clear speaking voice, pleasant to listen to. Thank you

  • @brynapizzo
    @brynapizzo 4 місяці тому +9

    Thank you for bringing Wharton back to mind. I haven't read any of her works since grad school, oddly enough because I enjoyed them. It is a pity that her work is not appreciated by some who visited the site. I, however, will remain a subscriber because I love literature. ❤

  • @LilouViviKiani
    @LilouViviKiani 5 місяців тому +24

    Wonderful story❤. Love Edith Wharton.

    • @DeborahMcgee-t8c
      @DeborahMcgee-t8c 4 місяці тому +1

      Can you
      Explain it then, please thanks in advance👍

    • @LilouViviKiani
      @LilouViviKiani 4 місяці тому

      @@DeborahMcgee-t8c with pleasure ❤️. I also subscribe to Tony Walker’s podcast because after he reads the story, he gives the listener a lot of historical and cultural context, as well as background information on the author that might have influenced the themes and characters in their story.
      1 . Edith Wharton is known for being vague but the readers of her time -1902 would’ve read between the lines and identified the real horror of this story :
      A. Marital abuse- the husband was a predator. He possibly could’ve killed the former lady’s maid, preyed on pretty servants. Remember, that the current maid was warned to keep out of his way and the physical effects of her I’ll was protected her from abuse.
      B. The wife was having some type of affair with the neighbor (emotional/ physical)
      C. The ghost of the former lady’s maid wanted to rectify a wrong. She was the facilitator of an affair between her mistress and neighbor. Wanted to protect the mistress and tell her secret to the current one. The bell is probably a reminder of past trauma (abortion/ abuse). All the household knows and that’s why it was not rung.
      D. The wife’s weakened state could be due to ongoing abuse, marital rape, and perhaps an abortion that took place ( abortion also facility aged by former lady’s maid- remember, the trip to the chemist)
      E. Ghost lead present housemaid to burial site of baby (under the tree of the neighbor). I read that ghost appearing at a site is a tool that refers to something/ someone buried
      F. On the last night the wife and lover were to meet, the bell rung because the present lady’s maid is called to help her mistress. The ghost appears to protect lover/ mistress and give him a chance to escape by appearing to husband.
      G. Lover shows up to church with a cane- probably jumped out the window from the dressing room, on the night the lady died.

    • @LilouViviKiani
      @LilouViviKiani 4 місяці тому +2

      @@DeborahMcgee-t8c this is just one of many explanations. I’m sure there’s more digging to do. That’s the fun of it 😄.

  • @shadowlouise
    @shadowlouise 4 місяці тому +40

    It's an engaging mystery, but if you're the sort that wants answers, this one is NOT for you.

  • @Sassafras30
    @Sassafras30 4 місяці тому +15

    Great story and contrary to what some thought, the ending was perfect.

    • @shadowlouise
      @shadowlouise 4 місяці тому +8

      Only if you like unsolved mysteries. I felt disappointed. I followed the ghost, only to be left with NO answers.

    • @frederickacharles552
      @frederickacharles552 4 місяці тому +2

      How? Please explain.

  • @gjones7547
    @gjones7547 2 місяці тому +3

    The picture of the large house looks exactly like a house I stayed at in Colwyn Bay, North Wales. My fiancee and I were staying at the house for a couple of nights. The second night the ghost of a lady dressed in old Victorian attire, whilst rocking in a rocking chair. Made us both jump out of bed and run out of the room.
    Next morning the landlady said. "Oh, don't worry about old Gwen she normally comes from time to time to check out our guests." 😮

  • @joeylee2891
    @joeylee2891 4 місяці тому +13

    She won the Pulitzer for The Age of Innocence. Was very well loved in her time. Nicknamed Pussy Jones growing up (did I just type that??) Divorced. Included with great American literature. But no one mentioned this short story. Maybe not one of her most notable.

  • @phyllislovelace8151
    @phyllislovelace8151 4 місяці тому +15

    Thank you for this although for some reason youtube won't let me give you a thumbs up

  • @BlueButterfly-wk9dl
    @BlueButterfly-wk9dl 5 місяців тому +16

    Thank you so very much for this beautifully told story

  • @feralbluee
    @feralbluee Місяць тому

    . . . And. . .???!!
    The reader was totally grand - nuanced, calm, real, and you can’t stop listening to her. :) 🥀💙🌷🌱

  • @FairyTaleRetreat
    @FairyTaleRetreat 4 місяці тому +6

    Thank you so much for your channel. You have brought peace into a troubled life

  • @JudeNance
    @JudeNance 5 місяців тому +7

    Dignity, lovely story ❤️

  • @sheilahay3370
    @sheilahay3370 5 місяців тому +150

    It was a lovely story but a crap ending

  • @emcarver8983
    @emcarver8983 5 місяців тому +34

    This is incomplete!!

    • @neuralsurfer
      @neuralsurfer  5 місяців тому +10

      That is the whole story as written Edith Wharton

  • @beenamenon6749
    @beenamenon6749 4 місяці тому +1

    Loved the narrator's low, mellifluous voice, lovely clear diction ❤

    • @mares3841
      @mares3841 3 місяці тому

      1.25 x speed works well.

  • @judywalton2658
    @judywalton2658 5 місяців тому +9

    Lovely

  • @phyllislovelace8151
    @phyllislovelace8151 4 місяці тому +2

    Lovely! Thank you

  • @franceswitham8214
    @franceswitham8214 3 місяці тому

    Thank you for a lovely story.

  • @HestiaBHN1
    @HestiaBHN1 4 місяці тому +5

    About half way through I began to feel that tge story had gone on long enough. She had layed fown much foreshadowing. Now I wanted a conclusion.
    But she went on, and on...and on.... Endless foreshadowing of...what? Nothing. No satisfying resolution.

  • @mariajanejuarez5626
    @mariajanejuarez5626 5 місяців тому +22

    I can't understand hahahah where's the ending?

  • @leahwalker7852
    @leahwalker7852 5 місяців тому +17

    The ending didn’t make sense …..

  • @irmagarcia7826
    @irmagarcia7826 4 місяці тому +2

    I have heard enough stories, I would like to watch Agatha Christie, Miss Marple, but not available on UA-cam anymore! 😫

  • @lightningbug276
    @lightningbug276 5 місяців тому +31

    I don’t get it.

    • @roden70
      @roden70 4 місяці тому +3

      Neither do I.

    • @bonniephelps9481
      @bonniephelps9481 4 місяці тому +2

      Weird

    • @joeylee2891
      @joeylee2891 4 місяці тому +2

      Í don't get half of what I read. 😅

    • @joeylee2891
      @joeylee2891 4 місяці тому +2

      I don't get half of what I read 😅😅

    • @Aussiedreamer-pz5uw
      @Aussiedreamer-pz5uw 4 місяці тому +5

      @BenGreggSweden
      1 day ago
      Hmm… spoiler (if you haven’t seen it), but my take is that Mrs. Brympton and Mr. Ranford were having an affair. The ghost of Emma Saxon knows this, and is protective of them (as she probably had been while she was still alive), and is continuing to watch over and protect Mrs. Brymton from the other side. That is why she leads Miss Hartley down to Mrs. Brympton’s room several times, with the last time being so as to warn Mrs. Brymton when Mr. Brymton arrives very unexpectedly (after having led everyone to believe that he was far far away in the West Indies). Mr. Brymton sneaks in during the middle of the night, hoping to catch his wife in the act. However, Miss Hartley’s knocking on the Mrs. Brymton’s bedroom door gives Mr. Randord time to hide in the next room, and then escape-most likely by jumping out the window-but not without making noise, which Mr. Brymton hears before rushing to try and catch his “old friend” there. Yet he is thwarted by the ghost of Emma Saxon’s sudden appearance on the threshold. We are meant to understand that Mr. Ranford made his escape via the window by the fact that he is then seen walking with a limp, with Mr. Brymton scowling at him throughout the funeral because he has guessed that as well. However, having failed to catch Ranford in the act, he has no recourse but to keep his place as a gentleman. Mrs. Brymton (who we have been made to understand was very sickly and weak) clearly dies from the shock of having nearly been caught out by her husband in the arms of Mr. Ranford (which surely would have happened if she had not been warned). But her dying is not a bad thing. We understand that it was inevitable, due to her long illness, yet at least she is allowed to die with her honor kept intact, while also knowing that her dear friend Emma is waiting for her on the other side.

  • @lindamarshall-wc4yt
    @lindamarshall-wc4yt 3 місяці тому

    Authors would often adapt a short story or novella into a full length novel. Especially if there was a demand for it, either from her readers or a publisher.

  • @sunflowerz54
    @sunflowerz54 3 місяці тому

    Bravo. Well done

  • @marefisher6462
    @marefisher6462 Місяць тому

    Well... I'm stumped. There must be more. The tone of the narrators voice with her last words sounded as though she wasn't finished..

  • @VickiPeters-b7r
    @VickiPeters-b7r 4 місяці тому +6

    The ending was so abrupt its annoying, but what else is there to say? That the cranky gasbag Mr.Brympton would continue to periodically show up and drunkenly menace the staff? Not the kind of storyline people are going to stick around for.

  • @maryseyfried7152
    @maryseyfried7152 3 місяці тому +1

    Thought my phone died !

  • @ellie698
    @ellie698 3 місяці тому

    Chapter 1. 00:17
    Chapter 2. 12:26
    Chapter 3. 27:59
    Chapter 4. 34:34

  • @Lorena-qn3rg
    @Lorena-qn3rg 4 місяці тому +5

    Hmmm, what is everyones thoughts on what this was about. Was there an affair? Was the dead maid keeping an eye on her mistress? Not sure why though, the hubby had no interest in her. What was the story really about?

    • @sugarfalls1
      @sugarfalls1 4 місяці тому +5

      I'm wondering the same thing. Maybe there's a synopsis of the story on wikipedia or something. There's another story you might want to listen to called The Bunner Sisters by her that's really good and full of symbolism. I couldn't find a synopsis of this short story. The Bunner Sisters was read by someone from LibraVox who read stories as volunteers. I've never done so, but the story was really good. It should still be on youtube - that's where I found it.

    • @Lorena-qn3rg
      @Lorena-qn3rg 4 місяці тому +2

      @sugarfalls1 Thanks for the tip, I'll go look for it now, I need something to fall to sleep to lol 😆

    • @HestiaBHN1
      @HestiaBHN1 4 місяці тому +3

      I suppose that Ranford WAS her lover. And that the husband had raped Anna the former maid, who had, whereupon, committed suicide.
      His lechery towards subsequent maids caused them to leave suddenly...as did the ghostly appearances.
      The wife dying, upon hearing, once again that the maids bell had rung, when she had not rung it, tipped her over the edge.
      Thats plausible, I guess, as we were told early on her paleness was likely due to a heart condition.
      But I still find the story inconclusive and dissatisfying.

    • @Evyenne
      @Evyenne 4 місяці тому +4

      Here is what I think. The neighbor was, if not a lover, at least a confidant. Emma was the lady’s faithful maid and friend for years. The husband was only passing through to likely rape his ailing wife, treating her cruelly, drunk and raging, only to leave again the next day. When the lady finally could take no more, she rang the bell for Emma in one of these moments, and the husband killed Emma when she intervened. Emma’s ghost stayed to continue to watch over her lady. The bell was no longer rung because it brought back to mind Emma’s death, and the ringing of the bell had likely prompted that.
      All this being said, why was Emma’s room kept locked? And I agree, the ending wasn’t satisfying, leaving too much to guess at.

    • @Lorena-qn3rg
      @Lorena-qn3rg 4 місяці тому

      @HestiaBHN1 Yes between you and other comments the story is definitely between these lines.

  • @emcarver8983
    @emcarver8983 5 місяців тому +10

    This is only the ending of chapter 4. The story is incomplete.

    • @neuralsurfer
      @neuralsurfer  5 місяців тому +2

      That is the whole story as written by Edith Wharton

    • @Aussiedreamer-pz5uw
      @Aussiedreamer-pz5uw 4 місяці тому +1

      Copied this comment @BenGreggSweden
      1 day ago
      Hmm… spoiler (if you haven’t seen it), but my take is that Mrs. Brympton and Mr. Ranford were having an affair. The ghost of Emma Saxon knows this, and is protective of them (as she probably had been while she was still alive), and is continuing to watch over and protect Mrs. Brymton from the other side. That is why she leads Miss Hartley down to Mrs. Brympton’s room several times, with the last time being so as to warn Mrs. Brymton when Mr. Brymton arrives very unexpectedly (after having led everyone to believe that he was far far away in the West Indies). Mr. Brymton sneaks in during the middle of the night, hoping to catch his wife in the act. However, Miss Hartley’s knocking on the Mrs. Brymton’s bedroom door gives Mr. Randord time to hide in the next room, and then escape-most likely by jumping out the window-but not without making noise, which Mr. Brymton hears before rushing to try and catch his “old friend” there. Yet he is thwarted by the ghost of Emma Saxon’s sudden appearance on the threshold. We are meant to understand that Mr. Ranford made his escape via the window by the fact that he is then seen walking with a limp, with Mr. Brymton scowling at him throughout the funeral because he has guessed that as well. However, having failed to catch Ranford in the act, he has no recourse but to keep his place as a gentleman. Mrs. Brymton (who we have been made to understand was very sickly and weak) clearly dies from the shock of having nearly been caught out by her husband in the arms of Mr. Ranford (which surely would have happened if she had not been warned). But her dying is not a bad thing. We understand that it was inevitable, due to her long illness, yet at least she is allowed to die with her honor kept intact, while also knowing that her dear friend Emma is waiting for her on the other side.

  • @robinyurrita7609
    @robinyurrita7609 4 місяці тому +16

    Not that ending was crap. THERE WAS NO ENDING. Very unsatisfactory .. but excellent reader.

    • @opheliahamlet3508
      @opheliahamlet3508 4 місяці тому +2

      I got suckered in again. Listen closely, it's an AI generated narration. Puts a good voice actor out of work.
      It took me a couple of listens before I realized that this youtuber uses AI. Absolutely ruined Somerset Maugham for me. I unsubscribed

    • @janetmackinnon3411
      @janetmackinnon3411 4 місяці тому +4

      @@opheliahamlet3508 That would explain the often misplaced emphasis. Distracting, breaks the atmosphere..

    • @Aussiedreamer-pz5uw
      @Aussiedreamer-pz5uw 4 місяці тому +1

      Copy and pasted @BenGreggSweden
      1 day ago
      Hmm… spoiler (if you haven’t seen it), but my take is that Mrs. Brympton and Mr. Ranford were having an affair. The ghost of Emma Saxon knows this, and is protective of them (as she probably had been while she was still alive), and is continuing to watch over and protect Mrs. Brymton from the other side. That is why she leads Miss Hartley down to Mrs. Brympton’s room several times, with the last time being so as to warn Mrs. Brymton when Mr. Brymton arrives very unexpectedly (after having led everyone to believe that he was far far away in the West Indies). Mr. Brymton sneaks in during the middle of the night, hoping to catch his wife in the act. However, Miss Hartley’s knocking on the Mrs. Brymton’s bedroom door gives Mr. Randord time to hide in the next room, and then escape-most likely by jumping out the window-but not without making noise, which Mr. Brymton hears before rushing to try and catch his “old friend” there. Yet he is thwarted by the ghost of Emma Saxon’s sudden appearance on the threshold. We are meant to understand that Mr. Ranford made his escape via the window by the fact that he is then seen walking with a limp, with Mr. Brymton scowling at him throughout the funeral because he has guessed that as well. However, having failed to catch Ranford in the act, he has no recourse but to keep his place as a gentleman. Mrs. Brymton (who we have been made to understand was very sickly and weak) clearly dies from the shock of having nearly been caught out by her husband in the arms of Mr. Ranford (which surely would have happened if she had not been warned). But her dying is not a bad thing. We understand that it was inevitable, due to her long illness, yet at least she is allowed to die with her honor kept intact, while also knowing that her dear friend Emma is waiting for her on the other side.

    • @magsrankin6166
      @magsrankin6166 4 місяці тому

      😂👍

  • @annfoster465
    @annfoster465 4 місяці тому

    Is this the first part of this story, is there a second part? Beautifully read.

  • @jammiesimb311
    @jammiesimb311 2 місяці тому

    Listening to this, but when it ended, I was still waiting. I don’t get the whole thing. One made was a ghost I think but that’s it. Nothing else scary in the whole thing.

  • @fionaparr4768
    @fionaparr4768 3 місяці тому

    I really enjoyed it but I was waiting for the end. There no conclusion to the story or an explanation.

  • @christopherrussell2611
    @christopherrussell2611 Місяць тому

    Odd, unfulfilling. A story requiring a conclusion, me thinks.
    JaneR

  • @SaltyMinorcan
    @SaltyMinorcan 4 місяці тому +1

    So I guess the husband killed the Old Maid

  • @MsMak12356
    @MsMak12356 4 місяці тому +1

    Great story, but what a disappointing ending. I mean, what happened to everyone?

  • @CarolStJohn-ev9ry
    @CarolStJohn-ev9ry 4 місяці тому +1

    After all that detail in the story and then it quietly fades away with no explanation for anything.

  • @jeanettediss6640
    @jeanettediss6640 4 місяці тому

    Was waiting for the conclusion. What on earthhadbeen going on with the 3 persons involved and what had happened to the previous maid. Very disappointing

  • @dinkyloves40
    @dinkyloves40 2 місяці тому

    I don't think this book is finished. Are you sure you read it all

  • @marialandman6695
    @marialandman6695 4 місяці тому

    You should write a book......😅

  • @nicwes88
    @nicwes88 3 місяці тому

    Excellent story!!!

  • @veridianacarvalho9209
    @veridianacarvalho9209 Місяць тому

    There is no ending and that was very cruel

  • @janehollinshead2979
    @janehollinshead2979 3 місяці тому

    one word ........ syntax

  • @streetsmartlaw
    @streetsmartlaw 4 місяці тому

    Mrs. Brimpton was not the angel that she was portrayed to be.

  • @jane-bethc6790
    @jane-bethc6790 3 місяці тому

    WT ACTUAL F. Ends so very abruptly…

  • @barbaratownsend9528
    @barbaratownsend9528 4 місяці тому

    What a poor ending to a fine story!

  • @angeladennis2879
    @angeladennis2879 4 місяці тому

    Is there a part 2 to this?

  • @mathewalex1624
    @mathewalex1624 3 місяці тому

    Quite unsatisfactory ending.

  • @Melynnest
    @Melynnest 3 місяці тому

    What was with the abrupt ending?

  • @brendastorm1111
    @brendastorm1111 4 місяці тому

    What! That's it? Come on that can't be the end,

  • @So-Be-It_890
    @So-Be-It_890 4 місяці тому

    Edith Wharton

  • @heidiflintoff1105
    @heidiflintoff1105 4 місяці тому

    Won't listen because of the comments...😢

  • @pattyHK
    @pattyHK 4 місяці тому

    Does it end? Shouldn't Brimpton have been blessed with a mighty ailment?

  • @haubenmeisewillow-tit331
    @haubenmeisewillow-tit331 4 місяці тому

    Ah.... what???
    Are we supposed to imagin what happend ourselfes?

  • @karencook8293
    @karencook8293 4 місяці тому

    Poor ending, or is there a sequel?

  • @redwawst3258
    @redwawst3258 4 місяці тому

  • @ADamerau
    @ADamerau 3 місяці тому

    GOOD Grand & Wonderfully Happy Morning, Our Friends....Best Wishes For Each if You To Enjoy Great Day!!! Here's A Short Story, By Edith Wharton...Warning, However, Msny Hsvr Found The Ending. On This Story to Ve Simewhar of a Bumner...See Whar Yiu Thin???❤

  • @dinkyloves40
    @dinkyloves40 2 місяці тому

    What did it matter that he leaned on a stick?

  • @suzieroberts2203
    @suzieroberts2203 3 місяці тому

    Very disappointing now, as a writer myself.I have to come up with an ending to this story.In my mind as I go to bed which will be very shortlate😂😂😂

  • @onemenia
    @onemenia 4 місяці тому

    Where is the ending??!!😕

  • @Guest-mq9de
    @Guest-mq9de 4 місяці тому

    Okay, that's it, won't be listening to this channel again.

  • @marshadean1321
    @marshadean1321 2 місяці тому

    It didn't end right

  • @natgarrison2300
    @natgarrison2300 3 місяці тому

    Ending 😮???

  • @philomena3529
    @philomena3529 4 місяці тому +2

    Is it being read by AI

    • @AnitaOHara-q8l
      @AnitaOHara-q8l 4 місяці тому +2

      Yes, sure it is AI as the emphasis in the phrasing is not correct and not how it would be read by a real person telling a story.

    • @ludovica8221
      @ludovica8221 4 місяці тому

      @@AnitaOHara-q8l The phrasing and pronunciation is absolutely perfect and expressive for British English. I would guess this is a professional actress, with a voice similar to Jan Francis. Nothing like AI

    • @ludovica8221
      @ludovica8221 4 місяці тому

      No

  • @susangregory2556
    @susangregory2556 4 місяці тому

    Is that it

  • @beckygleasman408
    @beckygleasman408 4 місяці тому

    Hmmm. 🤔
    At least I enjoyed the text, the Grammer.
    Not so much the story.

  • @SarahWRah
    @SarahWRah 9 днів тому

    I guess I'm dense, but this felt like a non-story to me.

  • @GraceHawley-p7k
    @GraceHawley-p7k 2 місяці тому

    Could have been good but the ending left many loose ends. Don't waste your time on this

  • @sandistuddert6207
    @sandistuddert6207 2 місяці тому

    Ok so this is what Trump means when he says…. “We have it all”

  • @sewwhat244
    @sewwhat244 Місяць тому

    That's it? A very disappointing story, though the narration was good

  • @marianne6876
    @marianne6876 3 місяці тому

    There seems to be no point to this story. Lots of possibilities as to the meaning of the story but a good imagination can make up almost any ending. Rather disappointing.

  • @mauricesavel5110
    @mauricesavel5110 5 місяців тому +2

    I listened twice, don't get it?

  • @debharshaw1882
    @debharshaw1882 4 місяці тому

    What happened to characters? The ending kind of suck's? Good story up to closer of story!!!

  • @Whoisager
    @Whoisager 4 місяці тому

    What???

  • @neliaferreira9983
    @neliaferreira9983 2 місяці тому

    Sounds like AI read this story, the intonation was repetitive.

  • @MarilynMayer-cd5qk
    @MarilynMayer-cd5qk 4 місяці тому

    It appeatd to ju

  • @shirleymurphy1958
    @shirleymurphy1958 3 місяці тому

    Sound like someone jumped from the window before the man of the house came into the room of the mistress. Her maid had saved her from seeing her lover killed and as he escape thru the window but the fright killed her.

  • @carollynnberwindscheffler398
    @carollynnberwindscheffler398 4 місяці тому

    _rim comments I won't watch

  • @jacquelinedeacon8119
    @jacquelinedeacon8119 4 місяці тому +1

    What happened?

    • @shadowlouise
      @shadowlouise 4 місяці тому

      Nothing. It was all for nothing.

  • @tonyawedgeworth514
    @tonyawedgeworth514 4 місяці тому +4

    Well crap.

  • @Storytime-ODAY
    @Storytime-ODAY 14 днів тому

    H

  • @laurabrown566
    @laurabrown566 3 місяці тому

    There's no second part....?

  • @robinyurrita7609
    @robinyurrita7609 4 місяці тому +2

    I unsuscribed and will avoid nueralsurfer from now on.

  • @MeShee666
    @MeShee666 4 місяці тому

    Anyone know where I can find the rest of this story?

  • @suzearl
    @suzearl 4 місяці тому

    What happened?