A little boy, Smiling in joy. His genius mind, Was very king. Sometimes naughty, sometimes annoying, But he was very enjoying. He couldn’t do his ABC's, But he could talk and type faster than a bee. Very clever and self caring, Something people were dearing. Diagnosed with multiple diseases, He didn’t care about them like cold breezes. Books, something he could find, Ready to expand his genius mind. Laughing, crying and living his life in joy, This is the story of a legendary boy.
If my love was a sunset It would include the moon Vast, bright and colourful To which I look forward after noon A blossom in the summer time A bumble bee on a beautiful flower A warm gentle breeze of hugs Of a never ending hour The soft reassuring forehead kisses In wake of the night turned blue In my mind you are eternity In my heart there's only you
This is one of my first tries at a poem idk how I feel about it but I thought I would put it on here to see what people think Her head overflowed It wanted to explode she kept crying out But she was in a a drought Slowly dieing,she pleaded out to me But sadly I could not see She explained it in every way she could But she was just misunderstood She told them she was trying to stay awake But they thought she was a mistake Every way she looked It had her hooked They thought it was the winter blues But it was all the mental abuse They said it was an excuse But what about the bruise It wasn’t physical But it was critical She prayed to god Hoping it wouldn’t be fraud The longer she waited The more she was hated Broken in pieces The pain increases
I did it 😭 "Her dazzling smile and cute eyes Backed up a million Lies, Which I heard many time Felt like I was tasting a lime, I thought you were mine Deep down I was just dying"
Her blonde hair flows through the breeze Being with her makes me feel like I'm on a trapeze My heart gives a flutter as she looks my way Her presence lights up my entire day
"Her blonde hair flows through the breeze, being with her feels like I'm on a trapeze" would you mind if I use this for my school project, it is so pleasing to my ear
Let's be clear here I've always had this fear. I will never blame you For this is nothing new. You whispered me sweet words A small break from this dying world. Yet I would never let them stay seated Fully knowing they've been repeated.
You have a thing for poetry - keep going. This is only thing a could write : Your beautiful smile and dazzling eyes Left me with nothing but ugly lies If only I knew the truth I would not have wasted my youth.
The peaceful sounds and smells of the colorful leaves, make everyone want to wear long sleeves, the chilly air preparing for winter, fall will leave, and snow will come.
The sun rays glistened, The world heard and listened To the chirping. With cold wind blowing, The air's still crisp; And you caught a glimpse. As the planet of love smiles To you who cries. This is from me who woke up early to finish my assignments and gave up, cried and looked outside my window (English's not my first language so i apologize for the mistakes:)
First time writing a poem You caught my eye. As of a burglar with jewelry. Not with your crow-colored hair. Or with eyes that shimmer, Even in the night. But with your giving soul, And your heart so full of life. But until the seas dries out, When the sun will cease To share its light. When we can count every star, In the dark blue sky. Or when we meet our end. Only then I will confess, With a highly-strung heart. That you are my inspiration The definition of pure bliss The person who ive longed And my true love Feel free to interpret
*My mother* She loved me through my thick, And she loved me through my thin She showered me in love And hugged me tight in my low She cared for me even when i hurt her And taught me to be braver She taught me how to dress, And even how to brush She taught me how to solve when i mess up, And taught me how to speak up She was with me in my first's, And i hope she will be with me in my lasts It's my 1st poem, i tried my best! I did use many reference lines and i know it's cheating😅
Being with friends was such a charm. They didn't allow on me any harms. But due to the distance we parted our ways. But those memories will last a lifetime my heart says.
It’s intuition and creativeness Gives me motive and intellect Drawing feels like being alone in a room With nothing left but my thoughts A burning passion in my heart Filled with nothing but Art Bringing me joy where I go
Time does pass us by very fast, Only a moment's pause,dawn is dust But the moments we had will surely last, Till the day these bones are dust. Now it's here and i can't believe That time has passed so quickly... But through your encouragement and guidance I feel I'm ready for tomorrow's challenges Days can go on incessantly And we've made such,the days which can't be forgotten. The lessons you taught were worthwhile Would last a lifetime. The time i joined here i was planted, And now I'm leaving with everything perfected.
Her dazzling short hair and her pretty smiles Can put me up a thousand miles Being with her feels like i'm in a heaven No one knew exactly this would happen. It was unexpected that I would be this broken I loved her so much to the point that i would Do anything to be chosen. I was so desperate for an answer that i would Give my life for her Now I know to be careful with my actions Because it would just lead to humiliations. I learned to move on forward and focus On what mattered I now moved on from what happened in the past I am now happy and free at last. I made a poem about my past being so inlove with my classmate haha
Her dazzling smile and cheerful faces have not moved without any traces being with her feels like heaven she left without harvesting the seed she had sowen
My first poem: The dusk crimson coffin lay. The body frail, here to stay. Crowes scream perched on nearby graves. As night swallows the sunshine haze. Her heart sank knowing this was the end. Shaking violently as she try to mend. No more words to say to me. My soul shrivels, did she love me?
Oh, I liked this! You've perfectly described that eerie, desperately romantic atmosphere within the first two lines, and I just love "As night swallows the sunshine haze" for some reason
She took me for granted Now my heart feels like an empty canvas We should’ve never intertwined My heart still feels she’s mine It made me feel dead inside Can’t stand the sight of her pretty eyes Might make these into a song
This is my first time that I've written a poem I've never written any poem before.. She's cute little 🎎doll with pale skin. Attractive and fit with sharp chin. And it motivated me to do exercise. Now, I train daily to improve the Size. I'd love to get Feedback❤❤.
Reminiscence of you, moistens my fretful eyes with nostalgic tear drops....... The path I traverse without you brings me nothing but utter flops......... Similar to an imperfect task which had not taken the name of god...... Pal, your token of friendship is the foremost thing I could afford.....
“What are friends? I feel like every friendship always ends Maybe they weren’t a good match So that made them detach” Its my first time I am kind of proud
You stepped on my heart, And passed your art, You make my face a river, And took the pieces oh driver, Your guts make me shiver, And you didn't even leave the liver.
Music can be pleasant, can be not, Some tunes are chill, while others are hot. Feeling it, as I`m in heaven, Where all emotions hide, in the garden' rate my poem on 1 to 10 thank you so much kahel brother you are the best and you help me alot
My first try My childhood Holi morning No worry for tomorrow morning Thinking of preparing for tomorrow adorning Bring my colours and balloon conforming Every moment in your mind recording Lots of colour in hand secretly storing For next Holi left colour warning I am missing my Childhood Holi morning ❤❤❤❤😊
Here is something I wrote. English isn't my native language, but I wanted to quickly try it out. All we do is climb We reach for the stars, jump to see the moon, aim a million miles ahead. Tomorrow comes too soon, Yesterday seems too far Today goes by too fast, And we never go to bed.
This was extremely helpful! I just came up with my first stanza, and I feel motivated alreadyyy. I was to work on a poetry assignment, and I have never tried writing poetry before. But your tip was amazing!
Her beautyful smiles Mady my day everytimes, And the confidence she owns Give goosebumps to my bones Whenever I look at her I remember the past times Thank you
You really taught so well in a short span of time. Thank you. My first poem I saw this lost girl She had those beautiful curls Her eyes pleading me to help Her voice pleading along with a yelp I held her small timid hand Guided her to the path she needed to land Looked twice at her Realizing it was me, I was her I am this lost girl --- Me (Hana)
Thanks for the easy lesson. It really helped refresh my mind on poetry. Also sorry to hear about you dog. May she rest in peace and be forever remembered!
Student life, a journey bright, a world of wonder, a path of light, a time to learn, to grow, to coup, to reach for stars and come alive. Days filled with lessons, books, and notes, challenges abound, conflict to clear, tests to take, exams to fear, but with each step, with each succes, a sense of progress. as student life unfolds, future awaits, a canvas of hope, a world to overcome, a life to scope, a journey to treasure, a life to dare.
Her black hair and beautiful smile Can take me up a hundred miles Being with her feels like I'm in heaven Our friendship is the best thing that happened
Her blooming flowers, and colorful leaves, dance around in the breeze. Her breathtaking landscapes, put me in a trance. I wish I could take, one last glance. Her warm embrace makes me feel at home, a place I can finally call my own. Her calm dormant fields, make all bad thoughts become repealed. Her golden sunsets glisten in the sky, I'm sad but now she has to say bye. I hope that soon I will see you again, till tomorrow when all begins again.
He was the first guy who made me feel this way, I just think of him at night as I lay, He was like the charming stars up in the dark dark sky, I will always have a part of me which will love him till the day I die.
Here's a poem written by me to thanks the youtuber I know it's weird Please give feedback to improve it For your this lesson of poem, That you taught so easy as foam I am thankful to you about you taught I hope others could also plot In the end I would say to you I am really thankful to you
She was suffering, with so much pain She faked a smile again She was mentally not stable Her mind was numb Not a single person understood Her problem Her heart sank to the bottom She blamed herself for everything Her thoughts were the scariest thing Sometimes she smiled Sometimes she cried Never have I ever understood Her mind
My very first time: dream If i could Live in a dream; i would never be alone Live with friends who understand me all ; we could play, we could sing , we don't worry 😊 , staring at moon all night, if i could Live in a dream; the world will be happy
I watch you from afar So in love with your heart Your beautiful brown eyes They glimmer in sunshine You are such an alluring sight My soul clenches in desire I want to hold you in my arms And protect you from all harm When I'm with you, it feels like heaven Our bond, it's beyond lives of seven
I'm her because i want to express myself better to the person i love, not because im incapable of expressing emotions but i feel as if the emotion, the love im showing her isn't enough, i have truly fallen for this girl.
my first try (wanted to make it about love for country) My first love and the place my future smiles The grace and motherly love my heart desires My birthplace, Oh my bloodline is in debt to you for sure And for my foolishness you are the cure
(2nd attempt) (pls give me advice on how to improve) Oh mother of the the world my first love and where i said my first word If i had know about the development you possessed i wouldnt have hesitated about you ,looking all stressed your left may be outshining your right but that will never be right You should stand for what's true even if the others hate you for the next one hundred nights
@@dayalpandey2786 hey thankyou 🥺❤️ I wrote one more similar to this one, you can read if you like :) I Often Wonder- A swift look into your eyes like a blessing in disguise; Shortly in an instant, Some unknown feelings had arise. I found there a glimpse of us Perhaps it was nothing- but rather sus I often wonder if it's really something Or am I just making a fuss? So many unsaid things had impart, Too many feelings in the heart The obsessing thought of, Never wanting to be apart. I snapped back to reality And looked right away; It all happened so quickly Wish I could make it stay.
Their happy faces and their high hopes Even if I fell down a slope Even if my grades are low Still they knew I would grow Their happiness was such a pleasure That I felt I found treasure The treasure that gave me happiness That I was left with no unhappiness And im a 10 y old
The burning sunrays and lushly branches of mango tree Eating tiffins with friends full of chips and brownie Being late for clas after short break Hunger made us sneak the remaining cake Waiting for the bell to ring Rushing for outdoor as fast as having wing Swimming and Skating were the most populated But one of them used to close as winters originated Participating in athletic meet and annual function Enjoying night stay with friends due to participation This school made enhance our skills And also together visiting hills I have wrote this poem on my own because out teacher gave us SEA (Subject Enrichment Activity) which is of 20 marks and I hope I will get full. The topic was Choithram School (Our School).
GOLDEN DAYS All muzzy in my brain, I want to feel them again, Now.. I think i just Have a fragment of them. I wish those days to comeback And feel the fun we had. Now I ended up writing a ballad for which I miss those old days, I envy those children who are living there golden days. Now I sit and watch the Golden hour, Missing my Golden Days
It's buitiful in its greenery With its good looking scenery Here comes the breeze Making flowers sneeze Here's the leaves little whirl Making natuare a pearl
Her personality and Her smiles dazzle through the night, Listening to her voice makes everything go right, Flowers bloom because she is sunshine, Because of her I am fine.
Poem: "Love" Nobody loves me, Not like I do, Even if no one loves me, I only need me, not you, You can love me though, It won't matter though, If you do or don't, No matter the pain or despair, I can heal, I can repair, Be a place in my heart, As though we can't be torn apart, Nobody loves me, Not like I do, I only need me, Not you. - Unknown 12 year old
Life is a beautiful journey with many ups and downs Sometimes you'll float sometimes you'll drown Its all about the lesson learned from failure's sting That teaches us to rise to spread our wings
Shaped by the ways of life. By whom who carrys a knife Be aware, be very aware If you take a life without spare For karma is but a woe Not a friend nor a foe Not a thing nor a thought But is something that fought For the justice of all No mater how big or small Karma is but a woe To those who are a foe
-I lay in bed after waking up from a nap -My mind is at peace while my body is relaxed -The warm connection is like a couple in love -These feelings float to me like a angel up above
Once we were like two peas in a pod. Her voice, an enchanting Nightingale's song, Compelled me to nod. Her laughter and cheerful, vivid memory were so strong, They eroded life's pains and discord. But in a moment, everything was gone, And I'm still waiting like a moron. Without you, nothing feels like home. The joyfulness from her presence has gone. But I'm still waiting like a moron
The place where we entered crying Hearing our parents sighing, Without a clue of what’s new This place is like a heaven for few And hell for new But soon we all adapt and enjoy this hue To immerse in all our dreams To see our teachers in gleams This place is like no other Classes filled with chaos and smother Leaving with a heavy heart, Oh to shine like a bright star, I’ll be here again in another avatar
I just did a short poem!😊 “You and your heavenly blue eyes I never thought I would say goodbye But I guess I have to leave you behind Cause now you have another girl on your mind”
HOW TO CREATE A TITLE FOR YOUR POEM IN 5 STEPS: ua-cam.com/video/hNz0FGHS8CY/v-deo.html
@madara4383I love this !! It’s actually a inspiration for me to get better at writing
@madara4383 Yw !
A little boy,
Smiling in joy.
His genius mind,
Was very king.
Sometimes naughty, sometimes annoying,
But he was very enjoying.
He couldn’t do his ABC's,
But he could talk and type faster than a bee.
Very clever and self caring,
Something people were dearing.
Diagnosed with multiple diseases,
He didn’t care about them like cold breezes.
Books, something he could find,
Ready to expand his genius mind.
Laughing, crying and living his life in joy,
This is the story of a legendary boy.
superb😍😍
My beautiful mum with green eyes.
Seeing her smile is such a surprise.
Her smile is rare.
She sheds a tear.
OoO
If my love was a sunset
It would include the moon
Vast, bright and colourful
To which I look forward after noon
A blossom in the summer time
A bumble bee on a beautiful flower
A warm gentle breeze of hugs
Of a never ending hour
The soft reassuring forehead kisses
In wake of the night turned blue
In my mind you are eternity
In my heart there's only you
Omg if you sent this to someone they would go crazy this is beautiful 👏👏
@@ynchan1645 thankyou!
Is this your own poem? So beautiful
@@ninofrance2589 yes 🥰
Amazing
His sweet and dazzling smiles,
Captivated my heart many times.
He showered me with his love and care,
That it shivers me to find him rare.
This is one of my first tries at a poem idk how I feel about it but I thought I would put it on here to see what people think
Her head overflowed
It wanted to explode
she kept crying out
But she was in a a drought
Slowly dieing,she pleaded out to me
But sadly I could not see
She explained it in every way she could
But she was just misunderstood
She told them she was trying to stay awake
But they thought she was a mistake
Every way she looked
It had her hooked
They thought it was the winter blues
But it was all the mental abuse
They said it was an excuse
But what about the bruise
It wasn’t physical
But it was critical
She prayed to god
Hoping it wouldn’t be fraud
The longer she waited
The more she was hated
Broken in pieces
The pain increases
Good job 👍
Holy fuck that was so cool 👌👌
It's just lovely 😍
Damn, that took oxygen away from me
Damn.. it's really beautiful!
I did it 😭
"Her dazzling smile and cute eyes
Backed up a million Lies,
Which I heard many time
Felt like I was tasting a lime,
I thought you were mine
Deep down I was just dying"
Amazing!!!❤️✨️👍🏻
Bro 😮
Her blonde hair flows through the breeze
Being with her makes me feel like I'm on a trapeze
My heart gives a flutter as she looks my way
Her presence lights up my entire day
"Her blonde hair flows through the breeze, being with her feels like I'm on a trapeze" would you mind if I use this for my school project, it is so pleasing to my ear
it is a warm poem😍
@@yhunizgandia4 Oh shoot I'm so sad I never saw this of course you can
@@boredsav5379😂😂😂
sounds like a mixtape from the 1990s frfr
Let's be clear here
I've always had this fear.
I will never blame you
For this is nothing new.
You whispered me sweet words
A small break from this dying world.
Yet I would never let them stay seated
Fully knowing they've been repeated.
You have a thing for poetry - keep going.
This is only thing a could write :
Your beautiful smile and dazzling eyes
Left me with nothing but ugly lies
If only I knew the truth
I would not have wasted my youth.
@@muhamedal-hirz786 that’s deep
@@notjackolioreal deep
@@muhamedal-hirz786You have something for sad poetry
The peaceful sounds and smells of the colorful leaves,
make everyone want to wear long sleeves,
the chilly air preparing for winter,
fall will leave, and snow will come.
The sun rays glistened,
The world heard and listened
To the chirping.
With cold wind blowing,
The air's still crisp;
And you caught a glimpse.
As the planet of love smiles
To you who cries.
This is from me who woke up early to finish my assignments and gave up, cried and looked outside my window
(English's not my first language so i apologize for the mistakes:)
First time writing a poem
You caught my eye.
As of a burglar with jewelry.
Not with your crow-colored hair.
Or with eyes that shimmer,
Even in the night.
But with your giving soul,
And your heart so full of life.
But until the seas dries out,
When the sun will cease
To share its light.
When we can count every star,
In the dark blue sky.
Or when we meet our end.
Only then I will confess,
With a highly-strung heart.
That you are my inspiration
The definition of pure bliss
The person who ive longed
And my true love
Feel free to interpret
It's beautiful you have that shine in you ! keep it going
*My mother*
She loved me through my thick,
And she loved me through my thin
She showered me in love
And hugged me tight in my low
She cared for me even when i hurt her
And taught me to be braver
She taught me how to dress,
And even how to brush
She taught me how to solve when i mess up,
And taught me how to speak up
She was with me in my first's,
And i hope she will be with me in my lasts
It's my 1st poem, i tried my best!
I did use many reference lines and i know it's cheating😅
dammmmmm soooooo goood you should try more
That last line is great
Being with friends was such a charm.
They didn't allow on me any harms.
But due to the distance we parted our ways.
But those memories will last a lifetime my heart says.
the blue eyes and and white fur
i would always love her
she was always my true pet
but other pets she hasn't met.
that was an easy stanza!
Wow. This is how I write poems. You exactly thought everyone the same way. What a precise breakdown. Wish I have a teacher like you.
It’s intuition and creativeness
Gives me motive and intellect
Drawing feels like being alone in a room
With nothing left but my thoughts
A burning passion in my heart
Filled with nothing but Art
Bringing me joy where I go
Wish all youtubers taught like you. Btw u r one of the best tutors on UA-cam.
Time does pass us by very fast,
Only a moment's pause,dawn is dust
But the moments we had will surely last,
Till the day these bones are dust.
Now it's here and i can't believe
That time has passed so quickly...
But through your encouragement and guidance
I feel I'm ready for tomorrow's challenges
Days can go on incessantly
And we've made such,the days which can't be forgotten.
The lessons you taught were worthwhile
Would last a lifetime.
The time i joined here i was planted,
And now I'm leaving with everything perfected.
Why did you change it it was perfect
Her dazzling short hair and her pretty smiles
Can put me up a thousand miles
Being with her feels like i'm in a heaven
No one knew exactly this would happen.
It was unexpected that I would be this broken
I loved her so much to the point that i would
Do anything to be chosen.
I was so desperate for an answer that i would
Give my life for her
Now I know to be careful with my actions
Because it would just lead to humiliations.
I learned to move on forward and focus
On what mattered
I now moved on from what happened in the past
I am now happy and free at last.
I made a poem about my past being so inlove with my classmate haha
The beauty of a sunrise is crazy,
It look like a daisy with all the yellow shades,
And now I’m sitting here writing this promenade.
Her dazzling smile and cheerful faces
have not moved without any traces
being with her feels like heaven
she left without harvesting the seed she had sowen
My first poem:
The dusk crimson coffin lay. The body frail, here to stay. Crowes scream perched on nearby graves. As night swallows the sunshine haze. Her heart sank knowing this was the end. Shaking violently as she try to mend. No more words to say to me. My soul shrivels, did she love me?
Oh, I liked this! You've perfectly described that eerie, desperately romantic atmosphere within the first two lines, and I just love "As night swallows the sunshine haze" for some reason
ain't no way this is your first poem, i am truly impressed!
She took me for granted
Now my heart feels like an empty canvas
We should’ve never intertwined
My heart still feels she’s mine
It made me feel dead inside
Can’t stand the sight of her pretty eyes
Might make these into a song
Dude this is awesome
Turn it into a song
This poem is so simple and yet painfully beautiful.
@Joe The Poet sure , Where do i see it ?
would love this as a song
This is my first time that I've written a poem I've never written any poem before..
She's cute little 🎎doll with pale skin.
Attractive and fit with sharp chin.
And it motivated me to do exercise.
Now, I train daily to improve the Size.
I'd love to get Feedback❤❤.
I feel bad for some people who haven't discovered this video yet.
ua-cam.com/video/0Rt4KkvZKbA/v-deo.html
I have just discovered it
I have to submit my English project of making Freestyke poem in 2 days any ideas pls
@@poison9605 solitude, hope, friendship
I have to make a filipino poem about want’s and need’s and deadline today and discovered today
Damn this dude created a masterpiece in the matter of minutes😢
Reminiscence of you, moistens my fretful eyes with nostalgic tear drops.......
The path I traverse without you brings me nothing but utter flops.........
Similar to an imperfect task which had not taken the name of god......
Pal, your token of friendship is the foremost thing I could afford.....
I thought the poem is hard but because of you it's not now . thanks💙💙
“What are friends?
I feel like every friendship always ends
Maybe they weren’t a good match
So that made them detach”
Its my first time I am kind of proud
Yeah, it is worthy to be proud of👍
"Be like water my friend , You Put water inside the cup it becomes the cup "
You stepped on my heart,
And passed your art,
You make my face a river,
And took the pieces oh driver,
Your guts make me shiver,
And you didn't even leave the liver.
His words of support kept me alive
Took me out of those deadly nights
Makes me smile till my tears roll down
Idk why that unknown feels like my own
I'm learning English and I want to write a poem. Thank you.
Music can be pleasant, can be not,
Some tunes are chill, while others are hot.
Feeling it, as I`m in heaven,
Where all emotions hide, in the garden'
rate my poem on 1 to 10
thank you so much kahel brother you are the best and you help me alot
My first try
My childhood Holi morning
No worry for tomorrow morning
Thinking of preparing for tomorrow
adorning
Bring my colours and balloon conforming
Every moment in your mind recording
Lots of colour in hand secretly storing
For next Holi left colour warning
I am missing my
Childhood Holi morning
❤❤❤❤😊
Here is something I wrote. English isn't my native language, but I wanted to quickly try it out.
All we do is climb
We reach for the stars,
jump to see the moon,
aim a million miles ahead.
Tomorrow comes too soon,
Yesterday seems too far
Today goes by too fast,
And we never go to bed.
This was extremely helpful! I just came up with my first stanza, and I feel motivated alreadyyy.
I was to work on a poetry assignment, and I have never tried writing poetry before. But your tip was amazing!
Her beautyful smiles
Mady my day everytimes,
And the confidence she owns
Give goosebumps to my bones
Whenever I look at her
I remember the past times
Thank you
Thankyou po sa tips, I can write more poems!! 🥰
You really taught so well in a short span of time. Thank you.
My first poem
I saw this lost girl
She had those beautiful curls
Her eyes pleading me to help
Her voice pleading along with a yelp
I held her small timid hand
Guided her to the path she needed to land
Looked twice at her
Realizing it was me, I was her
I am this lost girl
--- Me (Hana)
❤wowwww
Are u kidding me ? OH MY GOD YOUR POEM IS SO BEAUTIFUL 💗💗
@@akiyakuuzawa3241 Omg thank you so much. You made my day😭💗
@@Leviiii-yy Aww thank you sooo much💗🥺
YOUR POEM IS SO BEAUTIFUL OMG
Thanks for the easy lesson. It really helped refresh my mind on poetry. Also sorry to hear about you dog. May she rest in peace and be forever remembered!
I couldn't breathe, my heart was racing
It was behind me, pacing.
Through the lines of the road
dark it was,
I couldn't see a light of a crowd.
OMG! Everybody must watch this. It is really helpful!😊
I had to write a poem for my oral test...this helped a lot...thank you ✨
she only delivers perfection,
when will I go in that direction?
I just want a little light on me,
why can’t I just let her be?
Hey, thank you so much for such wonderful tips I won second prize in a poetry contest yesterday following your amazing tips!😊
Student life, a journey bright,
a world of wonder, a path of light,
a time to learn, to grow, to coup,
to reach for stars and come alive.
Days filled with lessons, books, and notes,
challenges abound, conflict to clear, tests to take,
exams to fear, but with each step,
with each succes, a sense of progress.
as student life unfolds,
future awaits, a canvas of hope,
a world to overcome, a life to scope,
a journey to treasure, a life to dare.
Worst poem 😢
Her black hair and beautiful smile
Can take me up a hundred miles
Being with her feels like I'm in heaven
Our friendship is the best thing that happened
Her blooming flowers, and colorful leaves,
dance around in the breeze.
Her breathtaking landscapes,
put me in a trance.
I wish I could take,
one last glance.
Her warm embrace makes me feel at home,
a place I can finally call my own.
Her calm dormant fields,
make all bad thoughts become repealed.
Her golden sunsets glisten in the sky,
I'm sad but now she has to say bye.
I hope that soon I will see you again,
till tomorrow when all begins again.
You made it so simple to understand omg thank you so much!
He was the first guy who made me feel this way,
I just think of him at night as I lay,
He was like the charming stars up in the dark dark sky,
I will always have a part of me which will love him till the day I die.
❤❤😢
Here's a poem written by me to thanks the youtuber I know it's weird Please give feedback to improve it
For your this lesson of poem,
That you taught so easy as foam
I am thankful to you about you taught
I hope others could also plot
In the end I would say to you
I am really thankful to you
this is the best English teacher ❤❤❤❤
She was suffering, with so much pain
She faked a smile again
She was mentally not stable
Her mind was numb
Not a single person understood Her problem
Her heart sank to the bottom
She blamed herself for everything
Her thoughts were the scariest thing
Sometimes she smiled
Sometimes she cried
Never have I ever understood Her mind
That just gave me goosebumps 🥺
Thank You So Much for such an easy tip🙌🏻✨..Much helpful❤️
Your tutorial is very useful for developing a culture of writing poetry
Waking up with sun streaming
I must've been dreaming
Since the sun hides behind a mask of grey
Feels like everyday
You sir, is a legend, thanks for this helpful video :D
I can't believe I found this coz this is just great!
Her cherry lips , her white smiles
They've hidden just so many lies
It wasn't real, it wasn't good
I just felt misunderstood. ~
Omg this helped so much I think I'm now going to start writing poems as a hobby lol
bout to use this for my poetic rizz
your sarcasm and energy
brought yesterday's tomorrow
to a day where I'd
not trade nor let someone borrow
Such a beautiful world to live in
Though what a ugly thing is sin
May we all change our minds
For the world is where our lives binds
My very first time: dream
If i could Live in a dream; i would never be alone
Live with friends who understand me all ; we could play, we could sing , we don't worry 😊 , staring at moon all night, if i could Live in a dream; the world will be happy
Thank so much this is going to help me with my song!!! 😁
I watch you from afar
So in love with your heart
Your beautiful brown eyes
They glimmer in sunshine
You are such an alluring sight
My soul clenches in desire
I want to hold you in my arms
And protect you from all harm
When I'm with you, it feels like heaven
Our bond, it's beyond lives of seven
Your lovely smile that makes the world
I'm her because i want to express myself better to the person i love, not because im incapable of expressing emotions but i feel as if the emotion, the love im showing her isn't enough, i have truly fallen for this girl.
The only teacher that helped me
This was extremely helpful thank you for teaching me (:
my first try (wanted to make it about love for country)
My first love and the place my future smiles
The grace and motherly love my heart desires
My birthplace, Oh my bloodline is in debt to you for sure
And for my foolishness you are the cure
(2nd attempt) (pls give me advice on how to improve)
Oh mother of the the world
my first love and where i said my first word
If i had know about the development you possessed
i wouldnt have hesitated about you ,looking all stressed
your left may be outshining your right but that will never be right
You should stand for what's true even if the others hate you for the next one hundred nights
Thank you! Your poetry steps are really fantastic
Her beautiful smile
That i can see in a thousand miles
Being with her feels like im in heaven
Who would knew that i have fallen
His pretty smile and shiny eyes,
can take me up a hundred miles.
Looking at him makes my heart pound,
I get butterflies whenever he's around.
Wow it is really amazing
@@dayalpandey2786 hey thankyou 🥺❤️ I wrote one more similar to this one, you can read if you like :)
I Often Wonder-
A swift look into your eyes
like a blessing in disguise;
Shortly in an instant,
Some unknown feelings had arise.
I found there a glimpse of us
Perhaps it was nothing- but rather sus
I often wonder if it's really something
Or am I just making a fuss?
So many unsaid things had impart,
Too many feelings in the heart
The obsessing thought of,
Never wanting to be apart.
I snapped back to reality
And looked right away;
It all happened so quickly
Wish I could make it stay.
Their happy faces and their high hopes
Even if I fell down a slope
Even if my grades are low
Still they knew I would grow
Their happiness was such a pleasure
That I felt I found treasure
The treasure that gave me happiness
That I was left with no unhappiness
And im a 10 y old
❤
The burning sunrays and lushly branches of mango tree
Eating tiffins with friends full of chips and brownie
Being late for clas after short break
Hunger made us sneak the remaining cake
Waiting for the bell to ring
Rushing for outdoor as fast as having wing
Swimming and Skating were the most populated
But one of them used to close as winters originated
Participating in athletic meet and annual function
Enjoying night stay with friends due to participation
This school made enhance our skills
And also together visiting hills
I have wrote this poem on my own because out teacher gave us SEA (Subject Enrichment Activity) which is of 20 marks and I hope I will get full. The topic was Choithram School (Our School).
Thanks for making this video
This help me a lot
Lots of wishes from India
😊
GOLDEN DAYS
All muzzy in my brain,
I want to feel them again,
Now.. I think i just
Have a fragment of them.
I wish those days to comeback
And feel the fun we had.
Now I ended up writing a ballad
for which I miss those old days,
I envy those children
who are living there golden days.
Now I sit and watch the Golden hour,
Missing my Golden Days
It's buitiful in its greenery
With its good looking scenery
Here comes the breeze
Making flowers sneeze
Here's the leaves little whirl
Making natuare a pearl
Her personality and Her smiles dazzle through the night,
Listening to her voice makes everything go right,
Flowers bloom because she is sunshine,
Because of her I am fine.
Bro this was beautiful, salute✨
It was effective!!! Thank you!
this is my first ever poem, please help
His little alcoholic eyes
Had once made me smile,
For what it was worth
My laughter echoed in his girth
Poem:
"Love"
Nobody loves me,
Not like I do,
Even if no one loves me,
I only need me,
not you,
You can love me though,
It won't matter though,
If you do or don't,
No matter the pain or despair,
I can heal,
I can repair,
Be a place in my heart,
As though we can't be torn apart,
Nobody loves me,
Not like I do,
I only need me,
Not you.
- Unknown 12 year old
It's amazing bruh
As another 12 year old , i can relate .
Great job bro ,its good
Thoughts keep ringing inside my head,
Lying down in my soft bed,
Feels like floating in the clouds,
Wanna scream so out loud.
😍
Life is a beautiful journey with many ups and downs
Sometimes you'll float sometimes you'll drown
Its all about the lesson learned from failure's sting
That teaches us to rise to spread our wings
Thank you! This really helped me with my English class because we have to write a 2 stanza poem tomorrow. 😊
Thank you guys for the 22 likes! ❤️🩹
Same 🥲
My teacher made me do 8 stanza
I have two write an 8 stanza peom for my homework today
i Have to make a visual poem 4 stanzas.
The violence of war is deep
Makes millions of souls weep
The tears fuel it more
The starters think it makes there heart roar
But their minds are torn.
This Really Helped me Out to create a Essay and told my friends to Watch this Video because they don’t Know how to write a Essay LOL 😂
Shaped by the ways of life.
By whom who carrys a knife
Be aware, be very aware
If you take a life without spare
For karma is but a woe
Not a friend nor a foe
Not a thing nor a thought
But is something that fought
For the justice of all
No mater how big or small
Karma is but a woe
To those who are a foe
This was very helpful video for me and the tips were really good so thank you so much. Keep up the great work Sir.
This helped so much THANK YOU SO MUCH❤❤❤❤❤
I just wanted to say thank you! ❤❤❤ I dropped a LIKE too 👍.
Dark hair beautiful smile
I stared at him for a while
Couldn’t get my eyes from his style
can’t stop admire
-I lay in bed after waking up from a nap
-My mind is at peace while my body is relaxed
-The warm connection is like a couple in love
-These feelings float to me like a angel up above
Once we were like two peas in a pod.
Her voice, an enchanting Nightingale's song,
Compelled me to nod.
Her laughter and cheerful, vivid memory were so strong,
They eroded life's pains and discord.
But in a moment, everything was gone,
And I'm still waiting like a moron.
Without you, nothing feels like home.
The joyfulness from her presence has gone.
But I'm still waiting like a moron
The place where we entered crying
Hearing our parents sighing,
Without a clue of what’s new
This place is like a heaven for few
And hell for new
But soon we all adapt and enjoy this hue
To immerse in all our dreams
To see our teachers in gleams
This place is like no other
Classes filled with chaos and
smother
Leaving with a heavy heart,
Oh to shine like a bright star,
I’ll be here again in another avatar
Thanks for sharing such valuable tips.
I just did a short poem!😊
“You and your heavenly blue eyes
I never thought I would say goodbye
But I guess I have to leave you behind
Cause now you have another girl on your mind”