Keep going dude. Your beat is great but if you'd like, here's some suggestions: try tonal variety. Your voice stays at the same pitch, which feels like your emotion doesn't carry through. Try to also throw in some adlibs to spice it up. Telling stories from your perspective is always a win. I understand if your mic isnt also the best, but I'd say thats a minor thing. Maybe try recording in a space like a closet. All in all though, I believe in you man
agreed. keep writing brother. pump this shit out. subscribed. get on that mic touching on what KP-cd9ge is saying, carry that emotion through- we listening brother.
improve the mix and itll be good
Keep going dude. Your beat is great but if you'd like, here's some suggestions: try tonal variety. Your voice stays at the same pitch, which feels like your emotion doesn't carry through. Try to also throw in some adlibs to spice it up. Telling stories from your perspective is always a win. I understand if your mic isnt also the best, but I'd say thats a minor thing. Maybe try recording in a space like a closet. All in all though, I believe in you man
agreed. keep writing brother. pump this shit out. subscribed. get on that mic touching on what KP-cd9ge is saying, carry that emotion through- we listening brother.