You know. I would not mind seeing this turn into some multiversal escapade nonsense where people keep beating Yados, get their trumpets, and all sorts of random not-protagonists from the LISA extended universe getting pulled together for various reasons to kick ass, take names, and potentially get redemption for themselves.
Might be a hot take, but I kinda wished that Hart was still the secret boss instead of Rando. It would've been nice to see Dillon go up and try to defend his new friends against his former boss. Also some of the attacks that Rando has (i.e. the full swing and bite ones) just doesn't really fit for his character imo.
Your idea is far better than mine was my intent was the "hey where is Rando" campfire scene to be foreshadowing to the Rando fight so ya see like, what I was going for but you're right Hart would have been better story/theme wise and gameplay could just have the exact same stats. Imagine getting hart's mask as a drop would have been dope.
bit rough around the edges, but i can get behind it def agree with the others where hart should've been the rando fight, maybe do smth fun where you go to fight rando and hart shows up and just btfo's rando, forcing a fight with him instead writing's alright, it's a decent joke mod ending is alright, cool lore gonna give her a 7 outta 10
Thank you for your review and feedback. I would like to clarify this is more a pseudo joke mod than full joke as there is an attempt at a serious story, just with an absurd premise and moderate humor. In what ways (aside from hart because T already agree with that criticism) do you feel it could be improved, gameplay or story wise?
@@gen3kingthewriter491 oh shit i didn't see this, my bad beyond a few typos and odd writing placements, maybe some more bro-moments with the boys, i think it'd be pretty peachy it's not a bad mod, you did really well
@@gen3kingthewriter491 Go ahead buddy, and I'm being genuine. Break the mold and give these characters some real character and your own personal touch rather than just speaking in your own voice and tone. Birdie, Dillon, and Darry are three characters who would speak very differently from one another and Dillon doesn't even have any dialogue in Hopeful, I think. If I didn't know their backgrounds, I wouldn't be able to tell who was speaking just from the way they talk and formulate themselves. This is not a problem unique to you rather it is a common pitfall (Pointless modder people seem to love giving Alex, an amoral wanderer some kind of good interest at heart) that you can overcome. But for now, Birdie doesn't slur, hiccup nor ramble on when prompted to speak, Darry has little of that chummy old man vibe I got from him in SOTWS and Dillon is uh... Dillon. But if hearing this drives you forward to create, I'll say it again.
@@gen3kingthewriter491 I think a good example for what I mean that's directly related to LISA is the Pointless dinner scene. Watch it again and see how each character speaks and introduces/explains themselves, they come off like real people that you could identify speech patterns for and imply some underlying character motivations and personal history.
![[Lisa The Nonsensical 2] Lovelies and Hart fight (Edited)](/img/n.gif)
You know. I would not mind seeing this turn into some multiversal escapade nonsense where people keep beating Yados, get their trumpets, and all sorts of random not-protagonists from the LISA extended universe getting pulled together for various reasons to kick ass, take names, and potentially get redemption for themselves.
the ending is just cursed,i love it
Me writing the ending was just the clip of Jontron opening a box to find a dead fish a mix tape and going "I can make this work"
Might be a hot take, but I kinda wished that Hart was still the secret boss instead of Rando. It would've been nice to see Dillon go up and try to defend his new friends against his former boss. Also some of the attacks that Rando has (i.e. the full swing and bite ones) just doesn't really fit for his character imo.
Your idea is far better than mine was my intent was the "hey where is Rando" campfire scene to be foreshadowing to the Rando fight so ya see like, what I was going for but you're right Hart would have been better story/theme wise and gameplay could just have the exact same stats. Imagine getting hart's mask as a drop would have been dope.
@@gen3kingthewriter491 do it then
@@sirsmallsthemighty821 only one small problem
I'm lazy
@@gen3kingthewriter491 still lazy?
@@marooniballooni03759 YES!
I AM!
1:03:43 Gen3king sure does love his references, lol.
where from?
@@GensokyoBoySlvt Hartless. Was the devs attempt at a fangame
Birdie is probably the demoman from tf2
He generates alcohol in his liver
bruh rando does NOT fight like that, hes way more technique than sheer brutality, this feels more like a hart fight if anything
Ngl I dropped the ball on his moveset and,
yeah sorry my b-
@Obama doESn’t care I don't believe kids would be watching this (I mean Lisa as a series deals with some dark stuff)
@@gen3kingthewriter491 im 2 and a half years old please dont swear
@@Captain_Crabmeat aight sorry then
@@gen3kingthewriter491 yeah I'm still in my mother womb, don't have that language
Good video! Looks very interesting to play as a lovely while having teammates from other games of the series.
10/10 ending
I wonder which Yado is responisible for all the Arnold perspective mods.
bit rough around the edges, but i can get behind it
def agree with the others where hart should've been the rando fight, maybe do smth fun where you go to fight rando and hart shows up and just btfo's rando, forcing a fight with him instead
writing's alright, it's a decent joke mod
ending is alright, cool lore
gonna give her a 7 outta 10
Thank you for your review and feedback.
I would like to clarify this is more a pseudo joke mod than full joke as there is an attempt at a serious story, just with an absurd premise and moderate humor.
In what ways (aside from hart because T already agree with that criticism) do you feel it could be improved, gameplay or story wise?
@@gen3kingthewriter491 oh shit i didn't see this, my bad
beyond a few typos and odd writing placements, maybe some more bro-moments with the boys, i think it'd be pretty peachy
it's not a bad mod, you did really well
@@Spacecoreinspace More bro moments I'll keep that in mind, thanks a ton
ok
Goes hard
Could you test my game
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Sure, you can get in touch with me on Gamejolt
hey i have great news i am creating lisa the pointful
Good to hear!
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Pretty sure that's just a problem on your end, seems fine to me
This is probably the worst example I've seen of people just not writing the characters in their story. LISA fan mod makers are so weird
every time I read this comment I am one step closer to making Nonsensical 2
@@gen3kingthewriter491 Go ahead buddy, and I'm being genuine. Break the mold and give these characters some real character and your own personal touch rather than just speaking in your own voice and tone. Birdie, Dillon, and Darry are three characters who would speak very differently from one another and Dillon doesn't even have any dialogue in Hopeful, I think. If I didn't know their backgrounds, I wouldn't be able to tell who was speaking just from the way they talk and formulate themselves.
This is not a problem unique to you rather it is a common pitfall (Pointless modder people seem to love giving Alex, an amoral wanderer some kind of good interest at heart) that you can overcome. But for now, Birdie doesn't slur, hiccup nor ramble on when prompted to speak, Darry has little of that chummy old man vibe I got from him in SOTWS and Dillon is uh... Dillon. But if hearing this drives you forward to create, I'll say it again.
@@moogobIin That is actually a very good point that I will attempt to keep in mind thanks for the feedback.
@@gen3kingthewriter491 I think a good example for what I mean that's directly related to LISA is the Pointless dinner scene. Watch it again and see how each character speaks and introduces/explains themselves, they come off like real people that you could identify speech patterns for and imply some underlying character motivations and personal history.
@@moogobIin I struggle with speech patterns a lot both irl and in writing but I will do my best