"I Took a Shortcut Through an Empty Mall. I Haven’t Found the Exit Yet" Creepypasta

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  • Опубліковано 8 лют 2025

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  • @NickNitro
    @NickNitro 12 днів тому +31

    I'm glad to see you're still going creeps, I sent a dm when youtube still had the inbox messaging. I appreciate you replying when you did, it gave me a lot of motivation to become a youtuber myself. thank you for that moment of small kindness my guy, I do music now. :D
    can't believe I've been a fan for 12+ years now much love bud.

    • @CreepsMcPasta
      @CreepsMcPasta  12 днів тому +19

      UA-cam inbox is an oldschool reference! Glad you've kept up the music!

    • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376
      @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 12 днів тому +4

      ​@@CreepsMcPasta
      That's amazing Creeps and your Creepypasta Narratorations are some of my favorites.

  • @aaronweaver9751
    @aaronweaver9751 13 днів тому +31

    Horror Rule NN: No shortcuts, no exceptions.
    Kudos to the narrator and author 🎉🎉🎉

  • @tinytuguy
    @tinytuguy 13 днів тому +38

    Been listening for years now, never been this early lol

  • @JimmmyRaynor
    @JimmmyRaynor 13 днів тому +142

    I took a shortcut through the mojave wastes while traveling to new vegas. I ended up in vault 31. I haven't found the exit yet.

    • @kishaa819
      @kishaa819 13 днів тому +6

      Really? Me too! What a coincidence

    • @mikegill-zo5ij
      @mikegill-zo5ij 13 днів тому +7

      Was that you l heard moaning close to the tunnel ?

    • @MAXIMILLIONtheGREAT
      @MAXIMILLIONtheGREAT 12 днів тому +9

      Anyone else download the creepypasta radio mods for fallout? Fits so well.

    • @Nyctonaut
      @Nyctonaut 12 днів тому +1

      Raynor!? I think you're in the wrong sector! You belong on Mar Sara, Marshall! We need help with the Zerg invasion!

    • @JimmmyRaynor
      @JimmmyRaynor 12 днів тому

      @@Nyctonaut that's it, I'm calling in the hyperion! Matt, prepare to jump!

  • @Ooh_PieceOfCandy
    @Ooh_PieceOfCandy 13 днів тому +14

    There aren't very many pasta narrators left! I was very late to the game, I only started listening a year or so ago. Anyway I just wanted to say I'm extremely grateful for Creeps' continued narrations and I hope to see some more original stories written by him ❤

    • @goodintentions8106
      @goodintentions8106 12 днів тому +2

      There's several that do their own thing. Viidith, Mike Jesus langer, those are the ones I remember closely but I can find others if you want.

    • @terriwetz6077
      @terriwetz6077 12 днів тому +3

      A very new narrator just started about 3 months or so ago, Grim Reader. He's the only Irish one I know of. And he's live, not an AI. Also, do a search for Drew Blood, he's absolutely the best in the business!

    • @IronClawGaming
      @IronClawGaming 10 днів тому

      @@terriwetz6077 Look Up Dr. Creepen to. He's British and has one of the smoothest voices you've ever heard. He mostly does long form videos but they are really really good.

  • @sleepngdemon
    @sleepngdemon 13 днів тому +18

    Thank you for continuing to supply me with horror stories

  • @jackdurden466
    @jackdurden466 12 днів тому +5

    Damn Creepy! Makes you wonder if all of the mannequins were once people who had been in the mall at the wrong time and were also slowly becoming plastic. A horrible fate indeed! So I definitely have sympathy for the guy. It reminds me of another story where the mannequins were once people and one of them had been a friend of some shoppers who recognized him and the entire operation was blown open. Of course there’s a LOT more to the story and it’s an excellent one to say the least! This sounds similar and less organized than that one. But no less terrifying.

  • @terriwetz6077
    @terriwetz6077 12 днів тому +3

    I was rooting for the guy to eventually get out of there. Great story tonight!

  • @Goldwodka
    @Goldwodka 13 днів тому +12

    Thank you very much for your hard work!

  • @NoNo-i3n1o
    @NoNo-i3n1o 13 днів тому +9

    Thank you for many years of peaceful sleep my good sir:)

  • @ShawnKeller-1
    @ShawnKeller-1 12 днів тому +5

    I took a shortcut through housewares at Walmart last week. I went through hardware after. I got there 30 seconds quicker. It was crazy.

  • @ZipTiedSmurf
    @ZipTiedSmurf 12 днів тому +6

    I remember when they took all your shit man. Your computer with all your writings n shit. I’m glad you stuck it out and you’re still around helping me get to sleep. Thanks creeps.

  • @ashleyvantrease1169
    @ashleyvantrease1169 13 днів тому +5

    Scent of Night by Myuu playing hauntingly in the background in the beginning 🙌
    Love Myuu and discovered their amazing work through these creepy pastas. I'm an aspiring pianist myself and play his music on repeat ❤

  • @DireNeedforCoffee
    @DireNeedforCoffee 5 днів тому

    I refuse to listen to any other narrator for creepy stories. Never stop! ❤

  • @CraigL-ni4pd
    @CraigL-ni4pd 12 днів тому +4

    Omgggggg you're aliveeeee !!!!! I've been waiting with bated breath for one of your narratives!!!!!!!! 🎉🎉😅😅😅

  • @bizzyizzy9526
    @bizzyizzy9526 13 днів тому +28

    This describes how I felt when I got lost, separated from my mom when we went to the mall when I was a little kid 😢

    • @sharonpaterson1281
      @sharonpaterson1281 13 днів тому +4

      Oh no I can get lost in a phone box / booth I’m terrible at remembering direction 😂

    • @unoriginalname4321
      @unoriginalname4321 13 днів тому +3

      Did you ever get out?

    • @Saint3188
      @Saint3188 13 днів тому +2

      I had that happen before that was horriying

    • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376
      @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 12 днів тому +1

      ​@@Saint3188
      Yeah and I like Malls and I always bring my phone to places when traveling to shopping places with my mom and stepdad.

    • @Saint3188
      @Saint3188 11 днів тому

      Good idea.​@@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

  • @thebluerose7648
    @thebluerose7648 13 днів тому +5

    This is a very unexpected awesome surprise!

  • @sharonpaterson1281
    @sharonpaterson1281 13 днів тому +13

    Ohh sounds like the backrooms strike again 😂 I have lost time in a forest once I lost 4 days don’t know how or why but yeah it was madness I still don’t know what happened 🤷‍♀️

  • @hellb6y
    @hellb6y 13 днів тому +5

    Reminds me of a story I read years ago called "cul-de-sac" or something like that. I think it was in a book does anyone else remember this?

    • @DrakeLorneMoffitt
      @DrakeLorneMoffitt 13 днів тому

      Yea, i remember something along those lines. Cant recall much but your def onto soemthing.

  • @jbevan4411
    @jbevan4411 11 днів тому

    Ohhhhhh that was a goodie 🤯🤯🤯. What a creepy way to start the day.

  • @SOULS280
    @SOULS280 12 днів тому +2

    We making it out of the mall with this one🗣️🔥🔥🔥

  • @WindmageZyphos
    @WindmageZyphos 8 днів тому

    I can’t remember what year I subscribed to you, but it was a long time ago. Maybe around the Abandoned by Disney days. We were on our way to Disney World and I was listening to SomeOrdinaryGamers narrate creepypasta. I think that’s when I discovered your channel and saw your entire Disney Playlist. Glad you’re still around delivering real quality stories.

  • @julesrules7297
    @julesrules7297 9 днів тому +1

    Mannequins creep me out so I loved this.

  • @cassandrawright2781
    @cassandrawright2781 11 днів тому

    And the moral kiddies.....Never go thru an abandoned Anything!! Ever. Great narration as always❤❤

  • @sssleepingpanda5195
    @sssleepingpanda5195 7 днів тому

    Literally turn my blue tooth on every night before bed and turn on short stories by creepymcpasta just to fall asleep 😂

  • @Kaytten
    @Kaytten 13 днів тому +4

    Scary stuff 😮😮

  • @starrleesimmons4291
    @starrleesimmons4291 12 днів тому +1

    This was fun to night , make's a lovely time to knit or get my work done , your a blessing , Gratitude...

  • @DripDrax
    @DripDrax 13 днів тому

    This story gives me nostalgic vibes for my local mall that shut down years ago and has been abandoned for a while. The century III mall in Pittsburgh was my favorite place to hang out when I was a kid, but it eventually shut down and has been abandoned for years. I went back to the abandoned mall before the demolition started and explored it, but I sadly didn’t go inside because of how poor the condition of the building was in. The mall is currently being demolished but part of it is still standing as of now.

  • @Meniscus6
    @Meniscus6 12 днів тому +1

    Is this the origin story of Markiplier's fear of mannequins?

  • @Saint3188
    @Saint3188 13 днів тому +2

    Not a bad place to shop that's for sure.

  • @TheSuperSnake313
    @TheSuperSnake313 12 днів тому

    New Creeps let's gooo 🔥

  • @richarddavis254
    @richarddavis254 6 днів тому

    Great story.

  • @Flamsterette
    @Flamsterette 13 днів тому +8

    Some malls around here are empty, but those are usually far away.

  • @2musicSoundtrackfandom579
    @2musicSoundtrackfandom579 13 днів тому +2

    Anyone getting like backrooms vibe here 😏
    The mall must have got
    noclip. At the moment he entered? In or during, in the very first few minutes or hour that he entered in.
    Parts of realities are very well known of no clipping into the backrooms and the backroom makes it an extension to itself.
    They either it leaves it as is, as long as the wanderers doesn't escape or go to the outside.
    Of that pacific level
    or it morph and change its form and shape into looks to whatever it desires.
    anyone tragically, that
    no clip at the same time. As these realities, ether is k■■¤ll£d, or turning to entities or become part of the new level entirely
    Or in extreme rare cases, keep them alive. And use them as service to wanderers.
    See, I believe that the backrooms was once a bridge to different realities. And it gives individu the feel of what it's like before you enter in them, but something went wrong. And because of that,
    the back rooms is not
    Letting people go to those realities instead, preventing them from going and keeping them within itself.
    Wondering aimlessly, through their endless hallways and corridors and cities and places that seems otherworldly, or worldly.

  • @nicholaskinishi6818
    @nicholaskinishi6818 6 днів тому

    Good video, but anyone else hear the exact same tropes from the last video about the apartment? Whispers, creepy beings all turning to look at you all at once, feeling like you’re caught in a loop, and turning into one of the beings at the end of the video? I know it’s the same writer but wow, feels like the same story.

  • @servantsofchristph8700
    @servantsofchristph8700 5 днів тому

    Always coming back to this voice

  • @nicholejohnson3642
    @nicholejohnson3642 13 днів тому

    Oh my gosh, that was a creepy one. ❤

  • @terrigabriel582
    @terrigabriel582 13 днів тому +1

    Woops....Wrong Decision 😵‍💫

  • @raheenb
    @raheenb 12 днів тому +2

    Great job as usual but please look up the pronunciation of the word "gutteral".... You've been mispronouncing it for years now and it always pulls me out of the story a bit

  • @PixiePrincess501
    @PixiePrincess501 12 днів тому

    Gives Backrooms/No End House vibes with an even worse Cosmic Horror of an ending!

  • @venkkat3863
    @venkkat3863 2 дні тому

    Hey what is the background music for the first part. The piano is beautiful

  • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376
    @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 12 днів тому

    Jeff Smile Jane Princess Laughing Jack and Charlie: Creepy

  • @loganmartin6239
    @loganmartin6239 6 днів тому

    Music is back, fuck yeah

  • @Solouna01
    @Solouna01 11 днів тому

    I remember when I worked two jobs one job was at 6a.m. to 2:00 and I'll go to my second job to 3 to 11 i walked to both and never took any shortcuts

  • @Gabriel-of-YouTube
    @Gabriel-of-YouTube 13 днів тому

    I believe we are on the same mall!

  • @levcath13
    @levcath13 12 днів тому

    WOW❤❤❤

  • @jesuschavez5875
    @jesuschavez5875 12 днів тому

    Aw, crap. Dramcorp has expanded from OmegaMart to OmegaMall.

  • @bizzyizzy9526
    @bizzyizzy9526 13 днів тому +1

    Back rooms the creepy pasta 🤔

  • @dantekinkade8765
    @dantekinkade8765 13 днів тому

    Best way to get out of creepy malls? call the Konami tip hotline.

  • @dirkbruere
    @dirkbruere 6 днів тому

    Well, that was a waste of time

  • @DarkDreamsAndMoonlitNights
    @DarkDreamsAndMoonlitNights 6 днів тому

    My guy is in the Backrooms.

  • @NightfallMyths
    @NightfallMyths 9 днів тому

    Welcome to your new subscriber

  • @noboliNo
    @noboliNo 2 дні тому

    Need more backrooms pastas

  • @dascooter8287
    @dascooter8287 12 днів тому

    Wow. Creepiest thumbnail ever……..😱

  • @notbob_benjamin_real702
    @notbob_benjamin_real702 10 днів тому

    Lettttsssss gooooooooooooo

  • @HashemMasoud
    @HashemMasoud 13 днів тому

    قصة مرعبة!

  • @Vicious0Sephiroth
    @Vicious0Sephiroth 13 днів тому +1

    This is not an insult, but I want to say that the narrator sounds like an npc you would talk to in a dark souls game.

  • @candiceperry9803
    @candiceperry9803 11 днів тому

    The shortcut should be the fastest way to go back home

  • @Veritech127
    @Veritech127 13 днів тому +1

    Never been this early lol

  • @stonedjasonvoorhees5959
    @stonedjasonvoorhees5959 13 днів тому +2

    I ain't no taco man that's for sure

  • @happymonkey420
    @happymonkey420 13 днів тому

    whoop whoop homies

  • @TheFiendishFive
    @TheFiendishFive 13 днів тому +4

    Lazy, amateurish writing. A 'classic' creepypasta in the sense that it reads like every other creepypasta back in 2012

    • @hellb6y
      @hellb6y 13 днів тому +5

      That's kinda the point lol I love that sort of writing it really brings me back they don't all have to be written like books

    • @Flutistno3
      @Flutistno3 12 днів тому +1

      So, you've written better, right? Do share.

    • @TheFiendishFive
      @TheFiendishFive 12 днів тому +2

      @@Flutistno3no, i hsven't written better. But it doesn't prevent me from critiquing the story as much as I want. I don't have to be some prized author to be able to pick out obviously bad writing.

    • @Flutistno3
      @Flutistno3 12 днів тому +1

      @TheFiendishFive suuuuure.

    • @hellb6y
      @hellb6y 11 днів тому +1

      @TheFiendishFive your point there isn't even wrong, the writing just isn't bad lol it's nothing like run of the mill new movie bad writing it's just charming classic creepypasta sloppy writing and I love that stuff

  • @USAngel4u2
    @USAngel4u2 6 днів тому

    Thank you for this! 💗