"Something in this cave is hunting me" Creepypasta

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  • Опубліковано 12 лис 2024

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  • @Basil-Spice
    @Basil-Spice 11 місяців тому +33

    "Thank god for that caveman...He remembers the plan."
    Love that line so much. All he has left is the instincts he can hardly recall. Such good horror to remove every last thing you have at your disposal until you're left with only sheer instinct and hope.

  • @H0RR0R_HANG0VERZ
    @H0RR0R_HANG0VERZ Рік тому +44

    This one’s going on my “FAVORITE HORROR STORIES” List, ASAP!!!
    - It’s got all the things I love:
    Ocean, Caves, Survival, and most importantly…THE HORROR 😳

  • @amandahale3159
    @amandahale3159 Рік тому +50

    This is an amazingly written story! You narrate the emotion SO well! I listen to you regularly, along with a few other pages, and this is one of the best stories I've heard in ages. Thank you so much!!

  • @Kira-sp8bj
    @Kira-sp8bj Рік тому +22

    Really appreciate the frequent long stories. For a few months I’ve listened to plenty of your narrations almost everyday on Spotify and UA-cam but they seem to never run out. I truly admire your decade long dedication to this channel ❤

  • @diver133
    @diver133 Рік тому +20

    Had a feeling this was Christian Wallis. Every time I hear a story on here and think to myself, “oh wow this is a good one,” I check the author and it’s always him

    • @raptorblue193
      @raptorblue193 4 місяці тому

      your pfp disturbed me until i worked out what it was 😂

  • @UndeadGhostGirl
    @UndeadGhostGirl Рік тому +22

    Reminds me of one of Lovecraft's stories. It's about a guy getting lost in a cave and hunted by something.

  • @macromondo8026
    @macromondo8026 Рік тому +17

    Love the way you narrate stories and the fact your ambience music never uses sudden screamers, I can tune into any of your videos while doing stuff knowing I won't have a stupid jumpscare smacked out of nowhere and I really appreciate that.

  • @ashkanr4796
    @ashkanr4796 Рік тому +117

    it was an awesome story. claustrophobic, paranoid, rageful, mystic, and an unexplored deep lore. i hope there is a sequel to it. with the plot of hunted becomes the hunter and probably instead of killing it gets his pound of flesh back!

    • @4460N
      @4460N Рік тому +4

      bros glazing

    • @rishabhyadav3137
      @rishabhyadav3137 Рік тому +2

      Yeah I too wish the protagonist gets back at the monster and tortures him to death

    • @PorkSzoda
      @PorkSzoda 2 місяці тому

      ​@@4460N bro has never heard of a review before

  • @beckigayle1981
    @beckigayle1981 Рік тому +37

    I love your stories and your style of bringing them to life! So excited for another one!

  • @loveinnabag7744
    @loveinnabag7744 Рік тому +39

    I'm claustrophobic & I could feel the panic it was torture I couldn't even fall asleep🥲. You sir are to good at what you do

    • @nemo-x
      @nemo-x 5 місяців тому

      The bad part is that it's not varied. It's just bleak with no mix of emotions.

  • @CieraMychele
    @CieraMychele Рік тому +21

    Lmao I think bro squished the monster by falling on him. Probably broke his fall too. Hilarious, love it

  • @TheJerseyDevil13th
    @TheJerseyDevil13th Рік тому +44

    Hey, Creeps. I'm a huge fan of yours. I've been watching your videos for years and I'll support you forever! Keep being awesome! ✊️

  • @jakebonnett1675
    @jakebonnett1675 9 місяців тому +1

    Oooh, that was a good one. I usually don't like the longer ones because they end up being hard to follow and a bunch of meandering between the start and end. But this one did a really good job having a full story. The end is one that gives you chills up your spine.

  • @thechigirl2498
    @thechigirl2498 Рік тому +10

    Did this story make anyone else think of the movie "The Descent"? I kept picturing scenes from the movie in certain parts lol. Great story, because I loved that movie.

  • @willgrahams8thdog
    @willgrahams8thdog Рік тому +19

    its me, i am hunting the person in the cave

  • @TitaniumAlloyz
    @TitaniumAlloyz 11 місяців тому

    I have used this story to fall asleep every night for the past week. Something about it soothes me, the writing is fantastic.

  • @kristinacable
    @kristinacable Рік тому +6

    This one made me hold my breath. Really great find on this story. Thanks to you and the author

  • @jameswarpath8926
    @jameswarpath8926 Рік тому +9

    With that ending, possibility of a pt2

  • @TiPitSgtBuddy
    @TiPitSgtBuddy Рік тому +7

    Electrifying and viceral.
    So well explained that I pictured the whole story in my mind (lying in the dark at night)
    This would make a better movie then anything released this year.

  • @49watersleeps
    @49watersleeps 6 місяців тому +1

    Truly a great story and narration

  • @7cats2
    @7cats2 8 місяців тому +1

    That was So. Freaking. Good. Great narration! 😊

  • @nathanx2000.
    @nathanx2000. Рік тому +16

    I love being a Lovecraft fan and picking up on small details that the author leaves in the story. To everyone, else the angler fish mouth man symbolism must’ve been “oooo creepy sea deity” but to us I’m sure we all started thinking
    “DAGON DAGON DAGON…THATS TOOOOOTALLY DAGON” XD
    Keep it up man, loved ya narrations for years

  • @EdricLysharae
    @EdricLysharae Рік тому +1

    Congrats! I became so claustrophobic listening to this that I couldn't finish it, and that's high praise. Excellent writing and oration!

  • @jashinninja
    @jashinninja Рік тому +6

    For a little while towards the end. All i could imagine with the anglerfish on the coins. Also the small tunnels. Was the merman from Cabin in the Woods.

  • @rheanonjasmyne
    @rheanonjasmyne Рік тому +2

    PLEASE let this story CONTINUE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EXCELLENT !

  • @SonnyCorleone-tg1ik
    @SonnyCorleone-tg1ik Рік тому +1

    I loved this, extremely well-written and narrated story. Masterfully done-even! Fantastic atmosphere & music! Great fantasy, escapist fare! Love the Fantastic-looking Artwork cover Cave photo too! 4 Stars all around with this story, narration & artwork! KUDOS!

  • @krazedcatzz6188
    @krazedcatzz6188 Рік тому +2

    Great story Christian! Awesome narration Creeps! Love listening day or night!

  • @katrinastovall9398
    @katrinastovall9398 Рік тому +3

    Love it. The end was super awesome.

  • @Prototype10_
    @Prototype10_ Рік тому +1

    This has got to be the best creepypasta I've ever listened to, hats off Mr. Creeps!

  • @dendren1
    @dendren1 Рік тому +3

    Ayyyy hapy to care a vid so early! Love your stuff man, your stories keep me company at work all night

  • @TitaniumAlloyz
    @TitaniumAlloyz 11 місяців тому +1

    This story is so damn good. It is very well written, I love the author's style.

  • @GWERBYCAT
    @GWERBYCAT Рік тому +5

    I usually put these on to sleep but I listened too much and stayed up the whole time now I’m terrified

  • @owenhanisch
    @owenhanisch Рік тому +4

    halfway in i think this would make a really good short film

  • @candancecarmean770
    @candancecarmean770 Рік тому +2

    A new story for my anniversary. Lol just what I love ......... Serious anxiety and shear terror. I can barely tolerate this kind of story, yet they are my favorite. Thanks for the years of entertainment. Truly enjoy your stories and the phenomenal delivery of your perfect narration. Bravo!!!!!

  • @blooBerry371
    @blooBerry371 Рік тому +1

    This was amazing, props to the writer and narrator😊😊😊

  • @RW-289
    @RW-289 Рік тому +2

    Woo got my anxiety going for a bit (not a fan of small spaces). Good story, well read. Thank you!

  • @alexfriedrich-u3p
    @alexfriedrich-u3p Рік тому +6

    Amazing voice from our favorite british narrator!

  • @emmanuelmacias893
    @emmanuelmacias893 Рік тому

    Probably the best story of the year so far, thank you!! Long time fan!!!

  • @14reasons58
    @14reasons58 Рік тому +4

    Dude that was a fucking masterpiece

  • @jhengarcia80
    @jhengarcia80 Рік тому +6

    Anxiety hitting me 😨

  • @libratude9595
    @libratude9595 Рік тому +1

    I felt myself holding my breath 🫁, at the part about being upsidedown and wanting to pass out.

  • @bulldawg4910
    @bulldawg4910 Рік тому +7

    Oh I'd be pissed lol

  • @TrentDaniel-n7v
    @TrentDaniel-n7v Місяць тому +1

    Thanks!

  • @dutchdeagle1945
    @dutchdeagle1945 Рік тому +3

    Amazing story, hope someone writes pt when he goes back and tries to kill him.

  • @timvoigt4383
    @timvoigt4383 Рік тому +4

    The background music adds 2 the eerieness in the narration. Always have background music.

  • @danajones9631
    @danajones9631 Рік тому +1

    That was a great story, the details, the horror, i lve your narration Creeps, thank you again 😳🤯🫶🫶👍💯

  • @kikikungfukakes6639
    @kikikungfukakes6639 Рік тому +1

    Omg a day ago! 😍 my heart is a flutter. Thank you

  • @Meniscus6
    @Meniscus6 Рік тому +2

    Did he go back with a priest armed with a shotgun , 1 lantern and a pistol ? Find out in.....

  • @patron8597
    @patron8597 2 місяці тому

    The claustrophobia was so well written that the monster almost pales in comparison.
    Though the monster part was very good too.

  • @Here_is_Waldo
    @Here_is_Waldo Рік тому +7

    He didn't tell the police about all the clothes down there? Probably could have helped solve a few missing person cases.

  • @teresakirkland995
    @teresakirkland995 Рік тому +1

    Imagine that. For the last couple of days I have been looking and thinking that I needed to hear something from you and BAM here you show up in my feed !! How’s that for manifesting ??

  • @JimmmyRaynor
    @JimmmyRaynor Рік тому +2

    hello from the tops casino in New vegas

  • @jkrenz77
    @jkrenz77 Рік тому

    I never thought I was claustrophobic until I’ve heard tales like these…and til I went to have an MRI. That was feet first, not head in. I always thought I’d love to explore underwater caves. Thank you for allowing me to understand I may not be equipped. 😂

  • @zurreal9783
    @zurreal9783 Рік тому +2

    25:54 with the captions got me to laugh harder then it should😂

  • @Higashikata
    @Higashikata Рік тому +1

    Love this one dude thanks for making my day :D

  • @rygygardens
    @rygygardens Рік тому +3

    Them gold shillings gonna get u in trouble everytime

  • @MiniPandaSkullz
    @MiniPandaSkullz Рік тому +6

    Oh hell yeah, a fresh story just in time for my bedtime routine! :D
    edit: nevermind. didnt sleep ;-;

  • @Gfish17
    @Gfish17 5 місяців тому +1

    I think it's hilarious he found gold and he's thinking in terms of Rent still.
    Home ownership is so hopefully expensive and out of reach that a treasure chest can't get us a house 😂.

  • @TheHoldOfficialChannel
    @TheHoldOfficialChannel Рік тому

    I just watched some videos about FNaF 2 theories, and boy have things changed!!!

  • @Pabloworldwide
    @Pabloworldwide Рік тому +2

    I really love your narrations brother. Thank so, so much for what you do. I don't know if you're aware of what your UA-cam channel does for so many people all around the world but I assure you, you are a true gem amongst stones.
    Thank you and God bless you bro. 🙏🏼

  • @abhinavrajesh2975
    @abhinavrajesh2975 Рік тому +1

    The creature did the buy now pay later scheme

  • @SillyNep
    @SillyNep 8 місяців тому +1

    Monster wants to have another go, he got it on its off day

  • @psynne3283
    @psynne3283 Рік тому +1

    Amazing story. ❤

  • @AHRl
    @AHRl Рік тому

    Ah! I'm so happy! I memorise all the new ones! 🎉

  • @reponsellofthesouth1996
    @reponsellofthesouth1996 Місяць тому

    He is angry not because of the angler entity.
    But his greediness alone brought him there and caused all of it.

  • @moirapledger9153
    @moirapledger9153 Рік тому +2

    Powerful ending

  • @Oriana_leung
    @Oriana_leung Рік тому +1

    4:30 "6 month rent in my hand" Love that.

  • @DustinCarter-v5d
    @DustinCarter-v5d Рік тому +2

    Love your videos mate

  • @hinatahouga
    @hinatahouga 10 місяців тому

    I need more of this

  • @TheStuart-of-Cosby
    @TheStuart-of-Cosby Рік тому +2

    Awesomeness as always CreepsMcPasta. Thanks for another awesome narration my Friend

  • @vincentshadetree
    @vincentshadetree Рік тому +4

    Couple of coins just don't feel worth it, gold or not

  • @stonedjasonvoorhees5959
    @stonedjasonvoorhees5959 Рік тому +5

    I ain't no taco man that's for sure

  • @WetBet
    @WetBet Рік тому +12

    Sorry guys it was just me

  • @Antherix24
    @Antherix24 Рік тому +2

    These stories really help me while I work I love them

  • @k-trashradio5163
    @k-trashradio5163 Рік тому

    even after all this time i still have sweet nightmares listening to your voice..thank you foreverything creeps and to many more 🍻

  • @xyber6
    @xyber6 Рік тому +3

    Were the gold coins real? Or were they just an induced hallucination from the creature?

  • @rogerwilliams977
    @rogerwilliams977 Рік тому

    Best I've heard lately!

  • @somedude2853
    @somedude2853 Рік тому +1

    I should have definitely not listened to this one at 2:30 am, while hanging my wet clothes on a dark hallway that stands between my patio and my garden and has no lightbulbs 😅

  • @rheanonjasmyne
    @rheanonjasmyne Рік тому

    GOD's I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE your voice !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Treasure seekers can't be bothered working for a living !
    Why didn't he try binding his chest with those torn nets ??? Maybe they were torn to shreds ?????

  • @AustinCDavis
    @AustinCDavis Рік тому +2

    Wow, good thing you didn’t turn back in the face of possible death and risk getting your socks wet! That could’ve been embarrassing … to … somebody. Why would that be embarrassing? This chatacter’s logic is impressive.

  • @luciamilcic7682
    @luciamilcic7682 Рік тому

    great!

  • @off-seasonmemes
    @off-seasonmemes Рік тому +3

    Yogi the bear gone rabid

  • @distracted5767
    @distracted5767 Рік тому +1

    Youre doing a lot of stories ,one after the other. Thanks ❤🎉

  • @alemtorsaula
    @alemtorsaula Рік тому +2

    Why wouldn't you climb over the cave or crawl to shore.. urgh sso frustrating

  • @lindseyh8617
    @lindseyh8617 10 місяців тому

    Ok this one was really good

  • @sweettih2715
    @sweettih2715 Рік тому +1

    Had me on the edge of my seat!

  • @Meowmeow.age.6
    @Meowmeow.age.6 Рік тому

    YOU NEED 600M SUBS!!!

  • @Meowmeow.age.6
    @Meowmeow.age.6 Рік тому

    2:19 Did you help the man?

  • @Mad.Edd.702
    @Mad.Edd.702 Рік тому

    This was great

  • @woodsmanthepeasant
    @woodsmanthepeasant Рік тому +3

    omg yes cave horror yeeessssss

  • @Model_118
    @Model_118 Рік тому

    That creature is ducking rude.

  • @o_o8203
    @o_o8203 Рік тому +1

    This one is good

  • @momojr3153
    @momojr3153 Рік тому

    This story makes me nervous and I'm not even there

  • @descree7
    @descree7 Рік тому +1

    amazing... i sweated profusely listening to this in bed

  • @Lilr3ap3r
    @Lilr3ap3r Рік тому

    keep up the good work🙌

  • @scruffy-thejanitor
    @scruffy-thejanitor Рік тому

    3 Places You Can't Go, and the people who went there anyway.

  • @kentworch
    @kentworch Рік тому

    Thank you CreepsMcPasta for the awesome pasta. Definitely a good one.🖤🖤

  • @infamous6283
    @infamous6283 Рік тому +1

    This was a really good story

  • @jasonreynolds183
    @jasonreynolds183 Місяць тому

    Pro tip: if you find a coin with what is clearly a deep one on it, leave it the hell alone.

  • @ericataylor5967
    @ericataylor5967 Рік тому +2

    YESSSSS CREEEPSSS