Her eyes brighter than Sirius They illuminate the deepest part of my soul Sun glazing That warm feeling Feeling safe at home Clearing mind Blinded by Love Reminiscing is what keeps it alive
@@bunny5886 hey hello, im glad you liked it 😊 I didn't think anyone was going to notice my poem let alone get 20 likes😁 but I'll keep you updated when I start posting more
Poetry is for all -- but there are good poems and bad poems out there. You can go make a movie on your phone, it'll still be a movie, just not necessarily a good one. There's a place for all art. Good, bad, indifferent, though we have to dig to find the better stuff sometimes. Have a great day.
@@nathanhassallpoetry That's a whole different debate: what falls within the definition of poetry. Like, is this a poem or just a statement with line breaks? Why or why not? Who's to say what a poem is and what is not? Is it the author or the reader? Lol.
Love is like a medicine, healing our inner core. Releasing untold tension. Holding each other in the rain. Finding yourself from time to time reading romance novels, searching for her name ❤️
Listen to this your preccence has impacted me so deeply I'm convinced if i never i met you i permanently feel something missing Yes we are deeply in love . Devine connected. Big Bright Blue card Ready To Make It Permanent
Here’s mine I know i have anxiety. But i want to blend in with the society . I try to forget my depression. And stop writing poetry for expression. Im in a world where nobody truly cares. Wounded by thoughts no one shares. Not willing to accept but Im sure I’m bipolar Not willing to accept my friends and family’s horror. The sad truth hides behind a fragile smile I can’t even continue fighting for a while. In the night, realities are woken exposing my life which is so broken. The monsters in my mind , so ruthless They continue telling me , I’m useless “Go cry” “Go die” They repeat in my mind. All I know that I was blind. To the truth. That i should die , now, in my youth. Carrying my regrets like a heavy lump, I didn’t hesitate to take that jump.
Wishing to escape the pressures of everyday life! I penned this poem My Sanctuary Located somewhere in between Heaven & Earth Heated to an ambient temperature In earshot of a babbling brook The scent of exotic blooms Permiating my senses Where the days only end To be greeted by a star filled sky Birdsong accompanies the tuneful Rhythmic rustling of leaves on the trees I would happily invite you to visit My little piece of paradise But you are already here! Wishing you Peace, Love & Prosperity
This is BEAUTIFUL GORGEOUS MESSAGE that is Said in this Video!! Sincerely MARY JEAN from NORTH GOSFORD NSW CENTRAL COAST AUSTRALIA 2 SEPTEMBER 23 Saturday early dawn morning. 🥀💋
The embers of the burnt love are still burning Getting me hurt, but I'm still loving it Your name echoes in my ears The piercing words of yours are levitating Your love was a sweet felony It was dangerous, But felt like a melody Loving you was a crime But now who will punish me Now there is nothing left Just my broken heart & me. ~ Whispers of Love & Parting (Composed by me) One spark it took To ignite the fire Now I hate all of the things That I used to admire My sky is now all black None of the stars shine I can get you back Is just a forlorn hope of mine. ~ A Forlorn Hope Love is like a game Which you can never quit Love is like an addiction Which can make you unfit Love is like a sweet venom Which kills you slowly Love is like a bruise Which hurts badly Love is like a labyrinth Which is esoteric and mysterious Love is like playing with fire Which is dangerous. ~ Portrayal of Love Whenever I see you My heart skips a beat Just one eye contact And I'm melted by my burning heart's heat You are always on my mind Everyday I'm lost in your thoughts Whenever I think of talking to you My mind fills up with if's and not's You are the cause of my euphoria Just one look of you lightens up my day We don't even know each other But I still want you to stay This feeling is different You came in my sky like a beautiful dove I don't know what is it Maybe a blossoming love. ~ A Blossoming Love You should love yourselves the way you are No one is perfect Every person in the world has a scar Beauty is not the outer prettiness You should have a beautiful heart The key to happiness Every flower in the world has it's own fragrance and beauty So you don't need to compare yourself With any celebrity You are priceless You are one of a kind One in a million. ~ One In A Million
Of course not missing but a uncontrolled heartache will follow for those who make fake love never could find peace but my prayers for those if you love someone truly never says he or she won't able to do cheat someone some people just comes & go but never left their scars never to remove if you talk with hundreds peoples even they prove to believe you true love but once you bites badly never believed some thers
Awe🫠 this is true because when you are around the person.. You feel complete as if nothing is missing.. except.. well, maybe some more holding hands..🤝🙃🤫😍
yr the best thing in my life the one i dream about,a beautiful lady you make my heart scream and shout,you give my joy in everyway,always so sweet and know what to say,your a blessing from up above, when yr away baby its you im thinking of,you are my queen yr Beautiful in appearance,a breath of fresh air for me to experience, you are my sugar pop gentle kitten,thats why on our marriage certificate your name is written ❤
Whenever it's me and you, Our connection needn't a clue. With the kindness you hold, Never, will it grow old, Everytime we meet, everytime we take seat, Your presence makes my heart's heat You create a sparkling light Outshining the stars of the night In all the eyes I've given gaze, None have shone brighter than yours ablaze. Especially in that smile, For that, I'd run clear over a mile. When we are near I feel no shred of fear With you, I'm as patient as a monk Otherwise, it's as if it had sunk Oh (her name), oh (her name), This poem was written by yours truly. I feel like some of the words are a bit out of place. If there is improvements please tell me.
What is love, theres so many meanings Is it that person on ur mind or Is it what im feeling Enlightened nd embraced Ik the meaning of love cause with u all my fears were faced😊
Why do I miss I guy a barely even know It was so long ago When we where friends Before Covid Before I moved Everything happend so soon Then we forgot The memories locked in a box At the bottom of the ocean But in 4th grade I saw you I felt a bubbling in my chest I don’t need to explain the rest I’m in love with a guy I barely know I guy I used to treat as a brother More than any other Boy I knew We were together like glue I really miss you Wow How have I remembered this much Your dark curls that sent me in a whirl Dark eyes full of surprise Your face as pretty as sunset Your skin milk chocolate Just a little bit taller than me It’s just that I want you for me But I can’t have him No I can’t He lives an hour away And we haven’t talked in 4 years 4 years of missed opportunities Friendships Love Everything I stated above I miss him Does he miss me Does he wanna kiss me Does he wanna be my bestie Like he was in kindergarten When we all just started Like he was in first grade When the world almost stopped Oh Amari, I want to know you again But more than a brother More than a friend More like a boyfriend So yes I do miss you And I really wanna kiss you By Me! Don’t copyright and yes it’s suppose to be cringy I’m in middle school don’t judge pls
I made a poem about my feelings … -U played with my hair and said they were so beautiful U patted my head everytime i said dont mess my hair U patted my head everytime u hugged me U dabbed my hand evertime i saw u U dabbed my hand and hold it for a bit after A high-five u turned it into a handshake holing it like i was sm special while looking deep into my eyes without saying anything just smiling U put ur hand over my eyes so i didnt look at those cuples kissing U smile everytime u see me U touch my shoulders and pull me close to u U make me smile U make me laught U make me feel Like someone else Someone with no problems Sm who always laughs and its never sad U make me laught even when im crying U make my day even when its really bad Just seeing u Makes me feel The types of feels I never did But everything changes when i walk with her Was i never here Or was she always there Did u ever liked me Or was i just a friend Am i just to obbesed with u Or did u made me feel this way Did u do that on purpose Or u just didn’t really care Is it my problem Or is it yours Did it meant something when u smiled and laught hold me hand and hug me looking deep into my eyes as they say everything I ever wanted is right In front of me Do u really like me Or it’s just me That thinks of u every single day I really thought about it How does it feel to fall for someone so hard that u can never get up Now I finally understand Because of u Just try to love me Like I do Even if it’s fake I don’t really care As long as I’m with u But not as just a friend
I’m supposed to love you but I really don’t know You love was so sweet but now it turned cold I tried to escape ya I tried to run But the memories we had shone like the sun Conflicted I am where to go On this road my life turns slow Conflicted I am his love gone cold Ran to his door and no body’s home
And again , I , lost all the trust which now looks like an iron piece of rust And here I go as I lose all my hope that maybe , someone miraculous would show up Yes I'm scared because I would lose the person I cared . It would be a lie to tell that I want to live but I promise I'm trying hard to be alive . Yes it was all sadness , which was hidden under my madness , yet here I am hoping to live after I die
My first gf and bestfriend same person was killed in 2017 I can't love anyone else ever I fucking hate myself for blaming myself and physically abusing myself no one is going to come in to my life and be as awesome as she was
You should give someone else a chance. To love you again.. you never can tell what great plans the universe holds for you. You might just get your spark back. But you don’t give love a chance you’ll never know 🫶🥺
O doves of the lush trees, what happened to you that makes you coo? Be know that you coo for only a small part of my longing. You are not the only one who experiences sorrow! I have been raising my sorrow since childhood. My sorrow has become like me-it loves, desires, and yearns. Like me, it has started to write poetry. I taught it to smoke, and now it smokes from my body when its cigarette pack is empty
Her eyes brighter than Sirius
They illuminate the deepest part of my soul
Sun glazing
That warm feeling
Feeling safe at home
Clearing mind
Blinded by Love
Reminiscing is what keeps it alive
Omg that was sooo good!!
@@poetrybooth thank you 😊
Where can i read more of your poems?
@@bunny5886 hey hello, im glad you liked it 😊 I didn't think anyone was going to notice my poem let alone get 20 likes😁 but I'll keep you updated when I start posting more
Good job buddy, good.
Teach me.
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I liked my own comment
Because no one else wanted to
Damn ❤😂
👏👏👏
❤❤
Lol
I'm amazed at what passes for poetry these days.
me too
Me too
Me too
Poetry is for all -- but there are good poems and bad poems out there. You can go make a movie on your phone, it'll still be a movie, just not necessarily a good one. There's a place for all art. Good, bad, indifferent, though we have to dig to find the better stuff sometimes. Have a great day.
@@nathanhassallpoetry That's a whole different debate: what falls within the definition of poetry.
Like, is
this
a
poem
or
just
a statement
with
line
breaks?
Why or why not? Who's to say what a poem is and what is not? Is it the author or the reader? Lol.
Love is like a medicine, healing our inner core. Releasing untold tension. Holding each other in the rain. Finding yourself from time to time reading romance novels, searching for her name ❤️
If I impacted you, then there is never anything you can miss.
"though the pain of the sharp needles pierced through the skin of my legs there was nothing so bittersweet than her touch"
Listen to this your preccence has impacted me so deeply I'm convinced if i never i met you i permanently feel something missing
Yes we are deeply in love . Devine connected. Big Bright Blue card Ready To Make It Permanent
Here’s mine
I know i have anxiety.
But i want to blend in with the society .
I try to forget my depression.
And stop writing poetry for expression.
Im in a world where nobody truly cares.
Wounded by thoughts no one shares.
Not willing to accept but Im sure I’m bipolar
Not willing to accept my friends and family’s horror.
The sad truth hides behind a fragile smile
I can’t even continue fighting for a while.
In the night, realities are woken
exposing my life which is so broken.
The monsters in my mind , so ruthless
They continue telling me , I’m useless
“Go cry”
“Go die”
They repeat in my mind.
All I know that I was blind.
To the truth.
That i should die , now, in my youth.
Carrying my regrets like a heavy lump, I didn’t hesitate to take that jump.
Wishing to escape the pressures of everyday life!
I penned this poem
My Sanctuary
Located somewhere in between Heaven & Earth
Heated to an ambient temperature
In earshot of a babbling brook
The scent of exotic blooms Permiating my senses
Where the days only end
To be greeted by a star filled sky
Birdsong accompanies the tuneful
Rhythmic rustling of leaves on the trees
I would happily invite you to visit
My little piece of paradise
But you are already here!
Wishing you Peace, Love & Prosperity
Omg that's beautiful please continue writing!!!!! 😍❤
For more like this! Please press the dinosaurs head!!!!
@@theprehistoricpoet okay!!!
Thank you for sharing.
@@nathanhassallpoetry
Thank you for taking the time to both read and comment on my poem.
It is genuinely appreciated.
Regards
David 🦖🦋
This is BEAUTIFUL GORGEOUS MESSAGE that is Said in this Video!! Sincerely MARY JEAN from NORTH GOSFORD NSW CENTRAL COAST AUSTRALIA 2 SEPTEMBER 23 Saturday early dawn morning. 🥀💋
Want more poems like these🤩
If u never had what would have impacted you, u never known u would miss it.
The embers of the burnt love are still burning
Getting me hurt, but I'm still loving it
Your name echoes in my ears
The piercing words of yours are levitating
Your love was a sweet felony
It was dangerous,
But felt like a melody
Loving you was a crime
But now who will punish me
Now there is nothing left
Just my broken heart & me.
~ Whispers of Love & Parting (Composed by me)
One spark it took
To ignite the fire
Now I hate all of the things
That I used to admire
My sky is now all black
None of the stars shine
I can get you back
Is just a forlorn hope of mine.
~ A Forlorn Hope
Love is like a game
Which you can never quit
Love is like an addiction
Which can make you unfit
Love is like a sweet venom
Which kills you slowly
Love is like a bruise
Which hurts badly
Love is like a labyrinth
Which is esoteric and mysterious
Love is like playing with fire
Which is dangerous.
~ Portrayal of Love
Whenever I see you
My heart skips a beat
Just one eye contact
And I'm melted by my burning heart's heat
You are always on my mind
Everyday I'm lost in your thoughts
Whenever I think of talking to you
My mind fills up with if's and not's
You are the cause of my euphoria
Just one look of you lightens up my day
We don't even know each other
But I still want you to stay
This feeling is different
You came in my sky like a beautiful dove
I don't know what is it
Maybe a blossoming love.
~ A Blossoming Love
You should love yourselves the way you are
No one is perfect
Every person in the world has a scar
Beauty is not the outer prettiness
You should have a beautiful heart
The key to happiness
Every flower in the world has it's own fragrance and beauty
So you don't need to compare yourself
With any celebrity
You are priceless
You are one of a kind
One in a million.
~ One In A Million
That was really good.. ❤
I can feel it..
@@anshukumari8032 Thanks, I have written some more poems..would u like to see them?
@@t.1vsak_ss yess..
Why not..
@@t.1vsak_ssyess..
Of course...❤
@@t.1vsak_ss yess of course....
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The realization that you met, feel in love with and then out of love with the one you saw as your soul mate....
I am sure the presence is beautiful but nothing is as indecribable yet beautiful as the pain of missing you.
Omg I really like those meaning ful words in there and they are the most sweetest ones that I have ever ever seen and read and know
I agree i love that part where she says "I'm convinced that if i never met u i would permanently feel something missing"
I searched..and waited..I looked a little more..at the moment I saw you..that void disappeared...❤
So beautiful! ❤
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Missing..yes
But to sit and watch the suffering
Is not the kind of love seeking.❤
Of course not missing but a uncontrolled heartache will follow for those who make fake love never could find peace but my prayers for those if you love someone truly never says he or she won't able to do cheat someone some people just comes & go but never left their scars never to remove if you talk with hundreds peoples even they prove to believe you true love but once you bites badly never believed some thers
Beautiful message, thank you ❤️🙏🏻
Awe🫠 this is true because when you are around the person.. You feel complete as if nothing is missing.. except.. well, maybe some more holding hands..🤝🙃🤫😍
“I love you more than salt”
Words painted in poetry.. best poetry book by diya
That's beautiful! I've always told you bh I will love you forever even if you broke my heart which you have❤❤❤
LIFE IS NOT A BED OF ROSES
THERE IS SOMETHING ELSE OTHER THAN MOHABBAT
THANKS
AMEN
I STILL LOVE YOU
AND KEEP ON LOVING YOU TILL ETERNITY
yr the best thing in my life the one i dream about,a beautiful lady you make my heart scream and shout,you give my joy in everyway,always so sweet and know what to say,your a blessing from up above, when yr away baby its you im thinking of,you are my queen yr Beautiful in appearance,a breath of fresh air for me to experience, you are my sugar pop gentle kitten,thats why on our marriage certificate your name is written ❤
Good start ❤ where’s the rest…
For two seconds, eyes meet .
Words would take a whole life ,
But in those two seconds, eyes could speak.
~Naina
My relationship is just poems so thanks for the help
Yes I’m in love with
Whenever it's me and you,
Our connection needn't a clue.
With the kindness you hold,
Never, will it grow old,
Everytime we meet, everytime we take seat,
Your presence makes my heart's heat
You create a sparkling light
Outshining the stars of the night
In all the eyes I've given gaze,
None have shone brighter than yours ablaze.
Especially in that smile,
For that, I'd run clear over a mile.
When we are near
I feel no shred of fear
With you, I'm as patient as a monk
Otherwise, it's as if it had sunk
Oh (her name), oh (her name),
This poem was written by yours truly.
I feel like some of the words are a bit out of place. If there is improvements please tell me.
❤
This is so beautiful, ❤. I love what came out of your heart, ❤ !!!
Love this!!
What is love, theres so
many meanings
Is it that person on ur mind or
Is it what im feeling
Enlightened nd embraced
Ik the meaning of love cause with u all my fears were faced😊
That’s beautiful :(
Yes
True.....the same way I feel 😌 ❤❤
Why do I miss I guy a barely even know
It was so long ago
When we where friends
Before Covid
Before I moved
Everything happend so soon
Then we forgot
The memories locked in a box
At the bottom of the ocean
But in 4th grade
I saw you
I felt a bubbling in my chest
I don’t need to explain the rest
I’m in love with a guy I barely know
I guy I used to treat as a brother
More than any other
Boy
I knew
We were together like glue
I really miss you
Wow
How have I remembered this much
Your dark curls that sent me in a whirl
Dark eyes full of surprise
Your face as pretty as sunset
Your skin milk chocolate
Just a little bit taller than me
It’s just that
I want you for me
But I can’t have him
No I can’t
He lives an hour away
And we haven’t talked in 4 years
4 years of missed opportunities
Friendships
Love
Everything I stated above
I miss him
Does he miss me
Does he wanna kiss me
Does he wanna be my bestie
Like he was in kindergarten
When we all just started
Like he was in first grade
When the world almost stopped
Oh Amari, I want to know you again
But more than a brother
More than a friend
More like a boyfriend
So yes I do miss you
And I really wanna kiss you
By Me!
Don’t copyright and yes it’s suppose to be cringy I’m in middle school don’t judge pls
You're the missing piece in my rose heart ❤
BLESSINGS LUV...💜🌹💜🌹💜
U know Who U R...💌💌💌
Beautiful
Beautiful ❤
I made a poem about my feelings
…
-U played with my hair and said they were so beautiful
U patted my head everytime i said dont mess my hair
U patted my head everytime u hugged me
U dabbed my hand evertime i saw u
U dabbed my hand and hold it for a bit after
A high-five u turned it into a handshake holing it like i was sm special while looking deep into my eyes without saying anything just smiling
U put ur hand over my eyes so i didnt look at those cuples kissing
U smile everytime u see me
U touch my shoulders and pull me close to u
U make me smile
U make me laught
U make me feel
Like someone else
Someone with no problems
Sm who always laughs and its never sad
U make me laught even when im crying
U make my day even when its really bad
Just seeing u
Makes me feel
The types of feels
I never did
But everything changes when i walk with her
Was i never here
Or was she always there
Did u ever liked me
Or was i just a friend
Am i just to obbesed with u
Or did u made me feel this way
Did u do that on purpose
Or u just didn’t really care
Is it my problem
Or is it yours
Did it meant something when u smiled and laught hold me hand and hug me looking deep into my eyes as they say everything I ever wanted is right In front of me
Do u really like me
Or it’s just me
That thinks of u every single day
I really thought about it
How does it feel to fall for someone so hard that u can never get up
Now I finally understand
Because of u
Just try to love me
Like I do
Even if it’s fake
I don’t really care
As long as I’m with u
But not as just a friend
It's great! 😊
@@Shreyal-_-l thank you so much❤️❤️❤️😭😭😭
no but why did i almost cry
@@anveshajha-p1z the middle part of the poem its really deep
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Roses 🌹 are Red ♥️ Watches are Gold 🪙 Get on your Knees 🦵 and do what you told 😍
Beautifully written📝
Beautiful ❤️❤️
You are great.
I have also started publishing poem in my channel. But I am not ready to recite it 😅
❤
Precious 😊
Woow nice❤
Love it
I LOVE YOU so much and my place is side you now and forever. Lovely ♥️💘💓
Yes..❗❗❤️😍😘🥰💞
Beautiful ❤️
i hope so
🌹♥️ just he isn't with me . But I'm in love with him.😢
Atp I don't know what not who I'm inlove with? Poetry maybe? I think I'm in love with poetry.
Book name nd writer???
Love rescue us😊❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😊
❤❤aw I'm so in love
YOUR MIND IS YOUR MIND (C)2006
awesome
I was having a difficult day and my bf sent this to me I’m much happier then I was an hour ago
Yes, true! 💞🌹
ERES UN AMOR TÉ AMÓ MUCHÍSIMO MÍ LEÓN SHAPIRO TU ERES MI VIDA ❤ LA VIDA PARA MI LLA NO ES IGUAL SIN TI MI VIDA NO TIENE SENTIDO❤ ❤️💞💞💓💞💞💓
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Woww I really really like this so so much and those words they are so so beautiful and amazing and inspiring
Truth
Book name?
Love has four letters, You have three. Future has six and that’s with “You n me”
I feel like this after meeting the nicest guy on earth
I believe this I love my soulmate listening to this
I’m supposed to love you but I really don’t know
You love was so sweet but now it turned cold
I tried to escape ya I tried to run
But the memories we had shone like the sun
Conflicted I am where to go
On this road my life turns slow
Conflicted I am his love gone cold
Ran to his door and no body’s home
Awwww BABE 💞
And again , I , lost all the trust which now looks like an iron piece of rust
And here I go as I lose all my hope that maybe , someone miraculous would show up
Yes I'm scared because I would lose the person I cared . It would be a lie to tell that I want to live but I promise I'm trying hard to be alive .
Yes it was all sadness , which was hidden under my madness , yet here I am hoping to live after I die
Beautiful..✨🌟🦉🦅
If this is poetry, I'm Shakespeare.
My first gf and bestfriend same person was killed in 2017 I can't love anyone else ever I fucking hate myself for blaming myself and physically abusing myself no one is going to come in to my life and be as awesome as she was
You should give someone else a chance. To love you again.. you never can tell what great plans the universe holds for you.
You might just get your spark back.
But you don’t give love a chance you’ll never know 🫶🥺
I love you so much
I'm so nervous to say this to my girlfriend even though this is true😅😅
But now I met him and he’s moving away so that missing feeling I got anyway.
O doves of the lush trees, what happened to you that makes you coo? Be know that you coo for only a small part of my longing. You are not the only one who experiences sorrow! I have been raising my sorrow since childhood. My sorrow has become like me-it loves, desires, and yearns. Like me, it has started to write poetry. I taught it to smoke, and now it smokes from my body when its cigarette pack is empty
I claim a positive amen❤❤😂😂😂😂
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I am Really curious about is poetry also available in English but now i can say our urdu and hindi poetry are far better than english poetry
😊🤗💕❤👌
Name of the song?
Tole,,Rose,🌹🌹🌹
Thx
beautiful poem 💖 ❤️ 💕
Si nice! Btw...can I use this to my vid? Please. 🙏
Wow
🫶
Our God,Power ful Angels,
Every things help me thank u y so much Ammen',Buddha
My name is Satanar Shin.
Please I can't listing thanks thanks
So inspiring
🙏
If this shit is called "poetry" then I'm Tom cruise
whats the song
So beautiful
Thank you so much
is this the Queso~ girl?