Her eyes brighter than Sirius They illuminate the deepest part of my soul Sun glazing That warm feeling Feeling safe at home Clearing mind Blinded by Love Reminiscing is what keeps it alive
@@bunny5886 hey hello, im glad you liked it 😊 I didn't think anyone was going to notice my poem let alone get 20 likes😁 but I'll keep you updated when I start posting more
Poetry is for all -- but there are good poems and bad poems out there. You can go make a movie on your phone, it'll still be a movie, just not necessarily a good one. There's a place for all art. Good, bad, indifferent, though we have to dig to find the better stuff sometimes. Have a great day.
@@nathanhassallpoetry That's a whole different debate: what falls within the definition of poetry. Like, is this a poem or just a statement with line breaks? Why or why not? Who's to say what a poem is and what is not? Is it the author or the reader? Lol.
Here’s mine I know i have anxiety. But i want to blend in with the society . I try to forget my depression. And stop writing poetry for expression. Im in a world where nobody truly cares. Wounded by thoughts no one shares. Not willing to accept but Im sure I’m bipolar Not willing to accept my friends and family’s horror. The sad truth hides behind a fragile smile I can’t even continue fighting for a while. In the night, realities are woken exposing my life which is so broken. The monsters in my mind , so ruthless They continue telling me , I’m useless “Go cry” “Go die” They repeat in my mind. All I know that I was blind. To the truth. That i should die , now, in my youth. Carrying my regrets like a heavy lump, I didn’t hesitate to take that jump.
Are u kidding me?? This is so great. Especially the contrast where-''At nights,my realities are woken exposing my life which is so broken.'' And I also love "wounded by thoughts that no one shares." I m stealing these for my poetry. You are awesome. Never stop writing.(:
I am actually feeling this at the moment, I have not found my person yet. I thought I did but it didnt workout in the past And now I always have the feeling that somethings missing from my life, having this hole inside my heart.
The wind blows gently and the world become silent on her arrival. My heart starts dancing, welcoming its only queen and she blesses my unworthy existence with her graceful presence.
She's a work of art . Meticulously sculpted each part. With beauty of the deep blue ocean her eyes shine. .ooh when she looks at me isn't she divine? The twisted locks if her tangled hair Glowing in the moonlightflowing behind her
Love is like a medicine, healing our inner core. Releasing untold tension. Holding each other in the rain. Finding yourself from time to time reading romance novels, searching for her name ❤️
Seeing you, Being with you. Its everything, I'll choose you without thinking. Its you who led me to the light, Its you whom i never want to fight. I love you, I really do. (i made this on the spot so its not good)
This is BEAUTIFUL GORGEOUS MESSAGE that is Said in this Video!! Sincerely MARY JEAN from NORTH GOSFORD NSW CENTRAL COAST AUSTRALIA 2 SEPTEMBER 23 Saturday early dawn morning. 🥀💋
I am so in love with my friend.we share every thing together.there is not a day that he leave me out of his life.he is more then a friend, he is my life partner. My lover.the piece of my heart that was missing.he has the key to unlock ,it I have prayed to get out of some thing old for something knew.he is the something that's knew I hope we grow old and gray. Together and have a life full of abundance. And love.❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Listen to this your preccence has impacted me so deeply I'm convinced if i never i met you i permanently feel something missing Yes we are deeply in love . Devine connected. Big Bright Blue card Ready To Make It Permanent
Wishing to escape the pressures of everyday life! I penned this poem My Sanctuary Located somewhere in between Heaven & Earth Heated to an ambient temperature In earshot of a babbling brook The scent of exotic blooms Permiating my senses Where the days only end To be greeted by a star filled sky Birdsong accompanies the tuneful Rhythmic rustling of leaves on the trees I would happily invite you to visit My little piece of paradise But you are already here! Wishing you Peace, Love & Prosperity
Whenever it's me and you, Our connection needn't a clue. With the kindness you hold, Never, will it grow old, Everytime we meet, everytime we take seat, Your presence makes my heart's heat In all the eyes I've given gaze, None have shone brighter than yours ablaze. You create a sparkling light, Outshining the stars of the night. Especially in that smile, For that, I'd run clear over a mile. When we are near I feel no shred of fear With you, I'm as patient as a monk Otherwise, it's as if it had sunk Oh (her name), oh (her name), This poem was written by yours truly. I feel like some of the words are a bit out of place. If there is improvements please tell me.
This isn’t about love but it’s been marinating in my head sooo His hands Large, Calloused, Close around her throat In an act of impulse It used to be friendly Sexual at times But now, It was different. His hands closed tighter And tighter And tighter Her eyes opened wide She retched She clawed She gasped Her brain stuggling, Hoping, Grasping Every memory In hopes Of survival. But it’s desperate tactics Came to no avail And as he withdrew her final breath, He’d realized what He’d done.
I tell myself not to like him but i guess feelings dont work that way, the way we always manage to make eye contact in a crowded room is giving me false hope he feels what i do. I love him so much that i can't say anything to risk our friendship, the closest thing i'll have to a relationship with him.
Awe🫠 this is true because when you are around the person.. You feel complete as if nothing is missing.. except.. well, maybe some more holding hands..🤝🙃🤫😍
Love is a big word if you choose a person and when that person supposedly Loves You Back can you get hurt because they lie to you all the time and when your heart is broken it is broken I've been looking for love for 9 years and then I find somebody and all she can do is lie to me I buy stuff I treat you like gold and everything else but she continues to lie to me everyday it hurts when somebody breaks your heart you're right when you find somebody that you love you cherish them for all your life and everything
What is love, theres so many meanings Is it that person on ur mind or Is it what im feeling Enlightened nd embraced Ik the meaning of love cause with u all my fears were faced😊
Why do I miss I guy a barely even know It was so long ago When we where friends Before Covid Before I moved Everything happend so soon Then we forgot The memories locked in a box At the bottom of the ocean But in 4th grade I saw you I felt a bubbling in my chest I don’t need to explain the rest I’m in love with a guy I barely know I guy I used to treat as a brother More than any other Boy I knew We were together like glue I really miss you Wow How have I remembered this much Your dark curls that sent me in a whirl Dark eyes full of surprise Your face as pretty as sunset Your skin milk chocolate Just a little bit taller than me It’s just that I want you for me But I can’t have him No I can’t He lives an hour away And we haven’t talked in 4 years 4 years of missed opportunities Friendships Love Everything I stated above I miss him Does he miss me Does he wanna kiss me Does he wanna be my bestie Like he was in kindergarten When we all just started Like he was in first grade When the world almost stopped Oh Amari, I want to know you again But more than a brother More than a friend More like a boyfriend So yes I do miss you And I really wanna kiss you By Me! Don’t copyright and yes it’s suppose to be cringy I’m in middle school don’t judge pls
I made a poem about my feelings … -U played with my hair and said they were so beautiful U patted my head everytime i said dont mess my hair U patted my head everytime u hugged me U dabbed my hand evertime i saw u U dabbed my hand and hold it for a bit after A high-five u turned it into a handshake holing it like i was sm special while looking deep into my eyes without saying anything just smiling U put ur hand over my eyes so i didnt look at those cuples kissing U smile everytime u see me U touch my shoulders and pull me close to u U make me smile U make me laught U make me feel Like someone else Someone with no problems Sm who always laughs and its never sad U make me laught even when im crying U make my day even when its really bad Just seeing u Makes me feel The types of feels I never did But everything changes when i walk with her Was i never here Or was she always there Did u ever liked me Or was i just a friend Am i just to obbesed with u Or did u made me feel this way Did u do that on purpose Or u just didn’t really care Is it my problem Or is it yours Did it meant something when u smiled and laught hold me hand and hug me looking deep into my eyes as they say everything I ever wanted is right In front of me Do u really like me Or it’s just me That thinks of u every single day I really thought about it How does it feel to fall for someone so hard that u can never get up Now I finally understand Because of u Just try to love me Like I do Even if it’s fake I don’t really care As long as I’m with u But not as just a friend
yr the best thing in my life the one i dream about,a beautiful lady you make my heart scream and shout,you give my joy in everyway,always so sweet and know what to say,your a blessing from up above, when yr away baby its you im thinking of,you are my queen yr Beautiful in appearance,a breath of fresh air for me to experience, you are my sugar pop gentle kitten,thats why on our marriage certificate your name is written ❤
Of course not missing but a uncontrolled heartache will follow for those who make fake love never could find peace but my prayers for those if you love someone truly never says he or she won't able to do cheat someone some people just comes & go but never left their scars never to remove if you talk with hundreds peoples even they prove to believe you true love but once you bites badly never believed some thers
That’s beautiful ❤ I’m working on getting a poetry book published right now, I only have one poem published on my channel right now but I’ll be publishing more soon 😊
Her eyes brighter than Sirius
They illuminate the deepest part of my soul
Sun glazing
That warm feeling
Feeling safe at home
Clearing mind
Blinded by Love
Reminiscing is what keeps it alive
Omg that was sooo good!!
@@poetrybooth thank you 😊
Where can i read more of your poems?
@@bunny5886 hey hello, im glad you liked it 😊 I didn't think anyone was going to notice my poem let alone get 20 likes😁 but I'll keep you updated when I start posting more
Good job buddy, good.
Teach me.
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I liked my own comment
Because no one else wanted to
Damn ❤😂
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Lol
😂❤❤❤❤❤
Blessed are the souls who choose love every single day 💑💕✨
I'm amazed at what passes for poetry these days.
me too
Me too
Me too
Poetry is for all -- but there are good poems and bad poems out there. You can go make a movie on your phone, it'll still be a movie, just not necessarily a good one. There's a place for all art. Good, bad, indifferent, though we have to dig to find the better stuff sometimes. Have a great day.
@@nathanhassallpoetry That's a whole different debate: what falls within the definition of poetry.
Like, is
this
a
poem
or
just
a statement
with
line
breaks?
Why or why not? Who's to say what a poem is and what is not? Is it the author or the reader? Lol.
Here’s mine
I know i have anxiety.
But i want to blend in with the society .
I try to forget my depression.
And stop writing poetry for expression.
Im in a world where nobody truly cares.
Wounded by thoughts no one shares.
Not willing to accept but Im sure I’m bipolar
Not willing to accept my friends and family’s horror.
The sad truth hides behind a fragile smile
I can’t even continue fighting for a while.
In the night, realities are woken
exposing my life which is so broken.
The monsters in my mind , so ruthless
They continue telling me , I’m useless
“Go cry”
“Go die”
They repeat in my mind.
All I know that I was blind.
To the truth.
That i should die , now, in my youth.
Carrying my regrets like a heavy lump, I didn’t hesitate to take that jump.
Are u kidding me?? This is so great. Especially the contrast where-''At nights,my realities are woken exposing my life which is so broken.'' And I also love "wounded by thoughts that no one shares." I m stealing these for my poetry. You are awesome. Never stop writing.(:
Just wow!!! I was especially amazed at how similar our writing styles are!!
@Joy-ej1tl omg , i didnt see this , thank youuuuu
@@RuthMarkos-wd3wu💜
I don't want you to live life with something missing,I want to be that presence,that will make your life whole.❤
I am actually feeling this at the moment, I have not found my person yet. I thought I did but it didnt workout in the past
And now I always have the feeling that somethings missing from my life, having this hole inside my heart.
WOW WOW WOW YOU REALLY REALLY ARE SO ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL AND SO SO STUNNING ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
It's beautiful and the words are so deep.
The wind blows gently and the world become silent on her arrival. My heart starts dancing, welcoming its only queen and she blesses my unworthy existence with her graceful presence.
I love your poems 💕 introvert❤😘😘😘😘😘
She's a work of art .
Meticulously sculpted each part.
With beauty of the deep blue ocean her eyes shine.
.ooh when she looks at me isn't she divine?
The twisted locks if her tangled hair
Glowing in the moonlightflowing behind her
"though the pain of the sharp needles pierced through the skin of my legs there was nothing so bittersweet than her touch"
I’m crying to that 😊
Love is like a medicine, healing our inner core. Releasing untold tension. Holding each other in the rain. Finding yourself from time to time reading romance novels, searching for her name ❤️
Want more poems like these🤩
Seeing you,
Being with you.
Its everything,
I'll choose you without thinking.
Its you who led me to the light,
Its you whom i never want to fight.
I love you,
I really do.
(i made this on the spot so its not good)
A good and brave start!
Looking forward to your next one.
Just take a little more time and let the words come naturally from your heart❤
Wow! Nice rose Wth real love❤
Love that one so much
This is BEAUTIFUL GORGEOUS MESSAGE that is Said in this Video!! Sincerely MARY JEAN from NORTH GOSFORD NSW CENTRAL COAST AUSTRALIA 2 SEPTEMBER 23 Saturday early dawn morning. 🥀💋
🎉❤
Love this. I recently pubslihsed my own poetry book. Hoping to connect with people x
Omg I really like those meaning ful words in there and they are the most sweetest ones that I have ever ever seen and read and know
I agree i love that part where she says "I'm convinced that if i never met u i would permanently feel something missing"
Beautiful message, thank you ❤️🙏🏻
I am so in love with my friend.we share every thing together.there is not a day that he leave me out of his life.he is more then a friend, he is my life partner. My lover.the piece of my heart that was missing.he has the key to unlock ,it I have prayed to get out of some thing old for something knew.he is the something that's knew I hope we grow old and gray. Together and have a life full of abundance. And love.❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Listen to this your preccence has impacted me so deeply I'm convinced if i never i met you i permanently feel something missing
Yes we are deeply in love . Devine connected. Big Bright Blue card Ready To Make It Permanent
Woow nice❤
I searched..and waited..I looked a little more..at the moment I saw you..that void disappeared...❤
So beautiful! ❤
❤❤❤
Missing..yes
But to sit and watch the suffering
Is not the kind of love seeking.❤
Beautiful ❤
Beautiful ❤️❤️
That's beautiful! I've always told you bh I will love you forever even if you broke my heart which you have❤❤❤
The realization that you met, feel in love with and then out of love with the one you saw as your soul mate....
Yes I’ve had this epiphany too but then again I also felt that if I never met then maybe I wouldn’t feel the heartbreak either 💔
Wishing to escape the pressures of everyday life!
I penned this poem
My Sanctuary
Located somewhere in between Heaven & Earth
Heated to an ambient temperature
In earshot of a babbling brook
The scent of exotic blooms Permiating my senses
Where the days only end
To be greeted by a star filled sky
Birdsong accompanies the tuneful
Rhythmic rustling of leaves on the trees
I would happily invite you to visit
My little piece of paradise
But you are already here!
Wishing you Peace, Love & Prosperity
Omg that's beautiful please continue writing!!!!! 😍❤
For more like this! Please press the dinosaurs head!!!!
@@theprehistoricpoet okay!!!
Thank you for sharing.
@@nathanhassallpoetry
Thank you for taking the time to both read and comment on my poem.
It is genuinely appreciated.
Regards
David 🦖🦋
This is so beautiful, ❤. I love what came out of your heart, ❤ !!!
Whenever it's me and you,
Our connection needn't a clue.
With the kindness you hold,
Never, will it grow old,
Everytime we meet, everytime we take seat,
Your presence makes my heart's heat
In all the eyes I've given gaze,
None have shone brighter than yours ablaze.
You create a sparkling light,
Outshining the stars of the night.
Especially in that smile,
For that, I'd run clear over a mile.
When we are near
I feel no shred of fear
With you, I'm as patient as a monk
Otherwise, it's as if it had sunk
Oh (her name), oh (her name),
This poem was written by yours truly.
I feel like some of the words are a bit out of place. If there is improvements please tell me.
❤
Beautiful..✨🌟🦉🦅
BLESSINGS LUV...💜🌹💜🌹💜
U know Who U R...💌💌💌
Awwww BABE 💞
This isn’t about love but it’s been marinating in my head sooo
His hands
Large,
Calloused,
Close around her throat
In an act of impulse
It used to be friendly
Sexual at times
But now,
It was different.
His hands closed tighter
And tighter
And tighter
Her eyes opened wide
She retched
She clawed
She gasped
Her brain stuggling,
Hoping,
Grasping
Every memory
In hopes
Of survival.
But it’s desperate tactics
Came to no avail
And as he withdrew her final breath,
He’d realized what
He’d done.
Yes..❗❗❤️😍😘🥰💞
True.....the same way I feel 😌 ❤❤
❤❤❤ I love you so much my handsome man James 💋💋💋💋❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤️ ❤❤❤❤❤❤ Forever ❤️❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Beautifully written📝
Love this!!
❤❤aw I'm so in love
Precious 😊
Love it
I'm in love!! But that's all I'll ever be!!!!
I just hope you have found someone to return your love to you❤
Beautiful
You are great.
I have also started publishing poem in my channel. But I am not ready to recite it 😅
My relationship is just poems so thanks for the help
Beautiful ❤️
Good start ❤ where’s the rest…
THANK YOU
I tell myself not to like him but i guess feelings dont work that way, the way we always manage to make eye contact in a crowded room is giving me false hope he feels what i do. I love him so much that i can't say anything to risk our friendship, the closest thing i'll have to a relationship with him.
Awe🫠 this is true because when you are around the person.. You feel complete as if nothing is missing.. except.. well, maybe some more holding hands..🤝🙃🤫😍
Yes, true! 💞🌹
awesome
🌹♥️ just he isn't with me . But I'm in love with him.😢
If I impacted you, then there is never anything you can miss.
I wish time travelling was real
Words painted in poetry.. best poetry book by diya
Love is a big word if you choose a person and when that person supposedly Loves You Back can you get hurt because they lie to you all the time and when your heart is broken it is broken I've been looking for love for 9 years and then I find somebody and all she can do is lie to me I buy stuff I treat you like gold and everything else but she continues to lie to me everyday it hurts when somebody breaks your heart you're right when you find somebody that you love you cherish them for all your life and everything
Yes I’m in love with
You're the missing piece in my rose heart ❤
ERES UN AMOR TÉ AMÓ MUCHÍSIMO MÍ LEÓN SHAPIRO TU ERES MI VIDA ❤ LA VIDA PARA MI LLA NO ES IGUAL SIN TI MI VIDA NO TIENE SENTIDO❤ ❤️💞💞💓💞💞💓
Woww I really really like this so so much and those words they are so so beautiful and amazing and inspiring
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😊🤗💕❤👌
“I love you more than salt”
I am sure the presence is beautiful but nothing is as indecribable yet beautiful as the pain of missing you.
🎉I love you 🎉dont want you to leave
I claim a positive amen❤❤😂😂😂😂
I'm so nervous to say this to my girlfriend even though this is true😅😅
beautiful poem 💖 ❤️ 💕
What is love, theres so
many meanings
Is it that person on ur mind or
Is it what im feeling
Enlightened nd embraced
Ik the meaning of love cause with u all my fears were faced😊
That’s beautiful :(
If u never had what would have impacted you, u never known u would miss it.
Why do I miss I guy a barely even know
It was so long ago
When we where friends
Before Covid
Before I moved
Everything happend so soon
Then we forgot
The memories locked in a box
At the bottom of the ocean
But in 4th grade
I saw you
I felt a bubbling in my chest
I don’t need to explain the rest
I’m in love with a guy I barely know
I guy I used to treat as a brother
More than any other
Boy
I knew
We were together like glue
I really miss you
Wow
How have I remembered this much
Your dark curls that sent me in a whirl
Dark eyes full of surprise
Your face as pretty as sunset
Your skin milk chocolate
Just a little bit taller than me
It’s just that
I want you for me
But I can’t have him
No I can’t
He lives an hour away
And we haven’t talked in 4 years
4 years of missed opportunities
Friendships
Love
Everything I stated above
I miss him
Does he miss me
Does he wanna kiss me
Does he wanna be my bestie
Like he was in kindergarten
When we all just started
Like he was in first grade
When the world almost stopped
Oh Amari, I want to know you again
But more than a brother
More than a friend
More like a boyfriend
So yes I do miss you
And I really wanna kiss you
By Me!
Don’t copyright and yes it’s suppose to be cringy I’m in middle school don’t judge pls
This is really moving!!
Well done 👍
Love rescue us😊❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😊
Tole,,Rose,🌹🌹🌹
Roses 🌹 are Red ♥️ Watches are Gold 🪙 Get on your Knees 🦵 and do what you told 😍
LIFE IS NOT A BED OF ROSES
THERE IS SOMETHING ELSE OTHER THAN MOHABBAT
THANKS
AMEN
I STILL LOVE YOU
AND KEEP ON LOVING YOU TILL ETERNITY
I made a poem about my feelings
…
-U played with my hair and said they were so beautiful
U patted my head everytime i said dont mess my hair
U patted my head everytime u hugged me
U dabbed my hand evertime i saw u
U dabbed my hand and hold it for a bit after
A high-five u turned it into a handshake holing it like i was sm special while looking deep into my eyes without saying anything just smiling
U put ur hand over my eyes so i didnt look at those cuples kissing
U smile everytime u see me
U touch my shoulders and pull me close to u
U make me smile
U make me laught
U make me feel
Like someone else
Someone with no problems
Sm who always laughs and its never sad
U make me laught even when im crying
U make my day even when its really bad
Just seeing u
Makes me feel
The types of feels
I never did
But everything changes when i walk with her
Was i never here
Or was she always there
Did u ever liked me
Or was i just a friend
Am i just to obbesed with u
Or did u made me feel this way
Did u do that on purpose
Or u just didn’t really care
Is it my problem
Or is it yours
Did it meant something when u smiled and laught hold me hand and hug me looking deep into my eyes as they say everything I ever wanted is right In front of me
Do u really like me
Or it’s just me
That thinks of u every single day
I really thought about it
How does it feel to fall for someone so hard that u can never get up
Now I finally understand
Because of u
Just try to love me
Like I do
Even if it’s fake
I don’t really care
As long as I’m with u
But not as just a friend
It's great! 😊
@@Shreyal-_-l thank you so much❤️❤️❤️😭😭😭
no but why did i almost cry
@@anveshajha-p1z the middle part of the poem its really deep
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I LOVE YOU so much and my place is side you now and forever. Lovely ♥️💘💓
For two seconds, eyes meet .
Words would take a whole life ,
But in those two seconds, eyes could speak.
~Naina
yr the best thing in my life the one i dream about,a beautiful lady you make my heart scream and shout,you give my joy in everyway,always so sweet and know what to say,your a blessing from up above, when yr away baby its you im thinking of,you are my queen yr Beautiful in appearance,a breath of fresh air for me to experience, you are my sugar pop gentle kitten,thats why on our marriage certificate your name is written ❤
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Of course not missing but a uncontrolled heartache will follow for those who make fake love never could find peace but my prayers for those if you love someone truly never says he or she won't able to do cheat someone some people just comes & go but never left their scars never to remove if you talk with hundreds peoples even they prove to believe you true love but once you bites badly never believed some thers
If this is poetry, I'm Shakespeare.
Atp I don't know what not who I'm inlove with? Poetry maybe? I think I'm in love with poetry.
That’s beautiful ❤ I’m working on getting a poetry book published right now, I only have one poem published on my channel right now but I’ll be publishing more soon 😊
I was having a difficult day and my bf sent this to me I’m much happier then I was an hour ago
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So beautiful
Thank you so much
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So inspiring