IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 | How to write a perfect introduction

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  • @debaratighosh3866
    @debaratighosh3866 Рік тому +85

    Hi Asiya! I just received my IELTS score and I scored an overall band 7.5( L=8, R= 7.5, W= 6.5 and S=7) in my maiden attempt that too after juggling between 12 hours of onsite work and life… I am happy to share this news with you as I used to follow your videos while having my breakfast or lunch at office breaks , or while traveling as I never really had the time to do a full time preparation. Your explanations about each of the sections helped me to score this band , totally out of my expectations… God bless you!!

    • @COVENANTRN
      @COVENANTRN Рік тому +2

      Congratulations

    • @pyaremohan3190
      @pyaremohan3190 Рік тому +1

      Awesome score, i wish i can score like this.

    • @sneoklid
      @sneoklid 11 місяців тому

      Congratulations

  • @ignobediex5078
    @ignobediex5078 Рік тому +8

    I came here to say thank you so much❤️been watching you for so long now and i got 7 in 22nd oct ielts in Bangkok🤞🏻all thanks to you🙇

  • @nurafatemaalam6613
    @nurafatemaalam6613 Рік тому +138

    10 November is my IELTS exam. Pray for me.

  • @SaiKiran-vf4lw
    @SaiKiran-vf4lw Рік тому +1

    1)The Chart provides information about number of people coming to australia and canada between a five year period 2012 and 2017.
    2)The pie chart displays data about amount of water resources being provided globally.
    3)The Maps illustrates its changes for newbury high school in the past year 1980,at the present,and its future developments for the year 2030.
    4)The chart displays various stages of process involved in reproduction of aluminium drink cans.
    5)The diagram displays how electricity is being produced by utilizing geothermal energy.

  • @nilupakkiyaraja711
    @nilupakkiyaraja711 Рік тому +5

    Tomorrow I’m gonna write my IELTS exam.. thankyou Mam for valuable tips and tricks ♥️ love from srilanka

  • @devishree3750
    @devishree3750 Рік тому +14

    Hi Asiya, I just received my IELTS score with an overall band of 7, L-7.5, R-7, S-7 and W-6 with only 3 days of preparation in my first attempt with the help of your videos and oxford 16 workbook. Thank you for the wonderful and helpful videos that you are creating. Lots of love from India❤️

    • @simranawaz1108
      @simranawaz1108 Рік тому +1

      Hey devi can you tell little more about how you practiced? Vocabulary, sentence making, anything.

  • @bonujuraboeva5042
    @bonujuraboeva5042 Рік тому +6

    I am so happy to find your channel, so far i've learned a lot from you, thank you and good luck 🔥

  • @user-tq2fy6ky3o
    @user-tq2fy6ky3o Рік тому +5

    Tomorrow is my IELTS writing exam, please pray for me! 🥺

  • @harshith8227
    @harshith8227 Рік тому +5

    Hi Asiya, I just received my IELTS score with an overall band of 7.5 -> L-8, R-8, S-6.5 and W-7 with only 10 days of preparation in my first attempt with the help of your videos. Thank you for the wonderful and helpful videos that you are creating. Lots of love from India❤

    • @syedafarheen8917
      @syedafarheen8917 10 місяців тому

      Hi plz tell me how u prepared plz reply

  • @sonajuhasova3774
    @sonajuhasova3774 Рік тому +11

    Thank you so much for your videos, they were great help. I took the IELTS academic a couple of days ago and today I got my results. Overall, I got a band 8 (8.5 listening, 9 reading, 7 writing and 8 speaking). Thanks once again for everything

    • @Wind0wsMediaPlayer
      @Wind0wsMediaPlayer Рік тому

      Hii, could you help me out with a few questions? I wanted to know long did you prepare for the exam and which resources you had used to prepare for writing section? Also, how did you practice for the speaking part? I was a little nervous about that.

    • @sonajuhasova3774
      @sonajuhasova3774 Рік тому +5

      @@Wind0wsMediaPlayer Hi, of course. I was preparing for a few months (approximately 3), but that was very light preparation- I watched maybe 2 IELTS related videos per week, made some notes and did one section of the test like reading, also skipping some weeks completely. Only the last week before the exam I started to prepare intensively several hours each day. I relied mostly on UA-cam channels - except this one I was watching Lillie IELTS and IELTS advantage. Also, I practiced the tests from the official Cambridge IELTS books. With writing, the main thing that helped me was videos from IELTS advantage channel and their 5 day writing challenge which prepared me for task2 and Lillie IELTS did some great detailed videos on academic task 1. For me personally speaking was the smallest concern, I watched a few videos and also looked up the questions and tried to answer them aloud. Also speaking to yourself in English while doing random things also helps. And also my examiner was very kind, so I was not very nervous. I hope this helped a bit and good luck! 😌🤞🏼

    • @Wind0wsMediaPlayer
      @Wind0wsMediaPlayer Рік тому

      @@sonajuhasova3774 Thank you so much for your response and yes it did help! You’re great :D
      Did you get any feedback on your essays or were you just comparing your essay answers to the answer key? Currently that is what I’m doing. And what were the number of books which you had solved, like Cambridge IELTS Academic 10-17? Also, is it fine if i reply here later with more questions if i have any during my preparation? I have to take the exam and start my applications soon bc of the deadlines and all of this had made me so anxious oof

    • @umidaboqijonova8684
      @umidaboqijonova8684 Рік тому +1

      Did you get 8 band only by self-studying😬 how?!

    • @umidaboqijonova8684
      @umidaboqijonova8684 Рік тому +1

      How is it possible speaking 8, writing 7🥲wow

  • @pragyaagrawal7985
    @pragyaagrawal7985 Рік тому +6

    Hello, could you please make more videos on how to write a band9 writing task1, concerning ways to reduce repetition.

  • @linnahelen
    @linnahelen Рік тому +8

    I love your channel so far! You gave a lof of helpful tips I can use in the writing part, thank you for that.

  • @abrarahmad3897
    @abrarahmad3897 Рік тому +4

    my introductions were as follows:
    The provided graph gives information on the foreign tourism of the two developed nations of Canada and Australia between a five-year period.
    The provided graphs illustrate the type and share of the major water resources across the globe which are namely saline and freshwater.
    The following maps give insight on the current structure of the Westfield University while proposing some developments in the future.
    The provided three maps illustrate the layout of the Newbury High School in 1980 and the present while proposing a redefined structure for the future.
    The diagram gives information on the processes involved in the recycling of a simple aluminium drink cans.
    The following diagram illustrates how the heat from the Earth can be utilised to generate electricity.

  • @mariamadebola
    @mariamadebola 6 місяців тому +2

    I'm writing my exam in 2 days; I will come back to this comment to share my scores

    • @mariamadebola
      @mariamadebola 6 місяців тому +1

      I wrote my test and had a 7.5 in my overall score on my 1st attempt; ( L=7.5, R= 7.5, W= 6.5 and S=7.5)

    • @mariamadebola
      @mariamadebola 6 місяців тому

      thanks for all you do Asiyah @FastrackIELTS

  • @salmanhayat6262
    @salmanhayat6262 Рік тому +1

    Incredible! Thanks for making this video.

  • @nikitamaurya4518
    @nikitamaurya4518 11 місяців тому

    I have used following style. Please let me know if they are correct.
    Example 1:
    The provided data comprises a bar chart illustrating the top countries that produced and consumed the most oil in 2010 and 2015.
    The provided data comprises a bar chart representing how many people were employed in four major industry sectors in the UK between 1910 and 2012.
    The chart illustrates the leading nations that produced and consumed oil in the years 2010 and 2015 / in two time periods (2010 and 2015).
    Example 2:
    The provided data comprises a chart representing how many people visited Australia and Canada as tourists over a five-year period.
    Example 3:
    The provided data comprises two pie charts and a bar chart representing the distribution of different types of water resources and its supply in various regions of the world.
    The provided data comprises maps representing Westfield university before and after its proposed redevelopment.
    The provided data comprises maps representing the main changes that have taken in Newbury High School from 1980 until the present moment and the proposed development up until 2030.
    Example 4:
    The provided data comprises a diagram illustrating the steps are involved in recycling aluminum drink cans.
    Example 5:
    The provided data comprises a diagram illustrating the process of electricity generation in a geothermal energy.

  • @DSZARI
    @DSZARI Рік тому +2

    Extraordinary tips 😮

  • @funtiktok5062
    @funtiktok5062 Рік тому +5

    I got 8.0 in ielts 😊

  • @user-kr4pb4vk9s
    @user-kr4pb4vk9s 2 місяці тому

    Thank you so much for your videos!!

  • @xtreemlife
    @xtreemlife Рік тому +2

    Hello Asiya,
    Really great videos. I have a quick question. Does your course cover vocabulary for writing and speaking.
    My vocabulary is really bad.

  • @shilaranighosh7614
    @shilaranighosh7614 Рік тому +4

    Perfect video ❤️

  • @akashe.k.780
    @akashe.k.780 7 місяців тому +1

    The chart provides information on the natural sources of water available on earth and examine the sources of freshwater supply laying emphasis on the distribution of the Renewable freshwater supply across different regions of the world

  • @catoholic4412
    @catoholic4412 Рік тому +2

    Hi Asiya, need your feedback in this for 10:02 I have written,
    The pie chart and bar graph illustrates what are the world's water resources and where they are allocated.

  • @mikogamerz
    @mikogamerz 11 місяців тому +1

    Hello maam can i use
    The bar graph illustrates the top ten nations who produces and consumes oil in the year 2010 and 2015??
    Please reply 🙏

  • @jannatabubaker6896
    @jannatabubaker6896 5 місяців тому +2

    My test is on 6 march, pray for my best result.

    • @era6519
      @era6519 Місяць тому

      How was it

  • @zeeshankhanyousafzai5229
    @zeeshankhanyousafzai5229 11 місяців тому

    The given line graph illustrates that how many number of explorers visited Australia and Canada over a five-year period.

  • @mustakahmed7460
    @mustakahmed7460 Рік тому +1

    It was just excellent explanation.effective technique for writing.thanks for sharing

  • @synacheath1046
    @synacheath1046 2 місяці тому

    the bar chart gives information about the visitors who visiting in both countries in the year 2012 and 2017.

  • @akibammar1375
    @akibammar1375 Рік тому

    ...from Bangladesh.🇧🇩
    You're one of my best teacher.
    Thank you.😐

  • @Anj_____lyyyyyy
    @Anj_____lyyyyyy Рік тому +1

    Love your videos💓💓

  • @jamesnajer4103
    @jamesnajer4103 Рік тому +1

    Thanks for the lesson it means a lot 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

  • @tebongjosma493
    @tebongjosma493 10 місяців тому +1

    My IELTS exam is today. I pray I do well after listening and practising most tasks in your videos 😇

  • @user-qy7zl3gr2n
    @user-qy7zl3gr2n 10 місяців тому

    Thank you Mam your way of teaching is amazing😃

  • @younglife__
    @younglife__ 6 місяців тому

    the chart displays how many tourists travelled to Australia and Canada from 2012 to 2017

  • @abubakarsiddique2615
    @abubakarsiddique2615 Рік тому +5

    I think it’s a great one for writing task 1.

  • @jane-dn4vz
    @jane-dn4vz Рік тому +1

    Thanks a lot Asiya! The pdf does not open. How can I download ppt?

  • @awladbhuiyan1684
    @awladbhuiyan1684 10 місяців тому

    Your channel help me a great deal of. I really appreciate it.

  • @zeeshankhanyousafzai5229
    @zeeshankhanyousafzai5229 11 місяців тому

    The given graphs illustrate the distribution of water resources world wide.

  • @ShahinAlam-x3u
    @ShahinAlam-x3u 11 місяців тому

    You are a great teacher. 😮😊😊

  • @tirthchaudhari648
    @tirthchaudhari648 Рік тому

    i got happlily second liz . i love your teching skills .💌💌

  • @ayoayo33
    @ayoayo33 5 місяців тому

    The maps below represent the periodical developmental changes in Newbury High School and its constructional expected improvements in 2030.

  • @khantsilin-yq9ye
    @khantsilin-yq9ye 8 днів тому

    I am learning IELTS now. However, i find it difficult in Writing Task I and 2. What should I do?

  • @harshdavda1860
    @harshdavda1860 Рік тому

    Is this correct? The diagram illustrates the steps on how the aluminum drink cans were recycled.

  • @synacheath1046
    @synacheath1046 2 місяці тому

    The graph describes the number of the employees at different locations in the Uk economy between 1910 and 2010.

  • @aryacd4351
    @aryacd4351 11 місяців тому +1

    30 september is my IELTS exam 😇 .. Your class is so informative ♥

    • @wajihkhan4007
      @wajihkhan4007 10 місяців тому +1

      how was it ? what were the topics of writing and speaking?

  • @ahasanhabib8604
    @ahasanhabib8604 7 місяців тому

    Best teaching. ❤️

  • @rekhabiswakarma9001
    @rekhabiswakarma9001 11 місяців тому

    Thnk u soo much for ur help and support ma’am … u r grt ..

  • @SamiyaWahab-j8d
    @SamiyaWahab-j8d Місяць тому

    The diagram illustrate the process of conversion of geothermal energy to electricty
    The diagram illustrate the production of eletricity from geothermal energy

  • @hamoody2727
    @hamoody2727 Рік тому

    hello asiya i have a question in the introduction do i just need to paraphrase it or do i need to paraphrase and write more?

  • @christak122
    @christak122 Рік тому

    Thank you 😢for such a video

  • @balqeesmarwan9113
    @balqeesmarwan9113 2 місяці тому

    Can i say: the diagram provides information about the step of how to recycle the aluminum drink cans

  • @Jeon.Queen43
    @Jeon.Queen43 Рік тому +1

    Very fruitful video thanks dear asiya 👌👌👌

  • @FahimAhmed-qf1on
    @FahimAhmed-qf1on 8 місяців тому

    Excellent class ❤

  • @jaziblatif7844
    @jaziblatif7844 Рік тому

    Greetings Ma'am .
    I'm a big fan of yours and I hv a question
    In the example of " how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity" can we also rephrase this question as " The diagram illustrates the process of, how the electrity is being produced using the geothermal energy"...
    P.S. looking forward getting a reply as soon as possible

  • @SumayaSameer
    @SumayaSameer 9 місяців тому

    I took the private course , but it seems like all are in UA-cam not much exclusive ,.. I've done with the course and trying to seek for more in your channel .. however not that big different .

  • @synacheath1046
    @synacheath1046 2 місяці тому

    The maps provide the change of the year 1980 and now of the new plans developed.

  • @ReginaTongo-kz6lm
    @ReginaTongo-kz6lm 10 місяців тому

    Thank you.

  • @jessicajohn1264
    @jessicajohn1264 Рік тому

    Love your videos

  • @MrRnjoku
    @MrRnjoku Рік тому +2

    Thank you for all you do 🤗

  • @JjKk-vm5kv
    @JjKk-vm5kv Рік тому

    Thank you ❤

  • @Konstantin.Kulikov
    @Konstantin.Kulikov 7 місяців тому

    Thank you for your great videos! This one has been especially helpful! Keep up the great work!

  • @frostblaze2850
    @frostblaze2850 Рік тому +2

    I'm gonna take the test again on Nov 26. I previously got speaking 7.5, reading 8.5, listening 8, but got a 6.5 in writing due to running out of time and mistakenly focusing on task 1 instead of task 2. :( I've been watching your videos and find them really helpful so I'll have to ask, which do you recommend between your IELTS academic pack or the step by step writing tutorial?

    • @syedafarheen8917
      @syedafarheen8917 10 місяців тому

      Hi plz tell me hw u prepare? Plz reply

    • @frostblaze2850
      @frostblaze2850 10 місяців тому

      @@syedafarheen8917 i just read the cambridge reviewer and the other materials here. My overall score was 8 🥰

    • @user-gl4oo5zv7k
      @user-gl4oo5zv7k 9 місяців тому

      Computer based or paper

    • @user-gl4oo5zv7k
      @user-gl4oo5zv7k 9 місяців тому

      Computer based or paper

  • @hi5mysticyt188
    @hi5mysticyt188 Рік тому +10

    Hi asiya mam! I received my result yesterday, im very thankful for your informative videos ❤, i scored 7.5 overall with 8.5 in listening 8 in reading 7 in speaking and 6.5 in writing ❤ once again thank you for your support ❤

    • @imagination_3473
      @imagination_3473 Рік тому +1

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      Dil da ni mara

  • @user-jd7ib1dp8w
    @user-jd7ib1dp8w 10 місяців тому +1

    9 November is my IELTS exam..pray for me

  • @nasifanivi4497
    @nasifanivi4497 Рік тому

    10 November is my real test ..little bit worried about writing and reading ...thanks for giving such contents ..

  • @medhasaha3467
    @medhasaha3467 Рік тому

    the diagram displays the stages involved in aluminium drink cans recylcing.

  • @user-ox4js5hj1h
    @user-ox4js5hj1h 11 місяців тому

    The maps provide information what will change in newbury high school after its development up until 2030
    The diagram illustrates the steps of produce electricity by using geothermal energy..
    Is it write or wrong?

  • @Aigo-lf7bh
    @Aigo-lf7bh Рік тому

    Today is my exam day.I am a little bit nervous, please pray for me))) Thanks Asiya for the video)))

  • @sadafdayyerianzadeh
    @sadafdayyerianzadeh Рік тому

    Hi,is this correct to say that:The diagram displays the stages which involved in producing electricity by geothermal energy??

  • @amanrangrej3139
    @amanrangrej3139 Рік тому +1

    10th june will be attend exam. Please Pray for me

  • @zeeshankhanyousafzai5229
    @zeeshankhanyousafzai5229 11 місяців тому

    The maps display information about the previous, current, and proposed design of Newbury High School.

  • @medhasaha3467
    @medhasaha3467 Рік тому

    The diagram illustrates the procedure by which aluminium drink cans are recylcled. how about this one?

  • @Potato-fc8hl
    @Potato-fc8hl Рік тому

    The information regarding thé changes that took place in the Newbury High School in the life span of 43 years from 1970 tở present date is illustrated by the rendered diagram.

  • @kaunghtetsan8012
    @kaunghtetsan8012 Рік тому

    Thanks a million

  • @rakhabuddin483
    @rakhabuddin483 Рік тому

    Thanks Ma'am

  • @maharshiamin6717
    @maharshiamin6717 2 місяці тому

    i have a speaking test tomorrow 🎉

  • @TanviRana-ji3gl
    @TanviRana-ji3gl Рік тому

    Thanku so much ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

  • @PonezhaDanil
    @PonezhaDanil Рік тому

    Hi,
    It is impossible to purchase your course with Russian or Turkish cards. Paypal is not available for these countries as well.

  • @2PMDANG3R
    @2PMDANG3R 7 місяців тому +2

    Tomorrow is my exam.pray for me

  • @Badhonkumarhalder
    @Badhonkumarhalder 11 місяців тому

    the diagram illustrates the process of producing electricity using by geothermal energy. is it write?

  • @user-md8kd9se3c
    @user-md8kd9se3c 11 місяців тому

    thank you so much mam🥰🥰

  • @christchurchboys5841
    @christchurchboys5841 Рік тому

    The chart illustrates ten of the highest oil producing and consuming nations in the years 2010 and 2015. / The chart displays ranks of the first ten nations on the basis of maximum oil produced and consumed in the years 2010 and 2015. [Will these work?]

  • @kkvj3305
    @kkvj3305 Рік тому

    Mam, how can I write listening answer if there is 'email' in the answer, should I write it in capital or lowercase , specially how to put@ and full stop (.)

  • @rajprabhakar25
    @rajprabhakar25 Рік тому +2

    Mam who is your video editor he doing great job…🎉

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  Рік тому +1

      I know! Our video editor is a ⭐

    • @rajprabhakar25
      @rajprabhakar25 Рік тому

      @@FasTrackIELTS can I get his Instagram Id please

  • @ishiichannn
    @ishiichannn Рік тому

    Is it important to give mock test before the real exam

  • @italloaraujo3830
    @italloaraujo3830 6 місяців тому

    "The data presentes a complete study about worldwide water resources including renewable freshwater distribution." Sounds good?

  • @MuhammadDyffa
    @MuhammadDyffa 9 місяців тому

    brilliant

  • @imagination_3473
    @imagination_3473 Рік тому +1

    Did anyone notice that at the end of the video she accidentally spoke how to write introduction in Task 2 while all video is about taks 1. 😂

  • @xushnudxolmurodov9021
    @xushnudxolmurodov9021 Рік тому

    Awesome

  • @doctor-l2o
    @doctor-l2o 9 місяців тому

    how can levels of employment be written as how many people were employed? it changes the meaning.

  • @amandeepkaur3776
    @amandeepkaur3776 Рік тому +1

    Mam is the use of passive voice is forbidden by IDP in writing task 2...
    Kindly reply

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  Рік тому +1

      Of course not! The passive voice is an integral part of English language. Using it correctly will actually help you with your grammar score. Good luck!

    • @amandeepkaur3776
      @amandeepkaur3776 Рік тому +1

      So mam how passive sentences should be included to achieve a higher band score. .... Please reply

  • @shaikvikharrabbani9947
    @shaikvikharrabbani9947 Рік тому

    Next week is my IELTS exam pray for me.

  • @nirdeshghimire9705
    @nirdeshghimire9705 Рік тому

    Passage: More than 10 years ago, while taking the temperature of the universe, astronomers' found something odd.
    Qustion(T/F/NG): Astronomers often find something odd on the sky.
    Please help me with answer by providing it's description.

    • @gardasrachana6023
      @gardasrachana6023 Рік тому

      False...because it's not happening often....it once happened 10 years ago

  • @Foodwithmel402
    @Foodwithmel402 Рік тому

    How can I prectice plz anyone Guide me...🥰

  • @ra22a55
    @ra22a55 5 місяців тому

    In 11:36 is it okay if i said The maps illustrate the Westfield university currently and the improvements in the future
    ?
    And in 12:40 is it also good if i said the given maps display the changes over different periods of time of Newbury high school and the vision of development in 2030

  • @cindylaw7545
    @cindylaw7545 5 місяців тому

    The Chart provide information on Australia And Canada tourist for 2012 to 2017

  • @noggsgaming3842
    @noggsgaming3842 Рік тому +2

    You or amazing i got a 5.5 on my first test which was bad and i was nervous hopefully i will improve with your fabulous work your one of the best maybe the best keep posting
    ⚠️and can you do the same with task 2 please

  • @aravindthoppil9254
    @aravindthoppil9254 Рік тому

    Mam I can't improve my reading score. I'm stuck between 5.5 and 6. What do I do please reply as soon as possible.

  • @user-br2bd7ts3w
    @user-br2bd7ts3w Рік тому +1

    Tomorrow is my exam pls pray for me😭😭😭

  • @halakh1957
    @halakh1957 3 місяці тому

    I wrote an introduction for the second example about the water resources. Can anyone please see it and give advice.
    The graphs display the distribution of global water sources, including some information about the proportion of the whole quantity of water that existed on Earth, which is categorized to two groups, in addition to the resources of water, which are for human consumption, and the amount of existed renewable freshwater supply in each continent.

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  3 місяці тому

      The ideas are good but there are some inaccuracies. Ask ChatGPT to proofread it or use human proofreaders at textranch.com ;)