If it was airborne then the fact that they were sticking their heads in the vent and the fact that it wasn’t a closed air system at the school meant they were screwed all the same. We don’t know if it was and at that point how long it can survive in that state. Lots of unknowns tbh. I thought they should block off the vent as soon as they heard about the 1st kid dying.
Well if it is airborne the whole school would be infected so the lock down wouldn't of worked anyways but yes probably when they walked in the room that was contaminated is probably what caused there doom
1:09:20 funny how they were told a minute ago to not touch or get close to an infected but their first reflex when they find a supposedly infected kid is to beat him up…
I was expecting zombies or something and instead I got the slow, creeping horror of a group of people that were left to die... If anything that's scarier.
Did this school not have a cafeteria or something? The HS I went to had at least a couple months worth of food in the freezer. Most schools are cheap so they order bulk
@@crispykornflakes5990 I'm glad you all went to better schools. Mine didn't have a cafeteria, only a few snacks, & only in 1 building. There are a lot of plot holes, but this is not one of them.
I kept thinking the same thing. Just go raid the cafeteria. As long as the electricity stays on they’re set food wise for a long while if they ration it. Water from the fountain and most HSs have locker rooms with showers so hygiene wouldn’t be that much of a problem either.
Wait hol up, the guys blood might be infectious, so they decide to beat the shit out of him and get his blood everywhere? Didn't realise this was special needs class lol.
@@dranixrush3306 I would buy that had they bumrushed the soldiers when they killed the teacher. Similar situation aka threat of imminent death, same level shock, fear and panic, but entirely different reactions.
@@dranixrush3306 It makes you wonder, if everyone is doing copious amounts of weed will they be better off in a disaster? Nobody will panic if everyone is as high as a kite.
I have sooooo many questions: -Why did no one eventually go to the cafeteria, see if other floors had food beyond the one they looked at, and/or vending machine? I get the first few days you're scared by the government, but a couple of weeks! You are still frozen in the one room! -Why did no one decide to go to the other floors to use the bathrooms? -Why did no one go to the gym and use the shower? Fine! Let's say you didn't go to a school that had showers...at least use the water to wash up. *Believe me I understand "mob mentality". Yet, even within "mob mentality" there are those that revolt and communities/outliers that break off. Not EVERYONE is going to be controlled by a pocket knife that randomly gets stolen and appears in different people's hands.
And let's not forget: This disease that takes one day to start showing symptoms, one to two days of being sick, then a final day to finish killing you somehow managed to kill everyone in room 200 within a single day. ..How? Why?
And where was the public outrage? No parents, no fellow classmates from all the rooms that were allowed to leave, no teachers, other school employees or media? None of the students tried calling for help except the one who had no bars? The police and state and local government did not try to intervene at all? And no humanitarian aid such as using drones or even a crane to lift basic supplies like food, water, blankets and pillows over the barricade? Even captured terrorists and prisoners of war are treated more humanely. Finally, the entire military squad abandoned post? Absolutely unrealistic. There were just too many flaws to this story. As an aside, I had to find this story online and read the end because I just could not hear over the music. Boy did Skott mess up on dramatizing some of these characters. Maybe there was a rush to get this posted, but the characters as written were not as portrayed here. Not even close.
@@lorrainewilliams7896 Well, we’re at odds there and will have to agree to disagree. I thoroughly enjoyed his portrayal of the characters & reading. The story was good...just a big plot hole. There are PLENTY of blockbuster movies and books that have huge plot holes or nonsensical storylines. Also, outside of movies, there is no time in recent history local police have gone against the military, especially for an quarantine. Who is going to fight to let people OUT of quarantine when you think they have a deadly disease that is suppose to kill you in a couple of days?!?! Although, they lived for weeks. Now, I could see a couple of parents coming down to say goodbye, but they were probably stopped long before they got to the school barrier OR people were sent to their homes to inform them of the situation. They shot the teacher coming out of the school and nothing or no one went in. You think a drone or crane would have made it passed all their security and artillery? I believe, by the way he described it, the gesture would have been stopped before it even started. Whether the crane person not being allowed to setup or even being able to drive within a close distance...the drone easily being shot down well before crossing the threshold or something along those lines. I can’t imagine all that effort gets put forth and then someone could just easily send a drone with a Subway sandwich into the classroom. This is an individual who is transmits a deadly disease that is “suppose” to kill you w/in 2-3 day via blood, air, who knows? She essentially the human equivalent of a bomb, also known as, biological warfare. No! No one is going to stick around a human bomb! For what?! Fear of the unknown is a deadly thing. Throw that in with the utter chaos of weeks of guarding a biological ticking time bomb that you don’t even know if it’s safe for you to be standing this close to...everyone knows there is an entire classroom of dead students right below that died w/in hours of coming to school/contact (possibly). Do you believe in the entire history of the military there has ONLY been utter and entire by the letter compliance?! What are you comparing this hypothetical biological quarantine situation to that has you 100% sure?
Sir, Your rendition of this sad tale brought up emotions I thought were long since gone. A truly brilliant story with a hint of the Breakfast Club. Please keep up the good work A +.
"Vamos a morir aquí y ellos pueden limpiar la sangre fácil con agua y cloro. Bien suavecito. Estamos fregados." "Mama, lo siento mucho. Solo quise escapar. No es mi culpa. Quise.." English translation: "We are going to die here and they can clean the blood easy with water and bleach. Very easy. We're fucked." "Momma. I am so sorry. I just wanted to escape. It's not my fault, I wanted..." Maybe those two years in high school and online gaming have amounted to something.
If only people lived like the two lovers in the end of it all. I'd give my life to finally feel the true care the last characters shared... Thanks for the story.
I dont understand why they immediately decided to beat the infected to death and getting germs all over themselves in the process. Just force them in another room. It's a bit of a stretch and I would have enjoyed a slower dive into insanity I mean they were murdering like 2 days in, what kind of fucked up school is this?
ROTC is an American term. So why the narrator decided to mix American with IRISH accents among the students is beyond me. But it was HILARIOUS, and added to the character of the story all the same. ;P
@@Mygg_Jeager it doesn’t have to be part of the plot. whether he made that choice when narrating or the author meant it to be that way people are diverse and can come from different places. idk why you’re so surprised
@@mmmmmmmmaria it would be like hearing a novel set in Japan being not only narrated by, but also voice acted by Southerners from Louisiana.... a narrator can be any voice at all but a voice actor is supposed to fit the character.
Amongst the vast libraries of stories I've heard, this one touched my heart, and brought tears to bloom in my eyes. Such a beautiful story good sir. Your voice acting is so highly appreciated.
1:09:00 where they atack the dude coughing up blood "scrathing and kicking him" was freakin stupid. Way to attack a fellow victim and get his infected blood on you. Wtf lol
definitely enjoy these longer full story vids. Not saying i don’t like the shorter ones but the longer ones give me a sort of immersive vibe, close my eyes and get lost in the story type thing
The only horror stories I find scary are ones with real emotions, where you actually can somewhat relate to their feelings, and feel like the events could actually happen even if less severe.
The students names in this cracked me up. Louis Pasteur? Edward Jenner? Andrew Wakefield? Jenny McCarthy? Joseph Meister? Jonas Salk? Someone's science nerd is showing. Really though there was a missed opportunity for a John Snow.
This is amazing so far!! Sadly I’ve gotta pause about 1/3 through due to work. Can’t wait to finish it up soon. Great work by the author and also the narrator
I think the author Empyreal/Invective, deserves the ultimate Praise for this pretty brilliant story. It reminded me of Anarchy in the Ranks, however civilised we think we are, once control is lost & situations devolve, we turn on each other in fear & unable to comprehend our fragile Condition, intent on survival by savagery & brutality aware only of ourselves in our baseness. Such an erudite & harrowing yet very entertaining story as ive not heard in a long time. So Magnitude 10 stars to Empyreal/ Invective. Natures Temper also gets Magnitude 10 stars for his unforgettable performance! Creating a full cast of people in his one man narration.
We live in a world cloaked in an illusion of civilized society. Remember Joker's dialogue from the movie "Dark Knight"- " When the chips are down, these so called civilized people will tear each other up"
@@bappadityabhattacharya8762 thank you for replying & yes we do live under illusionionary civilised cultures. There is something basically flawed in mankinds make up. This flaw was bred into us, eons & eons ago & i dont think we've ever recovered from it. I cant remember if i read this or dreamed it but im sure i heard that Geneticists had isolated the " Evil " gene. Maybe it was purposely put there in half the 'test' humans & the other half without. Whether for equilibrium in all things or for scientific observations. Ive recently been watching documentaries on the Yugas & there is some mind blowing knowledge to try & comprehend Im not a fully fledged Buddhist but follow a similar 'Way' & for the past 30 odd years, been facinated wth Rig Vedas, the Mahabharata, many other myth & legend but ive come to realise that im not sure it is myth, i think its probably more or less true facts. I would give my all to see Ankor Watt & the incredible temple buildings, the architecture & sculptures are breathtaking. In one structure the sculpted decoration is mind boggling & among the gods & beings & royalty are these out of place blonde white women, like Marilyn Monroe & these figures are thousands of years old. Ancient carved Basalt rock boulder of huge size, covered wth calculus & decimal figures including nanoseconds & parsecs...??? This is from millenia ago!!!! Man! Talk about Far Out! Lol You take care friend From all in UK, unless you are in UK then its from all of us in Northumbria 😁🕉☯️☮♀️♂️⚕♾🇬🇧
There are so many talented writers on the Internet that the phrase "this was one of the best creepypasta's ever written" has lost its meaning. But this was truly among the best, both in performance and in material.
Most high schools buy food in bulk expecially canned foods. The only school that doesn't is an education/ detention center they get their stuff from other schools
The characterization was so compelling, but the external circumstances made little sense... unless they made it a tiny school in an impoverished rural area, maybe indigenous kids on a reservation. Wouldn't be the first infected blankets situation.
When you listen to a story for the first time, it seems to last forever. When you listen to it repeatedly it seems to take 10 minutes. I’ve listened to this for the first time 4 days ago, several times since. ❤️
I’m back for what was my third listening to this fantastic story. True quality in both the story and the narration. There are some stories that are worth coming back to.
I've been binging these hours long narrated horror stories for several months. The longer the better! I've been trying to find someone that really knows what they're doing... I've finally found you! You don't just read a story ... you REALLY breathe LIFE into it! There are a LOT of people that make a good living narrating audio books. I'd L💖VE to listen to YOU read Stephen King! You have the natural voice of Chris Hemsworth, not an opinion, strait fact. Not kissing ass, I'm just not that kind of b🤬ch. You give a voice to every character effortlessly, you give women a feminine voice & each person with their own accent, AND LANGUAGE?!? As a person with multiple head traumas, leaving me with a SERIOUS problem with memory function, I often get lost on who's who when I listen to these beautiful horror stories. The way YOU narrate... 😥 I remember. You should find a place to audition for voice acting. You're a natural. I'd give you a ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐5 star review... buuut, AGAIN, I'm just not that kind of b🤬ch. Sooo, I'm gonna give you a hearty 🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤5 BLACK HEART review, with an ADDITIONAL 'F🤬N METAL SALUTE! 🤘💀🤘' Thanx fer the eargasim dude! Happy Chrismahaunnaquazika ...or what ever! Blessed be. ⁕✯~☽⚪☾~✯⁕
4:55 that monotone shit biscuits had me rolling on the floor for 5 minutes. Not something I expect in a creepypasta but still a pleasant surprise nonetheless.
#NaturesTemper please keep the "Werewolves are..." series on your narration schedule. #JoshWaggoner was on point, recommending that you also record these stories. The characters truly come to life with your talent of multiple voices, accents and dialects. 🤗
At leaat it had a happy ending... Good Lord , this story gave me the same feeling I get at the end of Requiem for a Dream. totally sad as balls. Welp time to listen to Cum town to cleanse my head lol.
kinda hit me as a modern lord of the flies. damn good story as always. edit : i just wanna say once they said cold like symptoms shouldn’t they have gotten rid of the only kid coughing? no excuses for a cough during the covid pandemic 😂 holy shit that ending tho
@@christiangraham4579 being a smoker, yes i have idiot. when you are told there is a bug in the building that CAUSES A COUGH don’t you think that’s kind of just self preservation? get off your high horse and take the joke. apologies if i offended you for saying when somebody shows symptoms they should isolate....
There's just... so much wrong with this one lol. I swear, so many of these authors today could REALLY use some editing services and/or a bit more outside proofreading input.
FYI Geraldo is pronounced with an H instead of the G sound . Like Her then aldo . Don’t usually correct anyone but as you are my favorite narrator ever I don’t want anyone poking fun of the way you say pronounce words 🌹 Poor Patrick. Kid didn’t have a chance. And since when do those who are afraid of blood born infection literally rush forward to issue a hands on beating? Herd mentality will do you in every single time .
It always devolves into chaos and murder when it’s a story about teens and survival. I guess that’s what you’d expect from a class of high school students during an unnatural disaster. But idk if it’s realistic. Because there are students who deal with violence on the daily, and others that have natural born leadership qualities (sports team captains, activity group leaders etc) that at least in my school would have been able to make things at least last longer than a week or two.
Amazing narration!!! Moderate story because of the basics of a school that were missed. So much time and effort was clearly put into writing this story, but the lack of visiting the cafeteria and attempting to use phones (even corded phones if this was supposed to be before cell phones) are huge problems for me that could have been handles easily in the story.
This one was a bit dumb. I'll spare anyone reading from getting a huge list of problems and just sum it up by saying it feels like the author is just being edgy and trying too hard to sound smart.
Sad thing is, they were probably fine until the three went into the room where all the kids got merked by a bio weapon
Indeed
If it was airborne then the fact that they were sticking their heads in the vent and the fact that it wasn’t a closed air system at the school meant they were screwed all the same. We don’t know if it was and at that point how long it can survive in that state. Lots of unknowns tbh. I thought they should block off the vent as soon as they heard about the 1st kid dying.
Well if it is airborne the whole school would be infected so the lock down wouldn't of worked anyways but yes probably when they walked in the room that was contaminated is probably what caused there doom
1:09:20 funny how they were told a minute ago to not touch or get close to an infected but their first reflex when they find a supposedly infected kid is to beat him up…
I was expecting zombies or something and instead I got the slow, creeping horror of a group of people that were left to die...
If anything that's scarier.
Did this school not have a cafeteria or something? The HS I went to had at least a couple months worth of food in the freezer. Most schools are cheap so they order bulk
Right!
Was thinking that the whole time
@@crispykornflakes5990 I'm glad you all went to better schools. Mine didn't have a cafeteria, only a few snacks, & only in 1 building. There are a lot of plot holes, but this is not one of them.
@@DeathPetalArt did you go to school in congo? lol
I kept thinking the same thing. Just go raid the cafeteria. As long as the electricity stays on they’re set food wise for a long while if they ration it. Water from the fountain and most HSs have locker rooms with showers so hygiene wouldn’t be that much of a problem either.
Wait hol up, the guys blood might be infectious, so they decide to beat the shit out of him and get his blood everywhere?
Didn't realise this was special needs class lol.
That is what panicking does to people, makes them irrational.
@@dranixrush3306 I would buy that had they bumrushed the soldiers when they killed the teacher. Similar situation aka threat of imminent death, same level shock, fear and panic, but entirely different reactions.
I was thinking the same thing
@@dranixrush3306 It makes you wonder, if everyone is doing copious amounts of weed will they be better off in a disaster? Nobody will panic if everyone is as high as a kite.
@@thegen3rai Doesn’t smoking weed make some people really anxious? Could make it worse depending on how they react to being high.
I have sooooo many questions:
-Why did no one eventually go to the cafeteria, see if other floors had food beyond the one they looked at, and/or vending machine? I get the first few days you're scared by the government, but a couple of weeks! You are still frozen in the one room!
-Why did no one decide to go to the other floors to use the bathrooms?
-Why did no one go to the gym and use the shower? Fine! Let's say you didn't go to a school that had showers...at least use the water to wash up.
*Believe me I understand "mob mentality". Yet, even within "mob mentality" there are those that revolt and communities/outliers that break off. Not EVERYONE is going to be controlled by a pocket knife that randomly gets stolen and appears in different people's hands.
And let's not forget:
This disease that takes one day to start showing symptoms, one to two days of being sick, then a final day to finish killing you somehow managed to kill everyone in room 200 within a single day. ..How? Why?
@@SirKickBan ...and why did it take them over a week to die? I really did like the story, but just so many questions...
And where was the public outrage? No parents, no fellow classmates from all the rooms that were allowed to leave, no teachers, other school employees or media? None of the students tried calling for help except the one who had no bars? The police and state and local government did not try to intervene at all?
And no humanitarian aid such as using drones or even a crane to lift basic supplies like food, water, blankets and pillows over the barricade? Even captured terrorists and prisoners of war are treated more humanely.
Finally, the entire military squad abandoned post? Absolutely unrealistic. There were just too many flaws to this story.
As an aside, I had to find this story online and read the end because I just could not hear over the music. Boy did Skott mess up on dramatizing some of these characters. Maybe there was a rush to get this posted, but the characters as written were not as portrayed here. Not even close.
@@lorrainewilliams7896 Well, we’re at odds there and will have to agree to disagree. I thoroughly enjoyed his portrayal of the characters & reading. The story was good...just a big plot hole. There are PLENTY of blockbuster movies and books that have huge plot holes or nonsensical storylines. Also, outside of movies, there is no time in recent history local police have gone against the military, especially for an quarantine. Who is going to fight to let people OUT of quarantine when you think they have a deadly disease that is suppose to kill you in a couple of days?!?! Although, they lived for weeks. Now, I could see a couple of parents coming down to say goodbye, but they were probably stopped long before they got to the school barrier OR people were sent to their homes to inform them of the situation.
They shot the teacher coming out of the school and nothing or no one went in. You think a drone or crane would have made it passed all their security and artillery? I believe, by the way he described it, the gesture would have been stopped before it even started. Whether the crane person not being allowed to setup or even being able to drive within a close distance...the drone easily being shot down well before crossing the threshold or something along those lines. I can’t imagine all that effort gets put forth and then someone could just easily send a drone with a Subway sandwich into the classroom.
This is an individual who is transmits a deadly disease that is “suppose” to kill you w/in 2-3 day via blood, air, who knows? She essentially the human equivalent of a bomb, also known as, biological warfare. No! No one is going to stick around a human bomb! For what?! Fear of the unknown is a deadly thing. Throw that in with the utter chaos of weeks of guarding a biological ticking time bomb that you don’t even know if it’s safe for you to be standing this close to...everyone knows there is an entire classroom of dead students right below that died w/in hours of coming to school/contact (possibly). Do you believe in the entire history of the military there has ONLY been utter and entire by the letter compliance?! What are you comparing this hypothetical biological quarantine situation to that has you 100% sure?
Why did the army suddenly lose their shit, again? Because one student fell 50 meters from them? 🙄
Yes tell the guy to leave after you cough into his eyes
I remember listening to this story back when it seemed like the real quarantine would last a few months and we would soon be back to normal
now it is creeping towards a year of Quarantine
It'll never end. We will do this for the flu next time.
I ‘member! Lol
At least in the story the government wasn't lying about a super deadly virus like in reality.
It will go on till the boosties realize they have been conned really hard and start saying no.
These are THE most dramatic high schoolers ever written
“And everybody died. Theee end.”
10/10 - IGN
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Wait. What? Dude you gotta give us a heads up about spoilers ... 😬
Thank you now I want my 2:16 hours back
Sir, Your rendition of this sad tale brought up emotions I thought were long since gone. A truly brilliant story with a hint of the Breakfast Club. Please keep up the good work A +.
"Vamos a morir aquí y ellos pueden limpiar la sangre fácil con agua y cloro. Bien suavecito. Estamos fregados." "Mama, lo siento mucho. Solo quise escapar. No es mi culpa. Quise.."
English translation:
"We are going to die here and they can clean the blood easy with water and bleach. Very easy. We're fucked."
"Momma. I am so sorry. I just wanted to escape. It's not my fault, I wanted..."
Maybe those two years in high school and online gaming have amounted to something.
Thank you for that it was bugging me I was going to translate it all after the story and you have saved me that time thank you again 😊
If only people lived like the two lovers in the end of it all. I'd give my life to finally feel the true care the last characters shared...
Thanks for the story.
Even if it was completely unrealistic, shallow, and written by someone who has no idea how to write, so they throw in some teenage sex?
I dont understand why they immediately decided to beat the infected to death and getting germs all over themselves in the process. Just force them in another room. It's a bit of a stretch and I would have enjoyed a slower dive into insanity I mean they were murdering like 2 days in, what kind of fucked up school is this?
ROTC is an American term. So why the narrator decided to mix American with IRISH accents among the students is beyond me. But it was HILARIOUS, and added to the character of the story all the same. ;P
The different accents also threw me off.
an irish person can’t have moved to america?
@@mmmmmmmmaria if that was part of the plot I'm at the narrator or the writer would have mentioned it.
@@Mygg_Jeager it doesn’t have to be part of the plot. whether he made that choice when narrating or the author meant it to be that way people are diverse and can come from different places. idk why you’re so surprised
@@mmmmmmmmaria it would be like hearing a novel set in Japan being not only narrated by, but also voice acted by Southerners from Louisiana.... a narrator can be any voice at all but a voice actor is supposed to fit the character.
the Dark retelling of The Breakfast Club
More like breakfast club meets lord of the flies.
@@TwoEagles121 Yes! I was thinking Lord of the Flies since the knife came out.
My literal 1st thought when I heard the Grand Poobah of High Upper Ass Crack talking about how she was going to sic Daddy on everyone! 🙄😒😳😂😭💀
Amongst the vast libraries of stories I've heard, this one touched my heart, and brought tears to bloom in my eyes. Such a beautiful story good sir. Your voice acting is so highly appreciated.
That was one hell of a story!!! Though this story is about teenagers, this was the most matured and thought provoking story I heard in a while.
1:09:00 where they atack the dude coughing up blood "scrathing and kicking him" was freakin stupid. Way to attack a fellow victim and get his infected blood on you. Wtf lol
It's been a while since I watched but I still love hearing discount thor tell me a spooky story while I go to sleep
definitely enjoy these longer full story vids. Not saying i don’t like the shorter ones but the longer ones give me a sort of immersive vibe, close my eyes and get lost in the story type thing
One of the best authors! And excellently narrated, as per usual.
So no one thought to check the cafeteria after they started moving around and the soldiers left
The class downstairs dies in an afternoon, the 1st afternoon. But, it takes three days to die.
Thank you for making my underwhelming day a great one 💙
"I reach the Gates of heaven only to find the doors bared". Damn cut the man down right as he's about to get out.
There's always an andrew, princess, and military/badass wannabe
great story and narration as always!
What a great way to start off my Monday. You just made my day with this epic video NaturesTemper.
Fabulous story- amazing narration - loved how everyone had different sounding voices and accents - You've got a new fan! 🥰 Thank you !
Great story, ,, great narration
Left me sad and empty inside
The only horror stories I find scary are ones with real emotions, where you actually can somewhat relate to their feelings, and feel like the events could actually happen even if less severe.
The students names in this cracked me up. Louis Pasteur? Edward Jenner? Andrew Wakefield? Jenny McCarthy? Joseph Meister? Jonas Salk? Someone's science nerd is showing. Really though there was a missed opportunity for a John Snow.
I'm glad I wasn't the only one who picked up on that lol
@@DonV-95 as an epidemiologist and card carrying science nerd, I'm glad I'm not alone in noticing!
I deplored the absence of Mary Curry...
Now everytime I walk in a room full of people I'm gonna pull out my phone and loudly say "and then beyonce said to me"
I had to fall asleep hearing this. Your voice is so calming. The end of the story is peaceful.
This is the weirdest adaptation of Lord of the Flies I've ever heard.
44:30 how are they already decomposing? Hasn’t it only been a few hours???
I heard this story before on another channel some time ago and it was good. I like your version so much more. The voice acting is on point
OMG YAY SKOTT OMG THANK YOU FOR THIS!!!
Wow! What a great character study! Expertly written story and fantastic narration.
I'm guessing that you called it a "silo" cup because of copyright reasons since we all know it's a "solo" cup .... LMAO 🤣🤣🤣
He sounds like he would narrate a nature documentary and I love it
This is amazing so far!! Sadly I’ve gotta pause about 1/3 through due to work. Can’t wait to finish it up soon. Great work by the author and also the narrator
Great story and sad! Thank you got your brilliant narration. !!
Thank you for another beautifully narrated story.
I think the author Empyreal/Invective, deserves the ultimate
Praise for this pretty brilliant story. It reminded me of Anarchy in the Ranks, however civilised we think we are, once control is lost & situations devolve, we turn on each other in fear & unable to comprehend our fragile
Condition, intent on survival by savagery & brutality aware only of ourselves in our baseness.
Such an erudite & harrowing yet very entertaining story as ive not heard in a long time. So
Magnitude 10 stars to Empyreal/
Invective.
Natures Temper also gets Magnitude 10 stars for his unforgettable performance!
Creating a full cast of people in his one man narration.
The “control” (in the form of the armed troops imprisoning them and leaving to starve without any help) was what created the situation inside.
@@BP-vc4em Thank you for pointing that out. If we were as horrible as some believe we are, we wouldn't had made it this far.
We live in a world cloaked in an illusion of civilized society. Remember Joker's dialogue from the movie "Dark Knight"- " When the chips are down, these so called civilized people will tear each other up"
@@bappadityabhattacharya8762 thank you for replying & yes we do live under illusionionary civilised cultures. There is something basically flawed in mankinds make up. This flaw was bred into us, eons & eons ago & i dont think we've ever recovered from it. I cant remember if i read this or dreamed it but im sure i heard that Geneticists had isolated the " Evil " gene.
Maybe it was purposely put there in half the 'test' humans & the other half without.
Whether for equilibrium in all things or for scientific observations.
Ive recently been watching documentaries on the Yugas & there is some mind blowing knowledge to try & comprehend
Im not a fully fledged Buddhist but follow a similar 'Way' & for the past 30 odd years, been facinated wth Rig Vedas, the Mahabharata, many other myth & legend but ive come to realise that im not sure it is myth, i think its probably more or less true facts.
I would give my all to see Ankor Watt & the incredible temple buildings, the architecture & sculptures are breathtaking.
In one structure the sculpted decoration is mind boggling & among the gods & beings & royalty are these out of place blonde white women, like Marilyn Monroe & these figures are thousands of years old.
Ancient carved Basalt rock boulder of huge size, covered wth calculus & decimal figures including nanoseconds & parsecs...???
This is from millenia ago!!!!
Man! Talk about Far Out! Lol
You take care friend
From all in UK, unless you are in UK then its from all of us in Northumbria 😁🕉☯️☮♀️♂️⚕♾🇬🇧
@@itallia666 Maam, you too take care. I was reading through your comments a few things stood out to me. I you don't mind me asking, what is evil?
There are so many talented writers on the Internet that the phrase "this was one of the best creepypasta's ever written" has lost its meaning. But this was truly among the best, both in performance and in material.
One of my new favorite storytelling ppl. Ty sir
Most high schools buy food in bulk expecially canned foods. The only school that doesn't is an education/ detention center they get their stuff from other schools
Where u been man ?!? Missed ur voice. Glad ur back. I need more "werewolves are" !!!
Just discovered your channel and love it
The characterization was so compelling, but the external circumstances made little sense... unless they made it a tiny school in an impoverished rural area, maybe indigenous kids on a reservation. Wouldn't be the first infected blankets situation.
What an absolutely depressing story.
Imagine this being an anime... Damn that ending would have be hearth wrenching 🥺
When you listen to a story for the first time, it seems to last forever. When you listen to it repeatedly it seems to take 10 minutes. I’ve listened to this for the first time 4 days ago, several times since. ❤️
I’m back for what was my third listening to this fantastic story. True quality in both the story and the narration. There are some stories that are worth coming back to.
I'd have locked myself in a different room at the damn start lol
I've been binging these hours long narrated horror stories for several months. The longer the better! I've been trying to find someone that really knows what they're doing... I've finally found you! You don't just read a story ... you REALLY breathe LIFE into it! There are a LOT of people that make a good living narrating audio books. I'd L💖VE to listen to YOU read Stephen King! You have the natural voice of Chris Hemsworth, not an opinion, strait fact. Not kissing ass, I'm just not that kind of b🤬ch. You give a voice to every character effortlessly, you give women a feminine voice & each person with their own accent, AND LANGUAGE?!? As a person with multiple head traumas, leaving me with a SERIOUS problem with memory function, I often get lost on who's who when I listen to these beautiful horror stories. The way YOU narrate... 😥 I remember. You should find a place to audition for voice acting. You're a natural. I'd give you a ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐5 star review... buuut, AGAIN, I'm just not that kind of b🤬ch. Sooo, I'm gonna give you a hearty 🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤5 BLACK HEART review, with an ADDITIONAL 'F🤬N METAL SALUTE! 🤘💀🤘' Thanx fer the eargasim dude! Happy Chrismahaunnaquazika ...or what ever! Blessed be. ⁕✯~☽⚪☾~✯⁕
Bloody hell!! You need to put a warning on this video! 'Will RIP your heart out', ought to do it! Stella
Thank you for making my Monday better!
Blessings and good health to you and yours!
XOX Luna 💚🌱💚
(Just playing here Mr.Pye) Not all of us yanks are from the deep south or Boston. On a serious note !,,! Rocking narration
Enjoyed the story. Some stuff seemed kinda iffy but good story and wonderful narration!
4:55 that monotone shit biscuits had me rolling on the floor for 5 minutes. Not something I expect in a creepypasta but still a pleasant surprise nonetheless.
Amazing narration. Cheers!!
This is definitely a bittersweet story. I couldn't help but cry at the end. 😢
Hell yeah! Another great story to listen to while I work
Absolutely another great narration and story 👌🏼
2:07:45 that’s the most disgusting this I’ve ever heard…
😂😂😂😂
That really was a beautiful ending.
This sounds alot like Containment but with a streamlined narrative.
Not that I'm complaining, this was quite entertaining.
😂damm Wayne bars
Damn poor Patrick
#NaturesTemper please keep the "Werewolves are..." series on your narration schedule. #JoshWaggoner was on point, recommending that you also record these stories. The characters truly come to life with your talent of multiple voices, accents and dialects. 🤗
At leaat it had a happy ending...
Good Lord , this story gave me the same feeling I get at the end of Requiem for a Dream. totally sad as balls. Welp time to listen to Cum town to cleanse my head lol.
How cool would it be if this was a prequel to that one story that NaturesTemper read about the cult that took over a school!
What story?
@@kreuger2062 " I'm a swat officer"
@@anthonymiller434 thank you.🥰
Wouldn't fit passed the first few minutes.
OMG IT'S THE COMPLETE SCHOOL QUARANTINE STORY
Sad story but the love at the end made it all worth it!
Despite the fact that this was kinda flawed I actually enjoyed this.
Great loved it interesting take on the human psyche when confinement and fear is the main dish at the banquet
That was truly F@!KED UP!!!!!
kinda hit me as a modern lord of the flies. damn good story as always.
edit : i just wanna say once they said cold like symptoms shouldn’t they have gotten rid of the only kid coughing? no excuses for a cough during the covid pandemic 😂 holy shit that ending tho
Have you never heard anyone cough before?
@@christiangraham4579 being a smoker, yes i have idiot. when you are told there is a bug in the building that CAUSES A COUGH don’t you think that’s kind of just self preservation? get off your high horse and take the joke. apologies if i offended you for saying when somebody shows symptoms they should isolate....
Excellent as always. I didn't know you spoke Spanish well. Saludos hermano
Amazing reading!!!
There's just... so much wrong with this one lol. I swear, so many of these authors today could REALLY use some editing services and/or a bit more outside proofreading input.
This made me cry.
I had to give this another listen.
🤘💯
Thank you Sir
Very well done. Bravo Bravo.
FYI Geraldo is pronounced with an H instead of the G sound . Like Her then aldo . Don’t usually correct anyone but as you are my favorite narrator ever I don’t want anyone poking fun of the way you say pronounce words 🌹
Poor Patrick. Kid didn’t have a chance.
And since when do those who are afraid of blood born infection literally rush forward to issue a hands on beating? Herd mentality will do you in every single time .
It always devolves into chaos and murder when it’s a story about teens and survival. I guess that’s what you’d expect from a class of high school students during an unnatural disaster. But idk if it’s realistic. Because there are students who deal with violence on the daily, and others that have natural born leadership qualities (sports team captains, activity group leaders etc) that at least in my school would have been able to make things at least last longer than a week or two.
If only you had added translation subtitles for the Spanish.
I wondered from early on why they didn’t check the cafeteria for food.
This was a really good story with top-notch narration. Shot me right through my romance.
Amazing narration!!! Moderate story because of the basics of a school that were missed. So much time and effort was clearly put into writing this story, but the lack of visiting the cafeteria and attempting to use phones (even corded phones if this was supposed to be before cell phones) are huge problems for me that could have been handles easily in the story.
Darn it!! Got all excited over a long one only to figure out Id already heard it! 😓
Fantastic reading, though I can't help but feel that while story may have ended it is far from over.
I'm not crying , you're crying 😩😩!!
How do you say, Lord of the Flies? Nice.
amazing story
New subbie! 👍🏽👍🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽
Voice acting is spot on
This one was a bit dumb. I'll spare anyone reading from getting a huge list of problems and just sum it up by saying it feels like the author is just being edgy and trying too hard to sound smart.
How do you mean? It seemed rather realistic to me, besides the whole “bio-weapon in a school” plot.
😂mm😅 at certain parts I may ir may not have cringed a wee bit
louis pasteur, lol really love it.
Why would you not sneak to the cafeteria