pafnayn - SKIN (OFFICIAL AUDIO) [AI]

got inspired by cryptic writing, I was writing something similar to drain you, then I wrote JUICE IT and was like ooo repetitive can sound good, which is where the gimmie part comes from.
the song is overall about how a significant other can be both amorous and vicious. Often, men try to make women their own and control their life. kinda like a leech, which is why I use things like "eat you whole" and "I want the skin and bone"
I was just thinking about how often you see controlling partners wanting you to follow their standards and ideals, hence my lyrics, " I want to see if you can become me"
pretty tasty jam, but it was mostly inspired writing- don't have much experience with controlling partners mainly just distant/ two sided - let me know if it resonates with you :)
LYRICS
[verse]
gimmie, gimmie- more of you!
gimmie, gimmie- more!
gimmie, gimmie- more of you!
gimmie, gimmie- more!
gimmie, gimmie- more of you!
gimmie, gimmie- more!
[verse]
i'll take a piece
and eat you whole
i want to swallow
and make you shallow
i need to see
if you can become me
i'll place your picture on my wall
[chorus]
gimmie, gimmie- more of you!
gimmie, gimmie- more!
gimmie, gimmie- more of you!
gimmie, gimmie- more!
gimmie, gimmie- more of you!
gimmie, gimmie- more!
[verse]
i'll buy you a drink
you don't have to think
i'll cook you a meal
and flush you down the sink
i want to dress in your clothes
i want to see how you see
i want the skin and the bone
just show me
just give me-
[chorus]
gimmie, gimmie- more of you!
gimmie, gimmie- more!
gimmie, gimmie- more of you!
gimmie, gimmie- more!
gimmie, gimmie- more of you!
gimmie, gimmie- more!
[repeats^]
[verse]
i will shout so quiet
that you feel like stone
i will bring you gifts
and sell you at the store
i want to breathe your lungs
and drive your heart
i need to be all that you are
[chorus]
gimmie, gimmie- more of you!
gimmie, gimmie- more!
gimmie, gimmie- more of you!
gimmie, gimmie- more!
gimmie, gimmie- more of you!
gimmie, gimmie- more!
[refrain]
gimmie, gimmie- more of you!
gimmie, gimmie- more!
gimmie, gimmie- more of you!
gimmie, gimmie- more!
gimmie, gimmie- more of you!
gimmie, gimmie- more!

[@nox.tenebris777]

great music, keep it up!! 😉🙌🎶

[@dopedagoth1789]

Pretty good!
Pretty catchy

[@nox.tenebris777]

or you could also say: gimmie, gimmie- more of you!
gimmie, gimmie-more! 😅🤣👍