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- Опубліковано 1 жов 2024
- Hi so there's this show about turtles who also happen to be ninjas...
idk how this will do so im gonna hold off on writing out my entire au lmao
EDIT 2: Fic link is here:
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EDIT: Oh wow, this is CRAZY validating to see people liking this so much. I'll talk about my au since so many people have asked
Draxum kept 2 of the turtles (Donnie and Raph) and Splinter got the other 2. Donnie and Raph basically grew up in a stricter regime as you can imagine, and Donatello was HEAVILY favoured by Draxum. Raph definitely has daddy issues because of this.
Don and Raph LEFT Draxum at a super young age (around 10 year old equivalent) after meeting Splinter, Leo, and Mikey and realizing that their family is WAY more stable and comforting to be around.
This animatic takes place in the first AND last episode of ROTTMNT season 1 in accordance to my AU; Donnie is "reunited" with his dad (who he still loves) and Leo struggles to come to terms with the fact that Don can still love Draxum as a father while still being his brother. There's a lot of family dynamics in this au that I'd love to explore in different ways (more animatics probably). Don't worry, it's not all angsty!!
I feel that Mikey and Leo would definitely have meaner thoughts towards draxum if they were raised by splinter. I’m also guessing Donnie loves draxum because he was favored.
you positively nailed it!!
I like to think Draxum and Donnie think alike in some degree and that would be even more obvious since he was separated from the fam except Raph. Raph probably felt left out and therefore a reason why he'd be more inclined to betray Draxum and stay with his other brothers. I'm not sure of his relationship with Donnie, but it would be nice to see them interact whether for angst or hurt/comfort purposes. Cause' let's face it fluff for this kind of AU might have to take a backseat until after sh*t blows the fan...
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I am in love with this. I really like Donnie and Leo’s movements. They feel like how they’d act. We didn’t get to see much of Mikey or Raph, but I’m interested in seeing their half of the story animated. Another thing I’d like to note, Leo’s shoulder shimmy EEE! Why do I love it? I love it.
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Nobody:
Leo: *dramatic shoulder wiggle*
You know, this actually makes me question who would've been the better father for Donnie whe they were growing up. I mean, yes, Splinter is occasionally a good father, and yes, Draxums evil, but they have two opposites to the kids. Splinter probably would have been a better father to Raph, Leo, and Mikey, in this scenario, because they have enough traits of Lou Jitsu to get noticed. Strength, (raph) flamboyancy (Leo) agility (Mikey) and when you put Donnie in there, he doesn't quite fit. Because he has traits more from draxum. Intelligence, with a mix of slight mad scientist, put in there. This would obviously give him more attention from Draxum, and less attention from Splinter, simply because he isn't interested in those things. whereas with his brothers, it's the exact opposite. And if Donnie had to chose between having a father who loved him for his mind, and unique abilities, Vs a father who loved him, but didn't get to know him, he'd probably choose the first one. anyways, sorry for this rather long character essay, I shall take my leave. Your animatics really good, btw.
Wow 😳 that is so in depth, I never thought of it like that. I love reading people's analysis!
I feel like Draxum would have been a better father TO Donnie-in the sense that Donnie would have been happier if he'd been raised as Draxum's son and protege. Draxum would have understood what Donnie needed in a mentor and would have nurtured his talent. And he absolutely would have given Donnie the attention and praise that he desired.
But I feel like he would have been the worst father FOR him. Donnie already has so many issues with empathy and impulse control. Draxum would not temper that and would give him the tools to make it all 1000% worse. He would have a very hard time figuring himself out and feeling happy with himself outside of Draxum's lab. He would not be a confident and well-balanced adult. Not to mention that, considering what Draxum literally made him to do, he would end up doing some very terrible things.
@@chihiroisabelle8680 Same. I think he’d be a good teacher and caretaker physically speaking, and he’d really nurture the science-oriented aspects of Donnie’s interests and personality. BUT! He’d be a TERRIBLE parent.
Or, at the very least, a terrible father.
I think in rise splinter does favourite Donnie without showing, he does consider him the funniest guy and Donnie is the one who seeks his approval more
@@anna.owo. well, I guess there is that. But I'm still betting its probably Leo, due to him being the obvious favourite of Splinter in some other versions. **cough** 2012 **cough** doesn't even try to hide it **cough**
Due to popular demand (lol) the au has been added into the description!!
Sir maam i NEED YOUR SPCIAL MEDIAS PLS DROP THEM
@@Z.4chry twitter and tumblr specifically for rottmnt: leo-kinnie !! my full blown art twitter is @mahtopaha
Is this written out bc i MUST read this like MUST MUST PLEEEEEEEEEEASE
OMG THIS IS SUCH AN INCREDIBLE AU IDEA- this animatic is so fluid and flawlessly well done- everyone feels in character and Donnie’s history with Baron makes sense especially since he doesn’t want his dad to get hurt 😭
I love that donnie's battle shell looks like huginn!! Did he design it like that so he could feel closer to his father?
yes! Huginn/Muninn were his fav uncles / babysitters and clearly they still love him too ( 0:34 )
I DIDN'T NOTICE THAT THANK YOU FOR POINTING IT OUT OH LORDY I LOVE IT
OOOO?? NO IM INVESTED!!
THIS LOOKS SO GOOD!! THE ANTICIPATION IS INCREDIBLE, THE EXPRESSIONS ARE PHENOMENAL AND THE MOVEMENTS AMD TIMING IS SO ON POINT GOSH IT HAS ME ON EDGE!! I MUST KNOW MORE!!
I would like to kindly request the entire story please!
OH. MY GOD. does this au have a name???? is this fan fiction???? will you have something else on this au??? God, I fell in love at first sight! this is amazing! I've watched it many times and I want more
Yes and no. The au is called Parent Trap and there is no official fanfic yet ^^. I will DEFINITELY be putting out more of this au.
Can we please appreciate 0:41
I love the way that Donnie is standing with his staff like that! 🥰
I feel like Donnie (in this concept) would have a lot more love for Draxum than Raph would considering how he was shown more love by Draxum than his older and least favored brother was.
Honestly, I fail to understand how the favoritism didn't turn Donatello into a spoiled brat that lived to rub Raph's face in the "Dad loves me more than he loves you" trash heap.
I have been watching too many text-to-voice story videos about entitled people and about how favoritism destroys families.
Donnie never saw the favoritism for what it was, he genuinely was so young during all those years that only raph really remembers the BAD parts.
I think it would be because favoritism isn’t exactly what is happening and its more like Draxum puts more stress and tasks to Donatello but he praises him more for that and Raph feels Donnie is the favorite but instead Donnie actually has no idea what to do or how to tell anyone bc Draxum would have told him that is the LEAST he can do to be USEFULL and that this is WHY HE WAS MADE that it’s the bare minimum and reminding him that 24/7 and if by any circunstance Donnie thought “Why me and not Raphael?”(I don’t really think he would think that but i’m not quite sure) Draxum would be like “Because he ain’t flawed like your softshell” And if Raph tried to talk to Donnie to ask him if he was okay or to even tell him how did HE felt Draxum would call him weak by having or expressing feeling
srry i didn’t saw there was already an answer i guess got carried away i’m so sorry (๑•́ - •̀๑)
I love the moment Leo has, even though Leo hates Draxum, he’s important to Donnie, and Donnie is important to Leo. Leo sees he’s upset and doesn’t think twice after that. Love that visual storytelling
This is so COOL!!! Question!! QuestionS! How come Donnie is favoured over Raph, as Raph is the big strong one? Donnie is usually the weaker brother, this is even in the show. Does Draxum prefer Donnie due to his intellect? ALSO is this a fic or comic I could read somewhere? This concept is BRILLIANT!
Raph DEFINITELY is the bigger and stronger one out of the pair, but he's also the most hesitant to actually hurt others for no good reason. He's got a pretty good moral compass (Being with Drax didn't change that about him), but DONNIE.... Donnie likes being chaotic and creating new weapons. Drax likes Raph for his strength and intimidation factor but he Loves Donatello for being smart and cunning. Besides, Donnie can fight pretty good with his tech!
Just read the description and I ✨love✨ your concept ! Not to mention how cool and full of life the animatic is, it’s incredible !
BANGER ANIMATIC AS ALWAYS!!! I am fascinated by this AU please tell us more
Wholy f@ck thats a good plot!!!! I love that scene of donnie asking him to save draxum like that FELT cannon and its very hard to make something FEEL cannon. Well done *fast clap*👏
wow!!!!! what a compliment THANK YOU
I love this sooooooo much, I love the brotherly love that Leo shows to Donnie, and it was just good regardless
HELP 1:00 TO 1:03 IS SO COOL AND FLUID I LOVE IT SM
I LITERALLY BEG YOU, PLEASE MAKE MORE OF THIS AND PLEASE LET ME READ YOUR AU. I AM IN SHOCK OF HOW GOOD THIS IS IM BEGGNG PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE.
The style and movements and energy (pun intended) are immaculate!!❤
But will you only make animatics of this au or did you also write a text? Anyway, the video is awesome!
I have been tinkering with the idea of writing a fanfiction since a lot of people have been interested in one, but there is no official text yet!! :^) I thrive in drawing my aus so expect more animatics
@@CanteSkuya It's fine with me even if you decide to only make animatics, it seems like a very nice idea. In the meantime, I signed up so I don't miss any more updates!
I love Donnie’s battle shell so much!!!
Hey there @CanteSkuya 😊
This is a fantastic and engaging animatic of your AU story idea. I am wondering if you would allow a dub of this animatic, with proper artist credit via links, on our channel? I love the work you have done, and would love to bring this to life :3 Please let me know, thank you!
Hi there! Saw some of your work, loved it. Totally go for it, and when it's finished maybe shoot me an @ on my twitter or tumblr if you can! ( @ leo-kinnie)
@@CanteSkuya Absolutely! Thanks so much! :3 I will message on Tumblr
What is this au???? I love it already!
IM SCREAMING THIS IS FUCKING INSANE HOW. I LOVE THIS THE AMOUNT OF EFFORT AND THE SMALL ANIMATIONS AND THR AU ITSELF AAAAAAA ITS SO GOOD EVERYTHING ABIUT THIS IS SO GOOD YOU SHOULD BE PROUD OF YOURSELF
Why did I think the video thumbnail said autistic instead of animatic 🤨
But I do not regret clicking on this, it’s really cool
accurate either way /j
This is actually really really cool if super interested in seeing what happens next
arches browarches brow arches BROW I AM ARCHING MY EYE BROW [compliment]
Woahhh this is so awesome!! The movements are so smooth, are you going to write a fic about this? I’d love to read it !! This is so beautiful
I'm leaning towards writing a fic!! I'd need to think abt it more before I make any decisions
@@CanteSkuya take your time, whatever you do will be awesome!!
OH MY GOODNESS THIS IS SO COOL!! YOO THE STORY WAIT! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! I LOVE IT SO MUCH OH MY GOODNESS! BRO DONNIE BETRAYED THEM!
You actually reminded me to upload my rottmnt au stuff lol!
This was amazing. I can't wait to see what happens next.
This was amazing and I desperatly need more
MORE ANGSTY TURTLE BOYS!!!
1 hour ago!!! I want more nowwwwwewwewwwww
Nice animatic!! Would love to see more of this AU
I love this so much
Don's not dead, is he? Please tell me he's not dead.
He's NOT dead 😉
@@CanteSkuya Oh, thank goodness. 😊
I LOVE IT! I want more NAY I need more! Amazing animatic!
YESS!!!! ROTTMNT!!!
WOOOAHH I LOVE THIS SM ONE QUESTION THO: r those blue and red shards at the end from his goggles??? Is he ok??? Did he get got I NEED ANSWERS 😭😭
WOW!! I got here an hour after it posted!?!? IM SO LUCKY!!! I wanna know the whole story so BAAAAD😩🥰
EMOTIONAL DAMAGE 😃
I NEEED MORE
How dare this be the only au animatic up so far!!! /j no but seriously this is awesome can't wait to find out more I love this concept and your art style is amazing its incredible how well animated this is!!!
I'm incredibly interested in how you imagine Donnie magic working since we never really got anything from the show/movie
IM SO GLAD YOU POINTED OUT DONNIE'S MAGIC i have a very fun ( angsty? ) backstory for why Donnie has his mystic magic so early on ( even before his brothers 😉) so i hope to express that in another animatic somehow. Or maybe a fic!! (TYSM!!)
I want morrreeeee!
More plz~
I would love to see more animations of this au 🥰😍🤩
You have literally became my favorite tmnt animator in just 1 video 😮
this is fantastic!! u clearly put so much work into this. also i lovee the song, halsey 5ever
Draxum favoring Donnie would make sense, since the first time they met Donnie was the only one who really landed a hit on Draxum.
They were all pretty much rookies in fighting a really strong entity, yet Donnie managed to land a hit.
Donnie has potential and Draxum see's that more than he sees his brothers.
It would also be a win win senario, Donnie gets advanced alien tech while Draxum gains a warrior
I love this animatic an unhealthy amount I NEED TO SEE MORE IF THIS STORY LINE
Wooo i love your animation and even so much detail when donnie running w his power up and the reflection in Leo's eyes
HOLY CRAAAPP DUDE IM OBSESSED
THIS WAS DONE SO WELL!!!
THIS IS SO SICK god I already yelled about it on tumblr but the pacing the framing the expressions?? Immaculate on every level
Please tell me there's going to be more of this, I love this au so much I am obsessed I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT
also I love the animation, it's smooth and you can clearly tell what the characters are feeling between frames
also also I could see this donnie relating to the song numb little bug by Em Beihold so much I've already made so many brain animations you have no idea
*THIS IS SO GOOD*
This is very cool.
EATS YOUR ART. OMG SKUYA I LOVE YOU /P
HOLY AAAAAGAHAGAGGAGGAGAGAGA THIS IS SO GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA *dies*
I NEED MORE OF THIS AU!
Hello! I wanted to ask your permission to dub this as well (another channel has already dubbed this) since I’ve been OBSESSED WITH UR COMPOSITION AND SONG CHOICE THROUGH UR ANIMATIC OMG /POS
💕 ❤️ 💗
Oh totally!! I'd love to see the finish product ^^ shoot me a dm @ leo-kinnie on twitter or tumblr if you can!!
@@CanteSkuya I will! I hope to do it justice 😭
OMG!!!! ✨❤️🧡💙💜✨
I am SO invested in this now! And all the frames, the pasing, tension AAAAAAAAH 100000000000/10
THIS IS SO COOL I CANT STOP WATCHING!!
I love this so much it's absolutely beautiful and I'll definitely be keeping up with this fic!
Bro it's amazing😢 I would be thrilled if you gave me permission to dub it!
What animation program(s) do you use??? I've been struggling to find one I like
I drew everything in medibangpaintpro (free) and edited it together with toonboom harmony (not free)
Bruhhhhh the shots in this are so good, damn.
😊🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
:0 this is amazing!!! I love when donnie jumps down from the railing the moments are so cool!! Love this animatic
WOAH THIS LOOKS AMAZING! let us know if you're going to write a fic about it, i'd love to read it!
WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! Is this based off a fanfic? Link? I’m gonna die if I don’t know 😭
This is so beautifully made wow!!! I love this idea of an AU
THAT'S SO GOOOD!!!! THE EXPRESSIONS ARE SO AMAZING AND LEO'S ATTITUDE IS ON-POINT! DONNIE PLEADING FOR LEO TO HELP HIM AND LEO'S LITTLE SMIRK WHEN HE GOES TO HELP AHRHWAJSHHEHANDNHWHQHSBS I WASN'T GONNA OBSESS OVER AUS TODAY BUT I GUESS THAT'S WHAT WE'RE DOING
Oh my WORD this is so cool!!!
This looks so amazing!!
BROO THIS IS SO GOOD IVE WATCHED THIS ON REPEAT LIKE IT FEELS LIKE A REAL ROTTMNT EP! OK I NEED TO READ THIS AU😭
I thought the video picture said “Autism”
Damn!😂
YES!!!!!!!!!! FUCK, THIS IS GOOD!!! THE ANIMATIC, THE STORY, JUST, FUCK!!!!!
I full on thought it was gonna be the song from the Spongebob musical
Ohhhh that was so amazing
😱🤭😎🤯
Oh my, this is gorgeous!!
The story is so well thought out and I read some comments asking about the lore, this is so well thought through, and then the song choice is so nice!!
Also, the way you draw the turtles is amazing!! And even if it’s an animatic, the movements feel so natural and in character!!
I have to check out ur work
0:12 hes so cute do-
WAITSTOPSTOP HOLD ON WAIT WAIT I - WAIT HOLD UP STOP STOP WAIT-- CAN I READ THIS OOORRRR??????
Alright I would LOVE to hear more about this au it's so freaking interesting. Also love your art style ✨
I’m obsessed!!! Can’t wait for pt. 2 if you do one!
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HOLD ON???? THIS IS AMAZING, I SAW THIS ON TIKTOK AMD WAITED FOR THE FULL VERSION OF IT OMG
Omg this is amazing! I need more! More of this AU and your beautiful animating!
What is the AU called?
Parent trap ^^
1:04 LEOSAGI REFERENCE???
ALSO WELL DONE, THE MOVEMENTS ARE GORGEOUS!! AWESOME AU
*starts obnoxiously sobbing*
SORRY BUT WHO GAVE YOU THE PERMISSION TO ANIMATE LIKE THIS???
Wait! Is that the lenses from Donnie's goggles in the last part of the video?
>:^) yes
*You have unlocked a new watcher*
I NEED MORE
VIOLENTLY SOBS
No words, sounds, or movements can explain how much I love this it's like I wanna squeeze it and push my palms together so far that my hands bleed THIS IS SO GOOD AAAAA
Absolutely beautiful animation! That run cycle is 😘
Amazing 😍
HOLY- I just finished the fic and watched this, knowing about how Donnie’s ninpo is painful to him and the shock on Leo’s face after he sees that Donnie has mystic powers I- wow.