The Sum of Their Parts - Chapter 10 | Harry Potter FanFiction AudioBook
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- Опубліковано 20 вер 2024
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Summary:
For Teddy Lupin, Harry Potter would become a Dark Lord. For Teddy Lupin, Harry Potter would take down the Ministry or die trying. He should have known that Hermione and Ron wouldn't let him do it alone.
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My top 3 : 1 Princ of slytherin 2 Oh God not again 3 The Sum of their parts😊😊 Thanks a lot for your hard work😊😊
Love this channel sooo much! You deserve any new member! 😊😊😊
Thank you!
"and whatever strange things we could pick in the garden" 😎🏡 who knows lol. Thanks for sharing.
Your welcome!
Okay, I've gone through most of the stories you've done by now with the exception of 7th Horcux and Watergaw. The first is, I assume, the first you did, so I assume it would be the. . . buggiest. And Watergaw is a dracomione story, and I'm not yet desperate enough to try that.
The narrating voice itself. It took me a while to realize it was an AI voice. I'm used to those being a lot worse. But when the voice says 'asterisk asterisk asterisk', it was really obvious this coudn't be an actual person. Some smaller things too, like DADA (defence against the dark arts) being spoken as dada like a child might address their papa. Or Querrel's stutter being done wrong. Small things. But I realize using the AI allows you to do these with a lot less work, which means we get more of it, so I'm not complaining too much. It is, admittedly, a less impressive feat than voicing it yourself, but I can't argue with the results.
As for the fanfics you decided to voice. Or have the AI voice.
Rigel Black (Pureblood Pretence) is by far the best one you picked so far. I'm admittedly a sucker for really good female Harry stories, but its good regardless. And it avoids doing any of bad tropes that annoy me in some of the other stories.
The Sum of Their Parts. Its okay. It repeats itself a little too much imo. There is only so much 'I don't want to do this, but I feel I have to' can be said and remain interesting. There is no humor or levity in this story which drags it down a bit. But the central plot is a good enough to hold interest.
Oh god not again! is the second best you've picked. It is flawed. It tends to mock the original story a bit too often for my taste. Whenever it does so, the humor comes across as mean spirited. If you think the original story sucked so much, then why tell fanfiction about it? But whenever it does anything else, its legitimately funny. Got me to laugh several times. And it gets better the further and further in you get into the story.
The Boy Who Lived No more: Didn't get very far into the story with only 5 chapters. But its good. The story is a bit too edgy for my taste, but beyond that, Ginny was an interesting protagonist.
The Prince of Slytherin. . . I'll be honest, I don't like this one. The worst one. It includes a lot of tropes I don't like and feels mean spirited. It turned James into a complete asshole. Jim is a character who exists solely to show how good the self-insert is in comparison. And never before have 11 year old children acted less like 11 year old children. And the story really drags on imo. I followed the fanfic for a while but I dropped it when it got to third year. At this point, the fanfic is 1,356,965 words long. I am sorry, but this story is not good enough to spent so much time on it.
If you'll allow me to make some suggestions for other fanfics to try in the future. . .
The Arithmancer: A Hermione centric story. Fairly long. 529,133 words. But it is completed and does the full 7 years of Hogwarts.
On the Way to Greatness: The best Slytherin Harry Potter story that exists. Its the thing The Prince of Slytherin can only dream of being. Sadly uncompleted and stops in the middle of sixth year or so.
Almost a Squib: Been a long time since I read this. Might not be as good as I remember. But 46,899 words, is completed and does the full 7 years. Presenting a Harry who is just bad at magic, but that doesn't stop him from being awesome.
Blindness: 324,281 words. Completed. And does overpowered Harry better than any other story I can think of besides maybe 'For Love of Magic' and that story isn't fit for youtube.
The many Deaths of Harry Potter: Simple. If Harry dies, he goes back to an earlier point to get it right. Thrown into a more brutal wizarding world with no plot armour, he needs that power a lot. Completed at 242,571 words. You'll notice I'm only recommending something if the story is finished with the exception of On the Way to Greatness. . .
Harry Potter and the Other Path: This is the most. . . vanilla of all the stories here. Closest to the original story. We have Harry (sort of with a different personality), but he is still a hero, still goes to Gryffindor, and still beats Voldemort after 7 years. That's not a bad thing. If you are a fan of Harry Potter, and want to experience it again with slight variations yet almost no repetitions of the original, this is the thing. 400,432 words and, ofc, completed.
I'd like to recommend another female Harry Story but honestly. . . just continue with Pureblood Pretence. :)
OMG this so helpful, thank you so much! I’m new to the HP fanfic world so any information people provide is greatly appreciated. My plan is to focus the pureblood pretense more now that I have finished The Sum of There Parts. Blindness and The many deaths of harry potter are on my short-list for the next stories, but I will for sure check out your other suggestions.
I can't wait for this one (the sum) to be finished. I mean, I guess I can. I'm really enjoying it. I wish it did go a little further in its creativity and bounds, though, like whomever commented said -- starting to feel like the story is just the list they're going down or something. There isn't a lot of real substance past the first few chapters.
I really enjoyed them getting into more advanced, mature, powerful, transformative magic that was intolerant of their limits and pushed them. It only kinda sat on that for a second, unfortunately.
Thank you for commenting, OP, and I'll give your top pick a try next. It seems pretty largely-liked.
Last chapter is going up tonight!
You are making my day better with every chapter of every story thanks a lot😊😊😊
My pleasure 😊
I've rather enjoyed this... after the 11th is released, I think I'm going to set it up so I can listen to all 11 at some point. ^^;
Harry Potter and the Blood Wars.
Can you please post the 11th one soon🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻💜💜🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹
Yes, it will be done this week for sure.