Meredith E. Phillips
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Making a revision to do list (okay, I made TWO) and trying to revise Act I • A Writing Vlog
I've considered, I've planned, I've made to do lists. In fact, I made TWO to do lists, thank you very much. But after all the organizing fun, it's time to get down to business and actually do the revision work. I know...it was a shock to me, too, that a plan and a list wasn't the end product.
Anyway, I dove into Act I, swapped some POVs, trimmed some words, and all in all am feeling very good about this fresh set of revision work!
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My name is Meredith E. Phillips and I am a Regency romance writer! I am hoping to be traditionally published one day and am using this channel to share that journey with you. My hope is that my videos are encouraging, inspiring, and motivating so that you will want to pursue your own goals and dreams!
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Querying Chronicles #5: I got a book deal offer...but did I take it? • Meredith E. Phillips
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I've been keeping back a bit of goings on from you. Getting a book deal offer was not on my 2024 bingo card, but here we are. The big question, though, is: did I take it? There were a lot of pros and cons to the situation and in the end I did what I thought was best for me. Would you have chosen differently? The Querying Chronicles playlist: ua-cam.com/play/PLz8_rpvJrHKnRSlfVki08sClnP1cair4g.ht...
Let's Start Draft 5: Organizing my mentor's feedback and making progress • Meredith E. Phillips
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Let's start draft 5?? I'm trying to get a handle on the feedback and figure out the best way to organize things so I can create a map for myself on how and what to revise/change/delete/alter/etc. WHEW! It's a sizable amount of work, but I'm feeling good about the current state of the book and I'm excited to see what it looks like in a month! Previous Vlog (Getting feedback from my mentor): ua-c...
I got my manuscript critique back early 👀 • Organizing and evaluating feedback • Meredith E Phillips
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The manuscript critique is BACK and I'm so excited to dive into this next round of revisions! It felt like there was a great mix of positive comments and constructive criticism and I'm honestly feeling very encouraged about the whole thing. SO! Let's figure out how to organize all this, wrap my head around the revisions that are to come, and get started! Day in the Life vlog: ua-cam.com/video/A...
A Day in the Life of a Writer with a Full Time Job: Finding Time to Write • Meredith E. Phillips
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I wanted to share how a normal weekday looks for me as a writer with a full time job. I know a lot of us struggle to find and/or make time for writing on a regular basis and this is just how I'm managing to juggle things at this point in time. If you go back a couple years, my writing life looked a lot different and there was a lot less time for it. I'm sure if you skip ahead a year or more, th...
One Year of Querying: Stats & Lessons Learned • Querying Tips for 2024 • Meredith E. Phillips
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It's been nearly a year since I started querying, so I figured it was about time to share with you some of the lessons I've learned along the way. Keep in mind that everyone has a different experience, though! If you've queried before, let us know how it went for you. Or if you're thinking to enter the query trenches in the near future, let me know your questions in the comments. ~L I N K S & R...
Brainstorming & Refilling the Creative Well • Creative Reset • Meredith E. Phillips
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I'm enjoying my little break from my current WIP while it's off with my mentor for feedback, but that doesn't mean my writer brain turns off. I've been wanting to dive into some other ideas I've had floating around in my head so I did a bit of brainstorming this weekend. It was nice to relax and just piddle around with some discordant thoughts for a little while without the pressure of having a...
Did I manage to revise my book in 6 days? 🌟The stunning conclusion🌟 Feat. Elder Millennial Behavior
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WELL. Here we are. Four days before my deadline and I'm doing the absolute most to get this book as polished as possible. Did I figure out too late that my characters are displaying an excessive amount of sighing? Maybe. All goofiness aside, I really do like this project a lot. I'm proud of the work I've done so far and while I'm DEFINITELY ready for a bit of rest, I'm also excited to see what ...
Let's revise my 90k+ word book in 6 days because that's not delulu at all • Meredith E. Phillips
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Well, folks, here we are in the final days leading up to my November 15th deadline. I've been working my patootie off for the last month and all I have left to do now is revise the entire book in 6 days. Totally reasonable, totally sane. Can I do it? You're about to (almost) find out. This is going to be part 1, which is a vlog of Saturday, Sunday, and Monday (November 9-11). Next Friday (the 2...
Let's Chat, Episode 6 - My Genre is Dying, I'm Depressed, Let's Spiral a Bit • Meredith E. Phillips
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WELP. It's not a secret that historical romance is struggling in the sales department. But this really has me depressed about it. Harper's IG post here: pDCRzh8BxAg3/ 🤩 F O L L O W M E O N T H E S O C I A L S 🤩 Patreon: patreon.com/meredithphillipswrites Instagram: meredithphillipswrites Website/Newsletter: www.meredithephillips.com 💞 Ask me about my DISCORD for his...
LET'S FINISH MY BOOK • Rewriting the end of my book for the fourth time and descending into chaos?
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Remember how I finished my book back in April? And then rewrote the ending and finished it in July? And then rewrote the ending AGAIN and finished that in October? Well, I figured it had been a few weeks, so why not REWRITE THE ENDING A FOURTH TIME BECAUSE THAT'S REASONABLE HAHAHAHA I'M FINE WHY DO YOU ASK? Join me and Cody for some productivity sprints on his channel on Monday, November 11 at ...
Planning a Solo, At-Home Writing Retreat 🥰 • Revising, Rewriting, and Being Overly Optimistic
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I had high hopes for a cozy, productive weekend writing retreat! And I mostly succeeded...I think, haha! My plan for this weekend was to organize my days into writing sessions, breaks, and inspirational video viewing (as a substitute for a speaker at a conference). Revisions on my Regency romance are taking a *little* longer than I anticipated, but I'm still very confident I'll be able to finis...
I'm a 2024 SmoochPit Mentee!! So let's rewrite the end of my book...again 🫠 • Meredith E. Phillips
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AAAAHHHHHHH!!!! The emotions? I have all of them. I'm thrilled and grateful to be part of the 2024 SmoochPit Mentee group and I c.a.n.n.o.t. believe I get to work with one of my favorite historical romance authors for the next several months. You know I'll be vlogging the whole thing for you to enjoy! So where did we start with initial revision thoughts? THE ENDING LOLLLL That's right! Your gir...
Querying Chronicles #4: Manuscript requests, querying strategy, and a SmoochPit update 👀
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Oh, the highs and lows of querying, am I right? It's been a fun couple of months and I'm excited to share all these updates with you. I've had some confidence-boosting experiences and some frustrating ones, but all in all, I'm having a good time. SmoochPit prep vlog: ua-cam.com/video/yrVA-Me4lXU/v-deo.html SmoochPit website: www.smoochpit.com/ SmoochPit IG: smoochpitig ~T I M E S...
Let's Chat, Episode 5 - How to choose between story ideas (& a sneak peek at what's next 👀)
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Okay, I actually need help. HOW DO YOU DO THIS 😩 In the past, I've always been drawn to one story idea in particular and it's been no problem figuring out what project to pursue next. But I am struggling to decide between two very different stories at the moment. How do you choose between story ideas?? 🤩 F O L L O W M E O N T H E S O C I A L S 🤩 Patreon: patreon.com/meredithphillipswrites Insta...
I was almost done with draft 3...and then I decided to rewrite the ending 🫠 • Meredith E. Phillips
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I was almost done with draft 3...and then I decided to rewrite the ending 🫠 • Meredith E. Phillips
Reading and 🔥roasting🔥 my very first WIP • I wrote a YA Fantasy and it's definitely real good
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Reading and 🔥roasting🔥 my very first WIP • I wrote a YA Fantasy and it's definitely real good
Let's Chat, Episode 4 - Is social media becoming a requirement for authors? • Meredith E. Phillips
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Let's Chat, Episode 4 - Is social media becoming a requirement for authors? • Meredith E. Phillips
Let's Chat, Episode 3 - How to Improve as a Writer • Meredith E. Phillips
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Let's Chat, Episode 3 - How to Improve as a Writer • Meredith E. Phillips
A Weekend Revision CHALLENGE: Can I revise Act III in two days or am I delulu? • Meredith E Phillips
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A Weekend Revision CHALLENGE: Can I revise Act III in two days or am I delulu? • Meredith E Phillips
Let's Chat, Episode #2 - Now what? Alternative November Writing Challenges • Meredith E. Phillips
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Let's Chat, Episode #2 - Now what? Alternative November Writing Challenges • Meredith E. Phillips
NEW SERIES: Let's Chat, Episode #1 - Intro • Meredith E. Phillips
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NEW SERIES: Let's Chat, Episode #1 - Intro • Meredith E. Phillips
Revising Act II, but it's a little chaotic • Meredith E. Phillips
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Revising Act II, but it's a little chaotic • Meredith E. Phillips
Let's Enter a Writing Contest • Writing a Query and Synopsis for my WIP • SmoochPit 2024
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Let's Enter a Writing Contest • Writing a Query and Synopsis for my WIP • SmoochPit 2024
The End of an Era: NaNoWriMo's AI mess • Meredith E. Phillips
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The End of an Era: NaNoWriMo's AI mess • Meredith E. Phillips
Join me on PATREON 🥳 • Encouraging you on your writing journey • Meredith E. Phillips
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Join me on PATREON 🥳 • Encouraging you on your writing journey • Meredith E. Phillips
A super PRODUCTIVE 3 day weekend + How to revise a 2nd draft into a 3rd draft • Meredith E. Phillips
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A super PRODUCTIVE 3 day weekend How to revise a 2nd draft into a 3rd draft • Meredith E. Phillips
I'm exhausted but let's rip apart draft 2 of my Regency romance in a delirious attempt to improve it
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I'm exhausted but let's rip apart draft 2 of my Regency romance in a delirious attempt to improve it
Time to start DRAFT #3 of my Regency romance • A Writing Vlog • Meredith E. Phillips
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Time to start DRAFT #3 of my Regency romance • A Writing Vlog • Meredith E. Phillips
HODGE PODGE: Announcement 👀, 3rd Draft Plans, Craft Book Rec, & a Mini-Q&A! • Meredith E. Phillips
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HODGE PODGE: Announcement 👀, 3rd Draft Plans, Craft Book Rec, & a Mini-Q&A! • Meredith E. Phillips

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  • @joshuavincent3515
    @joshuavincent3515 День тому

    The problem is that it is completely possible for Chat GPT to write a novel. And a pretty good one at that. AI has gotten to the point where it is able to make stories, art, and even complex UA-cam videos that are indistinguishable from the human forms. Funny enough it's the calculating and all these other things that we expect AI to get is where it is most likely to trip up. This is because to program an AI it has to learn and the learning process is eerily similar to how we learn. For example, you rarely find a writer who has not read a lot of books. That's why they have to give an AI a lot of books. This poses a danger for writers because if someone just uses an AI to write a book then publish their story they are subtracting the human from the process. Dramatic wording I know but I don’t know a better way to say it. After that we all know what comes next. A corporation will see this as an opportunity to make money and monopolize the process. Don’t think so? When you get a minute lookup the UA-cam channel Ceric Artman. Is that AI? Then look up Blooms and watch how he shows you it is an AI. Don’t believe me on the writing? Write me a story that a person might write about a fictional old west. Make it compelling and give me the best you've got. For write now we're only working on the first chapter. Chapter One: Dust and Ash The town of Bitter Creek wasn’t much to look at-just a sunbaked strip of shacks, a leaning saloon, and a church that hadn’t heard a hymn in years. The dirt road through its center could swallow a man’s boot if he wasn’t careful, and the wind carried more dust than whispers. But it had one thing other towns didn’t: it had Marshal Grady Kane. Grady stood on the porch of his office, leaning against the weathered post, one hand resting lightly on the butt of his Colt Peacemaker. His badge caught the late afternoon sun, glinting against his chest like a promise-or a warning. Bitter Creek had seen better days, but Grady was determined to keep what little peace there was left. The stagecoach rolled in, kicking up a plume of dust so thick it obscured the horizon. Its arrival was a rare event, and by the time the horses skidded to a halt in front of the saloon, the townsfolk had started to gather, eager for news or trouble-or both. A man stepped out, his boots hitting the ground with a weight that suggested he wasn’t just passing through. He was tall, with a face carved from stone and eyes as sharp as a hawk’s. His duster coat flared in the breeze, revealing a pistol at his hip and a rifle slung over his back. Grady straightened, his instincts prickling. Strangers in Bitter Creek usually meant one of two things: they were running from something, or they were bringing it with them. The stranger met Grady’s gaze and tipped his hat. “Marshal,” he said, his voice low and rough like a whiskey-soaked promise. “Name’s Caleb Dunn. I reckon you’ve heard of me.” The name hit like a thunderclap. Caleb Dunn-outlaw, gunslinger, and the man behind the infamous Red Mesa Massacre. If half the stories were true, he’d left a trail of bodies across the territories that no posse could keep up with. “What brings you to Bitter Creek, Dunn?” Grady asked, his voice calm but his hand inching closer to his gun. Dunn smiled-a wolf’s smile. “A deal, Marshal. I’m here to make you an offer.” The crowd murmured, shifting uneasily. Dunn raised his hands, palms open. “I ain’t here to cause trouble,” he said, loud enough for everyone to hear. “But trouble’s coming, whether you like it or not. I’ve seen the riders-thirty men strong, maybe more. They’re headed this way, and they aim to take everything that ain’t nailed down.” Grady felt the weight of the town’s eyes on him. He had faced his share of desperados, but thirty men? That was a small war. “What’s your angle?” Grady asked, narrowing his eyes. Dunn’s smile faded, replaced by something colder, more calculating. “My angle is survival. I’ll help you defend this town-for a price.” “And what’s that?” “A pardon,” Dunn said. “Full and unconditional. You put it in writing, and I’ll fight by your side.” Grady’s jaw tightened. He didn’t trust Dunn any more than he trusted a rattlesnake not to bite, but the town didn’t stand a chance without help. Thirty men against a marshal and a handful of farmers? It would be a massacre. The sun dipped lower, casting long shadows across Bitter Creek. Grady glanced at the townsfolk-men and women clutching their children, their faces etched with worry. He knew what he had to do, even if he hated it. “Fine,” he said at last. “You’ve got a deal. But if you cross me, Dunn, you’ll find out just how fast a marshal can draw.” Dunn grinned again, the wolfish gleam returning. “Fair enough, Marshal. Fair enough.” As the crowd began to disperse, the tension hanging in the air like a storm about to break, Grady felt the weight of the decision settle in his gut. Trouble was coming to Bitter Creek, and he’d just made a deal with the devil to stop it.

  • @theericbeaty
    @theericbeaty 3 дні тому

    I'm the same way about using similar phrases close together. It's also one of my pet peeves, so I watch it like a hawk in my own writing. Also, what font are you using? I've been using Avenir for my revision font; yours looks similar to it. For my main writing font, I love Merriweather.

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 3 дні тому

      Yep, it's Avenir for this project! I always change the font when I start a new project. Gotta find the font that "fits" the vibe, whatever that means 😆

  • @JoeyPaulOnline
    @JoeyPaulOnline 3 дні тому

    I'm just finishing up work before the holidays start! Love the extra lists, I do that too 😅 Hope you have an amazing holiday period 🎄💜

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 3 дні тому

      Thanks, Joey! I hope you enjoy the holidays, too, and spend plenty of time relaxing next to your Christmas tree 😊

  • @keeshlon
    @keeshlon 3 дні тому

    What state do you live in?

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 3 дні тому

      We moved to Texas in 2019. Before that I had lived in northern Virginia my whole life (I miss it haha).

  • @keeshlon
    @keeshlon 3 дні тому

    I recently came across your videos. I'm a retired office worker and a total novice who simply enjoys writing. For what it's worth, it seems to me you made a very wise decision. I'm learning a lot from your experience in getting your books published from this video and a recent one you made. Thanks for sharing your journey!

  • @76kilosofshade81
    @76kilosofshade81 4 дні тому

    I'm with Sherry in wanting to Eat All The Things right now but I'm also so close to 100K in Q4 (at 97K words today! I'm gonna do both. 😄 Also, playing again for the algo.

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 3 дні тому

      Woohooo!!! That 100k will be so sweet 🙌

    • @76kilosofshade81
      @76kilosofshade81 3 дні тому

      @@MeredithPhillipsWrites I just powered through a 2 hour flow and hit over 4K so 100KQ4 challenge was won. 🙃 And my two MCs have just started real interactions. Oh no! 😆

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 3 дні тому

      @@76kilosofshade81 AAAHHH That's awesome--congrats!!

  • @winonawiatt
    @winonawiatt 4 дні тому

    The two exact same to do lists is so real lol! Its a nice little technique I use when I'm procrastinating!

  • @semiotik
    @semiotik 4 дні тому

    Hi Meredith! Agented writer here, though not in the romance genre. I haven't followed your querying journey but know from personal experience it's horrifying. One thing - have you considered submitting directly to Harlequin directly through Submittable? I know they have a Regency imprint and you can bypass the whole agent thing and go right to the source.

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 3 дні тому

      I don't think I've ever read a Harlequin Regency 🫣 I think they tend to publish category romance, which is shorter, usually in the 50-60k word range and mine is more the full length 80-90k novel size. And honestly, I really want the agent! I don't want to have to navigate contracts and negotiations on my own.

  • @dariakey5318
    @dariakey5318 5 днів тому

    In my country publishing works exactly the same as you were surprised by) It's a normal stream of event for us. Quite comfortable, I'd say but it might be smth we are used to)) So weird to see some real confusion over the thing that's so normal)))

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 4 дні тому

      Oh that’s so interesting! It’s definitely not the norm here unless maybe you’re already a well established author and the publisher knows they can trust you to deliver.

  • @alyssa.and.the.books.
    @alyssa.and.the.books. 5 днів тому

    I watched this days ago and I'm still in shambles 🙃 I truly don't know how I would have handled this, but I really think you made the right decision. I just know that agent is coming

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 4 дні тому

      I was having a TIME that’s for sure. Fingers crossed for agents for both of us in 2025 🤞🏻

  • @sherrylalonde5719
    @sherrylalonde5719 5 днів тому

    I'd get nothing done if it wasn't from the dopamine that comes from checking a little box on my to-do list! Seriously though, totally admire your ability to get anything done at this time of year. All I want to do is (re)watch old x-mas movies and eat All The Things.

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 4 дні тому

      You really can’t ignore the lure of the check box 😆 Honestly, this is usually when I’d be taking a big break, but that January 10th deadline won’t allow for it!

  • @Mandy_James
    @Mandy_James 6 днів тому

    It really bothers me that they didn't even want to read the whole manuscript. Like, who does that? Also, the fact you wouldn't have an agent to advocate for you to go over those contracts is just scary. Under those circumstances I think you absolutely did the right thing. Also, don't later books in a series make a lot less money than the first one? Wouldn't that mean you'd be making barely anything by the time you made it to...a 6th book? It could end up being about 10 years of your life with constantly diminishing returns just due to the fact some readers won't stick around with a series past the first few books. I think you should feel very comfortable with your decision and chalk this up to a good learning experience. Now you know even more how much you need an agent involved in whatever the future holds for your publishing career. In the meantime, you get to continue focusing on creating the stories you're passionate about. Well done making the tough choice. Something tells me future Meredith is going to thank you for doing what was right for you and not just running away with the chance to become published. Being an author is not just about writing a good story, it's also about handling the business side of things wisely and you've proven here that you can do both. You have a bright future ahead--just keep going.

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 5 днів тому

      Yes, good point about the series! Typically you get less sales with each book as it’s natural to lose readers who don’t come back for whatever reason. And thank you 🥰 I feel confident in the choice I made and hopefully I’ll have better news in the near future!

  • @katendress6142
    @katendress6142 6 днів тому

    I would have probably scarcity-mindset-ed my way into accepting it even if I was leery.

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 6 днів тому

      Oh, believe me, I _definitely_ had those thoughts, too!! "What if this is as good as it's going to get for me? Histrom isn't doing well and I should take what I can get." I'm glad I took the time to think through things carefully, though, and am happy with the decision I ended up with!

  • @zeekaayy7810
    @zeekaayy7810 6 днів тому

    Cant wait to read all 6 books of this series Mery!!

  • @JoeyPaulOnline
    @JoeyPaulOnline 6 днів тому

    I think you made the right choice, without them reading the rest of the book, it kinda made me wary for you 💜

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 6 днів тому

      Yeah, I just couldn't make that make sense in my head! It was a confidence-boosting offer, but I'm glad I ended up where I did with this decision.

  • @jenniferroche1130
    @jenniferroche1130 6 днів тому

    Omg this video feels very Sliding Doors for me because many moons ago, I got a similar-ish offer from a small press, and unlike you, I actually took it! My experience was… disappointing? Underwhelming? At times frustrating? I chalked it up as a learning experience and decided to never work with a small press again. All in all, I think you made the right decision!

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 6 днів тому

      Oh, that's so interesting! I know a lot of people enjoy working with smaller presses and I guess it just depends on the writer's individual goals and the press in question. But I'm glad I ended up where I did with this decision!

    • @jenniferroche1130
      @jenniferroche1130 6 днів тому

      @ Good point, I’m sure it varies a lot! I think entering into a publishing deal when I was quite young (I was 22) and without an agent, meant I had no way of knowing what was normal and what wasn’t. Other small presses might not have any of the problems I encountered 🙂 Moral of the story: do your research!

  • @AthinaKarpouzis
    @AthinaKarpouzis 6 днів тому

    I would have made the same decision. It was such a difficult thing to have to navigate just on your own. It was great to have your mentor to give you advice. I will say the moment they said we expect it will be polished etc. they lost me completely.

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 6 днів тому

      I was SO grateful to have Alexandra to talk to about this! She had great insight and tips I wouldn't have thought of on my own. Definitely a tough choice to make, but I'm glad I ended up where I did 🥰

  • @sallysims5090
    @sallysims5090 6 днів тому

    It sounds like you made the right decision for you. It is weird they didn't want to see the whole manuscript. Also, when you don't get an advance on royalties they have a reduced incentive to market your book. Sounds like you grew from the experience. Let's all keep writing, everyone!

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 6 днів тому

      That’s an interesting angle on the no advance contract I hadn’t thought of! I do think they’re supportive of their authors and have heard good things from people who work with them, but in the end, it just didn’t feel like the right fit for me. It was a learning experience for sure!

    • @sallysims5090
      @sallysims5090 6 днів тому

      @MeredithPhillipsWrites Yes, it sounds like that publisher would be a good fit for some folks, but like you said it would make it tricky to work with other publishers or agents if you have other series to consider. Thank you for your videos. It's always good to hear about other writers' publishing experiences. I'm in the throes of querying and thinking about these kinds of publishing/marketing decisions.

  • @WeeKid1675
    @WeeKid1675 6 днів тому

    Ah! I have SO many thoughts on this! But the sum of them all is this: I think you made the right choice. I’ve been in the querying trenches for as long as you have, but as a ghost-querier if that makes sense. Querying on behalf of a client I ghost-wrote for. I’ve learned SO MUCH about the industry in that time, I’ve spoken to multiple agents and former-agents, and the fact that this small publisher didn’t even ask to see the full MS before making an offer tells me that they didn’t care about the book quality. They just thought it would sell based on the first 3 chapters and they wanted a piece of the pie. Not the worst thing ever, but your gut said it wasn’t right for your book and I agree with your gut.

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 6 днів тому

      Wait, I’d never thought about ghost writers having to ghost query! That’s so interesting. There were definitely some tempting pros to accepting the offer, but I feel good about the decision I made.

  • @writenowdream3882
    @writenowdream3882 6 днів тому

    Strange that they didn't want to read a synopsis or finish the draft. That seems like a pink flag to me. 🤔

  • @teresajones5973
    @teresajones5973 7 днів тому

    As a hybrid author I’m glad you trusted your gut. For them to not read the full book was the first clue of a No for a new author. There are legit smaller publishers and you won’t get an advance, but will get higher royalties, but they only offer contract for each book.

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 6 днів тому

      Yeah, that aspect just never felt right to me. I do trust that they’re a legit publisher (they’ve been around for over 12 years and have some recognizable histrom authors who work with them), but it didn’t feel right for me in the end.

  • @thelvey1
    @thelvey1 7 днів тому

    I am curious ... in this sort of situation, is informing any of the agents you are still querying about the offer an option? And might you have (if you wanted to) made finding an agent a stipulation to be met before signing (along with a time-limit, of course)?

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 6 днів тому

      I could have contacted the couple agents who still have my query unanswered, yes! I didn’t think about that until it was pretty late in the game though 😅 I’m not sure about asking the publisher to wait for me to get an agent…good question!

  • @erikaromerowrites
    @erikaromerowrites 7 днів тому

    Congrats on the offer, though you passed on it. Just wanted to note that my mentor has advised that if I get a book deal offer before getting an agent, then I should inform any agent with my query that I have a book deal offer. That often causes the agents to want to get on calls and potentially make an offer of rep, even if they also recommend not taking that particular deal.

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 6 днів тому

      Thank you! I did think about contacting the agents who still have my query, but by the time I did it was pretty late into the back and forth emails stage and I think I only have about four queries left open anyway. But definitely a good idea to keep in mind!

  • @thelvey1
    @thelvey1 7 днів тому

    This was FASCINATING. Thank you for sharing. Congrats on the offer and on having the self-confidence to say no. 👏

  • @LaurelMoring
    @LaurelMoring 7 днів тому

    Congratulations! Even if it didn’t work out, it’s so validating for you! Fingers crossed you’ll end up with the deal of your dreams in the near future.

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 6 днів тому

      It is SUPER validating! I definitely feel like I’m on the right track. Thank you!

  • @aaronhaceves
    @aaronhaceves 7 днів тому

    Sounds like you made the right decision!

  • @jthomp1254
    @jthomp1254 7 днів тому

    That was a crazy turn of events! I’m glad you had Alexandra to turn to and I’m hopeful the right deals will come! Congrats on the offer, and for making the best decision for yourself and your work.

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 6 днів тому

      YES, she had great tips that I never would have thought of on my own. And thank you! I know I did the right thing for me.

  • @L5player
    @L5player 7 днів тому

    As difficult as declining your first offer from a real publisher has to be, which is the whole object of the exercise, I think you showed the better wisdom doing so. Having your options open is always good. As your Grandpa Dick used to say, "They've still got their widget, and I've still got my money." The easy choice would have been to take the first bag of candy you could, knowing you'd always have bragging rights that you became a published author your first time at bat, but you'd be signing a deal with no one looking out for your interests--like a FSBO in real estate. Not a fan. So congrats for at least getting props for your work a second time, including your mentor. I have to believe your choice will be rewarded in due time.

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 6 днів тому

      It was definitely tempting! But I’m glad I took plenty of time to weigh my options. Here’s hoping I get a little further in 2025!

  • @IHBooks
    @IHBooks 7 днів тому

    Seemed like a well-reasoned decision to me 😊

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 6 днів тому

      Thanks! I definitely took my time thinking through all the different pros and cons.

  • @ThePoetryofNiceShop
    @ThePoetryofNiceShop 7 днів тому

    Hi Meredith! Long time lurker, first time commenter here 😂 anyway, I just wanted to say that I also got a small publishing house offer on a previous book I was querying, and that was an offer after them only reading the first three chapters with similar terms that you described. I appreciated the offer (it was a legit house) but it didn’t sit right with me either, and ultimately I declined. That was a tough choices when the trenches weren’t going well AT ALL for me, but, low and behold, I got agented with the next book I wrote and am now out on submission to big 5’s with an awesome agent who is super editorial and a total champion for my voice and my work. All that to say, listen to your gut and trust your process, your talent, and your journey. It’s going to get you where you want to be. Stay the course. 🥰❤️

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 6 днів тому

      Ahhh that’s amazing!! Congrats on getting the agent and good luck with the submission phase. Thanks for sharing your experience!

  • @readknitwithcheryl
    @readknitwithcheryl 7 днів тому

    Good for you, Meredith, knowing what you want and going for it. I have a friend who is published by a small press and she likes it, but she isn't happy with their editing. She doesn't get a lot of money off her books and got no advance, but she agreed to it because she just wanted her books published and it works for her. I'm proud of her, but I, personally, agree with you on your thoughts on the topic. I think it's important to know what you want out of a deal and not let anyone force you into something you just don't feel right about. So good for you!

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 6 днів тому

      Thanks, Cheryl! It was really tough choosing, but I feel good about the decision I made for myself 😊

  • @_minkit
    @_minkit 7 днів тому

    Congrats on the offer, and also congrats on being able to take time to decide whether or not it was truly the best offer for you. Even before you said it, I had a feeling that the fact they hadn't read the book in full would be the big thing that'd keep you from saying yes (not that the other cons didn't add to that decision ofc). And not to say that this publishing house doesn't do their job well, as you said in the beginning, you even know a writer who works with them. But I think, as writers who seek agents, you WANT someone who loves your book to work on it with you. I'm sure your book is great, you think it's good, but it's like... how can THEY know they actually want to publish this if they don't at least read the full book? It's like "do they care about the actual book or story at all or do they just want to publish anything that SEEMS well-written?" I like to think I would've made the same decision. Like yes, i want to publish, but i want the people who decide to help me publish to actually LIKE the book and how can they like it if they don't read it?

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 6 днів тому

      YES I think all that was a big factor too. It was hard to choose, but I feel confident in the decision I made for me.

  • @tracy-marie
    @tracy-marie 7 днів тому

    Hello. Thank you for sharing the pros and cons of being published with a smaller publishing company. I definitely see the pitfalls of signing a contract without them reading the entire manuscript I think it did the right thing.

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 6 днів тому

      Thank you! There were definitely some persuasive pros to consider, but all in all I know I made the right choice for me.

  • @76kilosofshade81
    @76kilosofshade81 7 днів тому

    It takes someone with a real strong sense of self-worth to make this kind of decision, especially when it seems perfect on the surface. What a great boost of confidence, though! Take the good and carry on.

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 6 днів тому

      Thank you 🥹 It was a tough decision but I know I made the right choice for me.

  • @malikamaybe
    @malikamaybe 7 днів тому

    I find this so deeply inspiring. Like I adore that you were able to sit with yourself and really practice the ‘no agent/no deal is better than the wrong agent/wrong deal’ in reality. I told myself not to query agents that I already knew I didn’t want to work with, but I did so anyway after rejections rolled in. Now, one of the fulls out is with someone that I’m like 85% sure I’d say no to if they offered lol (I do think it’s gonna end in rejection anyway tho based on QT submission stats lol) and I’m like ‘you have to stick to your guns better!’ at myself lol so it’s really cool to watch you actually do so even with a literal deal in your face. Amazing, amazing, amazing.

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 7 днів тому

      I’ve heard awful stories of writers who have partnered with the wrong person or group and I feel very cautious! It’s not even that the other party is evil or something, it’s just that it’s the wrong partnership for them. Congrats on the full request, though!!! That’s fantastic, even if it does eventually end in a rejection.

  • @NicoleWilbur
    @NicoleWilbur 7 днів тому

    Wow - so many congratulations on that offer!! That's AMAZING and must feel really good! But I think I would have made the same decision...my impresson is that a lot of writing and publishing is being patient and thinking critically about what you really want. (I keep doing it for myself when I want to jump back into the querying trenches with my book after getting a decent response...like no, no I have time, let it sit, don't rush with something that doesn't feel just right) What a happy thing though...it feels to me like you have great momentum with SmoochPit and the deal offer, which must feel SO good!!

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 7 днів тому

      Thank you 🥹 It was a great boost of confidence for sure and that’s worth quite a lot when there’s always so much doubt and uncertainty around your own writing.

  • @karentroester148
    @karentroester148 7 днів тому

    How exciting. I think you made the right choice, but it must have been really hard to turn it down.

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 7 днів тому

      It was a very tough choice. But once I’d made the decision, I felt good. I made the right call for me!

  • @caesuracrossing5473
    @caesuracrossing5473 7 днів тому

    It definitely felt weird that they didn’t read your whole book let alone asked you for information on your series my only worry is that they would use it to feed it through AI. You did say that its a reputable small press with people you know under it. Its still good that you followed your guy. Im excited to see the rest of your journey

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 7 днів тому

      Thank you! I definitely believe this small press is completely legit and wouldn’t be using AI in that way, but it’s always good to be cautious and ask questions!

  • @kristine5801
    @kristine5801 7 днів тому

    I had to come down to see if you'd accepted or not, I couldn't take the suspense. Whew! I totally agree that signing without connecting about a revision plan/vision would be too far, even if they'd read the full manuscript. I'm sure your ms is excellent and they clearly see promise in your sample, but I'm glad you protected your work and YOUR vision for it.

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 7 днів тому

      LOL I love using the comment section for spoilers 😅 It definitely felt good to get a professional pat on the back, so to speak!

  • @PhoebeWritesFiction
    @PhoebeWritesFiction 7 днів тому

    So exciting to get the offer, but sounds like you made the right choice. I wouldn't want to go into a contract without someone reading my full work either! Sometimes the very fact that you're torn between yes and no means it's a no. You don't want to start such an important relationship with wariness and doubts - especially if you're tying yourself in for three whole books! When the right opportunity comes around for you, you'll feel happy jumping in.

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 7 днів тому

      YES! Completely agree that you don't want doubt creeping in right at the beginning of a partnership. It was a tough choice to make, though!

  • @aquariusowl3872
    @aquariusowl3872 7 днів тому

    It must have been exciting to get the recognition of your hard work and I'm sure it wasn't an easy decision. A lot of new writers would jump at the chance without being as thorough as you were working through realistic expectations of what this choice would mean for your future work. I think you made the right choice even if it means it will be longer before I get to meet your characters 😊

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 7 днів тому

      It was definitely a tricky situation to navigate! And I didn't want to jump to a Yes without a lot of consideration. It feels so good knowing my work has some amount of merit, though!

  • @sherrylalonde5719
    @sherrylalonde5719 10 днів тому

    That is amazing, and so validating! I've considered some small/digital publishers as well but haven't submitted to any yet. There are a few with good reputations who publish books I know are high quality. Their submission guidelines usually ask for the whole MS though, and I agree I'd feel weird about accepting a contract without anyone having read to the end. I think you need to go with your gut on these things and you made the right decision. But I think it's a nice confidence booster too:)

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 9 днів тому

      It was VERY validating and a great boost of confidence! Definitely a win in my book.

  • @EmmaBennetAuthor
    @EmmaBennetAuthor 10 днів тому

    Ear problems are horrible x You poor thing x

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 9 днів тому

      It wasn’t too bad! Probably would have been if I hadn’t gone to the doctor though 😅

  • @Caroline_Creative
    @Caroline_Creative 10 днів тому

    I really appreciate you going through all the pros and cons. I think I would have made the same choice as you

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 9 днів тому

      There were definitely some very persuasive pros to consider, but I’m glad I settled where I did 🥰

  • @nicoleporter1369
    @nicoleporter1369 10 днів тому

    You made the right choice.

  • @JoeyPaulOnline
    @JoeyPaulOnline 10 днів тому

    Glad you got the ear checked, but ear infections suck. I always hate having to change character names like I don't wanna! 😅

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 10 днів тому

      She's so coded in my brain as "Grace" that I keep getting confused when I'm reading the manuscript and come across this "Sophia" character. Like, who is that?? 😅

  • @theericbeaty
    @theericbeaty 10 днів тому

    Love the purple hoodie! I suspected an ear infection.

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 10 днів тому

      I've never had an ear infection before! It wasn't too bad, just sort of annoying.

  • @76kilosofshade81
    @76kilosofshade81 10 днів тому

    Watch and comment again for the algo! 😉 The worst I ever got was 40+K words into a novel where no one had a name... 👀

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 10 днів тому

      Oh no, 40k is a lot of words hahaha So many [Name] brackets 😅

    • @76kilosofshade81
      @76kilosofshade81 10 днів тому

      @@MeredithPhillipsWrites 😆 I didn't even do that, I used descriptors like LAWYER and GUY and trusted myself to figure it out later....

  • @L5player
    @L5player 10 днів тому

    What IS it with you and doctors?? They actually come in handy when you're in pain. I heard that somewhere. Ugh! I know: maybe find a doctor who is also a writer. Win/win.

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 10 днів тому

      Eh, most of the time when I go to a doctor they don't do much to help. I only go now when I'm pretty certain I need antibiotics or special medicine of some kind to get rid of whatever is wrong.

  • @authorjessicahoopes
    @authorjessicahoopes 11 днів тому

    Naming characters is so hard! I love the name Jemima though! Maybe I'll use that one!

    • @MeredithPhillipsWrites
      @MeredithPhillipsWrites 10 днів тому

      I kinda like Jemima, too, but the maple syrup connection is too much for me lol