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00:00 Введение • Автор делится опытом написания манги и ищет вдохновение в первых главах любимых манг. • Он замечает, что три манги "One Piece", "Naruto" и "My Hero Academia" имеют схожую структуру. • Цель видео - изучить эти манги и вывести формулу для написания вступительной главы. 00:42 Пролог • Пролог - это вступление, устанавливающее контекст и дающее фоновые детали. • Примеры прологов из "One Piece", "Naruto" и "My Hero Academia" показывают, как они раскрывают сеттинг, жанр и будущие сюжетные линии. • Пролог должен добавлять интригу и загадочность, чтобы заинтересовать аудиторию. 05:42 Введение главного героя • Первое действие главного героя раскрывает его характер. • Примеры из "One Piece" и "Naruto" показывают, как одно действие может показать ключевые аспекты личности героя. • Важно создать сцену, которая иллюстрирует основные черты героя и может стать отправной точкой для развития сюжета. 10:28 Введение в создание сюжета • Создание эффективного сюжета - самая сложная часть создания манги или сценария. • История - это последовательность событий, а сюжет - это способ их конструирования. • Важно понимать разницу между историей и сюжетом. 11:25 Три ключевых элемента сюжета • Существует множество способов создания сюжета, как и способов приготовления яйца. • Важно выбрать тему, которая передаст характер персонажа и упростит написание сюжета. • Тема должна быть продумана и исследована, чтобы стать основой для сюжета. 12:10 Примеры тем для манги • Тема "Наруто" - одиночество, "One Piece" - мечты, "My Hero Academia" - героизм. • Тема - это активное исследование идеи, а не просто статистика. • В каждой манге задается один драматический вопрос, который раскрывается в первой главе. 15:03 Создание персонажей на основе темы • Тема помогает создать главного героя, который воплощает эту идею. • В "Наруто" герой борется с одиночеством, в "One Piece" - с мечтами, в "My Hero Academia" - с героизмом. • Персонажи должны преодолевать внутренние и внешние препятствия для развития сюжета. 16:05 Внутренние препятствия и ложь • Создание внутреннего препятствия через ложь, в которую верит персонаж. • Ложь помогает создать начало, середину и конец сюжета. • Пример: Луффи в "One Piece" сначала верит, что готов стать пиратом, но позже осознает свою неготовность. 18:47 Примеры из "Наруто" и "My Hero Academia" • В "Наруто" Наруто лжет о своем одиночестве, но узнает правду о себе и получает поддержку от Аруки. • В "My Hero Academia" Деку лжет о своей способности стать героем без причуд, но в итоге узнает правду и становится героем. 20:41 Заключение • Тема - это активное исследование идеи, а не конкретный ответ. • История должна быть интересной и позволять читателям находить свои собственные ответы. • Концовка не обязательно должна быть черно-белой, как многие думают. 21:17 Препятствия для героев • У каждого главного героя есть уникальный недостаток, который затрудняет достижение их целей. • Это внешнее препятствие, которое герой преодолевает к концу главы. • Примеры: Луффи хочет стать пиратом, но ему не хватает боевых навыков; Наруто не может создать стабильного клона; Деко не доказал себе, что может стать супергероем. 22:19 Преодоление препятствий • Луффи тренируется, чтобы стать сильнее и отправиться в море. • Наруто изучает новую технику для сдачи экзамена. • Деко доказывает Всемогущему, что может стать героем, и становится им в будущем. 23:38 Итоги и выводы • Создание короткого пролога и специальной сцены для представления героев. • Выбор одной темы и создание тематического вопроса для героев. • Добавление вечной лжи и внешних препятствий для каждого героя. • Завершение истории с преодолением препятствий и продвижением героев. 24:36 Альтернативные подходы • Автор не предлагает использовать эти методы для всех историй. • Существуют разные подходы к созданию историй, например, сначала сюжет, затем персонажи. • Пример: "Тетрадь смерти" могла бы начаться с сюжета о дневнике, убивающем людей. 25:38 Структура сюжета • Структурирование сюжета не ограничивает творческую свободу. • Следование структуре помогает создать лучшие истории. • Автор благодарит зрителей и приглашает к обсуждению и подписке на канал.

I'm a young 11 year old and im making my own manga while being in 6th grade this video was also good help but Im doing the drawings in paper then tracing them in the digital art app and don't worry my drawings are actually good not exaggerated like most teenagers draw

MASHLE: 'muscle over magic', embodiment Mashle Burndead, thinks he can savely live with gramps, does not know anything about the magic society DEMON SLAYER: 'how far would you go to save your sister', embodiment Kamado Tanjiro, thinks he could keep his sister save, does not know about demon (slayers) You don't need an one-page prologue. Nobody said you need it on page one. Make it exciting for people to get involved.

Omg that one page made me jump on my seat xD didnt expect that

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Such a great video!I think everyone who desires to write a manga should watch this. This is pure GOLD I've been asking questions on how to do that how to do this,you answered all the questions I am surprised this is not a Paid Content Because this is the most beneficial video for young mangakas Great Work!Keep It Up Man We Love U❤

Very good breakdown......My favorite manga is SAKAMOTO DAYS.....OMG I am sooooo hooked!!!! The new anime that caught my attention is One Punch Man, Chainsaw Man and DanDaDan...those caught me off guard.

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Amazing video

dude honestily this is the best video for writing your own manga but not for writing one shot

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What an insightful video really helped a lot with my story. Can't wait to see more of your analyses !

7:32 at this point naruto really are reckless, if that rope didnt held up big chance he gonna hurt a lot from that high even with kurama inside him

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I'm gonna write the next One Piece because of this guy, for real. 🔥

This is a great way to start a one-shot easily, like this a begginer's starter pack imo! (But there are still great ways out there, but this is like the foundation you will need to progress as a begginer!) How can you use it? Just follow it for a *long period* of time, because there's no tutorial that will make a one-shot for you, only if you take the actions. (MANN, YOU HELPED ME A LOT, BLESS YOUU!)

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I was trying to think of panels that caused this reaction in me and there's nothing that will ever top a page from Billy Bat (I won't say it's contents in case you haven't read it). The first half of that manga is probably the best example of this video's contents, one of the biggest page turners I've ever read. I swear your analysis are 1000 IQ stuff. Idk how you manage to spot and break down these storytelling techniques but it's SO helpful. My mangas will owe you one 😭

Thank you my manga might be good

Your page is so Underrated man I feel like you explain things in a very engaging way

Man you're good, can you also do a guide of manga or comics panels , please 🥺

I actually love this video it really helped me a lot since I am trying to make my own manga but it's something I'd rather do for fun then make money off of it. This helped me realized a lot of things I need to make a proper manga so thank you for this

Among all the guidance,bro you gave your best and made us dicide to think and make a better move at the start, Love from India,Thank you bro😁

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New subscriber here! Your videos are so helpful! Do you have any advice for someone who wants to create a manga but can't personally do the art? I'm a writer, but I can't draw very well.

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I think, *Hero academia's setup is more brilliant for this writing style than you think* , Let me explain by adding couple of my observations. Theme: Heroism Dramatic Question: Can a Quirkless Person Become a Hero? Answer: Yes! Because Heroes is are define by the qualities someone have, not by strength. If you lay out these qualities, these are; brave in the face danger, reckless, impulsive, ready to help out for a friend in need, fight for justice even for his hater if needed, don't give up easily, Humble, morally good. and of course somebody who says "My body move, before i can think" when it comes to saving someone. ( So, This is the (ending) truth, you characters will reach at the end (this exact answer), Now, to make it a story you just need to start far away from the truth to make the change more dramatic and interesting for the readers, but don't force it, starting with main character knowing and believing the truth while everyone else believes the lie is also a good setup) Character who will explore the question and reach answers : 1, Deku, a quirk less character but all the above mention Hero's qualities, ( He knows the answer, but need external validation) Deku will just a positive change arc with validation as a center, or ( he believes the truth, while everyone else believes the lie arc) He will begin by doubting his future ( will my hard work will be rewarded?, can I become a hero?). ----------------- Then. Will see his inspiration All might and jump on the chance to get the (answer) validation -------- Get's a disappointed answer and Give up on the idea,------ but when his childhood friend get in danger he jump in save him ----- This action will change all might mind, he will make an exception for deku----- "You Can Become a Hero" 2, All might, Mentor character that will reach the truth, regain his spirit for being symbol of peace a little more and then help, Deku reach the truth. Reasoing: it not deku going though the change but All might, as he is the only one who can validate the answer for deku! Cause he is inspiration behind his dream. So, All might will have lie the character believes to Truth arc! So, He will start the story Weak and with limited power-------- He is disillusioned with his hero life------------ then a young kid, get in his way and ask is it possible for someone powerless to become a hero--------------- Remembering his wounds, he wll answer No ( show his wound ) and leaves feeling bad------ later, he Then encounter a situation where a monster has taken a kid hostage, however find himself unable to transform to help ( he is mentally burn out) -------------- Then, with the action of the same powerless boy from earlier, he will be remind what it truly means to be a hero ( its not superpowers but spirit) ----------- get over himself and transform to defeat the monster -------- at the end change his answer just for deku, find him and tell him personally, "You Can Become a Hero" Combines all together, and throw in some side character for more world building and impact, and you have the First Chapter of My Hero Academia. Hopes it helps someone You

This got me to read the manga and i don't even read manga.

Nice. that's good advice for all writing types this breakdown of unexpected moments and revelations not drawing on too long and not becoming too formulaic and expected. I'll keep that in mind.

Thank you! I’ll watch this video again for good use.

As an aspiring (comic/ manga) writer, this is one of the best videos about comic specific storytelling I’ve ever seen. Wonderful example and break down. Thank you!

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Video came up in my feed and impressed with the quality from a small channel, keep up the good work!

At first I thought I need to think, but then I realized I already planned the entire story soo

Bro I read it last weekend and I wasn’t thought it had so much effort in the story and I wanted to stop collecting it but I’ll see the price for the box set!

Great editing on this one man! Really enjoyed the last segment of the vid, the perfect chapter is the one that turns casual viewer into fans. :)

The goat, to someone who’s never engaged in manga content before his certainly has me hooked. Much better editing than so many UA-camrs I’ve seen online delving into other topics.

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great manga deconstruction. i hope you continue with this kind of videos.

ay about your previous videos, i enjoyed the idea, but do you have ideas on how to progress on the plot? how to add said obstacles (mostly arcs as well)

thanks you

Can i request ,about how to make a character ?thank you and Godbless

You are awesome man, keep going

Thank you so much, I wanted to make my first One-Shot and this will help me so much

To add one point in this, there's no need to force yourself to make oneshot perfect, since oneshots are the way to practise drawing skilks, writting etc. and getting feedback, that's how the famous mangaka's started their journey with creating manga

I hope you keep posting videos, both have such excellent analysis!

This is so good! I'll keep it saved to go back to it. I felt relieved when you said this sort of formula doesn't apply to many stories, because looking at the one I'm making right now it lacks most of these points. I was thinking "I just made a shit first chapter didn't I?" lol