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Too little rehearsal, bad lighting. These stories can fare much better with better mastery of the basics.

I am ever amazed at how much a layman can accomplish with only household computers and common household tools. The Trek fandom, and others as well, have taken it upon themselves to further and guide their fantasy universe to beyond the final frontier. And....I love the creative sparks they bring to one of MY favorite universes as well. Thank you for stretching my imagination too. I enjoyed your film very much.

wonderful effort, good result overall, hope you continue to grow and poroduce more. I have one beef/constructive crit about writing/blocking. It stems from a relatively subtle aspect of Roddenberry’s vision: that our society as a whole has evolved in 3 [now 2.5] centuries. To capture Roddenberry’s Trek, one must assume that, by our standards, all Starfleet characters went to excellent extremely enlightened liberal arts schools, had great therapists and family counsellors and school counsellors who caught every issue when they were 5 or 10 or 15 years old [not waiting 15 or 20 more years for it to fester]. Its challenging to write because this eliminates so many plot points that work in stories set in the present day. Specifically, in Roddenberry’s Trek, a Starfleet officer displaying such obvious jealousy & bullying behavior that it interfered with her duty [as we see in the first scene] would immediately be noticed as very weird [about like how we would react to a college kid wetting the bed] and addressed. She’d be sent to the equivalent of Counselor Trois / Dr. McKenna, maybe given medical leave . More to the point, that would’ve happened 20 or 30 years earlier].

weird and cringy

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A very abrupt ending!

Great job cast and crew! It is amazing to see the seeds of the original Star Trek grow in so many directions. From all the series, movies and most of all the fan films. They don’t often have the big budget or the most technical sets, but it is still storytelling just the same. Remember, your critics make you stronger. Thanks for the journey!

This was good, I which the lighting was more even. The actors were good and I hope your group keeps producing more.

This slaps hard

Somewhat dark with little lighting it seems. I do love the orbiting station. Somewhat steampunk look to it. Reminds me of the starship "Cygnus" from "The Black Hole" (1979)

Unbelievable WOKE TRASH ! This is NOT Star Trek, this is what Trek has sunk down into the cesspool to become, GARBAGE !

Very good. Can’t wait for the next part.

Intriguing and dark, excellent.

Loved it, you may want to enter it in The Fan Film Director's Choice Awards.

Thank you so much. Love your work and I just subscribed to your channel.

As they say the mystery deepens,I just saw this you all put in a lot of hard work on this and since a temporal rift is nere the station that means time travel is involved and the plot thickens, personally I thinking this has something to do with the temporal cold war😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏.

Thank you all for your mainly kind comments! Like it said in the description we had to make quite a deal of compromises to, not at least to keep it within the Star Trek fan films guidelines, but it finally ended up finished. I have now decided, mainly because of your very kind comments, to make a sequel, where hopefully much of what was cut out of the first episode will be explained. Thank you again for your support and kind comments! 🙂

Karen appears to have been well named.

Great work thank you.

Karen.. Karen .. Put down the weapon. hmm She's a hostile one. .... OMG I lost my S&$T hahahaha.

Looks commanding! Pardon the pun.

Uniforms, acting, background and equipment is all over the place - exactly as i would imagine a research station in the Star Trek universe. As i am related and friends with several laboratory staff members in real life, i can surmise that this is exactly the conditions research staff have to work, reused working clothes, equipment that work due to duct tape and prayer, and so on. Great work of everyone involved.

SPOILER ALERT question... . . . . Wait... all that buildup, and then... just... KABOOM! :o BTW, the Rules do allow *TWO* 15 minute productions... so I hope you're working on the conclusion!

10:07...I see they're still using SAMSUNG monitors in the future!

I love the pacing, the editing, the characters and the intrigue. This is in my opinion a cut above some other offerings out there, with all due deference to those fan films making the effort. I shall do my best to spread the word. On a different note I must declare my completely mature and sensible schoolboy crush on Dr. Cillinopoulos. Don't tell anyone though! 😄

Wow! A very well made ST fan film. I've subbed and look forward to MANY sequels! Much love to all your cast!

needs a lot of work love it though real funny

What accent is that ?

I applaud your work but find myself very confused by the ending.

Great job on your fan film!!!

Good job Teacher, very good job. I "cut my teeth with Kirk, Spock, and the rest too. Can't wait to see part two of your and your classes endeavors.

And I thought they didn't have televisions in the 23rd and 24th century she clearly has a remote she should have just said screen off unless she's one of those rare Starfleet officers that collect antique televisions from the 20th and 21st centuries and rewire them replace a few parts and make them view screens even subspace transmitters you can always tell when you're talking on one of these old antiques because usually on a substrates transmission they can't have full video it just shows a picture of someone the LG view screens are particularly bad

Far too woke.

Hello Rift Team! What a terrific production. Great job by everyone. Please continue this story - more mystery and discovery!

"What's happening?" "Shut Up!" LOL!

The angry person gotta chill. Almost ran dude off the walkway. Looking forward to more. Maybe bring the lighting up some?

What kind of joke is this, the concept highly confusing, the sets and effects were primitive. But, worst of all, the actors were terrible, totally unconvincing.

Not bad at all, great cliff hanger as well.

Interesting what one can do with a "Universal Remote" normally used for televisions. :-)

Interesting. Good job. The uniforms seem to be all over the place though in terms of universe/decades

good job!

Did cloned ever get made?

to an extent, that reminds me of the Empath episode of TOS.

Fascinating. I look forward to the next episode...

I really enjoyed this! It was really engaging. Like the others, I am curious to learn more about these characters - as much as the story. Very nice job everyone!

Interesting show but the officer in red has a nasty attitude as to why I don't know why. She acts like a klingon but who knows good story. Anyways.

Bro this is total Bannanas 🔥 bro this made my day 😂

Very surprising that 99% of the staff on the space station are women.

I found myself interested in finding out more as the storyline was developing. So to me this was good beginning. Hopefully you will continue with your project

Super job by all, story, cameras, actors and every one else all created magic, thank you for sharing 🖖Please do more 🖖