Galactic Council laughed at Human Ships until they Vanished| Best HFY Stories
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- Опубліковано 11 вер 2024
- Galactic Council laughed at Human Ships until they Vanished| Best short HFY Stories
This captivating HFY story blends Science Fiction, and Sci-Fi HFY elements into a thrilling Sci-Fi Short Story.
Explore the development of stealth technology in human spacecraft, which culminates in a stunning demonstration that shocks a dismissive Galactic Council. This story takes you on a 22-minute journey through human innovation and the shifting dynamics of power in the cosmos, proving that human ingenuity knows no bounds.
Condens this story to half its size or even less and its a lot more captivating. There is too much repetition of the same points.
Thanks for suggestion. Eager to learn and improve 😊
Count them. Every plot point repeats exactly three times. "Then shalt thou count to three, no more, no less. Three shall be the number thou shalt count, and the number of the counting shall be three."
@@GalacticTales88 You need to get a lot heavier. All these aliens look like humans with creature mask. You need to make the alien look alien. Varies types of blobs and vomit looking aliens, sentient planets, sun, neutron stars, Black holes. Mega beings etc. In real life humans are going to have any chance they have to be thousands of years more advanced than what you have in these stories.
Though the story was cute. The nod to Star Trek Federation symbols on the human uniforms was nice (was it intentional?). However, the downside was that many words were misspelled or just the plain wrong word. Words that a spell checker would not pick up, but had to be read out to realized that the word did not fit the context of the story.
Thanks for honest rewiew.will try to improve these next time
4000 quatloo's the humans cannot be contained!
I always wondered why there were only 3 beings left of that species left.
Some of the images were made by AI. AI has a hard time making fingers look normal. They sometimes looked deformed.
This whole channel is an AI driven content mill.
OK story. I like the narrator's voice. You should teach him to pronounce more words. The subtitles were a joke.
Why do the aliens 👽 think illogically? Why punish Earth 🌎 if they are afraid of how the tech will be used? Wouldn't that just encourage it to be used in the exact kinds of ways they didn't want?
No it was a grown up in the basement
I agree, too much repetition- I gave up
Using an AI voice that can't properly pronounce words....😮
Thanks for honest review.will certainly try to improve it 😊
Was this written by a 7th grader?
it has a 1950's feel to them but i think it's 90% ai now.
Always looking to improve and learn .your honest rewiews and suggestions will certainly help . any suggestions for improvement? 😊
@@GalacticTales88
Overly happy like a Mr Rogers episode. Stealth teck would not be shown off, it would be used to steal other teck or hide excessive fleet numbers
@@GalacticTales88You could have a human proofread the text or watch the video to make sure it says the technology was "efficient", not "deficient", and "the phantom" wasn’t "the shadow" two minutes later, instead of going right from creating it to posting it with no human intervention. And maybe switch to a more capable AI.
@@GalacticTales88 maybe stop using GPT to rewrite well known stories in the genere ... to say nothing about the AI narration and AI view count. I feel like ive said this before but just in case.... if youre gonna run free money, youd be smarter to ignore all of us. 8k views in 4 days with 96 subscribers is impossible... especially for this. make your money, but dont play pretend like you dont know what your doing...
really more star trek nice try
Ai artwork isnt that great. The story was ok but not interesting enough feu me. The AI narrator just adds to the awful quality of this story
That was truly dreadful. Mispronounced words, totally wrong words like technology being "deficient" instead of "efficient", the ship changing from the "Phantom" to the "Shadow" half way through the story. Not as annoying as the way every plot point repeats three times. Exactly three. "Then shalt thou count to three, no more, no less. Three shall be the number thou shalt count, and the number of the counting shall be three."
And a space ship floating undetectable within the council chamber? A "coating" or "weave" (another thing that changed 1/2 way through the story) isn’t going to keep some sort of drive that is acting on the room from making its presence known. And who is going to allow a fueled, operational space ship indoors. I've done auto shows: cars have their fuel drained and are pushed to their show places because vehicles are too dangerous to have operational indoors.
Thanks for pointing out errors .👍
Clearly the AIs i presume who wrote this rubbish,was never shown the Bear Grill's,Survival island's shows,where human woke female's,were pitted against male's, to see how the two groups would survive,
Pity really, because we wouldn't be listening to this tripe
Entertaining but behind the times. You need to understand that Astro Biologist for decades stated alien civilizations will be radically different from each other. Carl Sagan in his 1980 Cosmos series stated the technical difference between alien civilizations most likely be immense. Aliens will look different from each other. advanced civilizations are most likely living synthetic because living synthetic has gigantic advantages over biological.