Thanks very much for explaining how to make writing 'flow' from sentence to sentence. You've explained it clearly, and I like the way you labelled the sentence A to B, B to C, C to D. I would also assume that in spoken communication, you could very well follow the same rule. Much appreciated. Additionally, I am enjoying learning so much from your writing course!
Professor you have wonderful way of teaching. Suggestion for upcoming videos. Essay components such as a) Relevance b) Structure c) How to handle an argument or to be argumentative d) Counter-viewing the argument e) Avoid superfluity f) English - figurative and metaphoric g) How to pitch your bias h) How to avoid spurious ideas i) How to show difference between specific and general ideas j) Paragraph transition (most important)
Nicely done, Dr. Lynch-I enjoyed this educational video. :-) Something to keep in mind for any freelance reporters out there: readers have short attention spans. If you can get the most important details out in a few concise, descriptive sentences, the more likely it is that a reader will finish reading your story. The second example here illustrated flow in long form writing perfectly. Use that example as a reference for writing that is not limited by a word count. Happy writing, everyone!
Hi! 🙂 I could not help but notice that you paused after "yogurt" where there was no indication of a pause in the writing of your improved paragraph. Was that a mistake in the written structure, or your reading of the paragraph? Thanks!
English is my 3rd language, I have difficulty finding connectors, and we at school are constantly told to use PEEL paragraphs (point, example, evidence, link) I cannot figure out how to link these and I keep on getting 4/8
Here's the problem I'm getting with your example. While the raw information contained within the two may be the same, the meaning, application and context is different. Depending on your audience, you may not want to start by giving them a definition of kefir, but just add it on quickly at the end for anyone not 'in the know.' On a blog about kefir, I feel like your "flowier" example would be the wrong start. If your entire website is about kefir, it makes more sense to begin straight away making the focus the yeast and bacteria. I'm not sure I captured my thoughts here exactly, but I can tell you as someone who writes a lot, the audience for those two examples are completely different. I worry this is one of the reasons there is so much bad writing out there. People focused on these small details forget he bigger picture.
this is so amazing i’ve been struggling with my writing all my life this really opened my eyes to new technique and i thank you so much
Glad it helped!
Thanks very much for explaining how to make writing 'flow' from sentence to sentence. You've explained it clearly, and I like the way you labelled the sentence A to B, B to C, C to D. I would also assume that in spoken communication, you could very well follow the same rule. Much appreciated. Additionally, I am enjoying learning so much from your writing course!
I'm glad you found the explanation helpful - and I'm delighted to hear you're learning a lot from the course!
So good. This flowed so beautifully.
Like the subject of this video, your message just flows almost effortlessly. Such a pleasure to watch. Thank you.
Professor you have wonderful way of teaching.
Suggestion for upcoming videos.
Essay components such as
a) Relevance
b) Structure
c) How to handle an argument or to be argumentative
d) Counter-viewing the argument
e) Avoid superfluity
f) English - figurative and metaphoric
g) How to pitch your bias
h) How to avoid spurious ideas
i) How to show difference between specific and general ideas
j) Paragraph transition (most important)
She would be an amazing audiobook narrator. Her voice flows beautifully
This is one of the most important video I have watched .clear and interested , I would love to reach the her for more advice.Thank you
Glad you found it useful, Ahmed. You can get more of tips and advice here: www.dorisandbertie.com/
Love you, This is what I was looking for.
Thanks a lot!!!!!!
Nicely done, Dr. Lynch-I enjoyed this educational video. :-)
Something to keep in mind for any freelance reporters out there: readers have short attention spans. If you can get the most important details out in a few concise, descriptive sentences, the more likely it is that a reader will finish reading your story. The second example here illustrated flow in long form writing perfectly. Use that example as a reference for writing that is not limited by a word count. Happy writing, everyone!
Amazing information❤
Underrated content, thanks
Teacher , your lecture helped me to create confidence on my writing .Many thanks.
Coherence is very well explained. Thank you 🙏
Thank you doe this. It is extremely helpful.
You're very welcome!
Thank you 🎉
Your voice is excellent!
Thanks for this idea! 🙂🙂🙂
Very useful information 👍
I need to improve my writing and vocabulary.
thank you.May I know if you have persuasive writing course for ESL students ?thanks
You are wonderful.❤
Absolutely amazing video!!!
Truly helpful. Thanks!!😁
Thank you - glad it was useful!
Thank yu for the tips very helpful indeed!
Thank you so much
You're most welcome
Excellent
That's brilliant! Greetings from Italy...ciao
Brilliant!
Hi! 🙂
I could not help but notice that you paused after "yogurt" where there was no indication of a pause in the writing of your improved paragraph.
Was that a mistake in the written structure, or your reading of the paragraph?
Thanks!
Thank u🙏🙏🙏
thank you, it is usefull information
English is my 3rd language, I have difficulty finding connectors, and we at school are constantly told to use PEEL paragraphs (point, example, evidence, link) I cannot figure out how to link these and I keep on getting 4/8
You just saved me from failing my exam thank you so much!😁
Very useful
Thanks!
I have to try this. My writing just sounds like trash these days, especially when I'm writing academic pieces
Give it a go!
How many sentences should link around a detail or idea, before moving on to the next detail or idea in the same paragraph?
Would this method work, for Narrative and Expository essay?
Yes, it would work for any writing!
Woah your voice is so soothing, can you be my mom?
Wtf
I love kefir
The milk of gods
her shoulders move a lot, like shes in a slow earthquake, kind of distracting xD
Lol then move on Jack!
why the lady is giving excessive expression😂
Here's the problem I'm getting with your example. While the raw information contained within the two may be the same, the meaning, application and context is different. Depending on your audience, you may not want to start by giving them a definition of kefir, but just add it on quickly at the end for anyone not 'in the know.' On a blog about kefir, I feel like your "flowier" example would be the wrong start. If your entire website is about kefir, it makes more sense to begin straight away making the focus the yeast and bacteria. I'm not sure I captured my thoughts here exactly, but I can tell you as someone who writes a lot, the audience for those two examples are completely different. I worry this is one of the reasons there is so much bad writing out there. People focused on these small details forget he bigger picture.
I totally agree with you