Thanks for watching! This isn't part of Dream SMP: The Musical but if you are interested in helping with the musical or just hanging out, join the discord: discord.gg/5xCExXcJur :))
Techno's lyrics are so hard-hitting, while Tommy has lost the usual spark that would make him argue to hell and back, yelling and cursing until he gets his home back; now Tommy just wants peace. This is absolutely amazing!
techno wants peace by destroying power (aka governments), as they are are almost always corrupt after a bit, and tommy doesn't want to destroy his home.
I really expected the techno verse to quote Wilbur in his final moments “MY UNFINISHED SYMPHONY PHIL, FOREVER UNFINISHED” just for the gut punch into tommy, which is in character
Techno's lyrics hit home and describes how he now feels about Tommy since he has joined the long list of people betraying him. Very few have yet betrayed him (Phil, Dream and the new members, etc.)
yes! techno is tired of being used and looking back on this song, it hurts a lot more now that tommy has betrayed him too :(( thanks for the insightful comment!!
yes! i love tommy but he rambles a lot lol. when i write songs for him i try to go back through the vods and make notes on what he’s actually trying to say so that i can better get his points across haha
1. Just ruined 69 comments, feeling good. 2. I'm crying. 3. Tommy died cannonicly twice in a stream for L'manberg. 4. Wilbur's unfinished symphony is Tommy making it sadder. He made L'manberg for Tommy, Tommy winning makes himself a Finished Symphony. 5. THIS IS AMAZING!!!
You see, Tommy’s nose is broken because he pulled an idiot moment, and ran into a door head first. Also love how you added in stuff about the city of Troy. Really fits techno’s character. I just finished learning about Troy and Greek mythology in my SS (social studies, not the other SS) class and I’ve still got to learn about it in theater.
I'm absolutely going to continue going through, listening to, and commenting lots of your songs, because they're all great!!! Of the two of them I solidly side with Techno (Ranboo's really my favorite, though), but you capture the perspectives in such a way that it really makes me sympathize with both. I've always been able to see Tommy's side to an extent, but you portrayed it beautifully here!
thank you so much! as a techno stan, i had an easier time seeing his perspective, but i think that people forget that tommy is a child who has been through several wars and has been traumatized repeatedly. even though his ideas aren't as relatable, they are still valid. im really glad you liked the song!
at first i couldn’t remember the unfinished symphony reference but i knew it was one, then remembered wilbur saying multiple times when he lost lmanburg that lmanburg was his unfinished symphony
If there was someone who is able to make an anime about DSMP and the members voice acting- This song could be like those themes for every character in an anime lmao-
not an anime but this song will be featured in dream smp the musical! it’s not in the first act but if you wanna watch it, it released on my channel yesterday :))
Okay... uh- So I was looking for Tommy fansongs to add to my playlist for my C!Tommy and, this came up so i decided to give it a re-listen. So now.. my mind's just sitting in the creative corner like; Tommy has Wilbur's old guitar/a keyboard[or piano], and a set of lyrics he's written as himself and Techno. Sitting and playing along. As if he was trying to covince himself that, Techno was right. After, the doomsday war; and before his death. And now, I don't know how to feel. L
thanks for the feedback! yeah bc i was trying to get this out asap the vocals were definitely not my strongest, but i kinda like it like that bc the conversation was so raw. definitely if i were to release this on spotify id polish it a bit more :))
I had to tell my self repeatedly “we are not gonna cry cause of this song no your moms right there you are in class this is fine you will not cry. Cause of a song.” I’m probably still going to cry-
what it hurts me from this situation is that both sides are hurt in one hand tommy had to see technoblade the person he saw as a brother destroy l'manburg the place he used to call his home all the memories,the friends,the good times that he ones had as the bad ones to,the desire the liberty and his objetives,the last memory of his brother wilbur were all in lmamburg and not to mention that technoblade destroying lmamburg is almost as re watching wilbur destroy lmamburg both were really important brother figures for him make me thing that this event probably give him back some trauma from the last event and in the other hand is technoblade a calm and kind person who was willing to help tommy a person that technoblade also se as a young brother but has to see and experience betrayal ones again for tommy cause he chose tubbo and the people from lmamburg over him people that hurt and betray tommy so many times where chosen over him to add to that he was used as a killing machine by the people he accept to help they see him as the blade someone who they can used and then ignore and left behind when he wasnt necesary anymore men this two hurt me so much i just cant. Damn i make it to long sorry to any person who had to read all this. ;-;
Thanks for watching! This isn't part of Dream SMP: The Musical but if you are interested in helping with the musical or just hanging out, join the discord: discord.gg/5xCExXcJur :))
Techno's lyrics are so hard-hitting, while Tommy has lost the usual spark that would make him argue to hell and back, yelling and cursing until he gets his home back; now Tommy just wants peace. This is absolutely amazing!
ahhh yes!! i’m glad you noticed that!! i feel like tommy has become more and more resigned in the past few streams so i tried to capture that :))
techno wants peace by destroying power (aka governments), as they are are almost always corrupt after a bit, and tommy doesn't want to destroy his home.
This hits different after the festival not gonna lie
yeah... oof lol
Which festival you referring to? They both change the perspective
@@joybreegaming8781 this was before the 2nd festival (the one where dream and techno decided to team up)
@@alioofmusic ah yea time exists
Red or green
I really expected the techno verse to quote Wilbur in his final moments “MY UNFINISHED SYMPHONY PHIL, FOREVER UNFINISHED” just for the gut punch into tommy, which is in character
oooo true! that would have been good
Inaccurate, techno would never swear. He needs his monetization.
ah shit you’re right.... oh well it’s january youtube doesn’t give much adsense anyways lol
Chloe Butler Its actually kinda funny, on his "cooking with technoblade" video he swears like a sailor
Ngl when I heard that I thought it was Tommy’s line cause it fit him too well
Well he did swear in his past videos lol
He does once in songs tho remember Blitz
Techno's lyrics hit home and describes how he now feels about Tommy since he has joined the long list of people betraying him. Very few have yet betrayed him (Phil, Dream and the new members, etc.)
yes! techno is tired of being used and looking back on this song, it hurts a lot more now that tommy has betrayed him too :(( thanks for the insightful comment!!
Yup
I like how this makes it clear what Tommy wants, he isn’t very articulate and in arguments he tends to just spout nonsense and yell without explaining
yes! i love tommy but he rambles a lot lol. when i write songs for him i try to go back through the vods and make notes on what he’s actually trying to say so that i can better get his points across haha
Me: **singing along**
*technos line comes in*
Me:karmas a bit- HOLD THE HONK UP. I ALMOST SWOREEE
lmaoooo yeah.... i know techno doesn’t really curse anymore in his videos but for some reason he’s always the one to curse in my songs lol
Badboyhalo has something to say about that
"a fate worse than the city of troy's" hit harder than id like to admit
1. Just ruined 69 comments, feeling good.
2. I'm crying.
3. Tommy died cannonicly twice in a stream for L'manberg.
4. Wilbur's unfinished symphony is Tommy making it sadder. He made L'manberg for Tommy, Tommy winning makes himself a Finished Symphony.
5. THIS IS AMAZING!!!
awwww thank you so much!! and yes i 100% agree especially with #4
Who else is Eagerly waiting for a song about Tecnobaldes “I am a person” speech
oooo thats a good idea!! ill add it to my list :))
You see, Tommy’s nose is broken because he pulled an idiot moment, and ran into a door head first.
Also love how you added in stuff about the city of Troy. Really fits techno’s character. I just finished learning about Troy and Greek mythology in my SS (social studies, not the other SS) class and I’ve still got to learn about it in theater.
thank you!! glad you enjoyed :))
This needs more recognition but it’s still pretty early- Lemme just say pog mAn!
thank you!! i really appreciate it :))
Very true! This is so underrated I really hope it gets more attention
I'm absolutely going to continue going through, listening to, and commenting lots of your songs, because they're all great!!! Of the two of them I solidly side with Techno (Ranboo's really my favorite, though), but you capture the perspectives in such a way that it really makes me sympathize with both. I've always been able to see Tommy's side to an extent, but you portrayed it beautifully here!
thank you so much! as a techno stan, i had an easier time seeing his perspective, but i think that people forget that tommy is a child who has been through several wars and has been traumatized repeatedly. even though his ideas aren't as relatable, they are still valid. im really glad you liked the song!
I'm just... binge-watching your songs at this point
so glad you like them!!
HAHA YES!
Now all we need is a good song about Tecnobaldes speech and a few more about tecno and Tommy’s adventures and I will be happy
well i do have a song about his theseus speech called "Hereoes"! here is a link if you are interested: ua-cam.com/video/xhuwayWj7zo/v-deo.html
Holy cow Ali, you wrote this so quick! So good!
haha! thank you!!! i was stressed about the festival today so i just grinded this out lol. glad you enjoyed :))
This needs more views whhhh this is so good
awww thank you! i’m glad people seem to be enjoying it!
This is the best song for describing the smp story
at first i couldn’t remember the unfinished symphony reference but i knew it was one, then remembered wilbur saying multiple times when he lost lmanburg that lmanburg was his unfinished symphony
yup! also during the conversation between tommy and techno, tommy also calls it his unfinished symphony
all of your sings are literally making me cry man. just found out about you just a couple of minutes ago, now binging this lmaoo
awwww thank you!!
o7 rechnoblade, may he forever rest peacefully
If there was someone who is able to make an anime about DSMP and the members voice acting- This song could be like those themes for every character in an anime lmao-
not an anime but this song will be featured in dream smp the musical! it’s not in the first act but if you wanna watch it, it released on my channel yesterday :))
@@alioofmusic WAIT??? THERES A MUSICAL?? Sorry- I just got hyped because I love musicals-
THIS IS SO COOL!!
ahhhh thank you!!
Okay... uh-
So I was looking for Tommy fansongs to add to my playlist for my C!Tommy and, this came up so i decided to give it a re-listen.
So now.. my mind's just sitting in the creative corner like; Tommy has Wilbur's old guitar/a keyboard[or piano], and a set of lyrics he's written as himself and Techno. Sitting and playing along. As if he was trying to covince himself that, Techno was right. After, the doomsday war; and before his death.
And now, I don't know how to feel. L
AHHH THIS SONG IS AWESOME!
thank you so much!!
Very good! Maybe a bit of postprocessing on the vocals could escalate this but if you are going for the accoustic feel It's already great!
thanks for the feedback! yeah bc i was trying to get this out asap the vocals were definitely not my strongest, but i kinda like it like that bc the conversation was so raw. definitely if i were to release this on spotify id polish it a bit more :))
may techno rest in peace o7 he was a gold man
I absolutely love this!
Almost cried
;w;
awww! im glad you enjoyed!
Got chills right off the bat, this is amazing :)
thank you so much!!
Damn bro thats so good :0
thank you so much!!
This is amazing , this need more reignition >:((( your voice is beautiful btw ❤
thank you so much!!
THIS IS SO FRICKEN SICK AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
WHY IS THIS SO UNDERRATED
THE MELODYBUFBUIEWBD
THE LYRICS DBHWQBDI
awwww thank you so much!!
@@alioofmusic PNPNPNPNP UR SO TALENTED
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you make such good music
I really can't believe I only find these now
awwww thank you so much!
I get chills not ganna lie
awww thank you!! im glad you like it :))
As great as always, Loved it!!!!!
thank you so much! glad you enjoyed :))
Wow this is amazing I love your videos and your such a talented singer you deserve so much more recognition then you’re getting
awww thank you!!
Do u sing these? Cause these are AMAZING!!!! ❤️❤️❤️
yep! thank you!!
Holy crap your voice is beautiful
awww thank you so much 🥺🥰
@@alioofmusic No need to thank me, just speaking facts
THAT WAS SO GOOD
ahhh thank you :))
I had to tell my self repeatedly “we are not gonna cry cause of this song no your moms right there you are in class this is fine you will not cry. Cause of a song.” I’m probably still going to cry-
awwwww!!! i’m glad you enjoyed tho!
awwwww!!! i’m glad you enjoyed tho!
dont mind me just adding to my playlist
added.
nice! glad you enjoyed!
This song is very pogchamp
thank you so much!!
Another amazing song made by you 😁
thank you!!
@@alioofmusic no UwU
Congrats for 121 sub
thank you!!
This is literally going in my song playlist
POGGERS THIS IS AMAZING
wilbur tried reform, see how that turned out.
yeah oof :((
really nice!!
thanks!
WAIT This is so good!!!!
thank you!!
Techno and tommy both make good points
FACTS
This Hits different
awww thank you!!
@@alioofmusic GOOD JOB ! Good Luck
Bruh you’ve made some many songs why have I just found you?
no clue haha! the algorithm works in mysterious ways.... glad you are here!
Amazing great job :)
awwww thank you so much!!
Wasnt "unfinished Symphony" Willburs thing?
yes, it usually it but this song is based off of the stream where tommy calls lmanberg his unfinished symphony :))
@@alioofmusic what stream was that if you remember ?
what it hurts me from this situation is that both sides are hurt in one hand tommy had to see technoblade the person he saw as a brother destroy l'manburg the place he used to call his home all the memories,the friends,the good times that he ones had as the bad ones to,the desire the liberty and his objetives,the last memory of his brother wilbur were all in lmamburg and not to mention that technoblade destroying lmamburg is almost as re watching wilbur destroy lmamburg both were really important brother figures for him make me thing that this event probably give him back some trauma from the last event and in the other hand is technoblade a calm and kind person who was willing to help tommy a person that technoblade also se as a young brother but has to see and experience betrayal ones again for tommy cause he chose tubbo and the people from lmamburg over him people that hurt and betray tommy so many times where chosen over him to add to that he was used as a killing machine by the people he accept to help they see him as the blade someone who they can used and then ignore and left behind when he wasnt necesary anymore men this two hurt me so much i just cant.
Damn i make it to long sorry to any person who had to read all this. ;-;
woAH :00
:))
Why do I feel tears coming
pls send help
sorry not sorry lol (but seriously i’m glad you enjoyed ❤️)
Yes
:))
:D
glad you liked it :))
Hello
Honestly techno is right.
Boo government is bad anarchy is better!!!!! Long live technoblade I will continue your legacy
the unfinished symphony was wilburs story
A conversation between a liberal and a leftist.