Well I have been reading your stories for I while now but I need to say that I didn't like this one. My problem with it is that its an story without story, on the one shot nothing happens, to resume the story is they know each other and they start dating if we add some random moment we have the story. I would love if you add something to the stories I don't know, how they fall in love or a little conflict in this case with douma, something that made the story a real story and not just random things. And for last I will love if the video could go a bit faster I am a slow reader and I put it on x2 to read is fluently. Thanks and hope you improve. 😁😁😁
It's a great story, this is a little frequent but I love how the creator of this story added more, great job love!
friends: giv me an example of psycho
me: shiobu kocho in fanfics
I'm convinced that mitsuri used admin commands to summon everyone 💀
Omg I got picked this is the best day of my life thank you ❤❤
(I'm literally crying)
It's really heartwarming I cry tears of Joy 😹😹
Nice vid!:D
This might be one of the best storys ive ever seen
Why was no one else scared she pulled out a gun 35:05
1st
OMG THIS WAS A MASTERPIECE AGAIN🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
THIS WAS SOOOOOOOO AMAZINGGGGG 🎉🎉🎉🎉
Awesome idea 💡😮 I like it 😆
Wow 🤩 nice 👍
i tapped the sub button cuz its masterpiece!!!!
Nice video
Can you make a story in which giyu is a criminal
1:04 okkkk is this a parallel universe?
yep
Yes 👍
it sure is 👍
30 mins ago is crazy early
So we’re just going to ignore the fact that shinobu had a gun in her bag?
Ya
Yeah… But if I was Sanemi I would disarm her just in case
Noice ❤😊
me when i found out giyu was n insta model : ;)
💯💯💯
When my story idea?
Well I have been reading your stories for I while now but I need to say that I didn't like this one. My problem with it is that its an story without story, on the one shot nothing happens, to resume the story is they know each other and they start dating if we add some random moment we have the story. I would love if you add something to the stories I don't know, how they fall in love or a little conflict in this case with douma, something that made the story a real story and not just random things.
And for last I will love if the video could go a bit faster I am a slow reader and I put it on x2 to read is fluently. Thanks and hope you improve. 😁😁😁
:D
Where do I give ideas?
Bc my ides is shinobu to be a yandree
Why is everyone glazing???
14th🎉🎉🎉
My respect for @nasrinsaei7281 for the amazing idea🫡
Thank you 😊