Rewriting Character Arcs & Friendship Dynamics in Heroes of Olympus || Fixing HoO Part 2

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  • @racheltabb9643
    @racheltabb9643 3 роки тому +84

    The books need more of Piper and Leo being chaotic together

  • @idontknow.8930
    @idontknow.8930 3 роки тому +84

    You don’t even see Annabeth’s and Piper’s friendship, just all the sudden they act like they’ve been friends since they were 5.

    • @idontknow.8930
      @idontknow.8930 3 роки тому

      @@Unclaimeddemigod yup

    • @adarshraj2978
      @adarshraj2978 2 роки тому +4

      Exactly. Annabeth isn't the most trusting type especially after lukes betrayal..and then she would become best friends with a new camper who is far older to just arrive and obv something is going one. Of all the people who she has known all her life, who have suffered with her, why would she ever go to someone new to the world?

  • @acolytesofthefog
    @acolytesofthefog 3 роки тому +29

    irrelevant comment time. Here are a few little short stories I think Rick should write,
    1. A short story/set of short stories, that take place on the Argo 2, specifically when characters are going on quest, every time a group leaves the Argo 2 we always followed that groups POV, it would be cool to see the antics of the Argo 2, while mini quest are going on.
    2. A short story about stuff that happened in that summer leading up to Percy’s 16th birthday, in the last Olympian we only see the end of that summer, there is an entire summer we don’t see, I think it would be cool to see camp half blood preparing for war.
    3. Little short stories taking place with a different cabin, eg; one from the perspective of a Hermes kid, one from an Athena kid.
    That’s all for now. Have a good day/night!

    • @possiblyoli6586
      @possiblyoli6586 3 роки тому +7

      May I had on? A short story about the hunters of artemis before Zoë died, and how Hylla and Reyna escped Circes Island after SoM

  • @bookishstufftoreadabout3107
    @bookishstufftoreadabout3107 3 роки тому +25

    I would’ve loved to see a clearminded mortal among the 7, a bit like Rachel. I feel like Rachel is the only person, who was involved in all this, because of a desicion, and not just because of her mom/dad.

  • @eevee5121
    @eevee5121 3 роки тому +21

    Omg, I'm obcessed with thisssss. I neeed more. I loved your thoughts and changes on the series so much, I wish there was like a fanfic or something like that

  • @potatogaming7044
    @potatogaming7044 2 роки тому +17

    I think it would be hard to not put Percy as one of the 7
    As Hera chose the 7,
    And Percy had just lead an army to fight the titan lord

  • @GTrevise
    @GTrevise 3 роки тому +15

    I'm looking forward to part 3 and how you handle 'the Percy problem'. I do agree that we needed more Nico. He was underused in all 3 series'

  • @any_me...LOL
    @any_me...LOL 2 роки тому +5

    I think Annabeth and Nico would have an incredible friendship just because both of them kind of struggled in their own ways to fit in. Annabeth was roped into the world of monsters at so young that she probably had to give up her sense of being a normal child. Nico grew up with not a lot of family experience and then his sister died. It would have been good to see them interact more because they've both been through so much and we don't get to hear a lot about their experiences.

  • @JTGJustace
    @JTGJustace 3 роки тому +11

    So happy that I’m sick today

  • @ananyasaxena82
    @ananyasaxena82 3 роки тому +11

    Hazel's arch could be completed in toa book4 tyrants tomb because she became praetor in that book

  • @cpp.2819
    @cpp.2819 2 роки тому +3

    I am pretty sure that piper and hazel were rly good friends. During the house of hades, it is mentioned many times after hazel’s confrontation with Sciron, that piper and hazel became close. They “shed tears about Anna Beth, and hazel explained how controlling the mist feeled. Piper was surprised by how much it sounded like charmspeak. She promised to help hazel if hazel taught piper how to sword fight, which was smth that piper sucked at.” Also, at the end of hoh, piper and hazel are sword fighting in the background, so I think those two were rly good friends. I do agree about piper and annabeth’s relationship tho

  • @sarahlouise2471
    @sarahlouise2471 3 роки тому +2

    Omg your at over 1,000! I’ve been here since like 200! I hope you keep growing!!

  • @Omega.73
    @Omega.73 3 роки тому +3

    Even better than part 1! Loved it :)

  • @_lumen_
    @_lumen_ 3 роки тому +5

    Me at 6.10: Wait… Is Percy gonna take Nico’s role in that jar?

  • @RM-xh8it
    @RM-xh8it 3 роки тому +3

    I can just imagine Leo trying to cheer up Nico and then Nico just responding like “Fuck off before I rip your throat out” and then Leo just carries on, then Nico does some Hades magic like send him to Tartarus or gets his Zombie army to torture Leo which shuts him up completely.

  • @cabinnumber3camper997
    @cabinnumber3camper997 3 роки тому +2

    I forgot it was Friday until you posted lol

    • @JTGJustace
      @JTGJustace 3 роки тому

      I was just waiting for her to upload all day

  • @Nuakaugoofy
    @Nuakaugoofy Рік тому +1

    5:07 "GUYSIHADACRUSHONPERCYANDIWANTEDTOTELLYPUBEFOREMEANDJASONGOTOCUPIDANDIDONTKNOWIFITSOKAYANDIMREALLYNERVOUS" "...are you okay?" im sorry btu that's all i can imagine😭

  • @AIwillkillu
    @AIwillkillu 3 роки тому +4

    OK at the end of the last Olympian when percy give knife to Luke and he also give the golden fleece to Clarissa that's show he know when to back off and let others do their job, so how in the heroes of Olympus suddenly he want to be everyone's hero and how his fatal flaw is always want to be a hero or not able to let go?

  • @jasonwang5927
    @jasonwang5927 3 роки тому +1

    yay congrats on 1k I have been here since 150 subs

  • @shikhachaudhary602
    @shikhachaudhary602 3 роки тому +5

    Wait... How is Leo suppose to have his fire powers if he is the son of the goddess of luck.
    Loved the video btw.

    • @ananyasaxena82
      @ananyasaxena82 3 роки тому +2

      @@Unclaimeddemigod The fire powers was another reason Leo and Frank friendship was not that much there because Frank had a stick that would kill him if it burned

    • @sAnTiAgO-wi2dc
      @sAnTiAgO-wi2dc 3 роки тому +2

      @@Unclaimeddemigod maybe his patron god could be hephaestus??

    • @dylantennant6594
      @dylantennant6594 3 роки тому +5

      I like your enthusiasm and creativity, but there’s a reason Riordan did this. You see all the seven represent a member of the original argonauts or at least a past hero (isn’t just A HoO thing, pretty much all of Riordan’s work has characters who are allusions to previous myths, examples include Silena is an allusion to Patroclus, Clarrise is clearly Achilles and Magnus is Sigurd). This important, especially with Frank’s character. Frank is a modern retelling of the story of Melegar. And Melegar’s key feature was his life force connected to the stick. It’s what created tension with his life and made it such a tragedy. Same with Frank, take away his connection to the myth, you take away his reasoning for being in this story. That’s why rewriting this story, while a noble effort, is impossible in the end. Because Riordan crafted such an excellent retelling of an age old tale, with newer modern versions of the stories that have touched thousands of generations.

    • @shikhachaudhary602
      @shikhachaudhary602 3 роки тому

      @@dylantennant6594 Wow, I like your thinking.😀

    • @sAnTiAgO-wi2dc
      @sAnTiAgO-wi2dc 3 роки тому

      @@dylantennant6594 Dam... ur right-

  • @user-ps6uu7sw3m
    @user-ps6uu7sw3m 15 днів тому

    Personally I feel like Nico wouldn’t come out the the whole ship just like “yeah btw I don’t wanna get outed so yk I’m gay and have a crush on Percy” I feel like he would tell Jason obvi bc he kinda has to and he would brown tell hazel then once he was comfortable enough then he would tell everybody else
    I just think it would take him longer to feel ready then before hoo bc he grew up catholic in Italy 1920’s ish sooo yeah

  • @jasonwang5927
    @jasonwang5927 3 роки тому +3

    am i the only one who thinks that Percy's personality has changed soooo much? he called nobody he loves in Percy Jackson and the Olympians. he has grown stupider, saying weird things, saying things he would've never said in the first series.

    • @pipermclean7980
      @pipermclean7980 3 роки тому +1

      Duh, Rick thought sappy romance would make YAs happy

  • @anushkasingh2987
    @anushkasingh2987 3 роки тому +3

    The Percy Jackson quiz:
    Each question is worth 1 points.
    1. How many Rick Riordanverse books are there (not counting the demigod diaries and survival guides)?
    2. What car does Paul Blofis own?
    3. In the Last Olympian, which 3 statues does Percy activate to help combat the flying boar?
    4. What gender was Alex when he/she died?
    5. In the Battle of the Labrynth, which wall does Annabeth suggest that they keep their hand on?
    6. At the end of the Last Olympian, what weapon does Tyson wish for (use his exact word)?
    7. Who points out that Reyna’s initials are “RARA”?
    8. What is the name of the child of Iris that appears in the Lost Hero
    9. What genre of mythology has Rick said he’s thinking about writing about next?
    10. What is my favorite Rick Riordianverse book?
    11. What was the second mythology series written by Rick?
    12. What was the name of the short mythology story written by Rick’s son, Haley?
    13. What was the name of the giant who’s bowling bag Blitzen sowed?
    14. What floor does Magnus live on in Valhalla?
    15. Who does Magnus mention first in his flyting session with Loki?
    16. In the Last Olympian, what does Percy think his mom is holding before she uses it to shoot the monsters that are surrounding the Empire State Building?
    17. Which Roman god of war replaced Athena as the main god of war?
    18. How many Percy Jackson books were published before the first move was made?
    19. Choose one answer, the movies are: A. a failure, B. a piece of --, C. something that the beasts from the worst corners of Tartarus made after eating a spicy burrito.
    20. What is the name of Sally Jackson’s mother?
    Answers:
    1. 21
    2. Toyota Prius
    3. Hermes and the 2 lions flanking the steps to the library
    4. Male
    5. Left
    6. “Stick”
    7. Leo
    8. Butch
    9. Irish
    10. The Last Olympian
    11. The Kane Chronicles
    12. The Son of Magic
    13. Tiny
    14. 19
    15. Mallory Keen
    16. An umbrella
    17. Bellona
    18. 1
    19. “C”
    20. Estelle

    • @legrandliseurtri7495
      @legrandliseurtri7495 3 роки тому

      Alex dies? Uh.

    • @anushkasingh2987
      @anushkasingh2987 3 роки тому

      @@legrandliseurtri7495 yeah that's how you get into valhalla
      magnus is also dead the only characters which are not dead are blitz, hearth, sam and all the gods and immortals

    • @legrandliseurtri7495
      @legrandliseurtri7495 3 роки тому

      @@anushkasingh2987 That's unfortunate. I never read past the second book.

    • @anushkasingh2987
      @anushkasingh2987 3 роки тому

      @@legrandliseurtri7495 ohh you should read all of them
      they are just amaZHANG

  • @samu1745
    @samu1745 3 роки тому +4

    In every fanfiction I write the characters I add are always children of minor gods. I wish the books would have followed the same path

    • @Fluffy_Wolverine
      @Fluffy_Wolverine 3 роки тому +1

      do you publish them? if so would you please add a link? i'd love to read your works!

  • @meganbell5587
    @meganbell5587 3 роки тому +2

    Could you do this with ToA????

  • @maddysolis1646
    @maddysolis1646 3 роки тому

    I absolutely loved this!

  • @AIwillkillu
    @AIwillkillu 3 роки тому +3

    At camp Jupiter they don't like children of Athena even they don't believe Athena have any children so sending Anabeth tho camp Jupiter is a foolish idea.

  • @JTGJustace
    @JTGJustace 3 роки тому +1

    I know this isn’t exactly Percy Jackson and the Olympians but the lightning thief is SO LONG, and I just finished it.

    • @percyjackson9336
      @percyjackson9336 3 роки тому +2

      @@Unclaimeddemigod What!?
      (Wait until he/she gets to the House of Hades)

    • @demigod7954
      @demigod7954 3 роки тому

      @@percyjackson9336 yes it is longest book in pjo series

    • @JTGJustace
      @JTGJustace 3 роки тому

      @@percyjackson9336 I’m a dude btw

    • @percyjackson9336
      @percyjackson9336 3 роки тому

      @@JTGJustace wow thanks, didn’t know people knew me in the mortal world...

    • @legrandliseurtri7495
      @legrandliseurtri7495 3 роки тому

      The lightning thief is a pretty short book by most standards. Two days ago I finished ''The Broken Eye'' by Brent Weeks, which is easily three times the lenght of the lightning thief. It's part of the Lightbringer serie, I recommand it to anyone who likes adult fantasy books.

  • @jasonwang5927
    @jasonwang5927 3 роки тому +2

    I really wanted to see on of them going to one single quest, not dividing. i know that it will not work but it will just be cool. WHERE IS THE FRIENDSHIP IN HOO. all we get is the couple's and jason and percy

  • @AIwillkillu
    @AIwillkillu 3 роки тому +2

    OK planning and leadership are to deferent things

  • @idenolan1234
    @idenolan1234 3 роки тому

    Love this its soo much more interesting

  • @anweshadas6694
    @anweshadas6694 2 роки тому

    OMFG !!!! I neeeeed a fanfic !!!!!!

  • @housesuns-kings8480
    @housesuns-kings8480 3 роки тому +1

    can you do the other series'

  • @izellove783
    @izellove783 3 роки тому

    Hi I'm an inclined Demigod too

  • @loriienfinity6117
    @loriienfinity6117 2 роки тому

    The only book I would change I. House of hades in my version Annabeth is sorta replaced by Rachel but she is still there percy Annabeth piper and Jason fell in tarturus and the rest of them are trying to save them Rachel is the leader and the mom of the seven and she is also with percy,nico and will are also there but still friends for now but not In the 7 just helping, frank and hazle are the least important they are just their to give us some cute moments and to help fight Reyna is the last part of the 7 and most people rely on her Leo Is on calypsos Island for most of the book wich takes place for around a year or two until he finds them a way off the island, in tarturus piper and Jason are on the other side of tarturus and are trying to escape themselves but Annabeth and percy are just waiting for them to come find them but at the very end of the book Rachel and nico and will find Annabeth and percy but Reyna hazle and frank find piper and Jason. The main friendships are Rachel and Annabeth the strongest one hazle frank and Reyna are the main trio nico and will and Leo and calypso. For Leo and calypsos story at the end Leo find a way for him and calypso to get out together and by the time they got back they were best friends and when the last book comes around they start dating. So that's my vision just wanted to share it

  • @hedgehogz_rockz9325
    @hedgehogz_rockz9325 3 роки тому +1

    Ok hear me out.... evil Leo? Opinions?

    • @hedgehogz_rockz9325
      @hedgehogz_rockz9325 3 роки тому

      @@Unclaimeddemigod ya like what if the (I forgot its name) was still possessing him. Maybe he gets away before the other 6 can stop him?

  • @celiasanmartin900
    @celiasanmartin900 3 роки тому +1

    👍🏻😊

  • @thxndershock
    @thxndershock 3 роки тому +1

    I'm confused if you like Heroes of Olympus or anything in the series.

    • @thxndershock
      @thxndershock 3 роки тому

      @@Unclaimeddemigod yea that’s understandable because once you rewatch or reread something you can start to see the flaws and mistakes. Well anyways I love your channel. Your videos are amazing

    • @thxndershock
      @thxndershock 3 роки тому

      @@Unclaimeddemigod Yea all of your videos are awesome

  • @livdream5798
    @livdream5798 Рік тому

    You're very good at English, but two years later you have definitely become more used to talking freely

  • @syno2991
    @syno2991 3 роки тому

    Ummm I hate this 😭😭😭

    • @syno2991
      @syno2991 3 роки тому

      @@Unclaimeddemigod you reply to older videos comments👏👏👏