Next time you do one these films, run the commentary script past a native English speaker first. Although, mainly grammatically correct, this commentary is rich in examples of "no native speaker would say it like that." It sounds unprofessional and it's unfair to ask the commentator to utter such fractured language.
Apologies I misunderstood your points, I will address them directly: what is a 'native speaker' and where are the guidelines that show what a native speaker would and would not say? You say yourself it is gramatically correct so by what context are you suggesting that the voiceover 'sounds unprofessional' and is formed of 'fractured language'?
+clive ramsbotty Here's an example (chosen totally at random and within a few seconds of listening) at around the 8-minute mark ;... this system encompasses all ...' This is awkward and would not not come from the mouth of a native speaker. It sounds like someone had to rummage through the dictionary to find the best translation of some German. It would have been better to start over and totally rephrase the sentence. It's probably not the best example I could have chosen, but it's what I quickly stumbled on. The voiceover is not, of itself, unprofessional. It's just that I cannot imagine the commentator using the language he utters. It lacks credibility. "Fractured English" is my term for language that is grammatically and comprehensible, but is not what a native speaker would use. My favourite example is from a tourist leaflet for Alberobello which talks of "suggestive landscapes". This is grammatically correct and communicates and idea. However, no native speaker would use that expression except in this context.
+clive ramsbotty funny isn't it: everybody is a critic! 8 realize it is anAustrian company and don't expect perfect diction. I understood the narrator very well. Oh well....
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An A-grade video for tutorial purposes. Highly recommend. Great products too, Liebherr.
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Mobile Cranes were produced in French
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Next time you do one these films, run the commentary script past a native English speaker first. Although, mainly grammatically correct, this commentary is rich in examples of "no native speaker would say it like that." It sounds unprofessional and it's unfair to ask the commentator to utter such fractured language.
+Nicole K boo hoo i didn't struggle at all with the comprehension
clive ramsbotty
I said nothing about the comprehensibility. Before you get up set and shoot off a quick reply, re-read my post.
Apologies I misunderstood your points, I will address them directly: what is a 'native speaker' and where are the guidelines that show what a native speaker would and would not say? You say yourself it is gramatically correct so by what context are you suggesting that the voiceover 'sounds unprofessional' and is formed of 'fractured language'?
+clive ramsbotty Here's an example (chosen totally at random and within a few seconds of listening) at around the 8-minute mark ;... this system encompasses all ...' This is awkward and would not not come from the mouth of a native speaker. It sounds like someone had to rummage through the dictionary to find the best translation of some German. It would have been better to start over and totally rephrase the sentence. It's probably not the best example I could have chosen, but it's what I quickly stumbled on.
The voiceover is not, of itself, unprofessional. It's just that I cannot imagine the commentator using the language he utters. It lacks credibility. "Fractured English" is my term for language that is grammatically and comprehensible, but is not what a native speaker would use.
My favourite example is from a tourist leaflet for Alberobello which talks of "suggestive landscapes". This is grammatically correct and communicates and idea. However, no native speaker would use that expression except in this context.
+clive ramsbotty funny isn't it: everybody is a critic! 8 realize it is anAustrian company and don't expect perfect diction. I understood the narrator very well. Oh well....
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